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* ButICantBePregnant: Apple Bloom's reaction to the news. Justified in that the father is Spike the dragon.
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* FantasticRacism: Rarity's reaction to the news is less than pleasant. Somewhat explained by Sweetie Belle as the result of being taught by her family because of the past. Also see {{WMG}}.
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* FantasticRacism: Rarity's reaction to the news is less than pleasant. Somewhat explained by Sweetie Belle as the result of being taught by her family because of the past. Also see {{WMG}}.
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** Oh very much.
** Nurse Redheart as well in the past.
** Oh very much.
** Nurse Redheart as well in the past.
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A WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic {{Fanfic}} by Zyxx, found [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/15533/Zestar-Apple-Flambe here]].
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A WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' {{Fanfic}} by Zyxx, found [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/15533/Zestar-Apple-Flambe here]].
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* FantasticRacism: Rarity's reaction to the news is less than pleasant.
** Somewhat explained by Sweetie Belle as the result of being taught by her family because of the past. Also see {{WMG}}.
** Somewhat explained by Sweetie Belle as the result of being taught by her family because of the past. Also see {{WMG}}.
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**pleasant. Somewhat explained by Sweetie Belle as the result of being taught by her family because of the past. Also see {{WMG}}.
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* WhatTheHellHero: Spike gives one to Rarity when she gives in to her anti-interspecies bigotry.
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* WhatTheHellHero: WhatTheHellHero:
** Spike gives one to Rarity when she gives in to her anti-interspecies bigotry.
** Spike gives one to Rarity when she gives in to her anti-interspecies bigotry.
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** Somewhat explained by Sweetie Belle as the result of being taught by her family because of the past. Also see WMG.
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** Somewhat explained by Sweetie Belle as the result of being taught by her family because of the past. Also see WMG.{{WMG}}.
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** Somewhat explained by Sweetie Belle as the result of being taught by her family because of the past. Also see WildMassGuessing.
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** Somewhat explained by Sweetie Belle as the result of being taught by her family because of the past. Also see WildMassGuessing.WMG.
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** Somewhat explained by Sweetie Belle as the result of being taught by her family because of the past. Also see WildMassGuessing.
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* FurryReminder: Ponies go into estrus in this universe. Spike had the misfortune of being stuck inside a room with Apple Bloom when she got her's.
* [[HalfHumanHybrid Half-Pony Hybrid:]] Spike and Apple Bloom's unborn child. [[spoiler: There have been others in Equestria's history and Zebra History. Apparently, Zebra's appreciate the hybrids far more according to Zecora.]]
* [[HalfHumanHybrid Half-Pony Hybrid:]] Spike and Apple Bloom's unborn child. [[spoiler: There have been others in Equestria's history and Zebra History. Apparently, Zebra's appreciate the hybrids far more according to Zecora.]]
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* FurryReminder: Ponies go into estrus in this universe. Spike had the misfortune of being stuck inside a room with Apple Bloom when she got her's.
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* [[HalfHumanHybrid Half-Pony Hybrid:]] Spike and Apple Bloom's unborn child. [[spoiler: There have been others in Equestria's history and Zebra History. Apparently,Zebra's Zebras appreciate the hybrids far more according to Zecora.]]
* [[HalfHumanHybrid Half-Pony Hybrid:]] Spike and Apple Bloom's unborn child. [[spoiler: There have been others in Equestria's history and Zebra History. Apparently,
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* FallInLoveMontage: Perhaps not the straightest example, but a good chunk of the first chapter centers around Apple Bloom and Spike bonding with one another to become closer than they ever have been in canon.
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* FallInLoveMontage: FallingInLoveMontage: Perhaps not the straightest example, but a good chunk of the first chapter centers around Apple Bloom and Spike bonding with one another to become closer than they ever have been in canon.
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* FallInLoveMontage: Perhaps not the straightest example, but a good chunk of the first chapter centers around Apple Bloom and Spike bonding with one another to become closer than they ever have been in canon.
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* WildMassGuessing: In-Universe example, Sweetie Belle suspects her family had an uncle or other such relative who married a donkey and caused a scandal, souring the family's outlook on interracial relations since. Sweetie Belle herself not withstanding.
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* [[HalfHumanHybrid Half-Pony Hybrid:]] Spike and Appleblooms Apple Bloom's unborn child. [[spoiler: There have been others in Equestria's history and Zebra History. Apparently, Zebra's appreciate the hybrids far more according to Zecora.]]
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* WackyCravings: Taking so much stranger forms for Applebloom, having not just cravings for spicy food, but feeling urges to lay out in the sun, or needing gemstone supplements.
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* WackyCravings: Taking so much stranger forms for Applebloom, Apple Bloom, having not just cravings for spicy food, but feeling urges to lay out in the sun, or needing gemstone supplements.
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** Rainbow Dash also chewed her out and Twilight does to a limited extent later.
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** Rainbow Dash also chewed her out and Twilight does to a limited extent later.later.
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* [[HalfHumanHybrid Half-Pony Hybrid:]] Spike and Appleblooms unborn child. [[Spoiler: [[spoiler: There have been others in Equestria's history and Zebra History. Apparently, Zebra's appreciate the hybrids far more according to Zecora.]]
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* [[HalfHumanHybrid Half-Pony Hybrid:]] Spike and Appleblooms unborn child. [[Spoiler: There have been others in Equestria's history and Zebra History. Apparently, Zebra's appreciate the hybrids far more according to Zecora.]]
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* WhatTheHellHero: Spike gives one to Rarity when she gives in to her anti-interspecies bigotry.
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* WackyCravings: Taking so much stranger forms for Applebloom, having not just cravings for spicy food, but feeling urges to lay out in the sun, or needing gemstone supplements.
* WhatTheHellHero: Spike gives one to Rarity when she gives in to her anti-interspeciesbigotry.bigotry.
** Rainbow Dash also chewed her out and Twilight does to a limited extent later.
* WhatTheHellHero: Spike gives one to Rarity when she gives in to her anti-interspecies
** Rainbow Dash also chewed her out and Twilight does to a limited extent later.
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* FantasticRacism: Rarity's reaction to the news is ''not'' pleasant.
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* InterspeciesRomance: One of the big part of the conflict in this story.
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A WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic {{Fanfic}} by lifgdf, Zyxx, found [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/15533/Zestar-Apple-Flambe here]].
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A WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic {{Fanfic}} by lifgdf, found [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/15533/Zestar-Apple-Flambe here]].
Set a few years after (the current point in) the series, the story follows the relationship of Spike and Apple Bloom. Their young love takes a serious turn when she finds herself pregnant with a half-dragon, half-pony foal. How will their family and friends react, and what will this halfbreed child mean for them and Equestrian society as a whole?
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* ButICantBePregnant: Apple Bloom's reaction to the news. Justified in that the father is Spike the dragon.
* WhatTheHellHero: Spike gives one to Rarity when she gives in to her anti-interspecies bigotry.
Set a few years after (the current point in) the series, the story follows the relationship of Spike and Apple Bloom. Their young love takes a serious turn when she finds herself pregnant with a half-dragon, half-pony foal. How will their family and friends react, and what will this halfbreed child mean for them and Equestrian society as a whole?
[[WMG: This Fanfic contains examples of:]]
* ButICantBePregnant: Apple Bloom's reaction to the news. Justified in that the father is Spike the dragon.
* WhatTheHellHero: Spike gives one to Rarity when she gives in to her anti-interspecies bigotry.
