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*** Len’Vellana cares deeply about the lower classes of the Covenant, even walking amoungst them (which says a lot, since in canon most of the higher ranking San’Shyuum not only view themselves as TooImportantToWalk, they actually view walking as shameful, to the point that one Prophet who likes to walk only does so in private so as to avoid controversy), and personally visits production facilities in areas that are having issues with gangs to sort out the problems, even being willing to fight the gangs herself if necessary.

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*** Len’Vellana cares deeply about the lower classes of the Covenant, even walking amoungst amongst them (which says a lot, since in canon most of the higher ranking San’Shyuum not only view themselves as TooImportantToWalk, they actually view walking as shameful, to the point that one the only known 2 Prophets (Prophet of Inner Conviction and his descendant Prophet of Clarity) who likes to walk only does so in private so as to avoid controversy), controversy) and personally visits production facilities in areas that are having issues with gangs to sort out the problems, even being willing to fight the gangs herself if necessary.
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* PyrrhicVictory: The Turian intervention in New Ghent had repelled the Covenant from the colony but had severely reduced their fleet from four dreadnaughts, thirty cruisers and sixty frigates to three heavily damaged dreadnaughts, elven cruisers, and ten frigates. Their ground forces also suffered similar results, as half of their armored forces were wiped out by plasma weapons and about six thousand soldiers remaining alive, with five hundred permanently maimed and many more wounded. This first battle against the Covenant served as a serious wake-up call to the Citadel Council to adopting new plans and tactics in their war against the Covenant.

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* PyrrhicVictory: The Turian intervention in New Ghent had repelled the Covenant from the colony but had severely reduced their fleet from four dreadnaughts, thirty cruisers and sixty frigates to three heavily damaged dreadnaughts, elven eleven cruisers, and ten frigates. Their ground forces also suffered similar results, as half of their armored forces were wiped out by plasma weapons and about six thousand soldiers remaining alive, with five hundred permanently maimed and many more wounded. This first battle against the Covenant served as a serious wake-up call to the Citadel Council to adopting new plans and tactics in their war against the Covenant.
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** [spoiler:After Xytan's coup he offers his former conspirators the Ministers of Discovery and Conversion to swear fealty to him or die. Only Conversion chose death.]]

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** [spoiler:After [[spoiler:After Xytan's coup he offers his former conspirators the Ministers of Discovery and Conversion to swear fealty to him or die. Only Conversion chose death.]]
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* WarCrimeSubvertsHeroism: [[spoiler:When Dr. Hasley discovers a group of starving Covenant labourers who wish to surrender, a UNSC soldier ignores her orders to spare them and proceeds to kill them. Similar incidents are reported to have happened elsewhere. This leads to tensions between UNSC and the Citadel as the latter wishes to spare Covenant soldiers both for both ethical and practical reasons.]]

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* WarCrimeSubvertsHeroism: [[spoiler:When Dr. Hasley Halsey discovers a group of starving Covenant labourers who wish to surrender, a UNSC soldier ignores her orders to spare them and proceeds to kill them. Similar incidents are reported to have happened elsewhere. This leads to tensions between UNSC and the Citadel as the latter wishes to spare Covenant soldiers both for both ethical and practical reasons.]]
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* CantKillYouStillNeedYou: [[spoiler:Xytan spares the Minister of Discovery and Thel because he sees them as useful in his plans: he needs Discovery's expertise to reverse-engineer Element Zero technology. Xytan is impressed with Thel's fortitude that he might one day need him and kept him imprisoned, and having guards posted to keep him from taking his own life.]]

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* CantKillYouStillNeedYou: [[spoiler:Xytan spares the Minister of Discovery and Thel because he sees them as useful in his plans: he needs Discovery's expertise to reverse-engineer Element Zero technology. Xytan is impressed with Thel's fortitude that he might one day need him and kept him imprisoned, and having guards posted to keep him from taking his own life. This is later revealed as one of the reasons he also spared the Hierarchs, as the factions loyal to them cannot unify themselves by declaring new Hierarchs so long as Truth, Mercy, and Regret remain both alive and the officially recognized ones.]]



* JoinOrDie: [[spoiler:After Xytan's coup he offers his former conspirators the Ministers of Discovery and Conversion to swear fealty to him or die. Only Conversion chose death.]]

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* JoinOrDie: [[spoiler:After JoinOrDie:
** For all intents and purposes, how the Covenant handles contact with other races. Although there is some leeway on the 'join' aspect, as you can skip being a full member like say the Unggoy if you provide sufficient tribute while still swearing to the Covenant religion; the Minister of Conversion worked out a deal with one race where they agreed to a variation of the dominant dogma they could accept.
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Xytan's coup he offers his former conspirators the Ministers of Discovery and Conversion to swear fealty to him or die. Only Conversion chose death.]]



* MamaBear: After being hand-picked by the Master Chief to train the Spartan-III's, Samara makes it very clear to John that she utterly despised how the handlers treated the Spartan-III's and swear to kill every single one of them once the war against the Covenant is over.

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* MamaBear: After being hand-picked by the Master Chief to train the Spartan-III's, Samara makes it very clear to John that she utterly despised how the handlers treated the Spartan-III's Spartan-III's, and warns him that unless she finds another cause to prioritize and swear to herself to, she will kill every single one of them once the war against the Covenant is over.



** [[spoiler:Master Chief is forced to arrest Emile as a suspect despite knowing he didn't do it in order to hide his suspicions. Unfortunately, this decision would come back to haunt him during the raid on ONI as Master Chief is forced to mercy kill an indoctrinated Emile. John is understandably guilty and even requests to be subjected to court martial for his mistake.]]

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** [[spoiler:Master Chief is forced to arrest Emile as a suspect despite knowing he didn't do it in order to hide his suspicions. Unfortunately, this decision would come back to haunt him during the raid on ONI as Master Chief is forced to mercy kill an indoctrinated Emile. John is understandably guilty guilty, and even requests plans to be subjected to court martial for his mistake.]]



* ReassignedToAntarctica: [[spoiler:One of the reasons that Xytan 'Jar Wattinree grew to resent the Covenant leadership was that they sent him, one of the Covenant's most capable admirals who had defeated many threats to the empire, to the the frontiers to patrol the pirates. The reason is that they feared that he would grow too powerful for them to control and that he would threaten their positions. Its shown to be a rather common practice by the prophets, both to get rid of high ranking Sangheili who could challenge them, and to create a stable pool of candidates for the Arbiter position.]]

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* ReassignedToAntarctica: [[spoiler:One of the reasons that Xytan 'Jar Wattinree grew to resent the Covenant leadership was that they sent him, one of the Covenant's most capable admirals who had defeated many threats to the empire, to the the frontiers to patrol the pirates. The reason is that they feared that he would grow too powerful for them to control and that he would threaten their positions. Its shown to be a rather common practice by the prophets, both to get rid of high ranking Sangheili who could challenge them, and to create a stable pool of candidates for the Arbiter position. Privately, Xytan vowed he would kill whoever tried to make him and Avatar, and he ''did'' have ambitions to stage a mutiny even before his exile.]]



* UndyingLoyalty: The Spartans to one another, especially the Spartan II's. When John orders them to [[spoiler:kill the ONI representatives around them, they promptly do so without question. There are limits however when he reveals he plans to go against the entirety of ONI, but accusations of being both treasonous and suicidal are thrown away upon reviewing the evidence he presents. All of which makes the horrors of Indoctrination and how it turns some of them against each other all the more traumatizing.]]



* WarIsHell: The war between the Coalition and the Covenant is repeatedly shown to be a brutal affair, with wide scale death and destruction regularly shown in harsh detail.

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* WarIsHell: The war between the Coalition and the Covenant is repeatedly shown to be a brutal affair, with wide scale death and destruction regularly shown in harsh detail. Despite being the ultimate soldier, and what he was raised for, John makes clear he has little taste for it.

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* {{Foil}}: The Citadel and Covenant are this to each other. Both are interstellar polities composed of multiple alien races. Whereas the former is a secular organization that seeks to maintain interstellar peace through promoting trade and security, as well as developing friendly relations amongst other races; the latter is a theocratic imperium that enforces adherence to tradition and either subjugates or eliminates potential threats. While the former is hardly perfect, the latter is ripe with dysfunctionality.

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The Citadel and Covenant are this to each other. Both are interstellar polities composed of multiple alien races. Whereas the former is a secular organization that seeks to maintain interstellar peace through promoting trade and security, as well as developing friendly relations amongst other races; the latter is a theocratic imperium that enforces adherence to tradition and either subjugates or eliminates potential threats. While the former is hardly perfect, the latter is ripe with dysfunctionality.dysfunctionality.
** Parangosky and Tevos. Both women are essentially the shadow rulers of Humanity and the Asari respectively, doing what they can to defeat the Covenant, brilliant politicians and manipulators, and will resort to dirty methods to do so. However, Parangosky is utterly ruthless in pursuit of her desires, carrying out ruthless executions and abductions across the UNSC, and manipulating events so that ONI will dictate the future of Humanity, no matter the cost. Including the assassination of the president of the UNSC even. In contrast, Tevos is only ever shown resorting to spying and blackmail; is helping Humanity not just out of pragmatism, but also genuine compassion; and is willing to (mostly) work openly and honestly with her fellow Councilors as a peer. This also continues in how they treat Admiral Hood, as Parangosky loathes the man, while Tevos became lovers with him. Although it is hard to tell [[spoiler:how much of Parangosky's thoughts and actions were entirely her own, and how much was the influence of Indoctrination.]]
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* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome:
** Vado 'Mavamee states frankly that he hopes that they ''don't'' go to war with the Citadel, because based on the spread implied from their codex, it would take years upon years to just set up the infrastructure needed to establish supply lines tens of thousands of light years long, and far more resources just to maintain those supply lines and protect them from enemy raiding parties.
** While UNSC soldiers getting better armor that can survive Covenant weapons is great, it's not that easy in practice. Research and Development takes time, and as a stopgap they're importing Batarian armor for men and Asari armor for women.
** [[spoiler:Although the Covenant loyalists are opposed to Xytan, they are left leaderless as the entire Covenant government was in High Charity and held captive, and are reduced to various factions fighting against each other for the right to lead the war against Xytan, who doesn't waste his time in taking advantage of their in-fighting.]]
** Despite ONI's best attempts at propaganda, and implanting loyal pawns in positions of power across the UNSC, most of humanity ''hates'' them. [[spoiler: When the civil war breaks out, large portions of the military, police forces, and civilian population listen to Hood, a lot of those indoctrinated pawns are removed from power by the military and[=/=]or police, most of whom are not indoctrinated, and ONI agents are being lynched in the streets on some worlds. ONI has to rely on forces made up of people they kidnapped and forcibly indoctrinated over the years and harsh tactics like deploying nerve gas on rioters to make up for the manpower imbalance.]]
** Many Insurrectionists don't trust the UNSC and didn't take the offer of amnesty. [[spoiler:Many of them take advantage of the civil war to declare independence, though some are willing to work with Hood, realising ONI is a threat to them all, with some also being interested in the reforms Hood is planning]].
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** In Halo canon, the nuking of Far Isle Colony was a massive overreaction by the UNSC and UEG that sparked the Insurrection. Here, [[spoiler: Far Isle had come across a Reaper ruin that turned most of the colonists into monsters, and the nuclear bombing was the only way to contain it, though they had to keep this a secret, resulting in people thinking it was a massive overreaction to a secessionist movement, sparking the Insurrection]].
** [[spoiler: Cerberus is the anti-Reaper taskforce led by Ackerson, and the only branch of ONI known not to be under Reaper control, siding against Parangosky in the Human civil war. The Illusive Man was Ackerson's right-hand man, Illusive, and is the defacto leader of Cerberus following Ackerson's death, though he notes that he may be the last surviving member following ONI's attempted purge]].

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** In Halo canon, the nuking of the colony of Far Isle Colony was a massive overreaction by the UNSC and UEG that sparked the Insurrection. Here, [[spoiler: Far Isle had come across a Reaper ruin that turned most of the colonists into monsters, Husks, and the nuclear bombing was the only way to contain it, though they had to keep this a secret, resulting in people thinking it was a massive overreaction to a secessionist movement, sparking the Insurrection]].
** [[spoiler: Cerberus is the anti-Reaper taskforce led by Ackerson, and the only branch of ONI known not to be under Reaper control, siding against Parangosky in the Human civil war. The Illusive Man was Ackerson's right-hand man, Illusive, and is the defacto de-facto leader of Cerberus following Ackerson's death, though he notes that he may be the last surviving member following ONI's attempted purge]].



* CantKillYouStillNeedYou: [[spoiler:Xytan spares the Minister of Discovery and Thel because he sees them more useful in his plans: he needs Discovery's expertise to reverse-engineer Element Zero technology. Xytan is impressed with Thel's fortitude that he might one day need him and kept him imprisoned, and having guards posted to keep him from taking his own life.]]

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* CantKillYouStillNeedYou: [[spoiler:Xytan spares the Minister of Discovery and Thel because he sees them more as useful in his plans: he needs Discovery's expertise to reverse-engineer Element Zero technology. Xytan is impressed with Thel's fortitude that he might one day need him and kept him imprisoned, and having guards posted to keep him from taking his own life.]]



* {{Cyborg}}: Turian soldiers who were left badly maimed in the Covenant War are mandatorily turned into combat-ready cyborgs. Nialla is made into a cyborg after surviving her near fatal encounter with an Elite Ultra during the Battle of New Ghent. UNSC soldiers are also given similar treatments.

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* {{Cyborg}}: Turian soldiers who were left badly maimed in the Covenant War are mandatorily turned into combat-ready cyborgs. Nialla is made into a cyborg after surviving her near fatal encounter with an Elite Ultra during the Battle of New Ghent. UNSC soldiers are also given similar treatments.



* DealWithTheDevil: [[spoiler:Admiral Rael'Zorah is forced to help Xytan in taking over High Charity in return for his freedom and a Covenant warship for his people. Xytan further sweeten the deal with Rael by offering his new Covenant to assist the Quarians in regaining Rannoch from the Geth, technology to terraform their former colonies, and genetic engineering to repair their immune system, in exchange for the Quarians to be incorporated into the Covenant. Rael is left very hesitant to accept Xytan's offer until Xytan reminds him of his daughter Tali'Zorah and of how she will walk on Rannoch without a suit if he accepts the offer.]]

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* DealWithTheDevil: [[spoiler:Admiral Rael'Zorah is forced to help Xytan in taking over High Charity in return for his freedom and a Covenant warship for his people. Xytan further sweeten sweetens the deal with for Rael by offering his new Covenant to assist the Quarians assistance in regaining reclaiming Rannoch from the Geth, technology to terraform their former colonies, and genetic engineering to repair their immune system, systems, in exchange for the Quarians to be being incorporated into the Xytan's new Covenant. Rael is left very hesitant to accept Xytan's the offer until Xytan reminds him of his daughter Tali'Zorah and of how she will be able to walk on Rannoch without a suit if he accepts the offer.accepts.]]



* DiesDifferentlyInAdaptation: [[spoiler:Several Spartans are killed in Onyx. Among others, Jorge is shot in the back of his head by an indoctrinated Kurt, who is then put down by Solomon.]]

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* DiesDifferentlyInAdaptation: [[spoiler:Several Spartans are killed in Onyx. Among others, Jorge is shot in the back of his head by an indoctrinated Kurt, who is then in turn put down by Solomon.]]
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** In Halo canon, the nuclear bombing of Far Isle Colony was a massive overreaction by the UNSC and UEG that sparked the Insurrection. Here, [[spoiler: Far Isle had come across a Reaper ruin that turned most of the colonists into monsters, and the nuclear bombing was the only way to contain it, though they had to keep this a secret, resulting in people thinking it was a massive overreaction to a secessionist movement, sparking the Insurrection]].

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** In Halo canon, the nuclear bombing nuking of Far Isle Colony was a massive overreaction by the UNSC and UEG that sparked the Insurrection. Here, [[spoiler: Far Isle had come across a Reaper ruin that turned most of the colonists into monsters, and the nuclear bombing was the only way to contain it, though they had to keep this a secret, resulting in people thinking it was a massive overreaction to a secessionist movement, sparking the Insurrection]].



** Several Citadel soldiers witness the Brutes' eating habits in-person, as several of them feed(?) on human soldiers in the midst of one of many battles.

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** Several Citadel soldiers witness the Brutes' eating habits in-person, as several of them feed(?) feast on human soldiers in the midst of one of many battles.



* DeadlyGas: The Batarians deploy fluorinated chemical weapons in the Battle of Chi Rho as a desperate last resort by the Coalition in a losing battle against Covenant forces. The gas gruesomely causes skins to melt off from their victims (or in the Jackals' case, practically [[ReducedToDust disintegrate their skins and bones!]]) and leave them choking in their own blood.

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* DeadlyGas: The Batarians deploy fluorinated chemical weapons in the Battle of Chi Rho as a desperate last resort by the Coalition in a losing battle against Covenant forces. The gas gruesomely causes skins to melt off from their victims (or in the Jackals' case, practically [[ReducedToDust disintegrate disintegrates their skins bodies entirely!]]) and bones!]]) and leave leaves them choking in their own blood.



* DiesDifferentlyInAdaptation: [[spoiler:Several Spartans are killed in Onyx. Jorge is shot in the back of his head by an indoctrinated Kurt, who is then put down by Solomon.]]
* DivideAndConquer: [[spoiler:Xytan took advantage of the war between the Coalition and Covenant to take over High Charity and capturing the Hierarchs. He temporarily ceased hostility against the Coalition in order to allow them to focus their attention on the Covenant loyalists, weakening both sides in the process, and giving him enough time to build his forces.]]
* TheDreaded: Along with referring to the Spartans as "Demons", the Covenant fearfully and despises the asari (and biotics in general) as "[[OurWitchesAreDifferent Witches]]".
* EldritchAbomination: [[spoiler:The Reapers make their appearance in a literally nightmarish scene where Xytan 'Jar Wattinree dreams of his encounter with Sovereign during a mission to destroy an army of Husk Drones. This is amplified from his perspective, the Reaper is a demon imprisoned by his gods, the Forerunners]].

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* DiesDifferentlyInAdaptation: [[spoiler:Several Spartans are killed in Onyx. Among others, Jorge is shot in the back of his head by an indoctrinated Kurt, who is then put down by Solomon.]]
* DivideAndConquer: [[spoiler:Xytan took advantage of the war between the Coalition and Covenant to take over High Charity and capturing capture the Hierarchs. He temporarily ceased hostility hostilities against the Coalition in order to allow them to focus their attention on the Covenant loyalists, weakening both sides in the process, and giving him enough time to build up his forces.]]
* TheDreaded: Along with referring to the Spartans as "Demons", the Covenant fearfully and despises fear the asari (and biotics in general) as "[[OurWitchesAreDifferent Witches]]".
* EldritchAbomination: [[spoiler:The Reapers make their appearance in a literally nightmarish scene where Xytan 'Jar Wattinree dreams of his encounter with Sovereign a Reaper during a mission to destroy an army of Husk Drones. This is amplified by the fact that, from his perspective, the Reaper is a demon imprisoned by his gods, the Forerunners]].
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* AdaptationalVillainy: Admiral Margaret Parangosky is very manipulative and amoral as she was depicted in canon. She gets more worse as she intentionally has ONI slowly taking control of the United Earth Government and secretly assassinating the UEG President. [[spoiler:It is later reveals that she and other high ranking ONI members had been [[BrainwashedAndCrazy indoctrinated]] by the Onyx Reaper (Nazara) and she planned to indoctrinate humanity.]]

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* AdaptationalVillainy: Admiral Margaret Parangosky is very manipulative and amoral as she was depicted in canon. She But here, she gets more even worse as she intentionally has ONI slowly taking take control of the United Earth Government and secretly assassinating assassinate the UEG President. [[spoiler:It is later reveals revealed that she and other high ranking ONI members had been [[BrainwashedAndCrazy indoctrinated]] by the Onyx Reaper (Nazara) (Sovereign/Nazara) and she planned to indoctrinate humanity.]]



* AssholeVictim: [[spoiler:James Ackerson gets brutally assassinated by a (presumably) rogue Spartan, but considering that he was responsible to for the Spartan-3 program that made use of more amoral practices than previous generations out of spiteful jealousy of Dr. Hasley's work on the Spartan-2s, few mourn his demise. Downplayed when we find out he was the last member of ONI's leadership who wasn't indoctrinated, he wanted to use the Spartan-3s as a force to oppose the Reapers, and he was killed as part of ONI's attempt to wipe out Cerberus, the anti-Reaper taskforce he had secretly formed, meaning his death removed one of the galaxy's few leaders who both knew about and opposed the Reapers, and cut Master Chief off from the remnants of Cerberus]].
* BigDamnHeroes: The first chapter features the Turians intervening the battle of New Ghent between the UNSC and the Covenant, saving the former from a losing battle.

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* AssholeVictim: [[spoiler:James Ackerson gets brutally assassinated by a (presumably) rogue Spartan, but considering that he was responsible to for the Spartan-3 program that made use of even more amoral practices than previous generations out of spiteful jealousy of Dr. Hasley's Halsey's work on the Spartan-2s, few mourn his demise. Downplayed when we find out he was the last member of ONI's leadership who wasn't indoctrinated, he wanted to use the Spartan-3s as a force to oppose the Reapers, and he was killed as part of ONI's attempt to wipe out Cerberus, the anti-Reaper taskforce he had secretly formed, meaning his death removed one of the galaxy's few leaders who both knew about and opposed the Reapers, and cut Master Chief off from the remnants of Cerberus]].
* BigDamnHeroes: The first chapter features the Turians intervening in the battle of New Ghent between the UNSC and the Covenant, saving the former from a losing battle.

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