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* The small moment when the Ghostbusters are out of money and eating Chinese takeout.
-->'''Ray:''' This magnificent feast represents the ''last'' of the petty cash.
-->''({{beat}})''
-->'''Peter:''' Eat slowly. Chew your food.
-->'''Ray:''' This magnificent feast represents the ''last'' of the petty cash.
-->''({{beat}})''
-->'''Peter:''' Eat slowly. Chew your food.
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See [[Funny/{{Ghostbusters2016}} here]].
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--> See [[Funny/{{Ghostbusters2016}} here]].'''[[Funny/{{Ghostbusters2016}} here]]'''.
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!!Ghostbusters 2016
* Erin is the first of the new team to get slimed.
-->'''Erin''': That stuff went everywhere, by the way. In every crack. Very hard to wash off.
* Erin and Abby stumbling over each other trying to say "Let's go" before the team's first mission.
* While wandering through a theatre dressing room, Erin goes in front of a shelf full of wigs - and then jumps at the sight of Holtzmann standing their in a bright purple wig and gaudy hat.
-->'''Erin''': Holtzmann! Come on.\\
'''Holtzmann''': It's the hat, it's too much, right? *''{{beat}}''* Is it the wig or the hat?
* Patty goes after a possessed Abby and slaps the ghost out of her - but doesn't realize it at first.
-->'''Patty''': Get out of my friend, ghost!\\
''*slap, ghost leaves*''\\
'''Abby''': Ow, that's gonna leave a mark.\\
'''Patty''': The power of Patty compels you!\\
''*slap*''\\
'''Abby''': ''OW!''
* Erin is the first of the new team to get slimed.
-->'''Erin''': That stuff went everywhere, by the way. In every crack. Very hard to wash off.
* Erin and Abby stumbling over each other trying to say "Let's go" before the team's first mission.
* While wandering through a theatre dressing room, Erin goes in front of a shelf full of wigs - and then jumps at the sight of Holtzmann standing their in a bright purple wig and gaudy hat.
-->'''Erin''': Holtzmann! Come on.\\
'''Holtzmann''': It's the hat, it's too much, right? *''{{beat}}''* Is it the wig or the hat?
* Patty goes after a possessed Abby and slaps the ghost out of her - but doesn't realize it at first.
-->'''Patty''': Get out of my friend, ghost!\\
''*slap, ghost leaves*''\\
'''Abby''': Ow, that's gonna leave a mark.\\
'''Patty''': The power of Patty compels you!\\
''*slap*''\\
'''Abby''': ''OW!''
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* Erin is the first of the new team to get slimed.
-->'''Erin''': That stuff went everywhere, by the way. In every crack. Very hard to wash off.
* Erin and Abby stumbling over each other trying to say "Let's go" before the team's first mission.
* While wandering through a theatre dressing room, Erin goes in front of a shelf full of wigs - and then jumps at the sight of Holtzmann standing their in a bright purple wig and gaudy hat.
-->'''Erin''': Holtzmann! Come on.\\
'''Holtzmann''': It's the hat, it's too much, right? *''{{beat}}''* Is it the wig or the hat?
* Patty goes after a possessed Abby and slaps the ghost out of her - but doesn't realize it at first.
-->'''Patty''': Get out of my friend, ghost!\\
''*slap, ghost leaves*''\\
'''Abby''': Ow, that's gonna leave a mark.\\
'''Patty''': The power of Patty compels you!\\
''*slap*''\\
'''Abby''': ''OW!''
See [[Funny/{{Ghostbusters2016}} here]].
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--->'''Ray''': Okay, switch me on.\\
''(Egon hits the power switch, and everyone moves away in the cramped space)''
''(Egon hits the power switch, and everyone moves away in the cramped space)''
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''(Egon
--> '''Egon:''' I blame myself.
--> '''Venkman:''' So do I.
--> '''Ray:''' Well, no sense in worrying about it now.
--> '''Venkman:''' Why worry? Each one of us is carrying an unlicensed nuclear accelerator on his back.
** Egon hits the power
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'''Patty''': The power of pain compels you!\\
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'''Patty''': The power of pain Patty compels you!\\
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-->'''Peter''': Now! *commence blasting*.
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-->'''Peter''': Now! *commence blasting*.blasting*.
!!Ghostbusters 2016
* Erin is the first of the new team to get slimed.
-->'''Erin''': That stuff went everywhere, by the way. In every crack. Very hard to wash off.
* Erin and Abby stumbling over each other trying to say "Let's go" before the team's first mission.
* While wandering through a theatre dressing room, Erin goes in front of a shelf full of wigs - and then jumps at the sight of Holtzmann standing their in a bright purple wig and gaudy hat.
-->'''Erin''': Holtzmann! Come on.\\
'''Holtzmann''': It's the hat, it's too much, right? *''{{beat}}''* Is it the wig or the hat?
* Patty goes after a possessed Abby and slaps the ghost out of her - but doesn't realize it at first.
-->'''Patty''': Get out of my friend, ghost!\\
''*slap, ghost leaves*''\\
'''Abby''': Ow, that's gonna leave a mark.\\
'''Patty''': The power of pain compels you!\\
''*slap*''\\
'''Abby''': ''OW!''
!!Ghostbusters 2016
* Erin is the first of the new team to get slimed.
-->'''Erin''': That stuff went everywhere, by the way. In every crack. Very hard to wash off.
* Erin and Abby stumbling over each other trying to say "Let's go" before the team's first mission.
* While wandering through a theatre dressing room, Erin goes in front of a shelf full of wigs - and then jumps at the sight of Holtzmann standing their in a bright purple wig and gaudy hat.
-->'''Erin''': Holtzmann! Come on.\\
'''Holtzmann''': It's the hat, it's too much, right? *''{{beat}}''* Is it the wig or the hat?
* Patty goes after a possessed Abby and slaps the ghost out of her - but doesn't realize it at first.
-->'''Patty''': Get out of my friend, ghost!\\
''*slap, ghost leaves*''\\
'''Abby''': Ow, that's gonna leave a mark.\\
'''Patty''': The power of pain compels you!\\
''*slap*''\\
'''Abby''': ''OW!''
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* When the ghostusters are jailed, the other immates congregate very close to hear Ray and Egon's technical, supernatural briefing.
-->'''Peter:''' ''(to a jailbird looking over his shoulder to the blueprints)'' Everybody getting this so far?
-->'''Peter:''' ''(to a jailbird looking over his shoulder to the blueprints)'' Everybody getting this so far?
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** The line Egon shouts wasn't always '''LOOK!''' In at least one original take, it was '''[[PrecisionFStrike OH, FUCK!]]''' This was, sadly, cut due to the fact that the PG-13 rating didn't exist yet and one F bomb would have taken the movie from PG to R, but the idea of ''Egon'' of all character shouting "fuck" at the top of his lungs is hilarious.
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* From the capturing of Slimer, we have the immortal couplet.
--> '''Stantz''': I'm opening the trap - Don't look directly into the trap!\\
''The trap is opened''\\
'''Spengler''': ''I looked at the trap, Ray!'' [eyes widen]
* After she's [[ShootEverythingThatMoves nearly vaporized by the Ghostbusters]], the poor hotel maid can be seen pathetically [[FunnyBackgroundEvent trying to extinguish the burning carpet with her spray bottle.]]
** Venkman deciding to try the tablecloth-pull trick he had always wanted to do, [[SkewedPriorities even though Slimer is loose in the ballroom]]. Everything breaks, but we get this:
--> '''Venkman:''' The flowers are still standing!
* This gem:
--> Ray: [[LetsSplitUpGang Let's split up.]]
--> Peter: [[DeadpanSnarker Good idea, we'll do more damage that way.]]
--> '''Stantz''': I'm opening the trap - Don't look directly into the trap!\\
''The trap is opened''\\
'''Spengler''': ''I looked at the trap, Ray!'' [eyes widen]
* After she's [[ShootEverythingThatMoves nearly vaporized by the Ghostbusters]], the poor hotel maid can be seen pathetically [[FunnyBackgroundEvent trying to extinguish the burning carpet with her spray bottle.]]
** Venkman deciding to try the tablecloth-pull trick he had always wanted to do, [[SkewedPriorities even though Slimer is loose in the ballroom]]. Everything breaks, but we get this:
--> '''Venkman:''' The flowers are still standing!
* This gem:
--> Ray: [[LetsSplitUpGang Let's split up.]]
--> Peter: [[DeadpanSnarker Good idea, we'll do more damage that way.]]
* The entirety of their first case snagging Slimer is one long [=CMoF=] the second they reach the elevators.
-->'''Elderly Gent:''' What are you supposed to be, some kind of a cosmonaut?\\
'''Venkman:''' Hah! No, we're exterminators. Someone saw a cockroach up on 12.\\
'''Elderly Gent:''' That's gotta be some cockroach.\\
'''Venkman:''' (deadpan) Bite your head off, man.\\
(''the elevator opens'')\\
'''Stantz:''' Going up?\\
'''Elderly Gent:''' I'll take the next one.
** Dan Aykroyd's barely-hidden {{corpsing}} after Venkman's "Bite your head off, man" ad-lib.
** The calm bickering on the elevator over how their gear is untested leads to:
--->'''Ray''': Okay, switch me on.\\
''(Egon hits the power switch, and everyone moves away in the cramped space)''
* After she's [[ShootEverythingThatMoves nearly vaporized by the Ghostbusters]], the poor hotel maid can be seen pathetically [[FunnyBackgroundEvent trying to extinguish the burning carpet with her spray bottle.]]
* This gem:
--> Ray: [[LetsSplitUpGang Let's split up.]]
--> Peter: [[DeadpanSnarker Good idea, we'll do more damage that way.]]
** Venkman deciding to try the tablecloth-pull trick he had always wanted to do, [[SkewedPriorities even though Slimer is loose in the ballroom]]. Everything breaks, but we get this:
--> '''Venkman:''' The flowers are still standing!
* From the capture, we have the immortal couplet.
--> '''Stantz''': I'm opening the trap - Don't look directly into the trap!\\
''The trap is opened''\\
'''Spengler''': ''I looked at the trap, Ray!'' [eyes widen]
-->'''Elderly Gent:''' What are you supposed to be, some kind of a cosmonaut?\\
'''Venkman:''' Hah! No, we're exterminators. Someone saw a cockroach up on 12.\\
'''Elderly Gent:''' That's gotta be some cockroach.\\
'''Venkman:''' (deadpan) Bite your head off, man.\\
(''the elevator opens'')\\
'''Stantz:''' Going up?\\
'''Elderly Gent:''' I'll take the next one.
** Dan Aykroyd's barely-hidden {{corpsing}} after Venkman's "Bite your head off, man" ad-lib.
** The calm bickering on the elevator over how their gear is untested leads to:
--->'''Ray''': Okay, switch me on.\\
''(Egon hits the power switch, and everyone moves away in the cramped space)''
* After she's [[ShootEverythingThatMoves nearly vaporized by the Ghostbusters]], the poor hotel maid can be seen pathetically [[FunnyBackgroundEvent trying to extinguish the burning carpet with her spray bottle.]]
* This gem:
--> Ray: [[LetsSplitUpGang Let's split up.]]
--> Peter: [[DeadpanSnarker Good idea, we'll do more damage that way.]]
** Venkman deciding to try the tablecloth-pull trick he had always wanted to do, [[SkewedPriorities even though Slimer is loose in the ballroom]]. Everything breaks, but we get this:
--> '''Venkman:''' The flowers are still standing!
* From the capture, we have the immortal couplet.
--> '''Stantz''': I'm opening the trap - Don't look directly into the trap!\\
''The trap is opened''\\
'''Spengler''': ''I looked at the trap, Ray!'' [eyes widen]
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* The entirety of their first case snagging Slimer is one long [=CMoF=] the second they reach the elevators.
-->'''Elderly Gent:''' What are you supposed to be, some kind of a cosmonaut?\\
'''Venkman:''' Hah! No, we're exterminators. Someone saw a cockroach up on 12.\\
'''Elderly Gent:''' That's gotta be some cockroach.\\
'''Venkman:''' (deadpan) Bite your head off, man.\\
(''the elevator opens'')\\
'''Stantz:''' Going up?\\
'''Elderly Gent:''' I'll take the next one.
** Dan Aykroyd's barely-hidden {{corpsing}} after Venkman's "Bite your head off, man" ad-lib.
** The calm bickering on the elevator over how their gear is untested leads to:
--->'''Ray''': Okay, switch me on.\\
''(Egon hits the power switch, and slowly nudges Venkman over to one side in the cramped elevator)''
-->'''Elderly Gent:''' What are you supposed to be, some kind of a cosmonaut?\\
'''Venkman:''' Hah! No, we're exterminators. Someone saw a cockroach up on 12.\\
'''Elderly Gent:''' That's gotta be some cockroach.\\
'''Venkman:''' (deadpan) Bite your head off, man.\\
(''the elevator opens'')\\
'''Stantz:''' Going up?\\
'''Elderly Gent:''' I'll take the next one.
** Dan Aykroyd's barely-hidden {{corpsing}} after Venkman's "Bite your head off, man" ad-lib.
** The calm bickering on the elevator over how their gear is untested leads to:
--->'''Ray''': Okay, switch me on.\\
''(Egon hits the power switch, and slowly nudges Venkman over to one side in the cramped elevator)''
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** "[[ComicallyMissingThePoint The flowers are still standing]]!"[[/note]] In response to a poorly executed tablecloth-removal trick, which he had always wanted to try.]]
* After she's [[ShootEverythingThatMoves nearly vaporized by the Ghostbusters]], the poor hotel maid can be seen [[FunnyBackgroundEvent pathetically trying to extinguish the burning carpet with her spray bottle.]]
* After she's [[ShootEverythingThatMoves nearly vaporized by the Ghostbusters]], the poor hotel maid can be seen [[FunnyBackgroundEvent pathetically trying to extinguish the burning carpet with her spray bottle.]]
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--> '''Venkman:''' The flowers are still standing!
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--> '''Venkman''': *Motions to Zedd* Did you?!
--> '''Zedd''': My mind is totally blank!
--> '''Zedd''': My mind is totally blank!
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--> '''Venkman''': *Motions to Zedd* Winston* Did you?!
-->'''Zedd''': '''Winston''': My mind is totally blank!
-->
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--> *Egon, Venkman, and Zedd all turn towards Stantz and begin to close in on him.*
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--> *Egon, Venkman, and Zedd Winston all turn towards Stantz and begin to close in on him.*
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* A doorman, played by [[NewEdition Bobby Brown]] asks Egon and Ray if they had an extra Proton Pack for his little brother.
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* A doorman, played by [[NewEdition [[Music/NewEdition Bobby Brown]] asks Egon and Ray if they had an extra Proton Pack for his little brother.
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** The fact that Dana becomes HotterAndSexier while possessed by Zuul, but Vinz Clortho is just as clueless and awkward as Louis.
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** "The flowers are still standing!"
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** "The "[[ComicallyMissingThePoint The flowers are still standing!" standing]]!"[[/note]] In response to a poorly executed tablecloth-removal trick, which he had always wanted to try.]]
* After she's [[ShootEverythingThatMoves nearly vaporized by the Ghostbusters]], the poor hotel maid can be seen [[FunnyBackgroundEvent pathetically trying to extinguish the burning carpet with her spray bottle.]]
* After she's [[ShootEverythingThatMoves nearly vaporized by the Ghostbusters]], the poor hotel maid can be seen [[FunnyBackgroundEvent pathetically trying to extinguish the burning carpet with her spray bottle.]]
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* ---> Ray: [[LetsSplitUpGang Let's split up.]]
---> Peter: [[DeadpanSnarker Good idea, we'll do more damage that way.]]
---> Peter: [[DeadpanSnarker Good idea, we'll do more damage that way.]]
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* ---> This gem:
--> Ray: [[LetsSplitUpGang Let's split up.]]
---> --> Peter: [[DeadpanSnarker Good idea, we'll do more damage that way.]]
--> Ray: [[LetsSplitUpGang Let's split up.]]
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-->'''Egon''': ''<Holds up PKE, which immediately spikes>'' Yes.
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-->'''Egon''': ''<Holds ''(Holds up PKE, which immediately spikes>'' spikes)'' Yes.
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* YMMV, but Rick Moranis' performance as Vince Plortho is just downright {{Adorkable}} and hilarious.
-->'''Vince''' ''(almost pleadingly to Egon)'': Are ''you'' the Gatekeeper?
-->''(Egon waves PKE monitor in front of Vince, distantly) '''Egon''': Yes.
-->''(Vince follows movements of the PKE, transfixed by the device)''
-->'''Vince''' ''(almost pleadingly to Egon)'': Are ''you'' the Gatekeeper?
-->''(Egon waves PKE monitor in front of Vince, distantly) '''Egon''': Yes.
-->''(Vince follows movements of the PKE, transfixed by the device)''
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* YMMV, but Rick Moranis' performance as Vince Plortho Vinz Clortho is just downright {{Adorkable}} and hilarious.
-->'''Vince''' -->'''Vinz''' ''(almost pleadingly to Egon)'': Are ''you'' the Gatekeeper?
-->''(Egon waves PKE monitor in front of Vince, distantly) '''Egon''': -->'''Egon''': ''<Holds up PKE, which immediately spikes>'' Yes.
-->''(Vince -->''(Vinz follows movements of the PKE, transfixed by the device)''
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-->'''[[CheechAndChong Dockworker]]:''' ''(staring in disbelief, then almost shrugging as the ghostly passengers debark)'' Well... better late than never!
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-->'''[[CheechAndChong Dockworker]]:''' ''(staring in disbelief, then almost shrugging as the ghostly passengers debark)'' Well... better late than never!never!
* Vigo's attempt at intimidation after possessing Ray, and the subsequent reaction:
-->'''Vigo''': Now I, Ray, as Vigo, shall rule the Earth! Begone, you pitiful half-men!
-->''(beat)''
-->'''Peter''': Now! *commence blasting*.
* Vigo's attempt at intimidation after possessing Ray, and the subsequent reaction:
-->'''Vigo''': Now I, Ray, as Vigo, shall rule the Earth! Begone, you pitiful half-men!
-->''(beat)''
-->'''Peter''': Now! *commence blasting*.
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-->'''Vince''' ''(to Egon)'': Are ''you'' the Gatekeeper?
-->''(Egon waves PKE monitor in front of Vince, Vince follows movements of the PKE, transfixed by the device)''
-->''(Egon waves PKE monitor in front of Vince, Vince follows movements of the PKE, transfixed by the device)''
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-->'''Vince''' ''(to ''(almost pleadingly to Egon)'': Are ''you'' the Gatekeeper?
-->''(Egon waves PKE monitor in front of Vince,Vince distantly) '''Egon''': Yes.
-->''(Vince follows movements of the PKE, transfixed by the device)''
-->''(Egon waves PKE monitor in front of Vince,
-->''(Vince follows movements of the PKE, transfixed by the device)''
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* YMMV, but Rick Moranis' performance as Vince Plortho is just downright {{Adorkable}} and hilarious.
-->'''Vince''' ''(to Egon)'': Are ''you'' the Gatekeeper?
-->''(Egon waves PKE monitor in front of Vince, Vince follows movements of the PKE, transfixed by the device)''
-->'''Vince''' ''(to Egon)'': Are ''you'' the Gatekeeper?
-->''(Egon waves PKE monitor in front of Vince, Vince follows movements of the PKE, transfixed by the device)''
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-->'''[[CheechAndChong Dockworker]]]:''' ''(staring in disbelief, then almost shrugging as the ghostly passengers debark)'' Well... Better late than never!
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-->'''[[CheechAndChong Dockworker]]]:''' Dockworker]]:''' ''(staring in disbelief, then almost shrugging as the ghostly passengers debark)'' Well... Better better late than never!
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-->'''Peter''': Ray, we’re walking a 150 foot national monument through Manhattan. You think we should worry about a traffic ticket?
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-->'''Peter''': Ray, we’re walking a 150 foot national monument through Manhattan. You think we should worry about a traffic ticket?ticket?
* "The ''Titanic'' just arrived!"
-->'''[[CheechAndChong Dockworker]]]:''' ''(staring in disbelief, then almost shrugging as the ghostly passengers debark)'' Well... Better late than never!
* "The ''Titanic'' just arrived!"
-->'''[[CheechAndChong Dockworker]]]:''' ''(staring in disbelief, then almost shrugging as the ghostly passengers debark)'' Well... Better late than never!
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** After the toaster's dance, Peter plays a trick on his teammates by [[spoiler: pretending the toaster is eating his hand]]. In retaliation, Ray grabs Peter from behind and yells "GET HIM!" while Egon and Winston proceed to do just that.
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** After the toaster's dance, Peter plays a trick on his teammates by [[spoiler: pretending the toaster is eating his hand]]. In retaliation, Ray grabs Peter from behind and yells "GET HIM!" while Egon and Winston proceed to [[TickleTorture do just that.that]].
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** After the toaster's dance, Peter plays a trick on his teammates by [[spoiler: pretending the toaster is eating his hand]]. In retaliation, Ray grabs Peter from behind and yells "GET HIM!" while Egon and Winston proceed to do just that.
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Forgot it was already on here. My bad.
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-->'''Peter''': Ray, we’re walking a 150 foot national monument through Manhattan. You think we should worry about a traffic ticket?
* Making the toaster dance.
* Making the toaster dance.
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-->'''Peter''': Ray, we’re walking a 150 foot national monument through Manhattan. You think we should worry about a traffic ticket?
* Making the toaster dance.ticket?
* Making the toaster dance.
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-->'''Peter''': Ray, we’re walking a 150 foot national monument through Manhattan. You think we should worry about a traffic ticket?
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-->'''Peter''': Ray, we’re walking a 150 foot national monument through Manhattan. You think we should worry about a traffic ticket?ticket?
* Making the toaster dance.
* Making the toaster dance.
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**
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** then...
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-->'''Peter:''' ({{beat}}) "Is this a trick question?"
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-->'''Peter:''' ({{beat}}) "Is this a trick question?"question?"\\
'''Zuul:''' I want you inside me.\\
'''Peter:''' ''(laughs in surprise)'' Go ahead!... No, I can't. It sounds like you've got at least two or three people in there already.
'''Zuul:''' I want you inside me.\\
'''Peter:''' ''(laughs in surprise)'' Go ahead!... No, I can't. It sounds like you've got at least two or three people in there already.
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-->'''Venkman''' ''(lifting beer can in toast)'': To our first customer!
-->'''Ray''' ''(in unison)'': Our first customer!
-->'''Venkman''': ... And ''only'' customer.
-->''(beat as the trio take a swig)''
-->'''Venkman''': I'm gonna need to draw some of the petty cash. I should take her out to dinner, I don't want to lose her.
-->'''Ray''': Uh, this magnificent feast here represents the ''last'' of the petty cash.
-->''(beat)''
-->'''Venkman''' ''(silently, solemnly)'': Slow down. Chew your food.
-->'''Ray''' ''(in unison)'': Our first customer!
-->'''Venkman''': ... And ''only'' customer.
-->''(beat as the trio take a swig)''
-->'''Venkman''': I'm gonna need to draw some of the petty cash. I should take her out to dinner, I don't want to lose her.
-->'''Ray''': Uh, this magnificent feast here represents the ''last'' of the petty cash.
-->''(beat)''
-->'''Venkman''' ''(silently, solemnly)'': Slow down. Chew your food.
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-->'''Venkman''' ''(lifting beer can in toast)'': To our first customer!
-->'''Ray''' ''(in unison)'': Ourcustomer!\\
'''Ray''' To our firstcustomer!
-->'''Venkman''': ... Andand ''only'' customer.
-->''(beatcustomer.\\
''(beat as the trio take aswig)''
-->'''Venkman''':swig)''\\
'''Venkman''': I'm gonna need to draw some of the petty cash. I should take her out to dinner, I don't want to loseher.
-->'''Ray''':her.\\
'''Ray''': Uh, this magnificent feast here represents the ''last'' of the pettycash.
-->''(beat)''
-->'''Venkman'''cash.\\
''(beat)''\\
'''Venkman''' ''(silently, solemnly)'': Slow down.Chew ''Chew'' your food.
-->'''Ray''' ''(in unison)'': Our
'''Ray''' To our first
-->'''Venkman''': ... And
-->''(beat
''(beat as the trio take a
-->'''Venkman''':
'''Venkman''': I'm gonna need to draw some of the petty cash. I should take her out to dinner, I don't want to lose
-->'''Ray''':
'''Ray''': Uh, this magnificent feast here represents the ''last'' of the petty
-->''(beat)''
-->'''Venkman'''
''(beat)''\\
'''Venkman''' ''(silently, solemnly)'': Slow down.
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-->'''Ray:''' (over the radio) "Venkman! I saw it! I saw it! I saw it!"
-->'''Venkman:''' (nervously) "It's right here, Ray. It's looking at me."
-->'''Ray:''' "He's an ugly little spud, isn't he?"
-->'''Venkman:''' "I think he can hear you."
-->'''Venkman:''' (nervously) "It's right here, Ray. It's looking at me."
-->'''Ray:''' "He's an ugly little spud, isn't he?"
-->'''Venkman:''' "I think he can hear you."
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'''Ray:''' "Venkman! I saw it! I saw it! I saw it!"\\
'''Venkman:''' (nervously) "It's right here, Ray. It's looking at me.
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'''Ray:''' "He's an ugly little spud, isn't
-->'''Venkman:'''
'''Venkman:''' "I think he can hear
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* Venkman teasing Egon shortly before going to confront the library ghost:
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* Venkman teasing Egon shortly before going to confront the library ghost:ghost (a ThrowItIn between Murray and Ramis, no less):
** Special mention goes to the ''whiny'' tone in which Peck cries out "''They caused an explosion!''".
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'''Venkman''': (beat) I think we'll take it.
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'''Venkman''': (beat) (beat; looks at Spengler who slowly shakes his head "no") I think we'll take it.
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'''Spengler''': ''I looked at the trap, Ray!''
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'''Spengler''': ''I looked at the trap, Ray!''Ray!'' [eyes widen]
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* "Guys, guys, we've been going about this all wrong. This Mr. Staypuft is okay, he's a sailor, he's in New York--we just get this guy laid, we won't have any trouble!"
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* "Guys, guys, we've been going about this all wrong. This Mr. Staypuft Stay Puft is okay, he's a sailor, he's in New York--we just get this guy laid, we won't have any trouble!"
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--> '''Peck:''' These men are in violation of the Environmental Protection Act, [[BlatantLies and this explosion is a direct result of it!]]
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--> '''Peck:''' These men are in violation of the Environmental Protection Act, '''HOLD IT! I WANT THESE MEN ARRESTED!''' CAPTAIN, THESE MEN ARE IN VIOLATION OF THE ENVIRONMENTAL PROTECTION ACT! [[BlatantLies and this explosion is a direct result of it!]]AND THIS EXPLOSION IS A DIRECT RESULT OF IT!]]
--> '''Vince''': (to horse) Wait for the sign... then our prisoners will be released! ''(runs off and yells)'' ''You will perish in flames!'' ''(runs over grocery bag)''
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-->'''Peter''': Ray has gone bye-bye, Egon. What've you got left?
-->'''Egon''': Sorry, Venkman. [[ThatMakesMeFeelAngry I'm terrified beyond the capacity for rational thought.]]
-->'''Egon''': Sorry, Venkman. [[ThatMakesMeFeelAngry I'm terrified beyond the capacity for rational thought.]]
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-->'''Peter''': Ray has gone bye-bye, Egon. What've you got left?
-->'''Egon''':left?\\
'''Egon''': Sorry, Venkman. [[ThatMakesMeFeelAngry I'm terrified beyond the capacity for rational thought.]]
-->'''Egon''':
'''Egon''': Sorry, Venkman. [[ThatMakesMeFeelAngry I'm terrified beyond the capacity for rational thought.]]
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* After Gozer is destroyed and the damage is done, the Ghostbusters all emerge from the rubble. Everyone's covered head to toe in marshmallow foam except for Venkman who's relatively clean. There's a moment where the guys are looking at Venkman like, "Wait, what the hell?"
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* After Gozer is destroyed and the damage is done, the Ghostbusters all emerge from the rubble. Everyone's covered head to toe in marshmallow foam except for Venkman who's relatively clean. There's a moment where the guys are looking at Venkman like, "Wait, what the hell?"hell?" Bonus points for the real-life reason for this -- Murray had apparently had ''enough'' of being covered in slime and various other bits of gunk, and refused to be covered in marshmallow for the scene.
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** Dan Aykroyd's barely-hidden {{corpsing}} after Venkman's "Bite your head off, man" ad-lib.
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--> '''Egon''': ''[points]'' '''LOOK!'''
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-->'''Janosz:''' Soon it will be midnight, and the whole world will be mine and Vigo's. {{beat}} Mostly Vigo's
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-->'''Janosz:''' Soon it will be midnight, and the whole world will be mine and Vigo's. {{beat}} ''[{{beat}}]'' Mostly Vigo's
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* Janosz trying a bit self-aggrandisement:
-->'''Janosz:''' Soon it will be midnight, and the whole world will be mine and Vigo's. {{beat}} Mostly Vigo's
-->'''Janosz:''' Soon it will be midnight, and the whole world will be mine and Vigo's. {{beat}} Mostly Vigo's
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** Look closely at Peter trying to register what Ray just said, his facial expression is priceless.
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*---> Ray: [[LetsSplitUpGang Let's split up.]]
---> Peter: [[DeadpanSnarker Good idea, we'll do more damage that way.]]
---> Peter: [[DeadpanSnarker Good idea, we'll do more damage that way.]]