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* While reading the other girl's poems, the [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BabIsQ9I8L4 music]] transitions to a version using different instruments. [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BDsCNVj72ig Natsuki's version]] uses a recorder played slightly off-tempo to show how childlike her tastes are.

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* While reading the other girl's girls' poems, the [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BabIsQ9I8L4 music]] transitions to a version using different instruments. [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BDsCNVj72ig Natsuki's version]] uses a recorder played slightly off-tempo to show how childlike her tastes are.
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* Speaking of the opening discretion notes, while a few of them are cryptic or disconcerting, the others...well:

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* Speaking of the opening discretion notes, while a few of them are cryptic or disconcerting, the others... well:



* A meta example is the [[http://steamcommunity.com/id/thefastestman_alive/recommended/698780/ steam review considered the funniest by far]] for several reasons...

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* A meta example is the [[http://steamcommunity.com/id/thefastestman_alive/recommended/698780/ steam Steam review considered the funniest by far]] for several reasons...
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** Bonus points for the protagonist commenting on Yuri's expression when she ''doesn't have a face.''

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** Bonus points for the protagonist commenting on Yuri's expression when she ''doesn't have a face.'''' Not a DeadpanSnarker thing (it's implied that he cannot see the glitches), but still.
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** Followed by Sayori giving Natsuki a big hug...[[TheGadfly then taking a bite out of the]] [[SweetTooth chocolate cookie]] Natsuki was keeping for herself. Even [[ShrinkingViolet Yuri]] [[NotSoAboveItAll found it hilarious]]. However, it’s [[HarsherInHindsight a bit less cute]] when you realize Sayori inadvertently ruined Natsuki’s chance at a snack, considering she always has to bake them herself due to neglect (Act 1) or simply never gets the chance (Act 2 onwards).

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** Followed by Sayori giving Natsuki a big hug... [[TheGadfly then taking a bite out of the]] [[SweetTooth chocolate cookie]] Natsuki was keeping for herself. Even [[ShrinkingViolet Yuri]] [[NotSoAboveItAll found it hilarious]]. However, it’s [[HarsherInHindsight a bit less cute]] when you realize Sayori inadvertently ruined Natsuki’s chance at a snack, considering she always has to bake them herself due to neglect (Act 1) or simply never gets the chance (Act 2 onwards).
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-->'''Player Character:''' If you had enough money, you would have bought a snack before coming to the clubroom. So, either you're not hungry and wanted an excuse to take a walk...or, you planned to conveniently forget that you spent all your money, so that I would lend you some! But there's one more thing...[[BigEater You're always hungry!]] And so, that only leaves the one option!

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-->'''Player Character:''' If you had enough money, you would have bought a snack before coming to the clubroom. So, either you're not hungry and wanted an excuse to take a walk... or, you planned to conveniently forget that you spent all your money, so that I would lend you some! But there's one more thing...thing... [[BigEater You're always hungry!]] And so, that only leaves the one option!



** Natsuki, who overheard Sayori admit that she tricked her into making cupcakes so that the player character could come over, then offers Sayori a cookie...[[JerkWithAHeartOfGold by pelting her in the face with it from across the room.]] She decides that it was worth it for Sayori's reaction.

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** Natsuki, who overheard Sayori admit that she tricked her into making cupcakes so that the player character could come over, then offers Sayori a cookie... [[JerkWithAHeartOfGold by pelting her in the face with it from across the room.]] She decides that it was worth it for Sayori's reaction.

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* While reading the other girl's poems, the [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BabIsQ9I8L4 music]] transitions to a version using different instruments. [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BDsCNVj72ig Natsuki's version]] uses a recorder played slightly off-tempo to show how child-like her tastes are.
* While Yuri and Natsuki are arguing, Natsuki accuses Yuri of padding her chest ever since the Protagonist started attending the club. Yuri is quick to deny it once the fight settles down.
** This leads later to the player character completely misunderstanding what Yuri didn't want to say was causing her back problems...
** In a bit of fridge funny, Natsuki's claim that Yuri's boobs "magically grew two sizes" when the player joined the club could very well be ''[[RightForTheWrongReasons completely right]]'': since Monika is shown to be able to alter the game, it’s entirely possible that she gave Yuri's boobs an "update" upon the player character’s arrival.
** During Act 1, the player can call on Sayori for help, which leads to her saying how everyone in the club is amazing at writing poems in their own way, and...
--->'''Sayori:''' Also! Natsuki's cute and there's nothing wrong with that! And Yuri's boobs are the same as they always were! Big and beautiful!\\

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* While reading the other girl's poems, the [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BabIsQ9I8L4 music]] transitions to a version using different instruments. [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BDsCNVj72ig Natsuki's version]] uses a recorder played slightly off-tempo to show how child-like childlike her tastes are.
* While Yuri and Natsuki are arguing, Natsuki accuses Yuri of padding her chest ever since the Protagonist started attending the club. Yuri is quick to deny it once the fight settles down.
** This leads
down, later leading to the player character completely misunderstanding what Yuri didn't want to say was causing her back problems...
** In a bit of fridge funny, Natsuki's claim that Yuri's boobs "magically grew two sizes" when the player joined the club could very well be ''[[RightForTheWrongReasons completely right]]'': right]]''; since Monika is shown to be able to alter the game, it’s entirely possible that she gave Yuri's boobs an "update" upon the player character’s arrival.
** * During Act 1, the player can call on Sayori for help, which leads to her saying how everyone in the club is amazing at writing poems in their own way, and...
--->'''Sayori:''' -->'''Sayori:''' Also! Natsuki's cute and there's nothing wrong with that! And Yuri's boobs are the same as they always were! Big and beautiful!\\



** The darker variant in Act Two still has a few laughs, like when Natsuki warns Yuri not to "cut herself on that edge."

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** The darker variant in Act Two 2 still has a few laughs, like when Natsuki warns Yuri not to "cut herself on that edge."



* Act 1, Day 2: Sayori "invites" the player character with her to buy a snack. The player character immediately sees through her ruse, deducing that she has no money and wants him to buy something for her.

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* Act 1, Day 2: Sayori "invites" the player character to come with her to and buy a snack. The player character immediately sees through her ruse, deducing that she has no money and wants him to buy something for her.



** Many players are likely left curious as to what the joke was translated as in Japanese. The answer? It [[StylisticSuck basically wasn't]]; Natsuki's joke is written out as "Mon-ika (いか)", with Monika instead {{lampshading}} how the joke [[LostInTranslation makes absolutely no sense]] and calls Natsuki out for [[BreakingTheFourthWall making a joke that will give translators a headache]].
* Even though things have already taken a dark turn by Act Two, it's still sort of hilarious when demure ShrinkingViolet Yuri loses her temper and drops a completely unforeseen PrecisionFStrike at Natsuki.
* Just prior to the player finding Sayori after she hangs herself in her house, Monika cracks a [[BlackComedy horribly accurate pun:]]

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** Many players are likely left curious as to what about how the joke was translated as in into Japanese. The answer? It [[StylisticSuck basically wasn't]]; Natsuki's joke is written out as "Mon-ika (いか)", with Monika instead {{lampshading}} how the joke [[LostInTranslation makes absolutely no sense]] and calls Natsuki out for [[BreakingTheFourthWall making a joke that will give translators a headache]].
* Even though things have already taken a dark turn by Act Two, 2, it's still sort of hilarious when demure ShrinkingViolet Yuri loses her temper and drops a completely unforeseen PrecisionFStrike at Natsuki.
* Just prior to before the player finding finds Sayori after she hangs herself in her house, Monika cracks a [[BlackComedy horribly accurate pun:]]



* Not far into act 2, the Protagonist walks into the club thankful that everything's normal. [[https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/197160369775443968/374763286509649921/20171030233246_1.jpg Cue]] [[https://media.discordapp.net/attachments/197160369775443968/374763531721244683/20171030233605_1.jpg Yuri]].

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* Not far into act Act 2, the Protagonist walks into the club thankful that everything's normal. [[https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/197160369775443968/374763286509649921/20171030233246_1.jpg Cue]] [[https://media.discordapp.net/attachments/197160369775443968/374763531721244683/20171030233605_1.jpg Yuri]].



* At some point in late act 2, a file appears in your game folder simply named "have a nice weekend", which can't be opened and disappears after the scene is over. This counts as CrossesTheLineTwice considering that it foreshadows Yuri's suicide and the consequent scene lasting the entire in-game weekend. As to this, it also doubles as NightmareFuel. (You have to wonder whether "have a nice weekend" is Monika actually trying to program a nice weekend for the player character and [[EpicFail failing spectacularly]], considering that she seems shocked that she accidentally left the player staring at Yuri's corpse for the entire weekend while glitched text displays on the screen.)

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* At some point in late act Act 2, a file appears in your game folder simply named "have a nice weekend", which can't be opened and disappears after the scene is over. This counts as CrossesTheLineTwice CrossesTheLineTwice, considering that it foreshadows Yuri's suicide and the consequent scene lasting the entire in-game weekend. As to this, it also doubles as NightmareFuel. (You have to wonder whether "have a nice weekend" is Monika actually trying to program a nice weekend for the player character and [[EpicFail failing spectacularly]], considering that she seems shocked that she accidentally left the player staring at Yuri's corpse for the entire weekend while glitched text displays on the screen.)



* In a dark, creepy way, the poem mechanic as seen in Act 3 is this. To be specific, Monika wonders if that particular mechanic still works, so she tries it out. It does... but just barely. The screen is heavily distorted with black, red, and white coloring, the only sprite visible is Monika, and the only options you can press are various spellings and corruptions of "Monika."
* When Monika forces you to try and pick her over Yuri or Natsuki at one point and keeps the cursor sliding toward her name. You can fight it and pick someone else. Sure you get slight nightmare fuel in the form of the lingering eyes on a blank screen and the game resetting itself but the way it just cuts back to Monika ecstatic over you choosing her is utterly hilarious since you know she rigged it.
* Even though it's a rare-chance-of-happening piece of NightmareFuel during Act Two, you've got to admit seeing Natsuki's eyes pop out of her head is a little funny just because it's so damn unexpected.
* Because of the fact that you [[HelloInsertNameHere get to personally decide the main character's name]] and the fact that the textboxes in the game have no visual identification of whoever is actually speaking beyond the name of the character in question, inputting the name of any of the heroines as your protagonist's name will cause quite some confusion whenever said character appears on screen and has a conversation with the protagonist, often to hilarious results that makes it seem like the character is TalkingToThemself.

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* In a dark, creepy way, the poem mechanic mechanic, as seen in Act 3 3, is this. To be specific, Monika wonders if that particular mechanic still works, so she tries it out. It does... but just barely. The screen is heavily distorted with black, red, and white coloring, the only sprite visible is Monika, and the only options you can press are various spellings and corruptions of "Monika."
* When Monika forces you to try and pick her over Yuri or Natsuki at one point and keeps the cursor sliding toward her name. You can fight it and pick someone else. Sure Sure, you get slight nightmare fuel in the form of the lingering eyes on a blank screen and the game resetting itself itself, but the way how it just cuts back to Monika ecstatic over you choosing her is utterly hilarious since you know she rigged it.
* Even though it's a rare-chance-of-happening piece of NightmareFuel during Act Two, 2, you've got to admit seeing Natsuki's eyes pop out of her head is a little funny just because it's so damn unexpected.
* Because of the fact that you [[HelloInsertNameHere get to personally decide the main character's name]] and the fact that the textboxes in the game have no visual identification of whoever is actually speaking beyond the name of the character in question, inputting the name of any of the heroines as your protagonist's name will cause quite some confusion whenever said character appears on screen and has a conversation with the protagonist, often to hilarious results that makes it seem like the character is TalkingToThemself.



* Late in Act 2, the player is still writing poems for the girls -- and in the final case (not including the glitched one), as the player picks words, they can see the top of Monika's head popping up from the bottom, as if to say, "Hey! I'm still here too! Pay attention to me!"

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* Late in Act 2, the player is still writing poems for the girls -- and in the final case (not including the glitched one), as the player picks words, they can see the top of Monika's head popping up from the bottom, bottom as if to say, "Hey! I'm still here too! Pay attention to me!"



* After you read a poem from Yuri in Act 2, she mentions that her mind has been hyperactive lately, so she decided to take it out on a pen she took from you. When she realises what she has said, she attempts to clarify, [[DiggingYourselfDeeper but she ends up making her comment more awkward]].

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* After you read a poem from Yuri in Act 2, she mentions that her mind has been hyperactive lately, so she decided to take it out on a pen she took from you. When she realises realizes what she has said, she attempts to clarify, [[DiggingYourselfDeeper but she ends up making her comment more awkward]].



* In Act 3, it's possible for Monika to discuss the {{Yandere}} trope by name, and how there was one in the game, which she claims to be Yuri. Monika admits she doesn't understand the appeal, but she "could act scary" if the player wanted her to. [[HypocriticalHumor She doesn't seem to get the irony]].

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* In Act 3, it's possible for Monika to discuss the {{Yandere}} trope by name, name and how there was one in the game, which she claims to be Yuri. Monika admits she doesn't understand the appeal, but she "could act scary" if the player wanted her to. [[HypocriticalHumor She doesn't seem to get the irony]].



* The girls gushing over the Protagonist's skills at poetry, considering that in reality they're a mess of randomized words the player picks because they sound like what the girl they want would like when the girls themselves are producing coherent, deep, genuinely good poetry. It's funny when the girls like the Protagonist's poem, and even funnier when they don't - accusing the Protagonist of imitating another girl's style to impress her, which can sound almost like a StealthInsult considering how nonsensical the player's poems turn out. Monika's reactions are particularly funny, because she approves of anything the player "writes" and makes comments like "I was going 'Ooh!' in my head while reading it", which would sound almost sarcastic if it weren't for how sugary-sweet she is. Especially in light of the fact that she is aware that everything's a game and probably reads your poems as the jumbled mess of words they are.
* The player character can doze off while listening to Sayori and Monika have a discussion about what the literature club should do for the festival. Eventually, he will wake up to see Sayori close to his face and get startled. She then rebukes him for staying up late... [[HypocriticalHumor even though she tends to oversleep]].

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* The girls gushing over the Protagonist's skills at poetry, considering that in reality they're a mess of randomized words the player picks because they sound like what the girl they want would like when the girls themselves are producing coherent, deep, genuinely good poetry. It's funny when the girls like the Protagonist's poem, and even funnier when they don't - accusing the Protagonist of imitating another girl's style to impress her, which can sound almost like a StealthInsult considering how nonsensical the player's poems turn out. Monika's reactions are particularly funny, because she approves of anything the player "writes" and makes comments like "I was going 'Ooh!' in my head while reading it", which would sound almost sarcastic if it weren't for how sugary-sweet she is. Especially in light of the fact that because she is aware that everything's a game and probably reads your poems as the jumbled mess of words they are.
* The player character can doze off while listening to Sayori and Monika have a discussion about discuss what the literature club should do for the festival. Eventually, he will wake up to see Sayori close to his face and get startled. She then rebukes him for staying up late... [[HypocriticalHumor even though she tends to oversleep]].



** Further impacting this is that in Act 3, Monika will catch herself talking about Smash, has no idea why she was going to say that, and asks the player to ask her creators why she was going to do that [[note]]though note this was taken out in a patch[[/note]].

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** Further impacting this is that in Act 3, Monika will catch catches herself talking about Smash, has no idea why she was going to say that, and asks the player to ask her creators why she was going to do that [[note]]though that, though note this was taken out in a patch[[/note]].patch.
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* Speaking of the opening discretion notes, while a few of them are cryptic or disconcerting, the others...well;

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* Speaking of the opening discretion notes, while a few of them are cryptic or disconcerting, the others...well;well:



** It gets better: in the three preceding pictures, Natsuki is making chocolate, Sayori is wrapping a gift, and Yuri is writing a card. In Monika's picture, she's feeding the player character [[BreadEggsBreadedEggs chocolate from a gift-wrapped box, with a familiar-looking card on the table,]] giving the impression that she's taking credit for everyone else's gifts.[[note]]Though a closer look at the card reveals it is signed by all four girls, suggesting they were working on this together, and of course if Monika had wanted to take sole credit she wouldn't have posted pictures of the other girls contributing to the gifts. Still, whatever it was the four girls had agreed to do together for Valentine's Day, it clearly ''wasn't'' this.[[/note]]

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** It gets better: in the three preceding pictures, Natsuki is making chocolate, Sayori is wrapping a gift, and Yuri is writing a card. In Monika's picture, she's feeding the player character [[BreadEggsBreadedEggs chocolate from a gift-wrapped box, with a familiar-looking card on the table,]] giving table]]. It may give the impression that she's taking credit for everyone else's gifts.[[note]]Though gifts, but a closer look at the card reveals it is signed by all four girls, suggesting they were working on this together, and of course if Monika had wanted to take sole credit she wouldn't have posted pictures of the other girls contributing to the gifts. together. Still, whatever it was the four girls had agreed to do together for Valentine's Day, it clearly ''wasn't'' this.[[/note]]
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* The physical edition of the updated rerelease comes with {{Feelies}}. One of those is a set of standees of chibi versions of the four main characters... and it features [[TheKlutz Sayori]] slipping on a BananaPeel.

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* The physical edition of the updated rerelease comes with {{Feelies}}. One of those is a set of standees of chibi versions of the four main characters... characters: Monika forming a hand heart while winking at the viewer, Natsuki doing the classic {{tsundere}} gesture of crossing her arms and it features scowling, Yuri sitting on the ground while drinking tea... and [[TheKlutz Sayori]] slipping on a BananaPeel.
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* Monika's EvilGloating during Act 3 almost feels like a ''parody'' of the dangers of villain monologuing, as she not only casually reveals that she deleted the other girls, but proceeds to ''[[WhatAnIdiot explain in full detail how she did it]]''. Right down to mentioning there was a file in the game called "characters".[[note]]Though it's really because she thinks you're on her side and trusts you not to hurt her, so there.[[/note]] You can practically see the EurekaMoment look forming on the Protagonist's face as you prepare to do exactly that to Monika.

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* Monika's EvilGloating during Act 3 almost feels like a ''parody'' of the dangers of villain monologuing, as she not only casually reveals that she deleted the other girls, but proceeds to ''[[WhatAnIdiot explain ''explain in full detail how she did it]]''.it''. Right down to mentioning there was a file in the game called "characters".[[note]]Though it's really because she thinks you're on her side and trusts you not to hurt her, so there.[[/note]] You can practically see the EurekaMoment look forming on the Protagonist's face as you prepare to do exactly that to Monika.
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** Natsuki's exact words are that Yuri's "boobs magically grew two sizes ever since <Protagonist> came", and a {{Fridge}} Moment which makes it even more hilarious is that she ''might'' be '''''[[RightForTheWrongReasons completely right]]''''': remember, Monika had '''full power''' to give Yuri's boobs an "update" upon our arrival.

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** In a bit of fridge funny, Natsuki's exact words are claim that Yuri's "boobs magically boobs "magically grew two sizes ever since <Protagonist> came", and a {{Fridge}} Moment which makes it even more hilarious is that she ''might'' sizes" when the player joined the club could very well be '''''[[RightForTheWrongReasons ''[[RightForTheWrongReasons completely right]]''''': remember, right]]'': since Monika had '''full power''' is shown to give be able to alter the game, it’s entirely possible that she gave Yuri's boobs an "update" upon our the player character’s arrival.
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* If you consider the yellow stains on the poem Yuri "endowed with her scent" to be her pee, you could say she... ''[[{{Pun}} Yurinated]]'' on it.
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** Natsuki's exact words are that Yuri's "boobs magically grew two sizes ever since <Protagonist> came", and a {{Fridge}} Moment which makes it even more hilarious is that she ''might'' be '''''[[RightForTheWrongReasons completely right]]''''': Monika had '''full power''' to give Yuri's boobs an "update" upon our arrival.


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** Natsuki's exact words are that Yuri's "boobs magically grew two sizes ever since <Protagonist> came", and a {{Fridge}} Moment which makes it even more hilarious is that she ''might'' be '''''[[RightForTheWrongReasons completely right]]''''': remember, Monika had '''full power''' to give Yuri's boobs an "update" upon our arrival.
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** Natsuki's exact words are that Yuri's "boobs magically grew two sizes ever since <Protagonist> came", and what makes this a {{Fridge}} moment of Funny is that she ''might'' be '''''[[RightForTheWrongReasons completely right]]''''': Monika had '''full power''' to give Yuri's boobs an "update" upon our arrival.

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** Natsuki's exact words are that Yuri's "boobs magically grew two sizes ever since <Protagonist> came", and what makes this a {{Fridge}} moment of Funny Moment which makes it even more hilarious is that she ''might'' be '''''[[RightForTheWrongReasons completely right]]''''': Monika had '''full power''' to give Yuri's boobs an "update" upon our arrival.
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** Natsuki's exact words are that Yuri's "boobs magically grew two sizes ever since <Protagonist> came", and what makes this a {{Fridge}} moment of Funny is that she ''might'' be '''''[[RightForTheWrongReasons completely right]]''''': Monika had '''full power''' to give Yuri's boobs an "update" upon our arrival.
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** Many players are likely left curious as to what the joke was translated as in Japanese. The answer? It was hit with a [[StylisticSuck bad case of]] LazyTranslation; Natsuki's joke is written out as "Mon-ika (いか)", with Monika instead {{lampshading}} how the joke [[LostInTranslation makes absolutely no sense]] and calls Natsuki out for [[BreakingTheFourthWall making a joke that will give translators a headache]].

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** Many players are likely left curious as to what the joke was translated as in Japanese. The answer? It was hit with a It [[StylisticSuck bad case of]] LazyTranslation; basically wasn't]]; Natsuki's joke is written out as "Mon-ika (いか)", with Monika instead {{lampshading}} how the joke [[LostInTranslation makes absolutely no sense]] and calls Natsuki out for [[BreakingTheFourthWall making a joke that will give translators a headache]].
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** Many players are likely left curious as to what the joke was translated as in Japanese. The answer? It was hit with a [[StylisticSuck bad case of]] LazyTranslation; Natsuki's joke is written out as "Mon-ika (いか)", with Monika instead {{lampshading}} how the joke [[LostInTranslation makes absolutely no sense]] and calls Natsuki out for [[BreakingTheFourthWall making a joke that will give translators a headache]].
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* Monika claims that a joke [[BreakingTheFourthWall "doesn't make sense in translation"]], even when you're playing in the original language ([[{{Animesque}} English]])...

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* The {{Animesque}} style of the game is lampshaded when Natsuki tries to make a pun on fried squid and Monika's name that only works in Japanese (The Japanese word for squid is pronounced as "ika", hence "Mon-ika"). Monika claims points out that a that joke [[BreakingTheFourthWall "doesn't make sense in translation"]], even when you're playing in the original language ([[{{Animesque}} English]])...English]]).
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* In Act 3, it's possible for Monika to discuss the {{Yandere}} trope by name, and how there was one in the game. And it's... Yuri! Monika admits she doesn't understand the appeal, but she "could act scary" if the player wanted her to. [[HypocriticalHumor She doesn't seem to get the irony]].

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* In Act 3, it's possible for Monika to discuss the {{Yandere}} trope by name, and how there was one in the game. And it's... Yuri! game, which she claims to be Yuri. Monika admits she doesn't understand the appeal, but she "could act scary" if the player wanted her to. [[HypocriticalHumor She doesn't seem to get the irony]].
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* At some point in late act 2, a file appears in your game folder simply named "have a nice weekend", which can't be opened and disappears after the scene is over. This counts as CrossesTheLineTwice considering that it foreshadows Yuri's suicide and the consequent scene lasting the entire in-game weekend. As to this, it also doubles as NightmareFuel. (You have to wonder whether "have a nice weekend" is Monika actually trying to program a nice weekend for the player character and failing spectacularly, considering that she seems shocked that she accidentally left the player staring at Yuri's corpse for the entire weekend while glitched text displays on the screen.)

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* At some point in late act 2, a file appears in your game folder simply named "have a nice weekend", which can't be opened and disappears after the scene is over. This counts as CrossesTheLineTwice considering that it foreshadows Yuri's suicide and the consequent scene lasting the entire in-game weekend. As to this, it also doubles as NightmareFuel. (You have to wonder whether "have a nice weekend" is Monika actually trying to program a nice weekend for the player character and [[EpicFail failing spectacularly, spectacularly]], considering that she seems shocked that she accidentally left the player staring at Yuri's corpse for the entire weekend while glitched text displays on the screen.)
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* One of the opening discretion notes you can get is "PM died for this". Dan Salvato, the game's creator, was also involved in ''VideoGame/ProjectM'' and ''Melee 20XX'', both mods of ''VideoGame/SuperSmashBros'' games. Made HilariousInHindsight when one of the consoles the UpdatedRerelease was announced for was the Nintendo Switch.

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* One of the opening discretion notes you can get is "PM died for this". Dan Salvato, the game's creator, was also involved in ''VideoGame/ProjectM'' and ''Melee 20XX'', both mods of ''VideoGame/SuperSmashBros'' games. Made HilariousInHindsight when one of the consoles the UpdatedRerelease was announced for was the Nintendo Switch. Funny enough, the line is still present on said version.

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* Monika's EvilGloating during Act 3 almost feels like a ''parody'' of the dangers of villain monologuing, as she not only casually reveals that she deleted the other girls, but proceeds to ''[[WhatAnIdiot explain in full detail how she did it]]''. Right down to mentioning there was a file in the game called "characters". You can practically see the EurekaMoment look forming on the Protagonist's face as you prepare to do exactly that to Monika.

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* Monika's EvilGloating during Act 3 almost feels like a ''parody'' of the dangers of villain monologuing, as she not only casually reveals that she deleted the other girls, but proceeds to ''[[WhatAnIdiot explain in full detail how she did it]]''. Right down to mentioning there was a file in the game called "characters". [[note]]Though it's really because she thinks you're on her side and trusts you not to hurt her, so there.[[/note]] You can practically see the EurekaMoment look forming on the Protagonist's face as you prepare to do exactly that to Monika.
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* Shortly afterward, Monika's lateness causes the group speculate about her having a boyfriend. When Monika arrives, Sayori promptly declares:

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* Shortly afterward, Monika's lateness causes the group to speculate about her having a boyfriend. When Monika arrives, Sayori promptly declares:

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* Shortly afterward, Monika's lateness causes the group to assume she has a boyfriend. When Monika arrives, Sayori promptly declares:

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* Shortly afterward, Monika's lateness causes the group to assume she has speculate about her having a boyfriend. When Monika arrives, Sayori promptly declares:
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** Which becomes either [[HarsherInHindsight less]] or [[HilariousInHindsight more funny]] in hindsight, depending on your point-of-view, [[DramaticIrony considering how the rest of the game plays out.]]

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** Which becomes either [[HarsherInHindsight less]] less funny]] or [[HilariousInHindsight more funny]] funnier]] in hindsight, depending on your point-of-view, [[DramaticIrony considering how the rest of the game plays out.]]



* At some point in late act 2, a file appears in your game folder simply named "have a nice weekend", which can't be opened and disappears after the scene is over. This counts as CrossesTheLineTwice considering that it foreshadows Yuri's suicide and the consequent scene lasting the entire in-game weekend. As to this, it also doubles as NightmareFuel. (You have to wonder whether "have a nice weekend" is Monika actually trying to program a nice weekend for the player character and failing spectacularly, considering that she seems shocked that she accidentally left the player staring at Yuri's corpse for the entire weekend while glitched text displays on screen.)

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* At some point in late act 2, a file appears in your game folder simply named "have a nice weekend", which can't be opened and disappears after the scene is over. This counts as CrossesTheLineTwice considering that it foreshadows Yuri's suicide and the consequent scene lasting the entire in-game weekend. As to this, it also doubles as NightmareFuel. (You have to wonder whether "have a nice weekend" is Monika actually trying to program a nice weekend for the player character and failing spectacularly, considering that she seems shocked that she accidentally left the player staring at Yuri's corpse for the entire weekend while glitched text displays on the screen.)



* Because of the fact that you [[HelloInsertNameHere get to personally decide the main character's name]] and the fact that the textboxes in the game have no visual identification of whoever is actually speaking beyond the name of the character in question, inputing the name of any of the heroines as your protagonist's name will cause quite some confusion whenever said character appears on screen and has a conversation with the protagonist, often to hilarious results that makes it seem like the character is TalkingToThemself.

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* Because of the fact that you [[HelloInsertNameHere get to personally decide the main character's name]] and the fact that the textboxes in the game have no visual identification of whoever is actually speaking beyond the name of the character in question, inputing inputting the name of any of the heroines as your protagonist's name will cause quite some confusion whenever said character appears on screen and has a conversation with the protagonist, often to hilarious results that makes it seem like the character is TalkingToThemself.



** The player character then points how Sayori is looking out for others more than she looks out for herself. At one point, he points out that her blazer is unbuttoned and does not fit her properly as he tries to button it up. Sayori then remarks that it means her boobs got bigger again, embarrassing the player character.

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** The After this, the player character then points how says that Sayori is looking out for others more than she looks out for herself. At one point, he points herself, pointing out that how haphazardly she is wearing her school uniform. He then tries to button up her blazer is unbuttoned and from bottom to top, noticing that it does not fit her properly as he tries to close the button it up.near her chest. Sayori then remarks that it means her boobs got bigger again, embarrassing the player character.
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** The BlackComedy of the situation is only increased with the release of ''Plus'' and the new system of unlocking artworks in the vein of Achievement systems in other games. One of them involves sitting through the weekend (and thus, Yuri's corpse decaying) without pressing skip. [[RefugeInAudacity Your reward is]] [[LesYay the artwork of Yuri and Monika's sleepover from Twitter in 2018]].


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