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** And in retaliation to above, Illya goes all [[LightNovel/ACertainMagicalIndex Index]] and [[ManBitesMan bites Rin's head]] like a lamprey on a salmon, complete with ''chainsaw'' sound effects.
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** And in retaliation to above, Illya goes all [[LightNovel/ACertainMagicalIndex [[Literature/ACertainMagicalIndex Index]] and [[ManBitesMan bites Rin's head]] like a lamprey on a salmon, complete with ''chainsaw'' sound effects.
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** Cue Kohaku facing obstacles like [[InvisibleBlock Invisible Coin Blocks]], replaying fighting scenes from Tsukihime, [[VisualNovel/FateStayNight Unlimited Blade Works]] and [[LightNovel/FateZero Fate/Zero]], to tell Akiha that Koha-Ace is animated only to realize that she used up the entire budget in the action scenes and Saber's fee just now.
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** Cue Kohaku facing obstacles like [[InvisibleBlock Invisible Coin Blocks]], replaying fighting scenes from Tsukihime, [[VisualNovel/FateStayNight Unlimited Blade Works]] and [[LightNovel/FateZero [[Literature/FateZero Fate/Zero]], to tell Akiha that Koha-Ace is animated only to realize that she used up the entire budget in the action scenes and Saber's fee just now.
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* Phantasmoon Season 2's preview: Akiha Vermillion's final message written in blood after she's stabbed in the back. What clue does she give to everyone in order to identify her murderer? "[[ACupAngst Giant]] [[GagBoobs boobs]]."
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* Phantasmoon Season 2's preview: Akiha Vermillion's final message written in blood after she's stabbed in the back. What clue does she give to everyone in order to identify her murderer? "[[ACupAngst Giant]] [[GagBoobs [[BuxomBeautyStandard boobs]]."
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** Archer's comment near the end sealed the deal: he reminded Rin that Shirou had told her ''exactly'' what to do when he asked her to record a show, and that she was needlessly complicating things. Of course Rin wasn't too happy about it and kicking him out of the house.
** In the end... [[EpicFail She still manages to screw it up]] (Mostly by pressing random buttons), although at least she ended up recording something.
** In the end... [[EpicFail She still manages to screw it up]] (Mostly by pressing random buttons), although at least she ended up recording something.
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** Rin treats the task with the utmost seriousness, repeating Shirou's instructions over and over and trembling as if she's walking into a boss battle.
** When Archer pops in as Rin is freaking out over not recognizing the Blu-ray Recorder, she, [[{{Tsundere}} in true Rin fashion]], blushes like mad and starts rapid-fire kicking him.
** She later has an ImagineSpot of the possibility that one of Shirou's [=DVDs=] could be porn, imagining herself blushing and freaking out even more than she already is at her own idea of what Shirou might be into, before awkwardly asking a confused Archer which one she should record over.
---> '''Imagination!Rin''': I didn't know Shirou-kun liked S&M stuff!
** Archer's comment near the end sealed the deal: he reminded Rin that Shirou had told her ''exactly'' what to do when he asked her to record a show, and that she was needlessly complicating things. Of course Rin wasn't too happy about it andkicking kicked him out of the house.
** In the end... [[EpicFail She still manages to screw it up]] (Mostly by pressing randombuttons), buttons) and recorded some sort of MagicalGirl anime, although at least she ended up recording something.
** When Archer pops in as Rin is freaking out over not recognizing the Blu-ray Recorder, she, [[{{Tsundere}} in true Rin fashion]], blushes like mad and starts rapid-fire kicking him.
** She later has an ImagineSpot of the possibility that one of Shirou's [=DVDs=] could be porn, imagining herself blushing and freaking out even more than she already is at her own idea of what Shirou might be into, before awkwardly asking a confused Archer which one she should record over.
---> '''Imagination!Rin''': I didn't know Shirou-kun liked S&M stuff!
** Archer's comment near the end sealed the deal: he reminded Rin that Shirou had told her ''exactly'' what to do when he asked her to record a show, and that she was needlessly complicating things. Of course Rin wasn't too happy about it and
** In the end... [[EpicFail She still manages to screw it up]] (Mostly by pressing random
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* "Berser-Car!"
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* Caster and Souichirou just straight up abandon the race once they enter town, since they already have their wish fulfilled since Episode 7 and are on their way to their honeymoon, with Archer remarking they are already winners.
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** When he reaches the store, it's closed. Berserker furiously beats the security gate with Lancer before leveling the neighborhood, obliviously defeating Saber.
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** When he reaches the store, it's closed. Berserker furiously beats the security gate with Lancer before leveling the neighborhood, obliviously defeating Saber. There is also the shop owner's note that states why its closed.
--> '''Shop Owner's Note:''' "I'm really just doing this 'cuz I feel like it. We're taking a break from the 15th to the 16th."
--> '''Shop Owner's Note:''' "I'm really just doing this 'cuz I feel like it. We're taking a break from the 15th to the 16th."
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dewicking Knife Nut per TRS
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** In episode 12, Kotomine complains to Grail-kun that Lancer is useless because he keeps dying. Grail-kun's solution is to give him a "[[KnifeNut Servant Strengthening Device]]".
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** In episode 12, Kotomine complains to Grail-kun that Lancer is useless because he keeps dying. Grail-kun's solution is to give him a "[[KnifeNut Servant "Servant Strengthening Device]]".Device". (It's just a knife)
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** When Gilgamesh starts becoming submissive to the now domineering Saber, Rin snarks that [[BastardGirlfriend this must be Gilgamesh's type.]]
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** When Gilgamesh starts becoming submissive to the now domineering Saber, Rin snarks that [[BastardGirlfriend [[FetishizedAbuser this must be Gilgamesh's type.]]
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--->'''Caster''': What did you say!? You just don't understand the charm of mature and sexy women, you lolicon doll!
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'''Caster''': What did you say!? You just don't understand the charm of mature and sexy women, you lolicon doll!
'''Illya''': Shut up! All Japanese are lolicons!
'''Illya''': Shut up! All Japanese are lolicons!
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-->'''Archer''': In other words, we're doing things like usual...
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-->'''Rin:''' Are you a middle-aged man complaining about his job?
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-->'''Grail-kun:''' You should just kill him and forge a contract with another Servant.
-->'''Kotomine:''' ''[as he pulls the knife out of the floor]'' You're right.
-->'''Kotomine:''' ''[as he pulls the knife out of the floor]'' You're right.
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-->'''Kotomine:'''
'''Kotomine:''' ''[as he pulls the knife out of the floor]'' You're right.
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--> '''Shirou''': I couldn't fix the rocket.
--> '''Shiki''': Eh?
--> '''Shiki''': Eh?
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'''Shiki''': Eh?
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** After her introduction in school, Shiki drags her out to the field and ask how she did it. However when she was seens dozing off Shiki says [[GratuitousEnglish "Are you sleeping?!"]]. He even makes a LampshadeHanging on why she's using a clichéd scene of a pretty girl transferring to his school.
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** After her introduction in school, Shiki drags her out to the field and ask how she did it. However when she was seens dozing off off, Shiki says [[GratuitousEnglish "Are you sleeping?!"]]. He even makes a LampshadeHanging on why she's using a clichéd scene of a pretty girl transferring to his school.
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* The Second skit is also no slouch as Rin and Illya tries to fight over the sleeping Shirou.
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* The Second skit is also no slouch as Rin and Illya tries try to fight over the sleeping Shirou.
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--> '''Saber:''' ''*Looks up and down the hall before easing herself down*'' ...Quietly...
--> '''Rin:''' ''*Directly behind her*'' And what might you be doing?
--> '''Saber:''' ''*Squeaks and shoots up*'' Ri--!!
--> '''Rin:''' Nope, stay quiet. ''*Saber shuts down and fumbles around for an explanation*''
--> '''Rin:''' ''*Directly behind her*'' And what might you be doing?
--> '''Saber:''' ''*Squeaks and shoots up*'' Ri--!!
--> '''Rin:''' Nope, stay quiet. ''*Saber shuts down and fumbles around for an explanation*''
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'''Rin:''' ''*Directly behind her*'' And what might you be
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'''Saber:''' ''*Squeaks and shoots up*''
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'''Rin:''' Nope, stay quiet. ''*Saber shuts down and fumbles around for an explanation*''
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--->'''Arcueid:''' A rubber man!
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-->'''Saber Alter:''' I'm a [[ElegantGothicLolita cute gothic-lolita]] [[{{Meido}} maid]]-[[FanserviceWithASmile waitress]], ''sir''!
-->'''Gilgamesh (completely cowed by her exercise of forcefully charismatic authority):''' Uh... I'm sorry.
-->'''Gilgamesh (completely cowed by her exercise of forcefully charismatic authority):''' Uh... I'm sorry.
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-->'''Saber Alter:''' I'm a [[ElegantGothicLolita cute gothic-lolita]] [[{{Meido}} maid]]-[[FanserviceWithASmile waitress]], ''sir''!
-->'''Gilgamesh''sir''!\\
'''Gilgamesh (completely cowed by her exercise of forcefully charismatic authority):''' Uh... I'm sorry.
-->'''Gilgamesh
'''Gilgamesh (completely cowed by her exercise of forcefully charismatic authority):''' Uh... I'm sorry.
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-->'''Rin''': That is sad in more ways than one...
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--> "The mouth is the source of disaster!"
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--> '''Kohaku''': Now there's two of me! :D
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--> '''Archer''': [[ShoutOut Oh my god]]! [[WesternAnimation/SouthPark They killed Lancer]]!
--> '''Taiga''': [[TheyKilledKennyAgain You bastards!]].
--> '''Taiga''': [[TheyKilledKennyAgain You bastards!]].
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'''Taiga''': [[TheyKilledKennyAgain You bastards!]].
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---> '''Arcueid:''' What an asshole! He's going to get killed for sure! Right Shiki?
---> '''Shiki:''' Y-Yeah.
---> '''Shiki:''' Y-Yeah.
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'''Shiki:''' Y-Yeah.
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-->'''Illya''': I won't lose to the King of Hungry!
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-->'''Illya''': Mature women have no value these days!
-->'''Caster''': What did you say!? You just don't understand the charm of mature and sexy women, you lolicon doll!
-->'''Illya''': Shut up! All Japanese are lolicons!
-->'''Caster''': What did you say!? You just don't understand the charm of mature and sexy women, you lolicon doll!
-->'''Illya''': Shut up! All Japanese are lolicons!
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-->'''Caster''':
'''Caster''': What did you say!? You just don't understand the charm of mature and sexy women, you lolicon doll!
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-->'''Ko-Gil''': Oh no! Something's awakening inside her!
-->'''Lancer''': Stop her! Stop our Master!
-->'''Lancer''': Stop her! Stop our Master!
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-->'''Lancer''':
'''Lancer''': Stop her! Stop our Master!
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* And then, she needs a pig to prepare her okonomiyaki. Her solution? ''Mugging Nrvnqsr Chaos for the pig among his beasts''.
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* And then, she needs a pig to prepare her okonomiyaki. Her solution? ''Mugging Nrvnqsr Chaos ''[[CurbStompBattle Mugging]] [[TheDreaded Nrvnqsr]] [[HumanoidAbomination Chaos]] for the pig among his beasts''.
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** Made doubly funny simply by [[RapeAsComedy Nrvnqsr's expressions]] during the whole mugging.
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** Made doubly funny simply by [[RapeAsComedy Nrvnqsr's [[TheDreaded Nrvnqsr's]] [[OhCrap expressions]] during the whole mugging.
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** The fact that when Saber returns home, she returns to normal at the drop of a hat [[CantActPervertedTowardALoveInterest as soon as Shirou welcomes her home,]] capped off by her ahoge popping back out with a deflated little squeak.
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** The fact that when Saber returns home, she returns to normal at the drop of a hat [[CantActPervertedTowardALoveInterest as soon as Shirou welcomes her home,]] capped off by her [[DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything ahoge popping back out with a deflated little squeak.squeak]].
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* Rider's various methods at keeping Shinji from further abusing Sakura by "accidentally" hurting him, along with some of her excuses such as having an "Airhead" skill.
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* Rider's various methods at keeping Shinji from further abusing Sakura by "accidentally" hurting him, along with some of her excuses such as having an "Airhead" skill. And then there's the one where she distracts Shinji by ''flashing him''.