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** Izuna, ''Izuna'', '''Izuna'''. She just won't stop flirting with every girl on her path, is credited with writing several ''very'' explicit BawdySong and enjoys her concubine servicing her to the point that she suggests about indulging into what's blatantly kinky -- such as sex in a public location or while she's asleep.

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** Izuna, ''Izuna'', '''Izuna'''. She just won't stop flirting with every girl on her path, is credited with writing several ''very'' explicit BawdySong and enjoys her concubine servicing her to the point that she suggests about indulging into what's blatantly kinky behaviour -- such as sex in a public location or while she's asleep.


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** A condition to fully harness the Mangekyo without suffering backlash is to re-enact an episode of the summoned ''kami'''s life. [[spoiler:Izuna entirely unlocks Susano-o when she rescues her concubine Tobirama from Senju assassins, just like the storm ''kami'' protected his beloved Kushinada-hime from the great serpent bent on devouring her.]]


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** Because the Uchiha are disgusted by necromancy, Izuna's attempt to introduce them to ''Literature/MoDaoZuShi'' is an utter flop since they find the main character too repellent and disapprove him not being immediately murdered for his practices.
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* SparedByTheAdaptation: [[spoiler:Saburou, one of Madara and Izuna's younger brothers.]]

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* SparedByTheAdaptation: [[spoiler:Saburou, one of Madara and Izuna's younger brothers.]]]] Naka Two-Swords.
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** Izuna, ''Izuna'', '''Izuna'''. She just won't stop flirting with every girl on her path, is credited with writing several ''very'' explicit BawdySong and enjoys her concubine servicing her to the point that she suggests about indulging into what's blatantly kinky -- such as sex in a public location or while she's asleep.
** Touka isn't much better, as she heckles her baby cousin about his marital life, gains a pillow book that she later refuses to relinquish and later muses to herself that she's very much into men with a sexy voice.
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** ''Literature/MoDaoZuShi'' has been published under the title "Great Sage of Evil" and is rather unpopular among the Uchiha since the main character is a necromancer and ''not'' charbroiled on sight.
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* HolyIsNotSafe: Sunami-baa notes that Invocation is the most dangerous sealing speciality one can pursue. The practitioners have tendency to ''disappear'' without trace in mysterious circumstances or die from seals backfiring -- even if those seals have been previously used hundred of times. And none of them dared to actually draw such a seal on people, unlike Izuna.
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* TextileWorkIsFeminine: Played with. While Uchiha silk industry is mostly composed of women of various age, there are also numerous men doing embroidery -- mostly former Outguard warriors discharged due to crippling injuries.
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** Ironically, ''Tobirama'' himself can be so focused in his interests it verges on obsession, occasionally flounders when he tries to socialize and is described with unconventional tonal shifts and body language, and has aversion to making eye contact -- something that manifested in his toddlerhood and led Butsuma to believe he was brain-damaged. Being raised by his snow leopards, treated as the BlackSheep of his clan and forced into battle well before puberty certainly didn't help, even if he manages to fake normality.

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** Ironically, ''Tobirama'' himself can be so focused in his interests it verges on obsession, occasionally flounders when he tries to socialize and socialize, is described with using unconventional tonal shifts and body language, and has aversion to making eye contact -- something that manifested in his toddlerhood and led Butsuma to believe he was brain-damaged. Being raised by his snow leopards, treated as the BlackSheep of his clan and forced into battle well before puberty certainly didn't help, even if he manages to fake normality.



** [[spoiler: Hashirama completely missed the point of Butsuma inviting ''assasination specialists'' to the meeting about Tobirama's current situation.]]

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** [[spoiler: Hashirama completely missed the point of Butsuma inviting ''assasination ''asassination specialists'' to the meeting about Tobirama's current situation.]]



** Izuna gifting Izuna a fan with scenery from Dracula.

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** Izuna gifting Izuna gifted Tobirama a fan with scenery a scene from Dracula.Literature/{{Dracula}}. Apparently, the story was popular enough with civilians to be made into a well-known play.
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** Izuna gifting Izuna a fan with scenery from Dracula.
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** Tobirama ha a nightmare in which he's taking part in a tea ceremony hosted by Uchiha Tajima, except he realises in the middle of it that he's not wearing anything.

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** Hashirama notes that what Izuna does to Tobirama is NotSoDifferent from how he himself cultivates his bonsai -- limit opportunities for development, encourage to grow in particular way or direction, and cut away anythung unwanted. The irony is that it's ''exactly'' how Butsuma raised them both.

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** Hashirama notes that what Izuna does to Tobirama is NotSoDifferent from how he himself cultivates his bonsai -- limit opportunities for development, encourage to grow in particular way or direction, and cut away anythung anything unwanted. The irony is that it's ''exactly'' how Butsuma raised them both.both his surviving sons.



* NotWearingPantsDream: After learning more about courtly protocol, Touka starts to have nightmares about being introduced to the Daimyo in her Senju hakama and kimono -- which are so completely under-dressed that being naked would be an improvement.

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** After being introduced to falconry by Madara, Tobirama muses that Izuna treats him as Madara treats his hawks: cajoled into behaving with affection and bribes, but still ''untamed'' and liable to fly away and never return one day.



** Since Izuna is widely to be believed a man, when "he" started talking about his pretty grey-eyed concubine, obviously assumed it is a woman.

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** Ironically, ''Tobirama'' himself can be so focused in his interests it verges on obsession, occasionally flounders when he tries to socialize and is described with unconventional tonal shifts and body language -- something that manifested in his toddlerhood and led Butsuma to believe he was brain-damaged. Being raised by his snow leopards, treated as the BlackSheep of his clan and forced into battle well before puberty certainly didn't help, even if he manages to fake normality.

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** Ironically, ''Tobirama'' himself can be so focused in his interests it verges on obsession, occasionally flounders when he tries to socialize and is described with unconventional tonal shifts and body language language, and has aversion to making eye contact -- something that manifested in his toddlerhood and led Butsuma to believe he was brain-damaged. Being raised by his snow leopards, treated as the BlackSheep of his clan and forced into battle well before puberty certainly didn't help, even if he manages to fake normality.



** The Aburame. [[spoiler:Izuna offhandedly mentioned they are both kuge and on polite terms with the Uchiha, which Touka remembers when the Senju need a neutral arbitrator for their proposed negotiations.]]



** Hashirama notes that what Izuna does to Tobirama is NotSoDifferent from how he himself cultivates his bonsai -- limit opportunities for development, encourage to grow in particular way or direction, and cut away anythung unwanted. The irony is that it's ''exactly'' how Butsuma raised them both.



* EntertaininglyWrong: From the Fire Daimyo and his court's viewpoint, there's already peace between the Senju and the Uchiha -- after all, the Senju Head's younger son was taken as a spouse by the Uchiha Heiress and both clans have been lacking in mutual hostility since. Unfortunately, shinobi feuds aren't that clear cut and Izuna didn't exactly inform the Senju what she was planning beforehand.

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** At one point, Izuna, Tobirama and Touka play a game that was pretty much Cluedo. [[spoiler:Come Butsuma's murder and the circumstances are just as much a riddle, with no obvious suspects, ''several'' simultaneous plots and everyone covering for each other.]]



** Kurama Sumi used to be an infiltration specialist before marrying into the Senju. [[spoiler:She provided Touka and Hashirama with information on how a person might manipulate their higher-ranked spouse for their own ends -- which they use to analyse Tobirama's situation and likely actions.]]

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** Kurama Sumi used to be an infiltration specialist before marrying into the Senju. [[spoiler:She provided Touka and Hashirama with information on how a person might manipulate their higher-ranked spouse for their own ends -- which they use to analyse Tobirama's situation and likely actions. She also has enough poison training to be one of the suspects for Butsuma's murder.]]



** [[spoiler:Tajima ''attempted'' to keep Izuna uniformed of the fact that Butsuma was dead and the Senju are ready to negotiate. When Madara unintentionally clues her in, she's understandably furious.]]
** [[spoiler:Hashirama's relatives keep him away from the negotiations with the Uchiha -- though how much of this is intentional and how much comes from the fact that he's no longer the heir and has nothing to contribute is up for the debate.]]



* MaidenAunt: Tobirama reflects on formidable aunties being an universal stereotype after being introduced to Azumaya-ba -- who will correct anyone on their posture and manners, and is an authority on cord-braiding.

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* MaidenAunt: Tobirama reflects on formidable aunties being an universal stereotype phenomenon after being introduced to Azumaya-ba -- who will correct anyone on their posture and manners, and is an authority on cord-braiding.



** Chapter 30: [[spoiler:Butusma tried to have Tobirama killed as a toddler, which led to Kikuno moving out and keeping the children away for five year. At the end of the chapter, ''someone'' killed Butsuma and Tokonoma helped them by framing the also killed Shitomi for it.]]

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** Chapter 30: [[spoiler:Butusma tried to have Tobirama killed as a toddler, which led to Kikuno moving out and keeping the children away for five year. At the end of the chapter, ''someone'' killed Butsuma and Tokonoma helped them by framing the also killed also-killed Shitomi for it.]]
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* WhoMurderedTheAsshole: Ultimately the result of [[spoiler:Butsuma's assassination]] right after his idiocy threatened to wipe out his entire clan, and even his close kin isn't in a hurry to learn the truth.
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* FamilialThemeNaming: Tajima named his children after sacred mountains to the Shugendo sect of Shinto or things related to said mountains (as his youngest Saburou is named after a tengu living on Mount Iizuna).

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* FamilialThemeNaming: Tajima named his children after sacred mountains to the Shugendo sect of Shinto or things related to said mountains (as his youngest Saburou is named after a tengu living on Mount Iizuna).

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** The Uchiha and the Uzumaki both deal extensively with nobles and samurai, which means they naturally consider the political implication of their publicly known actions and how people are likely to respond, as well as keep informed of going-ons of various courts. The Senju do not have such experience or knowledge, so they can be blindsided by the consequences of their actions [[spoiler:such as neither Butsuma nor Hashirama understanding the severity of situation after the assassination attempt on Tobirama]].



* EntertaininglyWrong: From the daimyo's viewpoint, there's already peace between the Senju and the Uchiha -- after all, the Senju Head's younger son was taken as a spouse by the Uchiha heiress and both clans have been lacking in mutual hostility since. Unfortunately, shinobi politics aren't that simply cut.

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** He also gains shades of a changeling with TheReveal that Butsuma was disturbed by his behavioural oddities and believed he was some kind of ''oni'' that would bring misfortune to the Senju. It's hypothezised that ChangelingTale was inspired by developmentally impaired children, whom their parents would hate and mistreat for being "fey" -- exactly the situation in which Tobirama was stuck.

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** Hashirama, for all his faults, is very good at reading people's emotions and faces, even while they are trying to hide their thoughts.


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* HypocrisyNod: Both Touka and Tobirama are perfectly aware that shinobi are anathema to ''everything'' that Buddhism values, with Tobirama in particular having made various rants and lectures to that effect. It doesn't stop them from still holding those values and observing Buddhist holy days.


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** Not many people outside the clan know that the Uchiha allow only for male concubinage, so most of the outsiders think that Izuna's concubine is a woman, especially since she's publicly pretending to be a man. [[spoiler:Similarly, the letter sent to the Fire Daimyo only said that she has taken a ''spouse'' so the Court thinks that Tobirama is her lawful husband.]]
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* HeelRealization: Downplayed example, but both Hashirama and Touka realise that Tobirama was not treated well by the Senju and he's ''really'' much happier as Izuna's prisoner than he was ''ever'' as part of their clan.


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* WorfHadTheFlu: Turns out, the reason that Tobirama matched Izuna on the battlefield despite her Sharingan is due to her metabolic issues that force her to limit her jutsu usage in combat. Otherwise, she likely would have eventually overpowered or outmanoeuvred him in short order. Tobirama is less than pleased when he learns this, since he prided himself on being so skilled as to match the fabled bloodline limit of the Uchiha.
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** Hikaku, Madara, Tobirama and Izuna share a lot of these while they're doing a drinking game.


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** Also between the Senju and the Hatake. What the Senju might consider to be a brain damage or underdevelopment in toddlers, the Hatake would consider to be a trait inherited from a summon-contracted parent and a sign they are suitable for the contract. [[spoiler:Tobirama being such a child led to five-year long feud between his parents.]]

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* FairyTaleMotifs: The more the story unfolds, the more it appears Tobirama was stuck in CinderellaCircumstances -- after losing his only loving parent, he had to shoulder burdens far too heavy for him and never was truly appreciated for himself (even the more well-intentioned of his relatives just couldn't see anything wrong with his general treatment). Then he gains the attention and affection of a wealthy, highborn spouse who promptly takes him away from the toxic environment and showers him with care and gifts.
** He also gains shades of a changeling with TheReveal that Butsuma was disturbed by his behavioural oddities and believed he was some kind of ''oni'' that would bring misfortune to the Senju. It's hypothezised that ChangelingTale was inspired by developmentally impaired children, whom their parents would hate and mistreat for being "fey" -- exactly the situation in which Tobirama was stuck.
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* AmbiguousDisorder: As the setting has a rather medieval approach to mental health, it's hard to peg what's really wrong within people's heads.
** Tobirama is shown to be weirded out by Uchiha Maru's standoffish and blunt demeanour, suspecting the boy to suffer from a learning disability. If faithful to ''Fanfic/CompassOfThySoul'', a big part of Maru's neurodivergence comes from being [[RaisedByWolves raised by cats after finding himself orphaned]] but he already had been flagged as quiet and introverted so his lack of social skills potentially was ''built upon'' rather than ''caused'' by his circumstances.
** Ironically, ''Tobirama'' himself can be so focused in his interests it verges on obsession, occasionally flounders when he tries to socialize and is described with unconventional tonal shifts and body language -- something that manifested in his toddlerhood and led Butsuma to believe he was brain-damaged. Being raised by his snow leopards, treated as the BlackSheep of his clan and forced into battle well before puberty certainly didn't help, even if he manages to fake normality.

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** After one month without news from Touka or Tobirama, the Senju hold a memorial as they're declared dead. Hashirama doesn't take it well.

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* AfterTheEnd: WordOfGod is that her ''Naruto'' setting is a post-apocalyptic one, as the Judgement (as the Uchiha call the Kyuubi ''singlehandedly destroying the Empire by '''sinking half of the continent under the ocean''''') completely upended the societal dynamics, but since it happened nearly a millenia ago, it's not so visible. The most obvious sign are the steel-and-concrete skyscrapers in Ame and Sora-ku.

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** [[spoiler:Touma's mother is horrified when she learns that Butsuma sent her son alongside the assassination squad -- especially when the Uchiha return the bodies and she thinks her pre-teen son was killed. She only ''somewhat'' settles when Izuna assures her that Touma surrendered.]]
** [[spoiler:Hatake Kikuno moved out of her house with her children and kept them away from her husband for ''five years'' because Butsuma insisted that they kill Tobirama after the medics decided that his neurodivergence meant he would be burden on the clan. And after she died, Tobirama was only spared because he learned how to fake neurotypical behaviour and was already a promising warrior.]]
* AfterTheEnd: WordOfGod is that her ''Naruto'' setting is a post-apocalyptic one, as the Judgement (as the Uchiha call the Kyuubi ''singlehandedly destroying the Empire by '''sinking half of the continent under the ocean''''') completely upended the societal dynamics, but since it happened nearly a millenia millenium ago, it's not so visible. The most obvious sign are the steel-and-concrete skyscrapers in Ame and Sora-ku.



** [[spoiler:The patrol which didn't spot the Senju assassins during their infiltration of the Compound is tasked with cleaning up and renovating the damaged Diplomatic Quarters.]]



** Also between the Senju and the Hatake. What the Senju might consider to be a brain damage or underdevelopment in toddlers, the Hatake would consider to be a trait inherited from a summon-contracted parent and a sign they are suitable for the contract. [[spoiler:Tobirama being such a child led to five-year long feud between his parents.]]



* ADayInTheLimelight: Every fifth chapter is not from Tobirama's perspective and usually involves something that he didn't witness during the previous four chapters. For now, we've had povs of Izuna, Madara, Hashirama, Touka and Senju Touma.

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** Tobirama wonder if something is wrong with Maru due to the boy's behaviour. In reality, Maru is behaving in cat-like manner due to being raised by the summons -- what makes it funnier is that ''Tobirama'' shares many of those same mannerism.

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** Tobirama wonder if something is wrong with Maru due to the boy's behaviour. In reality, Maru is behaving in cat-like manner due to being raised by the summons -- what makes it funnier is that ''Tobirama'' shares many of those same mannerism. [[spoiler:Becomes HarsherInHindsight when Touka notes Butsuma tried to have Tobirama killed over such behaviour as a ''toddler''.]]



* HiddenDepths: Kurama Sumi used to be an infiltration specialist before marrying into the Senju. [[spoiler:She provided Touka and Hashirama with information on how a person might manipulate their higher-ranked spouse for their own ends -- which they use to analyse Tobirama's situation and likely actions.]]

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** Senju Tokonoma is much more reasonable than his brother and he takes over minding Hashirama after Tobirama's capture. [[spoiler:He also ''immediately'' helps to cover up who really killed Butsuma and is ready to ascend as the Clan Head because Hashirama is definitely not ready.]]



* KilledByTheAdaptation: Hijiri and Benten both die due to ForWantOfANail nature of this fic.

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** [[spoiler:Butsuma is murdered couple of years before it happened in ''Compass''.]]



** Combined with MundaneSolution but [[spoiler:when Izuna needs to arrange meeting with the Senju, she sends Taka to do it. The woman in question uses her Mangekyou, which calls on kami's power, to stroll into the Compound and up to Touka, while letting [[NoSell her power]] protect her.]]



** [[spoiler:Once it becomes clear that Butsuma's hatred puts the entire clan at risk, he's unceremoniously murdered in his house and ''his own brother'' helps to cover for the real perpetrator.]]
*** [[spoiler:On that note, Mito decides to leave for Uzushio to save her unborn child from daimyo's revenge since Hashirama refused to depose his father.]]



** Chapter 30: [[spoiler:Butusma tried to have Tobirama killed as a toddler, which led to Kikuno moving out and keeping the children away for five year. At the end of the chapter, ''someone'' killed Butsuma and Tokonoma helped them by framing the also killed Shitomi for it.]]



** Building on the previous point, if Butsuma insists on pursuing the feud, then ''the daimyo himself'' will demand that the Senju are wiped out.

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* BrokenPedestal: Tobirama loses all the affection and respect he had for Butsuma once he realises his father doesn't care about him [[spoiler:following the failed assassination attempt]].



** Case in point, when Izuna shares a memory with Tobirama, he notes that her sight is something usually found in birds, even seeing in wider spectrum of colours than average humans. Without sharingan or any summons contract to account for this.

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* MundaneUtility: The Uchiha use their sharingan for embroidery and weaving, and have jutsu to preserve colours from fading. The last one also doubles as MundaneMadeAwesome since some of the shades are ridiculously expensive to dye.

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* InternalReveal: Tobirama finally learns that his mother was Butsuma's ''second'' wife and Hashirama is his half-brother. He's also not impressed that they appear to be the only ones in the clan not to know it before.


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* RoaringRampageOfRevenge: The Uchiha are infamous for this, especially where death of a loved one is concerned. [[spoiler:One of the reasons Tobirama considers Butsuma an idiot for trying to assassinate him is because Izuna ''would'' massacre the Senju Clan in revenge and there would be noone capable of stopping her so long as Madara distracted Hashirama.]]


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* EveryoneHasStandards: [[spoiler: Tobirama's family is horrified and furious when they learn Butsuma ordered him killed. Even some of his senior lieutenants are angry with him.]]
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* BlingOfWar[=/=]CustomUniform: Each warrior member of the main family of their lineage gets a custom armour. Downplayed, since it usually amounts to some relief-type decorations and colorful paint, and the entire thing is hidden beneath their coats during actual battle. The only time this armour is actually seen is during formal occasions.

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* HeinzHybrid[=/=]UnevenHybrid: Contemplated by Tobirama regarding the Uchiha Clan. Between Yori's ''very'' vulpine smile, the tradition of kitsune wedding, focus on Kami worship and the general weirdness of their bloodlimit, he wonders just ''what'' exactly can be found in their family tree.
** Case in point, when Izuna shares a memory with Tobirama, he notes that her sight is something usually found in birds, even seeing in wider spectrum of colours than average humans. Without sharingan or any summons contract to account for this.



* UnevenHybrid: Contemplated by Tobirama regarding the Uchiha Clan. Between Yori's ''very'' vulpine smile, the tradition of kitsune wedding, focus on Kami worship and the general weirdness of their bloodlimit, he wonders just ''what'' exactly can be found in their family tree.
** Case in point, when Izuna shares a memory with Tobirama, he notes that her sight is something usually found in birds, even seeing in wider spectrum of colours than average humans. Without any sharingan.

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* ChekhovsGun: Uchiha work-clothes and Madara's spare coat that were given to Tobirama. [[spoiler:Touka dresses in them for her escape so she won't be standing out from the Uchiha. She almost manages to leave the compound unnoticed.]]

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Uchiha work-clothes and Madara's spare coat that were given to Tobirama. [[spoiler:Touka dresses in them for her escape so she won't be standing out from the Uchiha. She almost manages to leave the compound unnoticed.]]
** Tobirama's seal. [[spoiler:Izuna says it's partially to protect Tobirama and it reacts to the poisoning attempt. It saves Tobirama when his clansmen try to kill him by ''shattering'' the assassin's sword.
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* ShoutOut: The many, many songs that Izuna translates and writes down for her clan.

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The many, many songs that Izuna translates and writes down for her clan.clan.
** [[Film/ThePrincessBride "As you wish."]]


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** Case in point, when Izuna shares a memory with Tobirama, he notes that her sight is something usually found in birds, even seeing in wider spectrum of colours than average humans. Without any sharingan.

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* AnimalisticAbomination: There are hints that Cats are more than they seem, what with ''all of them'' being sapient, capable of using chakra and learning human languages. [[spoiler:Case in point, the white cat who attached herself to Tobirama was able to kill a grown man and '''ate''' his body afterwards.]]



* ChekhovsGunman:
** Cats, especially the ones that attach themselves to Touka and Tobirama. [[spoiler:The grey queen helps Touka with her escape by sanctioning her release before the Uchiha squad sent in pursuit. The white queen kills one of the men sent to assassinate Tobirama.]]
** Snow leopards. Mentioned early but not actually seen [[spoiler:until Tobirama summons Tounari so she can accompany Izuna to the Senju Compound]].



* CruelAndUnusualDeath: A particularly greedy priests that had the misfortune of angering an already annoyed Izuna - [[spoiler:she uses her Mangekyou to convince him that his bones are on fire]].

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A particularly greedy priests that had the misfortune of angering an already annoyed Izuna - [[spoiler:she uses her Mangekyou to convince him that his bones are on fire]].fire]].
** [[spoiler:The last Senju assassin dies due to Izuna [[MindRape mind raping]] him to death, while she steals all of his knowledge about the attack and those responsible for it.]]



** While kinslaying is frowned upon, it is not a great taboo and people ''will'' do it if they think the individual in question is a threat to the well-being of wider family.



** [[spoiler: Hashirama completely missed the point of Butsuma inviting ''assasination specialists'' to the meeting about Tobirama's current situation.]]



* {{Foreshadowing}}: Touka spends a lot of her time sitting on engawa, either playing or making baskets. [[spoiler:She uses that time to observe how the Uchiha move around the Diplomatic Quarters, which allows her to figure out the best time for her escape.]]

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Touka spends a lot of her time sitting on engawa, either playing or making baskets. [[spoiler:She uses that time to observe how the Uchiha move around the Diplomatic Quarters, which allows her to figure out the best time for her escape.]] She's also rather forlorn for a few days leading up to it.
** [[spoiler: Butsuma inviting ''assassination specialists'' to the meeting about Tobirama's current situation should ring warning bells. Too bad Hashirama is oblivious.
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* CategoryTraitor: After learning of his second son's survival, Butsuma promptly decides Tobirama is this trope for daring to marry the Uchiha heiress instead of picking death for himself and his cousin.


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*** Several Senju warriors also feel pissed off and disgusted by one of them going "traitor" and literally jumping in bed with the enemy.

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