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* Chapter 144: After Matsuri reveals that he isn’t planning on changing back into a guy until after high school and is fine with dating Suzu as a girl in the meantime, Suzu then reveals an interest in learning how to cast the Gender Swap Awakening spell herself so she can fully enjoy both sides of Matsuri only to get smacked by Shirogane for her shamelessness.
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A Date With Rosie Palms is now an index.
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** When Young Heart decides to show Matsuri Suzu’s Suzu's past, the telepathic link shows them a memory from yesterday of Suzu in the shower…and shower... and all evidence points to her having ADateWithRosiePalms masturbating, to the boy’s boy's embarrassment. Later when Young Heart returns, its it's by barging into the shower while Suzu is in there with [[InterruptedIntimacy signs that she was about to go another date.do it again.]]
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* Chapter 126: When boy Matsuri starts attending school, Reo gives him a jutsu to push the WeirdnessCensor to its limit.
-->'''Reo''': The jutsu will make all normal students see you as Matsuri Kazamaki's older twin brother, [[RefugeInAudacity whose name is also]] [[SignificantNameOverlap Matsuri Kazamaki]]!\\
''(Shadow Mei is completely baffled)''
-->'''Reo''': The jutsu will make all normal students see you as Matsuri Kazamaki's older twin brother, [[RefugeInAudacity whose name is also]] [[SignificantNameOverlap Matsuri Kazamaki]]!\\
''(Shadow Mei is completely baffled)''
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** For much of the series, Matsuri insists that "the real me is a boy". Yet when girl Matsuri is still wearing panties and notices boy Matsuri isn't, [[InsaneTrollLogic arguing it as as proof that]] ''[[InsaneTrollLogic he]]'' [[InsaneTrollLogic is the fake]].
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** For much of the series, Matsuri insists that "the real me is a boy". Yet when girl Matsuri is still wearing panties and notices boy Matsuri isn't, [[InsaneTrollLogic arguing she argues it as as proof that]] ''[[InsaneTrollLogic he]]'' [[InsaneTrollLogic is the fake]].
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-->'''Daughter:''' In ''[=AyaTri=]'' volume 1, will ——[[labelnote:note]]Most likely referring to [[NippleAndDimed (Matsuri's) nipples]].[[/labelnote]] be revealed?\\
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-->'''Daughter:''' In ''[=AyaTri=]'' volume 1, will ——[[labelnote:note]]Most likely referring to [[NippleAndDimed (Matsuri's) nipples]].[[/labelnote]] be revealed?\\
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* For much of the series, Matsuri insists that "the real me is a boy". Yet in chapter 118, girl Matsuri is still wearing panties and notices boy Matsuri isn't, [[InsaneTrollLogic arguing it as as proof that]] ''[[InsaneTrollLogic he]]'' [[InsaneTrollLogic is the fake]].Chapter 118:
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--->'''Suzu''': ''[Happily lost in her thoughts, blushing madly]'' Wow, wow, wow! I'm in trouble...
--->'''Shirogane''': ''[Pissed as he realizes she's having one of her shameless moments]'' [[LovableSexManiac No, you]] ''[[LovableSexManiac are]]'' [[LovableSexManiac trouble]].
** The two Matsuri's get into a fight over who the real one is and [=his/her=] grandfather comes in and [[LiteralMetaphor tells his grandson he shouldn't fight with himself.]]. There's also the fact the two are nothing but a loincloth and a pair of panties between the two of them and he doesn't bat an eye.
--->'''Shirogane''': ''[Pissed as he realizes she's having one of her shameless moments]'' [[LovableSexManiac No, you]] ''[[LovableSexManiac are]]'' [[LovableSexManiac trouble]].
** The two Matsuri's get into a fight over who the real one is and [=his/her=] grandfather comes in and [[LiteralMetaphor tells his grandson he shouldn't fight with himself.]]. There's also the fact the two are nothing but a loincloth and a pair of panties between the two of them and he doesn't bat an eye.
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--->'''Suzu''': ''[Happily lost in her thoughts, blushing madly]'' Wow, wow, wow! I'm in trouble...
--->'''Shirogane''':trouble...\\
'''Shirogane''': ''[Pissed as he realizes she's having one of her shameless moments]'' [[LovableSexManiac No, you]] ''[[LovableSexManiac are]]'' [[LovableSexManiac trouble]].
** For much of the series, Matsuri insists that "the real me is a boy". Yet when girl Matsuri is still wearing panties and notices boy Matsuri isn't, [[InsaneTrollLogic arguing it as as proof that]] ''[[InsaneTrollLogic he]]'' [[InsaneTrollLogic is the fake]].
** The twoMatsuri's Matsuris get into a fight over who the real one is and [=his/her=] grandfather comes in and [[LiteralMetaphor tells his grandson grandchild(ren) he shouldn't fight with himself.]]. There's also the fact the two are nothing but a loincloth and a pair of panties between the two of them and he doesn't bat an eye.
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** Matsuri is so desensitized to ''both'' his form's that each has zero reaction while wrestling each other in only their underpants.
--->'''Shirogane''':
'''Shirogane''': ''[Pissed as he realizes she's having one of her shameless moments]'' [[LovableSexManiac No, you]] ''[[LovableSexManiac are]]'' [[LovableSexManiac trouble]].
** For much of the series, Matsuri insists that "the real me is a boy". Yet when girl Matsuri is still wearing panties and notices boy Matsuri isn't, [[InsaneTrollLogic arguing it as as proof that]] ''[[InsaneTrollLogic he]]'' [[InsaneTrollLogic is the fake]].
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** The two Matsuri's get into a fight over who the real one is and [=his/her=] grandfather comes in and [[LiteralMetaphor tells his grandson he shouldn't fight with himself.]]. There's also the fact the two are nothing but a loincloth and a pair of panties between the two of them and he doesn't bat an eye.
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--->'''Suzu''': ''[Happily lost in her thoughts, blushing maddly]'' Oh wow I'm in trouble.
--->'''Shirogane''': ''[Pissed as he realizes she's having one of her shameless moments]'' [[LovableSexManiac You]] ''[[LovableSexManiac are]]'' [[LovableSexManiac trouble]].
--->'''Shirogane''': ''[Pissed as he realizes she's having one of her shameless moments]'' [[LovableSexManiac You]] ''[[LovableSexManiac are]]'' [[LovableSexManiac trouble]].
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--->'''Suzu''': ''[Happily lost in her thoughts, blushing maddly]'' Oh wow madly]'' Wow, wow, wow! I'm in trouble.
trouble...
--->'''Shirogane''': ''[Pissed as he realizes she's having one of her shameless moments]'' [[LovableSexManiacYou]] No, you]] ''[[LovableSexManiac are]]'' [[LovableSexManiac trouble]].
--->'''Shirogane''': ''[Pissed as he realizes she's having one of her shameless moments]'' [[LovableSexManiac
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** When the chapter begins, both Matsuris are naked and wondering how the LiteralSplitPersonality situation happened while Suzu is off to the side: you get ''zero'' credit for guessing [[ThreeWaySex where her brain immediately went.]]
--->'''Suzu''': ''[Happily lost in her thoughts, blushing maddly]'' Oh wow I'm in trouble.
--->'''Shirogane''': ''[Pissed as he realizes she's having one of her shameless moments]'' [[LovableSexManiac You]] ''[[LovableSexManiac are]]'' [[LovableSexManiac trouble]].
--->'''Suzu''': ''[Happily lost in her thoughts, blushing maddly]'' Oh wow I'm in trouble.
--->'''Shirogane''': ''[Pissed as he realizes she's having one of her shameless moments]'' [[LovableSexManiac You]] ''[[LovableSexManiac are]]'' [[LovableSexManiac trouble]].
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* For much of the series, Matsuri insists that "the real me is a boy". Yet in chapter 118, girl Matsuri is still wearing panties and notices boy Matsuri isn't, [[InsaneTrollLogic arguing it as as proof that that]] ''[[InsaneTrollLogic he]]'' [[InsaneTrollLogic is the fake.
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* For much of the series, Matsuri insists that "the real me is a boy". Yet in chapter 118, girl Matsuri is still wearing panties and notices boy Matsuri isn't, arguing it as as proof that ''[[InsaneTrollLogic he]]'' is the fake.
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** Shadow Mei is revealed to have been the one to free the Ayakashi as part of her latest plan to take-over as the Ayakashi Medium which has the spirit possess Matsuri's bikini. The effect is Matsuri *ahem* "end up in agony" ash Mei believes, [[BrokenPedestal hoping it will break Suzu's vision of him]]. It has the ''exact opposite effect'' as Suzu is turned on by the sight and Shirogane has to smack her out of it.
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** Shadow Mei is revealed to have been the one to free the Ayakashi as part of her latest plan to take-over as the Ayakashi Medium which has the spirit possess Matsuri's bikini. The effect is Matsuri *ahem* "end up in agony" ash as Mei believes, [[BrokenPedestal hoping it will break Suzu's vision of him]]. It has the ''exact opposite effect'' as Suzu is turned on by the sight and Shirogane has to smack her out of it.
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** Shadow Mei is revealed to have been the one to free the Ayakashi as part of her latest plan to take-over as the Ayakashi Medium which has the spirit possess Matsuri's bikini. The effect is Matsuri *ahem* "end up in agony" ash Mei believes, [[BrokenPedestal hoping it will break Suzu's vision of him.]] It has the ''exact opposite effect'' as Suzu is turned on by the sight and Shirogane has to smack her out of it.
*** The arc can easily be called "Suzu's Young Heart needing a break from the former being a HormoneAddleTeenager".
*** The arc can easily be called "Suzu's Young Heart needing a break from the former being a HormoneAddleTeenager".
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** Shadow Mei is revealed to have been the one to free the Ayakashi as part of her latest plan to take-over as the Ayakashi Medium which has the spirit possess Matsuri's bikini. The effect is Matsuri *ahem* "end up in agony" ash Mei believes, [[BrokenPedestal hoping it will break Suzu's vision of him.]] him]]. It has the ''exact opposite effect'' as Suzu is turned on by the sight and Shirogane has to smack her out of it.
*** The arc can easily be called "Suzu's Young Heart needing a break from the former being aHormoneAddleTeenager".HormoneAddledTeenager".
*** The arc can easily be called "Suzu's Young Heart needing a break from the former being a
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*** The arc can easily be called "Suzu's Young Heart needing a break from the former being a HormoneAddleTeenager".
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** There's also the BadassDecay he suffers over the course of the series which starts with his attempts to steal the scroll that sealed his power away with increasingly petty and sometimes childish methods. Then after chapter 22, he loses his position as King of Ayakashi when the scroll is destroyed and grows more and more like Suzu's pet cat than a former all powerful spirit.
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* The "Young Heart" arc (chapters 87-91) begins with Matsuri and Suzu investigating a sealed Ayakashi that's escaped with the mission being at the beach. Matsuri for some reason had opted for a sexy bikini which has Suzu flustered since realizing that she loves him regardless of his gender just making her HormoneAddledTeenager tendencies ''worse''.
** Shadow Mei is revealed to have been the one to free the Ayakashi as part of her latest plan to take-over as the Ayakashi Medium which has the spirit possess Matsuri's bikini. The effect is Matsuri *ahem* "end up in agony" ash Mei believes, [[BrokenPedestal hoping it will break Suzu's vision of him.]] It has the ''exact opposite effect'' as Suzu is turned on by the sight and Shirogane has to smack her out of it.
** When Young Heart decides to show Matsuri Suzu’s past, the telepathic link shows them a memory from yesterday of Suzu in the shower…and all evidence points to her having ADateWithRosiePalms to the boy’s embarrassment. Later when Young Heart returns, its by barging into the shower while Suzu in there with [[InterruptedIntimacy signs that she was about to go another date.]]
** It turns out that as a child Suzu still had her memories of her past life. A young Matsuri states that the sometimes “talks like his grandpa” to her slight embarrassment. Also despite her stating that the reason she temporary left was because of Suzu HormoneAddledTeenager tendencies, [[HypocriticalHumor its revealed she had long hair until Matsuri said he though shorter hair suited her]]. [[NotSoAboveItAll She immediately has her hair cut.]]
** Shadow Mei tries to convince Suzu's Young Heart to join together to overtake Suzu and wipe out humanity which the latter refuses having given up her hatred. Shadow Mei begins to declare her intention of absorbing Young Heart to gain her power regardless…but doesn't get the chance as Matsuri ninja smokes them out and the two take off.
--->'''Shadow Mei''': Hey! Listen to what I have to say!!
** Shadow Mei is revealed to have been the one to free the Ayakashi as part of her latest plan to take-over as the Ayakashi Medium which has the spirit possess Matsuri's bikini. The effect is Matsuri *ahem* "end up in agony" ash Mei believes, [[BrokenPedestal hoping it will break Suzu's vision of him.]] It has the ''exact opposite effect'' as Suzu is turned on by the sight and Shirogane has to smack her out of it.
** When Young Heart decides to show Matsuri Suzu’s past, the telepathic link shows them a memory from yesterday of Suzu in the shower…and all evidence points to her having ADateWithRosiePalms to the boy’s embarrassment. Later when Young Heart returns, its by barging into the shower while Suzu in there with [[InterruptedIntimacy signs that she was about to go another date.]]
** It turns out that as a child Suzu still had her memories of her past life. A young Matsuri states that the sometimes “talks like his grandpa” to her slight embarrassment. Also despite her stating that the reason she temporary left was because of Suzu HormoneAddledTeenager tendencies, [[HypocriticalHumor its revealed she had long hair until Matsuri said he though shorter hair suited her]]. [[NotSoAboveItAll She immediately has her hair cut.]]
** Shadow Mei tries to convince Suzu's Young Heart to join together to overtake Suzu and wipe out humanity which the latter refuses having given up her hatred. Shadow Mei begins to declare her intention of absorbing Young Heart to gain her power regardless…but doesn't get the chance as Matsuri ninja smokes them out and the two take off.
--->'''Shadow Mei''': Hey! Listen to what I have to say!!
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* The next chapter reveals the reason why Mr. Sujimori has a NonStandardCharacterDesign is because he's jinyo, one born from the feelings from battle. Matsuri's mother concedes that its hard to detect them while in battle mode, there's still a glaring clue besides his over muscular frame.
-->'''Matoi''': [[LampshadeHanging There aren't many english teachers out there whose clothes rip when they get excited...]]
** Then you remember that Yabuki's [[Manga/ToLoveRu last series]] ''also'' involved a faculty member whose clothes came off when he got excited though [[DirtyOldMan for an entirely different reason]].
-->'''Matoi''': [[LampshadeHanging There aren't many english teachers out there whose clothes rip when they get excited...]]
** Then you remember that Yabuki's [[Manga/ToLoveRu last series]] ''also'' involved a faculty member whose clothes came off when he got excited though [[DirtyOldMan for an entirely different reason]].
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** The Ayakashi herself is Lippy, a iyo born from the collective feelings of love and desire from people in the entertainment district, teaches Mei to kiss passionately to "fight" Suzu. She's also the one who taught Suzu when she was a child; as Shirogane notes, she's the reason the girl's a CovertPervert HormoneAddledTeenager.
--->'''Shirogane''': So it was you who woke the monster.
--->'''Shirogane''': So it was you who woke the monster.
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*** Shirogane becomes every bit love-drunk as Suzu can be with Matsuri to the point that the latter tells him [[HypocriticalHumor he shouldn't be so forceful]] [[LampshadeHanging which Shirogane calls her out on.]] Of course he's heartbroken when he learns the truth and blames him for leading the cat on.
** [[HoistByTheirOwnPetard Shadow Mei gets some comeupance]] when Shirogane sees her "get in the way of his love" and uses a technique that traps her inside a giant ball of fur. [[BrickJoke The end of the chapter later shows her still trapped in it]] [[NeverMyFault swearing payback.]]
** [[HoistByTheirOwnPetard Shadow Mei gets some comeupance]] when Shirogane sees her "get in the way of his love" and uses a technique that traps her inside a giant ball of fur. [[BrickJoke The end of the chapter later shows her still trapped in it]] [[NeverMyFault swearing payback.]]
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** After Soga saves cat Matsuri from an ikon attack, he assumes he's just a regular cat he needs to purified in a bath. Matsuri is understandably embarrassed... until this accidentally breaks the curse. He abruptly cheers up, assuming Soga meant this all along, even though that would imply Soga was groping him ''on purpose'' and Matsuri is still completely naked in front of him (and his sister).
--->'''Matsuri''': Soga really knows what he's doing.
** The bath scene has a page where Matsuri is drawn as still being human, but a cat-sized one fondled by Soga's proportionally giant hands... immediately preceded by one where Matsuri is very suggestively posed ''while still drawn as a cat''.
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** Suzu and Shirogane are walking down the school hall after completing her Summer classes, the latter commenting it was [[LoveMakesYouDumb because she was too lovestruck to pay attention in class.]] When she asks him whether the Ayakashi had ever been in love, he makes a dramatic show of how the King of Ayakashi had no need of such things. [[NotSoAboveItAll Then he sees Matsuri (not knowing who it is) and instantly falls for the cat.]]
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** Suzu and Shirogane are walking down the school hall after completing her Summer classes, the latter commenting it was [[LoveMakesYouDumb because she was too lovestruck to pay attention in class.]] When she asks him whether the Ayakashi had ever been in love, he makes a dramatic show of how the King of Ayakashi had no need of such things. [[NotSoAboveItAll Then he sees Matsuri (not knowing who it is) and instantly falls for the cat.]]cat]].
*** Shirogane becomes every bit love-drunk as Suzu can be with Matsuri to the point that the latter tells him [[HypocriticalHumor he shouldn't be so forceful]] [[LampshadeHanging which Shirogane calls her out on.]] Of course he's heartbroken when he learns the truth and blames him for leading the cat on.
*** Shirogane becomes every bit love-drunk as Suzu can be with Matsuri to the point that the latter tells him [[HypocriticalHumor he shouldn't be so forceful]] [[LampshadeHanging which Shirogane calls her out on.]] Of course he's heartbroken when he learns the truth and blames him for leading the cat on.
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** Suzu and Shirogane are walking down the school hall after completing her Summer classes, the latter commenting it was [[LoveMakesYouDumb because she was too lovestruck to pay attention in class.]] When she asks him whether the Ayakashi had ever been in love, he makes a dramatic show of how the King of Ayakashi had no need of such things. [[NotSoAboveItAll Then he sees Matsuri (not knowing who it is) and instantly falls for the cat.]]
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** Reo then puts her two cents in and teases both of them by suggesting that if Matsuri doesn'y do it then another exorcist will...[[ParalyzingFearOfSexuality like Soga.]] Cue the older student blushing like crazy while [[CrazyJealousGuy Matsuri yells he'll do the mission.]]
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-->'''Creator/KentaroYabuki''': The reason Ninokuru said “I need to talk to you as an exorcist ninja” and said to suit up was of course to avoid seeing Matsuri in a skirt.
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-->'''Creator/KentaroYabuki''': The reason Ninokuru said “I need to talk to you as an exorcist ninja” ninja" and said to suit up was of course to avoid seeing Matsuri in a skirt.
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* Chapter 79 has Suzu and Shadow Mei's first direct battle. [[SeriousBusiness A kissing battle to be accurate]] in which [[ScrewYourself the two make-out]] to see who is the better kisser after Mei receives training. [[NotMakingThisUpDisclaimer You could not make this up.]]
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