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* MidairCollision: Narrowly averted, when a helicopter carrying Paige Mcabee and a badly-injured Taylor has a near-miss with an airborne Eidolon while on the way to the hospital. Paige decides to call the FAA and report Eidolon over the incident.

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* MidairCollision: Narrowly averted, when a helicopter carrying Paige Mcabee and a badly-injured Taylor has a near-miss [[NearMisses near-miss]] with an airborne Eidolon while on the way to the hospital. Paige decides to call the FAA and report Eidolon over the incident.
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* AnachronismStew: In the scene where Sophia shows she's a Music/{{Sabaton}} fan, the song she plays on Emma's phone is "The Last Battle", which was released on the album "The Last Stand", which didn't come out until 2016. The story is set in 2009, and "The Art of War" was the most recent Sabaton album to date at the time.


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** Sophia casually admits to Emma that she's a Music/{{Sabaton}} fan.
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** Paige belatedly realized that Taylor was the only summer camp [[ExplainExplainOhCrap after explaining what happened]] to the PRT.

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** Paige belatedly realized that Taylor was the only summer camp survivor [[ExplainExplainOhCrap after explaining what happened]] to the PRT.



--> A quarter-mile wide, that wasn’t any two-bit cone. That was a ''wall'' of shrieking fury that was pounding toward you, shredding everything in its path. “Good ''God''.” she breathed, shocked as she gazed upon the devastation and realized just how ''far'' the path went and how it widened out even more before it faded out from sight.
--> How wide was it at its maximum? How could it do such ''devastation''? How?
--> How had Taylor survived ''that'' in a bathtub?
--> Sophia realized at that moment, that it didn’t matter if you were predator or prey. Nature was the one that ruled them all and it didn’t care if you were the lowliest mouse or the mightiest of tigers. You were still squishy all the same and that meant... what did that mean for someone like her? A predator of the night?

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--> A quarter-mile wide, that wasn’t any two-bit cone. That was a ''wall'' of shrieking fury that was pounding toward you, shredding everything in its path. “Good ''God''.” she breathed, shocked as she gazed upon the devastation and realized just how ''far'' the path went and how it widened out even more before it faded out from sight.
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How wide was it at its maximum? How could it do such ''devastation''? How?
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How had Taylor survived ''that'' in a bathtub?
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bathtub?\\
Sophia realized at that moment, that it didn’t matter if you were predator or prey. Nature was the one that ruled them all and it didn’t care if you were the lowliest mouse or the mightiest of tigers. You were still squishy all the same and that meant... what did that mean for someone like her? A predator of the night?



** One of the Doctors in Arkansas Children's Hospital Trauma Center is named [[VideoGame/MassEfect Chakwas]].

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** One of the Doctors in Arkansas Children's Hospital Trauma Center is named [[VideoGame/MassEfect [[VideoGame/MassEffect Chakwas]].
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* HypotheticalFightDebate: One of the tangents in the SpaceBattles thread asked what would happen if the Slaughterhouse Nine were hit by an EF-5 Tornado. The general consensus was that it would be a CurbStompBattle in the Tornado's favor, only Crawler (and maybe Hatchet Face) could tank it, and the rest would have to RunOrDie.

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* HypotheticalFightDebate: One of the tangents in the SpaceBattles Website/SpaceBattlesDotCom thread asked what would happen if the Slaughterhouse Nine were hit by an EF-5 Tornado. The general consensus was that it would be a CurbStompBattle in the Tornado's favor, only Crawler (and maybe Hatchet Face) could tank it, and the rest would have to RunOrDie.

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** The PHO interlude in chapter 5 mentions that this EF-5 tornado was part of a larger tornado cell, which included at least one other EF-5 and several EF-4 tornados.



* {{Mundanger}}: Earth Bet is a setting with supervillain gangs, Parahuman serial killers, and Endbringers. An EF-5 Tornado is mundane in comparison, but still deadly enough to warrant Triumvirate intervention.

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* {{Mundanger}}: Earth Bet is a setting with supervillain gangs, Parahuman serial killers, and Endbringers. An EF-5 Tornado is mundane in comparison, but still deadly enough to warrant Triumvirate intervention.intervention and calling an S-class truce.
* MrExposition:
** Danny Hebert in chapters 2 and 3, after having done a lot of tornado research and relaying it to the Barneses.
** [[RealPersonCameo Real-life Storm-Chaser]] Tim Samaras in the PHO interlude in Chapter 5, explaining tornadoes to the various posters in a PHO thread about the disaster.
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** The PHO interlude in Chapter 5 also confirms that an S-class Truce was called for the tornado.


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* HellIsThatNoise: The distinctive 'roar' of an EF-4 or EF-5 Tornado is this for those unfortunate enough to survive one. PHO user "Jack of Blades (Verified Cape) (At Ground Zero) (Not Jack Slash)" mentions in the Chapter 5 PHO interlude that the tornado's roar "has been burned into my brain". He provides a link to tornado footage later in the thread:
--> Vista: Holy fuck that's the most terrifying thing I've ever heard.


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** In the Chapter 5 PHO Interlude, even the Fallen and the Simurgh are spooked by the destruction the tornado caused.
* InMemoriam: The PHO Interlude in Chapter 5 is dedicated to [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Tim_Samaras Storm Chaser Tim Samaras]], who died in [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/2013_El_Reno_tornado#Storm_chaser_incidents the El Reno tornado of 2013]].


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* RealPersonCameo: Storm Chaser [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Tim_Samaras Tim Samaras]] appears (via his PHO account) in the Chapter 5 PHO interlude. The chapter [[InMemoriam was dedicated to him]].

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* Desolationshot: Alan, Danny, Emma, and Sophia receive this via an overhead view of [[SceneryGorn a tornado tearing through town]].

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* Desolationshot: DesolationShot: Alan, Danny, Emma, and Sophia receive this via an overhead view of [[SceneryGorn a tornado tearing through town]].



* {{Fangirl}}: Emma Barnes is a big one of Paige Mcabee, to the point she starts to {{Squee}} loudly when she finds out that Taylor met her.

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* {{Fangirl}}: Emma Barnes is a big one of Paige Mcabee, to the point she starts to {{Squee}} loudly when she finds out that Taylor met her.her, and does it again when she meets Paige herself.



* GodzillaThreshold: EF-5 Tornados are severe enough to warrant automatic Triumvirate intervention.

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* GodzillaThreshold: EF-5 Tornados are severe enough to warrant automatic Triumvirate intervention. Eidolon is one of the first on the scene (and nearly having a MidairCollision with Paige and Taylor's helicopter), while Legend appears to drop off another survivor in chapter 4.



* GroupieBrigade: Paige Mcabee has to rest in a normally Staff-Only area of the hospital to hide from one of these in chapter 4.



** Sophia Hess is attributed as being a fan of hard rock such as King Crimson and Black Sabbath... and also became a fan of classical music after a WikiWalk. WordOfGod is that Sophia was deliberately given characterization based on things other than violence so that she wouldn't be a one-note thug.

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** Sophia Hess is attributed as being a fan of hard rock such as King Crimson and Black Sabbath... and also became a fan of classical music after a WikiWalk. WordOfGod is that Sophia was deliberately given characterization based on things other than violence violence, so that she wouldn't be a one-note thug.


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** In Chapter 4, her reaction to meeting Paige is an enthusiastic high-pitched squeal.

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* {{Fangirl}}: Emma Barnes is a big one of Paige Mcabee, to the point she starts to {{Squee}} loudly when she finds out that Taylor met her.



** Taylor has her TramaticSuperpowerAwakening ''before'' meeting Sophia, preventing her falling out with Emma.

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** Taylor has her TramaticSuperpowerAwakening TraumaticSuperpowerAwakening ''before'' meeting Sophia, preventing her falling out with Emma.



--> ''Sophia realized at that moment, that it didn’t matter if you were predator or prey. Nature was the one that ruled them all and it didn’t care if you were the lowliest mouse or the mightiest of tigers. You were still squishy all the same and that meant…what did that mean for someone like her? A predator of the night?''


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** Sophia's reaction to seeing [[SceneryGorn the aftermath of a tornado]]
--> A quarter-mile wide, that wasn’t any two-bit cone. That was a ''wall'' of shrieking fury that was pounding toward you, shredding everything in its path. “Good ''God''.” she breathed, shocked as she gazed upon the devastation and realized just how ''far'' the path went and how it widened out even more before it faded out from sight.
--> How wide was it at its maximum? How could it do such ''devastation''? How?
--> How had Taylor survived ''that'' in a bathtub?
--> Sophia realized at that moment, that it didn’t matter if you were predator or prey. Nature was the one that ruled them all and it didn’t care if you were the lowliest mouse or the mightiest of tigers. You were still squishy all the same and that meant... what did that mean for someone like her? A predator of the night?
** When Sophia shows the devastation to Emma, her response is a lot more succinct:
--> Emma: "Holy ''shit''."


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** Emma Barnes, however, ''[[{{Squee}} does]]'' recognize who Paige is.


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* {{Squee}}: Emma's reaction to finding out that Taylor met Paige Mcabee (who Emma is a fan of) is an enthusiastic "I'm sorry ''WHAT''?!".

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* AdaptationalNiceGuy: Sophia is being set up to become much nicer than in canon, both to being fleshed out and to being disabused of her 'predator/prey' mentality by seeing a tornado's aftermath.



** This fic's version of Alan Barnes moved to Brockton Bay after surviving [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/1974_Xenia_tornado the 1974 EF-5 Tornado of Xenia, Ohio]].



* Desolationshot: Alan, Danny, Emma, and Sophia receive this via an overhead view of [[SceneryGorn a tornado tearing through town]].



** Paige Mcabee realizes that Taylor was the only survivor at the summer camp.

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** Paige Mcabee belatedly realizes that Taylor was the only survivor at the summer camp.camp after explaining what happened to the PRT... and then realizing that nobody else answered her CompellingVoice.


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* ForWantOfANail: An EF-5 Tornado is a very ''big'' nail, resulting in a ''lot'' of changes from canon:
** Taylor has her TramaticSuperpowerAwakening ''before'' meeting Sophia, preventing her falling out with Emma.
** Sophia Hess witnesses [[SceneryGorn the results of an EF-5 Tornado]] from overhead, and is basically humbled into abandoning her 'predator/prey' mentality.
--> ''Sophia realized at that moment, that it didn’t matter if you were predator or prey. Nature was the one that ruled them all and it didn’t care if you were the lowliest mouse or the mightiest of tigers. You were still squishy all the same and that meant…what did that mean for someone like her? A predator of the night?''
** Paige Mcabee ends up cancelling her tour (which WordOfGod states is the same tour that ended in her telling her ex-boyfriend to go fuck himself, which in turn got her Birdcaged) so as to help survivors in her hometown.


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* HiddenDepths:
** Alan Barnes is revealed in Chapter 3 to have moved to Brockton Bay after surviving [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/1974_Xenia_tornado the 1974 F-5 Tornado of Xenia, Ohio]].
** Sophia Hess is attributed as being a fan of hard rock such as King Crimson and Black Sabbath... and also became a fan of classical music after a WikiWalk. WordOfGod is that Sophia was deliberately given characterization based on things other than violence so that she wouldn't be a one-note thug.


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* TraumaButton: Alan Barnes witnessing the tornado's aftermath brings up bad memories of his experience of the 1974 Xenia tornado.

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* LightningReveal: Taylor's only sight of the tornado bearing down on her [[RunOrDie before she runs for it]] is illuminated by a lightning strike.



* RunOrDie: Pretty much the only thing anyone can do when faced with an EF-5 Tornado is to run as fast as they can to the nearest underground shelter, bathtub (in Taylor's case), or (if a Parahuman with a Mover rating) keep going in a straight line.

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* RunOrDie: Pretty much the only thing anyone can do when faced with an EF-5 Tornado is to run as fast as they can to the nearest underground shelter, bathtub (in Taylor's case), or (if in a Parahuman vehicle or with a Mover rating) keep going move in a straight line.direction perpendicular to the path of the tornado.
** WordOfGod also mentions that [[HypotheticalFightDebate if the Slaughterhouse Nine were in the path of an EF-5 Tornado]], Crawler and possibly Hatchet Face are the only two members who have high-enough Brute ratings to withstand a direct hit, and the rest would have to run for their lives.



** Taylor sees the tornado look vaguely like a corpse when it's coming at her, which WordOfGod explains is the infamous "Dead Man Walking" tornado shape.

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** Taylor sees the tornado look vaguely like a corpse when it's coming at her, which WordOfGod explains is a [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Multiple-vortex_tornado multi-vortex tornado]] with the infamous "Dead Man Walking" tornado shape.

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* AdaptationalLocationChange: In canon, Taylor's summer camp was in New England, a reasonable driving distance from Brockton Bay. In this fic it's in Arkansas.

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* AdaptationalLocationChange: In canon, Taylor's summer camp was in New England, a reasonable driving distance from Brockton Bay. In this fic it's in Arkansas.just outside of Hector, Arkansas, a town 60 miles north of Little Rock.


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** This fic's version of Alan Barnes moved to Brockton Bay after surviving [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/1974_Xenia_tornado the 1974 EF-5 Tornado of Xenia, Ohio]].
** According to [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/twisted-taylor-altpower.1108108/page-13#post-94535253 the author's maps]], the tornado started west of Van Buren, Arkansas, and in addition to destroying Taylor's summer camp it also hit the towns of Van Buren, Ozark, Clarksville, Hector, and Clinton.
** WOG also states that even the Slaughterhouse Nine [[HorrifyingTheHorror would be terrified by the devastation inflicted by a Tornado]].


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* HorrifyingTheHorror: WordOfGod is that even the Slaughterhouse Nine would be disturbed by the sheer scale of destruction an EF-5 Tornado could inflict.
* HypotheticalFightDebate: One of the tangents in the SpaceBattles thread asked what would happen if the Slaughterhouse Nine were hit by an EF-5 Tornado. The general consensus was that it would be a CurbStompBattle in the Tornado's favor, only Crawler (and maybe Hatchet Face) could tank it, and the rest would have to RunOrDie.


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* RunOrDie: Pretty much the only thing anyone can do when faced with an EF-5 Tornado is to run as fast as they can to the nearest underground shelter, bathtub (in Taylor's case), or (if a Parahuman with a Mover rating) keep going in a straight line.


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** Taylor sees the tornado look vaguely like a corpse when it's coming at her, which WordOfGod explains is the infamous "Dead Man Walking" tornado shape.

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* AdaptationOriginConnection: Paige Mcabee happens to have grown up in the town by Taylor's summer camp, and performed there a couple times before going big.

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* AdaptationOriginConnection: Paige Mcabee happens to have grown up in the town by Taylor's summer camp, and performed there a couple times before going big. Paige happened to be in town for a family visit the night of the tornado, putting her in a position to rescue Taylor.



* AnArmAndALeg: In spite of Taylor having a regeneration power, her left leg is still written off as a loss by the trauma center in Little Rock.

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* AnArmAndALeg: In spite of Taylor having a regeneration power, power [[TraumaticSuperpowerAwakening after surviving an EF-5 tornado]], her left leg is still written off as a loss by the trauma center in Little Rock.


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* HealingFactor: Taylor has a regeneration power that fixes her spine, but the doctors at the Little Rock trauma center still [[AnArmAndALeg still write off her left leg as a loss]].


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* ScreamsLikeALittleGirl: Sophia screams like this when a plane takes off. Emma thinks it's funny.

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* AdaptationOriginConnection: Paige Mcabee happens to have grown up in the town by Taylor's summer camp, and performed there a couple times before going big.
** Sophia's little sister is friends with Dinah Alcott, Missy Biron, and Aisha Laborn.



* ArbitrarySkepticism: Sophia can't believe that a tornado is ''that'' bad. Unfortunately, they are.

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* ArbitrarySkepticism: Sophia can't believe that a tornado is ''that'' bad. Unfortunately, It takes a lot of explaining from Danny and Alan for her to realize that yes, they are.''are'' that bad.



* ExplainExplainOhCrap:
** Paige Mcabee realizes that Taylor was the only survivor at the summer camp.
** When Danny relays what he learned about tornadoes, Alan Barnes starts [[ClusterFBomb swearing profusely]] and Sophia can't believe tornadoes can be as bad as he says.



* Alan Barnes starts swearing when Danny explains what "EF-5" means in context to Tornadoes.

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* ** Alan Barnes starts [[ClusterFBomb swearing profusely]] when Danny explains what "EF-5" means in context to Tornadoes.Tornadoes.
** The doctors at the Little Rock children's hospital when they realize that Taylor had Triggered during the tornado.



* PlaneAwfulFlight: Sophia Hess does ''not'' like airplanes, considering them all flying deathtraps.



** The deadliest tornados are the ones that happen at night. Taylor only survives because she happens to be awake, sees the tornado form, and then runs and hides in a bathtub- and it's heavily implied that she's the only survivor Paige found.

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** The deadliest tornados are the ones that happen at night. Taylor only survives because she happens to be awake, sees the tornado form, and then runs and hides in a bathtub- and it's heavily implied that she's is the only survivor Paige found.



* SoleSurvivor: Taylor is heavily implied to be the only survivor in the summer camp.

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* SoleSurvivor: Taylor is heavily implied to be the only survivor in person at the summer camp.camp who responds to Paige Mcabee's CompellingVoice. Paige realizes as much affter [[ExplainExplainOhCrap talking with the PRT]].



* TraumaticSuperpowerAwakening: Taylor has a Trigger Event when her bathtub is thrown into the air by a tornado.

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* TraumaticSuperpowerAwakening: Taylor has a Trigger Event when her bathtub is thrown into the air by a tornado. One of her powers is a regeneration power that saved her spine [[AnArmAndALeg but not her left leg]].

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* AnArmAndALeg: In spite of Taylor having a regeneration power, her left leg is still written off as a loss by the trauma center in Little Rock.
* ArbitrarySkepticism: Sophia can't believe that a tornado is ''that'' bad. Unfortunately, they are.



* CompellingVoice: Canary manages to use this power for a genuinely heroic purpose in rescuing Taylor.

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* ClusterFBomb: After being told that an EF-5 is the most powerful type of tornado, Alan Barnes starts swearing profusely.
* CompellingVoice: Canary manages to use this power for a genuinely heroic purpose in rescuing Taylor. The PRT basically say as much in chapter 2.
* CoolPlane: Alan Barnes has a Beechcraft Starship (gifted to him from [[DivorceAssetsConflict a wealthy divorcee]]), which he uses to fly the Barneses, Danny, and Sophia to Arkansas.
* DivorceAssetsConflict: How Alan Barnes acquired a Beechcraft Starship, per WordOfGod.



** Paige belatedly realized that Taylor was the only summer camp [[ExplainExplainOhCrap after explaining what happened]] to the PRT.
** Sophia Hess is afraid of heights. She has to board an airplane to go with Emma to Little Rock.
* Alan Barnes starts swearing when Danny explains what "EF-5" means in context to Tornadoes.



* ShoutOut: The title is one to ''Film/{{Twister}}'' since Tornados are integral to the plot.

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The title is one to ''Film/{{Twister}}'' since Tornados are integral to the plot.plot.
** One of the Doctors in Arkansas Children's Hospital Trauma Center is named [[VideoGame/MassEfect Chakwas]].


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** The author included an Information Threadmark explaining the Fujita and Enhanced Fujita scales to readers.

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* {{Expy}}: The tornado that destroys Taylor's summer camp is explicitly one of the 2007 Greensburg Tornado, per WordOfGod.

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* {{Expy}}: The tornado that destroys Taylor's summer camp is explicitly one of [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Tornado_outbreak_of_May_4%E2%80%936,_2007#Greensburg_tornado the 2007 Greensburg Tornado, Tornado]], per WordOfGod.


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** Taylor surviving an EF-5 tornado by hiding in a bathtub, and said bathtub being picked up and thrown several hundred yards, was based on how one woman survived [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/1997_Central_Texas_tornado_outbreak#Jarrell,_Texas the 1997 Jarrell, Texas tornado]].
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* Expy: The tornado that destroys Taylor's summer camp is explicitly one of the 2007 Greensburg Tornado, per WordOfGod.

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* Expy: {{Expy}}: The tornado that destroys Taylor's summer camp is explicitly one of the 2007 Greensburg Tornado, per WordOfGod.



* RecognitionFailure: Danny Hebert has no idea who PaigeMcabee is, despite the latter being a famous singer. WordOfGod is that he doesn't listen to her genre of music.

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* RecognitionFailure: Danny Hebert has no idea who PaigeMcabee Paige Mcabee is, despite the latter being a famous singer. WordOfGod is that he doesn't listen to her genre of music.
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''[[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/twisted-taylor-altpower.1108108/ Twisted]]'' is a fanfiction of ''Literature/{{Worm}}'' by Wolf of the Sea.

In 2009, Taylor Hebert is off in a summer camp in Arkansas, having been woken up in the middle of the night by the sound of hail falling. Suddenly, an EF-5 Tornado plows through the area, destroying the camp and several surrounding towns, and warranting Triumvirate intervention. Taylor only survives by hiding in a bathtub, and is still badly injured.

Meanwhile, Paige Mcabee, more famous as the Parahuman singer Canary, happens to be in the area when the tornado rolls through, and decides to help. Taylor Hebert is the first- and apparently ''only''- survivor she finds in the wreckage of the summer camp.

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!!This fanfic contains examples of the following:

* AdaptationalLocationChange: In canon, Taylor's summer camp was in New England, a reasonable driving distance from Brockton Bay. In this fic it's in Arkansas.
* AllThereInTheManual: The author makes several WordOfGod explanations on how his interpretation of Earth Bet is different from the real world, such as...
** The Endbringers prompting the US to institute its own National Health Service in imitation of the United Kingdom's.
** La Guardia airport in New York having been shut down due to a TurbineBlender incident that killed 500 people.
** How Air Traffic Control manages flying Capes.
** The Triumvirate will also respond to natural disasters such as Earthquakes, tsunamis, volcanic eruptions, hurricanes, and EF-5 Tornados...
* BigDisasterPlot: The plot of the fic kicks off when an EF-5 tornado destroys the summer camp Taylor is in.
* BombproofAppliance: Taylor shelters in a bathtub from a tornado. Subverted when the tornado just picks up the tub and throws it.
* BringMyBrownPants: Taylor pisses herself when she sees a tornado form right in front of her.
* CelebritySurvivor: Downplayed- Paige Mcabee was in the area when the tornado happened, and helped rescue survivors, but was not directly in the path of the tornado itself.
* CompellingVoice: Canary manages to use this power for a genuinely heroic purpose in rescuing Taylor.
* DoNotTouchTheFunnelCloud: Averted. Taylor and the bathtub she was sheltering in were ''nowhere near'' the Tornado and ''still'' got tossed like children's toys.
* Expy: The tornado that destroys Taylor's summer camp is explicitly one of the 2007 Greensburg Tornado, per WordOfGod.
* GodzillaThreshold: EF-5 Tornados are severe enough to warrant automatic Triumvirate intervention.
** Paige is also willing to use her CompellingVoice to call out to any tornado survivors.
* MidairCollision: Narrowly averted, when a helicopter carrying Paige Mcabee and a badly-injured Taylor has a near-miss with an airborne Eidolon while on the way to the hospital. Paige decides to call the FAA and report Eidolon over the incident.
* {{Mundanger}}: Earth Bet is a setting with supervillain gangs, Parahuman serial killers, and Endbringers. An EF-5 Tornado is mundane in comparison, but still deadly enough to warrant Triumvirate intervention.
* OhCrap: Given the premise involves a tornado, this is a given.
** Taylor's reaction to seeing the silhouette of an EF-5 Tornado... and it's already too close to run to the Tornado shelter.
** Paige Mcabee when her helicopter has a near-miss with Eidolon in mid-air while rushing Taylor to the hospital.
** Danny Hebert and Alan Barnes when they find out that Taylor was caught in a tornado and hospitalized as a result.
* OnlyBadGuysCallTheirLawyers: Averted. Paige calls her lawyer to help explain how she used her CompellingVoice to rescue a survivor of an EF-5 Tornado.
* RecognitionFailure: Danny Hebert has no idea who PaigeMcabee is, despite the latter being a famous singer. WordOfGod is that he doesn't listen to her genre of music.
* ShoutOut: The title is one to ''Film/{{Twister}}'' since Tornados are integral to the plot.
* ShownTheirWork:
** The deadliest tornados are the ones that happen at night. Taylor only survives because she happens to be awake, sees the tornado form, and then runs and hides in a bathtub- and it's heavily implied that she's the only survivor Paige found.
** The nearest hospital to the summer camp Taylor is at happens to be in Little Rock. It's also site of a Level 1 trauma center, one of only two in Arkansas (and the other Level 1 trauma center is ''also'' in Little Rock).
* SoleSurvivor: Taylor is heavily implied to be the only survivor in the summer camp.
* TrailerParkTornadoMagnet: Summer camp instead of a trailer park, but an EF-5 Tornado still demolishes it.
* TraumaticSuperpowerAwakening: Taylor has a Trigger Event when her bathtub is thrown into the air by a tornado.
* TurbineBlender: Narrowly averted when a helicopter barely avoids hitting Eidolon in mid-air.
** [[AllThereInTheManual In one of the Author's exposition notes]], an airborne Cape getting sucked into a jet engine (which in turn resulted in a deadly plane crash) was the direct cause of La Guardia airport being permanently shut down.
* WhamShot: When Taylor sees the silhouette of an EF-5 Tornado lit up by lightning.

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