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* The dinner aftermath of [[spoiler:Hoichi and Akane making love]] is packed with this. [[spoiler:Even aside from Akane's, uh, announcement, the handles to the dining room doors ''form a halo above Akane's head'' [[DidYouJustHaveSex in a completely hilarious manner]]. And Hoichi's OhCrap face belongs on a coffee mug. And then [[OverprotectiveDad Akane's Dad]] [[AngerBornOfWorry punches Hoichi]] [[MoodWhiplash right in the face...]]]]
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* The dinner aftermath of [[spoiler:Hoichi and Akane making love]] is packed with this. [[spoiler:Even aside from Akane's, uh, announcement, the handles to the dining room doors ''form a halo above Akane's head'' [[DidYouJustHaveSex in a completely hilarious manner]]. And Hoichi's OhCrap face belongs on a coffee mug. And then [[OverprotectiveDad [[BoyfriendBlockingDad Akane's Dad]] [[AngerBornOfWorry punches Hoichi]] [[MoodWhiplash right in the face...]]]]
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** At the start: "'''IMMORAL JUVENILE FRATERNIZATION IS STRICTLY ''FORBIDDEN'', DAMMIT!'''"[[note]]Spoilers - [[spoiler:This one ''really'' gets funny later on.]][[/note]]
** "My chest is a mass reservoir, you see, [[LampshadeHanging not merely an exaggerated secondary sexual characteristic]]."
** "Hoichi! My boy! How I've waited for this d-" "'''Gun Set!'''" "... A manly hug would've sufficed."
** The Riofaldian guard [[BringMyBrownPants peeing herself]] in Chapter 14. Man, what a puddle...
** The dinner aftermath of [[spoiler:Hoichi and Akane making love]] is packed with this. [[spoiler:Even aside from Akane's, uh, announcement, the handles to the dining room doors ''form a halo above Akane's head'' [[DidYouJustHaveSex in a completely hilarious manner]]. And Hoichi's OhCrap face belongs on a coffee mug. And then [[OverprotectiveDad Akane's Dad]] [[AngerBornOfWorry punches Hoichi]] [[MoodWhiplash right in the face...]]]]
** "Real journalists [[{{Squee}} don't gush like that]], Akane." That entire sequence, full stop.
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** "My chest is a mass reservoir, you see, [[LampshadeHanging not merely an exaggerated secondary sexual characteristic]]."
** "Hoichi! My boy! How I've waited for this d-" "'''Gun Set!'''" "... A manly hug would've sufficed."
** The Riofaldian guard [[BringMyBrownPants peeing herself]] in Chapter 14. Man, what a puddle...
** The dinner aftermath of [[spoiler:Hoichi and Akane making love]] is packed with this. [[spoiler:Even aside from Akane's, uh, announcement, the handles to the dining room doors ''form a halo above Akane's head'' [[DidYouJustHaveSex in a completely hilarious manner]]. And Hoichi's OhCrap face belongs on a coffee mug. And then [[OverprotectiveDad Akane's Dad]] [[AngerBornOfWorry punches Hoichi]] [[MoodWhiplash right in the face...]]]]
** "Real journalists [[{{Squee}} don't gush like that]], Akane." That entire sequence, full stop.
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** The dinner aftermath of [[spoiler:Hoichi and Akane making love]] is packed with this. [[spoiler:Even aside from Akane's, uh, announcement, the handles to the dining room doors ''form a halo above Akane's head'' [[DidYouJustHaveSex in a completely hilarious manner]]. And Hoichi's OhCrap face belongs on a coffee mug.]]
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** The Riofaldian guard [[BringMyBrownPants peeing herself]] in Chapter 14. Man, what a puddle...
** The dinner aftermath of [[spoiler:Hoichi and Akane making love]] is packed with this. [[spoiler:Even aside from Akane's, uh, announcement, the handles to the dining room doors ''form a halo above Akane's head'' [[DidYouJustHaveSex in a completely hilarious manner]]. And Hoichi's OhCrap face belongs on a coffee mug.]] And then [[OverprotectiveDad Akane's Dad]] [[AngerBornOfWorry punches Hoichi]] [[MoodWhiplash right in the face...]]]]
** The dinner aftermath of [[spoiler:Hoichi and Akane making love]] is packed with this. [[spoiler:Even aside from Akane's, uh, announcement, the handles to the dining room doors ''form a halo above Akane's head'' [[DidYouJustHaveSex in a completely hilarious manner]]. And Hoichi's OhCrap face belongs on a coffee mug.
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** At the start: "'''IMMORAL JUVENILE FRATERNIZATION IS STRICTLY ''FORBIDDEN'', DAMMIT!'''"[[hottip:* :Spoilers DAMMIT!'''"[[note]]Spoilers - [[spoiler:This one ''really'' gets funny later on.]]]][[/note]]
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** At the start: "'''IMMORAL JUVENILE FRATERNIZATION IS STRICTLY ''FORBIDDEN'', DAMMIT!'''"[[hottip:* :Spoilers - [[spoiler:This one ''really'' gets funny later on.]] ]]
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** At the start, though: "'''IMMORAL JUVENILE FRATERNIZATION IS STRICTLY ''FORBIDDEN'', DAMMIT!'''"[[hottip:* :Spoilers - [[spoiler:This one ''really'' gets funny later on.]]]]
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** At the start, though: start: "'''IMMORAL JUVENILE FRATERNIZATION IS STRICTLY ''FORBIDDEN'', DAMMIT!'''"[[hottip:* :Spoilers - [[spoiler:This one ''really'' gets funny later on.]]]]