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* Harvey getting his ass handed to him by the suspect's companion in the background. Jim stops things right before Harvey gets a television smashed down on him. Harvey returns the favor with a quick right hook.
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* Harvey getting his ass handed to him by the suspect's companion in the background. Jim stops things right before Harvey gets a television smashed down on him. Harvey returns the favor with a quick right hook.hook.
* Bruce shows Alfred a news article about the Balloonman. Alfred's only comment is to dryly note that there really are easier ways to kill someone.
* Bruce shows Alfred a news article about the Balloonman. Alfred's only comment is to dryly note that there really are easier ways to kill someone.
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* Gordon handcuffs Selina to a rail while he looks for the wallet she dropped in the sewer in the first episode. She picks the cuffs and then casually tosses them to him, topping it off by saying "Oh Detective! You're gonna need these".
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* Selina is able to swipe Bullock's pen without him noticing.
* Gordon handcuffs Selina to a rail while he looks for the wallet she dropped in the sewer in the first episode. She picks the cuffs with the pen she stole from Bullock and then casually tosses them to him, topping it off by saying "Oh Detective! You're gonna need these".
* Gordon handcuffs Selina to a rail while he looks for the wallet she dropped in the sewer in the first episode. She picks the cuffs with the pen she stole from Bullock and then casually tosses them to him, topping it off by saying "Oh Detective! You're gonna need these".
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* The episode’s quota of BlackComedy is filled when one of the Balloonman’s victims flattens a little old lady who was walking her dog.
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* The episode’s quota of BlackComedy is filled when one of the Balloonman’s victims flattens a little old lady who was walking her dog.dog.
* Harvey getting his ass handed to him by the suspect's companion in the background. Jim stops things right before Harvey gets a television smashed down on him. Harvey returns the favor with a quick right hook.
* Harvey getting his ass handed to him by the suspect's companion in the background. Jim stops things right before Harvey gets a television smashed down on him. Harvey returns the favor with a quick right hook.
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* Gordon handcuffs Selina to a rail while he looks for the wallet she dropped in the sewer in the first episode. She picks the cuffs and then casually tosses them to him, topping it off by saying "you might need these."
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* Gordon handcuffs Selina to a rail while he looks for the wallet she dropped in the sewer in the first episode. She picks the cuffs and then casually tosses them to him, topping it off by saying "you might "Oh Detective! You're gonna need these."these".
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* Harvey taking a lunch break in the middle of tracking down a suspect, which Gordon thinks is part of the process at first.
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* Harvey taking a lunch break in the middle of tracking down a suspect, which Gordon thinks is part of the process at first.first.
* The episode’s quota of BlackComedy is filled when one of the Balloonman’s victims flattens a little old lady who was walking her dog.
* The episode’s quota of BlackComedy is filled when one of the Balloonman’s victims flattens a little old lady who was walking her dog.
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* Harvey repeatedly pointing out that he's mostly on the Balloonman's side, while the man has a gun to his head.
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* Harvey repeatedly pointing out that he's mostly on the Balloonman's side, while the man has a gun to his head.head.
* Harvey taking a lunch break in the middle of tracking down a suspect, which Gordon thinks is part of the process at first.
* Harvey taking a lunch break in the middle of tracking down a suspect, which Gordon thinks is part of the process at first.
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Fixed why to while.
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* Gordon handcuffs Selina to a rail why he looks for the wallet she dropped in the sewer in the first episode. She picks the cuffs and then casually tosses them to him, topping it off by saying "you might need these."
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* Gordon handcuffs Selina to a rail why while he looks for the wallet she dropped in the sewer in the first episode. She picks the cuffs and then casually tosses them to him, topping it off by saying "you might need these."
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* Gordon handcuffs Selina to a rail why he looks for the wallet she dropped in the sewer in the first episode. She picks the cuffs and then casually tosses them to him, topping it off by saying "you might need these."
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* Gordon handcuffs Selina to a rail why he looks for the wallet she dropped in the sewer in the first episode. She picks the cuffs and then casually tosses them to him, topping it off by saying "you might need these.""
* Harvey repeatedly pointing out that he's mostly on the Balloonman's side, while the man has a gun to his head.
* Harvey repeatedly pointing out that he's mostly on the Balloonman's side, while the man has a gun to his head.
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[[AC:Episode 2: The Balloonman]]
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[[AC:Episode 2: 3: The Balloonman]]
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** The poor guy doesn't even realize [[spoiler:he's hearing her clear the gun when it jams first.]]
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** The poor guy doesn't even realize [[spoiler:he's hearing her clear the gun when it jams first.]]]]
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* Gordon handcuffs Selina to a rail why he looks for the wallet she dropped in the sewer in the first episode. She picks the cuffs and then casually tosses them to him, topping it off by saying "you might need these."
[[AC:Episode 2: The Balloonman]]
* Gordon handcuffs Selina to a rail why he looks for the wallet she dropped in the sewer in the first episode. She picks the cuffs and then casually tosses them to him, topping it off by saying "you might need these."
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* Harvery asks Captain Essen if Fish is still mad at him and Jim.
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* Harvery Harvey asks Captain Essen if Fish is still mad at him and Jim.
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* Harvey to Jim: "You're a monkey in a sportscar." Despite not saying anything in response, it's clear Jim has no idea what that means.
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* Harvey to Jim: "You're a monkey in on a sportscar.Racehorse." Despite not saying anything in response, it's clear Jim has no idea what that means.means.
** Jim's disbelieving that Harvey knows anything about women.
** Jim's disbelieving that Harvey knows anything about women.
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** That whole scene, inverting the entire GoodCopBadCop routine where [[spoiler:Bullock's doing the beating but being nice about it, while St. Jim is standing there glaring and doing nothing, which is somehow worse.]]
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* More BlackComedy. When [[spoiler: Selina scratches the guard's eyes out,]] he screams to one of the child kidnappers that he needs a Doctor. The woman completely deadpan, says the doctor is here and it doesn't look that bad, and then [[spoiler: ''shoots him in the face''.]]
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* More BlackComedy. When [[spoiler: Selina scratches the guard's eyes out,]] he screams to one of the child kidnappers that he needs a Doctor. The woman completely deadpan, says the doctor is here and it doesn't look that bad, and then [[spoiler: ''shoots him in the face''.]]
** The poor guy doesn't even realize [[spoiler:he's hearing her clear the gun when it jams first.]]
** The poor guy doesn't even realize [[spoiler:he's hearing her clear the gun when it jams first.]]
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* Extremely BlackComedy, but Oswald's inability to convince the mother of the guy he's kidnapped that his ransom demand is genuine, apparently because of the guy's CryingWolf already.
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* Extremely BlackComedy, but Oswald's inability to convince the mother of the guy he's kidnapped that his ransom demand is genuine, apparently because of the guy's CryingWolf already.already.
* More BlackComedy. When [[spoiler: Selina scratches the guard's eyes out,]] he screams to one of the child kidnappers that he needs a Doctor. The woman completely deadpan, says the doctor is here and it doesn't look that bad, and then [[spoiler: ''shoots him in the face''.]]
* More BlackComedy. When [[spoiler: Selina scratches the guard's eyes out,]] he screams to one of the child kidnappers that he needs a Doctor. The woman completely deadpan, says the doctor is here and it doesn't look that bad, and then [[spoiler: ''shoots him in the face''.]]
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* Harvery asks the Captain if Fish is still mad at him and Jim.
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* Harvery asks the asks Captain Essen if Fish is still mad at him and Jim.
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* Harvey to suspect: [[spoiler: "That means I can beat you like a bongo drum and Saint Jim here ''won't say a word!''"]]
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* Harvey to suspect: [[spoiler: "That means I can beat you like a bongo drum and Saint Jim here ''won't say a word!''"]]word!''"]]
* Extremely BlackComedy, but Oswald's inability to convince the mother of the guy he's kidnapped that his ransom demand is genuine, apparently because of the guy's CryingWolf already.
* Extremely BlackComedy, but Oswald's inability to convince the mother of the guy he's kidnapped that his ransom demand is genuine, apparently because of the guy's CryingWolf already.
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* Harvey calling a toast right in the middle of the Major's debate with Jim.
* Harvey to Jim: "You're a monkey in a sportscar."
* Harvey to Jim: "You're a monkey in a sportscar."
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* Harvey calling a toast right in the middle of the Major's Mayor's debate with Jim.
* Harvey to Jim: "You're a monkey in a sportscar."" Despite not saying anything in response, it's clear Jim has no idea what that means.
* Harvey to Jim: "You're a monkey in a sportscar.
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* Harvey to suspect: [[spoiler: "That means I can beat you like a bongo drum and Saint Jim here ''won't say a word!'']]
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* Harvey to suspect: [[spoiler: "That means I can beat you like a bongo drum and Saint Jim here ''won't say a word!'']]word!''"]]
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* Harvey to Jim: "You're a monkey in a sportscar."
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* Harvey to Jim: "You're a monkey in a sportscar.""
* Harvey to suspect: [[spoiler: "That means I can beat you like a bongo drum and Saint Jim here ''won't say a word!'']]
* Harvey to suspect: [[spoiler: "That means I can beat you like a bongo drum and Saint Jim here ''won't say a word!'']]
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* Harvery asks the Captain if Fish is still mad at him and Jim.
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* Harvery asks the Captain if Fish is still mad at him and Jim.Jim.
* Harvey calling a toast right in the middle of the Major's debate with Jim.
* Harvey to Jim: "You're a monkey in a sportscar."
* Harvey calling a toast right in the middle of the Major's debate with Jim.
* Harvey to Jim: "You're a monkey in a sportscar."
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* Harvery asks the Captain if Fish is still mad at him and Jim.
'''Alfred:''' Haven't I told you to stop creeping up on people like that before? It's bloody rude!
'''Alfred:''' Haven't I told you to stop creeping up on people like that before? It's bloody rude!
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* Harvery asks the Captain if Fish is still mad at him and Jim.
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* Alfred curtly ordering Bruce to, in his own words, "get his bloody arse off the roof."
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* Alfred curtly ordering Bruce to, in his own words, "get his bloody arse off the roof.""
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* Even as a kid...
-->'''Gordon:''' What do you want me to do?\\
'''Bruce:''' [[StealthHiBye He wants you to talk some sense into me.]]\\
'''Alfred:''' Haven't I told you to stop creeping up on people like that before? It's bloody rude!
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* Even as a kid...
-->'''Gordon:''' What do you want me to do?\\
'''Bruce:''' [[StealthHiBye He wants you to talk some sense into me.]]\\
'''Alfred:''' Haven't I told you to stop creeping up on people like that before? It's bloody rude!
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* The brutal beating is juxtaposed with Fish talking to Cobblepot about her hair getting frizzy from the rain.
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* Jack Napier's joke, while dark as hell, is still ActuallyPrettyFunny
--> '''Jack''': I always wanted to die peacefully in my sleep, like my father. Not screaming in terror, like his passengers.
--> '''Jack''': I always wanted to die peacefully in my sleep, like my father. Not screaming in terror, like his passengers.
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* Jack Napier's The comedian's joke, while dark as hell, is still ActuallyPrettyFunny
ActuallyPrettyFunny.
-->'''Jack''': '''Comedian''': I always wanted to die peacefully in my sleep, like my father. Not screaming in terror, like his passengers.
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Awesomest Alfred ever (sort of wish I could continue that alliteration, but meh)!
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--> '''Jack''': I always wanted to die peacefully in my sleep, like my father. Not screaming in terror, like his passengers.
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--> '''Jack''': I always wanted to die peacefully in my sleep, like my father. Not screaming in terror, like his passengers.passengers.
* Alfred curtly ordering Bruce to, in his own words, "get his bloody arse off the roof."
* Alfred curtly ordering Bruce to, in his own words, "get his bloody arse off the roof."
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* And after [[spoiler:Falcone saves them]], Harvey parrots his "Yeah, there are rules!"
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* And after [[spoiler:Falcone saves them]], Harvey parrots his "Yeah, there are rules!"rules!"
* Jack Napier's joke, while dark as hell, is still ActuallyPrettyFunny
--> '''Jack''': I always wanted to die peacefully in my sleep, like my father. Not screaming in terror, like his passengers.
* Jack Napier's joke, while dark as hell, is still ActuallyPrettyFunny
--> '''Jack''': I always wanted to die peacefully in my sleep, like my father. Not screaming in terror, like his passengers.
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** Jim and Harvey's CasualDangerDialogue while being strung up in a meat-packing plant by Fish's goons.
** And after [[spoiler:Falcone saves them]], Harvey parrots his "Yeah, there are rules!"
** And after [[spoiler:Falcone saves them]], Harvey parrots his "Yeah, there are rules!"
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'''Jim:''' You know...could be better. Thanks for trying to save me.\\
'''Harvey:''' Kinda wish I hadn't.\\
'''Jim:''' Eh.
* And after [[spoiler:Falcone saves them]], Harvey parrots his "Yeah, there are rules!"
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* Jim and Harvey's CasualDangerDialogue while being strung up in a meat-packing plant by Fish's goons.
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* Butch arguing with Fish's other goons on how to get the best shot for a video in which they execute Gordon. "What are you, a director?"
** Jim and Harvey's CasualDangerDialogue while being strung up in a meat-packing plant by Fish's goons.
** Jim and Harvey's CasualDangerDialogue while being strung up in a meat-packing plant by Fish's goons.
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* Jim and Harvey's CasualDangerDialogue while being strung up in a meat-packing plant by Fish's goons.
** And after [[spoiler:Falcone saves them]], Harvey parrots his "Yeah, there are rules!"
* Jim and Harvey's CasualDangerDialogue while being strung up in a meat-packing plant by Fish's goons.
** And after [[spoiler:Falcone saves them]], Harvey parrots his "Yeah, there are rules!"
