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** Akira rips the Tops a new one for being apathetic towards the suffering of the Satellite and booing him just because he completely whomped Jack in three turns.
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** Akira rips the Tops a new one for being apathetic towards the suffering of the Satellite Satellites and booing him just because he completely whomped Jack in three turns.turns. [[spoiler: Deconstructed, since this results in his breaking point that warps Neo-Domino into madness.]]
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** Yusei dies in the first chapter by drowning.
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** Yusei dies drowns in the first chapter by drowning.chapter.
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* ChekhovsGun: Divine grants Akira a bracelet to amplify his psychic powers, which he uses to mass teleport himself and everyone throughout the city. However [[spoiler:Lawless reveals that for every time Akira was using his psychic powers, it would absorb them until the point that the next psychic activity would overload the wearer...and said wearer ends up being Leo, who has limited TwinTelepathy with his sister.]]
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* ChekhovsGun: Divine grants Akira a bracelet to amplify his psychic powers, which he uses to mass teleport himself and everyone throughout the city. However [[spoiler:Lawless reveals that for every time Akira was using his psychic powers, it would absorb them until the point that the next psychic activity would overload the wearer...and said wearer ends up being Leo, Leo -- Akira was trying to give the bracelet to Luna but she rejected it so Leo snatched it instead -- who has limited TwinTelepathy with his sister.]]
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* DeconstructionCrossover: The story deconstructs the dangers the ''Live A Live'' crew have to deal with being transplanted into Neo-Domino. Four of them don't speak the same language or know how to use technology like smartphones. Their ways of fighting are incapable of getting anything done in a world where DuelsDecideEverything. And just because they were able to tackle Odio, the Earthbound Immortals are leagues above the Lord of Dark. Moreover, canon Yusei was known to be kind, forgiving, and patient with the likes of Akiza and Jack, easily bringing them to the side of good. The New Signers do their best, but they falter because they don't have Yusei's bottomless patience and mercy and can't forgive Akiza and Jack for their actions even though what those two did are small potatoes compared to Oersted/Odio. [[spoiler:To the point Akira loses control from the Fortune Cup audience bullying him over Jack's quick defeat and unwittingly delivering Neo-Domino to darkness.]]
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* DeconstructionCrossover: The story deconstructs the dangers the ''Live A Live'' crew have to deal with being transplanted into Neo-Domino. Four of them don't speak the same language or know how to use technology like smartphones. Their ways of fighting are incapable of getting anything done in a world where DuelsDecideEverything. And just because they were able to tackle Odio, the Earthbound Immortals are leagues above the Lord of Dark. Moreover, canon Yusei was known to be kind, forgiving, and patient with the likes of Akiza and Jack, easily bringing them to the side of good. The New Signers do their best, best to live up to the kindness and idealism he had, but they falter because they don't have Yusei's bottomless patience and mercy and can't forgive Akiza and Jack for their actions even though what those two did are small potatoes compared to Oersted/Odio. [[spoiler:To the point Akira loses control from the Fortune Cup audience bullying him over Jack's quick defeat and unwittingly delivering Neo-Domino to darkness.]]
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* DownerEnding: [[spoiler:After curb-stomping Jack, the bullying from the Fortune Cup audience causes Akira to lose control and break the minds of those in Neo-Domino with Judgment Day, allowing the Dark Signers take over now that there's no-one strong enough to stop them, and the heroes in their bid to escape, are forced into another world where yet another audience is mocking a lonely victim...oh, and Streibough's still alive and setting his sights on Heartland.]]
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* DownerEnding: [[spoiler:After curb-stomping Jack, the bullying from the Fortune Cup audience causes Akira to lose control and break the minds of those in Neo-Domino with Judgment Day, allowing the Dark Signers take over now that there's no-one strong enough to stop them, and the heroes in their bid to escape, are forced into another world where yet another audience is mocking a lonely victim...oh, and Streibough's still alive and setting his sights on ''Arc-V'' Heartland.]]
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''[=5Ds=] A Live'' started on September 21st, 2022 and the first story was completed on January 3rd, 2024. The second story ''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/52844470/chapters/133664848 Yu-Gi-Oh! Arc-V A Live]]'' was uploaded on January 5th, 2024, in which the Seven Heroes, and Oersted, get transported to the world of ''Anime/YuGiOhArcV'' on the day of the Championship battle Yusho disappeared from to ensure a boy with red eyes doesn't become a Demon Lord.
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''[=5Ds=] A Live'' started on September 21st, 2022 and the first story Arc was completed on January 3rd, 2024. The second story Arc ''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/52844470/chapters/133664848 Yu-Gi-Oh! Arc-V A Live]]'' was uploaded on January 5th, 2024, in which the Seven Heroes, and Oersted, get transported to the world of ''Anime/YuGiOhArcV'' on the day of the Championship battle Yusho disappeared from to ensure a boy with red eyes doesn't become a Demon Lord.
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[[folder:Story 2: Arc-V]]
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! Due to the story assuming you have watched/played both ''Anime/YuGiOh5Ds'' and ''VideoGame/LiveALive'' all spoilers will be left unmarked.
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! Due to the story assuming you have watched/played both ''Anime/YuGiOh5Ds'' and ''VideoGame/LiveALive'' all spoilers related to their plots will be left unmarked.
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