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*** Similarly Lola and Nora are both independent woman who want to have partners who let them do things themselves. They also have problems with it. With Lola being such a Workaholic, she has no time to relax or socialize (outside of negotiating)('''Talent''') and Nora closing herself in fear of getting hurt again ('''Romance'''). While they are board with it, due to the stated factors, it makes sense they'd be a little hesitate to do a date ('''Flirtation''').
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*** Similarly Lola and Nora are both independent woman who want to have partners who let them do things themselves. They also have problems with it. With Lola being such a Workaholic, she has no time to relax or socialize (outside of negotiating)('''Talent''') and Nora closing herself in fear of getting hurt again ('''Romance'''). While they are board with it, due to the stated factors, it makes sense they'd be a little hesitate hesitant to do actually go on a date ('''Flirtation''').
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** The same can be said about Kyanna and Nora. Not to mention, Nora herself says that Kyanna is tight on money, and with her son Phillip to care for, she'll have no opportunity to meet new people, much less having threesomes.
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** The same can be said about Kyanna and Nora. Not to mention, Nora herself says that Kyanna is tight on money, money (no going to an expensive island resort), and with her son Phillip to care for, she'll have no opportunity to meet new people, much less having threesomes.
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* Despite having lost her job basically, Jessie is in Inna de Poona thanks to Lola covering her expenses; it helps that, thanks to her stewardess job, Lola already got her flying tickets covered up, and Jessie can share room with her to save on the hotel stay.
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* Despite having lost her job basically, Jessie is in Inna de Poona thanks to Lola covering her expenses; it helps that, thanks to her stewardess job, Lola already got her flying tickets covered up, and Jessie can share a room with her to save on the hotel stay.
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* While Kyu fawning over Candance is in character for her, it could also be a reference to [[IdenticalStranger how she and Candance looked so similar, people thought the two were related in some way]].
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* While Kyu fawning over Candance is in character for her, it could also be a reference to [[IdenticalStranger how she and Candance initially looked so similar, people thought the two were related in some way]].
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* While Kyu fawning over Candance is in character for her, it could also be a reference to [[IdenticalStranger how she and Candance looked so similar, people thought the two were related in some way]].
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*** Similarly Lola and Jessie are both independent woman who want to have partner who let them do things themselves. They also have problems with it. With Lola having almost no time to relax because of it and Nora closing herself in fear of getting hurt again.
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*** Similarly Lola and Jessie Nora are both independent woman who want to have partner partners who let them do things themselves. They also have problems with it. With Lola having almost being such a Workaholic, she has no time to relax because or socialize (outside of it negotiating)('''Talent''') and Nora closing herself in fear of getting hurt again.again ('''Romance'''). While they are board with it, due to the stated factors, it makes sense they'd be a little hesitate to do a date ('''Flirtation''').
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* Of course the girl that introduces Jessie in this game would be Lailani, a SuspiciouslySimilarSubstitute to Beli, one of the girls that introduced Jessie in the first (the other being already Lola).
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* Of course the girl that introduces Jessie in this game would be Lailani, a SuspiciouslySimilarSubstitute to Beli, one of the girls that introduced Jessie in the first game (the other being the already present Lola).
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***Similarly Lola and Jessie are both independent woman who want to have partner who let them do things themselves. They also have problems with it. With Lola having almost no time to relax because of it and Nora closing herself in fear of getting hurt again.
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* Of course the girl that introduces Jessie in this would be Lailani, a SuspiciouslySimilarSubstitute to Beli, one of the girls that introduced Jessie in the first (the other being already Lola).
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* Of course the girl that introduces Jessie in this game would be Lailani, a SuspiciouslySimilarSubstitute to Beli, one of the girls that introduced Jessie in the first (the other being already Lola).
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*Of course the girl that introduces Jessie in this would be Lailani, a SuspiciouslySimilarSubstitute to Beli, one of the girls that introduced Jessie in the first (the other being already Lola).
