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* The red light district is full of aliens and instead of sexy silhouettes of women dancing, we most often see tentacle monsters dancing in silhouette or in peep show booths.
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* The red light district is full of aliens and aliens, so instead of sexy silhouettes of women dancing, we most often see tentacle monsters dancing in silhouette or in peep show booths.
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-->'''Grumpos''': ''You left a sock over there... Over THERE... Is it too much to ask that you clean up after yourself?''
-->'''Boots''': ''What? I was going to pick them up tomorrow.''
-->'''Grumpos''': ''Tomorrow? '''Tomorrow? You son of a--'''''
-->Grumpos starts to hit Boots with his cane, camera cuts to Rho as sounds of a fight continue offscreen.
-->'''PAL''': ''Should we stop them, ma'am?''
-->'''Rho''' (deadpan): ''Let 'em kill each other.''
-->Apparently, Grumpos' plan to teach Boots not to leave his socks lying around involves shoving one in his mouth.
-->'''Grumpos''': ''Eat it! Eat it! '''Eat it! EAT IT!'''''
-->'''Boots''': ''What? I was going to pick them up tomorrow.''
-->'''Grumpos''': ''Tomorrow? '''Tomorrow? You son of a--'''''
-->Grumpos starts to hit Boots with his cane, camera cuts to Rho as sounds of a fight continue offscreen.
-->'''PAL''': ''Should we stop them, ma'am?''
-->'''Rho''' (deadpan): ''Let 'em kill each other.''
-->Apparently, Grumpos' plan to teach Boots not to leave his socks lying around involves shoving one in his mouth.
-->'''Grumpos''': ''Eat it! Eat it! '''Eat it! EAT IT!'''''
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-->'''Grumpos''': ''You left a sock over there... Over THERE... Is it too much to ask that you clean up after yourself?''
-->'''Boots''':yourself?''\\
'''Boots''': ''What? I was going to pick them up tomorrow.''
-->'''Grumpos''':''\\
'''Grumpos''': ''Tomorrow? '''Tomorrow? You son ofa--'''''
-->Grumpos starts to hit Boots witha--''' ''\\
(Grumpos winds up and swings hiscane, cane at Boots, camera cuts to Rho as sounds of a fight continue offscreen.
-->'''PAL''': ''Should we stop them, ma'am?''
-->'''Rho''' (deadpan): ''Let 'em kill each other.''
-->Apparently,offscreen, as apparently Grumpos' plan to teach Boots not to leave his socks lying around involves beating him senseless and shoving one in his mouth.
-->'''Grumpos''':mouth.)\\
'''PAL''': ''Should we stop them, ma'am?''\\
'''Rho''': (deadpan) ''Let 'em kill each other.''\\
'''Grumpos''': (still offscreen) ''Eat it! Eat it! '''Eat it! EAT IT!'''''
-->'''Boots''':
'''Boots''': ''What? I was going to pick them up tomorrow.
-->'''Grumpos''':
'''Grumpos''': ''Tomorrow? '''Tomorrow? You son of
-->Grumpos starts to hit Boots with
(Grumpos winds up and swings his
-->'''PAL''': ''Should we stop them, ma'am?''
-->'''Rho''' (deadpan): ''Let 'em kill each other.''
-->Apparently,
-->'''Grumpos''':
'''PAL''': ''Should we stop them, ma'am?''\\
'''Rho''': (deadpan) ''Let 'em kill each other.''\\
'''Grumpos''': (still offscreen) ''Eat it! Eat it! '''Eat it! EAT IT!'''''
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-->'''Grumpos''': ''Eat it! Eat it! '''Eat it! EAT IT!'''''
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-->'''Grumpos''': ''Eat it! Eat it! '''Eat it! EAT IT!'''''IT!'''''
* The red light district is full of aliens and instead of sexy silhouettes of women dancing, we most often see tentacle monsters dancing in silhouette or in peep show booths.
* The red light district is full of aliens and instead of sexy silhouettes of women dancing, we most often see tentacle monsters dancing in silhouette or in peep show booths.
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-->'''Grumpos''': ''You left a sock over there... Over THERE... Is it too much to ask that you clean up after yourself?
-->'''Boots''': ''What? I was going to pick them up tomorrow.
-->'''Boots''': ''What? I was going to pick them up tomorrow.
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-->'''Grumpos''': ''You left a sock over there... Over THERE... Is it too much to ask that you clean up after yourself?
yourself?''
-->'''Boots''': ''What? I was going to pick them up tomorrow.''
-->'''Boots''': ''What? I was going to pick them up tomorrow.''
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-->Apparently, Grumpos' plan to teach Boots not to leave his socks lying around it to shove one in his mouth.
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-->Apparently, Grumpos' plan to teach Boots not to leave his socks lying around it to shove involves shoving one in his mouth.
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-->''Grumpos'': You left a sock over there... Over THERE... Is it too much to ask that you clean up after yourself?
-->''Boots'': What? I was going to pick them up tomorrow.
-->''Grumpos'': Tomorrow? TOMORROW? YOU SON OF A--
-->Grumpos starts to hit boots with his cane, camera cuts to Rho as sounds of a fight continue offscreen.
-->''PAL'': Should we stop them ma'am?
-->''Rho'' (deadpan): Let 'em kill each other.
-->''Boots'': What? I was going to pick them up tomorrow.
-->''Grumpos'': Tomorrow? TOMORROW? YOU SON OF A--
-->Grumpos starts to hit boots with his cane, camera cuts to Rho as sounds of a fight continue offscreen.
-->''PAL'': Should we stop them ma'am?
-->''Rho'' (deadpan): Let 'em kill each other.
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-->Grumpos starts to hit
-->''Rho''
-->'''Rho''' (deadpan):
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-->''Grumpos'': Eat it! ''Eat it!'' '''Eat it! ''Eat it!'''''
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* The whole sequence when the gang is drifting to Domacratus. Most especially the end, after everyone's gone stir crazy:
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* The whole sequence when the gang is drifting to Domacratus.Democratus. Most especially the end, after everyone's gone stir crazy:
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-->Grumpos starts to hit boots with his cane, camera cuts to Rho as sounds of a fight offscreen.
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-->Grumpos starts to hit boots with his cane, camera cuts to Rho as sounds of a fight continue offscreen.
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-->''Rho'' (deadpan): Let 'em kill each other.
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-->''Rho'' (deadpan): Let 'em kill each other.other.
-->Apparently, Grumpos' plan to teach Boots not to leave his socks lying around it to shove one in his mouth.
-->''Grumpos'': Eat it! ''Eat it!'' '''Eat it! ''Eat it!'''''
-->Apparently, Grumpos' plan to teach Boots not to leave his socks lying around it to shove one in his mouth.
-->''Grumpos'': Eat it! ''Eat it!'' '''Eat it! ''Eat it!'''''
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* The whole sequence when the gang is drifting to Domacratus. Most especially the end, after everyone's gone stir crazy:
-->''Grumpos'': You left a sock over there... Over THERE... Is it too much to ask that you clean up after yourself?
-->''Boots'': What? I was going to pick them up tomorrow.
-->''Grumpos'': Tomorrow? TOMORROW? YOU SON OF A--
-->Grumpos starts to hit boots with his cane, camera cuts to Rho as sounds of a fight offscreen.
-->''PAL'': Should we stop them ma'am?
-->''Rho'' (deadpan): Let 'em kill each other.
-->''Grumpos'': You left a sock over there... Over THERE... Is it too much to ask that you clean up after yourself?
-->''Boots'': What? I was going to pick them up tomorrow.
-->''Grumpos'': Tomorrow? TOMORROW? YOU SON OF A--
-->Grumpos starts to hit boots with his cane, camera cuts to Rho as sounds of a fight offscreen.
-->''PAL'': Should we stop them ma'am?
-->''Rho'' (deadpan): Let 'em kill each other.
