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* Ironhide pretending to be a possessed car in order to scare Jennifer, who is babysitting Annabelle. At the end of the story, he reveals that he got the idea from [[Film/{{Transformers}} Bumblebee]].
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* Ironhide pretending to be a possessed car in order to scare Jennifer, who is babysitting Annabelle. At the end of the story, he reveals that he got the idea from [[Film/{{Transformers}} [[Film/TransformersFilmSeries Bumblebee]].
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** Not to mention him remembering his own experiences as a teenager [[Film/{{Transformers}} such as chasing after a "possessed" Camaro, running through a war-torn Mission City, and attacking Megatron]]. He wonders if survival instincts go to a long slumber during the teenage years.
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** Not to mention him remembering his own experiences as a teenager [[Film/{{Transformers}} [[Film/Transformers2007 such as chasing after a "possessed" Camaro, running through a war-torn Mission City, and attacking Megatron]]. He wonders if survival instincts go to a long slumber during the teenage years.
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* [[BloodKnight Ironhide]] surprisingly supports Sarah Lennox in that children should not engage in violence after Annabelle punches [[TheBully Carl]], [[MoodWhiplash but then:]]
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* [[BloodKnight Ironhide]] surprisingly supports Sarah Lennox in that children should not engage in violence after Annabelle punches [[TheBully Carl]], [[MoodWhiplash but then:]]then...]]
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* In Chapter 6, Mikaela and Sam go to NEST HQ to try to give them secret information. Mearing is not happy about them being here because they are not authorized. Mikaela and Sam quickly get tired with her behavior. Also qualifies as SugarWiki/MomentOfAwesome and SugarWiki/HeartwarmingMoments for Mikaela standing up for her boyfriend.
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* In Chapter 6, Mikaela and Sam go to NEST HQ to try to give them secret information. Mearing is not happy about them being here because they are not authorized. Mikaela and Sam quickly get tired with her behavior. Also qualifies as a SugarWiki/MomentOfAwesome and SugarWiki/HeartwarmingMoments a {{SugarWiki/Heartwarming Moment|s}} for Mikaela standing up for her boyfriend.
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* Izabella, Sam and Wheelie commenting after Mikaela [[ArmorPiercingSlap slaps Emily]].
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* Izabella, Sam and Wheelie commenting after Mikaela [[ArmorPiercingSlap slaps Emily]].Emily.
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* On subject of the video Wheelie recorded, most people found the highlights to be Annabelle punching Tommy, Mikaela slapping Emily, and just everything about Mrs. Lennox.
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* On subject of the video Wheelie recorded, most people found the highlights to be Annabelle punching Tommy, Mikaela slapping Emily, and just everything about Mrs. Lennox.Lennox.
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'''Wheelie:''' (stuttering trying to find an explanation)
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'''Wheelie:''' (stuttering ''[stuttering trying to find an explanation)explanation]''
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'''Sam:''' No, I don't think you should ask those questions because I'd rather survive to see my next birthday, madam. I think everyone would be happier not learning those answers. Or at least, they'd live a longer life. (Seeing that his words were having little effect in pacifying the woman, he glanced at the car he still sat in.) Bumblebee, floor it!\\
'''Epps:''' (trying to run after Sam and Bumblebee) Wait, take me with you. Don't leave me to die!
'''Epps:''' (trying to run after Sam and Bumblebee) Wait, take me with you. Don't leave me to die!
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'''Sam:''' No, I don't think you should ask those questions because I'd rather survive to see my next birthday, madam. I think everyone would be happier not learning those answers. Or at least, they'd live a longer life. (Seeing that his words were having little effect in pacifying the woman, he glanced at the car he still sat in.) Bumblebee, floor it!\\
'''Epps:'''(trying ''[trying to run after Sam and Bumblebee) Bumblebee]'' Wait, take me with you. Don't leave me to die!
'''Epps:'''
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'''Mearing:''' Don't call me 'ma'am.' I am…\\
'''Mikaela:''' [[SugarWiki/MomentOfAwesome Yes, you are a 'ma'am.' You're a woman, you're not married, so you're a 'ma'am.' Get used to it.]] (turns to leave with Sam)\\
'''Sam:''' (once he and Mikaela are out of earshot) [[AmazonChaser That was so hot, 'Kaela. You can fight my battles anytime you like]].\\
'''Mikaela:''' [[SugarWiki/MomentOfAwesome Yes, you are a 'ma'am.' You're a woman, you're not married, so you're a 'ma'am.' Get used to it.]] (turns to leave with Sam)\\
'''Sam:''' (once he and Mikaela are out of earshot) [[AmazonChaser That was so hot, 'Kaela. You can fight my battles anytime you like]].\\
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'''Mearing:''' Don't call me 'ma'am.' I am…\\
am...\\
'''Mikaela:''' [[SugarWiki/MomentOfAwesome Yes, you are a 'ma'am.' You're a woman, you're not married, so you're a 'ma'am.' Get used to it.]](turns ''[turns to leave with Sam)\\
Sam]''\\
'''Sam:'''(once ''[once he and Mikaela are out of earshot) earshot]'' [[AmazonChaser That was so hot, 'Kaela. You can fight my battles anytime you like]].\\
'''Mikaela:''' [[SugarWiki/MomentOfAwesome Yes, you are a 'ma'am.' You're a woman, you're not married, so you're a 'ma'am.' Get used to it.]]
'''Sam:'''
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'''Sarah:''' (to Simmons) [[TranquilFury Where is my daughter]]?\\
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'''Sarah:''' (to Simmons) ''[to Simmons]'' [[TranquilFury Where is my daughter]]?\\
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'''Sarah:''' (grabbing Simmons and Dutch by their collars) Where ''is'' she?\\
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'''Sarah:''' (grabbing ''[grabbing Simmons and Dutch by their collars) collars]'' Where ''is'' she?\\
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** His reaction to seeing Annabelle: [[ThisIsGoingToSuck "Well, that's it. We're all dead."]]
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** His reaction to seeing Annabelle: [[ThisIsGoingToSuck [[ThisIsGonnaSuck "Well, that's it. We're all dead."]]
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'''Sam:''' (grinning) [[AmazonChaser And she's going to marry me someday.]]\\
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'''Sam:''' (grinning) ''[grinning]'' [[AmazonChaser And she's going to marry me someday.]]\\