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* HeroOfAnotherStory: Bits of Taimu's and [[VideoGames/PokemonColosseum Wes']] stories are told in different chapters.
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* HeroOfAnotherStory: Bits of Taimu's and [[VideoGames/PokemonColosseum [[VideoGame/PokemonColosseum Wes']] stories are told in different chapters.
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* PetTheDog: Chapter 25 shows that [[BigBad Giovanni]] is not a complete monster, as he once saved and befriended a Meowth in the streets that would later become the Persian who almost always lays at his side.
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* TheAlcoholic: Blaine, whenever he's not performing his duties as Gym Leader or teaching at a university.
** Chapter 28 reveals that Delia Ketchum's parents were examples of this, to the point where they barely had money, and Delia was starving for love in her childhood.
** Chapter 28 reveals that Delia Ketchum's parents were examples of this, to the point where they barely had money, and Delia was starving for love in her childhood.
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** ResolvedNoodleIncident: The [[FanFic/{{Traveler}} main story]] eventually reveals that [[spoiler:Giovanni had Team Rocket attack Pallet Town in revenge for Delia leaving him and they were responsible for the deaths of Oak's family and his Venusaur]].
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** Infernus also calls Tangrowth "Binder," Clair's Kommo-o "Clanging Dragon", Steven's Metagross "Iron-Warrior", Oak's Arcanine "Swift-Fire and Karen's Houndoom "Dark-fire."
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** Infernus also calls Tangrowth "Binder," Clair's Kommo-o "Clanging Dragon", Steven's Metagross "Iron-Warrior", Oak's Arcanine "Swift-Fire "Swift-Fire," and Karen's Houndoom "Dark-fire."
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* AntiVillain: Chapter 4 teased for an anti-villainess named Haukea who served Articuno, [[spoiler: created the first Jynx by sacrificing her disciple to said legendary, and was a member of the first Elite Four.]]
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* EvilOverlord: Chapter 4 teased for a villainess named Haukea who served Articuno and [[spoiler: created the first Jynx by sacrificing her disciple to said legendary.]]
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* EvilOverlord: Chapter 4 teased for a villainess named Haukea who served Articuno HeroOfAnotherStory: Bits of Taimu's and [[spoiler: created the first Jynx by sacrificing her disciple to said legendary.]][[VideoGames/PokemonColosseum Wes']] stories are told in different chapters.
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* UnderestimatingBadassery: Tobias thinks the [[PhysicalGod Legendaries]] are more akin to OlympusMons, not realizing it's functionally impossible for anyone to beat a Legendary.
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* LastChanceToQuit: Darkrai offers Tobias a chance to flee when the trainer confronts it. When Tobias refuses to give up, Darkrai destroys his mind.
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* SmallNameBigEgo: Tobias genuinely thought he could control Legendaries, even believing he could "crush" Darkrai simply because he had the Lunar Wing.
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* WorldBuilding: This story mainly exists to provide background, lore, and understanding of the world of ''Traveler''.
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** Infernus also calls Tangrowth "Binder," Clair's Kommo-o "Clanging Dragon", Steven's Metagross "Iron-Warrior" and Karen's Houndoom "Dark-fire."
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** Infernus also calls Tangrowth "Binder," Clair's Kommo-o "Clanging Dragon", Steven's Metagross "Iron-Warrior" "Iron-Warrior", Oak's Arcanine "Swift-Fire and Karen's Houndoom "Dark-fire."
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I think Iron Warrier references Steven Metagross more than Kommo-o.
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** Infernus also calls Tangrowth "Binder," Clair's Kommo-o "Iron-Warrior" or "Clanging Dragon" and Karen's Houndoom "Dark-fire."
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** Infernus also calls Tangrowth "Binder," Clair's Kommo-o "Clanging Dragon", Steven's Metagross "Iron-Warrior" or "Clanging Dragon" and Karen's Houndoom "Dark-fire."
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* PerspectiveFlip: In Chapter 23, we see exactly what was going on in Infernus' mind while he was fighting Karen's Houndoom.
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* VerbalTick: Most of Ash's Pokémon have their own name for him. Dazed calls him "Friend-trainer" or "master," Nidoking calls Ash his "King," Torrent calls Ash "Monarch" and Infernus refers to him as "Conquerer."
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* VerbalTick: VerbalTic: Most of Ash's Pokémon have their own name for him. Dazed calls him "Friend-trainer" or "master," Nidoking calls Ash his "King," Torrent calls Ash "Monarch" and Infernus refers to him as "Conquerer."
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* VerbalTick: Most of Ash's Pokémon have their own name for him. Dazed calls him "Friend-trainer" or "master," Nidoking calls Ash his "King," Torrent calls Ash "Monarch" and Infernus refers to him as "Conquerer."
** Infernus also calls Tangrowth "Binder," Clair's Kommo-o "Iron-Warrior" or "Clanging Dragon" and Karen's Houndoom "Dark-fire."
** Infernus also calls Tangrowth "Binder," Clair's Kommo-o "Iron-Warrior" or "Clanging Dragon" and Karen's Houndoom "Dark-fire."
