History Fanfic / TriumphOfTheRetart

27th Mar '15 11:45:07 AM MarkLungo
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* IKEAErotica: As noted in the MSTing, the uncensored version of the sex scene is less "titillating" and more "Peter copying the most clinical description of sexual intercourse imaginable out of a high school biology text book."
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* IKEAErotica: As noted in the MSTing, [=MSTing=], the uncensored version of the sex scene is less "titillating" and more "Peter copying the most clinical description of sexual intercourse imaginable out of a high school biology text book."
27th Mar '15 11:43:24 AM MarkLungo
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Guerin created an edited version of the story to ensure its inclusion in archives that turned down R-rated content, with the only alteration being the removal of the sex scene. The MST included two versions for the same reasons, though only the NSFW version remains online. The Guerin versions can be found [[http://www.reocities.com/televisioncity/network/4938/daretart.txt at this mirror of the original Mark Zero fanfiction page]] (NSFW version) and at [[http://www.outpost-daria.com/fanfic/triumph_of_the_retart.html Outpost Daria]] (edited version). The remaining NSFW version of the MSTing can be found at [[http://home.netcom.com/%7Emblackwl/retart-r.txt The Stephen Ratliff MSTing site.]] !!Tropes:
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Guerin created an edited version of the story to ensure its inclusion in archives that turned down R-rated content, with the only alteration being the removal of the sex scene. The MST included two versions for the same reasons, though only the NSFW version remains online. The Guerin versions can be found [[http://www.reocities.com/televisioncity/network/4938/daretart.txt at this mirror of the original Mark Zero fanfiction page]] (NSFW version) and at [[http://www.outpost-daria.com/fanfic/triumph_of_the_retart.html Outpost Daria]] (edited version). The remaining NSFW version of the MSTing [=MSTing=] can be found at [[http://home.netcom.com/%7Emblackwl/retart-r.txt The Stephen Ratliff MSTing site.]] !!Tropes: !!Triumph of the Tropes:
18th Nov '14 5:32:46 PM MarkLungo
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Guerin created an edited version of the story to ensure its inclusion in archives that turned down R-rated content, with the only alteration being the removal of the sex scene. The MSTing included two versions for the same reasons, though only the NSFW version remains online. The Guerin versions can be found [[http://www.reocities.com/televisioncity/network/4938/daretart.txt at this mirror of the original Mark Zero fanfiction page]] (NSFW version) and at [[http://www.outpost-daria.com/fanfic/triumph_of_the_retart.html Outpost Daria]] (edited version). The remaining NSFW version of the MSTing can be found at [[http://home.netcom.com/%7Emblackwl/retart-r.txt The Stephen Ratliff MSTing site.]]
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Guerin created an edited version of the story to ensure its inclusion in archives that turned down R-rated content, with the only alteration being the removal of the sex scene. The MSTing MST included two versions for the same reasons, though only the NSFW version remains online. The Guerin versions can be found [[http://www.reocities.com/televisioncity/network/4938/daretart.txt at this mirror of the original Mark Zero fanfiction page]] (NSFW version) and at [[http://www.outpost-daria.com/fanfic/triumph_of_the_retart.html Outpost Daria]] (edited version). The remaining NSFW version of the MSTing can be found at [[http://home.netcom.com/%7Emblackwl/retart-r.txt The Stephen Ratliff MSTing site.]]
18th Nov '14 5:32:23 PM MarkLungo
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The story went over about as well as Guerin's ''other'' stories, and like the others, it received a MSTing from the same crew that riffed his other efforts. Though this story was written between the other two Lawndale Militia stories, the MSTing was released as the last one, leading to some confusion as to the correct chonology. Later Guerin fanfics completely ignored the chain of events, creating further confusion in Guerin's fanfic universe.
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The story went over about as well as Guerin's ''other'' stories, and like the others, it received a MSTing {{MST}} from the same crew that riffed his other efforts. Though this story was written between the other two Lawndale Militia stories, the MSTing MST was released as the last one, leading to some confusion as to the correct chonology. Later Guerin fanfics completely ignored the chain of events, creating further confusion in Guerin's fanfic universe.
18th Nov '14 5:31:05 PM MarkLungo
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Before ''Fanfic/ReturnOfTheLawndaleMilitia'...
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Before ''Fanfic/ReturnOfTheLawndaleMilitia'... ''Fanfic/ReturnOfTheLawndaleMilitia''...
18th Nov '14 5:30:58 PM MarkLungo
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Before ''[[Fanfic/TheMiserySenshiNeoZeroDoubleBlitzkriegDebacle The Mashed Potato Squid Bake Dance-Off]]''... Before ''[[Fanfic/ReturnOfTheLawndaleMilitia Return of the Lawncare Mosh Pit]]''... ...there was... ''The Triumph of the [[TyopOnTheCover Retart]].''
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Before ''[[Fanfic/TheMiserySenshiNeoZeroDoubleBlitzkriegDebacle The Mashed Potato Squid Bake Dance-Off]]''... ''Fanfic/TheMiserySenshiNeoZeroDoubleBlitzkriegDebacle''... Before ''[[Fanfic/ReturnOfTheLawndaleMilitia Return of the Lawncare Mosh Pit]]''... ...''Fanfic/ReturnOfTheLawndaleMilitia'... ...there was... was ''The Triumph of the [[TyopOnTheCover Retart]].''
17th Nov '14 5:46:53 PM MarkLungo
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* StraightEdge: Zach De La Rocha recruits some straight edge punks to act as David's bodyguards.
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* StraightEdge: UsefulNotes/StraightEdge: Zach De La Rocha recruits some straight edge punks to act as David's bodyguards.
17th Nov '14 5:46:07 PM MarkLungo
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* RescueRomance: Daria and David meet when she rescues him from bullies. He is immediately so smitten with her that he flirts with her and jams his tongue down her throat mere moments later. This is true love apparently. Also, Trent and Daria's romance never comes up in spite of Peter clearly being on the Trent/Daria ship in his other stories.
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* RescueRomance: Daria and David meet when she rescues him from bullies. He is immediately so smitten with her that he flirts with her and jams his tongue down her throat mere moments later. This is true love apparently. Also, Trent and Daria's romance never comes up in spite of Peter clearly being on the Trent/Daria ship in his Guerin's other stories.
31st Dec '13 11:33:55 AM MarkLungo
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* ThatRemindsMeOfASong: Characters like Music/RageAgainstTheMachine and the singing preacher are used to shamelessly copy and paste songs into the story and pad out of the fic. These are ''never'' relevant to the story - at one point, the preacher belts out [[ManOfLaMancha "The Impossible Dream"]] simply because his Broadway background is mentioned.
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* ThatRemindsMeOfASong: Characters like Music/RageAgainstTheMachine and the singing preacher are used to shamelessly copy and paste songs into the story and pad out of the fic. These are ''never'' relevant to the story - at one point, the preacher belts out [[ManOfLaMancha [[Theatre/ManOfLaMancha "The Impossible Dream"]] simply because his Broadway background is mentioned.
31st Dec '13 11:32:08 AM MarkLungo
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Naturally, this promptly escalates into Sandi arranging for football thugs to beat the hell out of people, hiring Todd Ianuzzi to be a hit man against David (oh, and did we mention Todd raped Daria as a kid?), Trent enlisting the aid of Music/RageAgainstTheMachine to rally to David's cause, Quinn Morgendorffer constantly getting her shirt torn open by her foes, a minister singing show tunes, Daria and David engaging in graphic AuthorAppeal sex, and the whole story culminating in David's death by a completely random suicide bomber. Then, finally, we get a complete reversion to [[StatusQuoIsGod status quo]], and the events of the story are largely forgotten.
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Naturally, this promptly escalates into Sandi arranging for football thugs to beat the hell out of people, hiring Todd Ianuzzi to be a hit man against David (oh, and did we mention Todd raped Daria as a kid?), Trent enlisting the aid of Music/RageAgainstTheMachine to rally to David's cause, Quinn Morgendorffer constantly getting her shirt torn open by her foes, a minister singing show tunes, Daria and David engaging in graphic AuthorAppeal sex, and the whole story culminating in David's death murder by a completely random suicide bomber. Then, finally, we get a complete reversion to [[StatusQuoIsGod status quo]], and the events of the story are largely forgotten.
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