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* XanatosGambit: Regardless of whether or not the expedition succeeded in its goals, [[spoiler:Sideways]] still [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/posts/101552289 gets what he wants]].
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* AdaptationalBadass: Among pretty much all of the characters who have apppeared in official media over the history of the franchise, Sentinel Prime stands out quite a bit as when compared to most modern interpretations of him, he is a true Matrix Bearer here rather than just having a fake one or being a [[WesternAnimation/TransformersAnimated prick]] or a [[Film/TransformersDarkoftheMoon genocidal conqueror]].

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* AdaptationalBadass: Among pretty much all of the characters who have apppeared in official media over the history of the franchise, Sentinel Prime stands out quite a bit as when compared to most modern interpretations of him, he is a true Matrix Bearer here rather than just having a fake one or being a [[WesternAnimation/TransformersAnimated prick]] prick with a giant chin]] or a [[Film/TransformersDarkoftheMoon genocidal conqueror]].
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** The origin of the Microns is [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/posts/101423580 based on]] the origin of the Dwarf race from ''Literature/TheLordOfTheRings''.
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* CentralTheme: A reoccurring theme in the story is [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/posts/101406603 a character believing only they can save everyone]].

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* CrazyPrepared: As part of Emirate Zeta's plan if Proteus tried to have him assassainated after revealing that he has transaction info for Proteus' hiring of the SoK, in addition to having at least 6 copies of the data, Zeta has 5 relays keyed to his spark and if he gets killed then to quote him "the moment my light goes out, every news organization on the planet will have the biggest headline to publish since the death of Nominus Prime.""

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* CrazyPrepared: As part of Emirate Zeta's plan if Proteus tried [[spoiler:Proteus]] tries to have him assassainated assassinated after revealing that he has transaction info for Proteus' [[spoiler:Proteus' hiring of the SoK, Sons of Kaon to try and stop Catalyst's expedition]], in addition to having at least 6 copies of the data, [[DeadMansSwitch Zeta has 5 relays keyed to his spark spark]] and if he gets killed then to quote him him, "the moment my light goes out, every news organization on the planet will have the biggest headline to publish since the death of Nominus Prime."""



* DirtyOldMan: Despite the venerable Grand Dion being an eons-old War Titan, his insult duel with Tidal Wave consists of a lot of boasts about his previous sexual prowess, stories that leave the bridge crew guffawing and Catalyst and Senator Ferria blushing up a storm. Then Grand Dion starts talking about his experience with [[TwinThreesomeFantasy spark-sisters]] and Ferria [[ScrewThisImOuttaHere bails]] at top speed.

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* DirtyOldMan: Despite the venerable Grand Dion being an eons-old War Titan, his insult duel with Tidal Wave consists of a lot of boasts about his previous sexual prowess, femme conquests, stories that leave the bridge crew guffawing and Catalyst and Senator Ferria blushing up a storm. Then Grand Dion starts talking about his experience with [[TwinThreesomeFantasy spark-sisters]] and Ferria [[ScrewThisImOuttaHere bails]] at top speed.



* FantasticRacism: Beastformers are apparently not well liked on Cybertron, primarily due to how much less mobile their alt-modes are compared to other cybertronians. They in turn hate fliers for just how mobile they are.

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Beastformers are apparently not well liked on Cybertron, primarily due to how much less mobile their alt-modes are compared to other cybertronians. They in turn hate fliers for just how mobile they are.are.
** Proteus doesn't think much of the humans living on Prysmos, calling them "soulless abominations" on account of how they don't have sparks.



* {{Foreshadowing}}: There's quite a bit of this in the story at various points.

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** The linguist Forestock sprinkles his speech with
the story at various points.foulest words in Cybertronix Ultima so that he can swear in public without anyone making a fuss.
** In the same conversation, Catalyst angrily tells Forestock to go fuck himself, to which Perceptor confusedly asks what "fuck" means.
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** In Spotlight 5 Part 1, we see one of the various Optimi fresh from Prysmos with Dion and Ariel at Atmosburn's Ener-Soup Kitchen and after sharing a story where said Optimi did something that the Big OP usually does (in this case liberating a mining camp full of child slaves and keeping a vault closed to shield them from a side effect of Sentinel going 1v1 against Dragotron) and Atmosburn gives him his old faceplate as the Optimi in question seemed "incomplete" and while Orion felt "much more complete, but still not fully ready" Dion mentions that Catalysis is holding a public rally and Orion's gaze falls intently upon the Autobot Sigil which signifies that there is quite the good chance that he is the future Optimus Prime that we all know and love.

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** In Spotlight 5 Part 1, we see one of the various Optimi fresh from Prysmos with Dion and Ariel at Orion Pax comes to Atmosburn's Ener-Soup Kitchen with his friends Dion and after sharing a story Ariel, having freshly returned from Prysmos where said Optimi did something that the Big OP usually does (in this case liberating he had liberated a mining camp full of child slaves and keeping held a vault closed to shield them from a side effect of Sentinel going 1v1 against Dragotron) and Dragotron's collateral damage. Seeing his scuff marks, Atmosburn gives him his old faceplate as the Optimi in question seemed "incomplete" and while mouthplate, which makes Orion felt "much feel a bit more complete, but still not fully ready" complete in some way, and Dion mentions that Catalysis is holding a public rally and Orion's gaze falls intently upon projects the Autobot Sigil which signifies that there is quite the good chance catches Orion's interest in a big way. All in all, there's a lot of hints that he is out of the future ExpyCoexistence of all the Optimi around, Orion Pax might be the one to become Optimus Prime that we all know and love.Prime.



* InVinoVeritas: Cat gets drunk during a ceremony that is celebrating one of her creations, and she ends up [[spoiler:making a public speech about how the planet isn't trying to fix the big problems and that she's going to start a daring expedition to the Plasma Energy Chamber in the hope of solving the energy crisis]].

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* InVinoVeritas: Cat After an argument with Forestock, Catalyst gets drunk on energex during a ceremony that is celebrating one of her creations, and she ends up [[spoiler:making a public speech about how the planet isn't trying to fix the big problems and that she's going to start a daring expedition to the Plasma Energy Chamber in the hope of solving the energy crisis]].



** One of Shockwave's experiments involved tearing out a Mech's processor and running it as a Terminal unit. The Mech in question was named Mainframe, who [[YourDaysAreNumbered was terminally ill]] and wanted to leave behind a bigger legacy, with every Teletraan unit now having an echo of his data engram. The ''War forCybertron: Kingdom'' toy of the Autobot's ship, the Ark, includes an Autobot named Mainframe that transforms into the ship's computer console, Teletraan-1.

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** One of Shockwave's experiments involved tearing out a Mech's processor and running it as a Terminal unit. The Mech in question was named Mainframe, who [[YourDaysAreNumbered was terminally ill]] and wanted to leave behind a bigger legacy, with every Teletraan unit now having an echo of his data engram. The ''War forCybertron: for Cybertron: Kingdom'' toy of the Autobot's ship, the Ark, includes an Autobot named Mainframe that transforms into the ship's computer console, Teletraan-1.



* PlanetOfSteves: Downplayed, but Catalyst ran into this problem when trying to search for Megatron. Turns out that Megatron, or some variant of it, is a very popular name among {{heel}} gladiators. She's run into similar problems looking into Soundwave.

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* PlanetOfSteves: Downplayed, but Catalyst ran into this problem when trying to search for Megatron. Turns out that Megatron, or some variant of it, is a very popular name among {{heel}} gladiators.gladiators due to the Fallen connotations (like a wrestler calling himself "Mr. Satan"). She's run into similar problems looking into Soundwave.



* PrecisionFStrike: Subverted; after getting infuriated by Forestock insulting her Synth-En project and calling it a waste of funding, angrily tells him to go fuck himself before storming off. Perceptor has no idea what the human cuss word she said meant.



* SkewedPriorities: When Calibur of [=TEKTRON=] shows up to surrender to Catalyst's expedition, Catalyst is irked at how they'd broken into her apartment and had stolen her Teletraan terminal. One of the bridge crew comments on her priorities.



*** [[spoiler:Apparently, the rumor of him surgically removing his emotional subroutines via the Shadowplay Protocols in order to think in pure logic was just that, a rumor. He says that while it's theoretically possible to rewire one's processor entirely for logic, it would put extra strain on one's primary processor, simplify one's thoughts, and attempting the procedure on oneself would be incredibly reckless, and his logical personality is purely due to meditation and mental discipline.]]

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*** [[spoiler:Apparently, the rumor of him surgically removing his emotional subroutines via the Shadowplay Protocols in order to think in pure logic was just that, a rumor. He says that while it's theoretically possible to rewire one's processor entirely for logic, it would put extra strain on one's primary processor, simplify one's thoughts, and attempting the procedure on oneself would be incredibly reckless, and his reckless. His logical personality is purely due to meditation and mental discipline.]]



* YouAreInCommandNow: [[spoiler:After the altercation at the Infernocon hives, the tiny Princess Quintessa of Hive Heliotrope is the only surviving member of the royal family after all the others are killed by a nuke launched by the enemy Hive.]]



* YouRemindMeOfX: [[spoiler:Shockwave]] reveals that his decision to protect Catalyst was due to her reminding him of [[spoiler:Nominus Prime]]; they're both {{Workaholic}}s trying to carry the entire weight of Cybertron's survival on their shoulders and have a habit of overusing stimulants in a misguided attempt to work longer than is healthy.

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* YouAreInCommandNow: [[spoiler:After the altercation at the Infernocon hives, the tiny Princess Quintessa of Hive Heliotrope is the only surviving member of the royal family after all the others are killed by a nuke launched by the enemy Hive, making her the new Queen.]]
* YouRemindMeOfX: [[spoiler:Shockwave]] reveals that his decision to protect Catalyst was due to her reminding him of [[spoiler:Nominus Prime]]; they're both {{Workaholic}}s trying to carry the entire weight of Cybertron's survival on their shoulders and have a habit of [[BottledHeroicResolve overusing stimulants stimulants]] in a misguided attempt to work longer than is healthy.
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CrazyPrepared: As part of Emirate Zeta's plan if Proteus tried to have him assassainated after revealing that he has transaction info for Proteus' hiring of the SoK, in addition to having at least 6 copies of the data, Zeta has 5 relays keyed to his sppark and if he gets killed then to quote him "the moment my light goes out, every news organization on the planet will have the biggest headline to publish since the death of Nominus Prime.""

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* CrazyPrepared: As part of Emirate Zeta's plan if Proteus tried to have him assassainated after revealing that he has transaction info for Proteus' hiring of the SoK, in addition to having at least 6 copies of the data, Zeta has 5 relays keyed to his sppark spark and if he gets killed then to quote him "the moment my light goes out, every news organization on the planet will have the biggest headline to publish since the death of Nominus Prime.""
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** Per WordOfGod, Cat's alt-mode is based heavily on the Ornithopters from Franchise/{{Dune}}.

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* {{Foreshadowing}}: There are several hints throughout the story that point to [[spoiler:Leobreaker actually being Shockwave in disguise]].
** He has several moments where he pauses when he's about to say [[CharacterCatchphrase a certain word]], then switches it to something else, as it would immediately tip the reader off if he overused that particular word (or several variants of it).
** His [[spoiler:Cyber Key Power]] does not take the form of [[spoiler:WolverineClaws like his [[Anime/TransformersCybertron original counterpart]]]], but takes the form of [[spoiler:a WaveMotionGun]], which is another hint towards [[spoiler:his actual identity]].
** He's also transfixed by the concept of taming [[Film/TransformersDarkOfTheMoon Driller Worms]].
** The only continuity that he's existed in is also the continuity that he's also [[spoiler:the upgraded form of Trailbreaker (his original name before it was changed to Overhaul)]], and [[spoiler:Trailbreaker]] is also on the expedition as a separate character.
** in Spotlight 5 Part 1, we see one of the various Optimi fresh from Prysmos with Dion and Ariel at Atmosburn's Ener-Soup Kitchen and after sharing a story where said Optimi did something that the Big OP usually does (in this case liberating a mining camp full of child slaves and keeping a vault closed to shield them from a side effect of Sentinel going 1v1 against Dragotron) and Atmosburn gives him his old faceplate as the Optimi in question seemed "incomplete" and while Orion felt "much more complete, but still not fully ready" Dion mentions that Catalysis is holding a public rally and Orion's gaze falls intently upon the Autobot Sigil which signifies that there is quite the good chance that he is the future Optimuus Prime that we all know and love.

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There are several hints throughout the story that point to [[spoiler:Leobreaker actually being Shockwave in disguise]].
** *** He has several moments where he pauses when he's about to say [[CharacterCatchphrase a certain word]], then switches it to something else, as it would immediately tip the reader off if he overused that particular word (or several variants of it).
** *** His [[spoiler:Cyber Key Power]] does not take the form of [[spoiler:WolverineClaws like his [[Anime/TransformersCybertron original counterpart]]]], but takes the form of [[spoiler:a WaveMotionGun]], which is another hint towards [[spoiler:his actual identity]].
** *** He's also transfixed by the concept of taming [[Film/TransformersDarkOfTheMoon Driller Worms]].
** *** The only continuity that he's existed in is also the continuity that he's also [[spoiler:the upgraded form of Trailbreaker (his original name before it was changed to Overhaul)]], and [[spoiler:Trailbreaker]] is also on the expedition as a separate character.
** in In Spotlight 5 Part 1, we see one of the various Optimi fresh from Prysmos with Dion and Ariel at Atmosburn's Ener-Soup Kitchen and after sharing a story where said Optimi did something that the Big OP usually does (in this case liberating a mining camp full of child slaves and keeping a vault closed to shield them from a side effect of Sentinel going 1v1 against Dragotron) and Atmosburn gives him his old faceplate as the Optimi in question seemed "incomplete" and while Orion felt "much more complete, but still not fully ready" Dion mentions that Catalysis is holding a public rally and Orion's gaze falls intently upon the Autobot Sigil which signifies that there is quite the good chance that he is the future Optimuus Optimus Prime that we all know and love.
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CrazyPrepared: As part of Emirate Zeta's plan if Proteus tried to have him assassainated after revealing that he has transaction info for Proteus' hiring of the SoK, in addition to having at least 6 copies of the data, Zeta has 5 relays keyed to his sppark and if he gets killed then to quote him "the moment my light goes out, every news organization on the planet will have the biggest headline to publish since the death of Nominus Prime.""
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* {{Precursors}}: The ancients were a species that existed before the current Cybertronians, being diplomats, builders, and explorers first and foremost in contrast to their modern brethren, and capable of technological feats that were far beyond even the Cybertronian empire at it's height. They left Cybertron to explore the universe billions of years ago and haven't been seen since, though the remnants of their civilization can be found all over the planet and it's layers.

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* {{Precursors}}: The ancients were a species that existed walked the surface long before the current Cybertronians, being diplomats, builders, and explorers first and foremost in contrast to their modern brethren, and capable of technological feats that were far beyond even the Cybertronian empire at it's height. They left Cybertron to explore the universe billions of years ago and haven't been seen since, though the remnants of their civilization can be found all over the planet and it's layers.

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* TheReveal: During the fight against [[spoiler:Airachnid]], Leobreaker reveals that he is actually [[spoiler:[[TheDreaded Shockwave]]]].



** When Thunderwing goes after Six-of-Twelve, he informs the bot that "[[Franchise/RoboCop offline or active, you're coming with me]]".* TheReveal: During the fight against [[spoiler:Airachnid]], Leobreaker reveals that he is actually [[spoiler:[[TheDreaded Shockwave]]]].

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** When Thunderwing goes after Six-of-Twelve, he informs the bot that "[[Franchise/RoboCop offline or active, you're coming with me]]".* TheReveal: During the fight against [[spoiler:Airachnid]], Leobreaker reveals that he is actually [[spoiler:[[TheDreaded Shockwave]]]].



* ThisIsGonnaSuck: Proteus is certainly thinking this after [[spoiler: Catalysis Prime/Septima makes her entrance back to Cybertron's surface]] as he has no idea how to deal with [[spoiler: two Primes alive at the same time]].

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* ThisIsGonnaSuck: Proteus is certainly thinking this after [[spoiler: Catalysis [[spoiler:Catalysis Prime/Septima makes her entrance back to Cybertron's surface]] as he has no idea how to deal with [[spoiler: two [[spoiler:two Primes alive at the same time]].

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* TheReveal: During the fight against [[spoiler:Airachnid]], Leobreaker reveals that he is actually [[spoiler:[[TheDreaded Shockwave]]]].



** When Thunderwing goes after Six-of-Twelve, he informs the bot that "[[Franchise/RoboCop offline or active, you're coming with me]]".

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** When Thunderwing goes after Six-of-Twelve, he informs the bot that "[[Franchise/RoboCop offline or active, you're coming with me]]".* TheReveal: During the fight against [[spoiler:Airachnid]], Leobreaker reveals that he is actually [[spoiler:[[TheDreaded Shockwave]]]].



* ThisIsGonnaSuck: Proteus is certainly thinking this after [[spoiler:Catalysis Prime/Septima makes her entrance back to Cybertron's surface]] as he has no idea how to deal with [[spoiler:two Primes alive at the same time]].

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* ThisIsGonnaSuck: Proteus is certainly thinking this after [[spoiler:Catalysis [[spoiler: Catalysis Prime/Septima makes her entrance back to Cybertron's surface]] as he has no idea how to deal with [[spoiler:two [[spoiler: two Primes alive at the same time]].
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* {{Precursors}:} The ancients were a species that existed before the current Cybertronians, being diplomats, builders, and explorers first and foremost in contrast to their modern brethren, and capable of technological feats that were far beyond even the Cybertronian empire at it's height. They left Cybertron to explore the universe billions of years ago and haven't been seen since, though the remnants of their civilization can be found all over the planet and it's layers.

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* {{Precursors}:} {{Precursors}}: The ancients were a species that existed before the current Cybertronians, being diplomats, builders, and explorers first and foremost in contrast to their modern brethren, and capable of technological feats that were far beyond even the Cybertronian empire at it's height. They left Cybertron to explore the universe billions of years ago and haven't been seen since, though the remnants of their civilization can be found all over the planet and it's layers.
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* {{Precursors:}} The ancients were a species that existed before the current Cybertronians, being diplomats, builders, and explorers first and foremost in contrast to their modern brethren, and capable of technological feats that were far beyond even the Cybertronian empire at it's height. They left Cybertron to explore the universe billions of years ago and haven't been seen since, though the remnants of their civilization can be found all over the planet and it's layers.

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* {{Precursors:}} {{Precursors}:} The ancients were a species that existed before the current Cybertronians, being diplomats, builders, and explorers first and foremost in contrast to their modern brethren, and capable of technological feats that were far beyond even the Cybertronian empire at it's height. They left Cybertron to explore the universe billions of years ago and haven't been seen since, though the remnants of their civilization can be found all over the planet and it's layers.

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* {{Precursors:}} The ancients were a species that existed before the current Cybertronians, being diplomats, builders, and explorers first and foremost in contrast to their modern brethren, and capable of technological feats that were far beyond even the Cybertronian empire at it's height. They left Cybertron to explore the universe billions of years ago and haven't been seen since, though the remnants of their civilization can be found all over the planet and it's layers.



* Precursors: The ancients were a species that existed before the current Cybertronians, being diplomats, builders, and explorers first and foremost in contrast to their modern brethren, and capable of technological feats that were far beyond even the Cybertronian empire at it's height. They left Cybertron to explore the universe billions of years ago and haven't been seen since, though the remnants of their civilization can be found all over the planet and it's layers.

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* Precursors: The ancients were a species that existed before the current Cybertronians, being diplomats, builders, and explorers first and foremost in contrast to their modern brethren, and capable of technological feats that were far beyond even the Cybertronian empire at it's height. They left Cybertron to explore the universe billions of years ago and haven't been seen since, though the remnants of their civilization can be found all over the planet and it's layers.
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**Grand Dion and his non-reincarnated crew are even older, having been created during the war in heaven.
**Then there are [[spoiler: the primordials, the first species created by Primus at the dawn of the universe.]]
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* BaitAndSwitch: When trying to negotiate with a pair of Infernocon hives for aid and passage, there are concerns that the pacifistic and drug-imbibing Beachcomber would cause some problems, especially with his insistence on not bringing weapons. [[spoiler:Indeed, the hive that Beachcomber goes do does end up blowing up in violence because of him, but it occurs because Queen Solomnia refuses to consider peace and instantly moves to nuke her enemy hive, prompting Beachcomber to shoot the Queen right in the heart to stop her.]]



* BigBadWannabe: Lord Darkstorm tries to be this for Prysmos, intending on overthrowing Prince Leoric, driving off the Sky Giants, co-opting their space technology, and extending his reach to the stars. Not only is he instantly overcome by the Elite Guard, everyone's attention turns to Dragotron as the bigger threat.



* BoringReturnJourney: The expedition down to the Plasma Energy Chamber took the assistance of a War Titan, encountered many obstacles, and took multiple chapters. The return up to the surface is completely offscreen, helped by [[spoiler:the Primordial]] Botanica and several Driller Worms.
* BottledHeroicResolve: Catalyst, {{Workaholic}} driven to solve the Energon crisis that she is, has a bad habit of overusing stimulants to keep working far beyond her limits. Her colleagues often have to kick her out of the office just to make her get some rest, and a doctor's appointment makes clear how corroded her fuel lines are from said overusage.



* DidntSeeThatComing: [[spoiler:Sideways]] is completely blindsided by [[spoiler:Catalyst's ascension to Catalysis Prime]], much to his displeasure.

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* DidntSeeThatComing: [[spoiler:Sideways]] is completely blindsided by [[spoiler:Catalyst's ascension to Catalysis Prime]], Prime/Septima]], much to his displeasure.



* DirtyOldMan: Despite the venerable Grand Dion being an eons-old War Titan, his insult duel with Tidal Wave consists of a lot of boasts about his previous sexual prowess, stories that leave the bridge crew guffawing and Catalyst and Senator Ferria blushing up a storm. Then Grand Dion starts talking about his experience with [[TwinThreesomeFantasy spark-sisters]] and Ferria [[ScrewThisImOuttaHere bails]] at top speed.



* EnlightenmentSuperpowers: [[spoiler:Leobreaker]] believes that Cyber Keys are bestowed to those who achieve enlightenment rather than it being earned simply through faith and piety.

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* EnlightenmentSuperpowers: [[spoiler:Leobreaker]] believes that Cyber Keys are bestowed to those who achieve enlightenment rather than it being earned simply through faith and piety. [[spoiler:Calibur showing his to the Expedition goes a long way in getting them to hear him out.]]



* GreatOffscreenWar: The Great Lithonic War is one of the main reasons that Cybertron is in the state it is. It started when one of the [[WesternAnimation/ChallengeOfTheGoBots Rock Lords]] destroyed the Gobot's planet of Gobotron (possibly by accident), resulting in Cybertron declaring war on them for attacking their protectorate.

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* GreatOffscreenWar: The Great Lithonic War is one of the main reasons that Cybertron is in the state it is. It started when one of the [[WesternAnimation/ChallengeOfTheGoBots Rock Lords]] destroyed the Gobot's planet of Gobotron (possibly by accident), resulting in Cybertron declaring war on them for attacking their protectorate. What followed was a PyrrhicVictory where technically Cybertron won, but at an enormous cost of Energon that only added to the energy crisis.



* {{Jobber}}: Maxima is [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/posts/101143392 a gladiator version]] of this.

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* {{Jobber}}: Maxima is [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/posts/101143392 a gladiator version]] of this.this, boasting impressive skill but a poor track record of being defeated in fights. It's a good thing her Inherent Mechanism allows her to redirect damage to her surroundings.



** Grimlock. [[spoiler:Which makes the revelation that he's Catalyst's mentor all the more astonishing]].

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** Grimlock. [[spoiler:Which makes the revelation that he's Catalyst's mentor all the more astonishing]]. He enjoys mag-clamping his smaller apprentice to his chestplate just to embarrass her.



* MeaningfulName: Catalyst is a fitting name for a researcher working with Energon. It also fits her unique ability, which is to literally act as a catalyst for chemical reactions, provided that she understands how the reactions work.

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* MeaningfulName: Catalyst is a fitting name for a researcher working with Energon. It also fits her unique ability, Inherent Mechanism, which is to literally act as a catalyst for chemical reactions, provided that she understands how the reactions work.



* MySignificanceSenseIsTingling: When [[spoiler:Solus Prime gives Catalyst her Creation Matrix to turn her into Catalysis Prime]], what follows is a ReactionShot from multiple individuals capable of sensing the wave of power, mostly [[spoiler:the Primes or their inheritors]].



* NormalFishInATinyPond: Cosmos is a simple explorer on Cybertron, but on Prysmos, he is a mechanical giant who is more than capable of holding his own against [[WesternAnimation/{{Visionaries}} the Darkling Lords and their magic]]. He even gets knighted by Prince Leoric.



* PayEvilUntoEvil: Even after [[spoiler:ascending as Catalysis Prime]], Catalyst is in no mood to extend mercy to [[spoiler:Airachnid]] after all the harm she dealt to the expedition team just to get to her, and tells [[spoiler:Shockwave]] to get the information out of her and then kill her.



** The [=TEKTRON=] crew are [[{{Expy}} expies]] of [[VideoGame/FinalFantasyVII Avalanche]]. Also, [[spoiler:Airachnid's]] attempted assassination of [[spoiler:Catalysis Prime]] is a recreation of Aerith's iconic death.

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** The [=TEKTRON=] crew are [[{{Expy}} expies]] of [[VideoGame/FinalFantasyVII Avalanche]].Avalanche]], including Caliber, a ReligiousBruiser with an ArmCannon, Heartlock, a brawling femme, and Nimbus, an ex-Seeker mercenary with a {{BFS}}. Also, [[spoiler:Airachnid's]] attempted assassination of [[spoiler:Catalysis Prime]] is a recreation of Aerith's iconic death.



*** [[spoiler:When Perceptor asks him why he surgically removed his emotional subroutines in order to think in pure logic, Shockwave says he did no such thing; his demeanor is purely due to mental discipline. When asked about the Shadowplay Protocols that he designed to curtail the violent emotions of criminals, he says that while it's theoretically possible to rewire one's processor entirely for logic, it would put extra strain on one's primary processor, simplify one's thoughts, and attempting the procedure on oneself would be incredibly reckless.]]
*** [[spoiler:A first-generation Shadowplay subject tried traveling back in time to prove that religion was the cause of Cybertron's ills (albeit unsuccessfully), which is a none-too-subtle jab at IDW Shockwave's temporal shenanigans after the events of ''Dark Cybertron''. According to him, all the idiot managed to do was construct a molecular disintegrator that disassembled half his chassis, and Shockwave had to euthanize the rest of him before he could "rejoin his other half in the distant past".]]

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*** [[spoiler:When Perceptor asks [[spoiler:Apparently, the rumor of him why he surgically removed removing his emotional subroutines via the Shadowplay Protocols in order to think in pure logic, Shockwave says he did no such thing; his demeanor is purely due to mental discipline. When asked about the Shadowplay Protocols that he designed to curtail the violent emotions of criminals, he logic was just that, a rumor. He says that while it's theoretically possible to rewire one's processor entirely for logic, it would put extra strain on one's primary processor, simplify one's thoughts, and attempting the procedure on oneself would be incredibly reckless.reckless, and his logical personality is purely due to meditation and mental discipline.]]
*** [[spoiler:A first-generation Shadowplay subject tried traveling back in time to prove that religion was the cause of Cybertron's ills (albeit unsuccessfully), ills, which is a none-too-subtle jab at IDW Shockwave's temporal shenanigans after the events of ''Dark Cybertron''. According to him, Shockwave, all the idiot managed to do was construct a molecular disintegrator that disassembled half his chassis, and Shockwave had to euthanize the rest of him before he could "rejoin his other half in the distant past".]]



* ThisIsGonnaSuck: Proteus is certainly thinking this after [[spoiler:Catalysis Prime/Septima makes her entrance]] as he has no idea how to deal with [[spoiler:two Primes alive at the same time]].

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* ThisIsGonnaSuck: Proteus is certainly thinking this after [[spoiler:Catalysis Prime/Septima makes her entrance]] entrance back to Cybertron's surface]] as he has no idea how to deal with [[spoiler:two Primes alive at the same time]].


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* TitleDrop: The title of the fic is shouted as a rallying cry before Catalyst enters the Plasma Energy Chamber to find the information she seeks.


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* YouAreInCommandNow: [[spoiler:After the altercation at the Infernocon hives, the tiny Princess Quintessa of Hive Heliotrope is the only surviving member of the royal family after all the others are killed by a nuke launched by the enemy Hive.]]
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* TheReveal: During the fight against [[spoiler:Airachnid]], Leobreaker reveals that he is actually [[spoiler: [[TheDreaded Shockwave]]]].

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* TheReveal: During the fight against [[spoiler:Airachnid]], Leobreaker reveals that he is actually [[spoiler: [[TheDreaded [[spoiler:[[TheDreaded Shockwave]]]].



--> '''Leobreaker/[[spoiler:Shockwave]]''': Your existence was allowed by my deliberation. My unwillingness to commit to the complete extermination of a geneline, no matter how wretched, gave your progenitors the opportunity to escape. My mind was clouded then, the true path was not revealed to me, and my actions....were ''most'' [[spoiler:[[CharacterCatchphrase Illogical]]"]].

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--> '''Leobreaker/[[spoiler:Shockwave]]''': '''Leobreaker/[[spoiler:Shockwave]]:''' Your existence was allowed by my deliberation. My unwillingness to commit to the complete extermination of a geneline, no matter how wretched, gave your progenitors the opportunity to escape. My mind was clouded then, the true path was not revealed to me, and my actions....were ''most'' [[spoiler:[[CharacterCatchphrase Illogical]]"]].Illogical]]]].



-->'''Scissorsaw:''' SAY I'M TOO HEAVY ONE MORE TIME YOU SCRAPLET!\\

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-->'''Scissorsaw:''' --> '''Scissorsaw:''' SAY I'M TOO HEAVY ONE MORE TIME YOU SCRAPLET!\\

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