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* MundaneUtility: The Uchiha use their sharingan for embroidery and weaving, and have jutsu to preserve colours from fading. The last one also doubles as MundaneMadeAwesome since some of the shades are ridiculously expensive to dye.
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* CostumePorn: Be prepared for ''a lot'' of lavish descriptions of beautiful kimonos.
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* CostumePorn: Be prepared for ''a lot'' of lavish descriptions of beautiful kimonos.kimono and obi.
** Sumptuary laws are very much a thing, dictating who is allowed to wear which colours and materials depending on their social status and the specific occasion.
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* PurpleIsPowerful: Only very high nobility (such as the Daimyo) gets to dress in purple, mainly because it's expensive to produce and the colour quickly fades. Izuna casually wearing purple outdoors shows just how wealthy and noble her clan is.
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* PurpleIsPowerful: Only the very high highest nobility (such as the Daimyo) gets to dress in purple, with certain shades being reserved for daimyo and his immediate family, mainly because it's expensive to produce and the colour quickly fades. Izuna [[spoiler:Izuna casually wearing purple outdoors shows just how wealthy and noble her clan is.]]
* SimpleYetOpulent: Anything dyed purple, ''especially'' murasaki purple - not only is the dye hard to produce, requiring a lot of flowers to make even small amount, it also fades quickly in light so it cannot be worn outdoors. [[spoiler:The fact that Izuna not only has ''several outdoor'' hakama and kimono in various shades, but also gifts Tobirama with purple '''nagajuban''' -- the equivalent of underwear -- speaks volumes about Uchiha's wealth, status and the skills to use jutsu to preserve colours.]]
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* WhatTheHellHero: Tobirama's gets one from a boy who might be Uchiha Oshiki after he starts avoiding and ignoring Izuna, and inadvertently pushes her towards considering Tajima's ideology.
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* WhatTheHellHero: Tobirama's gets one from a boy who might be Uchiha Oshiki after he starts avoiding and ignoring Izuna, and inadvertently pushes her towards considering Tajima's ideology.
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* CostumePorn: Be prepared for ''a lot'' of lavish descriptions of beautiful kimonos.
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* PurpleIsPowerful: Only very high nobility (such as the Daimyo) gets to dress in purple, mainly because it's expensive to produce and the colour quickly fades. Izuna casually wearing purple outdoors shows just how wealthy and noble her clan is.
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'''Official summary:''' Where you are makes as much a difference as who you are, and changes in circumstances lead down surprising rabbitholes. In this particular case, Izuna decides the best way to establish peace is to abduct Tobirama and turn him into her concubine.
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'''Official summary:''' Where you are makes as much a difference as who you are, and changes in circumstances lead down surprising rabbitholes. In this particular case, rabbit-holes.
(Or: Izuna decides the best way to establish peace is to abduct Tobirama and turn him into herconcubine.
concubine.)
(Or: Izuna decides the best way to establish peace is to abduct Tobirama and turn him into her
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** The Uchiha practice kami worship with elements of ancestor worship thrown in, including Invocation of patrons of their lineage. As such the only festival they really observe as the clan is Tanabata. Something that utterly confuses Tobirama and Touka who were raised in Buddhist tradition.
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** The Uchiha practice kami worship with elements of ancestor worship thrown in, including Invocation of the patrons of their lineage. As such the only festival they really observe as the clan is Tanabata. Something that utterly confuses Tobirama and Touka who were raised in Buddhist tradition.
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* GiveMeASign: Apparently, Izuna spent some time praying and looking for a solution to the feud between the Uchiha and the Senju, and she interprets the inspiration she got from re-reading clan laws as a sign from God.
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* GiveMeASign: Apparently, [[spoiler:Apparently, Izuna spent some time praying and looking for a solution to the feud between the Uchiha and the Senju, and she interprets the inspiration she got from re-reading clan laws as a sign from God.]]
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* IdenticalStranger: Tobirama and Saburou look very much alike, thanks to the Uchiha having Kabema in his family tree. Which is rather unfortunate for the poor boy, all things considered.
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* IdenticalStranger: Tobirama and Saburou [[spoiler:Saburou]] look very much alike, thanks to the Uchiha having Kabema in his family tree. Which is rather unfortunate for the poor boy, all things considered.
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* SparedByTheAdaptation: Saburou, one of Madara and Izuna's younger brothers.
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* SparedByTheAdaptation: Saburou, [[spoiler:Saburou, one of Madara and Izuna's younger brothers.]]
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* YoungAndInCharge: Izuna became the Head of Amaterasu at the age of nine after activating her Mangekyou.
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* WhatTheHellHero: Tobirama's gets one from a boy who might be Uchiha Oshiki after he starts avoiding and ignoring Izuna, and inadvertently pushes her towards considering Tajima's ideology.
* YoungAndInCharge: Izuna became the Head of Amaterasuat [[spoiler:at the age of nine nine]] after activating her Mangekyou.
* YoungAndInCharge: Izuna became the Head of Amaterasu
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** The difference in social status between the Uchiha and the Senju means that a peace on equal terms is impossible. Either the Senju become VoluntaryVassal to the Uchiha or the feud continues until one clan manages to completely subjugate the other.
* LoopholeAbuse: Since ''technically'' Uchiha lands are not part of the Land of Fire, but merely a VoluntaryVassal, there are certain privileges that they enjoy and they can get away with things that are not allowed in the rest of the country.
** One example is that Izuna is allowed to own a pillow book, which is forbidden by law in Fire.
** At the same time, the Fire Daimyo does not ''have to'' intervene in their feud with the Senju since it's classified as a private dispute.
** Similarly, the fact that the Senju are primarily mercenary clan and their farmers do not use the clan name means that they are considered a nomadic clan and not subject to any daimyo's oversight -- nevermind that they've been squatting just off the Uchiha lands for the last five centuries.
** One example is that Izuna is allowed to own a pillow book, which is forbidden by law in Fire.
** At the same time, the Fire Daimyo does not ''have to'' intervene in their feud with the Senju since it's classified as a private dispute.
** Similarly, the fact that the Senju are primarily mercenary clan and their farmers do not use the clan name means that they are considered a nomadic clan and not subject to any daimyo's oversight -- nevermind that they've been squatting just off the Uchiha lands for the last five centuries.
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** On the Uchiha's side, the clan acknowledges that an abductions is generally not a basis of a good marriage.
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** On the Uchiha's side, the clan acknowledges that an abductions is generally not a basis of a good marriage.marriage, which is one of the reason they allow only male concubines -- if he escapes, then at least he will not take an Uchiha child with them.
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** Similarly, Izuna becomes fond of Tobirama [[spoiler:and falls in love with him]] despite repeated warnings by her father that it's unwise to trust a prisoner.
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* CultureClash: Happens between the Uchiha and the Senju due to different traditions and backgrounds.
** Being a noble clan, the Uchiha have very high standards for the education of their children, in addition to being involved in politics on ''at least'' national scale, having working relationship with multiple other clans and staking a visible corner in market for certain craft goods. Contrast with the Senju who are both peasants and exclusively mercenary clan, and as such do not generally educate children outside of the main family, rarely cooperate or ally with other shinobi clans, and do not consider non-warrior carriers at all to the point of stripping the clan name from people who decide to become craftsmen.
** The Uchiha practice kami worship with elements of ancestor worship thrown in, including Invocation of patrons of their lineage. As such the only festival they really observe as the clan is Tanabata. Something that utterly confuses Tobirama and Touka who were raised in Buddhist tradition.
** Building on the previous point, the Senju bury their dead and make sure to celebrate Obon so that the ghosts of their family members are laid to rest. Meanwhile, the Uchiha long ago decided on a very pragmatic solution of burning the bodies and preventing the ghosts from returning in the first place to the point some of them will even burn the bodies of the enemies killed during a battle.
** Being a noble clan, the Uchiha have very high standards for the education of their children, in addition to being involved in politics on ''at least'' national scale, having working relationship with multiple other clans and staking a visible corner in market for certain craft goods. Contrast with the Senju who are both peasants and exclusively mercenary clan, and as such do not generally educate children outside of the main family, rarely cooperate or ally with other shinobi clans, and do not consider non-warrior carriers at all to the point of stripping the clan name from people who decide to become craftsmen.
** The Uchiha practice kami worship with elements of ancestor worship thrown in, including Invocation of patrons of their lineage. As such the only festival they really observe as the clan is Tanabata. Something that utterly confuses Tobirama and Touka who were raised in Buddhist tradition.
** Building on the previous point, the Senju bury their dead and make sure to celebrate Obon so that the ghosts of their family members are laid to rest. Meanwhile, the Uchiha long ago decided on a very pragmatic solution of burning the bodies and preventing the ghosts from returning in the first place to the point some of them will even burn the bodies of the enemies killed during a battle.
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* DoubleStandardRapeFemaleOnMale: Completely averted. Tobirama's condition as a prisoner is fully acknowledged, and there are Uchiha laws establishing that no matter the gender, forcing someone into sexual intimacy is ''not'' okay.
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* ISeeDeadPeople: Izuna implies that the sharingan is capable of doing this, which influenced Uchiha funerary traditions.
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* KillItWithFire: Standard Uchiha approach to pretty much everything, but special mention goes to their treatment of necromancers and restless dead.
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* OneDoseFitsAll: Completely Averted. Touka cannot be given more painkillers for her broken legs because she would overdose, a mention is made that the stronger drugs need to be carefully measured because it's ''too easy'' to give a lethal amount and some painkillers can react unusually in people with bloodline limits.
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* RedBaron: Since the Uchiha and the Senju don't actually know the names of each of their enemies, they usually give to the more notable ones an epithet to differentiate them.
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* CentralTheme: Consent and coercion.
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* CentralTheme: Consent Consent, especially QuestionableConsent, and coercion.
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* SerenadeYourLover: Izuna will ''happily'' do so, much to Tobirama's embarrassment considering her song choices.
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* CruelAndUnusualDeath: A particularly greedy priests that had the misfortune of angering already annoyed Izuna - [[spoiler:she uses her Mangekyou to convince him that his bones are on fire]].
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* CruelAndUnusualDeath: A particularly greedy priests that had the misfortune of angering an already annoyed Izuna - [[spoiler:she uses her Mangekyou to convince him that his bones are on fire]].
* GildedCage: The Diplomatic Quarters are well built and comfortably furnished, and Izuna will provide anything that is requested, within reason. It's still a prison that Tobirama and Touka plan to escape at the earliest convenience.
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* NeverLearnedToRead: Subverted. Tobirama ''did'' learn to read... katakana and the thousand common kanji plus an additional handful for his seals. Which is ''nowhere'' near enough to what is considered a basic education for high ranking nobles such as the Uchiha, meaning he has no hope of actually reading any of the books and scrolls that Izuna provides him with.
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* NeverLearnedToRead: Subverted. Tobirama ''did'' learn to read... katakana and the thousand common kanji plus an additional handful for his seals. Which is ''nowhere'' near enough close to what is considered a basic education for high ranking nobles such as the Uchiha, meaning he has no hope of actually reading any of the books and scrolls that Izuna provides him with.
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* PoorCommunicationKills: Consciously defied by Izuna who makes sure to explain herself clearly to Tobirama and Touka, and to answer any questions they present her.
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* UnusuallyUninterestingSight: Uchiha Nukabira having an emotional meltdown and crying himself out over his lover leaving him is not even acknowledged by the other Uchiha present -- it's certainly not worth delaying the lunch over. Subverted with Tobirama and Touka who are understandably feeling confused and awkward to witness this.
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* ArtifactOfDoom: A downplayed example. [[spoiler:During a mission, Izuna's squad needs to retrieve [[WindsOfDestinyChange a lucky cat statue]] stolen from a temple. The mission is one disaster after another, for all that no Uchiha actually died, and the moment it's over the entire squad runs for the country border - just to be on the safe side.]]
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* ArtifactOfDoom: A downplayed example. [[spoiler:During a mission, Izuna's squad needs to retrieve [[WindsOfDestinyChange a lucky cat statue]] stolen from a temple. The mission is one disaster after another, for all that no Uchiha actually died, and the moment it's over the entire squad runs for the country border - just to be on the safe side.]]
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* ArtifactOfDoom: A downplayed example. [[spoiler:During a mission, Izuna's squad needs to retrieve [[WindsOfDestinyChange a lucky cat statue]] stolen from a temple. The mission BifauxnenAndLadette: Izuna is one disaster after another, the Bifauxnen as she's noticeably cultured, very charming with other people and not afraid of being feminine by dressing up and marrying, while Touka is the Ladette who enjoys roasting her cousin for all that no Uchiha actually died, his sex life and the moment it's over the entire squad runs for the country border - just to be on the safe side.]]actively scorns feminine hobbies. They get along rather well.
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* CoolAndUnusualPunishment: Apparently something of a specialty for Tajima:
** Madara had to copy the entire scroll containing Uchiha Clan Law after being found meeting with Hashirama.
** Izuna's punishment for experimenting with seals without training or supervision was getting banned from all of her favourite sweets for half-a-year.
** Madara had to copy the entire scroll containing Uchiha Clan Law after being found meeting with Hashirama.
** Izuna's punishment for experimenting with seals without training or supervision was getting banned from all of her favourite sweets for half-a-year.
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* KickTheDog: Butsuma, full stop.
** First, he forces a clanswoman to send her summons to the Uchiha Compound to spy on them, despite it being against her contract. Then, when the summons was - predictably - killed during the infiltration and the girl lost her contract permanently, he demotes her and reassigns her to a desk job. Poor Kikyou is left in tears.
** Similarly, when Hashirama is crying over Tobirama's perceived death, he berates his son for "showing weakness" before the clan.
** First, he forces a clanswoman to send her summons to the Uchiha Compound to spy on them, despite it being against her contract. Then, when the summons was - predictably - killed during the infiltration and the girl lost her contract permanently, he demotes her and reassigns her to a desk job. Poor Kikyou is left in tears.
** Similarly, when Hashirama is crying over Tobirama's perceived death, he berates his son for "showing weakness" before the clan.
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** Tobirama slowly develops into this, mostly because it's one of the only ways for him to extend some kind of control over his situation.
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* GiveMeASign: Apparently, Izuna spent some time praying and looking for a solution to the feud between the Uchiha and the Senju, and she interprets the inspiration she got from re-reading clan laws as a sign from God.
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* ReligionIsMagic: Seals can be used to call upon the powers of various gods and kami. For example, the seal that was put on Tobirama Invokes Yatagarasu, while the ones that protect the Uchiha Compound from ghosts and undead are referred to as "prayers". Of course, it's also noted that HolyIsNotSafe.
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* BawdySong: Izuna apparently "wrote" (read: translated) a ''lot'' of these, and enjoys singing them -- for Touka's amusement and Tobirama's horror.
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* BawdySong: Izuna apparently "wrote" (read: translated) a ''lot'' of these, and enjoys singing them -- for to Touka's amusement and Tobirama's horror.horror.
* ArtifactOfDoom: A downplayed example. [[spoiler:During a mission, Izuna's squad needs to retrieve [[WindsOfDestinyChange a lucky cat statue]] stolen from a temple. The mission is one disaster after another, for all that no Uchiha actually died, and the moment it's over the entire squad runs for the country border - just to be on the safe side.]]
* ArtifactOfDoom: A downplayed example. [[spoiler:During a mission, Izuna's squad needs to retrieve [[WindsOfDestinyChange a lucky cat statue]] stolen from a temple. The mission is one disaster after another, for all that no Uchiha actually died, and the moment it's over the entire squad runs for the country border - just to be on the safe side.]]
* CruelAndUnusualDeath: A particularly greedy priests that had the misfortune of angering already annoyed Izuna - [[spoiler:she uses her Mangekyou to convince him that his bones are on fire]].
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* EmbarrassingSuperpower: [[spoiler: Ame-no-Uzume, the Great Persuader, allows Izuna to entrance her targets into looking at her and making them believe every word she says... as long as she's ''undressing''. She bursts into tears after understanding that, and her squad feels pretty awkward too.]]
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* EmbarrassingSuperpower: [[spoiler: Ame-no-Uzume, the Great Persuader, allows Izuna to entrance her targets into looking at her and making them believe every word she says... as long as she's ''undressing''.''[[DistractedByTheSexy undressing]]''. She bursts into tears after understanding that, and her squad feels pretty awkward too.]]
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* TheCasanova: Izuna, full stop. She will cheerfully flirt her way through missions if at all possible, spend time with geisha and oiran, patronise brothels and tea shops, sneak in to visit noblewomen and generally charm any woman around her. [[spoiler:Subverted, because she only does it to hear latest gossip, confirm some piece of intelligence or distract from what the rest of her team is doing.]]
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** Killing an entire clan down to the youngest children is a perfectly acceptable punishment for peasant getting uppity and attacking nobles - Izuna outright says that if her plot doesn't work out, she ''will'' convince Madara to take the Uchiha's greviances to the daimyo.
* DoubleStandardRapeFemaleOnMale: Completely averted. Tobirama's condition as a prisoner is fully acknowledged, and there's Uchiha laws establishing that no matter the gender, forcing someone into sexual intimacy is ''not'' okay.
* DoubleStandardRapeFemaleOnMale: Completely averted. Tobirama's condition as a prisoner is fully acknowledged, and there's Uchiha laws establishing that no matter the gender, forcing someone into sexual intimacy is ''not'' okay.
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** Killing an entire clan down to the youngest children is a perfectly acceptable punishment for peasant peasants getting uppity and attacking nobles - Izuna outright says that if her plot doesn't work out, she ''will'' convince Madara to take the Uchiha's greviances to the daimyo.
* DoubleStandardRapeFemaleOnMale: Completely averted. Tobirama's condition as a prisoner is fully acknowledged, andthere's there are Uchiha laws establishing that no matter the gender, forcing someone into sexual intimacy is ''not'' okay.
* DoubleStandardRapeFemaleOnMale: Completely averted. Tobirama's condition as a prisoner is fully acknowledged, and
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* IdenticalStranger: Tobirama and Saburou look very much alike, thanks to the Uchiha having Kabema in his family tree. Which is rather unfortunate for the poor boy, all things considered.
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* TheTease: Izuna. She has absolutely on qualms about flirting with people and loves to fluster her new concubine.
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* UnevenHybrid: Contemplated by Tobirama regarding the Uchiha Clan. Between Yori's ''very'' vulpine smile, the tradition of kitsune wedding, focus on Kami worship and the general weirdness of their bloodlimit, he wonders just ''what'' exactly can be found in their family tree.
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* {{Fetish}}: Izuna ''really'' likes dressing Tobirama in silks.
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* {{Fetish}}: {{Fetish}}:
** Izuna ''really'' likes dressing Tobirama insilks.silks.
** In turn, Tobirama likes giving her hickeys.
** Izuna ''really'' likes dressing Tobirama in
** In turn, Tobirama likes giving her hickeys.
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* EmbarrassingSuperpower: Ame-no-Uzume, the Great Persuader, allows Izuna to entrance her targets into looking at her and making them believe every word she says... as long as she's ''undressing''. She bursts into tears after understanding that, and her squad feels pretty awkward too.
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* EmbarrassingSuperpower: [[spoiler: Ame-no-Uzume, the Great Persuader, allows Izuna to entrance her targets into looking at her and making them believe every word she says... as long as she's ''undressing''. She bursts into tears after understanding that, and her squad feels pretty awkward too.]]
* {{Fetish}}: Izuna ''really'' likes dressing Tobirama in silks.
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* MovingTheGoalposts: Tajima does it in regards to informing the daimyo of Izuna's marriage - first by demanding they wait for the Senju's reaction, then for Izuna getting pregnant, and ''then'' to make sure she's still pregnant after two months.
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* MovingTheGoalposts: Tajima does it in regards to informing the daimyo of Izuna's marriage - first by demanding they wait for the Senju's reaction, then for Izuna getting pregnant, [[spoiler: and ''then'' to make sure she's still pregnant after two months.months]].
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!!The story aims to explore consent and coercion. Administrivia/YouHaveBeenWarned!
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'''Official summary:''' Where you are makes as much a difference as who you are, and changes in circumstances lead down surprising rabbitholes. In this particular case, Izuna decides the best way to establish peace is to abduct Tobirama and turn him into her concubine.
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!!Be warned: the story aims to explore dubcon and coercion.
!Contains the following tropes
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!This fanfic contains the following
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** The story opens on Izuna abducting Tobirama in order to have children by him, offering to kill him and his cousin Toka if he doesn't agree and threatening him with [[TheDreaded Tajima's]] impending return from battle to make him decide '''now'''. And if she truly wanted to play hardball, she would have chained him to the wall and forced him to service her and hand over valuable intelligence in exchange of the bare necessities.
** Poor Toka has been abducted, her legs broken to prevent her from escaping, and now she's used as a way to blackmail Tobirama into compliance, with a threat of permanent maiming hanging over her.
** After one month without news from Toka or Tobirama, the Senju hold a memorial as they're declared dead. Hashirama doesn't take it well.
** Poor Toka has been abducted, her legs broken to prevent her from escaping, and now she's used as a way to blackmail Tobirama into compliance, with a threat of permanent maiming hanging over her.
** After one month without news from Toka or Tobirama, the Senju hold a memorial as they're declared dead. Hashirama doesn't take it well.
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** The story opens on Izuna abducting Tobirama in order to have children by him, offering to kill him and his cousin Toka Touka if he doesn't agree and threatening him with [[TheDreaded Tajima's]] impending return from battle to make him decide '''now'''. And if she truly wanted to play hardball, she would have chained him to the wall and forced him to service her and hand over valuable intelligence in exchange of the bare necessities.
** PoorToka Touka has been abducted, her legs broken to prevent her from escaping, and now she's used as a way to blackmail Tobirama into compliance, with a threat of permanent maiming hanging over her.
** After one month without news fromToka Touka or Tobirama, the Senju hold a memorial as they're declared dead. Hashirama doesn't take it well.
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* AndIMustScream: The reason why Uchihas are opposed to necromancy, since it binds the soul to the decaying body and force the deceased to obey the summoner without any hope to escape.
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* AndIMustScream: The reason why Uchihas the Uchiha are opposed to necromancy, since it binds the soul to the decaying body and force the deceased to obey the summoner without any hope to escape.
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* BawdySong: Izuna apparently "wrote" (read: translated) a ''lot'' of these, and enjoys singing them -- for Toka's amusement and Tobirama's horror.
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* BawdySong: Izuna apparently "wrote" (read: translated) a ''lot'' of these, and enjoys singing them -- for Toka's Touka's amusement and Tobirama's horror.
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* CasualKink: After hearing her cousin enthusiastically and vigorously servicing Izuna, Toka jokes she would have found a nice Uzumaki girl to tie Tobirama to his bedpost if she had known he was into abduction roleplay.
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* CasualKink: After hearing her cousin enthusiastically and vigorously servicing Izuna, Toka Touka jokes she would have found a nice Uzumaki girl to tie Tobirama to his bedpost if she had known he was into abduction roleplay.
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* EmbarrassingSuperpower: Ama-no-Uzume, the Great Persuader, allows Izuna to entrance her targets into looking at her and standing still... as long as she's ''undressing''. She bursts into tears after understanding that, and her squad feels pretty awkward too.
* GirlInTheTower: Tobirama and Toka are kept locked up in the Diplomatic Quarters of the Uchiha compound.
* GirlInTheTower: Tobirama and Toka are kept locked up in the Diplomatic Quarters of the Uchiha compound.
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* EmbarrassingSuperpower: Ama-no-Uzume, Ame-no-Uzume, the Great Persuader, allows Izuna to entrance her targets into looking at her and standing still...making them believe every word she says... as long as she's ''undressing''. She bursts into tears after understanding that, and her squad feels pretty awkward too.
* FailedASpotCheck:
** Tobirama somehow doesn't notice the ''very'' intricate embroidered patchwork on the inside of his borrowed coat until Izuna literally turns it inside-out.
** He also completely overlooked Izuna's reputation as TheCasanova to the point he's unable to even recall any rumours about "him" when talking with Touka.
* GirlInTheTower: Tobirama andToka Touka are kept locked up in the Diplomatic Quarters of the Uchiha compound.
* FailedASpotCheck:
** Tobirama somehow doesn't notice the ''very'' intricate embroidered patchwork on the inside of his borrowed coat until Izuna literally turns it inside-out.
** He also completely overlooked Izuna's reputation as TheCasanova to the point he's unable to even recall any rumours about "him" when talking with Touka.
* GirlInTheTower: Tobirama and
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** How Izuna coerces Tobirama into becoming her concubine, showing him that she also abducted his cousin Toka and as such, refusing her offer would also mean killing Toka.
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** How Izuna coerces Tobirama into becoming her concubine, showing him that she also abducted his cousin Toka Touka and as such, refusing her offer would also mean killing Toka.Touka.
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* KilledByTheAdaptation: Hijiri and Benten both die due to ForWantOfANail.
* MasculineGirlFeminineBoy: Izuna is very much an ActionGirl who's not afraid of agressively taking steps for her future plans and has a reputation as a {{Casanova}}, while Tobirama is forced to be passive and manipulative, letting his hair grow out and dressing up for Izuna as well as learning braiding cords - typically a feminine activity.
* MasculineGirlFeminineBoy: Izuna is very much an ActionGirl who's not afraid of agressively taking steps for her future plans and has a reputation as a {{Casanova}}, while Tobirama is forced to be passive and manipulative, letting his hair grow out and dressing up for Izuna as well as learning braiding cords - typically a feminine activity.
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* KilledByTheAdaptation: Hijiri and Benten both die due to ForWantOfANail.
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* MasculineGirlFeminineBoy: Izuna is very much an ActionGirl who's not afraid ofagressively aggressively taking steps for her future plans and has a reputation as a {{Casanova}}, as TheCasanova, while Tobirama is forced to be passive and manipulative, letting his hair grow out and dressing up for Izuna as well as learning braiding cords - typically a feminine activity.
* MasculineGirlFeminineBoy: Izuna is very much an ActionGirl who's not afraid of
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* NiceHat: The Terumii clan has a code for wearing hats. Mention is made of Senju Kabema trying to use that in order to lead a full Uchiha squad to a gruesome demise, giving them headgear claiming they had done ''something'' punishable by death.
* ParentalSexualitySquick: Zigzagged. Tajima looks pretty indifferent to his daughter stealing a man for herself, but Izuna's brothers would very much like avoid the topic of their sister's marriage, thank you very much. Toka also mercilessly teases Tobirama over his performance in bed.
* ParentalSexualitySquick: Zigzagged. Tajima looks pretty indifferent to his daughter stealing a man for herself, but Izuna's brothers would very much like avoid the topic of their sister's marriage, thank you very much. Toka also mercilessly teases Tobirama over his performance in bed.
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* MovingTheGoalposts: Tajima does it in regards to informing the daimyo of Izuna's marriage - first by demanding they wait for the Senju's reaction, then for Izuna getting pregnant, and ''then'' to make sure she's still pregnant after two months.
* NeverLearnedToRead: Subverted. Tobirama ''did'' learn to read... katakana and the thousand common kanji plus an additional handful for his seals. Which is ''nowhere'' near enough to what is considered a basic education for high ranking nobles such as the Uchiha, meaning he has no hope of actually reading any of the books and scrolls that Izuna provides him with.
* NiceHat: The Terumiiclan Clan has a code for wearing hats. Mention is made of Senju Kabema trying to use that in order to lead a full Uchiha squad to a gruesome demise, giving them headgear claiming they had done ''something'' punishable by death.
* ParentalSexualitySquick: Zigzagged. Tajima looks pretty indifferent to his daughter stealing a man for herself, but Izuna's brothers would very much like avoid the topic of their sister's marriage, thank you very much.Toka Touka also mercilessly teases Tobirama over his performance in bed.
* NeverLearnedToRead: Subverted. Tobirama ''did'' learn to read... katakana and the thousand common kanji plus an additional handful for his seals. Which is ''nowhere'' near enough to what is considered a basic education for high ranking nobles such as the Uchiha, meaning he has no hope of actually reading any of the books and scrolls that Izuna provides him with.
* NiceHat: The Terumii
* ParentalSexualitySquick: Zigzagged. Tajima looks pretty indifferent to his daughter stealing a man for herself, but Izuna's brothers would very much like avoid the topic of their sister's marriage, thank you very much.
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** Several Uchihas are rather displeased by one of them deciding to marry one of their hated foes instead of slitting his throat, in spite of her rational explanations. Generational hatred doesn't vanish in one day.
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** Several Uchihas Uchiha are rather displeased by one of them deciding to marry one of their hated foes instead of slitting his throat, in spite of her rational explanations. Generational hatred doesn't vanish in one day.
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** Tobirama gradually warms up to Izuna not only because she's nice, she's also his main source of stimulation. He's painfully aware that without Toka, he already would have completely fallen under her spell.
* SheCleansUpNicely: Both Tobirama and Izuna get to be dolled up in fancy kimono. The results are suitably impressive.
* SheCleansUpNicely: Both Tobirama and Izuna get to be dolled up in fancy kimono. The results are suitably impressive.
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** Tobirama gradually warms up to Izuna not only because she's nice, she's also his main source of stimulation. He's painfully aware that without Toka, Touka, he already would have completely fallen under her spell.
* SheCleansUpNicely: Both Tobirama and Izuna get to be dolled up in fancy kimono. The results are suitablyimpressive.impressive, though Tobirama is rather weirded out by how different he looks.
* SheCleansUpNicely: Both Tobirama and Izuna get to be dolled up in fancy kimono. The results are suitably
* ShoutOut: The many, many songs that Izuna translates and writes down for her clan.
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* SparedByTheAdaptation: Saburo, one of Madara and Izuna's younger brothers.
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* SparedByTheAdaptation: Saburo, Saburou, one of Madara and Izuna's younger brothers.
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* UnwillinglyGirlyTomboy: Toka is quite emphatically a warrior, but her broken legs and current imprisonment force her to turn towards more traditionally feminine activities such as basket-weaving and music. She feels horrendously humiliated over it.
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* {{Tomboy}}: Touka is quite emphatically a warrior and scorned learning any of the traditionally feminine skills to be able to remain one.
** UnwillinglyGirlyTomboy:Toka is quite emphatically a warrior, but her broken legs and Her current imprisonment force forces her to turn towards more prove her usefulness to her captors - but the only activities she's allowed are the traditionally feminine activities ones such as basket-weaving and music. She feels horrendously humiliated over it.She's not happy at all, both at being made to do it and at never learning in the first place.
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* YoungAndInCharge: Izuna became the Head of Amaterasu at the age of 9 after activating her Mangekyou.
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* YoungAndInCharge: Izuna became the Head of Amaterasu at the age of 9 nine after activating her Mangekyou.
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* CasualKink: After hearing her cousin enthusiastically and vigorously servicing Izuna, Toka jokes she would have found a nice Uzumaki girl to tie Tobirama to his bedpost if she had known he was into abduction roleplay.
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* AndIMustScream: The reason why Uchihas are opposed to necromancy, since it binds the sould to the decaying body and force the deceased to obey the summoner without any hope to escape.
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* AndIMustScream: The reason why Uchihas are opposed to necromancy, since it binds the sould soul to the decaying body and force the deceased to obey the summoner without any hope to escape.
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* AndIMustScream: The reason why Uchihas are opposed to necromancy, since it binds the sould to the decaying body and force the deceased to obey the summoner without any hope to escape.
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* EmbarrassingSuperpower: Ama-no-Uzume, the Great Persuader, allows Izuna to entrance her targets into looking at her and standing still... as long as she's ''undressing''. She bursts into tears after understanding that, and her squad feels pretty awkward too.
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* NiceHat: The Terumii clan has a code for wearing hats. Mention is made of Senju Kabema trying to use that in order to lead a full Uchiha squad to a gruesome demise, giving them headgear claiming they had done ''something'' punishable by death.
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* UnwillinglyGirlyTomboy: Toka is quite emphatically a warrior, but her broken legs and current imprisonment force her to turn towards more traditionally feminine activities such as basket-weaving and music. She feels horrendously humiliated over it.
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** If Izuna's plot doesn't work and the Senju continue attacking the Uchiha, she will convince Madara to appeal to the daimyo. Considering the pseudo-Japanese setting, it will result in the entire Senju Clan being turned into ''an example''.
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* BawdySong: Izuna apparently "wrote" (read:translated) a ''lot'' of these, and enjoys singing them -- for Toka's amusement and Tobirama's horror.
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* BawdySong: Izuna apparently "wrote" (read:translated) (read: translated) a ''lot'' of these, and enjoys singing them -- for Toka's amusement and Tobirama's horror.
* DeliberateValuesDissonance:
** Both concubinage and forced marriage are permitted across Elemental Nations for noble clans and families, though not all of them practice it.
** Killing an entire clan down to the youngest children is a perfectly acceptable punishment for peasant getting uppity and attacking nobles - Izuna outright says that if her plot doesn't work out, she ''will'' convince Madara to take the Uchiha's greviances to the daimyo.
** Both concubinage and forced marriage are permitted across Elemental Nations for noble clans and families, though not all of them practice it.
** Killing an entire clan down to the youngest children is a perfectly acceptable punishment for peasant getting uppity and attacking nobles - Izuna outright says that if her plot doesn't work out, she ''will'' convince Madara to take the Uchiha's greviances to the daimyo.
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* HistoryRepeats: So, there's an Uchiha ActionGirl from the main lineage abducting a pretty Senju as her concubine -- are we talking about Uchiha Biei-Fuji and Senju Kabema or Uchiha Izuna and Senju Tobirama?
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* HistoryRepeats: So, there's an Uchiha ActionGirl from the main lineage Head of Amaterasu line abducting a pretty male Senju warrior as her concubine -- are we talking about Uchiha Biei-Fuji and Senju Kabema or Uchiha Izuna and Senju Tobirama?
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* MasculineGirlFeminineBoy: Izuna is very much an ActionGirl who's not afraid of agressively taking steps for her future plans, while Tobirama is forced to be passive and manipulative, even learning how to braid cords and letting his hair grow.
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* MasculineGirlFeminineBoy: Izuna is very much an ActionGirl who's not afraid of agressively taking steps for her future plans, plans and has a reputation as a {{Casanova}}, while Tobirama is forced to be passive and manipulative, even learning how to braid cords and letting his hair grow.grow out and dressing up for Izuna as well as learning braiding cords - typically a feminine activity.
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* SheCleansUpNicely: Both Tobirama and Izuna get to be dolled up in fancy kimonos. The results are suitably impressive.
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* SheCleansUpNicely: Both Tobirama and Izuna get to be dolled up in fancy kimonos.kimono. The results are suitably impressive.
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** The story opens on Izuna abducting Tobirama in order to have children by him, threatening to kill him and his cousin Toka if he doesn't comply. And if she truly wanted to play hardball, she would have chained him to the wall and forced him to service her in exchange of the bare necessities.
** Poor Toka has been abducted, her legs broken to prevent her from escaping, and now she's used as a way to blackmail Tobirama into compliance.
** Poor Toka has been abducted, her legs broken to prevent her from escaping, and now she's used as a way to blackmail Tobirama into compliance.
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** The story opens on Izuna abducting Tobirama in order to have children by him, threatening offering to kill him and his cousin Toka if he doesn't comply. agree and threatening him with [[TheDreaded Tajima's]] impending return from battle to make him decide '''now'''. And if she truly wanted to play hardball, she would have chained him to the wall and forced him to service her and hand over valuable intelligence in exchange of the bare necessities.
** Poor Toka has been abducted, her legs broken to prevent her from escaping, and now she's used as a way to blackmail Tobirama intocompliance.compliance, with a threat of permanent maiming hanging over her.
** Poor Toka has been abducted, her legs broken to prevent her from escaping, and now she's used as a way to blackmail Tobirama into
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** Tobirama can imagine several reasons for Izuna to hide her true gender, and none of them good.
* AmbiguouslyBi: Izuna is pretty comfortable in masculine clothing and has quite a reputation as TheCasanova, but is apparently happy with her male concubine.
* AmbiguouslyBi: Izuna is pretty comfortable in masculine clothing and has quite a reputation as TheCasanova, but is apparently happy with her male concubine.
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** Tobirama can imagine several reasons for Izuna to hide her true gender, gender on battlefield, and none of them good.
* AmbiguouslyBi: Izuna is pretty comfortable in masculine clothing and has quite a (justified) reputation as TheCasanova, but is apparently happy with her male concubine.
* AmbiguouslyBi: Izuna is pretty comfortable in masculine clothing and has quite a (justified) reputation as TheCasanova, but is apparently happy with her male concubine.
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* BawdySong: Izuna apparently wrote a ''lot'' of these, and enjoys singing them -- for Toka's amusement and Tobirama's horror.
* BroughtDownToNormal: In order to keep their Senju prisoners unable to escape and manageable, Izuna creates a seal cutting them from access to their chakra.
* BroughtDownToNormal: In order to keep their Senju prisoners unable to escape and manageable, Izuna creates a seal cutting them from access to their chakra.
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* BawdySong: Izuna apparently wrote "wrote" (read:translated) a ''lot'' of these, and enjoys singing them -- for Toka's amusement and Tobirama's horror.
* BroughtDownToNormal: In order to keep their Senju prisoners unable to escape and manageable, Izunacreates a seal cutting locks them from access to their chakra.up in the Diplomatic Quarters with the chakra draining seals up and running.
* BroughtDownToNormal: In order to keep their Senju prisoners unable to escape and manageable, Izuna
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* ChosenConceptionPartner: Izuna picked Tobirama to sire her children for political (forcing the Senju clan into peace) and eugenic (integrating Tobirama's potent chakra and tactical skills into her bloodline) reasons. Being a highly pragmatical individual, Tobirama accepts this much better than if she had acted on pure lust.
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* ChosenConceptionPartner: Izuna picked Tobirama to sire her children for political (forcing the Senju clan into peace) peace talks) and eugenic (integrating Tobirama's potent chakra chakra, sensing and tactical skills into her bloodline) reasons. Being a highly pragmatical individual, Tobirama accepts this much better than if she had acted on pure lust.
* KilledByTheAdaptation: Hijiri and Benten both die due to ForWantOfANail.
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* TheVerse: Technically speaking, it's an alternate reality to ''Fanfic/CompassOfThySoul'' but it draws a lot from the background history and lore established by the author's previous story.
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* TheVerse: Technically speaking, it's an alternate reality to ''Fanfic/CompassOfThySoul'' but it draws a lot from the background history and lore established by the author's previous story.story.
* YoungAndInCharge: Izuna became the Head of Amaterasu at the age of 9 after activating her Mangekyou.
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* YoungAndInCharge: Izuna became the Head of Amaterasu at the age of 9 after activating her Mangekyou.
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* ChosenConceptionPartner: Izuna picked Tobirama to sire her children for political (forcing the Senju clan into peace) and eugenic (integrating Tobirama's potent chakra and tactical skills into her bloodline) reasons. Being a highly pragmatical individual, Tobirama accepts this much better than if she had acted on pure lust.
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** How Izuna coerces Tobirama into becoming her concubine, showing him that she also abucted his cousin Toka and as such, refusing her offer would also mean killing Toka.
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** How Izuna coerces Tobirama into becoming her concubine, showing him that she also abucted abducted his cousin Toka and as such, refusing her offer would also mean killing Toka.
* AMatchMadeInStockholm: What Izuna and Tobirama's arrangement is. She showers him with gifts and attention to keep him compliant and because she doesn't want to completely destroy his mind through isolation, and he goes along with it as he reasons it keeps her focused on him rather than his clan's destruction and he's a bit desperate for social interaction.
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* SheCleansUpNicely: Both Tobirama and Izuna get to be dolled up in fancy kimonos. The result are suitably impressive.
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* RealityEnsues:
** No matter how much she's nice about it, Izuna still kidnapped and blackmailed Tobirama into marrying her. He's not okay with that and plots to escape at the first opportunity.
** Several Uchihas are rather displeased by one of them deciding to marry one of their hated foes instead of slitting his throat, in spite of her rational explanations. Generational hatred doesn't vanish in one day.
** Repeated trauma over the loss of his siblings and various kinsmen left Hashirama with a heaping mount of PTSD.
** Tobirama gradually warms up to Izuna not only because she's nice, she's also his main source of stimulation. He's painfully aware that without Toka, he already would have completely fallen under her spell.
* SheCleansUpNicely: Both Tobirama and Izuna get to be dolled up in fancy kimonos. Theresult results are suitably impressive.impressive.
* ShotgunWedding: Invoked. Izuna gets to force her father's hand in letting her marry Tobirama by sleeping with him before Tajima can come back to the Uchiha compound and kill the Senju.
** No matter how much she's nice about it, Izuna still kidnapped and blackmailed Tobirama into marrying her. He's not okay with that and plots to escape at the first opportunity.
** Several Uchihas are rather displeased by one of them deciding to marry one of their hated foes instead of slitting his throat, in spite of her rational explanations. Generational hatred doesn't vanish in one day.
** Repeated trauma over the loss of his siblings and various kinsmen left Hashirama with a heaping mount of PTSD.
** Tobirama gradually warms up to Izuna not only because she's nice, she's also his main source of stimulation. He's painfully aware that without Toka, he already would have completely fallen under her spell.
* SheCleansUpNicely: Both Tobirama and Izuna get to be dolled up in fancy kimonos. The
* ShotgunWedding: Invoked. Izuna gets to force her father's hand in letting her marry Tobirama by sleeping with him before Tajima can come back to the Uchiha compound and kill the Senju.
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** Tobirama can imagine several reasons for Izuna to hide her true gender, and none of them good.
* BroughtDownToNormal: In order to keep their Senju prisoners unable to escape and manageable, Izuna creates a seal cutting them from access to their chakra.
* CentralTheme: Consent and coercion.
* CentralTheme: Consent and coercion.
* GirlInTheTower: Tobirama and Toka are kept locked up in the Diplomatic Quarters of the Uchiha compound.
* IntimateHairBrushing: Tobirama unexpectedly enjoys Izuna combing his hair, outright purring while she's untangling his locks.
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* SparedByTheAdaptation: Saburo, one of Madara and Izuna's younger brothers.
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* SparedByTheAdaptation: Saburo, one of Madara and Izuna's younger brothers.brothers.
* SweetPollyOliver: Izuna had to don male attire for her own protection following the Senju attack against Tajima's children. She was so convincing that Tobirama only pegged her true gender after she abducted him and made advances.
* TheVerse: Technically speaking, it's an alternate reality to ''Fanfic/CompassOfThySoul'' but it draws a lot from the background history and lore established by the author's previous story.
* SweetPollyOliver: Izuna had to don male attire for her own protection following the Senju attack against Tajima's children. She was so convincing that Tobirama only pegged her true gender after she abducted him and made advances.
* TheVerse: Technically speaking, it's an alternate reality to ''Fanfic/CompassOfThySoul'' but it draws a lot from the background history and lore established by the author's previous story.
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* SparedByTheAdaption: Saburo, one of Madara and Izuna's younger brothers.
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* DoubleStandardRapeFemaleOnMale
* HistoryRepeats
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* ParentalSexualitySquick
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* IHaveYourWife
* MasculineGirlFeminineBoy
* ParentalSexualitySquick
* SheCleansUpNicely
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* DoubleStandardRapeFemaleOnMale
DoubleStandardRapeFemaleOnMale: Completely averted. Tobirama's condition as a prisoner is fully acknowledged, and there's Uchiha laws establishing that no matter the gender, forcing someone into sexual intimacy is ''not'' okay.
*HistoryRepeats
HistoryRepeats: So, there's an Uchiha ActionGirl from the main lineage abducting a pretty Senju as her concubine -- are we talking about Uchiha Biei-Fuji and Senju Kabema or Uchiha Izuna and Senju Tobirama?
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** How Izuna coerces Tobirama into becoming her concubine, showing him that she also abucted his cousin Toka and as such, refusing her offer would also mean killing Toka.
** More generally, it's her plan to force Hashirama to surrender to the Uchiha clan and accept their rule. By marrying Tobirama, she can hold Hashirama's brother and nephews against him.
*MasculineGirlFeminineBoy
MasculineGirlFeminineBoy: Izuna is very much an ActionGirl who's not afraid of agressively taking steps for her future plans, while Tobirama is forced to be passive and manipulative, even learning how to braid cords and letting his hair grow.
*ParentalSexualitySquick
ParentalSexualitySquick: Zigzagged. Tajima looks pretty indifferent to his daughter stealing a man for herself, but Izuna's brothers would very much like avoid the topic of their sister's marriage, thank you very much. Toka also mercilessly teases Tobirama over his performance in bed.
*SheCleansUpNicelySheCleansUpNicely: Both Tobirama and Izuna get to be dolled up in fancy kimonos. The result are suitably impressive.
* SiblingYinYang:
** Madara is very much quiet and awkward to Izuna's flirty, shameless behaviour.
** Hashirama is openly emotional while Tobirama is more pragmatic and subdued.
* SparedByTheAdaption: Saburo, one of Madara and Izuna's younger brothers.
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** How Izuna coerces Tobirama into becoming her concubine, showing him that she also abucted his cousin Toka and as such, refusing her offer would also mean killing Toka.
** More generally, it's her plan to force Hashirama to surrender to the Uchiha clan and accept their rule. By marrying Tobirama, she can hold Hashirama's brother and nephews against him.
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* SiblingYinYang:
** Madara is very much quiet and awkward to Izuna's flirty, shameless behaviour.
** Hashirama is openly emotional while Tobirama is more pragmatic and subdued.
* SparedByTheAdaption: Saburo, one of Madara and Izuna's younger brothers.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13729081/1/Unchained Unchained]] is a ''Naruto'' fanfic written by Umei no Mai from ''Fanfic/CompassOfThySoul'' fame, in which the SelfInsert is reincarnated as Izuna instead of OriginalCharacter Kita.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13729081/1/Unchained Unchained]] Unchained]]'' is a ''Naruto'' fanfic written by Umei no Mai from ''Fanfic/CompassOfThySoul'' fame, in which the SelfInsert is reincarnated as Izuna instead of OriginalCharacter Kita.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13729081/1/Unchained Unchained]] is a ''Naruto'' fanfic written by Umei no Mai from ''Fanfic/CompassOfThySoul'' fame, in which the SelfInsert is reincarnated as Izuna instead of OriginalCharacter Kita.
Where you are makes as much a difference as who you are, and changes in circumstances lead down surprising rabbitholes. In this particular case, Izuna decides the best way to establish peace is to abduct Tobirama and turn him into her concubine.
Be warned: the story aims to explore dubcon and coercion.
!Contains the following tropes
* AdultFear: Oh, ''boy''...
** The story opens on Izuna abducting Tobirama in order to have children by him, threatening to kill him and his cousin Toka if he doesn't comply. And if she truly wanted to play hardball, she would have chained him to the wall and forced him to service her in exchange of the bare necessities.
** Poor Toka has been abducted, her legs broken to prevent her from escaping, and now she's used as a way to blackmail Tobirama into compliance.
** After one month without news from Toka or Tobirama, the Senju hold a memorial as they're declared dead. Hashirama doesn't take it well.
* AmbiguouslyBi: Izuna is pretty comfortable in masculine clothing and has quite a reputation as TheCasanova, but is apparently happy with her male concubine.
* AndNowYouMustMarryMe: Or I will kill your cousin! Needless to say, Tobirama quickly folds.
* BawdySong: Izuna apparently wrote a ''lot'' of these, and enjoys singing them -- for Toka's amusement and Tobirama's horror.
* DoubleStandardRapeFemaleOnMale
* HistoryRepeats
* IHaveYourWife
* MasculineGirlFeminineBoy
* ParentalSexualitySquick
* SheCleansUpNicely
Where you are makes as much a difference as who you are, and changes in circumstances lead down surprising rabbitholes. In this particular case, Izuna decides the best way to establish peace is to abduct Tobirama and turn him into her concubine.
Be warned: the story aims to explore dubcon and coercion.
!Contains the following tropes
* AdultFear: Oh, ''boy''...
** The story opens on Izuna abducting Tobirama in order to have children by him, threatening to kill him and his cousin Toka if he doesn't comply. And if she truly wanted to play hardball, she would have chained him to the wall and forced him to service her in exchange of the bare necessities.
** Poor Toka has been abducted, her legs broken to prevent her from escaping, and now she's used as a way to blackmail Tobirama into compliance.
** After one month without news from Toka or Tobirama, the Senju hold a memorial as they're declared dead. Hashirama doesn't take it well.
* AmbiguouslyBi: Izuna is pretty comfortable in masculine clothing and has quite a reputation as TheCasanova, but is apparently happy with her male concubine.
* AndNowYouMustMarryMe: Or I will kill your cousin! Needless to say, Tobirama quickly folds.
* BawdySong: Izuna apparently wrote a ''lot'' of these, and enjoys singing them -- for Toka's amusement and Tobirama's horror.
* DoubleStandardRapeFemaleOnMale
* HistoryRepeats
* IHaveYourWife
* MasculineGirlFeminineBoy
* ParentalSexualitySquick
* SheCleansUpNicely
