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* IGotBetter: Many characters, most prominently Pokey.
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* CrossOver: [[ThatGuyWithTheGlasses Chester A. Bum]] appears in chapter seven [[spoiler:And is promptly raped, killed, and has his heart eaten.]]
* DesignatedHero: Every. Single. Major. Character.
* DesignatedHero: Every. Single. Major. Character.
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* CrossOver: CrossOver / TheCameo: [[ThatGuyWithTheGlasses Chester A. Bum]] appears in chapter seven [[spoiler:And is promptly raped, killed, and has his heart eaten.]]
* DesignatedHero: Every. Single. Major. Character.]]
* DesignatedHero: Every. Single. Major. Character.
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* OneWingedAngel: Frank has one and he turns into [[spoiler: Pinkie Pie from WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic]]
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How come no one\'s corrected me on this!?
* DesignatedHero: Every. Single. Major. Character.
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* Physical God: Dark!Ness, Paula, Hawt Giygas, Venus, Mistress Belch, and Poo.
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* Physical God: PhysicalGod: Dark!Ness, Paula, Hawt Giygas, Venus, Mistress Belch, and Poo.
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* WhatTheHellHero: Every. Single. Major. Character.
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* AbusiveParents: Pokey and Picky's parents, to the point where the dad [[spoiler:kills them, and then [[ImAHumanitarian eats their corspes]] [[WhatDoYouMeanItsNotHeinous without any salt]].]]
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I need someone else to update this page! PLEEEESE! This fanfic is harder to read than My Immortal! Actually no, that\'s being insulting to the awesome badness that is My Immortal!
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* Physical God: Dark!Ness, Paula, Hawt Giygas, Venus, Mistress Belch, and Poo.
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* EldritchAbomination: Hawt Giygas and [[spoiler:Dark'Ness]].* GenderFlip: Master Belch and Giygas, who have become Mistress Belch and Hawt Giygas, respectively.
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* EldritchAbomination: Hawt Giygas and [[spoiler:Dark'Ness]].[[spoiler:Dark'Ness]].
* GenderFlip: Master Belch and Giygas, who have become Mistress Belch and Hawt Giygas, respectively.
* GenderFlip: Master Belch and Giygas, who have become Mistress Belch and Hawt Giygas, respectively.
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Can\'t believe I never noticed that...
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* ShoutOut: Many words' spellings are similar to the MyImmortal spellings, such as "passively" instead of "passionately".
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* ShoutOut: Many words' spellings are similar to the MyImmortal spellings, such as "passively" instead of "passionately"."passionately" and use of the adjective "sexily".
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* EldritchAbomination: Hawt Giygas and [[spoiler:Dark'Ness]].
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* GenderFlip: Master Belch and Giygas, who have become Mistress Belch and Hawt Giygas, respectively.
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* EldritchAbomination: Hawt Giygas and[[spoiler:Dark'Ness]].
[[spoiler:Dark'Ness]].* GenderFlip: Master Belch and Giygas, who have become Mistress Belch and Hawt Giygas, respectively.
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[=UrfBowd=]: My Verson is an {{EarthBound}} {{Troll Fic}} ([[PoesLaw possibly]]), spanning seventeen chapters and last updated on January 20, 2012. It was written by [=DarkAngus=] (aka notchristopher11, aka Angus) and can be found [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7675651/1/bUrfBowd_b_My_Verson here]], but ''dare'' you click that link? [=UrfBowd=] is a rather disturbing fanfiction filled to the brim with sex, cannabalism, and tons of {{Alternate Character Interpretation}}.
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[=UrfBowd=]: My Verson (changed to [=EarthBound=] My Version) is an {{EarthBound}} {{Troll Fic}} ([[PoesLaw possibly]]), spanning seventeen chapters and last updated on January February 20, 2012. It was written by [=DarkAngus=] (aka notchristopher11, aka Angus) and can be found [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7675651/1/bUrfBowd_b_My_Verson here]], but ''dare'' you click that link? [=UrfBowd=] is a rather disturbing fanfiction filled to the brim with sex, cannabalism, and tons of {{Alternate Character Interpretation}}.
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The author changed his name.
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[=UrfBowd=]: My Verson is an {{EarthBound}} {{Troll Fic}} ([[PoesLaw possibly]]), spanning seventeen chapters and last updated on January 20, 2012. It was written by notchristopher11 (aka Angus) and can be found [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7675651/1/bUrfBowd_b_My_Verson here]], but ''dare'' you click that link? [=UrfBowd=] is a rather disturbing fanfiction filled to the brim with sex, cannabalism, and tons of {{Alternate Character Interpretation}}.
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[=UrfBowd=]: My Verson is an {{EarthBound}} {{Troll Fic}} ([[PoesLaw possibly]]), spanning seventeen chapters and last updated on January 20, 2012. It was written by notchristopher11 [=DarkAngus=] (aka notchristopher11, aka Angus) and can be found [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7675651/1/bUrfBowd_b_My_Verson here]], but ''dare'' you click that link? [=UrfBowd=] is a rather disturbing fanfiction filled to the brim with sex, cannabalism, and tons of {{Alternate Character Interpretation}}.
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The last chapter was rewritten by the author's ex-editor Reid Wright (before he was fired), and was a serious improvement upon the rest of the fanfic ([[YourMileageMayVary YMMV]] on that, however). Sadly, it was not the author's original ending and was edited greatly by Mr. Wright.The author posted the "real" ending after Reid Wright was fired.
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The last chapter was rewritten by the author's ex-editor Reid Wright (before he was fired), and was a serious improvement upon the rest of the fanfic ([[YourMileageMayVary YMMV]] on that, however). Sadly, it was not the author's original ending and was edited greatly by Mr. Wright. The author posted the "real" ending after Reid Wright was fired.
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* AscendedExtra: Venus and Master Belch (or rather, Mistress Belch).
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[=UrfBowd=]: My Verson is an {{EarthBound}} {{Troll Fic}} ([[PoesLaw possibly), spanning seventeen chapters and last updated on January 20, 2012. It was written by notchristopher11 (aka Angus) and can be found [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7675651/1/bUrfBowd_b_My_Verson here]], but ''dare'' you click that link? [=UrfBowd=] is a rather disturbing fanfiction filled to the brim with sex, cannabalism, and tons of {{Alternate Character Interpretation}}.
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[=UrfBowd=]: My Verson is an {{EarthBound}} {{Troll Fic}} ([[PoesLaw possibly), possibly]]), spanning seventeen chapters and last updated on January 20, 2012. It was written by notchristopher11 (aka Angus) and can be found [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7675651/1/bUrfBowd_b_My_Verson here]], but ''dare'' you click that link? [=UrfBowd=] is a rather disturbing fanfiction filled to the brim with sex, cannabalism, and tons of {{Alternate Character Interpretation}}.
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Can\'t believe I never made a summary... It\'s not really finished yet... but that\'s probably because I need someone besides me to read the abomination. I honestly don\'t want to read it again.
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[=UrfBowd=]: My Verson is an {{EarthBound}} {{Troll Fic}}, spanning seventeen chapters and last updated on January 20, 2012. It was written by notchristopher11 and can be found [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7675651/1/bUrfBowd_b_My_Verson here]], but ''dare'' you click that link? [=UrfBowd=] is a rather disturbing fanfiction filled to the brim with sex, cannabalism, and tons of {{Alternate Character Interpretation}}.
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[=UrfBowd=]: My Verson is an {{EarthBound}} {{Troll Fic}}, Fic}} ([[PoesLaw possibly), spanning seventeen chapters and last updated on January 20, 2012. It was written by notchristopher11 (aka Angus) and can be found [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7675651/1/bUrfBowd_b_My_Verson here]], but ''dare'' you click that link? [=UrfBowd=] is a rather disturbing fanfiction filled to the brim with sex, cannabalism, and tons of {{Alternate Character Interpretation}}.
Interpretation}}.
The story is told by Ness, and is [[BlatantLies an exact retelling]] of {{EarthBound}}, with Ness being a murderous cannibal sex addict, as well as his companions. Travelling the world of the original [=EarthBound=], they meet some of the same characters, with some of them becoming main characters instead of [=NPCs=].
The last chapter was rewritten by the author's ex-editor Reid Wright (before he was fired), and was a serious improvement upon the rest of the fanfic ([[YourMileageMayVary YMMV]] on that, however). Sadly, it was not the author's original ending and was edited greatly by Mr. Wright.The author posted the "real" ending after Reid Wright was fired.
The story is told by Ness, and is [[BlatantLies an exact retelling]] of {{EarthBound}}, with Ness being a murderous cannibal sex addict, as well as his companions. Travelling the world of the original [=EarthBound=], they meet some of the same characters, with some of them becoming main characters instead of [=NPCs=].
The last chapter was rewritten by the author's ex-editor Reid Wright (before he was fired), and was a serious improvement upon the rest of the fanfic ([[YourMileageMayVary YMMV]] on that, however). Sadly, it was not the author's original ending and was edited greatly by Mr. Wright.The author posted the "real" ending after Reid Wright was fired.
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* [[spoiler:AllJustADream: The story ends this way. At least, in the editor's ending.]]
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* [[spoiler:AllJustADream: The story ends this way.]]
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* GenderFlip: Master Belch and Giygas, who have become Mistress Belch and Hawt Giygas, respectively.
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* CrossOver: [[ThatGuyWithTheGlasses Chester A. Bum]] appears in chapter seven [[spoiler:And is promptly raped, killed, and has his heart eaten.]]
* OverlyLongName: Ness Cain [[NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast Murderer]] [[KingdomHeartsII Xemnas]] Lucifur Asmo'Deus [[SuperMarioBros Bowser]] Sunset Peoplekiller {{Nintendo}} Jr.
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* CrossOver: [[ThatGuyWithTheGlasses Chester A. Bum]] appears in chapter seven [[spoiler:And is promptly raped, killed, and has his heart eaten.]]
* OverlyLongName: Ness Cain [[NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast Murderer]] [[KingdomHeartsII Xemnas]] Lucifur Asmo'Deus [[SuperMarioBros Bowser]] Sunset Peoplekiller {{Nintendo}} Jr.
* OverlyLongName: Ness Cain [[NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast Murderer]] [[KingdomHeartsII Xemnas]] Lucifur Asmo'Deus [[SuperMarioBros Bowser]] Sunset Peoplekiller {{Nintendo}} Jr.
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** Ness uses an overly-powerful PSI Attack
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* CrossOver: [[ThatGuyWithTheGlasses Chester A. Bum]] appears in chapter seven [[spoiler:And is promptly raped, killed, and has his heart eaten.]]
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* CrossOver: [[ThatGuyWithTheGlasses Chester A. Bum]] appears in chapter seven [[spoiler:And is promptly raped, killed, and has his heart eaten.]]]]
* OverlyLongName: Ness Cain [[NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast Murderer]] [[KingdomHeartsII Xemnas]] Lucifur Asmo'Deus [[SuperMarioBros Bowser]] Sunset Peoplekiller {{Nintendo}} Jr.
* OverlyLongName: Ness Cain [[NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast Murderer]] [[KingdomHeartsII Xemnas]] Lucifur Asmo'Deus [[SuperMarioBros Bowser]] Sunset Peoplekiller {{Nintendo}} Jr.
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**Also, [[ForbidenFruitTheTempationOfEdwardCullen "mancarrot"]]
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* GenderFlip: Master Belch and Giygas, who have become Mistress Belch and Hawt Giygas, respectively.
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* GenderFlip: Master Belch and Giygas, who have become Mistress Belch and Hawt Giygas, respectively.respectively.
* CrossOver: [[ThatGuyWithTheGlasses Chester A. Bum]] appears in chapter seven [[spoiler:And is promptly raped, killed, and has his heart eaten.]]
* CrossOver: [[ThatGuyWithTheGlasses Chester A. Bum]] appears in chapter seven [[spoiler:And is promptly raped, killed, and has his heart eaten.]]
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* WhatTheHellHero: Every. Single. Major. Character.
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* WhatTheHellHero: Every. Single. Major. Character.Character.
* GenderFlip: Master Belch and Giygas, who have become Mistress Belch and Hawt Giygas, respectively.
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* TakeThat: Against [[GlennBeck Glen bek]] and MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic.
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* TakeThat: Against [[GlennBeck Glen bek]] and MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic.WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic.
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[=UrfBowd=]: My Verson is an {{EarthBound}} {{Troll Fic}}, spanning seventeen chapters and last updated on January 20, 2012. It was written by notchristopher11 and can be found [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7675651/1/bUrfBowd_b_My_Verson here]], but ''dare'' you click that link?. [=UrfBowd=] is a rather disturbing fanfiction filled to the brim with sex, cannabalism, and tons of {{Alternate Character Interpretation}}.
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[=UrfBowd=]: My Verson is an {{EarthBound}} {{Troll Fic}}, spanning seventeen chapters and last updated on January 20, 2012. It was written by notchristopher11 and can be found [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7675651/1/bUrfBowd_b_My_Verson here]], but ''dare'' you click that link?. link? [=UrfBowd=] is a rather disturbing fanfiction filled to the brim with sex, cannabalism, and tons of {{Alternate Character Interpretation}}.
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Example Indentation. Undetailed entries and YMMV moved
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* AccidentalInnuendo: "It was den that I know that my destiny was cumming."
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* RougeAnglesOfSatin
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* OnceAnEpisode:OnceAnEpisode:
** Every chapter begins with "OK, so..."
* OnceAnEpisode:
** Every chapter begins with "OK, so..."
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* IGotBetter: So many characters, most prominently Pokey.
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** Ness uses an overly-powerful PSI Attack
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* BiggerIsBetterInBed: Ness.
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* WhatTheHellHero: Every. Single. Major. Character.
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* EldritchAbomination: Hawt Giygas and [[Spoiler:Ness]].
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* EldritchAbomination: Hawt Giygas and [[Spoiler:Dark'Ness]].
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* EldritchAbomination: Hawt Giygas and [[Spoiler:Dark'Ness]].[[Spoiler:Ness]].
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New Page. Please edit, I beg you.
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[=UrfBowd=]: My Verson is an {{EarthBound}} {{Troll Fic}}, spanning seventeen chapters and last updated on January 20, 2012. It was written by notchristopher11 and can be found [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7675651/1/bUrfBowd_b_My_Verson here]], but ''dare'' you click that link?. [=UrfBowd=] is a rather disturbing fanfiction filled to the brim with sex, cannabalism, and tons of {{Alternate Character Interpretation}}.
!!"[=UrfBowd: My Verson=]" provides examples of:
*AccidentalInnuendo: "It was den that I know that my destiny was cumming."
*AlternateCharacterInterpretation
*EldritchAbomination: Hawt Giygas and [[Spoiler:Dark'Ness]].
*IGotBetter: So many characters, most prominently Pokey.
*ImAHumanitarian: The majority of the "heroic" cast, as well as others.
*RougeAnglesOfSatin
*RunningGag: Every chapter begins with "OK, so..."
*WhatTheHellHero: Every. Single. Major. Character.
!!"[=UrfBowd: My Verson=]" provides examples of:
*AccidentalInnuendo: "It was den that I know that my destiny was cumming."
*AlternateCharacterInterpretation
*EldritchAbomination: Hawt Giygas and [[Spoiler:Dark'Ness]].
*IGotBetter: So many characters, most prominently Pokey.
*ImAHumanitarian: The majority of the "heroic" cast, as well as others.
*RougeAnglesOfSatin
*RunningGag: Every chapter begins with "OK, so..."
*WhatTheHellHero: Every. Single. Major. Character.
