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* In Chapter 3 when Kazuki is cornered by Axel who tries to intimidate him into joining his squad.
---> '''Axel:''' The name's Axel Amsel. I've been sensing an immense power coming for you and my people want it.
---> '''Kazuki:''' Y-your people?
---> '''Axel:''' ((leans in) Join my cheer squad and we can help bring out that dormant ability.
---> '''Kazuki:''' (freezes) Say what now?
---> '''Axel:''' The name's Axel Amsel. I've been sensing an immense power coming for you and my people want it.
---> '''Kazuki:''' Y-your people?
---> '''Axel:''' ((leans in) Join my cheer squad and we can help bring out that dormant ability.
---> '''Kazuki:''' (freezes) Say what now?
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* In Chapter 3 when 3, Axel corners Kazuki is cornered by Axel who and tries to intimidate him into joining his squad.
---> '''Axel:''' The name's Axel Amsel. I've been sensing an immense power coming for you and my people wantit.
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'''Kazuki:''' Y-yourpeople?
--->people?\\
'''Axel:'''((leans in) ''(leans in)'' Join my cheer squad and we can help bring out that dormant ability.
--->ability.\\
'''Kazuki:'''(freezes) ''(freezes)'' Say what now?
now?
---> '''Axel:''' The name's Axel Amsel. I've been sensing an immense power coming for you and my people want
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* Sherbet's eardrums being shattered by [[NoIndoorVoice Mitzy and Roxy's screaming]] in chapters four and six.
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* At the end of Kazuki and Axel's fight in Chapter 4, when the twins leave the human off with a warning that they won’t take such an embarrassing loss lightly. The injured Axel tenses up at the embarrassing part followed by the great spectacle of Axel [[BloodFromTheMouth vomiting blood]] and the twins crying out in horror before vanishing.
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* At the end of Kazuki and Axel's fight in Chapter 4, when the twins leave the human off with a warning that they won’t take such an embarrassing loss lightly. The This causes Axel to be further injured Axel tenses up at the embarrassing part followed by the great with his pride being hit and a huge spectacle of follows with Axel [[BloodFromTheMouth vomiting blood]] and as well as the twins crying out in horror before vanishing.
the three finally vanish.
