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* AdultFear: Toriel gets this frequently, but in recent chapters there's been more emphasis on it. Also happens to Asgore at one point, to the point where he gets [[WesternAnimation/{{MiraculousLadybug}} akumatized]] over it.
** Shien must also experience a lot of this, too - she used to be a normal human doing normal human things until Miyuki started brainwashing Chara, who is Shien's ''biological child''.
** Actually, Shien's adult fear goes even further. One would think that she would be ''happy'' to find out that her child was alive after all, but imagine meeting your young child who you thought was dead, only to find out that they had been adopted by strangers of another species entirely that they would rather live with than you.
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* BadLiar: In chapter 67, Linda asks where Chara is. Since Frisk can't exactly explain that Chara gave themselves up to an evil clone (or at least pretended to, but they didn't know that then) and is now living with him, they panic and say that Chara is on [[WesternAnimation/{{StevenUniverse}} the planet Neptune]]. What makes it even worse was that this was a Steven Universe reference, as this is what Steven told the Rubies when asked where Jasper was.
** It also says something about Linda's intelligence that she actually believed them.

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* BadLiar: In chapter 67, Linda asks where Chara is. Since Frisk can't exactly explain that Chara gave themselves up to an evil clone (or at least pretended to, but they didn't know that then) and is now living with him, they panic and say that Chara is on [[WesternAnimation/{{StevenUniverse}} the planet Neptune]]. What makes it even worse was that this was a Steven Universe reference, as this is what Steven told the Rubies when asked where Jasper was.
** It also says something about Linda's intelligence that she actually believed
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* ChaoticEvil: Miyuki, definitely.

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* %%* ChaoticEvil: Miyuki, definitely.



* VillainSong: Gaster's clone sings a parody of [[WesternAnimation/{{Steven Universe}} Stronger Than You]].
** He later also sings [[WesternAnimation/{{WanderOverYonder}} "I'm the Bad Guy"]].

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* %%* VillainSong: Gaster's clone sings a parody of [[WesternAnimation/{{Steven Universe}} Stronger Than You]].
** %%** He later also sings [[WesternAnimation/{{WanderOverYonder}} "I'm the Bad Guy"]].
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[[caption-width-right:350:Current cover photo for both the main and second book.]]
->''A continuation of Undertale, the monsters reach the surface. Even though it was what monsterkind dreamed of for generations, the Dreemurr children soon realize that [[WesternAnimation/{{Gravity Falls}} anthyding can hadplen]]. Nothing is predictable anymore - puns one day, attempted homicide the next. Saving Chara and Asriel was only the beginning.''
-->-- '''Description of the main book'''

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[[caption-width-right:350:Current cover photo for both the main main, second, and second book.]]
->''A continuation of Undertale,
current books]]

'''Notice:'''
the monsters reach author of this series has since decided to distance this work from Undertale as they are no longer active in the surface. Even though it was what monsterkind dreamed of for generations, fandom and feel as if the Dreemurr children soon realize that [[WesternAnimation/{{Gravity Falls}} anthyding can hadplen]]. Nothing once-fanfic series is predictable anymore - puns one day, attempted homicide the next. Saving Chara and Asriel was only the beginning.''
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driven completely by their OCs. The first two books of the main book'''
series have been taken down completely, and the third, current book has had the term "Undertale" removed from everything. This page will remain outdated until their new, original fiction book(s?) have come out, after which it will be updated to apply to those. This is out of respect for the author, who seems to want to slice off all affiliation the series has with Undertale.
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The main book can be found [[https://www.quotev.com/story/10641853/Undertale-The-Surface here]] and the second book can be found [[https://www.quotev.com/story/11445601/Undertale-the-Surface-ran-out-of-room here]]

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The main first two books of the story were unfortunately taken down completely for a rewrite. The third book can will not be found [[https://www.quotev.com/story/10641853/Undertale-The-Surface here]] and linked here in order to respect the second book can be found [[https://www.quotev.com/story/11445601/Undertale-the-Surface-ran-out-of-room here]]
author's wishes of having no new readers of the series until the first two books are back up.
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Heroic Albino is being dewicked, and this doesn't fit into the soon-to-launch Albinos Are Freaks


* HeroicAlbino: Chara is said to have albinism, which explains their red eyes and pale skin. They also have white hair in this adaption. There's also a chapter about them getting reading glasses, [[ShownTheirWork referring to the fact that some people with albinism have eye problems]].
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* LesbianCop: Undyne.
* LikableVillain: Gaster's clone.

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* LesbianCop: Undyne.
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* CompleteMonster: Miyuki seems to be this - no regret, no real motive other than "being evil", no redeeming qualities whatsoever.
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** There's also Frisk's mother and Linda, who are ''dating each other'' as of recent chapters (despite denying it).

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** There's also Frisk's mother and Linda, who are ''dating each other'' ''engaged'' as of recent chapters (despite denying it).chapters.

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** Recent chapters reveal that Chara became ''so'' attached to their doll, that they're ''soulbound'' to them, which made the "doll" ''gain a soul''!



* UnnamedParent: Frisk's mother is never named in-story. Curiously enough, however, one look in the comments section, where the author roleplays with those who comment, and Frisk's mother seems to have the name of "Maria".

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* ChaoticEvil: Miyuki, definitely.



* CompleteMonster: Miyuki seems to be this - no regret, no real motive other than "being evil", no redeeming qualities whatsoever.



* DrivenToVillainy: One poke into the comments section where her backstory has been revealed and you'll see that Frisk's mother is more this than anything.


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** There's also Frisk's mother and Linda, who are ''dating each other'' as of recent chapters (despite denying it).


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* EvilAllAlong: It turns out that Gaster's clone was less evil than Gaster himself was, while Gaster had previously been thought to be good.
* EvilLaugh: Miyuki is said to have one of these at a couple points.
* EvilVersusEvil: There's a fight between Gaster's clone and Miyuki at one point, the former winning by a landslide simply for being smarter.


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* FromNobodyToNightmare: Frisk's mother started off as just a normal, innocent human. But suddenly, she's become horribly feared over time.


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* LikableVillain: Gaster's clone.


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* MistreatmentInducedBetrayal: Gaster's clone turns his back on Gaster when he realizes that Gaster doesn't really value him or see him as intelligent.
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'''Chara:''' It was an emergency, neither of us were thinking that clearly...I'm sorry...\\

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'''Chara:''' It was an emergency, neither of us were thinking that clearly...I'm sorry...\\

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* BigBrotherInstinct: Do not hurt Azzy. Chara will [[DisproportionateRetribution stab your eyes out]].



* CallingOutForNotCalling: When Azzy is close to melting from having an excess of DETERMINATION, Chara takes her to Sans in a panic, leaving Frisk pretty much alone at the PTA meeting. Frisk is not happy about this.
-->'''Frisk:''' Where the hell did you two go? Nothing like waking up from lemon bar mind control to see that the two people who were supposed to be with you ditched you without so much as leaving a text!\\
'''Chara:''' Sorry, Frisk...Azzy was having some issues, so we had to go.\\
'''Frisk:''' What issues?\\
'''Azzy:''' I was trying to beat up Linda for you guys, but I got more determined than monsters' bodies are able to handle and I started melting. Chara took me to Sans so he could keep me from becoming a puddle of goat child.\\
'''Frisk:''' Still! You couldn't have texted me or something?\\
'''Chara:''' It was an emergency, neither of us were thinking that clearly...I'm sorry...\\



* CheerfulChild: Despite Frisk's depression, they typically act cheerful.



* DrivenToSuicide: Chara attempts suicide at one point. It fails.
** Unfortunately, Alphys successfully kills herself later on, becoming the ''[[DeathIsCheap one]]'' character to actually ''stay'' dead.



* GodIsEvil: Played for laughs. When the creator of Mew Mew Kissy Cutie, [[BrokenPedestal the anime that everyone loves]], is found to be evil, Undyne laments that "God" is evil.

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* GodIsEvil: Played for laughs. When the creator of Mew Mew Kissy Cutie, [[BrokenPedestal the anime that everyone loves]], loved]], is found to be evil, Undyne laments that "God" is evil.evil. In fact, Undyne literally ''says'' "God is evil, Alphys is broken, [[note]] Alphys had fainted upon seeing that her idol was evil [[/note]] and we're all going to die".


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* HeroicAlbino: Chara is said to have albinism, which explains their red eyes and pale skin. They also have white hair in this adaption. There's also a chapter about them getting reading glasses, [[ShownTheirWork referring to the fact that some people with albinism have eye problems]].


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* MamaBear: Typically speaking, Toriel prefers to stay out of trouble and danger. But hurt one of her children in front of her and you're dead.
** This is being shown more recently, as Toriel is making more and more of an effort to stand up for the kids.


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* MomentOfWeakness: When Frisk has to kill their biological mother [[DeathIsCheap the second time]], [[note]] this time it was intentional, the first time it wasn't [[/note]] the grief causes them to ''snap'' and lose control of their LOVE, becoming ''murderous''. No one was killed or hurt as a result of the snap, but the author's note at the end of the chapter implied that it may not be the last time it happens...


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* TameHisAnger: Chapter 274 is a comical chapter in which Frisk tries various ways to calm their anger after they begin to worry that the amount of LOVE they have could soon be problematic.
--> '''Frisk (with their eyes closed):''' One...two...three...four...five...six...seven...eight...nine...ten. There. I counted to ten.\\
'''Chara:''' And how do you feel?\\
'''Frisk:''' Like a pissed off person that just counted to ten and also can't see.\\
'''Chara:''' Try doing it with your eyes open, then?\\
'''Frisk:''' One...two...three...four...five...six...seven...eight...nine...ten. Sorry Chara, but I still just feel like a pissed off person that just counted to ten. The only difference was that this time I could see.
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'''Sans:''' And once I do, you're Cinnamon Toast Crunch. In that order.\\

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'''Sans:''' --->'''Sans:''' And once I do, you're Cinnamon Toast Crunch. In that order.\\
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* InThatOrder: Chapter 4 has this played for laughs when Sans is talking to Frisk [[TheBigBadShuffle who's being possessed by Chara who's being possessed by Gaster's clone who's being controlled by Gaster]].
'''Sans:''' And once I do, you're Cinnamon Toast Crunch. In that order.\\
'''Frisk:''' What does that even mean?\\
'''Sans:''' That I'll burn 'ya, kill 'ya, and destroy 'ya.\\
'''Frisk:''' That's morbid. [[note]] For those who don't get the very complex joke: cinnamon burns are a thing, toast is a euphemism for dead, and crunch refers to the [[NightmareFuel crunch of their bones as their corpse is being crushed]]. [[/note]]
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'''Miyuki:''' I didn't!"\\

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'''Miyuki:''' I didn't!"\\didn't!\\
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* ChangeTheUncomfortableSubject:
-->'''Papyrus:''' IS IT JUST ME, OR DID UNDYNE START ACTING WEIRD WHEN MEW MEW KISSY CUTIE WAS MENTIONED? LIKE THERE'S SOMETHING GOING ON AND SHE'S HIDING IT?\\
'''Sans:''' Dunno. Though, I will say that I've been getting a bunch of texts from Tori lately...apparently Chara's been acting the ''exact'' same way. Whenever anyone asks them anything about Mew Mew Kissy Cutie or the creator of it, they start getting weird like ''this''.\\
'''Undyne:''' NON-SPECIFIC-YET-OMINOUS SUBJECT CHANGE! Papyrus, we gotta get you caught up on Steven Universe first!


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* DuckSeasonRabbitSeason: Linda and Miyuki do this to each other at one point in chapter 284, even going so far as to reference these cartoons.
-->'''Miyuki:''' Why are we talking about this in front of our enemies?!\\
'''Linda:''' You started it!\\
'''Miyuki:''' No, you started it!\\
'''Linda:''' I didn't start it, you totally fucking did!\\
'''Miyuki:''' No, you did!\\
'''Linda:''' You did!\\
'''Miyuki:''' No, you did!\\
'''Linda:''' You did!\\
'''Miyuki:''' You did!\\
'''Linda:''' I didn't!\\
'''Miyuki:''' I didn't!"\\
'''Linda:''' I did!\\
'''Miyuki:''' No, I fucking did! I fucking did, and that's final!\\
'''Linda:''' See? You just admitted it, you idiot!\\
'''Miyuki:''' ...Did you just use those stupid Bugs Bunny and Daffy Duck cartoons against me? Those dumb, unrealistic ones where Bugs keeps arguing with Daffy until Bugs turns it around and makes Daffy accidentally say it's duck season because he's more concerned about arguing with Bugs than with thinking about what he's saying?\\
'''Linda:''' Congratulations, Daffy Duck. They're no longer unrealistic, because you just fell for it.\\
'''Miyuki:''' Don't call me Daffy Duck!\\
'''Linda:''' Okay, Daffy Duck. Whatever you say.


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* PrecisionFStrike: Toriel, who usually ''never'' swears, says "fuck" when she sees that Chara has been [[BrainwashedAndCrazy kissed]] by Miyuki ''yet again''.


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* SirSwearsALot: Frisk and Azzy sometimes swear, but Chara takes the cake for this trope by a landslide.
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* MusicAgeDissonance: Frisk and Chara are mentioned listening to a song by [[Music/{{Evanescence}}]]. We're not going to talk about the fact that Evanescence has several songs that [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=T6YUFq6WGOc aren't]] [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5MWN6t0QBM4 meant]] [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dQzqSfiPyFA for]] [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eYoAw6MyokY children]].

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* MusicAgeDissonance: Frisk and Chara are mentioned listening to a song by [[Music/{{Evanescence}}]].[[Music/{{Evanescence}} Evanescence]]. We're not going to talk about the fact that Evanescence has several songs that [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=T6YUFq6WGOc aren't]] [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5MWN6t0QBM4 meant]] [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dQzqSfiPyFA for]] [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eYoAw6MyokY children]].

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* BoomerangBigot: Chara hates humans and humanity, believing that [[HumansAreBastards humans don't deserve to exist]] with very few exceptions. Unfortunately, ''they'' are not one of their exceptions.

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* BoomerangBigot: Chara hates humans and humanity, believing that [[HumansAreBastards humans don't deserve to exist]] live]] with very few exceptions. Unfortunately, ''they'' ''[[MisanthropeSupreme they]]'' are not one of their exceptions.


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* TheFundamentalist: Linda, Miyuki, and Frisk's mother all seem to fit this to varying degrees.


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* HeroicSelfDeprecation: Frisk seems to have depression that stems from the fact that they feel worthless...never mind the fact that they saved all of monsterkind!


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* MusicAgeDissonance: Frisk and Chara are mentioned listening to a song by [[Music/{{Evanescence}}]]. We're not going to talk about the fact that Evanescence has several songs that [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=T6YUFq6WGOc aren't]] [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5MWN6t0QBM4 meant]] [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dQzqSfiPyFA for]] [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eYoAw6MyokY children]].
** They are also mentioned at one point to be listening to Blackbriar. While the song they were listening to in that scene is fine, that band has several [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ySlrlusYrhk songs]] [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=H5vhQLpx6ms about]] [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=d-ETzNhuMho killing]]. [[note]] Seriously, how does Toriel let them listen to things like this? [[/note]]


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* StupidSacrifice: One could argue that when Gaster's clone died [[DeathIsCheap the second time]], it was this. If Frisk had gotten hurt, they could have just RESET and gotten away, and he knows this, and yet he still decided to fling himself in front of Frisk for protection.
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'''Gaster's clone:'' Just because I enjoy annoying you doesn't mean I stand for child abuse. It's one thing to be a kid's arch nemesis, but it becomes a whole other problem when the kid's own parent is the enemy they are terrified of.

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'''Gaster's clone:'' clone:''' Just because I enjoy annoying you doesn't mean I stand for child abuse. It's one thing to be a kid's arch nemesis, but it becomes a whole other problem when the kid's own parent is the enemy they are terrified of.
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* EvenEvilHasLovedOnes: Despite Gaster's clone getting enjoyment out of being evil, he has a [[RightHandCat ''cat'']] that he loves dearly.

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* EvenEvilHasLovedOnes: Despite Gaster's clone getting enjoyment out of being evil, he has a [[RightHandCat ''cat'']] ''[[RightHandCat cat]]'' that he loves dearly.
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* AccidentalPublicConfession: Linda accidentally spills in a fit of rage that she really ''is'' an evil witch. Fortunately for her, she's got a memory-erasing spell that makes all the [[AdultsAreUseless adults]] forget it.


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* ArmorPiercingQuestion: Oddly played for laughs when Chara is asked how old they are. Between time travel and dying, they are somewhere between 4 and 106 years old, but they just settle with 8.


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* CollectiveGroan: This, or a collective sigh, is usually the reaction to Gaster's clone appearing.


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* EvenEvilHasLovedOnes: Despite Gaster's clone getting enjoyment out of being evil, he has a [[RightHandCat ''cat'']] that he loves dearly.
* EvenEvilHasStandards: Gaster's clone rebels against the real Gaster and he explains that while he wishes to be evil, he does not wish to be ''this'' evil.
** There's also the time that Gaster's clone saved Frisk from their mother.
-->'''Frisk:''' You're saving me...?\\
'''Gaster's clone:'' Just because I enjoy annoying you doesn't mean I stand for child abuse. It's one thing to be a kid's arch nemesis, but it becomes a whole other problem when the kid's own parent is the enemy they are terrified of.


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* ForTheEvulz: Gaster seems to have no real motivation other than being evil for the sake of being evil.
* GodIsEvil: Played for laughs. When the creator of Mew Mew Kissy Cutie, [[BrokenPedestal the anime that everyone loves]], is found to be evil, Undyne laments that "God" is evil.


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* [[IControlMyMinionsThrough I Control My Minions Though]]: It was revealed that Gaster was secretly the one controlling his clone the entire time.
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* PoliticallyIncorrectVillain: Linda, and later Frisk's mother as well.
* RapeIsASpecialKindOfEvil: It was revealed that the reason why Shien hates Miyuki so much is because Miyuki raped her at the age of 16.


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* VillainSong: Gaster's clone sings a parody of [[WesternAnimation/{{Steven Universe}} Stronger Than You]].
** He later also sings [[WesternAnimation/{{WanderOverYonder}} "I'm the Bad Guy"]].
* WouldHurtAChild: Despite Frisk, Chara, and Azzy being young children, none of the villains seem to have any qualms about harming them.
* YouHaveFailedMe: Gaster [[DeathIsCheap temporarily]] kills his clone when he realizes that his clone has become (relatively) friendly towards Frisk, Chara, and Azzy.

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