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* In an early loop, Keiji just gets fed up with dying post and over, asks Yonabaru for a pistol, and [[AteHisGun shoots himself in the mouth.]] He immediately goes into another loop.
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* In an early loop, Keiji just gets fed up with dying post over and over, asks Yonabaru for a pistol, and [[AteHisGun shoots himself in the mouth.]] He immediately goes into another loop.
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* In an early loop, Keiji just gets fed up with dying post and over, asks Yonabaru for a pistol, and [[AteHisGun shoots himself in the mouth.]] He immediately goes into another loop.
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* In one of the loops, Keiji gets into a fight with another soldier in cafeteria. Almost everyone there cheering them on, and then:
--> "You guys fight. I'm getting my ''Tempura''."
--> "You guys fight. I'm getting my ''Tempura''."
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* In one of the loops, Keiji gets into a fight with another soldier in cafeteria. Almost everyone there cheering them on, and then:\n
--> One of the audience: "You guys fight. I'm getting my''Tempura''.Tempura."
--> One of the audience: "You guys fight. I'm getting my
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* In one of the loops, Keiji gets into a fight with another soldier in cafeteria. Almost everyone there cheering them on, and then:
--> "You guys fight. I'm getting my ''Tempura''."
--> "You guys fight. I'm getting my ''Tempura''."
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** Not to mention the reason she was there at all: [[IfYouDieICallYourStuff his battery pack]].
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** Not to mention the reason she was there at all: [[IfYouDieICallYourStuff his battery pack]].pack]].
* Keiji is asked what he's doing suited up when the battle's already lost. His reply: "What does it look like? I'm gonna go kill some mimics!"
* Keiji is asked what he's doing suited up when the battle's already lost. His reply: "What does it look like? I'm gonna go kill some mimics!"
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* The story opens with our protagonist near death. Then Rita came up chit-chatting about Japanese tea...
** Not to mention the reason she was there at all: [[IfYouDieICallYourStuff his battery pack]].
** Not to mention the reason she was there at all: [[IfYouDieICallYourStuff his battery pack]].
