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'''Alice:''' Mmhmm! We may be a [[{{Pun}} motley crew]][[labelnote:*]]Note: she is just taking a cassette tape of "[[MotleyCrue Kickstart My Heart]]" out of its box as she says this.[[/labelnote]] but we've got ''days'' of experience with this sort of thing!
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'''Alice:''' Mmhmm! We may be a [[{{Pun}} motley crew]][[labelnote:*]]Note: she is just taking a cassette tape of "[[MotleyCrue "[[Music/MotleyCrue Kickstart My Heart]]" out of its box as she says this.[[/labelnote]] but we've got ''days'' of experience with this sort of thing!
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* [[ http://deadwinter.cc/page/514"Good luck forging this, idiot."]] The look on Monday's face in the last panel is priceless.
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* [[ http://deadwinter.cc/page/514"Good [[http://deadwinter.cc/page/514 "Good luck forging this, idiot."]] The look on Monday's face in the last panel is priceless.
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* Two pages later, [[http://deadwinter.cc/page/476 Alice and Lizzie bobbing their heads while plowing through zombies.]]
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* Two pages later, [[http://deadwinter.cc/page/476 Alice and Lizzie bobbing their heads while plowing through zombies.]]]]
* [[ http://deadwinter.cc/page/514"Good luck forging this, idiot."]] The look on Monday's face in the last panel is priceless.
* [[ http://deadwinter.cc/page/514"Good luck forging this, idiot."]] The look on Monday's face in the last panel is priceless.
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** [[http://deadwinter.cc/page/472 Two pages later, they try to reassure him:]]
-->'''Lizzie:''' Awwh, Pat! Don't think like that! We're gonna be fine! We're pros at this! You're in good hands.\\
'''Alice:''' Mmhmm! We may be a [[{{Pun}} motley crew]][[labelnote:*]]Note: she is just taking a cassette tape of "[[MotleyCrue Kickstart My Heart]]" out of its box as she says this.[[/labelnote]] but we've got ''days'' of experience with this sort of thing!
-->'''Lizzie:''' Awwh, Pat! Don't think like that! We're gonna be fine! We're pros at this! You're in good hands.\\
'''Alice:''' Mmhmm! We may be a [[{{Pun}} motley crew]][[labelnote:*]]Note: she is just taking a cassette tape of "[[MotleyCrue Kickstart My Heart]]" out of its box as she says this.[[/labelnote]] but we've got ''days'' of experience with this sort of thing!
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'''Lizzie:'' Oh, this? No, these aren't battle scars. This was a car accident.\\
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* [[http://deadwinter.cc/page/470 Pat, riding in the backseat of his own car as Lizzie drives, discovers a few things about the folks he's fallen in with.]] Concluding with:
-->'''Pat:''' What? You guys fought the ''army?'' Is that where you got all cut up from?\\
'''Lizzie:'' Oh, this? No, these aren't battle scars. This was a car accident.\\
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-->'''Pat:''' What? You guys fought the ''army?'' Is that where you got all cut up from?\\
'''Lizzie:'' Oh, this? No, these aren't battle scars. This was a car accident.\\
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* Two pages later, [[http://deadwinter.cc/page/476 Alice and Lizze bobbing their heads while plowing through zombies.]]
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* Two pages later, [[http://deadwinter.cc/page/476 Alice and Lizze Lizzie bobbing their heads while plowing through zombies.]]
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* Just a single-panel gag: [[http://deadwinter.cc/page/474 Alice plays air guitar ... on a rifle.]]
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* Just a single-panel gag: [[http://deadwinter.cc/page/474 Alice plays air guitar ... on a rifle.]]
* Two pages later, [[http://deadwinter.cc/page/476 Alice and Lizze bobbing their heads while plowing through zombies.]]
* Two pages later, [[http://deadwinter.cc/page/476 Alice and Lizze bobbing their heads while plowing through zombies.]]
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* Just a single-panel gag: [[http://deadwinter.cc/page/474 Alice plays air guitar ... on a rifle.]]
