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** She thinks killing him will force mankind to work harder to avert the apocalypse now that they don't have an easy way out, since he's the key to their success. Her plan having holes ''is'' a point. Showcasing just how little interaction with humans has left her unable to see glaring holes in her own idea.
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** She thinks killing him will force mankind to work harder to avert the apocalypse now that they don't have an easy way out, since he's the key to their success. Her plan having holes ''is'' a point. Showcasing point, showcasing just how little interaction with humans has left her unable to see glaring holes in her own idea.
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* Speaking of Alex, successfully convincing the alignment representative to create a better world causes the future to be changed, which deletes her current form from existence. All well and good... but why does her ring remain? It came from her world as well, after all.
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* Speaking of Alex, successfully convincing the alignment representative to create a better world causes the future to be changed, which deletes her current form from existence. All well and good... but why does her ring remain? It came from her world as well, after all.all.
** Perhaps Louisa Ferre made Alex's ring, which makes sense that she is Alex's mother.
** Perhaps Louisa Ferre made Alex's ring, which makes sense that she is Alex's mother.
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* Speaking of Alex, successfully convincing the alignment representative to create a better world causes the future to be changed, which deletes the current form from existence. All well and good... but why does her ring remain? It came from her world as well, after all.
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* Speaking of Alex, successfully convincing the alignment representative to create a better world causes the future to be changed, which deletes the her current form from existence. All well and good... but why does her ring remain? It came from her world as well, after all.
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** She thinks killing him will force mankind to work harder to avert the apocalypse now that they don't have an easy way out, since he's the key to their success. Her plan having holes ''is'' a point. Showcasing just how little interaction with humans has left her unable to see glaring holes in her own idea.
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** She thinks killing him will force mankind to work harder to avert the apocalypse now that they don't have an easy way out, since he's the key to their success. Her plan having holes ''is'' a point. Showcasing just how little interaction with humans has left her unable to see glaring holes in her own idea.idea.
* Speaking of Alex, successfully convincing the alignment representative to create a better world causes the future to be changed, which deletes the current form from existence. All well and good... but why does her ring remain? It came from her world as well, after all.
* Speaking of Alex, successfully convincing the alignment representative to create a better world causes the future to be changed, which deletes the current form from existence. All well and good... but why does her ring remain? It came from her world as well, after all.
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** On top of that, consider that the United States is well-known for its huge military budget, while Japan's modern armed forces have historically been designed for national self-defense and not much else.
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** On top of that, consider that the United States is well-known for its huge military budget, while Japan's modern armed forces have historically been designed for national self-defense and not much else. Their special forces units have little to zero combat experience, except for occasionally keeping North Korean infiltration in check and participating in any peacekeeping operations with restrictions.
