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* {{Cameo}}: Neo and Roman have an appearance in chapter three. Where they engage in a brief scuffle with Ruby and Yang.
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* {{Cameo}}: TheCameo: Neo and Roman have an appearance in chapter three. Where they engage in a brief scuffle with Ruby and Yang.
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''Wayward'' is a WebAnimation/{{RWBY}} AlternateUniverse fanfiction by [=Samuel412=] taking place on Earth. Ruby and Yang are people with special abilities known as Aberrants or Post-Human. Aberrants are regard as threats to the public who are hunted down and killed. Ruby and Yang are on the run from the authorities being led by Coronel James Ironwood.
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''Wayward'' is was a WebAnimation/{{RWBY}} AlternateUniverse fanfiction by [=Samuel412=] taking place on Earth. Ruby and Yang are people with special abilities known as Aberrants or Post-Human. Aberrants are regard as threats to the public who are hunted down and killed. Ruby and Yang are on the run from the authorities being led by Coronel James Ironwood.
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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13830695/1/Wayward Fanfiction story link]]
[[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/1179886/Samuel412 Fanfiction author page link]]
[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/29773878/chapters/73243110 Archive of Our Own story link]]
[[https://archiveofourown.org/users/Samuel412/pseuds/Samuel412 Archive of Our Own author page link]]
[[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/1179886/Samuel412 Fanfiction author page link]]
[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/29773878/chapters/73243110 Archive of Our Own story link]]
[[https://archiveofourown.org/users/Samuel412/pseuds/Samuel412 Archive of Our Own author page link]]
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This or these examples of Surprisingly Realistic Outcome seem to violate at least one of these rules, which disqualifies them: No character reactions (characters get angry, don't forgive, don't change their personality instantly, etc.); Too fantastical (depends on the properties of magic, powers, sci-fi tech, monsters, etc.); Not surprising (a character was warned about the outcome, it's used to provide Karma or An Aesop, or it simply follows normal conventions for this genre or medium); Plot happens (the example only describes an event, but not why audiences would expect a different, unrealistic outcome); Not an outcome (a character just explains why something wouldn't work as expected, or something is just an innate aspect of the setting or character that has a logical reason for being present); More of a Deconstruction (the event has major, lasting effects on the plot, make something more realistic, but not completely realistic, or a parody/fanwork applies realistic consequences to the events of a different work); or fits better under a different trope. See the trope's definition for more details. If you believe a removal was a mistake, please bring it up in the cleanup thread
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* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome:
** Qrow goes out into the open with little cover and with Tai’s help takes out the police taskforce but not before taking a number of shots himself.
** Because Ruby decided to [[spoiler:kill a whole SWAT team every law enforcement in Detroit is after her and Yang.]]
** Qrow goes out into the open with little cover and with Tai’s help takes out the police taskforce but not before taking a number of shots himself.
** Because Ruby decided to [[spoiler:kill a whole SWAT team every law enforcement in Detroit is after her and Yang.]]
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* ItsPersonal: Taking down Cinder is a vendetta for Pyrrha as the former killed the latter's close friend, Amber.
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** Summer, Tai, Raven and Qrow hit the site to gather an insurance policy.
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* TheEmpath: Qrow’s ability allowed him to project his negative emotions into those surrounding him to a dangerous effect. And it doesn’t discriminate. He uses it to devastating effect on a police taskforce.
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* TheEmpath: Qrow’s ability allowed him to project his negative emotions into those surrounding him to a dangerous effect. And it doesn’t discriminate. He uses it to a devastating effect on a police taskforce.
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* LeaveNoSurvivors: With the SWAT team that came after [[spoiler:her and Yang at the Cash Mart, Ruby]] decides to kill all of them, even one that decided to run away.
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* LeaveNoSurvivors: LeaveNoSurvivors:
** With the SWAT team that came after [[spoiler:her and Yang at the Cash Mart, Ruby]] decides to kill all of them, even one that decided to runaway.away.
** In ''Down In A Hole'' Summer, Tai, Raven and Qrow sneak into a BlackSite to gather an insurance policy and kill anyone who sees them so no one will know that they were there.
** With the SWAT team that came after [[spoiler:her and Yang at the Cash Mart, Ruby]] decides to kill all of them, even one that decided to run
** In ''Down In A Hole'' Summer, Tai, Raven and Qrow sneak into a BlackSite to gather an insurance policy and kill anyone who sees them so no one will know that they were there.
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* AnArmAndALeg: After failing to heed Blake’s warnings, Cinder gets her finger’s blown off.
** Cinder is also in the same boat. If anything, she is worse. Going so far as to lick the GRIMM substance of the ground.
* DrunkWithPower: Cinder is a junkie who after taking GRIMM could never get the high from anything else she took so she keeps taking it. She also gets a high off of stealing other Post-Human abilities.
* LackOfEmpathy: Enforced by Ren. His ability is to make it so people don’t care about a general area or certain people to the point that his targets could be considered invisible.
* LetsYouAndHimFight: For some reason Atlas setup Blake and Weiss to fight Cinder. However, they quickly put a stop to it after Blake keeps Cinder from taking GRIMM, by shooting the syringe in her hands, to keep the former form killing the latter.
* PowerParasite: The ability that Cinder gains from taking GRIMM is to steal the powers of those she kills and she keeps those powers and can use them every time she takes GRIMM.
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* ProfessionalKiller: Cinder, a former junkie, became a killer presumably for Atlas and is given the GRIMM drug to do so.
* SkewedPriorities:
** Ironwood thinks the worker at the gas station should be checked for meth to bust him on something despite the real situation being that Ruby and Yang trashed the store.
** Cinder has her finger’s blown off but she cares more about the GRIMM drug spilt onto the ground.
** Ironwood thinks the worker at the gas station should be checked for meth to bust him on something despite the real situation being that Ruby and Yang trashed the store.
** Cinder has her finger’s blown off but she cares more about the GRIMM drug spilt onto the ground.
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* SkewedPriorities: Ironwood thinks the worker at the gas station should be checked for meth to bust him on something despite the real situation being that Ruby and Yang trashed the store.
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* TorchesAndPitchforks: One of the circumstances in Ottawa was that those not boarded up in their homes where out in the streets looking for anyone, they even suspect of being Post-Human so they could lynch them.
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* AdultFear: A bunch of armed people at Raven, Qrow and Tai’s doorstep with the attention to either take or kill the kids. Of course, they are going to fight tooth and nail to protect Ruby and Yang.
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* NoMoreHoldingBackSpeech: [[spoiler:Ruby gives herself one when a SWAT team comes for her and Yang. Remembering how they came for them back in Chicago but mostly remember when they came from them at their home where their family died protecting them and knowing that Yang would die to protect her, leaving her with no one, Ruby decides she has had enough. She sends a clear message that she isn’t holding back anymore.]] The outcome… [[{{Understatement}} not pretty]].
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* NoMoreHoldingBackSpeech: [[spoiler:Ruby gives herself one when a SWAT team comes for her and Yang. Remembering how they came for them back in Chicago but mostly remember when they came from them at their home where their family died protecting them and knowing that Yang would die to protect her, leaving her with no one, Ruby decides she has had enough. She sends a clear message that she isn’t holding back anymore.]] The outcome… [[{{Understatement}} not pretty]].pretty.
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* DisproportionateRetribution: Some truckers killed a bartender and attempted to rape Blake just because she rejected one of their advances.
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* HeKnowsTooMuch: When a merc witness Ironwood get back up after [[spoiler:he got shot in the head]]. Ironwood kills him on the spot before he can finish what he is saying over the radio.
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* HeKnowsTooMuch: HeKnowsTooMuch:
** When a merc witness Ironwood get back up after [[spoiler:he got shot in the head]]. Ironwood kills him on the spot before he can finish what he is saying over theradio.radio.
** [[spoiler:Glynda]] is killed because she was figuring out what Atlas was doing.
*** This is also why the authorities cracked down on the Branwen home to kill Qrow, Raven and Tai in part due to them knowing so much about Atlas operations.
** When a merc witness Ironwood get back up after [[spoiler:he got shot in the head]]. Ironwood kills him on the spot before he can finish what he is saying over the
** [[spoiler:Glynda]] is killed because she was figuring out what Atlas was doing.
*** This is also why the authorities cracked down on the Branwen home to kill Qrow, Raven and Tai in part due to them knowing so much about Atlas operations.
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* ProfessionalKiller: Cinder, a former junkie, became a killer presumably for Atlas and is given the GRIMM drug to do so.
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* TraumaticSuperpowerAwakening: Blake’s powers awoke after seeing a bartender get shot in front of her and nearly raped by the perpetrators.
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* {{Unperson}}: Any information on Summer seems to have been wiped clean from records.
