Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
More fitting trope and proper quote indention.
Changed line(s) 321 (click to see context) from:
* SuddenlyShouting: "You think I'm a thief? No. I'm not a thief. I'm not the one charging 85 cents for a STINKIN' SODA! [[{{Inverted}} ''You're'' the thief!"]]
to:
* SuddenlyShouting: "You think I'm a thief? No. I'm not a thief. I'm not the one charging 85 cents for a STINKIN' SODA! [[{{Inverted}} ''You're'' ''[[NoYou You're]]'' [[NoYou the thief!"]]
Changed line(s) 342 (click to see context) from:
--->'''Foster:''' "Now you're gonna die wearing that stupid little hat!"
to:
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 38 (click to see context) from:
* ArmoredClosetGay: Nick the Nazi, who graphically fantasizes about Foster getting {{Prison Rape}}d by a black man.
to:
* ArmoredClosetGay: Possibly Nick the Nazi, who graphically fantasizes about Foster getting {{Prison Rape}}d by a black man.
Changed line(s) 51 (click to see context) from:
** Bill himself to a degree, being emotionally abusive toward his wife and child, as well as his mother.
to:
** Bill himself to a degree, being emotionally abusive toward his wife and child, as well as his mother.mother, though he's portrayed in a [[AlasPoorVillain more sympathetic and relatable way]].
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* PsychopathicManchild:
** While some of Foster's frustrations are somewhat understandable, attacking a cashier over the cost of soda and shooting up a fast food joint because they wouldn't serve him breakfast feel like a five-year-old whining over not getting the candy he wanted.
** The gangbangers act like teenage bullies: attacking what they see as a weak person only to chicken out when they see Foster can defend hmself, throwing a furious tantrum over someone having the audacity to fight back, and recklessly firing guns without concern for the innocent people they hurt. When Foster finds one of the gangbangers on the ground after their car crashed, he's whimpering like a little baby.
** The Neo-Nazi is nasty little bully, happily throwing "faggot" around like a hypermasculine teenager.
** While some of Foster's frustrations are somewhat understandable, attacking a cashier over the cost of soda and shooting up a fast food joint because they wouldn't serve him breakfast feel like a five-year-old whining over not getting the candy he wanted.
** The gangbangers act like teenage bullies: attacking what they see as a weak person only to chicken out when they see Foster can defend hmself, throwing a furious tantrum over someone having the audacity to fight back, and recklessly firing guns without concern for the innocent people they hurt. When Foster finds one of the gangbangers on the ground after their car crashed, he's whimpering like a little baby.
** The Neo-Nazi is nasty little bully, happily throwing "faggot" around like a hypermasculine teenager.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 241 (click to see context) from:
* PaterFamilicide: Prendergast claims that Foster intends to do this to his wife and daughter, even though he refuses to admit it. It's ambiguous whether he planned to hurt them or not, but he almost certainly planned to take his own life at least.
to:
* PaterFamilicide: Prendergast claims that Foster intends to do this to his wife and daughter, even though he refuses to admit it. It's ambiguous whether he planned to hurt them or not, but he almost certainly planned to take his own life at least. Earlier in the film, he does unambiguously threaten to kill his wife.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 354 (click to see context) from:
* WorldOfJerkass: Prendergast, Sandra, Beth, and Adele aside, most of the characters in this film are deeply unpleasant people. Bill Foster was an abusive husband to Beth and scared her so much that she slapped a restraining order on him. The people he encounters on his journey across the city include GangBangers, a Neo Nazi, a PhonyVeteran looking to mooch off him, a greedy shop owner who won't break a bill for a man in need and overcharges for everything in his store, a restaurant manager who won't give him a breakfast order despite the fact that breakfast only ended a minute prior and they still have breakfast meals warmed and ready to serve, a construction crew screwing up the roads for no reason other than justifying their inflated budget, and a golfer who intentionally attempts to hit him with a golf ball. Even some of Prendergast's colleagues at the LAPD are pricks, especially his [[DaChief captain]] and Sandra's new partner.
to:
* WorldOfJerkass: Prendergast, Sandra, Beth, and Adele aside, most of the characters in this film are deeply unpleasant people. Bill Foster was an emotionally abusive husband to Beth and scared her so much that she slapped a restraining order on him. The people he encounters on his journey across the city include GangBangers, a Neo Nazi, a PhonyVeteran looking to mooch off him, a greedy shop owner who won't break a bill for a man in need and overcharges for everything in his store, a restaurant manager who won't give him a breakfast order despite the fact that breakfast only ended a minute prior and they still have breakfast meals warmed and ready to serve, a construction crew screwing up the roads for no reason other than justifying their inflated budget, and a golfer who intentionally attempts to hit him with a golf ball. Even some of Prendergast's colleagues at the LAPD are pricks, especially his [[DaChief captain]] and Sandra's new partner.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* AbusiveOffspring: Foster was cruel to his mom, even blaming her for his failed marriage.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* GunsDoNotWorkThatWay: Contrary to what Nick says, M72 LAW is '''not''' a heatseeker nor guided missile, just plain old rocket-propelled anti-armor grenade. It would also never be able to traverse the underground canal all the way to the end. It would just blow up at first collision after its fuse being primed.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* ImplacableMan: Nothing is going to stop Foster on his way across LA to his ex-wife and daughter.
Added DiffLines:
* TheyLookJustLikeEveryoneElse: Foster by all means is just an average guy, who you'll find tens of in any at least remotely civilized urban area. But after he snaps, the mayhem he causes seriously sends shivers down your spine.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* NiceGuy: Despite his troubled home life and the various humiliations he has to endure, Prendergast is unfailingly polite, tolerant, and friendly with everybody, to the point of being an ExtremeDoormat. At least until he's pushed too far...
Added DiffLines:
** Also Prendergast, who after spending years working behind a desk rather than the streets as a police officer to please his wife, is the one who takes down Bill at the end of his rampage.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 158 (click to see context) from:
-->'''Prendergast:''' Don't you want to see [your daughter] grow up?
to:
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
moving Ambiguous Disorder to YMMV
Deleted line(s) 34,36 (click to see context) :
* AmbiguousDisorder:
** Foster's emotional instability, intense anger, hostility, unstable relationship with his family and reckless behaviors all suggest he suffers from Borderline Personality Disorder.
** Prendergast's wife is needy, self-centered, high-strung, temperamental, and prone to delusions. It is possible she is suffering from some bipolar or codependency disorder. [[spoiler:Losing a daughter to SIDS at age two might have contributed to it]].
** Foster's emotional instability, intense anger, hostility, unstable relationship with his family and reckless behaviors all suggest he suffers from Borderline Personality Disorder.
** Prendergast's wife is needy, self-centered, high-strung, temperamental, and prone to delusions. It is possible she is suffering from some bipolar or codependency disorder. [[spoiler:Losing a daughter to SIDS at age two might have contributed to it]].
Changed line(s) 56,57 (click to see context) from:
* AwfulWeddedLife: Elizabeth, Foster's wife, [[spoiler:was emotionally abused by her husband with a HairTriggerTemper, which motivated her to divorce and file a restraining order against their husband to protect their young daughter. When her daughter's birthday comes, her husband is gunning for both of them, restraining order be damned. He eventually does succeed in meeting them both, and it turns out he had a gun on him. Prendergast even theorizes Foster intended to [[PaterFamilicide kill his family and then himself]], which he denies]].
** Prendergast's marriage is also hardly a happy one. His wife is needy, clingy and apparently mentally ill. Among other things, she basically ruined her husband's career and self-respect by forcing him to take a desk job and later into early retirement.
** Prendergast's marriage is also hardly a happy one. His wife is needy, clingy and apparently mentally ill. Among other things, she basically ruined her husband's career and self-respect by forcing him to take a desk job and later into early retirement.
to:
* AwfulWeddedLife: Elizabeth, Foster's wife, AwfulWeddedLife:
** Elizabeth [[spoiler:was emotionally abused by her husbandwith Foster, who has a HairTriggerTemper, which motivated her to divorce and file a restraining order against their husband him to protect their young daughter. When her daughter's birthday comes, her husband is gunning for both of them, restraining order be damned. He eventually does succeed in meeting them both, and it turns out he had a gun on him. Prendergast even theorizes Foster intended to [[PaterFamilicide kill his family and then himself]], which he denies]].
** Prendergast's marriage is also hardly a happy one. His wife is needy, clingy and apparently mentally ill. Among other things, she basically ruined her husband's career and self-respect by forcing him to take a desk job and later into early retirement. [[spoiler:Losing a daughter to SIDS at age two might have contributed to it]]. It's not until he takes on Foster's case that he stands up to her. It's later subverted as Prendergast still loves his wife deep down and defends her from anyone who thinks badly of her, such as the {{Jerkass}} police sergeant who gets punched in the face for it.
** Elizabeth [[spoiler:was emotionally abused by her husband
** Prendergast's marriage is also hardly a happy one. His wife is needy, clingy and apparently mentally ill. Among other things, she basically ruined her husband's career and self-respect by forcing him to take a desk job and later into early retirement. [[spoiler:Losing a daughter to SIDS at age two might have contributed to it]]. It's not until he takes on Foster's case that he stands up to her. It's later subverted as Prendergast still loves his wife deep down and defends her from anyone who thinks badly of her, such as the {{Jerkass}} police sergeant who gets punched in the face for it.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* ExtremeDoormat: Prendergast is henpecked at home by a needy and probably mentally ill wife who forced him to take a degrading desk job with the police department. He's also treated with ridicule and open contempt by his police chief and coworkers because they think he's a coward for working behind a desk. He tolerates all of the above stoically until the Foster case lands in his lap.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
** Prendergast's marriage is also hardly a happy one. His wife is needy, clingy and apparently mentally ill. Among other things, she basically ruined her husband's career and self-respect by forcing him to take a desk job and later into early retirement.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 30 (click to see context) from:
* AllForNothing: Foster pulls out a gun at WhammyBurger because the manager refused to serve him breakfast… only to later decide that he doesn’t want breakfast anymore and orders from the lunch menu.
to:
* AllForNothing: Foster pulls out a gun at WhammyBurger Whammy Burger because the manager refused to serve him breakfast… only to later decide that he doesn’t want breakfast anymore and orders from the lunch menu.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 31 (click to see context) from:
** However, it is implied that Foster only drew a gun because the manager was very rude to him.
to:
** However, it is it's implied that Foster only drew a gun because the manager was very rude to him.
Changed line(s) 42 (click to see context) from:
* ArtisticLicenseLaw: In real life, [[spoiler:Foster's SuicideByCop would leave his family with nothing, because insurance companies do not pay out benefits for losses incurred during the commission of a felony]]. Of course, Foster himself doesn't know that.
to:
* ArtisticLicenseLaw: In real life, [[spoiler:Foster's SuicideByCop Foster's crimes and his [[spoiler:SuicideByCop would leave his family with nothing, because insurance companies do not don't pay out benefits for losses incurred during the commission of a felony]]. Of course, Foster himself doesn't know that.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 159 (click to see context) from:
'''Foster:''' Behind bars? *shakes his head*
to:
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 158,159 (click to see context) from:
-->'''Prendergast:''' Don't you want to see [your daughter] grow up?\\
'''Foster:''' Behind bars? *shakes his head*\\
'''Foster:''' Behind bars? *shakes his head*\\
to:
-->'''Prendergast:''' Don't you want to see [your daughter] grow up?\\
up?
'''Foster:''' Behind bars? *shakes hishead*\\head*
'''Foster:''' Behind bars? *shakes his
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* FateWorseThanDeath: In Foster's mind being sent to prison is this as he refuses to surrender when he is cornered by Pendergast:
-->'''Prendergast:''' Don't you want to see [your daughter] grow up?\\
'''Foster:''' Behind bars? *shakes his head*\\
-->'''Prendergast:''' Don't you want to see [your daughter] grow up?\\
'''Foster:''' Behind bars? *shakes his head*\\
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 28 (click to see context) from:
* ActuallyPrettyFunny: Prendergast's boss Captain Yardley dislikes him because he took a desk job and because he doesn't curse. Towards the end, Prendergast tells the Captain to go fuck himself on national television. Although surprised, the Captain smiles that a man he thought was craven had the balls to do that.
to:
* ActuallyPrettyFunny: Prendergast's boss Captain Yardley dislikes him because he took a desk job and because he doesn't curse. Towards the end, Prendergast tells the Captain to go fuck himself on national television. Although surprised, After getting over his initial shock, the Captain smiles that cracks a smile since the man he thought was believed to be craven had the balls to do that.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* ActuallyPrettyFunny: Prendergast's boss Captain Yardley dislikes him because he took a desk job and because he doesn't curse. Towards the end, Prendergast tells the Captain to go fuck himself on national television. Although surprised, the Captain smiles that a man he thought was craven had the balls to do that.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 32 (click to see context) from:
** Don’t be rude to people.
to:
** Don’t be rude to people. Pretty much every single one of Foster’s outbursts in the movie is a result of people being rude to him.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* AllForNothing: Foster pulls out a gun at WhammyBurger because the manager refused to serve him breakfast… only to later decide that he doesn’t want breakfast anymore and orders from the lunch menu.
** However, it is implied that Foster only drew a gun because the manager was very rude to him.
** However, it is implied that Foster only drew a gun because the manager was very rude to him.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* BrattyFoodDemand: Foster pulls out a gun at a burger joint when the manager refuses to serve him breakfast.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* BasementDweller: It is revealed that Foster lives with his mother. Justified as Foster is [[spoiler: divorced]] and [[spoiler: lost his job]].
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* EpicFail: Not only do the gangsters fail to shoot Foster during a drive-by but they also end up crashing their car almost immediately after that which results in their death.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
wrong word
Changed line(s) 50 (click to see context) from:
* ATeamFiring: Gang members attempt to get revenge on Bill Foster during a drive by shooting, but end up wounding everyone else on the block except him, before crashing into a telephone pole and being either killed or severely injured themselves.
to:
* ATeamFiring: Gang members attempt to get revenge on Bill Foster during with a drive by drive-by shooting, but end up wounding everyone else on the block except him, before crashing into a telephone pole and being either killed or severely injured themselves.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 86 (click to see context) from:
** Done on a narrative level with the audience regarding [[spoiler:Foster himself. The film has the audience believe that Foster is the hero and that his anger towards the world for treating him as expendable is justified... until the end, where [[HeroAntagonist Prendergast]] confronts Foster and reveals [[TomatoInTheMirror he was the villain all along]]. No matter how [[{{Jerkass}} asshole-ish]] people were, no matter what they did to him, Foster still had no right to act like an angry white man venting his frustrations on everyone, which is what he was actually doing the entire time. This is marked as the moment Foster realizes what he's become, and the moment the audience's admiration for him is broken as they, too, are forced to see that they were essentially supporting a criminal]]. Fittingly, the movie poster above depicts [[spoiler:Foster standing on a pedestal not unlike a hero's statue, which echoes the audience's initial impression of him]].
to:
** Done on a narrative level with the audience regarding [[spoiler:Foster himself. The film has the audience believe that Foster is the hero and that his anger towards the world for treating him as expendable is justified... until the end, where [[HeroAntagonist Prendergast]] confronts Foster and reveals [[TomatoInTheMirror he was the villain all along]]. No matter how [[{{Jerkass}} asshole-ish]] people were, no matter what they did to him, Foster still had no right to act like an angry white man venting violently vent his frustrations on everyone, which is what he was actually doing the entire time. This is marked as the moment Foster realizes what he's become, and the moment the audience's admiration for him is broken as they, too, are forced to see that they were essentially supporting a criminal]]. Fittingly, the movie poster above depicts [[spoiler:Foster standing on a pedestal not unlike a hero's statue, which echoes the audience's initial impression of him]].
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 317 (click to see context) from:
* TranquilFury: Foster always tries to stay calm, but his vile temper is clearly on display in many of his interactions, such as the fast food restaurant.
to:
* TranquilFury: Foster always tries to stay calm, but his vile temper is clearly on display in many of his interactions, such as the fast food restaurant.restaurant where he speaks calmly but his nearly murderous rage is clear in his voice.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
Up To Eleven is being dewicked.
Changed line(s) 88 (click to see context) from:
* ButtMonkey: {{Deconstructed}}. Everything goes wrong for Foster throughout the movie, and [[UpToEleven even before that]] his life was on a downward spiral. This leads to his SanitySlippage and him [[WoobieDestroyerOfWorlds going off the deep end.]]
to:
* ButtMonkey: {{Deconstructed}}. Everything goes wrong for Foster throughout the movie, and [[UpToEleven even before that]] that his life was on a downward spiral. This leads to his SanitySlippage and him [[WoobieDestroyerOfWorlds going off the deep end.]]