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* ActingUnnatural: The [[spoiler: Hailey robot]] , which makes it even stranger that no one, save Beta, suspected anything.
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* TwoOfYourEarthMinutes: The [[spoiler: Hailey robot]] talks like this, which makes it even stranger that no one, save Beta, suspected anything.
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** the Hailey characters wonder how the letters from Gretel's various [[CallingYourAttacks "(insert word) punch!"]] manage to stay up in the air.
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** the The Hailey characters wonder how the letters from Gretel's various [[CallingYourAttacks "(insert word) punch!"]] manage to stay up in the air.
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* RiddleForTheAges: Who found out about Hailey's list and posted it on the Internet?
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During another typical day in Oceanview, Hailey Banks meets a man who offers her fro-yo from her cart, but who ends up gassing her. She wakes up and finds the purple clad man knows of her list and plans to hold her prisoner to prevent her from finishing it, then swoop in and save the day himself as part of a scheme to TakeOverTheWorld. As luck would have it, a teenager has arrived in town to collect some comics from Scott, and just happens to have a younger sister and pet who are superheroes, who may end up saving the day...
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During another typical day in Oceanview, Hailey Banks meets a man who offers her fro-yo from her his cart, but who ends up gassing her. She wakes up and finds the purple clad man knows of her list and plans to hold her prisoner to prevent her from finishing it, then swoop in and save the day himself as part of a scheme to TakeOverTheWorld. As luck would have it, a teenager has arrived in town to collect some comics from Scott, and just happens to have a younger sister and pet who are superheroes, who may end up saving the day...
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** The fact that the last of said comics Scott wanted to sell Kevin happened to be located in Hailey's room, allowing the ''Hamster & Gretel'' cast the chance to meet Beta and set off her rescue.
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** The fact that the last of said comics Scott wanted to sell to Kevin happened to be located in Hailey's room, allowing the ''Hamster & Gretel'' cast the chance to meet Beta Beta, which eventually leads to them setting out to rescue her.
** Someone somehow learning about Hailey's list and putting the info on the Internet, allowing Professor Exclamation to learn of her and setoff in motion the whole story.
* DefiantCaptive: Hailey spends the early part of herrescue.captivity insulting her captor and trying to convince him to let her go.
** Someone somehow learning about Hailey's list and putting the info on the Internet, allowing Professor Exclamation to learn of her and set
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* ImStandingRightHere: After Hailey is surprised to hear Hamster talk, Gretel tells her that "you get used to him after awhile"; Hamster then tells her to not act like he isn't there.
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* ImStandingRightHere: After Hailey is surprised to hear Hamster talk, Gretel tells her that "you get used to him after awhile"; Hamster then tells replies by telling her to not act like he isn't there.
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* SecretKeeper:[[spoiler: Hailey and crew become one for Gretel & Hamster, learning their secret identities and agreeing to not tell anyone else.]]
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* SecretKeeper:[[spoiler: Hailey and crew become one for Gretel & Hamster, Hamster after learning their secret identities and agreeing to not tell anyone else.identities.]]
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* TwoOfYourEarthMinutes: The [[spoiler: Hailey robot]] talks like this, which makes it even stranger that no one suspected anything.
* UnusuallyUninterestingSight: None of the ''Hamster & Gretel'' cast find Beta all that strange, simply assuming he's some kind of talking toy, even after he addresses Scott directly and acts in no way like a toy of any kind.
* UnusuallyUninterestingSight: None of the ''Hamster & Gretel'' cast find Beta all that strange, simply assuming he's some kind of talking toy, even after he addresses Scott directly and acts in no way like a toy of any kind.
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* TwoOfYourEarthMinutes: The [[spoiler: Hailey robot]] talks like this, which makes it even stranger that no one one, save Beta, suspected anything.
* UnusuallyUninterestingSight: None of the ''Hamster & Gretel'' cast find Beta all that strange, simply assuming he's some kind of talking toy, even after he addresses Scott directly andacts in no way like a toy of any kind. talks about things they don't understand.
* UnusuallyUninterestingSight: None of the ''Hamster & Gretel'' cast find Beta all that strange, simply assuming he's some kind of talking toy, even after he addresses Scott directly and
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* ImStandingRightHere: After Hailey is surprised to hear Hamster talk, Gretel tells her that you get used to him after awhile, with Hamster telling her to not pretend like he isn't there.
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* ImStandingRightHere: After Hailey is surprised to hear Hamster talk, Gretel tells her that you "you get used to him after awhile, with awhile"; Hamster telling then tells her to not pretend act like he isn't there. there.
* ImmediateSelfContradiction: After realizing whoever kidnapped Hailey has the ability to create [[spoiler: lifelike robots]], Beta comments they must be as smart as he is, then changes his mind and claims otherwise.
* ImmediateSelfContradiction: After realizing whoever kidnapped Hailey has the ability to create [[spoiler: lifelike robots]], Beta comments they must be as smart as he is, then changes his mind and claims otherwise.
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* RaceAgainstTheClock: The gang have 15 minutes to rescue Hailey and have her finish an item on her list, or a permanent time glitch will occur.
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* UnusuallyUninterestingSight: None of the ''Hamster & Gretel'' cast find Beta all that strange, simply assuming he's some kind of talking toy, even after he addresses Scott directly and acts in no way like a toy of any kind.
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* ContrivedCoincidence: The fact that Kevin drove all the way from wherever it is he lives to California just to get some comics. Gretel actually [[LampshadeHanging points this out]], noting he could have them mailed, but Kevin felt they were too valuable for that.
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* ContrivedCoincidence: The fact that Kevin drove all the way from [[WhereTheHellIsSpringfield wherever it is he lives lives]] to California just to get some comics. Gretel actually [[LampshadeHanging points this out]], noting he could have them mailed, but Kevin felt they were too valuable for that.
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* ImStandingRightHere: After Hailey is surprised to hear Hamster talk, Gretel tells her that you get used to him after awhile, with Hamster telling her to not pretend like he isn't there.
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* ParrotExpowhat: When Beta identifies a time glitch, Kevin immediately asks "time what now?"
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* TemptingFate: After Professor Exclamation refuses to let Gretel leave with Hailey, she asks him "you and what army?" is going to stop her, before a bunch of his robots come in. Gretel immediately realizes she shouldn't have said that.
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* BlatantLies: After Hamster & Gretel's identities are revealed, Kevin remembers that Beta claimed moments earlier he was a sophisticated AI from the future and asks him to repeat himself; Beta immediately denies saying that.
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* BlatantLies: After Hamster & Gretel's identities are revealed, Kevin remembers that Beta claimed moments earlier he was a sophisticated AI from the future and asks him to repeat himself; Beta immediately denies saying he ever said that.
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* EverythingIsRacist: After being told about Hailey, Kevin suggests that maybe she was kidnapped by [[a robot that was sent back in time by a super computer that enslaved the entire human race Film/TheTerminator.]] Beta immediately dismisses that claim and the assumption that all computers from the future are evil and claims Kevin is "robotist" (racist against machines) which he insists is a thing.
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* EverythingIsRacist: After being told about Hailey, Kevin suggests that maybe she was kidnapped by [[a [[Film/TheTerminator a robot that was sent back in time by a super computer that enslaved the entire human race Film/TheTerminator.race.]] Beta immediately dismisses that claim and the assumption that all computers from the future are evil and claims Kevin is "robotist" (racist against machines) which he insists is a thing.
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* BrickJoke: The letters from one of Gretel's [[CallingYourAttacks"(insert word) punch!"]] end up hanging in the air, (as they do on her show), when in Hailey's room. Later, after rescuing Hailey, Gretel mentions the letters are still there, to Hailey's surprise.
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* BrickJoke: The letters from one of Gretel's [[CallingYourAttacks"(insert [[CallingYourAttacks "(insert word) punch!"]] end up hanging in the air, (as they do on her show), when in Hailey's room. Later, after rescuing Hailey, Gretel mentions the letters are still there, to Hailey's surprise.
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* BondOneLiner: [[DiscussedTrope Discussed]] by Scott when they are trying to [[spoiler: disable Professor Exclamation's giant radar dish]] and suggests Hailey do one, which she eventually does.
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* BlatantLies: After Hamster & Gretel's identities are revealed, Kevin remembers that Beta claimed moments earlier he was a sophisticated AI from the future and asks him to repeat himself; Beta immediately denies saying that.
* BondOneLiner: [[DiscussedTrope Discussed]] by Scott when they are trying to [[spoiler: disable Professor Exclamation's giant radar dish]] and suggests that Hailey do one,which feeling the situation calls for it. Eventually, she eventually does. does.
* BondOneLiner: [[DiscussedTrope Discussed]] by Scott when they are trying to [[spoiler: disable Professor Exclamation's giant radar dish]] and suggests that Hailey do one,
* BrickJoke: The letters from one of Gretel's [[CallingYourAttacks"(insert word) punch!"]] end up hanging in the air, (as they do on her show), when in Hailey's room. Later, after rescuing Hailey, Gretel mentions the letters are still there, to Hailey's surprise.
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* EverythingIsRacist: After hearing about Hailey's situation, Kevin makes a comparison to the events of ''Film/TheTerminator.'' Beta then claims that future Artificial Intelligences are not all evil and that Kevin is "roboticist" (racist against robots) which he insists is a thing.
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* EverythingIsRacist: After hearing being told about Hailey's situation, Hailey, Kevin makes suggests that maybe she was kidnapped by [[a robot that was sent back in time by a comparison to super computer that enslaved the events of ''Film/TheTerminator.'' entire human race Film/TheTerminator.]] Beta then claims immediately dismisses that claim and the assumption that all computers from the future Artificial Intelligences are not all evil and that claims Kevin is "roboticist" "robotist" (racist against robots) machines) which he insists is a thing.
** the Hailey characters wonder how the letters from Gretel's various [[CallingYourAttacks "(insert word) punch!"]] manage to stay up in the air.
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* ShoutOut: Upon hearing of how Hailey is going to save the future, Kevin compares it to the plot of ''Film/TheTerminator.''
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* ShoutOut: Upon hearing of how Kevin's theory on who could've kidnapped Hailey is going to save the future, Kevin compares it to the plot of based on ''Film/TheTerminator.''
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* BigDamnHeroes: Just when it looks like Hamster & Gretel are going to be destroyed, Hailey, Scott & Beta end up saving the day.
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* BigDamnHeroes: Just when it looks like Hamster & Gretel are going to be destroyed, [[spoiler: Hailey, Scott & Beta end up saving unplug the day. device that is keeping them immobilized.]]
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* TheCameo: Kristine appears in Chapter 3, and recognizes Kevin from his viral videos from [[WesternAnimation/HamsterAndGretel his series.]]
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* TheCameo: Kristine appears in Chapter 3, and recognizes recognizing Kevin from his viral videos from [[WesternAnimation/HamsterAndGretel his series.]]
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** Gretel doesn't want Kevin to be interviewed by Kristine, as she is still wary of online influencers due to her issues with Belle in "For Whom the Belle Trolls."
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** Gretel doesn't want Kevin to be interviewed by Kristine, as she is still wary of online influencers due to her issues encounter with Belle in "For Whom the Belle Trolls."
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* OffWithHisHead: The [[spoiler: Hailey robot]] is defeated when Gretel punches it's head off.
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* OffWithHisHead: The [[spoiler: Hailey robot]] is defeated when Gretel punches it's its head off.
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* RidiculouslyHumanRobots: [[spoiler: Professor Exclamation makes one of Hailey to distract her friends from coming to look for her, which fools them until Beta meets it.]]
* SecretKeeper:[[spoiler: Hailey and crew are one for Gretel & Hamster, learning their secret identities and offering to keep them secret from others.]]
* ShoutOut: Upon hearing of Hailey's situation, Kevin compares it to ''Film/TheTerminator.''
* SecretKeeper:[[spoiler: Hailey and crew are one for Gretel & Hamster, learning their secret identities and offering to keep them secret from others.]]
* ShoutOut: Upon hearing of Hailey's situation, Kevin compares it to ''Film/TheTerminator.''
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* RidiculouslyHumanRobots: [[spoiler: Professor Exclamation makes one of Hailey to distract her friends from coming to look for her, which fools them her; it works up until Beta meets it.it encounters Beta, who can immediately tell it's a fake.]]
* SecretKeeper:[[spoiler: Hailey and creware become one for Gretel & Hamster, learning their secret identities and offering agreeing to keep them secret from others.not tell anyone else.]]
* ShoutOut: Upon hearing ofHailey's situation, how Hailey is going to save the future, Kevin compares it to the plot of ''Film/TheTerminator.''
* SecretKeeper:[[spoiler: Hailey and crew
* ShoutOut: Upon hearing of
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** The fact that the last of said comics Scott wanted to sell Kevin happened to be located in Hailey's room, allowing the ''Hamster & Gretel'' cast the chance to meet Beta and set off her rescue.
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* FailedAttemptAtDrama: When Professor Exclamation introduces himself to Hailey, he tries to cap off his introduction with a dramatic sting, only for his robot aide Tobor to not activate it, thereby ruining his whole evil vibe.
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* FailedAttemptAtDrama: When Professor Exclamation introduces himself to Hailey, he tries to cap off his introduction with a dramatic sting, only for his robot aide Tobor to not fail to activate it, it in time, thereby ruining his whole evil vibe.entrance.
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* FantasticallyIndifferent / SeenItAll: [[ZigZaggedTrope zig zagged]] Hailey has seen a lot of weird stuff in her dealings with the future, so she's not too surprised to find a young girl superhero rescuing her, though she is surprised to find she's from the present. However, the talking hamster was quite a shock.
* HeroWorshipper: Gretel becomes one to Hailey after learning about her list and eventually saving the future. As she points out to Kevin, she only saves their city, but Hailey is going to save the entire world.
* HeroWorshipper: Gretel becomes one to Hailey after learning about her list and eventually saving the future. As she points out to Kevin, she only saves their city, but Hailey is going to save the entire world.
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* FantasticallyIndifferent / SeenItAll: [[ZigZaggedTrope zig zagged]] zagged]]- Hailey has seen a lot of weird stuff in her dealings with the future, so she's not too surprised to find a young girl superhero rescuing her, though she is surprised to find she's from the present. However, the talking hamster was quite is a bit of a shock.
* HeroWorshipper: Gretel becomes one to Hailey after learning about her list and eventually saving the future. As she points out to Kevin, she only saves their city, but Hailey is going to save the entireworld.world and do it without superpowers.
* HeroWorshipper: Gretel becomes one to Hailey after learning about her list and eventually saving the future. As she points out to Kevin, she only saves their city, but Hailey is going to save the entire
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* LampshadeHanging: Used by the characters several times.
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* LampshadeHanging: Used by Several times, most notably when Gretel wonders why they had to drive all the characters several times.way to California for comics instead of just having them mailed.
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* Phletonium Breakdown: The reason why the gang couldn't simply locate Hailey via Beta tracing the signal from her bracelet, is that Professor Exclamation was using a large satellite dish to block Beta's scans.
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* Phletonium Breakdown: The reason why the gang couldn't simply locate PhlebotinumBreakdown: Normally, Beta would find where Hailey via Beta tracing was taken by scanning for the signal frequency from her bracelet, is but that was being blocked due to Professor Exclamation was using a large satellite dish to block Beta's scans. Exclamation.
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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/14275585/1/When-Hailey-met-Gretel When Hailey Met Gretel]] is a story by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/~owenfan01 [=Owenfan01=]]] a crossover between ''WesternAnimation/HamsterAndGretel'' & ''WesternAnimation/HaileysOnIt.''
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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/14275585/1/When-Hailey-met-Gretel When Hailey Met Gretel]] is a story by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/~owenfan01 [[Creator/{{Cartoonofan}} [=Owenfan01=]]] a crossover between ''WesternAnimation/HamsterAndGretel'' & ''WesternAnimation/HaileysOnIt.''
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* BondOneLiner: [[DiscussedTrope Discussed]] by Scott when they are trying to [[spoiler: disable Professor Exclamation's giant radar dish]] and suggests Hailey do one, which she eventually does.
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* TheCameo: Kristine appears in Chapter 3, and recognizes Kevin from his Internet videos from [[WesternAnimation/HamsterAndGretel his series.]]
** Fred appears via phone in the fifth chapter to help the gang locate Hailey. If there's a sequel, both will be more prominent.
** Fred appears via phone in the fifth chapter to help the gang locate Hailey. If there's a sequel, both will be more prominent.
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* TheCameo: Kristine appears in Chapter 3, and recognizes Kevin from his Internet viral videos from [[WesternAnimation/HamsterAndGretel his series.]]
** Fred appears via phone in the fifth chapter to use her computer skills to help the gang locate Hailey.If WordOfGod is, if there's a sequel, both will be more prominent.
** Fred appears via phone in the fifth chapter to use her computer skills to help the gang locate Hailey.
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** Kristine recognizes Kevin from his embarrassing "Balloon Boy" video and his "Opposite of Smart" Internet series, both of which are from
** Gretel doesn't want Kevin to be interviewed by Kristine, as she still wary of online influencers due to her incident with Belle in "For Whom the Belle Trolls."
* ContrivedCoincidence: The fact that Kevin drove all the way from wherever it is he lives to California just to get some comics. Gretel actually points this out, noting he could have them mailed, but Kevin felt they were too valuable for that.
* EverythingIsRacist: After hearing about Hailey's situation, Kevin makes a comparison to the events of ''Film/TheTerminator.'' Beta then claims that future Artificial Intelligences are not all evil and that he is "roboticist" (racist against robots) which he insists is a thing.
** Gretel doesn't want Kevin to be interviewed by Kristine, as she still wary of online influencers due to her incident with Belle in "For Whom the Belle Trolls."
* ContrivedCoincidence: The fact that Kevin drove all the way from wherever it is he lives to California just to get some comics. Gretel actually points this out, noting he could have them mailed, but Kevin felt they were too valuable for that.
* EverythingIsRacist: After hearing about Hailey's situation, Kevin makes a comparison to the events of ''Film/TheTerminator.'' Beta then claims that future Artificial Intelligences are not all evil and that he is "roboticist" (racist against robots) which he insists is a thing.
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** Kristine recognizes Kevin from his embarrassing "Balloon Boy" viral video ("Recipe for Disaster") and his "Opposite of Smart" Internet series, both videos ("The Opposite of which are from
Smart")
** Gretel doesn't want Kevin to be interviewed by Kristine, as she is still wary of online influencers due to herincident issues with Belle in "For Whom the Belle Trolls."
* ContrivedCoincidence: The fact that Kevin drove all the way from wherever it is he lives to California just to get some comics. Gretel actually [[LampshadeHanging points thisout, out]], noting he could have them mailed, but Kevin felt they were too valuable for that.
* EverythingIsRacist: After hearing about Hailey's situation, Kevin makes a comparison to the events of ''Film/TheTerminator.'' Beta then claims that future Artificial Intelligences are not all evil and thathe Kevin is "roboticist" (racist against robots) which he insists is a thing.
** Gretel doesn't want Kevin to be interviewed by Kristine, as she is still wary of online influencers due to her
* ContrivedCoincidence: The fact that Kevin drove all the way from wherever it is he lives to California just to get some comics. Gretel actually [[LampshadeHanging points this
* EverythingIsRacist: After hearing about Hailey's situation, Kevin makes a comparison to the events of ''Film/TheTerminator.'' Beta then claims that future Artificial Intelligences are not all evil and that
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* FamedInStory: Having appeared in a few Internet videos, Kristine manages to recognize Kevin soon after meeting him and wants to interview him for her webshow.
* FantasticallyIndifferent / SeenItAll: [[ZigZagTrope zig zagged]] Hailey has seen a lot of weird stuff in her dealings with the future, so she's not too surprised to find a young girl superhero rescuing her, though she is surprised to find she's from the present. However, the talking hamster legitimately is surprising to her.
* FantasticallyIndifferent / SeenItAll: [[ZigZagTrope zig zagged]] Hailey has seen a lot of weird stuff in her dealings with the future, so she's not too surprised to find a young girl superhero rescuing her, though she is surprised to find she's from the present. However, the talking hamster legitimately is surprising to her.
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* FamedInStory: Having appeared in a few Internet Due to his past viral videos, Kristine manages to recognize Kevin soon after meeting him and wants to interview him for her webshow.
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* FantasticallyIndifferent / SeenItAll:[[ZigZagTrope [[ZigZaggedTrope zig zagged]] Hailey has seen a lot of weird stuff in her dealings with the future, so she's not too surprised to find a young girl superhero rescuing her, though she is surprised to find she's from the present. However, the talking hamster legitimately is surprising to her. was quite a shock.
* FantasticallyIndifferent / SeenItAll:
* LampshadeHanging: Used by the characters several times.
* NotWorthKilling: Well, not "kill" exactly, but after Hailey escapes his clutches, Professor Exclamation sees no need to recapture her, figuring she can't stop his plan now anyway. [[spoiler: He turns out to be very wrong.]]
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* SuspiciouslySpecificDenial: When Hailey is telling Professor Exclamation how she's confident that Scott & Beta will come to save her since they care about her, she also adds that it's in a totally platonic way [[BlatantLies and she doesn't have feelings for Scott and is so glad he is dating Kristine.]]
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* ShoutOut: Upon hearing of Hailey's situation, Kevin compares it to ''Film/TheTerminator.''
* SuspiciouslySpecificDenial: When Hailey is telling Professor Exclamation how she's confident that Scott & Beta will come to save her since they care about her, she also adds that it's in a totally platonic way [[BlatantLies and she doesn't have feelings for Scott and isso glad ''so glad'' he is dating Kristine.]]
* SuspiciouslySpecificDenial: When Hailey is telling Professor Exclamation how she's confident that Scott & Beta will come to save her since they care about her, she also adds that it's in a totally platonic way [[BlatantLies and she doesn't have feelings for Scott and is
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* TwoOfYourEarthMinutes: The [[spoiler: Hailey robot]] talks like this, which makes it weird no one suspected anything earlier.
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* TwoOfYourEarthMinutes: The [[spoiler: Hailey robot]] talks like this, which makes it weird even stranger that no one suspected anything earlier. anything.
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* BigBad: Professor Exclamation, one of Hamster & Gretel's regular enemies, is the one responsible for kidnapping Hailey.
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* ContrivedCoincidence: The fact that Kevin drove all the way from wherever it is he lives to California just to get some comics.
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* TheCameo: Kristine appears in Chapter 3, and recognizes Kevin from his Internet videos from [[WesternAnimation/HamsterAndGretel his series.]]
** Fred appears via phone in the fifth chapter to help the gang locate Hailey. If there's a sequel, both will be more prominent.
* ContinuityNod:
** Kristine recognizes Kevin from his embarrassing "Balloon Boy" video and his "Opposite of Smart" Internet series, both of which are from
** Gretel doesn't want Kevin to be interviewed by Kristine, as she still wary of online influencers due to her incident with Belle in "For Whom the Belle Trolls."
* ContrivedCoincidence: The fact that Kevin drove all the way from wherever it is he lives to California just to get some comics. Gretel actually points this out, noting he could have them mailed, but Kevin felt they were too valuable for that.
* EverythingIsRacist: After hearing about Hailey's situation, Kevin makes a comparison to the events of ''Film/TheTerminator.'' Beta then claims that future Artificial Intelligences are not all evil and that he is "roboticist" (racist against robots) which he insists is a thing.
** Fred appears via phone in the fifth chapter to help the gang locate Hailey. If there's a sequel, both will be more prominent.
* ContinuityNod:
** Kristine recognizes Kevin from his embarrassing "Balloon Boy" video and his "Opposite of Smart" Internet series, both of which are from
** Gretel doesn't want Kevin to be interviewed by Kristine, as she still wary of online influencers due to her incident with Belle in "For Whom the Belle Trolls."
* ContrivedCoincidence: The fact that Kevin drove all the way from wherever it is he lives to California just to get some comics. Gretel actually points this out, noting he could have them mailed, but Kevin felt they were too valuable for that.
* EverythingIsRacist: After hearing about Hailey's situation, Kevin makes a comparison to the events of ''Film/TheTerminator.'' Beta then claims that future Artificial Intelligences are not all evil and that he is "roboticist" (racist against robots) which he insists is a thing.
* FamedInStory: Having appeared in a few Internet videos, Kristine manages to recognize Kevin soon after meeting him and wants to interview him for her webshow.
* OffWithHisHead: The [[spoiler: Hailey robot]] is defeated when Gretel punches it's head off.
* Phletonium Breakdown: The reason why the gang couldn't simply locate Hailey via Beta tracing the signal from her bracelet, is that Professor Exclamation was using a large satellite dish to block Beta's scans.
* Phletonium Breakdown: The reason why the gang couldn't simply locate Hailey via Beta tracing the signal from her bracelet, is that Professor Exclamation was using a large satellite dish to block Beta's scans.
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* TemptingFate: Admittedly, Hailey does think there is something wrong with someone just offering her fro-yo, but quickly dismisses it.
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* TemptingFate: Admittedly, SuspiciouslySpecificDenial: When Hailey does think there is something wrong with telling Professor Exclamation how she's confident that Scott & Beta will come to save her since they care about her, she also adds that it's in a totally platonic way [[BlatantLies and she doesn't have feelings for Scott and is so glad he is dating Kristine.]]
** After Gretel transforms to stop [[spoiler: the Hailey robot]] she immediately returns to normal and tries to pass off her superhero alter ego as someonejust offering her fro-yo, but quickly dismisses it.else. Beta isn't fooled.
* TwoOfYourEarthMinutes: The [[spoiler: Hailey robot]] talks like this, which makes it weird no one suspected anything earlier.
** After Gretel transforms to stop [[spoiler: the Hailey robot]] she immediately returns to normal and tries to pass off her superhero alter ego as someone
* TwoOfYourEarthMinutes: The [[spoiler: Hailey robot]] talks like this, which makes it weird no one suspected anything earlier.
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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/14275585/1/When-Hailey-met-Gretel When Hailey Met Gretel]] is a story by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/~owenfan01[=Owenfan01=]]] a crossover between ''WesternAnimation/HamsterAndGretel'' & ''WesternAnimation/HaileysOnIt.''
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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/14275585/1/When-Hailey-met-Gretel When Hailey Met Gretel]] is a story by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/~owenfan01[=Owenfan01=]]] net/~owenfan01 [=Owenfan01=]]] a crossover between ''WesternAnimation/HamsterAndGretel'' & ''WesternAnimation/HaileysOnIt.''
* BigDamnHeroes: Just when it looks like Hamster & Gretel are going to be destroyed, Hailey, Scott & Beta end up saving the day.
* FantasticallyIndifferent / SeenItAll: [[ZigZagTrope zig zagged]] Hailey has seen a lot of weird stuff in her dealings with the future, so she's not too surprised to find a young girl superhero rescuing her, though she is surprised to find she's from the present. However, the talking hamster legitimately is surprising to her.
* HeroWorshipper: Gretel becomes one to Hailey after learning about her list and eventually saving the future. As she points out to Kevin, she only saves their city, but Hailey is going to save the entire world.
* HeroWorshipper: Gretel becomes one to Hailey after learning about her list and eventually saving the future. As she points out to Kevin, she only saves their city, but Hailey is going to save the entire world.
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* RidiculouslyHumanRobots: [[spoiler: Professor Exclamation makes one of Hailey to distract her friends from coming to look for her, which fools them until Beta meets it.]]
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* MundaneSolution: To stop Professor Exclamation's giant radar dish beam, [[spoiler: Hailey and company simply unplug it.]]
* RidiculouslyHumanRobots: [[spoiler: Professor Exclamation makes one of Hailey to distract her friends from coming to look for her, which fools them until Beta meets it.]]]]
* SecretKeeper:[[spoiler: Hailey and crew are one for Gretel & Hamster, learning their secret identities and offering to keep them secret from others.]]
* RidiculouslyHumanRobots: [[spoiler: Professor Exclamation makes one of Hailey to distract her friends from coming to look for her, which fools them until Beta meets it.
* SecretKeeper:[[spoiler: Hailey and crew are one for Gretel & Hamster, learning their secret identities and offering to keep them secret from others.]]
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* WouldHurtAChild: Like normal, Professor Exclamation had no problem trying to destroy Gretel.
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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/14275585/1/When-Hailey-met-Gretel When Hailey Met Gretel]] is a story by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/65342/{{Owenfan1}}]] a crossover between ''WesternAnimation/HamsterAndGretel'' & ''WesternAnimation/HaileysOnIt.''
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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/14275585/1/When-Hailey-met-Gretel When Hailey Met Gretel]] is a story by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/65342/{{Owenfan1}}]] net/~owenfan01[=Owenfan01=]]] a crossover between ''WesternAnimation/HamsterAndGretel'' & ''WesternAnimation/HaileysOnIt.''
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* ContrivedCoincidence: The fact that Kevin drove all the way from [[WhereInTheHeckIsSpringfield wherever it is he lives]] to California just to get some comics.
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* ContrivedCoincidence: The fact that Kevin drove all the way from [[WhereInTheHeckIsSpringfield wherever it is he lives]] lives to California just to get some comics.
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* KnockoutGas: Used to capture Hailey, when she goes digging in a fro-yo cart.
* RidiculouslyHumanRobots: [[spoiler: Professor Exclamation makes one of Hailey to distract her friends from coming to look for her, which fools them until Beta meets it.]]
* TemptingFate: Admittedly, Hailey does think there is something wrong with someone just offering her fro-yo, but quickly dismisses it.
* RidiculouslyHumanRobots: [[spoiler: Professor Exclamation makes one of Hailey to distract her friends from coming to look for her, which fools them until Beta meets it.]]
* TemptingFate: Admittedly, Hailey does think there is something wrong with someone just offering her fro-yo, but quickly dismisses it.
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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/14275585/1/When-Hailey-met-Gretel When Hailey Met Gretel]] is a story by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/65342/Owenfan1]] a crossover between ''WesternAnimation/HamsterAndGretel'' & ''WesternAnimation/HaileysOnIt.''
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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/14275585/1/When-Hailey-met-Gretel When Hailey Met Gretel]] is a story by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/65342/Owenfan1]] net/u/65342/{{Owenfan1}}]] a crossover between ''WesternAnimation/HamsterAndGretel'' & ''WesternAnimation/HaileysOnIt.''''
During another typical day in Oceanview, Hailey Banks meets a man who offers her fro-yo from her cart, but who ends up gassing her. She wakes up and finds the purple clad man knows of her list and plans to hold her prisoner to prevent her from finishing it, then swoop in and save the day himself as part of a scheme to TakeOverTheWorld. As luck would have it, a teenager has arrived in town to collect some comics from Scott, and just happens to have a younger sister and pet who are superheroes, who may end up saving the day...
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* BoundAndGagged: Hailey spends most of the story like this.
* ContrivedCoincidence: The fact that Kevin drove all the way from [[WhereInTheHeckIsSpringfield wherever it is he lives]] to California just to get some comics.
* FailedAttemptAtDrama: When Professor Exclamation introduces himself to Hailey, he tries to cap off his introduction with a dramatic sting, only for his robot aide Tobor to not activate it, thereby ruining his whole evil vibe.
* YouMonster: Hailey uses this word for word after realizing Professor Exclamation used fro-yo to trick her.
During another typical day in Oceanview, Hailey Banks meets a man who offers her fro-yo from her cart, but who ends up gassing her. She wakes up and finds the purple clad man knows of her list and plans to hold her prisoner to prevent her from finishing it, then swoop in and save the day himself as part of a scheme to TakeOverTheWorld. As luck would have it, a teenager has arrived in town to collect some comics from Scott, and just happens to have a younger sister and pet who are superheroes, who may end up saving the day...
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!!This story contains examples of:
* BoundAndGagged: Hailey spends most of the story like this.
* ContrivedCoincidence: The fact that Kevin drove all the way from [[WhereInTheHeckIsSpringfield wherever it is he lives]] to California just to get some comics.
* FailedAttemptAtDrama: When Professor Exclamation introduces himself to Hailey, he tries to cap off his introduction with a dramatic sting, only for his robot aide Tobor to not activate it, thereby ruining his whole evil vibe.
* YouMonster: Hailey uses this word for word after realizing Professor Exclamation used fro-yo to trick her.
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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/14275585/1/When-Hailey-met-Gretel When Hailey Met Gretel]] is a story by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/65342/Owenfan1]] a crossover between ''WesternAnimation/HamsterAndGretel'' & ''WesternAnimation/HaileysOnIt.''
