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--> '''Charlie''': Augh, what happened? ''(Looks down) Aw, [[spoiler: [[OrganTheft they took my freakin' kidney!]]]]
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--> '''Charlie''': Augh, what happened? ''(Looks down) down)'' Aw, [[spoiler: [[OrganTheft they took my freakin' kidney!]]]]
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--> '''Charlie''': Augh, what happened? *looks down* Augh, [[spoiler: they took my freakin' kidney!]]
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--> '''Charlie''': Augh, what happened? *looks down* Augh, ''(Looks down) Aw, [[spoiler: [[OrganTheft they took my freakin' kidney!]]kidney!]]]]
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--> '''Charlie''': ''(sighing, ''(Sighing, clearly unimpressed)'' The what?
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--> '''Blue''': And if you've ever been witness to a Wackawang attack, you know it's no joke. ''(inexplicably ''(Inexplicably explodes, then comes right back)'' It'll be like that everywhere soon, if we don't stop them!
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--> '''Starfish's Cousin''': Oh my god! Why would you even do that?
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--> '''Starfish's Cousin''': '''starfish's cousin''': Oh my god! Why would you even do that?
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* The utter magnificence of THE DOOR! [[spoiler:nah]].
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* The utter magnificence of THE DOOR! [[spoiler:nah]].[[spoiler:Nah]].
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--> '''Charlie''': (''beat'') ''(beat)'' ''Uh huh.''
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--> '''Pink''': (''beat'') ''(beat)'' He's got another gun!
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--> '''Blue:''': And if you've ever been witness to a Wackawang attack, you know it's no joke. ''(inexplicably explodes, then comes right back)'' It'll be like that everywhere soon, if we don't stop them!
--> '''Charlie:''': I just want you to know before you force me along that I do not believe one single word of this nonsense.
--> '''Blue:''' Even Wackawonk?
--> '''Charlie:''': [[BluntYes Yes. Especially that.]]
--> '''Charlie:''': I just want you to know before you force me along that I do not believe one single word of this nonsense.
--> '''Blue:''' Even Wackawonk?
--> '''Charlie:''': [[BluntYes Yes. Especially that.]]
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--> '''Blue:''': '''Blue''': And if you've ever been witness to a Wackawang attack, you know it's no joke. ''(inexplicably explodes, then comes right back)'' It'll be like that everywhere soon, if we don't stop them!
-->'''Charlie:''': '''Charlie''': I just want you to know before you force me along along, that I do not believe one single word of this nonsense.
-->'''Blue:''' '''Blue''': Even Wackawonk?
-->'''Charlie:''': '''Charlie''': [[BluntYes Yes. Especially that.]]
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* Instead of an elaborate production in Pink and Blue getting Charlie to go wherever they want him to go, this time the trio just get swept up in an a rainbow while Charlie groans. The SmashCut to them already on the road makes it extra funny.
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* When Charlie meets Nyx in Part Four, things in his life are so stupidly outrageous that he does not initially believe that Nyx is being genuine about the severity of the situation.
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--> '''blue unicron''': It was probably ''sexual''!
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--> '''blue unicron''': It was probably ''sexual''!''sexual!''
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* The first episode's song. By now, Charlie knows all the songs are just Pink and Blue messing with him, and the two of them ''know'' he knows, so this time they just make the song passive aggressively call Charlie a buzzkill while he just stands there without engaging at all. They make the [[MadeOfExplodium typical ending]] [[BloodyHilarious extra spooky, though.]]
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* The first episode's song. By now, Charlie knows all the songs are just Pink and Blue messing with him, and the two of them ''know'' he knows, so this time they just make drop the song on him at random and have it passive aggressively call Charlie him a buzzkill while buzzkill, and he just stands there glaring without engaging at all. They make the [[MadeOfExplodium typical ending]] [[BloodyHilarious extra spooky, though.]]
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** Plus the irony that after a whole series of torment Charlie has finally learned not to buy into anything Blue and Pink say, only to be thrown into a ''real'' adventure that he refuses to believe.
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** The whole time, Charlie has his eyes closed like he's having a migrane.
* Plus the irony that after a whole series of torment Charlie has finally learned not to buy into anything Blue and Pink say, only to be thrown into a ''real'' adventure that he refuses to believe.
* Plus the irony that after a whole series of torment Charlie has finally learned not to buy into anything Blue and Pink say, only to be thrown into a ''real'' adventure that he refuses to believe.
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* The first episode's song. By now, Charlie knows all the songs are just Pink and Blue messing with him, and the two of them ''know'' he knows, so this time they just make the song passive aggressively call Charlie a buzzkill while he just stands there without engaging at all. They make the [[MadeOfExplodium typical ending]] [[BloodyGoodTime extra spooky, though.]]
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* The first episode's song. By now, Charlie knows all the songs are just Pink and Blue messing with him, and the two of them ''know'' he knows, so this time they just make the song passive aggressively call Charlie a buzzkill while he just stands there without engaging at all. They make the [[MadeOfExplodium typical ending]] [[BloodyGoodTime [[BloodyHilarious extra spooky, though.]]
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* The Order of Tutelary Weasels are hilariously neurotic about everything, constantly complaining about Nyx inconveniencing them for happening to make a request at night, [[HypocriticalHumor while forcing him to repeatedly stand out in the rain.]] When he points out that he could just come back later, they reply that suggesting it just insults them further.
* Norwell (and presumably the rest of the weasels) never went into the catacombs beneath the tower... because he once saw an "upsetting looking bat" down there and ran away. Nyx, meanwhile, just walks past it.
* Blue and Pink make zero effort to give an accurate name to the SealedEvilInACan, and clearly just start making things up for kicks.
--> '''Blue''': The Wabbawongol has been released!
--> '''Pink''': Nooooo! Not the Wabbawonk!
--> '''Blue''': Yes, the mighty Wabwak, back again.
--> '''Charlie''': ''(sighing, clearly unimpressed)'' The what?
--> '''Pink''': The Wakwonk, it's coming for us all.
--> '''Blue:''': And if you've ever been witness to a Wackawang attack, you know it's no joke. ''(inexplicably explodes, then comes right back)'' It'll be like that everywhere soon, if we don't stop them!
--> '''Charlie:''': I just want you to know before you force me along that I do not believe one single word of this nonsense.
--> '''Blue:''' Even Wackawonk?
--> '''Charlie:''': [[BluntYes Yes. Especially that.]]
** Plus the irony that after a whole series of torment Charlie has finally learned not to buy into anything Blue and Pink say, only to be thrown into a ''real'' adventure that he refuses to believe.
* Instead of an elaborate production in Pink and Blue getting Charlie to go wherever they want him to go, this time the trio just get swept up in an rainbow while Charlie groans. The SmashCut to them already on the road makes it extra funny.
* The first episode's song. By now, Charlie knows all the songs are just Pink and Blue messing with him, and the two of them ''know'' he knows, so this time they just make the song passive aggressively call Charlie a buzzkill while he just stands there without engaging at all. They make the [[MadeOfExplodium typical ending]] [[BloodyGoodTime extra spooky, though.]]
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* The Order of Tutelary Weasels are hilariously neurotic about everything, constantly complaining about Nyx inconveniencing them for happening to make a request at night, [[HypocriticalHumor while forcing him to repeatedly stand out in the rain.]] When he points out that he could just come back later, they reply that suggesting it just insults them further.
* Norwell (and presumably the rest of the weasels) never went into the catacombs beneath the tower... because he once saw an "upsetting looking bat" down there and ran away. Nyx, meanwhile, just walks past it.
* Blue and Pink make zero effort to give an accurate name to the SealedEvilInACan, and clearly just start making things up for kicks.
--> '''Blue''': The Wabbawongol has been released!
--> '''Pink''': Nooooo! Not the Wabbawonk!
--> '''Blue''': Yes, the mighty Wabwak, back again.
--> '''Charlie''': ''(sighing, clearly unimpressed)'' The what?
--> '''Pink''': The Wakwonk, it's coming for us all.
--> '''Blue:''': And if you've ever been witness to a Wackawang attack, you know it's no joke. ''(inexplicably explodes, then comes right back)'' It'll be like that everywhere soon, if we don't stop them!
--> '''Charlie:''': I just want you to know before you force me along that I do not believe one single word of this nonsense.
--> '''Blue:''' Even Wackawonk?
--> '''Charlie:''': [[BluntYes Yes. Especially that.]]
** Plus the irony that after a whole series of torment Charlie has finally learned not to buy into anything Blue and Pink say, only to be thrown into a ''real'' adventure that he refuses to believe.
* Instead of an elaborate production in Pink and Blue getting Charlie to go wherever they want him to go, this time the trio just get swept up in an rainbow while Charlie groans. The SmashCut to them already on the road makes it extra funny.
* The first episode's song. By now, Charlie knows all the songs are just Pink and Blue messing with him, and the two of them ''know'' he knows, so this time they just make the song passive aggressively call Charlie a buzzkill while he just stands there without engaging at all. They make the [[MadeOfExplodium typical ending]] [[BloodyGoodTime extra spooky, though.]]
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--> '''Blur''': ...'''Blue''': ...We're on a bridge, Charlie!
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--> '''Pink''': The Door!
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--> '''Pink''': The Th-The Door!
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* The utter magnificence of THE DOOR! [[spoiler:nah]].
--> '''Pink''': To get to the snowman, we first need to pass... The Door.
--> '''Blue''': ''The Door!''
--> '''Charlie''': The door?
--> '''Pink''': The Door!
--> '''Charlie''': [[FlatWhat What is the door?]]
--> '''Blue''': [[MundaneMadeAwesome The Door is everything!]]
--> '''Pink''': [[SeriousBusiness All that once was and all that will be!]]
--> '''Blue''': [[HammyHerald The Door controls time and space!]]
--> '''Pink''': [[ComicalOverreacting Love and death!]]
--> '''Blue''': [[SuddenlyShouting THE DOOR CAN SEE INTO YOUR MIND!]]
--> '''Pink''': [[ChewingTheScenery THE DOOR CAN SEE INTO YOUR SOUL!]]
--> '''Charlie''': [[NotSoStoic Really? Th... The Door can do all that?]]
--> '''Pink''': [[spoiler:[[AntiClimax Heh, no.]]]]
--> '''Pink''': To get to the snowman, we first need to pass... The Door.
--> '''Blue''': ''The Door!''
--> '''Charlie''': The door?
--> '''Pink''': The Door!
--> '''Charlie''': [[FlatWhat What is the door?]]
--> '''Blue''': [[MundaneMadeAwesome The Door is everything!]]
--> '''Pink''': [[SeriousBusiness All that once was and all that will be!]]
--> '''Blue''': [[HammyHerald The Door controls time and space!]]
--> '''Pink''': [[ComicalOverreacting Love and death!]]
--> '''Blue''': [[SuddenlyShouting THE DOOR CAN SEE INTO YOUR MIND!]]
--> '''Pink''': [[ChewingTheScenery THE DOOR CAN SEE INTO YOUR SOUL!]]
--> '''Charlie''': [[NotSoStoic Really? Th... The Door can do all that?]]
--> '''Pink''': [[spoiler:[[AntiClimax Heh, no.]]]]
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* The Millipede [[RunningGag exploding after its musical number]]:
-->'''Blue''': You did it, Charlie! You defeated the Millipede!
-->'''Charlie''': It just exploded! ''[[LampshadeHanging LIKE EVERYTHING DOES WHEN IT SINGS TO ME!!!]]''
-->'''Blue''': You did it, Charlie! You defeated the Millipede!
-->'''Charlie''': It just exploded! ''[[LampshadeHanging LIKE EVERYTHING DOES WHEN IT SINGS TO ME!!!]]''
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* The ending:[[SignatureScene The]] [[MoodWhiplash ending]]:
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--> '''Charlie''': I gotta be honest, I'm getting freaked out here!
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--> '''Charlie''': I gotta be honest, I'm getting freaked out here! here! Somebody say something!
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* Charlie's reaction to seeing the Banana King:
--> '''Charlie''': What is that?
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--> '''Charlie''': No, no really. You guys see it, right?
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--> '''Charlie''': I gotta be honest, I'm getting freaked out here!
--> '''Charlie''': What is that?
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* Quickly! Grab onto our tongues! *Blegh!*
--> '''Charlie''': Ohhh, that is so gross...
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--> '''Blue''': Glub, glub! Glub, glub! Glub, glub! Glub, glub! Glub, glub! Look over there! It's coral reef!
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--> '''Blue''': Glub, glub! Glub, glub! Glub, glub! Glub, glub! Glub, glub! Look over there! It's a coral reef!
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* "Oh, of course, it exploded. Like ''everything'' does when it sings to me!"burst into flames..."
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--> '''Charlie''': I don't understand how you do these things.things!
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*When Charlie has a "bug" on his face.
--> '''Blue''': This is the police. We have you surrounded, Mr. Bug.''
--> '''Charlie''': (''beat'') ''Uh huh.''
--> '''Pink''': Taser him!
--> ''zap''
--> '''Pink''': He's resisting arrest!
--> ''zap''
--> '''Pink''': He's got a gun!
--> ''zap''
--> '''Pink''': (''beat'') He's got another gun!
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--> '''Blue''': This is the police. We have you surrounded, Mr. Bug.''
--> '''Charlie''': (''beat'') ''Uh huh.''
--> '''Pink''': Taser him!
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--> '''Pink''': He's resisting arrest!
--> ''zap''
--> '''Pink''': He's got a gun!
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--> '''Pink''': (''beat'') He's got another gun!
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*In regards to charlie "killing" starfish.
--> '''Starfish's Cousin''': Oh my god! Why would you even do that?
--> '''blue unicron''': It was probably ''sexual''!
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*In regards to charlie "killing" starfish.
--> '''Starfish's Cousin''': Oh my god! Why would you even do that?
--> '''blue unicron''': It was probably ''sexual''!
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--> '''Blue''': Oh my god, that would be amazing! ''The screen flips upside down and Charlie floats towards the moon.'''
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--> '''Blue''': Oh my god, that would be amazing! ''The screen flips upside down and Charlie floats towards the moon.'''''
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*After Blue and Pink tell Charlie about the millipede:
--> '''Charlie''': It's obvious I have no actual choice here. How about we save some time and go to the freakin' moon?
--> '''Blue''': Oh my god, that would be amazing! ''The screen flips upside down and Charlie floats towards the moon.'''
--> '''Charlie''': I don't understand how you do these things.
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*After Blue and Pink tell Charlie about the millipede:
--> '''Charlie''': It's obvious I have no actual choice here. How about we save some time and go to the freakin' moon?
--> '''Blue''': Oh my god, that would be amazing! ''The screen flips upside down and Charlie floats towards the moon.'''
--> '''Charlie''': I don't understand how you do these things.
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* Blue and Pink scuba diving ''in the air''.
--> '''Blue''': Glub, glub! Glub, glub! Glub, glub! Glub, glub! Glub, glub! Look over there! It's coral reef!
--> '''Charlie''': Ah, look, it's you guys! ...And you're floating.
--> '''Blue''': Charlie, we're scuba diving, Charlie!
--> '''Pink''': We're exploring the depths of the ocean blue!
--> '''Blue''': Oh no! Here comes a school of poisonous fugu fish!
--> '''Pink''': NOOOO! FUGU!
* And seconds later:
--> '''Blue''': Charlie, we're being pulled into the vortex!
--> '''Pink''': Swim away, fugu fish! Swim away!
* Charlie's confusion over the other unicorns' genders:
--> '''Charlie''': Guys? Guys? ...Or girls! I'm really not sure what you two are.
* Blue returning from the vortex:
--> '''Blue''': Charlie, I have the amulet!
--> '''Charlie''': What amulet, what's going on?!
--> '''Blue''': The ''amulet'', Charlie! ''The magical amulet''! Sparkle, sparkle!
--> '''Pink''': Sp-Sparkle!!
--> '''Blue''': Glub, glub! Glub, glub! Glub, glub! Glub, glub! Glub, glub! Look over there! It's coral reef!
--> '''Charlie''': Ah, look, it's you guys! ...And you're floating.
--> '''Blue''': Charlie, we're scuba diving, Charlie!
--> '''Pink''': We're exploring the depths of the ocean blue!
--> '''Blue''': Oh no! Here comes a school of poisonous fugu fish!
--> '''Pink''': NOOOO! FUGU!
* And seconds later:
--> '''Blue''': Charlie, we're being pulled into the vortex!
--> '''Pink''': Swim away, fugu fish! Swim away!
* Charlie's confusion over the other unicorns' genders:
--> '''Charlie''': Guys? Guys? ...Or girls! I'm really not sure what you two are.
* Blue returning from the vortex:
--> '''Blue''': Charlie, I have the amulet!
--> '''Charlie''': What amulet, what's going on?!
--> '''Blue''': The ''amulet'', Charlie! ''The magical amulet''! Sparkle, sparkle!
--> '''Pink''': Sp-Sparkle!!
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* The entire bridge scene:
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--> '''Charlie''': Augh, what happened? *looks down* Augh, [[spoiler: they took my freakin' kidney!]]
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--> '''Charlie''': Augh, what happened? *looks down* Augh, [[spoiler: they took my freakin' kidney!]]
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--> (*{{Beat}}*)
--> '''Blur''': ...We'reon
* "We'reon a bridge, Charlie!"Charlie!
* The Candy Mountain letters [spoiler: spontaneously exploding]] after their song.
--> '''Charlie''': Alright, fine! I'll go into the freakin' candy cave!
--> '''Blur''': ...We're
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* The Candy Mountain letters [spoiler: spontaneously exploding]] after their song.
--> '''Charlie''': Alright, fine! I'll go into the freakin' candy cave!
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--> '''Charlie''': Alright, guys, you do know that there's no ''actual'' Candy Mountain, right?
--> '''Blue''': Shun the non-believer!'
--> '''Pink''': Shuuuuuun!
--> '''Blue''': Shhhhhhhhuuuuuuuuuuuu-nah.
--> '''Blue''': Charlie! Chaaaarlie! Chaarlie! Chaa-
--> '''Charlie''': I'm right here, what do you want?!
--> '''Blur''': ...We're on
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* "Oh, of course, it exploded. Like ''everything'' does when it sings to me!"
* "We're on a bridge, Charlie!"
* "Oh, of course, it exploded. Like ''everything'' does when it sings to me!"
