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* It's no wonder that Click and several of the previous heroes hate RGB, consider he effectively set them up to fail just so he could delay the end of the world a little longer. Just imagine how they felt when Hate resurrected them and [[ReforgedIntoAMinion remolded them into their current forms.]]
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* It's no wonder that Click and several of the previous heroes hate RGB, consider considering he effectively set them up to fail just so he could delay the end of the world a little longer. Just imagine how they felt when Hate resurrected them and [[ReforgedIntoAMinion remolded them into their current forms.]]
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* Tempers turning into Griefs actually makes a lot of sense. Both of them have lava veins, and anger is one of the FiveStagesOfGrief, also associated with losing one's temper. RGB even tries to tell Hero that if you break them too many times or don't make up for it afterwards, they'll turn into Griefs.
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* Tempers turning into Griefs actually makes a lot of sense. Both of them have lava veins, and anger is one of the FiveStagesOfGrief, also associated with losing one's temper. RGB even tries to tell Hero that if you break them too many times or don't make up for it afterwards, they'll turn into Griefs.Griefs though he's interrupted when he tries to explain this to her initially.
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* During Page 490, RGB explains to Hero that his plan was to prolong the story to delay the end of the world. During the bottom right, he says that Hate dealt him a losing hand and he agreed to play before changing the game. Hate's cards are all Aces which is a good hand for poker. RGB's cards are 2 spades, 2 hearts and a club, which is a losing hand in a poker game but works much better for solitaire. In other words, RGB has changed the game from Poker to Solitaire, ensuring that he has the winning hand.
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* During Page 490, RGB explains to Hero that his plan was to prolong the story to delay the end of the world. During the bottom right, he says that Hate dealt him a losing hand and he agreed to play before changing the game. Hate's cards are all Aces which is a good hand for poker. RGB's cards are 2 spades, 2 hearts and a club, which is a losing hand in a poker game but works much better for solitaire. In other words, RGB has changed the game from Poker to Solitaire, ensuring that he has the changing his losing hand to a winning hand.one instead.
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* When asking the Butterfly what she is, RGB mentions that only Fears and Hate can create schisms, and reasonably assumes that The Butterfly is either a Fear or [[BigBad Hate]] herself. This makes sense when you remember that Fears are monsters made up of sharp looking edges, and Hate is associated with scissors, which can used to create splits and tears in materials such as paper or fabrics.
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* Hate has been established to reconstruct characters into their current forms, [=ToBy=] was stitched back together with his own nerves, and she has scissors as a visual motif. That would basically make her a seamstress.
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* It's no wonder that Click and several of the previous heroes hate RGB, consider he effectively set them up to fail just so he could delay the end of the world a little longer. Just imagine how they felt when Hate resurrected them and [[ReforgedIntoAMinion remolded them into their current forms.]]
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* During Page 490, RGB explains to Hero that his plan was to prolong the story to delay the end of the world. During the bottom right, he says that Hate dealt him a losing hand and he agreed to play before changing the game. Hate's cards are all Aces which is a good hand for poker. RGB's cards are 2 spades, 2 hearts and a club, which is a losing hand in a poker game but works much better for solitaire. In other words, RGB has changed the game from Poker to Solitaire, ensuring that he has the winning hand.
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* Just what did Click do [[spoiler: as a hero for RGB to conclude that he made a hideous mistake and that Click was on the path to destruction?]]
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* Just what did Click do [[spoiler: Tempers turning into Griefs actually makes a lot of sense. Both of them have lava veins, and anger is one of the FiveStagesOfGrief, also associated with losing one's temper. RGB even tries to tell Hero that if you break them too many times or don't make up for it afterwards, they'll turn into Griefs.
** Unsurprisingly Click's role asa hero for RGB to conclude that he made a hideous mistake ends with him losing his temper by stepping on one and that Click was on the path failing to destruction?]]
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* Just what did Click do [[spoiler: as a hero for RGB to conclude that he made a hideous mistake and that Click was on the path to destruction?]]
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* "Heroes wear green" may seem like a throwaway line but in actuality, it's a nifty piece of foreshadowing. Assok and Tinker are both green and they're implied to be [[spoiler: previous heroes]] and Toby and Dial are [[spoiler: revealed to be working for Hate and were heroes once before throwing in their lot with her.]] This even extends to RGB himself who [[spoiler: during his fight with Hate is wearing a green suit, confirming that he was a hero himself.]] During Chapter 11: Ensemble, his outfit changes to black, brown and teal (i.e a shade of green) before settling to various shades of teal he is fitted with a black suit
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* "Heroes wear green" may seem like a throwaway line but in actuality, it's a nifty piece of foreshadowing. Assok and Tinker are both green and they're implied to be [[spoiler: previous heroes]] and Toby and Dial are [[spoiler: revealed to be working for Hate and were heroes once before throwing in their lot with her.]] This even extends to RGB himself who [[spoiler: during his fight with Hate is wearing a green suit, confirming that he was a hero himself.]] During Chapter 11: Ensemble, his outfit changes to black, brown and teal (i.e a shade of green) before settling to various shades of teal he is fitted with a and white. Even when RGB changes his shirt colour to black suitduring his refitting, the teal still remains.
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* "Heroes wear green" may seem like a throwaway line but in actuality, it's a nifty piece of foreshadowing. Assok and Tinker are both green and they're implied to be [[spoiler: previous heroes]] and Toby and Dial are [[spoiler: revealed to be working for Hate and were heroes once before throwing in their lot with her.]] This even extends to RGB himself who [[spoiler: during his fight with Hate is wearing a green suit, confirming that he was a hero himself.]] During his trip at the bazaar, he is fitted with a black suit
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* "Heroes wear green" may seem like a throwaway line but in actuality, it's a nifty piece of foreshadowing. Assok and Tinker are both green and they're implied to be [[spoiler: previous heroes]] and Toby and Dial are [[spoiler: revealed to be working for Hate and were heroes once before throwing in their lot with her.]] This even extends to RGB himself who [[spoiler: during his fight with Hate is wearing a green suit, confirming that he was a hero himself.]] During Chapter 11: Ensemble, his trip at the bazaar, outfit changes to black, brown and teal (i.e a shade of green) before settling to various shades of teal he is fitted with a black suit
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* "Heroes wear green" may seem like a throwaway line but in actuality, it's a nifty piece of foreshadowing. Assok and Tinker are both green and they're implied to be [[spoiler: previous heroes]] and Toby and Dial are [[spoiler: revealed to be working for Hate and were heroes once before throwing in their lot with her.]] This even extends to RGB himself who [[spoiler: during his fight with Hate is wearing a green suit, confirming that he was a hero himself.]] During his trip at the bazaar, he is fitted with a black suit
* During RGB's battle with [[spoiler: Hate, his suit is well fitting because he's a hero]]. Early on in the story, he tells Hero that he's the worst monster and throughout the story he wears an ill fitting suit, as if to imply that his role as a monster doesn't fit him and that he's actually supposed to be a [[spoiler: hero]].
* During RGB's battle with [[spoiler: Hate, his suit is well fitting because he's a hero]]. Early on in the story, he tells Hero that he's the worst monster and throughout the story he wears an ill fitting suit, as if to imply that his role as a monster doesn't fit him and that he's actually supposed to be a [[spoiler: hero]].
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* Toby being stitched back together with his own nerves is utterly horrifying by itself. To make it worse, Hate reformed Toby as a doll who can't do anything on his own and is forced to serve her. No wonder Toby is so bitter at RGB considering how brutal his death must've been as a [[spoiler: previous hero.]]
* Dial himself doesn't have it much better. While he may be chipper about his lot in life, he has to live knowing that [[spoiler: Hate can listen in on his conversations and that she can erase him any time he does something to displease her.]]
* It's implied throughout the story that RGB had taken many different heroes under his wing, with Hero being the latest one. However for all the heroes that we still see alive, there must've been several who didn't make it out alive.
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** In Page 31, it's shown that the two Doubts leeching off the Fear die off once it glares at Hero. As if show to show that ''fear is stronger than doubt'' or that the Hero ''won't have any doubt'' about how dangerous a Fear is.
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** In Page 31, it's shown that the two Doubts leeching off the Fear die off once it glares at Hero. As if show to show that ''fear is stronger than doubt'' or that the Hero ''won't have any doubt'' about how dangerous a Fear is.
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