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* MythologyGag: After learning from Touka that Izuna probably liked and was attracted to Tobirama long before she decided to make him her concubine, Hashirama notes that it's probably a good thing she managed to find a way to act on it before Tobirama figured out a way to kill her -- since Madara most likely knew about Izuna's feelings for Tobirama and wouldn't have reacted well to his sister being killed by the man she had feelings for. All you need to do is take [[JumpingOffTheSlipperSlope one look at canon]] to see that Hashirama's deduction is spot-on, to say the least.
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* DivineRightOfKings: Justified. Any Uchiha who manages to Awaked their Mangekyou does it by Invoking and Connecting with the patron kami of their lineage. Therefore, they are elevated to the headship of their lineage due to the obvious sign of favour.

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* DivineRightOfKings: Justified. Any Uchiha who manages to Awaked Awaken their Mangekyou does it by Invoking and Connecting with the patron kami of their lineage. Therefore, they are elevated to the headship of their lineage due to the obvious sign of favour.
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** Katsuma, the cousin whose family Tobirama killed in Frost Country. [[spoiler:After he leaves on a trading trip, he passed through Hatake territory and makes sure to badmouth Izuna and Tobirama's marriage to them -- while conveniently omitting that Izuna kidnapped Tobirama, Tobi is half-Hatake himself or that he adopted two kids he orphaned to make up for his mistakes.]]


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** Chapter 10: Uchiha Homusubi, Senju Keika, Touka and Senju Chigi.
** Chapter 15: Ohabari, Uchiha Haruto, Uzumaki Kei, Uchiha Ikoma and Tajima.
** Chapter 20: Touka, Madara and Izuna.


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* AMatchMadeInStockholm: What Izuna and Tobirama's arrangement is. She showers him with gifts and attention to keep him compliant and because she doesn't want to completely destroy his mind through isolation, and he goes along with it as he reasons it keeps her focused on him rather than his clan's destruction and he's a bit desperate for social interaction.
* MovingTheGoalposts: Tajima does it in regards to informing the daimyo of Izuna's marriage - first by demanding they wait for the Senju's reaction, then for Izuna getting pregnant, [[spoiler: and ''then'' to make sure she's still pregnant after two months]].

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* AMatchMadeInStockholm: What Izuna and Tobirama's arrangement is. She showers him with gifts and attention to keep him compliant and because she doesn't want to completely destroy his mind through isolation, and he goes along with it as he reasons it keeps her focused on him rather than his clan's destruction and he's a bit desperate for social interaction.
interaction. It doesn't help that, despite being her prisoner, Izuna treats him better than his own family did.
* MovingTheGoalposts: Tajima does it in regards to informing the daimyo of Izuna's marriage - -- first by demanding they wait for the Senju's reaction, then for Izuna getting pregnant, [[spoiler: and ''then'' to make sure she's still pregnant after two months]].



** The Uchiha use their sharingan for embroidery and weaving, and have jutsu to preserve colours from fading. The last one also doubles as MundaneMadeAwesome since some of the shades are ridiculously expensive to dye.

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** The Uchiha use their sharingan Sharingan for embroidery and weaving, and have jutsu to preserve colours from fading. The last one also doubles as MundaneMadeAwesome since some of the shades are ridiculously expensive to dye.



** Combined with MundaneSolution but [[spoiler:when Izuna needs to arrange meeting with the Senju, she sends Taka to do it. The woman in question uses her Mangekyou, which calls on kami's power, to stroll into the Compound and up to Touka, while letting [[NoSell her power]] protect her.]]

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** Combined with MundaneSolution but [[spoiler:when Izuna needs to arrange meeting with the Senju, she sends Taka to do it. The woman in question uses her Mangekyou, which calls on kami's power, to stroll into the Senju Compound and up to Touka, while letting [[NoSell her power]] protect her.]]


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** Because Izuna's political moves are based on maintaining the "moral high-ground" from the perspective of outsiders, Hashirama (for all his lack of political awareness) is the only one to notice many of the traps in the Uchihas' overtures because he's the only person considering things from the moral and emotional perspective rather than the pragmatic and expedient one. Granted, he doesn't ''see'' them as traps, [[RightForTheWrongReasons just the right thing to do]], but it's enough for Touka to consider him [[spoiler:for an advisory role after she replaces him as Clan Heir]].

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** Tobirama wonder if something is wrong with Maru due to the boy's behaviour. In reality, Maru is behaving in cat-like manner due to being raised by the summons -- what makes it funnier is that ''Tobirama'' shares many of those same mannerism. [[spoiler:Becomes HarsherInHindsight when Touka notes Butsuma tried to have Tobirama killed over such behaviour as a ''toddler''.]]

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** Tobirama wonder if something is wrong with Maru due to the boy's behaviour. In reality, Maru is behaving in cat-like manner due to being raised by the summons -- what makes it funnier is that ''Tobirama'' shares many of those same mannerism.mannerisms. [[spoiler:Becomes HarsherInHindsight when Touka notes Butsuma tried to have Tobirama killed over such behaviour as a ''toddler''.]]



** [[spoiler:Following the assassination attempt, Tobirama completely losses all the respect and affection he ever had for his father, since the man obviously didn't love him if he was ready to murder him without even hearing his side of the story.]]

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** [[spoiler:Following the assassination attempt, Tobirama completely losses loses all the respect and affection he ever had for his father, since the man obviously didn't love him if he was ready to murder him without even hearing his side of the story.]]



*** [[spoiler:On that note, Mito decides to leave for Uzushio to save her unborn child from daimyo's revenge since Hashirama refused to depose his father.]]
** A sudden halt of the hostilities between Senju and Uchiha has been noticed by people around, so Tajima sending a letter to the daimyo was more of an explanation than anything.

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*** [[spoiler:On that note, Mito decides to leave for Uzushio to save her unborn child from the daimyo's revenge since Hashirama refused to depose his father.]]
father. She only changes her mind after Butsuma is killed]].
** A sudden halt of the hostilities between Senju and Uchiha has been noticed by the people around, who live around the area, so Tajima sending a letter to the daimyo was more of an explanation than anything.


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** One of the reasons why the Uchiha don't make a big deal about their imperial ancestry or make a claim for more power is because the only proof of their legitimacy is the records they keep, and records are easy to fudge, ''especially'' when they date back to ancestors that lived thousands of years ago. Izuna notes that it's entirely possible her family isn't descended from imperial lineage at all, but rather from some minor royal that Indra's grandmother (an imperial concubine) slept with, which is why her children put someone else on the throne when she died -- they knew they had no actual claim to it.


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* UnreliableExpositor: Katsuma complains about Izuna's decision to marry Tobirama to his visiting Hatake relatives ([[spoiler:who are kin to the members of the Trading Branch Tobirama accidentally murdered a few months prior]]), while deliberately omitting how Tobirama is also of Hatake-descent and a Leopard Summoner to boot. [[spoiler:He also omits the circumstances that led to Tobirama to killing the aforementioned kin, the fact that he didn't kill ''all'' of their children, and that Tobirama has adopted two of the children he orphaned]].

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* AlternateUniverse: [[WordOfGod Word of God]] has that her ''Naruto'' universe lacks the Otstustuki Clan being a race of [[HumanoidAliens Humanoid Aliens]], Indra and Asura reincarnating, chakra only appearing with Kaguya, and Zetsu existing. Instead, Kaguya was a normal human (if the wife of an Emperor) born in an era where chakra was a topic of esoteric study who ate from the chakra tree and whose accidental release of the Juubi helped cause the end of her dynasty and Zetsu existing, instead, Kaguya was a concubine of the emperor of the penultimate dynasty of the Empire who through her actions ended up causing the downfall of said dynasty (it is yet unknown if the God Tree existed, if she was the first human to use chakra, or if the downfall of the dynasty involved the Ten Tails wreaking havoc on the land)

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* AlternateUniverse: [[WordOfGod Word of God]] has that her ''Naruto'' universe lacks the Otstustuki Clan being a race of [[HumanoidAliens Humanoid Aliens]], Indra and Asura reincarnating, chakra only appearing with Kaguya, and Zetsu existing. Instead, Kaguya was a normal human (if the wife of an Emperor) born in an era where chakra was a topic of esoteric study who ate from the chakra tree and whose accidental release of the Juubi helped cause the end of her dynasty and Zetsu existing, instead, Kaguya was a concubine of the emperor of the penultimate dynasty of the Empire who through her actions ended up causing the downfall of said dynasty (it is yet unknown if the God Tree existed, if she was the first human to use chakra, or if the downfall of the dynasty involved the Ten Tails wreaking havoc on the land)dynasty

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* RealityEnsues:
** No matter how much she's nice about it, Izuna still kidnapped and blackmailed Tobirama into marrying her. He's not okay with that and plots to escape at the first opportunity.
** On the Uchiha's side, the clan acknowledges that an abduction is generally not a basis of a good marriage, which is one of the reason they allow only male concubines -- if he escapes, then at least he will not take an Uchiha child with them.
** Several Uchiha are rather displeased by one of them deciding to marry one of their hated foes instead of slitting his throat, in spite of her rational explanations. Generational hatred doesn't vanish in one day.
*** Several Senju warriors also feel pissed off and disgusted by one of them going "traitor" and literally jumping in bed with the enemy.
** The difference in social status between the Uchiha and the Senju means that a peace on equal terms is impossible. Either the Senju become VoluntaryVassal to the Uchiha or the feud continues until one clan manages to completely subjugate the other.
** Repeated trauma over the loss of his siblings and various kinsmen left Hashirama with a heaping mount of PTSD.
** Tobirama gradually warms up to Izuna not only because she's nice, she's also his main source of stimulation. He's painfully aware that without Touka, he already would have completely fallen under her spell.
** Similarly, Izuna becomes fond of Tobirama [[spoiler:and falls in love with him]] despite repeated warnings by her father that it's unwise to trust a prisoner.
** [[spoiler:In order to ensure conception, Izuna drank a lot of fertility teas and spend as much time as possible with Tobirama since his strong ''yang'' chakra facilitates ovulation. Her medic gives her a likely prognosis of fraternal twins as a consequence.]]
** After being locked up for the better part of two months, Tobirama is allowed to go out on a walk with Izuna -- and quickly feels a tad overwhelmed and overstimulated by all the noise and people around in the compound.
** Touka is weirded out when lying down on a bed since she just spent two months sleeping on a futon. On the same note, Tobirama quickly gets into the habit of wearing kimono and is mentioned to do it more easily after a while.
** [[spoiler:Following the assassination attempt, Tobirama completely losses all the respect and affection he ever had for his father, since the man obviously didn't love him if he was ready to murder him without even hearing his side of the story.]]
** [[spoiler:Once it becomes clear that Butsuma's hatred puts the entire clan at risk, he's unceremoniously murdered in his house and ''his own brother'' helps to cover for the real perpetrator.]]
*** [[spoiler:On that note, Mito decides to leave for Uzushio to save her unborn child from daimyo's revenge since Hashirama refused to depose his father.]]
** A sudden halt of the hostilities between Senju and Uchiha has been noticed by people around, so Tajima sending a letter to the daimyo was more of an explanation than anything.
** Because the Uchiha are disgusted by necromancy, ''Literature/MoDaoZuShi'' is an utter flop in-clan since they find the main character too repellent and disapprove him not being immediately murdered for his practices, even though it's a several hundred years old classic for the Elemental Nations.
** [[spoiler:In the immediate aftermath of the assassination attempt, Tobirama rapidly goes into shock and had to be taken care of by Izuna. He also notes that he no longer feels safe when sleeping alone in a room, especially if he also has Kiso with him.]]

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* RealityEnsues:
** No matter how much she's nice about it, Izuna still kidnapped and blackmailed Tobirama into marrying her. He's not okay with that and plots to escape at the first opportunity.
** On the Uchiha's side, the clan acknowledges that an abduction is generally not a basis of a good marriage, which is one of the reason they allow only male concubines -- if he escapes, then at least he will not take an Uchiha child with them.
** Several Uchiha are rather displeased by one of them deciding to marry one of their hated foes instead of slitting his throat, in spite of her rational explanations. Generational hatred doesn't vanish in one day.
*** Several Senju warriors also feel pissed off and disgusted by one of them going "traitor" and literally jumping in bed with the enemy.
** The difference in social status between the Uchiha and the Senju means that a peace on equal terms is impossible. Either the Senju become VoluntaryVassal to the Uchiha or the feud continues until one clan manages to completely subjugate the other.
** Repeated trauma over the loss of his siblings and various kinsmen left Hashirama with a heaping mount of PTSD.
** Tobirama gradually warms up to Izuna not only because she's nice, she's also his main source of stimulation. He's painfully aware that without Touka, he already would have completely fallen under her spell.
** Similarly, Izuna becomes fond of Tobirama [[spoiler:and falls in love with him]] despite repeated warnings by her father that it's unwise to trust a prisoner.
** [[spoiler:In order to ensure conception, Izuna drank a lot of fertility teas and spend as much time as possible with Tobirama since his strong ''yang'' chakra facilitates ovulation. Her medic gives her a likely prognosis of fraternal twins as a consequence.]]
** After being locked up for the better part of two months, Tobirama is allowed to go out on a walk with Izuna -- and quickly feels a tad overwhelmed and overstimulated by all the noise and people around in the compound.
** Touka is weirded out when lying down on a bed since she just spent two months sleeping on a futon. On the same note, Tobirama quickly gets into the habit of wearing kimono and is mentioned to do it more easily after a while.
** [[spoiler:Following the assassination attempt, Tobirama completely losses all the respect and affection he ever had for his father, since the man obviously didn't love him if he was ready to murder him without even hearing his side of the story.]]
** [[spoiler:Once it becomes clear that Butsuma's hatred puts the entire clan at risk, he's unceremoniously murdered in his house and ''his own brother'' helps to cover for the real perpetrator.]]
*** [[spoiler:On that note, Mito decides to leave for Uzushio to save her unborn child from daimyo's revenge since Hashirama refused to depose his father.]]
** A sudden halt of the hostilities between Senju and Uchiha has been noticed by people around, so Tajima sending a letter to the daimyo was more of an explanation than anything.
** Because the Uchiha are disgusted by necromancy, ''Literature/MoDaoZuShi'' is an utter flop in-clan since they find the main character too repellent and disapprove him not being immediately murdered for his practices, even though it's a several hundred years old classic for the Elemental Nations.
** [[spoiler:In the immediate aftermath of the assassination attempt, Tobirama rapidly goes into shock and had to be taken care of by Izuna. He also notes that he no longer feels safe when sleeping alone in a room, especially if he also has Kiso with him.]]


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* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome:
** No matter how much she's nice about it, Izuna still kidnapped and blackmailed Tobirama into marrying her. He's not okay with that and plots to escape at the first opportunity.
** On the Uchiha's side, the clan acknowledges that an abduction is generally not a basis of a good marriage, which is one of the reason they allow only male concubines -- if he escapes, then at least he will not take an Uchiha child with them.
** Several Uchiha are rather displeased by one of them deciding to marry one of their hated foes instead of slitting his throat, in spite of her rational explanations. Generational hatred doesn't vanish in one day.
*** Several Senju warriors also feel pissed off and disgusted by one of them going "traitor" and literally jumping in bed with the enemy.
** The difference in social status between the Uchiha and the Senju means that a peace on equal terms is impossible. Either the Senju become VoluntaryVassal to the Uchiha or the feud continues until one clan manages to completely subjugate the other.
** Repeated trauma over the loss of his siblings and various kinsmen left Hashirama with a heaping mount of PTSD.
** Tobirama gradually warms up to Izuna not only because she's nice, she's also his main source of stimulation. He's painfully aware that without Touka, he already would have completely fallen under her spell.
** Similarly, Izuna becomes fond of Tobirama [[spoiler:and falls in love with him]] despite repeated warnings by her father that it's unwise to trust a prisoner.
** [[spoiler:In order to ensure conception, Izuna drank a lot of fertility teas and spend as much time as possible with Tobirama since his strong ''yang'' chakra facilitates ovulation. Her medic gives her a likely prognosis of fraternal twins as a consequence.]]
** After being locked up for the better part of two months, Tobirama is allowed to go out on a walk with Izuna -- and quickly feels a tad overwhelmed and overstimulated by all the noise and people around in the compound.
** Touka is weirded out when lying down on a bed since she just spent two months sleeping on a futon. On the same note, Tobirama quickly gets into the habit of wearing kimono and is mentioned to do it more easily after a while.
** [[spoiler:Following the assassination attempt, Tobirama completely losses all the respect and affection he ever had for his father, since the man obviously didn't love him if he was ready to murder him without even hearing his side of the story.]]
** [[spoiler:Once it becomes clear that Butsuma's hatred puts the entire clan at risk, he's unceremoniously murdered in his house and ''his own brother'' helps to cover for the real perpetrator.]]
*** [[spoiler:On that note, Mito decides to leave for Uzushio to save her unborn child from daimyo's revenge since Hashirama refused to depose his father.]]
** A sudden halt of the hostilities between Senju and Uchiha has been noticed by people around, so Tajima sending a letter to the daimyo was more of an explanation than anything.
** Because the Uchiha are disgusted by necromancy, ''Literature/MoDaoZuShi'' is an utter flop in-clan since they find the main character too repellent and disapprove him not being immediately murdered for his practices, even though it's a several hundred years old classic for the Elemental Nations.
** [[spoiler:In the immediate aftermath of the assassination attempt, Tobirama rapidly goes into shock and had to be taken care of by Izuna. He also notes that he no longer feels safe when sleeping alone in a room, especially if he also has Kiso with him.]]

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* AlternateUniverse: [[WordOfGod Word of God]] has that her ''Naruto'' universe lacks the Otstustuki Clan being a race of [[HumanoidAliens Humanoid Aliens]], Indra and Asura reincarnating, chakra only appearing with Kaguya, and Zetsu existing. Instead, Kaguya was a normal human (if the wife of an Emperor) born in an era where chakra was a topic of esoteric study who ate from the chakra tree and whose accidental release of the Juubi helped cause the end of her dynasty
and Zetsu existing, instead, Kaguya was a concubine of the emperor of the penultimate dynasty of the Empire who through her actions ended up causing the downfall of said dynasty (it is yet unknown if the God Tree existed, if she was the first human to use chakra, or if the downfall of the dynasty involved the Ten Tails wreaking havoc on the land)

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* AlternateUniverse: [[WordOfGod Word of God]] has that her ''Naruto'' universe lacks the Otstustuki Clan being a race of [[HumanoidAliens Humanoid Aliens]], Indra and Asura reincarnating, chakra only appearing with Kaguya, and Zetsu existing. Instead, Kaguya was a normal human (if the wife of an Emperor) born in an era where chakra was a topic of esoteric study who ate from the chakra tree and whose accidental release of the Juubi helped cause the end of her dynasty
dynasty and Zetsu existing, instead, Kaguya was a concubine of the emperor of the penultimate dynasty of the Empire who through her actions ended up causing the downfall of said dynasty (it is yet unknown if the God Tree existed, if she was the first human to use chakra, or if the downfall of the dynasty involved the Ten Tails wreaking havoc on the land)
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* FairyTaleMotifs: The more the story unfolds, the more it appears Tobirama was stuck in CinderellaCircumstances -- after losing his only loving parent, he had to shoulder burdens far too heavy for him and never was truly appreciated for himself (even the more well-intentioned of his relatives just couldn't see anything wrong with his general treatment). Then he gains the attention and affection of a wealthy, highborn spouse who promptly takes him away from the toxic environment and showers him with care and gifts.

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* FairyTaleMotifs: The more the story unfolds, the more it appears Tobirama was stuck in CinderellaCircumstances a CinderellaPlot -- after losing his only loving parent, he had to shoulder burdens far too heavy for him and never was truly appreciated for himself (even the more well-intentioned of his relatives just couldn't see anything wrong with his general treatment). Then he gains the attention and affection of a wealthy, highborn spouse who promptly takes him away from the toxic environment and showers him with care and gifts.

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* AlternateUniverse: [[WordOfGod Word of God]] has that her ''Naruto'' universe lacks the Otstustuki Clan being a race of [[HumanoidAliens]] and Zetsu existing, instead, Kaguya was a concubine of the emperor of the penultimate dynasty of the Empire who through her actions ended up causing the downfall of said dynasty (it is yet unknown if the God Tree existed, if she was the first human to use chakra, or if the downfall of the dynasty involved the Ten Tails wreaking havoc on the land)

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* AlternateUniverse: [[WordOfGod Word of God]] has that her ''Naruto'' universe lacks the Otstustuki Clan being a race of [[HumanoidAliens]] [[HumanoidAliens Humanoid Aliens]], Indra and Asura reincarnating, chakra only appearing with Kaguya, and Zetsu existing. Instead, Kaguya was a normal human (if the wife of an Emperor) born in an era where chakra was a topic of esoteric study who ate from the chakra tree and whose accidental release of the Juubi helped cause the end of her dynasty
and Zetsu existing, instead, Kaguya was a concubine of the emperor of the penultimate dynasty of the Empire who through her actions ended up causing the downfall of said dynasty (it is yet unknown if the God Tree existed, if she was the first human to use chakra, or if the downfall of the dynasty involved the Ten Tails wreaking havoc on the land)
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* AlternateUniverse: [[WordOfGod Word of God]] has that her ''Naruto'' universe lacks the Otstustuki Clan being a race of [[HumanoidAliens]] and Zetsu existing, instead, she was a concubine of the a emperor of the penultimate dynasty of the Empire who through her actions ended up causing the downfall of said dynasty (it is yet unknown if the God Three existed, if she was the first human to use chakra, or if the downfall of the dynasty involved the Ten Tails wreaking havoc on the land)

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* AlternateUniverse: [[WordOfGod Word of God]] has that her ''Naruto'' universe lacks the Otstustuki Clan being a race of [[HumanoidAliens]] and Zetsu existing, instead, she Kaguya was a concubine of the a emperor of the penultimate dynasty of the Empire who through her actions ended up causing the downfall of said dynasty (it is yet unknown if the God Three Tree existed, if she was the first human to use chakra, or if the downfall of the dynasty involved the Ten Tails wreaking havoc on the land)
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* GrailInTheGarbage: Turns out, the Senju owns quite a lot of those, mostly due to stealing some [[ConspicuousConsumption obviously pricey]] stuff during missions and then having to wait before fencing it, due to it being too recognizable. [[spoiler:A lot of it ends up being a part of Tobirama's dowry or finally sold to fund it.]]
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* {{Reveal}}: [[spoiler: Butsuma's murder is Yagura, which was already hinted. But the one who poisoned him beforehand is ''Tokyouma'' -- who was entirely BeneathSuspicion.]]



* ThisIsGonnaSuck: Izuna's reaction when she realises what exactly she will need to do to properly empower her Ame-no-Uzume Mangekyou.

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** Most of the Senju when they learn [[spoiler:what Tajima demands as restitutions.]]



* WhatTheHellHero: Tobirama's gets one from Uchiha Oshiki after he starts avoiding and ignoring Izuna, and inadvertently pushes her towards considering Tajima's ideology.

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** [[spoiler:Touka gives Hashirama a vicious one for being unwilling to Challenge Butsuma when ''the entire clan'' was on the line, but almost Challenging ''her'' father when he's banned from going to the negotiations. Especially since he didn't even ''try'' to assume any responsibilities in the aftermath of Butsuma's murder.]]
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** Chapter 5: Hashirama, Touka, Senju Rinzouma and Senju Yagura.

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** In ''Unchained'':



*** In fact, quite a lot of Chinese and Japanese literature exists in the setting -- a classics from the Imperial Era.

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** Redemption and forgiveness.



** On the Uchiha's side, the clan acknowledges that an abductions is generally not a basis of a good marriage, which is one of the reason they allow only male concubines -- if he escapes, then at least he will not take an Uchiha child with them.

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** Because the Uchiha are disgusted by necromancy, Izuna's attempt to introduce them to ''Literature/MoDaoZuShi'' is an utter flop since they find the main character too repellent and disapprove him not being immediately murdered for his practices. Though it did find the audience outside of the clan.

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** Because the Uchiha are disgusted by necromancy, Izuna's attempt to introduce them to ''Literature/MoDaoZuShi'' is an utter flop in-clan since they find the main character too repellent and disapprove him not being immediately murdered for his practices. Though it did find practices, even though it's a several hundred years old classic for the audience outside of the clan.Elemental Nations.



** ''Literature/MoDaoZuShi'' has been published under the title "Great Sage of Evil" and is rather unpopular among the Uchiha since the main character is a necromancer and ''not'' charbroiled on sight.

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*** In fact, quite a lot of Chinese and Japanese literature exists in the setting -- a classics from the Imperial Era.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13729081/1/Unchained Unchained]]'' is a ''Naruto'' fanfic written by Umei no Mai from ''Fanfic/CompassOfThySoul'' fame, in which the SelfInsert is reincarnated as Izuna instead of OriginalCharacter Kita. Now completed with [[https://m.fanfiction.net/s/13865211/1/Bondage sequel]] in progress.

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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13729081/1/Unchained Unchained]]'' is a ''Naruto'' fanfic written by Umei no Mai from ''Fanfic/CompassOfThySoul'' fame, in which the SelfInsert is reincarnated as Izuna instead of OriginalCharacter Kita. Now completed with [[https://m.[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13865211/1/Bondage sequel]] in progress.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13729081/1/Unchained Unchained]]'' is a ''Naruto'' fanfic written by Umei no Mai from ''Fanfic/CompassOfThySoul'' fame, in which the SelfInsert is reincarnated as Izuna instead of OriginalCharacter Kita. Now completed.

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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13729081/1/Unchained Unchained]]'' is a ''Naruto'' fanfic written by Umei no Mai from ''Fanfic/CompassOfThySoul'' fame, in which the SelfInsert is reincarnated as Izuna instead of OriginalCharacter Kita. Now completed.
completed with [[https://m.fanfiction.net/s/13865211/1/Bondage sequel]] in progress.



Also available on [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/27354487/chapters/66840007 AO3]] with [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/30736715/chapters/75859670 sequel]] in progress.

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Also The series is also available on [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/27354487/chapters/66840007 AO3]] with [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/30736715/chapters/75859670 sequel]] in progress.
org/series/2223435 AO3]].
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Also available on [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/27354487/chapters/66840007 AO3]]

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Also available on [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/27354487/chapters/66840007 AO3]]
AO3]] with [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/30736715/chapters/75859670 sequel]] in progress.
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* GeniusBonus: Izuna refers to the old Imperial order and rule as "the Chrysanthemum Throne". This is a Western way of refering to both the Japanese Emperor and the overall government rule. Which makes sense when you consider this is a post-apocalyptic world.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13729081/1/Unchained Unchained]]'' is a ''Naruto'' fanfic written by Umei no Mai from ''Fanfic/CompassOfThySoul'' fame, in which the SelfInsert is reincarnated as Izuna instead of OriginalCharacter Kita.

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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13729081/1/Unchained Unchained]]'' is a ''Naruto'' fanfic written by Umei no Mai from ''Fanfic/CompassOfThySoul'' fame, in which the SelfInsert is reincarnated as Izuna instead of OriginalCharacter Kita.
Kita. Now completed.
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** Actors and other performers have dubious reputation, and being seen ''with'' them is considered shameful.

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* ExactWords: How Izuna deals with Tobirama's question when she's unwilling or unable to give a full answer.



* NoPeriodsPeriod: Averted. While nothing is ''outright'' said, Touka has one period while in the captivity, requiring a medical procedure from Yori to deal with it quickly and cleanly. [[spoiler:She also uses another upcoming period to conceal from Tobirama that she's planning an escape.]]



** [[spoiler:Following the assassination attempt, Tobirama completely losses all the respect and affection he ever had for his father, since the man obviously didn't love him if he was ready to murder him without even hearing his side of the story.]]



** [[spoiler:In the immediate aftermath of the assassination attempt, Tobirama rapidly goes into shock and had to be taken care of by Izuna. He also notes that he no longer feels safe when sleeping alone in a room, especially if he also has Kiso with him.]]



** Touka is {{Tomboy}} ActionGirl bent on becoming a respected warrior and scorning feminine pursuits, while Tokyouma is NonActionGuy who panics at the sight of blood and would rather tend to medicinal herbs or learn sealing.



* TheTease: Izuna. She has absolutely on qualms about flirting with people and loves to fluster her new concubine.

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** Madara enjoys fried tofu:

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* VoiceChangeling: One if the less known abilities of the Uchiha bloodline is that they can ''perfectly'' imitate other people's voices, intonations and the specific cadence of speaking. And be "perfectly" we mean "actually sounding like that person" to the point that Izuna routinely does all voices in songs or plays.

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* InternalReveal: Tobirama finally learns that his mother was Butsuma's ''second'' wife and Hashirama is his half-brother. He's also not impressed that they appear to be the only ones in the clan not to know it before.

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Tobirama finally learns that his mother was Butsuma's ''second'' wife and Hashirama is his half-brother. He's also not impressed that they appear to be the only ones in the clan not to know it before.before.
** Chapter 41 is one big internal reveal as [[spoiler:Izuna and Tobirama confess their love to each other and Izuna explains the details of Sharingan and Mangekyou, and the meaning of Uchiha clan coats]].
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** Touka is weirded out when lying down on a bed since she just spent two months sleeping on a futon. On the same note, Tobirama quickly gets into the habit of wearing kimono and is mentioned to do it more easily after a while.

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** Because the Uchiha are disgusted by necromancy, Izuna's attempt to introduce them to ''Literature/MoDaoZuShi'' is an utter flop since they find the main character too repellent and disapprove him not being immediately murdered for his practices.

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** Because the Uchiha are disgusted by necromancy, Izuna's attempt to introduce them to ''Literature/MoDaoZuShi'' is an utter flop since they find the main character too repellent and disapprove him not being immediately murdered for his practices. Though it did find the audience outside of the clan.



** Izuna gifted Tobirama a fan with a scene from Literature/{{Dracula}}. Apparently, the story was popular enough with civilians to be made into a well-known play.

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** Izuna gifted Tobirama a fan with a scene from Literature/{{Dracula}}.''Literature/{{Dracula}}''. Apparently, the story was popular enough with civilians to be made into a well-known play.



** Izuna translated the songs from ''{{Music/Hadestown}}'', and her aunt convinces her to let her transcribe them into a proper play.



* ThisIsGonnaSuck: Izuna's reaction when she realises what exactly she will need to do to properly empower her Ame-no-Uzume Mangekyou.



* TrademarkFavoriteFood: Madara enjoys fried tofu, Izuna has such fondness for red bean paste-filled sweets that Tajima punished her with six months without once, and Tobirama muses a good point of his captivity is getting to eat fish.

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Tobirama muses a good point of his captivity is getting to eat fish.fish;
** Saburou likes warabimochi, which is something he shares with his late mother. [[spoiler:Tajima even makes some for him when the boy misses the festival.]]
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* DowryDilemma: Invoked and Exploited. [[spoiler:Izuna's demand for restitutions following the attempted assassination of Tobirama is that the Senju pay the Uchiha his dowry -- one that will show ''exactly'' how much they value him. Now the Senju have to balance their rather limited means with a dowry suitably large for somebody marrying into a noble clan, all the while indirectly trying to convince Tobirama to support their interests before the Uchiha by providing him with means of establishing at least partial independence from Izuna.]]


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* {{Touche}}: [[spoiler:Izuna's reaction to learning that the Senju wrote to the Aburame with a request to arbitrate their negotiations is to mentally congratulate Touka on a well-executed plot.]]

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* ADayInTheLimelight: Every fifth chapter is not from Tobirama's perspective and usually involves something that he didn't witness during the previous four chapters. For now, we've had povs of Izuna, Madara, Hashirama, Touka, Senju Touma and Senju Tokonoma.

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* ADayInTheLimelight: Every fifth chapter is not from Tobirama's perspective and usually involves something that he didn't witness during the previous four chapters. For now, we've had povs of Izuna,
** Chapter 5: Izuna and Hashirama;
** Chapter 10:
Madara, Izuna and Hashirama;
** Chapter 15: Izuna;
** Chapter 20: Madara and Touka;
** Chapter 25:
Hashirama, Touka, Senju Touma Touka and Senju Tokonoma.Touma;
** Chapter 30: Touka, Hashirama and Senju Tokonoma;
** Chapter 35: Touka and Hashirama;
** Chapter 40: Izuna, Tajima and Naka Two-Swords.



** [[spoiler: Hashirama completely missed the point of Butsuma inviting ''asassination specialists'' to the meeting about Tobirama's current situation.]]

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** [[spoiler: Hashirama completely missed the point of Butsuma inviting ''asassination ''assassination specialists'' to the meeting about Tobirama's current situation.]]



** A condition to fully harness the Mangekyo without suffering backlash is to re-enact an episode of the summoned ''kami'''s life. [[spoiler:Izuna entirely unlocks Susano-o when she rescues her concubine Tobirama from Senju assassins, just like the storm ''kami'' protected his beloved Kushinada-hime from the great serpent bent on devouring her.]]

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** A condition to fully harness the Mangekyo Mangekyou without suffering backlash is to re-enact an episode of the summoned ''kami'''s life. [[spoiler:Izuna entirely unlocks Susano-o when she rescues her concubine Tobirama from Senju assassins, just like the storm ''kami'' god protected his beloved Kushinada-hime from the great serpent bent on devouring her.]]]] Though, after that first ''full'' manifestation, the Mangekyou can be manifested at will.

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