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* TheMagicGoesAway: [[spoiler:Naruto's goal post-merging with Dark Naruto is to sever the ability to link physical energy with spiritual energy to stop shinobi from abusing the Sage of the Six Path's gift. He's essentially ridding them of the ability to use Chakra entirely.]]
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* ViolentlyProtectiveGirlfriend: Fuu, to Naruto.
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* ViolentlyProtectiveGirlfriend: Fuu, to Naruto.Naruto.
* WellIntentionedExtremist: To contrast Tobi's Moon's Eye plan, and Pain's Superweapon plan, [[spoiler:Naruto intends to rid the elemental nations of the ability to use chakra entirely, which he acknowledges will cause countless problems and deaths, but ultimately feels is the best solution.]]
* WellIntentionedExtremist: To contrast Tobi's Moon's Eye plan, and Pain's Superweapon plan, [[spoiler:Naruto intends to rid the elemental nations of the ability to use chakra entirely, which he acknowledges will cause countless problems and deaths, but ultimately feels is the best solution.]]
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* {{Expy}}: [[LightNovel/HighSchoolDXD Hyoudou Issei]] is Naruto's kenjutsu teacher
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* {{Expy}}: [[LightNovel/HighSchoolDXD Hyoudou Issei]] is Naruto's kenjutsu teacherteacher.
* FondMemoriesThatCouldHaveBeen: [[spoiler:Hinata has these of the canon ending of Naruto, where they were married and had kids, as she dies.]]
* FondMemoriesThatCouldHaveBeen: [[spoiler:Hinata has these of the canon ending of Naruto, where they were married and had kids, as she dies.]]
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* DiedInYourArmsTonight: [[spoiler:Itachi dies in Sasuke's hands.]]
* GoOutWithASmile: [[spoiler:Hinata.]]
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* ItIsBeyondSaving: Dark Naruto's take on the world crafted by the Sage of Six Paths. [[spoiler: Naruto eventually agrees with him and decides to remove the Ninja system by taking away his gift, the ability to mold chakra.]]
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** [[spoiler:Hinata ends up being killed by Naruto after sacrificing everything, with hints that her sanity was returning at the end.]]
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* TraumaticSuperpowerAwakening: [[spoiler:Seeing Itachi die gave Sasuke his Mangekyo Sharingan.]]
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The story has been split into three different ones, with the main series being joined by two side-series that recounts the past of Fuu (Beetle Chronicles) ([[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10266254/1/Naruto-Wind-Monk-Banishment-Beetle-Chronicles Beetle Chronicles]]) and Naruto (Fox Chronicles) ([[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10266223/1/Naruto-Wind-Monk-Banishment-Fox-Chronicles Fox Chronicles]]) prior to their meeting.
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* OneManArmy: Itachi, sick and dying, managed to take out ROOT and Danzo before doing battle with Tobi.
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* BigDamnHeroes: The Author loves throwing these in.Itachi personified.
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* ReasonableAuthorityFigure: Jiraiya, Tsunade, and Kakashi ''attempt'' this. Naruto was banished by a mistake and they searched for him for years, they know he's angry too, but he has to go back into the village because he's the Jinchuuriki and everyone from Akatsuki to other villages would be looking to get their hands on a stray one.
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* ChildhoodFriends: ''Beetle Chronicles'' reveals that Fuu and Shibuki are this to one another, due to her being the Jinchuuriki and him being the Village Leader's son at the time. They were close until an incident led to her staying out of the village, but the feelings never once wavered.
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* CoolOldGuy / LovableSexManiac: Jiraiya (Pervy Sage) and Hyoudou (Pervy Master)
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* FriendlyEnemy: Naruto and [[spoiler: Sasuke, during their first rematch. He honestly forgives Sasuke for the assassination technique through the chest and he really just wanted to be left alone.. Sasuke honestly feels bad, but he's loyal to the Sannin.]]
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* FriendlyEnemy: Naruto and [[spoiler: Sasuke, during their first rematch. He honestly forgives Sasuke for the assassination technique through the chest and he really just wanted to be left alone..alone. Sasuke honestly feels bad, but he's loyal to the Sannin.]]
* JustBetweenYouAndMe: Tobi to Sasuke, about his plans to fake Naruto's death and use Hinata as a scapegoat. He makes it clear he was going to kill them both and use that as a Murder-Suicide, but then Itachi showed up.
* OnlyFriend: Shibuki was this to Fuu when she was a child. She states to herself the only reason she didn't run away from the village and let Grass burn it down was because of him.
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* SortingAlgorithmOfEvil: While not evil per say, when it came to capturing Naruto after he pushed back Kakashi and Sasuke, Tsunade unleashed the big guns. [[spoiler: She sent The remaining Konoha 12, Yamato, Asuma, Gai, Kakashi, Jiraiya, Iruka, Shizune, and then she showed up as he went into a partial transformation.]] He never stood a chance.
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* SortingAlgorithmOfEvil: While not evil per say, when it came to capturing Naruto after he pushed back Kakashi and Sasuke, Tsunade unleashed the big guns. [[spoiler: She sent The the remaining Konoha 12, Yamato, Asuma, Gai, Kakashi, Jiraiya, Iruka, Shizune, and then she showed up as he went into a partial transformation.]] He never stood a chance.
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* UnstoppableRage: [[spoiler: Hinata nearly kills Fuu in an attempt to get rid of Naruto while they were planning a retreat and he goes to Six-Tails. Unfortunately, [[SubvertedTrope even going to eight didn't help because of the war on three fronts]] and he was defeated.]]
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* UnstoppableRage: [[spoiler: Hinata nearly kills Fuu in an attempt to get rid of Naruto while they were planning a retreat and he goes to Six-Tails. Unfortunately, [[SubvertedTrope even going to eight didn't help because of the war on three fronts]] and he was defeated.]]]]
* ViolentlyProtectiveGirlfriend: Fuu, to Naruto.
* ViolentlyProtectiveGirlfriend: Fuu, to Naruto.
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* TakingTheBullet: Sasuke for took a blow of Naruto while he was still in a coma from Hinata. He survived, but it left him in a bad shape.
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Unique in that it takes a realistic look at what actually could have led to Naruto's banishment in the aftermath of the successful Sasuke Retrieval Mission, rather than just writing it off to the entire village irrationally hating Naruto (A line that ''far'' too many fics seem to follow), and in that no characters are bashed. Even Sasuke, who is usually portrayed as some sort of {{Jerkass}} CompleteMonster in the "banishment" fic genre actually is a pretty good guy in the story. It is also one of the few stories starring Fu.
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Unique in that it takes a realistic look at what actually could have led to Naruto's banishment in the aftermath of the successful Sasuke Retrieval Mission, rather than just writing it off to the entire village irrationally hating Naruto (A line that ''far'' too many fics seem to follow), and in that no characters are bashed. Even Sasuke, who is usually portrayed as some sort of {{Jerkass}} CompleteMonster in the "banishment" fic genre actually is a pretty good guy in the story. It is also one of the few stories starring Fu.
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** Above does not convey the extent. She is to Naruto what '''canon Sasuke was to Itachi'''. It is '''that''' bad.
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Unique in that it takes a realistic look at what actually could have led to Naruto's banishment in the aftermath of the successful Sasuke Retrieval Mission, rather than just writing it off to the entire village irrationally hating Naruto (A line that ''far'' too many fics seem to follow), and in that no characters are bashed. Even Sasuke, who is usually portrayed as some sort of {{Jerkass}} CompleteMonster in the "banishment" fic genre actually is a pretty good guy in the story.
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Unique in that it takes a realistic look at what actually could have led to Naruto's banishment in the aftermath of the successful Sasuke Retrieval Mission, rather than just writing it off to the entire village irrationally hating Naruto (A line that ''far'' too many fics seem to follow), and in that no characters are bashed. Even Sasuke, who is usually portrayed as some sort of {{Jerkass}} CompleteMonster in the "banishment" fic genre actually is a pretty good guy in the story.
story. It is also one of the few stories starring Fu.
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* DoubleEntendre: A lot in the earlier battles involving Fuu and Akatsuki.
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* DoggedNiceGuy: Kiba, ironically, to Hinata.
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* DeadpanSnarker: Shino, even while giving a TheReasonYouSuckSpeech to Fuu.
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* SortingAlgorithmOfEvil: While not evil per say, when it came to capturing Naruto after he pushed back Kakashi and Sasuke, Tsunade unleashed the big guns. [[spoiler: She sent The remaining Konoha 12, Yamato, Asuma, Gai, Kakashi, Jiraiya, Iruka, Shizune, and then she showed up as he went into a partial transformation.]] He never stood a chance.
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** Itachi waited until Orochimaru ScaledUp and then attacked him from the back while he was focused on other things. Pain called out using the Box of Ultimate Bliss because having berserk men in their ranks was not pragmatic towards peace.
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** Itachi waited until Orochimaru ScaledUp and then attacked him from the back while he was focused on other things. Pain called out Tobi on using the Box of Ultimate Bliss because having berserk men in their ranks was not pragmatic towards peace.
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* BadAss: Might Gai is this, and a BareFistedMonk BadassTeacher. [[spoiler: He deals the most damage to Naruto overall in the Battle of Old Uzushio.]] Naruto even calls him the monster of Konoha.
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* PragmaticVillainy: The smarter Akatsuki members practice this. It's the reason Naruto hates it when the smart ones get away.
** Kakuzu and Sasori both attacked when they saw an opening, and retreated when things turned against their favor. Because of this, Akatsuki gained information against Naruto.
** Itachi waited until Orochimaru ScaledUp and then attacked him from the back while he was focused on other things. Pain called out using the Box of Ultimate Bliss because having berserk men in their ranks was not pragmatic towards peace.
** Kakuzu and Sasori both attacked when they saw an opening, and retreated when things turned against their favor. Because of this, Akatsuki gained information against Naruto.
** Itachi waited until Orochimaru ScaledUp and then attacked him from the back while he was focused on other things. Pain called out using the Box of Ultimate Bliss because having berserk men in their ranks was not pragmatic towards peace.
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* SteppingStonesInTheSky: Gai, using Ningame similar to canon.
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Unique in that it takes a realistic look at what actually could have led to Naruto's banishment in the aftermath of the successful Sasuke Retrieval Mission, rather than just writing it off to the entire village irrationally hating Naruto (A line that ''far'' too many fics seem to follow), and in that no characters are bashed. Even Sasuke, who is usually portrayed as some sort of {{Jerkass}} CompleteMonster in the "banishment" fic genre actually is a pretty good guy in the story.
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* BerserkButton: Calling Naruto the Kyuubi.
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* SwordBeam: Naruto, Asuma, and other Samurai.
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* BrutalHonesty: Shino pointing out how Fuu could've led to Naruto being killed by Akatsuki or Orochimaru. Dark Naruto doesn't hold back either.
* CoolOldGuy / LovableSexManiac: Jiraiya (Pervy Sage) and Hyoudou (Pervy Master)
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* FriendlyEnemy: Naruto and [[spoiler: Sasuke, during their first rematch. He honestly forgives Sasuke for the assassination technique through the chest and he really just wanted to be left alone.. Sasuke honestly feels bad, but he's loyal to the Sannin.]]
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* FriendlyEnemy: Naruto and [[spoiler: Sasuke, during their first rematch. He honestly forgives Sasuke for the assassination technique through the chest and he really just wanted to be left alone.. Sasuke honestly feels bad, but he's loyal to the Sannin.]] ]]
* GetOut: Gaara's follow up to his ReasonYouSuckSpeech to Kakashi.
* GetOut: Gaara's follow up to his ReasonYouSuckSpeech to Kakashi.
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** Orochimaru tried to give one to Jiraiya. [[ShutUpHannibal He cut his tongue off and hit him with a Rasengan]].
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* MyGreatestFailure: Hyoudou ran away and left Mifune to confront Hanzo alone, despite being older.
* OldMaster: If they're old and a shinobi, monk, or samurai, ass will be kicked.
* ReasonYouSuckSpeech: A beautiful one by Gaara to Kakashi.
* OldMaster: If they're old and a shinobi, monk, or samurai, ass will be kicked.
* ReasonYouSuckSpeech: A beautiful one by Gaara to Kakashi.
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* BigDamnHeroes: The Author loves throwing these in.
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* AdaptationalBadAss: Iruka and Asuma being the main cases.
** MurderTheHypotenuse : [[spoiler: She suggests doing this to Kanna]]
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** MurderTheHypotenuse : [[spoiler: She suggests doing this to Kanna]]
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* InSpiteOfANail: [[spoiler: Orochimaru still gets sealed by Itachi.]]
* ItIsBeyondSaving: Dark Naruto's take on the world crafted by the Sage of Six Paths.
* SealedEvilInACan: Hidan and [[spoiler: Orochimaru.]]
* ItIsBeyondSaving: Dark Naruto's take on the world crafted by the Sage of Six Paths.
* SealedEvilInACan: Hidan and [[spoiler: Orochimaru.]]
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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7934398/1/Naruto_Wind_Monk_Banishment Naruto Wind Monk Banishment]] is a Naruto fanfiction by [[ Born Of Prayers]]. Naruto is banished from Konoha by Tsunade in an attempt to secretly hand him over to Jiraiya for training while winning some political ground to deal with the [[ Almighty Council]].
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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7934398/1/Naruto_Wind_Monk_Banishment Naruto Wind Monk Banishment]] is a Naruto fanfiction by [[ [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/3452516/Born_of_Prayers Born Of Prayers]]. Naruto is banished from Konoha by Tsunade in an attempt to secretly hand him over to Jiraiya for 3 years of training while winning some political ground to deal with the [[ Almighty Council]].
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* ChildSoldiers: Cool jutsu is nice and all, until you remember the fact that they are meant to be used during war, where even 8 year olds have fought in.
* CrapsackWorld: Pointed out, numerous times.
* CurbStompBattle: The Battle of Old Uzushio. [[spoiler: Once Orochimaru and Akatsuki showed up, there was no chance in hell for Naruto to win.]]
* ItIsBeyondSaving: Dark Naruto's take on the world crafted by the Sage of Six Paths.
* CurbStompBattle: The Battle of Old Uzushio. [[spoiler: Once Orochimaru and Akatsuki showed up, there was no chance in hell for Naruto to win.]]
* ItIsBeyondSaving: Dark Naruto's take on the world crafted by the Sage of Six Paths.
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* FriendlyEnemy: Naruto and [[spoiler: Sasuke, during their first rematch. He honestly forgives Sasuke for the assassination technique through the chest. Sasuke honestly feels bad, but he's loyal to the Sannin.]] He really just wanted to be left alone.
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* FriendlyEnemy: Naruto and [[spoiler: Sasuke, during their first rematch. He honestly forgives Sasuke for the assassination technique through the chest.chest and he really just wanted to be left alone.. Sasuke honestly feels bad, but he's loyal to the Sannin.]] He really just wanted to be left alone.]]
* HannibalLecture: Dark Naruto excels at this, and best of all, never lied. [[spoiler: Dark Fuu]] is attempting this currently.
* HannibalLecture: Dark Naruto excels at this, and best of all, never lied. [[spoiler: Dark Fuu]] is attempting this currently.
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* UnstoppableRage: [[spoiler: Hinata nearly kills Fuu in an attempt to get rid of Naruto while they were planning a retreat and he goes to Six-Tails. Unfortunately, [[SubvertedTrope even going to eight didn't help because of the war on three fronts.]] and he was defeated. ]]
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* UnstoppableRage: [[spoiler: Hinata nearly kills Fuu in an attempt to get rid of Naruto while they were planning a retreat and he goes to Six-Tails. Unfortunately, [[SubvertedTrope even going to eight didn't help because of the war on three fronts.]] fronts]] and he was defeated. defeated.]]
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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7934398/1/Naruto_Wind_Monk_Banishment Naruto Wind Monk Banishment]] is a Naruto fanfiction by [[ Born Of Prayers]]. Naruto is banished from Konoha by Tsunade in an attempt to secretly hand him over to Jiraiya for training while winning some political ground to deal with the [[ Almighty Council]].
Unfortunately, she gets drunk and approved some clauses that essentially screw Naruto over, including removing his ability to use hand seals and canceling his contract with the Toads. By the time Jiraiya and Tsunade find out, he's already gone, never to be seen again until 4 years later, escorting the Wind Daimyo, Kanna.
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!!Tropes found in this fanfiction:
* BreakTheCutie: Hinata was mentally bullied until she could no longer see Naruto as anything but the Kyuubi.
* ClingyJealousGirl: [[spoiler: Dark Fuu makes Fuu out to be this.]]
** MurderTheHypotenuse : [[spoiler: She suggests doing this to Kanna]]
* {{Determinator}}: Naruto fought desperately and stood up when it would be easier to quit, but [[spoiler: he still got captured and taken back to Konoha.]]
* FriendlyEnemy: Naruto and [[spoiler: Sasuke, during their first rematch. He honestly forgives Sasuke for the assassination technique through the chest. Sasuke honestly feels bad, but he's loyal to the Sannin.]] He really just wanted to be left alone.
* ShootTheShaggyDog: Naruto's [[spoiler: Fight and Capture by Konoha ended with his new village burning down.]]
* TookALevelInJerkAss: Several characters towards Naruto, most for stupid reasons...[[BreakTheCutie Except Hinata]].
* UnstoppableRage: [[spoiler: Hinata nearly kills Fuu in an attempt to get rid of Naruto while they were planning a retreat and he goes to Six-Tails. Unfortunately, [[SubvertedTrope even going to eight didn't help because of the war on three fronts.]] and he was defeated. ]]
Unfortunately, she gets drunk and approved some clauses that essentially screw Naruto over, including removing his ability to use hand seals and canceling his contract with the Toads. By the time Jiraiya and Tsunade find out, he's already gone, never to be seen again until 4 years later, escorting the Wind Daimyo, Kanna.
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!!Tropes found in this fanfiction:
* BreakTheCutie: Hinata was mentally bullied until she could no longer see Naruto as anything but the Kyuubi.
* ClingyJealousGirl: [[spoiler: Dark Fuu makes Fuu out to be this.]]
** MurderTheHypotenuse : [[spoiler: She suggests doing this to Kanna]]
* {{Determinator}}: Naruto fought desperately and stood up when it would be easier to quit, but [[spoiler: he still got captured and taken back to Konoha.]]
* FriendlyEnemy: Naruto and [[spoiler: Sasuke, during their first rematch. He honestly forgives Sasuke for the assassination technique through the chest. Sasuke honestly feels bad, but he's loyal to the Sannin.]] He really just wanted to be left alone.
* ShootTheShaggyDog: Naruto's [[spoiler: Fight and Capture by Konoha ended with his new village burning down.]]
* TookALevelInJerkAss: Several characters towards Naruto, most for stupid reasons...[[BreakTheCutie Except Hinata]].
* UnstoppableRage: [[spoiler: Hinata nearly kills Fuu in an attempt to get rid of Naruto while they were planning a retreat and he goes to Six-Tails. Unfortunately, [[SubvertedTrope even going to eight didn't help because of the war on three fronts.]] and he was defeated. ]]
