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* Renly having the be escorted out because of laughing too hard over Arya disarming Joffrey with a mere wood. He was still being heard laughing outside.
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** It's even funnier in hindsight because they don't even have that consolation since [[spoiler: at the end of the book at least one Targaryen is alive and kicking and has ''three dragons''. That's not even counting Young Griff]].
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** It's even funnier in hindsight because they don't even have that consolation since [[spoiler: at the end of the book at least one Targaryen is alive and kicking and has ''three dragons''. That's And ''that's not even counting Young Griff]].Griff'']].
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** It's even funnier in hindsight because they don't even have that consolation since [[spoiler: at the end of the book at least one Targaryen is alive and kicking and has ''three dragons'']].
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** It's even funnier in hindsight because they don't even have that consolation since [[spoiler: at the end of the book at least one Targaryen is alive and kicking and has ''three dragons'']].dragons''. That's not even counting Young Griff]].
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* There is something darkly funny about how Pyp clings into Jon like a monkey when the latter flies into an rage at Allister Thorne.
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* Ned doesn't know how Arya gets her hand on Needle, so he allows her to keep it because he's afraid she will somehow get her hand on even bigger things if he takes it away.
--> “For true.” He smiled. “If I took it away, no doubt I’d find a morningstar hidden under your pillow within the fortnight. Try not to stab your sister, whatever the provocation.”
--> “For true.” He smiled. “If I took it away, no doubt I’d find a morningstar hidden under your pillow within the fortnight. Try not to stab your sister, whatever the provocation.”
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* Arya naively believing that she can fool a guard into thinking that she is not in her room by telling him that she is not in her room.
--> Fat Tom was knocking on her door. “Arya girl, what’s wrong?” he called out. “You in there?”
--> “No!” she shouted. The knocking stopped. A moment later she heard him going away. Fat Tom was always easy to fool.
--> Fat Tom was knocking on her door. “Arya girl, what’s wrong?” he called out. “You in there?”
--> “No!” she shouted. The knocking stopped. A moment later she heard him going away. Fat Tom was always easy to fool.
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-->He confessed his crime the next day in a fit of guilt. Lord Eddard ordered him to the godswood to cleanse himself. Guards were posted to see that Bran remained there alone all night to reflect on his disobedience. The next morning Bran was nowhere to be seen. They finally found him fast asleep in the upper branches of the tallest sentinel in the
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-->He confessed his crime the next day in a fit of guilt. Lord Eddard ordered him to the godswood to cleanse himself. Guards were posted to see that Bran remained there alone all night to reflect on his disobedience. The next morning Bran was nowhere to be seen. They finally found him fast asleep in the upper branches of the tallest sentinel in the
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-->He confessed his crime the next day in a fit of guilt. Lord Eddard ordered him to the
godswood to cleanse himself. Guards were posted to see that Bran remained there alone
all night to reflect on his disobedience. The next morning Bran was nowhere to be seen.
They finally found him fast asleep in the upper branches of the tallest sentinel in the
godswood to cleanse himself. Guards were posted to see that Bran remained there alone
all night to reflect on his disobedience. The next morning Bran was nowhere to be seen.
They finally found him fast asleep in the upper branches of the tallest sentinel in the
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-->He confessed his crime the next day in a fit of guilt. Lord Eddard ordered him to the
the godswood to cleanse himself. Guards were posted to see that Bran remained there alone
alone all night to reflect on his disobedience. The next morning Bran was nowhere to be seen.
seen. They finally found him fast asleep in the upper branches of the tallest sentinel in the
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godswood to cleanse himself. Guards were posted to see that Bran remained there alone
all night to reflect on his disobedience. The next morning Bran was nowhere to be seen.
They finally found him fast asleep in the upper branches of the tallest sentinel in the
grove.
godswood to cleanse himself. Guards were posted to see that Bran remained there alone
all night to reflect on his disobedience. The next morning Bran was nowhere to be seen.
They finally found him fast asleep in the upper branches of the tallest sentinel in the
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* Bran is forbidden from climbing tall things because Cat is afraid he will fall and die. He climbs anyway and is ordered by Ned to ask for forgiveness in the Godswood. The next day the guards find him on top of the tallest tree in the wood.
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-->"Damn Aegon for his conceit and damn Robert and his hunting."
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-->"Damn Aegon for his conceit and damn Robert and his hunting."" [[note]] Funnily enough The iron throne was made as a conceit, but of a very different sort from what most would assume. [[/note]]
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** Also the fact that while he's mad that she's accusing him falsely of the attempted murder of a child, he is equally mad that she thinks he's dumb enough to bet against Jaime in a tournament.
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** Also the fact that while he's mad that she's accusing him falsely of the attempted murder of a child, he is equally mad that she thinks he's dumb enough to bet against Jaime in a tournament. And that he'd be stupid enough to arm the cutthroat with a dagger that could so easily be traced back to him.
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** It's even funnier in hindsight because they don't even that consolation since [[spoiler: at the end of the book at least one Targaryen is alive and kicking and has ''three dragons'']].
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** It's even funnier in hindsight because they don't even have that consolation since [[spoiler: at the end of the book at least one Targaryen is alive and kicking and has ''three dragons'']].
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* The first time they met, Tyrion is making fun of Jon for being a bastard, obviously annoying Jon
-->'''Tyrion:''' Did I offend you? Sorry. Dwarfs don’t have to be tactful. Generations of capering fools in motley have won me the right to dress badly and say any damn thing that comes into my head.
-->'''Tyrion:''' Did I offend you? Sorry. Dwarfs don’t have to be tactful. Generations of capering fools in motley have won me the right to dress badly and say any damn thing that comes into my head.
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* The first time they met, Tyrion is making fun of Jon for being a bastard, obviously annoying Jon
-->'''Tyrion:''' Did I offend you? Sorry. Dwarfs don’t have to be tactful. Generations of capering fools in motley have won me the right to dress badly and say any damn thing that comes into my head.
-->'''Tyrion:''' Did I offend you? Sorry. Dwarfs don’t have to be tactful. Generations of capering fools in motley have won me the right to dress badly and say any damn thing that comes into my head.
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** It's even funnier in hindsight because they don't even that consolation since [[spoiler: at the end of the book at least one Targaryen is alive and kicking and has ''three dragons'']].
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** It's even funnier in hindsight because they don't even that consolation since [[spoiler: at the end of the book at least one Targaryen is alive and kicking and has ''three dragons'']].dragons'']].
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** It's even funnier in hindsight because they don't even that consolation since [[spoiler: at the end of the book the Targaryen have dragons again]].
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** It's even funnier in hindsight because they don't even that consolation since [[spoiler: at the end of the book the at least one Targaryen have dragons again]].is alive and kicking and has ''three dragons'']].
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* How Tyrion manages to talk his way out of danger when he's threatened by the Mountain's Clan:
--> '''Barbarian''': How would you like to die, Tyrion son of Tywin?
--> '''Tyrion''': In my own bed, with a belly full of wine and a maiden's mouth around my cock, at the age of eighty.
** Even the barbarians [[ActuallyPrettyFunny can't help but laugh]].
--> '''Barbarian''': How would you like to die, Tyrion son of Tywin?
--> '''Tyrion''': In my own bed, with a belly full of wine and a maiden's mouth around my cock, at the age of eighty.
** Even the barbarians [[ActuallyPrettyFunny can't help but laugh]].
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-->"I'll wager Lord Snow's the first brother ever [[ItMakesSenseInContext honored for burning down the Lord Commander's Tower]]."
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-->"I'll wager Lord Snow's the first brother ever [[ItMakesSenseInContext honored for burning down the Lord Commander's Tower]].""
* The first time they met, Tyrion is making fun of Jon for being a bastard, obviously annoying Jon
-->'''Tyrion:''' Did I offend you? Sorry. Dwarfs don’t have to be tactful. Generations of capering fools in motley have won me the right to dress badly and say any damn thing that comes into my head.
* At the Lannister camp, Tywin is listing their multiple enemies on various fronts: the Starks, Lord Beric, Stannis, Renly, etc.
-->'''Tyrion:''' Take heart, Father. At least Rhaegar Targaryen is still dead.
** It's even funnier in hindsight because they don't even that consolation since [[spoiler: at the end of the book the Targaryen have dragons again]].
* The first time they met, Tyrion is making fun of Jon for being a bastard, obviously annoying Jon
-->'''Tyrion:''' Did I offend you? Sorry. Dwarfs don’t have to be tactful. Generations of capering fools in motley have won me the right to dress badly and say any damn thing that comes into my head.
* At the Lannister camp, Tywin is listing their multiple enemies on various fronts: the Starks, Lord Beric, Stannis, Renly, etc.
-->'''Tyrion:''' Take heart, Father. At least Rhaegar Targaryen is still dead.
** It's even funnier in hindsight because they don't even that consolation since [[spoiler: at the end of the book the Targaryen have dragons again]].
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* Pyp congratulating Jon Snow on being given Longclaw:
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* Pyp congratulating Jon Snow on being given Longclaw:[[NamedWeapons Longclaw]]:
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-->'''Sansa:''' [[StealthInsult I don't want someone brave, gentle, and strong]]! I want him!"
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* This exchange between Jorah and Dany in ''A Game of Thrones'':
-->'''Dany:''' Viserys says he could sweep the Seven Kingdoms with ten thousand Dothraki screamers.
-->'''Jorah:''' ''*snort*'' Viserys couldn't sweep a stable with ten thousand brooms.
-->'''Dany:''' Viserys says he could sweep the Seven Kingdoms with ten thousand Dothraki screamers.
-->'''Jorah:''' ''*snort*'' Viserys couldn't sweep a stable with ten thousand brooms.
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* This exchange between Jorah and Dany in ''A Game of Thrones'':
-->'''Dany:''' Viserys says he could sweep the Seven Kingdoms with ten thousand Dothraki screamers.
-->'''Jorah:''' ''*snort*'' Viserys couldn't sweep a stable with ten thousand brooms.
-->'''Dany:''' Viserys says he could sweep the Seven Kingdoms with ten thousand Dothraki screamers.
-->'''Jorah:''' ''*snort*'' Viserys couldn't sweep a stable with ten thousand brooms.
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* As the story of how Arya disarmed Joffrey is being told by both sides in the Court, Renly Baratheon has to be escorted out because he's laughing at and mocking Joff too much
** He tells the guy who's supposed to show him out that he perfectly well knows where the door is.
** He tells the guy who's supposed to show him out that he perfectly well knows where the door is.
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* As the story of how Arya disarmed Joffrey is being told by both sides in the Court, Renly Baratheon has is ordered by the king to be escorted out because he's started laughing at and mocking Joff too much
**Joff. He tells the guy who's supposed to show him out says that he is perfectly well knows where capable of finding the door is.himself and continues to laugh at Joff's sword name as he was leaving.
-->'''Renly (to Joff):''' Penchance later you'll tell me how a nine-year-old girl the size of a wet rat managed to disarm you with a broom handle and throw your sword in the river.
* Tyrion defending himself against Catelyn's accusations on the way to the Vale leads to this exchange:
-->'''Catelyn:''' Why would [[TheChessmaster Petyr]] lie to me?
-->'''Tyrion:''' Why does a bear shit in the woods?
** Also the fact that while he's mad that she's accusing him falsely of the attempted murder of a child, he is equally mad that she thinks he's dumb enough to bet against Jaime in a tournament.
**
-->'''Renly (to Joff):''' Penchance later you'll tell me how a nine-year-old girl the size of a wet rat managed to disarm you with a broom handle and throw your sword in the river.
* Tyrion defending himself against Catelyn's accusations on the way to the Vale leads to this exchange:
-->'''Catelyn:''' Why would [[TheChessmaster Petyr]] lie to me?
-->'''Tyrion:''' Why does a bear shit in the woods?
** Also the fact that while he's mad that she's accusing him falsely of the attempted murder of a child, he is equally mad that she thinks he's dumb enough to bet against Jaime in a tournament.
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* Tyrion defending himself against Catelyn's accusations on the way to the Vale leads to this exchange:
-->'''Catelyn:''' Why would [[TheChessmaster Petyr]] lie to me?
-->'''Tyrion:''' Why does a bear shit in the woods?
** Also the fact that while he's mad that she's accusing him falsely of the attempted murder of a child, he is equally mad that she thinks he's dumb enough to bet against Jaime in a tournament.
-->'''Catelyn:''' Why would [[TheChessmaster Petyr]] lie to me?
-->'''Tyrion:''' Why does a bear shit in the woods?
** Also the fact that while he's mad that she's accusing him falsely of the attempted murder of a child, he is equally mad that she thinks he's dumb enough to bet against Jaime in a tournament.
* A bit of dark humor comes when Dany, after learning that the wine seller who tried to poison her was offered a lordship for assassinating the remaining Targaryens, remarks that Drogo must have earned one for killing Viserys.
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-->"I'll wager Lord Snow's the first brother ever [[ItMakesSenseInContext honored for burning down the Lord Commander's Tower]]."
* A bit of dark humor comes when Dany, after learning that the wine seller who tried to poison her was offered a lordship for assassinating the remaining Targaryens, remarks that Drogo must have earned one for killing Viserys.
* A bit of dark humor comes when Dany, after learning that the wine seller who tried to poison her was offered a lordship for assassinating the remaining Targaryens, remarks that Drogo must have earned one for killing Viserys.
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-->"I'll wager Lord Snow's the first brother ever [[ItMakesSenseInContext honored for burning down the Lord Commander's Tower]]."
* A bit of dark humor comes when Dany, after learning that the wine seller who tried to poison her was offered a lordship for assassinating the remaining Targaryens, remarks that Drogo must have earned one for killing Viserys."
* A bit of dark humor comes when Dany, after learning that the wine seller who tried to poison her was offered a lordship for assassinating the remaining Targaryens, remarks that Drogo must have earned one for killing Viserys.
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* At one point, Eddard Stark thinks about Gregor Clegane, including the fact that dogs are afraid to enter his hall. By this point Summer, Grey Wind, and Shaggydog have kicked out all the dogs from Winterfell's hall.
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* At one point, Eddard Stark thinks about Gregor Clegane, including Bran's dream of the fact that dogs are afraid to enter his hall. By this point Summer, Grey Wind, and Shaggydog talking crow.
-->'''Bran''': Help me.
-->'''Crow''': I'm trying. [[AttentionDeficitOohShiny Say, do you havekicked out all the dogs from Winterfell's hall.any corn?]]
-->'''Bran''': Help me.
-->'''Crow''': I'm trying. [[AttentionDeficitOohShiny Say, do you have
** He tells the guy who's supposed to show him out that he perfectly well knows where the door is.
* At one point, Eddard Stark thinks about Gregor Clegane, including the fact that dogs are afraid to enter his hall. By this point Summer, Grey Wind, and Shaggydog have kicked out all the dogs from Winterfell's hall.
* At one point, Eddard Stark thinks about Gregor Clegane, including the fact that dogs are afraid to enter his hall. By this point Summer, Grey Wind, and Shaggydog have kicked out all the dogs from Winterfell's hall.
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* Sansa's proclamation that she wants to marry Joffrey.
-->'''Sansa:''' [[StealthInsult I don't want someone brave, gentle, and strong]]! I want him!"
-->'''Sansa:''' [[StealthInsult I don't want someone brave, gentle, and strong]]! I want him!"
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* Bran's dream of the talking crow.
-->'''Bran''': Help me.
-->'''Crow''': I'm trying. [[AttentionDeficitOohShiny Say, do you have any corn?]]
-->'''Bran''': Help me.
-->'''Crow''': I'm trying. [[AttentionDeficitOohShiny Say, do you have any corn?]]
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* Bran's dream of Sansa's proclamation that she wants to marry Joffrey.
-->'''Sansa:''' [[StealthInsult I don't want someone brave, gentle, and strong]]! I want him!"
* Pyp congratulating Jon Snow on being given Longclaw:
-->"I'll wager Lord Snow's thetalking crow.
-->'''Bran''': Help me.
-->'''Crow''': I'm trying. [[AttentionDeficitOohShiny Say, do you have any corn?]]first brother ever [[ItMakesSenseInContext honored for burning down the Lord Commander's Tower]]."
-->'''Sansa:''' [[StealthInsult I don't want someone brave, gentle, and strong]]! I want him!"
* Pyp congratulating Jon Snow on being given Longclaw:
-->"I'll wager Lord Snow's the
-->'''Bran''': Help me.
-->'''Crow''': I'm trying. [[AttentionDeficitOohShiny Say, do you have any corn?]]
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* As the story of how Arya disarmed Joffrey is being told by both sides in the Court Court, Renly Baratheon has to be escorted out because he's laughing at and mocking Joff too much
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* At one point, Eddard Stark thinks about Gregor Clegane, including the fact that dogs are afraid to enter his hall. By this point Summer, Grey Wind, and Shaggydog have kicked out all the dogs from Winterfell's hall.
* As the story of how Arya disarmed Joffrey is being told by both sides in the Court Renly has to be escorted out because he's laughing at and mocking Joff too much
* This exchange between Jorah and Dany in ''A Game of Thrones'':
-->'''Dany:''' Viserys says he could sweep the Seven Kingdoms with ten thousand Dothraki screamers.
-->'''Jorah:''' ''*snort*'' Viserys couldn't sweep a stable with ten thousand brooms.
* Sansa's proclamation that she wants to marry Joffrey.
-->'''Sansa:''' [[StealthInsult I don't want someone brave, gentle, and strong]]! I want him!"
* Tyrion defending himself against Catelyn's accusations on the way to the Vale leads to this exchange:
-->'''Catelyn:''' Why would [[TheChessmaster Petyr]] lie to me?
-->'''Tyrion:''' Why does a bear shit in the woods?
** Also the fact that while he's mad that she's accusing him falsely of the attempted murder of a child, he is equally mad that she thinks he's dumb enough to bet against Jaime in a tournament.
* Ned Stark's inner thoughts about how uncomfortable the Iron Throne is and how much he hates doing Robert's job.
-->"Damn Aegon for his conceit and damn Robert and his hunting."
* Bran's dream of the talking crow.
-->'''Bran''': Help me.
-->'''Crow''': I'm trying. [[AttentionDeficitOohShiny Say, do you have any corn?]]
* A bit of dark humor comes when Dany, after learning that the wine seller who tried to poison her was offered a lordship for assassinating the remaining Targaryens, remarks that Drogo must have earned one for killing Viserys.
* As the story of how Arya disarmed Joffrey is being told by both sides in the Court Renly has to be escorted out because he's laughing at and mocking Joff too much
* This exchange between Jorah and Dany in ''A Game of Thrones'':
-->'''Dany:''' Viserys says he could sweep the Seven Kingdoms with ten thousand Dothraki screamers.
-->'''Jorah:''' ''*snort*'' Viserys couldn't sweep a stable with ten thousand brooms.
* Sansa's proclamation that she wants to marry Joffrey.
-->'''Sansa:''' [[StealthInsult I don't want someone brave, gentle, and strong]]! I want him!"
* Tyrion defending himself against Catelyn's accusations on the way to the Vale leads to this exchange:
-->'''Catelyn:''' Why would [[TheChessmaster Petyr]] lie to me?
-->'''Tyrion:''' Why does a bear shit in the woods?
** Also the fact that while he's mad that she's accusing him falsely of the attempted murder of a child, he is equally mad that she thinks he's dumb enough to bet against Jaime in a tournament.
* Ned Stark's inner thoughts about how uncomfortable the Iron Throne is and how much he hates doing Robert's job.
-->"Damn Aegon for his conceit and damn Robert and his hunting."
* Bran's dream of the talking crow.
-->'''Bran''': Help me.
-->'''Crow''': I'm trying. [[AttentionDeficitOohShiny Say, do you have any corn?]]
* A bit of dark humor comes when Dany, after learning that the wine seller who tried to poison her was offered a lordship for assassinating the remaining Targaryens, remarks that Drogo must have earned one for killing Viserys.
