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* AssholeVictim: Vellum and Voron, a DaddysLittleVillain and AbusiveParent, are [[spoiler: rightfully beheaded and staked respectively by Vinyl by the end of the story]].
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* AssholeVictim: Vellum and Voron, a DaddysLittleVillain and AbusiveParent, are [[spoiler: rightfully [[spoiler:rightfully beheaded and staked respectively by Vinyl by the end of the story]].
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* DownerEnding: [[spoiler:Sure, Voron and Vellum were both killed... but so was Octavia, [[ShootTheShaggyDog rendering everything Vinyl went through to save her pointless]]. A devastated Vinyl embarks on a quest to rid Equestria of the rest of Voron's (unknowing) offspring. She's remorseful in doing this, but sees it as NecessarilyEvil, intent on ending it with herself with the hopes she and Octavia can be TogetherInDeath]].
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* DownerEnding: [[spoiler:Sure, Voron and Vellum were both killed... but so was Octavia, [[ShootTheShaggyDog rendering everything Vinyl went through to save her pointless]]. A devastated Vinyl embarks on [[HunterOfHisOwnKind a quest to rid Equestria of the rest of Voron's (unknowing) offspring.offspring]]. She's remorseful in doing this, but sees it as NecessarilyEvil, intent on ending it with herself with the hopes she and Octavia can be TogetherInDeath]].
* IHaveManyNames: She was born as "Winter Song" by her mother, Spring Blossom. When Voron took her in, he changed her name to "Vanelda", [[MeaningfulRename a word meaning "strong" where he came from]]. When she went to Trottingham University, she gave herself the nickname "Vee". And at some point after cursing herself, she started going by "Vinyl Scratch".
* LastEpisodeNewCharacter: The epilogue co-stars Tiptoe: A Filly Scout known for being very quiet and, [[spoiler:for being a descendant of Voron, Vinyl's latest victim]].
* LastEpisodeNewCharacter: The epilogue co-stars Tiptoe: A Filly Scout known for being very quiet and, [[spoiler:for being a descendant of Voron, Vinyl's latest victim]].
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** They're born with white mane and coats along with pinkish red eyes. At some point, Vinyl dyed her mane.
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** They're born with a white mane and coats coat along with pinkish red eyes. At some point, Vinyl dyed her mane.
** The head vampire has a blood bond with their children, allowing them to sense each others' presence.
** The head vampire can sense the unturned, but not vice versa.
** The blood bond can only be broken by death, but it can be suppressed with magic.
** Drinking blood from a drunkard doesn't make them drunk. At worst, their blood will taste more tangy.
** [[spoiler:If the head vampire dies, their oldest child becomes the new head vampire, and the central blood bond passes to them; allowing them to sense their siblings, nieces, and nephews]].
** The head vampire has a blood bond with their children, allowing them to sense each others' presence.
** The head vampire can sense the unturned, but not vice versa.
** The blood bond can only be broken by death, but it can be suppressed with magic.
** Drinking blood from a drunkard doesn't make them drunk. At worst, their blood will taste more tangy.
** [[spoiler:If the head vampire dies, their oldest child becomes the new head vampire, and the central blood bond passes to them; allowing them to sense their siblings, nieces, and nephews]].
* VisionaryVillain: Voron, in a few ways. First, he wanted to prove that, by mating with ponies, his bloodline could exist in Equestria despite the risks that Celestia posed. Second, he intends to [[spoiler:overthrow Celestia and the other alicorns so that the vampires can return to Equestria, ushering in an age of the vampires under the House of Verchovski]].
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** Downplayed in [[spoiler: Vinyl]]'s case regarding the epilogue. [[spoiler: She still feels a bit of pain in murdering Voron's younger descendants]], but in the end [[spoiler: [[NecessarilyEvil feels she has to in order to diminish Voron's lineage for good]].]]
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** Downplayed in [[spoiler: Vinyl]]'s [[spoiler:Vinyl]]'s case regarding the epilogue. [[spoiler: She [[spoiler:She still feels a bit of pain in murdering Voron's younger descendants]], but in the end [[spoiler: [[NecessarilyEvil feels she has to in order to diminish Voron's lineage for good]].]]
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* AssholeVictim: Voron and Vellum, an AbusiveParent and DaddysLittleVillain, are [[spoiler: rightfully mauled by Vinyl by the end of the story]].
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* AssholeVictim: Voron Vellum and Vellum, an AbusiveParent Voron, a DaddysLittleVillain and DaddysLittleVillain, AbusiveParent, are [[spoiler: rightfully mauled beheaded and staked respectively by Vinyl by the end of the story]].
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* DownerEnding: [[spoiler:Sure, Voron and Vellum were both killed... but so was Octavia, [[ShootTheShaggyDog rendering everything Vinyl went through to save her pointless]]. A devastated Vinyl embarks on a quest to rid Equestria of the rest of Voron's (unknowing) offspring, much to her remorse, intent on ending it with herself with the hopes she and Octavia can be TogetherInDeath]].
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* DownerEnding: [[spoiler:Sure, Voron and Vellum were both killed... but so was Octavia, [[ShootTheShaggyDog rendering everything Vinyl went through to save her pointless]]. A devastated Vinyl embarks on a quest to rid Equestria of the rest of Voron's (unknowing) offspring, much to her remorse, offspring. She's remorseful in doing this, but sees it as NecessarilyEvil, intent on ending it with herself with the hopes she and Octavia can be TogetherInDeath]].
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* BroughtDownToNormal: Vinyl willingly cast a curse on herself to become mortal before the events of the story. [[spoiler: She's forced to turn back into a full-fledged vampire near the end.]]
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* BroughtDownToNormal: Vinyl willingly cast a curse on herself to become mortal before the events of the story. [[spoiler: She's forced to turn back into a full-fledged vampire near the end.]]
end, and the spellbook used is destroyed in a house fire, preventing her from ever going back]].
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* ShootTheShaggyDog: [[spoiler: Octavia may have had good intentions in sacrificing herself and giving Vinyl the strength she needed to defeat Voron and Vellum once and for all, but it doesn't change the fact it renders Vinyl's efforts to save her moot]].
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* DeceptivelySillyTitle: While the {{Portmantitle}} is fitting for the themes, it sounds like a balls-off-the-walls action story with that alone. The action is saved primarily for the climax, while the story as a whole is more of a romantic tragedy.
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* {{Portmantitle}}: "Vampire" + "Violence", fitting with it being a gory vampire story.
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The consequences seem way too devatasting for the ending to count as a 'bittersweet' one.
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* BittersweetEnding: More on the bitter side, as for a My Little Pony DarkFic. Vinyl [[spoiler: succeeds in killing Voron and Vellum]], and [[spoiler: goes on a quest to end the former's bloodline once and for all]], but [[spoiler: Octavia is also dead and Vinyl's task includes killing unknowing vampire foals much to her remorse, only seeing it as NecessarilyEvil, and she plans on ending it with herself with the hopes she and Octavia can be TogetherInDeath]].
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* DownerEnding: [[spoiler:Sure, Voron and Vellum were both killed... but so was Octavia, [[ShootTheShaggyDog rendering everything Vinyl went through to save her pointless]]. A devastated Vinyl embarks on a quest to rid Equestria of the rest of Voron's (unknowing) offspring, much to her remorse, intent on ending it with herself with the hopes she and Octavia can be TogetherInDeath]].
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* BittersweetEnding: More on the bitter side, as for a My Little Pony DarkFic. Vinyl [[spoiler: succeeds in killing Voron and Vellum]], and [[spoiler: goes on a quest to end the former's bloodline once and for all]], but [[spoiler: Octavia is also dead and Vinyl's task includes killing unknowing vampire foals much to her remorse, only seeing it as a NecessaryEvil, and she plans on ending it with herself with the hopes she and Octavia can be TogetherInDeath]].
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* BittersweetEnding: More on the bitter side, as for a My Little Pony DarkFic. Vinyl [[spoiler: succeeds in killing Voron and Vellum]], and [[spoiler: goes on a quest to end the former's bloodline once and for all]], but [[spoiler: Octavia is also dead and Vinyl's task includes killing unknowing vampire foals much to her remorse, only seeing it as a NecessaryEvil, NecessarilyEvil, and she plans on ending it with herself with the hopes she and Octavia can be TogetherInDeath]].
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** Downplayed in [[spoiler: Vinyl]]'s case regarding the epilogue. [[spoiler: She still feels a bit of pain in murdering Voron's younger descendants]], but in the end [[spoiler: [[NecessaryEvil feels she has to in order to diminish Voron's lineage for good]].]]
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** Downplayed in [[spoiler: Vinyl]]'s case regarding the epilogue. [[spoiler: She still feels a bit of pain in murdering Voron's younger descendants]], but in the end [[spoiler: [[NecessaryEvil [[NecessarilyEvil feels she has to in order to diminish Voron's lineage for good]].]]
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** Downplayed in [[spoiler: Vinyl]]'s case regarding the epilogue. [[spoiler: She still feels a bit of pain in murdering Voron's younger descendants]], but in the end [[spoiler: feels she has to in order to diminish Voron's lineage for good]].
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** Downplayed in [[spoiler: Vinyl]]'s case regarding the epilogue. [[spoiler: She still feels a bit of pain in murdering Voron's younger descendants]], but in the end [[spoiler: [[NecessaryEvil feels she has to in order to diminish Voron's lineage for good]].]]
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* BittersweetEnding: More on the bitter side, as for a My Little Pony DarkFic. Vinyl [[spoiler: succeeds in killing Voron and Vellum]], and [[spoiler: goes on a quest to end the former's bloodline once and for all]], but [[spoiler: Octavia is also dead and Vinyl's task includes killing unknowing vampire foals much to her remorse, and she plans on ending it with herself with the hopes she and Octavia can be TogetherInDeath]].
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* BittersweetEnding: More on the bitter side, as for a My Little Pony DarkFic. Vinyl [[spoiler: succeeds in killing Voron and Vellum]], and [[spoiler: goes on a quest to end the former's bloodline once and for all]], but [[spoiler: Octavia is also dead and Vinyl's task includes killing unknowing vampire foals much to her remorse, only seeing it as a NecessaryEvil, and she plans on ending it with herself with the hopes she and Octavia can be TogetherInDeath]].
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oh I'm an idiot, Vanelda was Vinyl's vampire name
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* HeroicSacrifice: Octavia [[spoiler: lets herself get killed by Vellum as a means to give Vinyl the strength she needs to defeat her family]].
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* HeroicSacrifice: Octavia [[spoiler: lets herself get killed by Vellum as a means to give feed Vinyl her blood and give her the strength she needs to defeat her family]].
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* OffWithHisHead: Vinyl [[spoiler:tears Vanelda's head off with just her mouth in the final battle]].
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* OffWithHisHead: Vinyl [[spoiler:tears Vanelda's Vellum's head off with just her mouth in the final battle]].
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* OffWithHisHead: Vinyl [[spoiler:tears Vanelda's head off with just her mouth in the final battle]].
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** Voron is not above feeding on fillies... even feeding on the blood his own daughters have already fed on.
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** Voron is not above feeding on fillies...younger ponies... even feeding on the blood his own daughters have already fed on.
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* BittersweetEnding: More on the bitter side, as for a My Little Pony DarkFic. Vinyl [[spoiler: succeeds in killing Voron and Vellum]], and [[spoiler: goes on a quest to end the former's bloodline once and for all]], but [[spoiler: Octavia is also dead and Vinyl's task includes killing unknowing vampire fillies much to her remorse, and she plans on ending it with herself with the hopes she and Octavia can be TogetherInDeath]].
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* BittersweetEnding: More on the bitter side, as for a My Little Pony DarkFic. Vinyl [[spoiler: succeeds in killing Voron and Vellum]], and [[spoiler: goes on a quest to end the former's bloodline once and for all]], but [[spoiler: Octavia is also dead and Vinyl's task includes killing unknowing vampire fillies foals much to her remorse, and she plans on ending it with herself with the hopes she and Octavia can be TogetherInDeath]].
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* OurVampiresAreDifferent: Those born from a vampire parent do not have their powers from birth, they have to be turned by the parent.
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** Those born from a vampire parent do not have their powers from birth, they have to be turned by the parent.
** They're born with white mane and coats along with pinkish red eyes. At some point, Vinyl dyed her mane.
** Those born from a vampire parent do not have their powers from birth, they have to be turned by the parent.
** They're born with white mane and coats along with pinkish red eyes. At some point, Vinyl dyed her mane.
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* OurVampiresAreDifferent: Those born from a vampire parent do not have their powers from birth, they have to be turned by the parent.
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Compare and contrast ''Fanfic/MyRoommateIsAVampire'' and ''Webcomic/AdaptingToNight'', who share the "Vinyl is a vampire" concept but play them in different ways.
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Compare and contrast ''Fanfic/MyRoommateIsAVampire'' contrast ''Webcomic/AdaptingToNight'' and ''Webcomic/AdaptingToNight'', ''Fanfic/MyRoommateIsAVampire'', who share the "Vinyl is a vampire" concept but play them in different ways.
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Vinyl’ Scratch’s family has come back to her life, and for her and Octavia, that is not a good thing. With her father Voron and younger sister Vellum having broken into her house, Vinyl will have to confront her dark past.
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‘‘Vampiolence’’ is a ‘‘WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic’’ DarkFic by [=ObabScribbler=].
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‘‘Vampiolence’’ is a ‘‘WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic’’ DarkFic by [=ObabScribbler=].
Vinyl’ Scratch’s family has come back to her life, and for her and Octavia, that is not a good thing. With her father Voron and younger sister Vellum having broken into her house, Vinyl will have to confront her dark past.
Scribbler released the story both in the form of [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/388545/vampiolence a written fic]] and [[https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PLWpbmrHCXcIHsuJuS0QR4kU2Zpe97clOu an audio drama]] side-by-side.
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!!''Vampiolence'' provides examples of:
* AbusiveParents: To say Voron is not a good father is an understatement, as he has his oldest daughter to do the dirty work and belittles her when she tries to protest.
* AssholeVictim: Voron and Vellum, an AbusiveParent and DaddysLittleVillain, are [[spoiler: rightfully mauled by Vinyl by the end of the story]].
* BittersweetEnding: More on the bitter side, as for a My Little Pony DarkFic. Vinyl [[spoiler: succeeds in killing Voron and Vellum]], and [[spoiler: goes on a quest to end the former’s bloodline once and for all]], but [[spoiler: Octavia is also dead and Vinyl's task includes killing unknowing vampire fillies much to her remorse, and she plans on ending it with herself with the hopes she and Octavia can be TogetherInDeath]].
* BroughtDownToNormal: Vinyl willingly cast a curse on herself to become mortal before the events of the story. [[spoiler: She’s forced to turn back into a full-fledged vampire near the end.]]
* DaddysLittleVillain: In sharp contrast to Vinyl, Vellum has inherited their father’s sadism.
* HeroicSacrifice: Octavia [[spoiler: lets herself get killed by Vellum as a means to give Vinyl the strength she needs to defeat her family]].
* IHateYouVampireDad: In both the traditional and literal sense. Voron is Vinyl’s biological father, but he also had to feed on her to activate her vampire powers.
* WouldHurtAChild:
** Voron is not above feeding on fillies… even feeding on the blood his own daughters have already fed on.
** Downplayed in [[spoiler: Vinyl]]’s case regarding the epilogue. [[spoiler: She still feels a bit of pain in murdering Voron’s younger descendants]], but in the end [[spoiler: feels she has to in order to diminish Voron’s lineage for good]].
Vinyl’ Scratch’s family has come back to her life, and for her and Octavia, that is not a good thing. With her father Voron and younger sister Vellum having broken into her house, Vinyl will have to confront her dark past.
Scribbler released the story both in the form of [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/388545/vampiolence a written fic]] and [[https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PLWpbmrHCXcIHsuJuS0QR4kU2Zpe97clOu an audio drama]] side-by-side.
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!!''Vampiolence'' provides examples of:
* AbusiveParents: To say Voron is not a good father is an understatement, as he has his oldest daughter to do the dirty work and belittles her when she tries to protest.
* AssholeVictim: Voron and Vellum, an AbusiveParent and DaddysLittleVillain, are [[spoiler: rightfully mauled by Vinyl by the end of the story]].
* BittersweetEnding: More on the bitter side, as for a My Little Pony DarkFic. Vinyl [[spoiler: succeeds in killing Voron and Vellum]], and [[spoiler: goes on a quest to end the former’s bloodline once and for all]], but [[spoiler: Octavia is also dead and Vinyl's task includes killing unknowing vampire fillies much to her remorse, and she plans on ending it with herself with the hopes she and Octavia can be TogetherInDeath]].
* BroughtDownToNormal: Vinyl willingly cast a curse on herself to become mortal before the events of the story. [[spoiler: She’s forced to turn back into a full-fledged vampire near the end.]]
* DaddysLittleVillain: In sharp contrast to Vinyl, Vellum has inherited their father’s sadism.
* HeroicSacrifice: Octavia [[spoiler: lets herself get killed by Vellum as a means to give Vinyl the strength she needs to defeat her family]].
* IHateYouVampireDad: In both the traditional and literal sense. Voron is Vinyl’s biological father, but he also had to feed on her to activate her vampire powers.
* WouldHurtAChild:
** Voron is not above feeding on fillies… even feeding on the blood his own daughters have already fed on.
** Downplayed in [[spoiler: Vinyl]]’s case regarding the epilogue. [[spoiler: She still feels a bit of pain in murdering Voron’s younger descendants]], but in the end [[spoiler: feels she has to in order to diminish Voron’s lineage for good]].
