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A ''Franchise/OnePiece'' {{Fanfic}} fanfic by Tonko, ''[[http://archiveofourown.org/works/92932 'Til You Feel it All Around You]]'' hits three of the Straw Hats with a FountainOfYouth and shows how their TrueCompanions deal with their sudden {{Promotion To Parent}}s. The nature of their deaging provides plenty of mystery.
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* WistfulAmnesia: As children, Zoro, Usopp and Robin can't remember anything about their lives past that point, as they haven't lived those events. However, despite not recognizing their [[TrueCompanions friends]], they feel safe around them for reasons they can't quite figure out. [[spoiler:Once they're back to normal, they gradually regain some memories from their 'second childhood'.]]
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** As children, Zoro, Usopp and Robin can't remember anything about their lives past that point, as they haven't lived those events. However, despite not recognizing their [[TrueCompanions friends]], they feel safe around them for reasons they can't quite figure out. [[spoiler:Once they're back to normal, they gradually regain some memories from their 'second childhood'.]]
** As children, Zoro, Usopp and Robin can't remember anything about their lives past that point, as they haven't lived those events. However, despite not recognizing their [[TrueCompanions friends]], they feel safe around them for reasons they can't quite figure out. [[spoiler:Once they're back to normal, they gradually regain some memories from their 'second childhood'.]]
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* YouHaveGotToBeKiddingMe: Sanji's reaction when Kid!Zoro starts climbing up the rigging at full speed.speed.
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A ''OnePiece'' {{Fanfic}} by Tonko, ''[[http://archiveofourown.org/works/92932 'Til You Feel it All Around You]]'' hits three of the Straw Hats with a FountainOfYouth and shows how their TrueCompanions deal with their sudden {{Promotion To Parent}}s. The nature of their deaging provides plenty of mystery.
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A ''OnePiece'' ''Franchise/OnePiece'' {{Fanfic}} by Tonko, ''[[http://archiveofourown.org/works/92932 'Til You Feel it All Around You]]'' hits three of the Straw Hats with a FountainOfYouth and shows how their TrueCompanions deal with their sudden {{Promotion To Parent}}s. The nature of their deaging provides plenty of mystery.
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A ''OnePiece'' {{Fanfic}} by Tonko, ''[[http://archiveofourown.org/works/92932 'Til You Feel it All Around You]]'' hits three of the Straw Hats with a FountainOfYouth and shows how their TrueCompanions deal with their sudden {{Promotion To Parent}}s. The nature of their deaging provides plenty of mystery mixed in with the [[CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming heartwarming]] (and at times [[TearJerker heartwrenching]]) tone.
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* OralFixationFixation: When trying not to smoke around the kids, Sanji absently bites his thumb. He doesn't even realize he's doing this until Franky points it out to him.
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* OralFixationFixation: OralFixation: When trying not to smoke around the kids, Sanji absently bites his thumb. He doesn't even realize he's doing this until Franky points it out to him.
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* AdultChild: Nami briefly muses on how well Luffy gets along with their newly-younger crewmembers.
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* UnusuallyUninterestingSight: Luffy doesn't act particularly fazed by three of his friends suddenly turning up as little kids. Brook's usual status as this is {{Lampshaded}} when the rest of the crew realizes just a little too late that while ''they're'' used to him, the 'kids' aren't anymore.
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* {{Protectorate}}: All of the younger [[TrueCompanions groups]] automatically become this to their older friends; in particular, Usopp becomes this for Sanji.
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* {{Protectorate}}: All of the younger [[TrueCompanions groups]] members]] automatically become this to their older friends; in particular, Usopp becomes this for Sanji.
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* TroublingUnchildlikeBehavior: All three de-aged {{Nakama}}, due to the traumas they're ''already'' carrying at their young age.
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* TroublingUnchildlikeBehavior: All three de-aged {{Nakama}}, {{true companions}}, due to the traumas they're ''already'' carrying at their young age.
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* WistfulAmnesia: As children, Zoro, Usopp and Robin can't remember anything about their lives past that point, as they haven't lived those events. However, despite not recognizing their nakama, [[TrueCompanions friends]], they feel safe around them for reasons they can't quite figure out. [[spoiler:Once they're back to normal, they gradually regain some memories from their 'second childhood'.]]
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Zoro, Usopp and Robin don't return as expected from a foray into an island forest. After setting out to locate them, the rest of the crew finds their nakama each missing significant portions of their whole lives.
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* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: Nami's disinterested response to Luffy mentioning they might have found treasure along with [[spoiler:their nakama's bodies]] is specifically pointed out as a sign of how serious the situation is.
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* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: Nami's disinterested response to Luffy mentioning they might have found treasure along with [[spoiler:their nakama's comrade's bodies]] is specifically pointed out as a sign of how serious the situation is.
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* {{Protectorate}}: All of the younger nakama automatically become this to their older friends; in particular, Usopp becomes this for Sanji.
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* {{Protectorate}}: All of the younger nakama [[TrueCompanions groups]] automatically become this to their older friends; in particular, Usopp becomes this for Sanji.
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* BrutalHonesty: Zoro, even moreso as a child.
* DoubleTake: Zoro gives one of these to Brook, once he stops raging over [[spoiler:nearly losing Wadou in the water]] to actually ''register'' that he's there.
* EmptyEyes: [[spoiler:When 'this one' possesses the children.]]
* EurekaMoment: Nami and Chopper both have one after Luffy points out that their three regressed friends [[spoiler:don't have their normal stuff]].
* EmptyEyes: [[spoiler:When 'this one' possesses the children.]]
* EurekaMoment: Nami and Chopper both have one after Luffy points out that their three regressed friends [[spoiler:don't have their normal stuff]].
** After [[spoiler:'this one' possesses the kids]], Sanji silently notes that carrying Usopp back doesn't produce 'warm and fuzzy feelings' like normal; more 'incandescent protective fury'.
* GoMadFromTheIsolation
* MeaningfulEcho:
-->'''Usopp:''' Pirates are coming. Pirates are coming, Mama... Pirates are ''here''.
-->'''Usopp:''' Pirates are coming. Pirates are coming, Mama... Pirates are ''here''.
* OralFixationFixation: When trying not to smoke around the kids, Sanji absently bites his thumb. He doesn't even realize he's doing this until Franky points it out to him.
* ParentalSubstitute: Usopp explictedly compares Sanji to his own Mama at times, acknowledging that while she can't be there for him, Sanji's good, too.
* ShrinkingViolet: Robin, but only whenever she decides to join the conversation. She's fine as long as she's not doing anything that might draw attention directly to ''her''.
* SympathyForTheDevil: Brook immediately empathizes with 'this one' due to his own experiences.
* TeamDad: Franky continues to act as this for ''all'' the Straw Hats, including PapaWolf Sanji, who directly compares the cyborg to Zeff.
* TeamDad: Franky continues to act as this for ''all'' the Straw Hats, including PapaWolf Sanji, who directly compares the cyborg to Zeff.
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** Usopp, when lying about his adventures as 'Great Captain Usopp', repeatedly refers to actual adventures the Straw Hats have had.
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** Usopp, when lying about his adventures as 'Great Captain Usopp', repeatedly refers to actual adventures the Straw Hats have had.had.
* YouHaveGotToBeKiddingMe: Sanji's reaction when Kid!Zoro starts climbing up the rigging at full speed.
* YouHaveGotToBeKiddingMe: Sanji's reaction when Kid!Zoro starts climbing up the rigging at full speed.
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Zoro, Usopp and Robin don't return as expected from a foray into an island forest. After setting out to locate them, the rest of the crew finds their nakama each missing significant portions of their whole lives.
A ''OnePiece'' {{Fanfic}} by Tonko, ''[[http://archiveofourown.org/works/92932 'Til You Feel it All Around You]]'' hits three of the Straw Hats with a FountainOfYouth and shows how their TrueCompanions deal with their sudden {{Promotion To Parent}}s. The nature of their deaging provides plenty of mystery mixed in with the [[CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming heartwarming]] (and at times [[TearJerker heartwrenching]]) tone.
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* AdultChild: Nami briefly muses on how well Luffy gets along with their newly-younger crewmembers.
* BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler:The trio gets cured, and they're able to lay the spirit to rest, but it takes time for everyone to adjust to suddenly 'losing' the children.]]
* BreadEggsMilkSquick: When shifting through Zoro's locker to find his sword care equipment, Sanji does a mental backspace after realizing he just looked over [[spoiler:a ball of green wool and knitting needles]].
* BrokenBird: Robin, ''already''.
* BrokenSmile: When Sanji offers the children a false smile to try and reassure them, Usopp actually shows him [[StepfordSmiler how to fix it]].
* ChillOfUndeath: According to Chopper, the [[spoiler:empty bodies]] feel colder than the ambient temperature.
* CigaretteOfAnxiety: Sanji restrains himself from smoking around the kids, stepping out for a couple of these after stressful moments.
* ConstantlyCurious: Usopp has plenty of questions for everyone when he's not terrified. Robin's much the same way when emerging from her shell.
* CreepyChild: [[spoiler:All three when possessed by 'this one'.]]
* DeathByFallingOver: Though Brook acknowledges that this may not have been the result if he hadn't reacted quickly to [[spoiler:Usopp slipping]], well, why take the chance? [[spoiler:Witnessing this brings back bad memories for Zoro, as well...]]
* {{Deconstruction}}: While it has several sweet, cutesy moments as is par for the course with de-aging fics, the 'older' Straw Hats are painfully aware of how dangerous it is to suddenly have three children traveling the Grand Line with them.
* DoesNotKnowHisOwnStrength: Zoro runs into this problem.
* FalseReassurance: When Zoro demands to know if he's the best yet, Sanji tells him "You haven't lost since the day I met you." He also silently notes that he isn't counting [[spoiler:losses to opponents who ''weren't'' swordsmen]].
* FearLeadsToAnger: Several times, with Zoro providing a standout example after [[spoiler:seeing Usopp nearly crack his head open by falling]].
* FountainOfYouth
* GhostAmnesia: 'This one' only has the vaguest understanding that they're lost and [[GhostlyGoals need to be found]].
* HeroicBSOD: Luffy has a brief one upon discovering [[spoiler:the bodies of their lost friends]].
* LateToThePunchline: Zoro has a varient of this when he finally realizes [[spoiler:why he has dim memories of somebody snapping 'cabbage']].
* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: Nami's disinterested response to Luffy mentioning they might have found treasure along with [[spoiler:their nakama's bodies]] is specifically pointed out as a sign of how serious the situation is.
* OurSoulsAreDifferent
* PapaWolf: Sanji swiftly grows into the most prominent example of this, leading Franky to tell him he'll probably make a great father someday.
* {{Protectorate}}: All of the younger nakama automatically become this to their older friends; in particular, Usopp becomes this for Sanji.
* StepfordSmiler: Little Usopp shows signs of being a budding Type A in the vein of SadClown.
* {{Stripperiffic}}: Referenced when Nami can't lend any of her clothes to the younger Robin because it's all tailored to emphasize her cleveage.
* TeamMom: Nami, who wonders if there's something ''wrong'' with her due to her inability to ''stop'' worrying for even a few moments after discovering their crewmates' plight.
* TearsOfJoy: Chopper gets these near the end, upon recognizing that [[spoiler:Zoro, Usopp and Robin's scents have been restored and they're breathing again]].
* TimeTravelTenseTrouble: Trying to explain things that have/'will' happen to the deaged crewmates falls under this, and Sanji stumbles badly at one point:
-->'''Sanji:''' Hell if I know. Maybe Robin does. Did. Would... Will? Damn.
* ToiletHumor: As Usopp discovers very quickly, even the ''very serious'' Zoro can't help but laugh at this.
* TroublingUnchildlikeBehavior: All three de-aged {{Nakama}}, due to the traumas they're ''already'' carrying at their young age.
* TrueCompanions
* WhatTheHellHero: Child or not, Sanji still calls Zoro out after he [[spoiler:shoved Usopp for seemingly no reason]].
* WistfulAmnesia: As children, Zoro, Usopp and Robin can't remember anything about their lives past that point, as they haven't lived those events. However, despite not recognizing their nakama, they feel safe around them for reasons they can't quite figure out. [[spoiler:Once they're back to normal, they gradually regain some memories from their 'second childhood'.]]
** Usopp, when lying about his adventures as 'Great Captain Usopp', repeatedly refers to actual adventures the Straw Hats have had.
A ''OnePiece'' {{Fanfic}} by Tonko, ''[[http://archiveofourown.org/works/92932 'Til You Feel it All Around You]]'' hits three of the Straw Hats with a FountainOfYouth and shows how their TrueCompanions deal with their sudden {{Promotion To Parent}}s. The nature of their deaging provides plenty of mystery mixed in with the [[CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming heartwarming]] (and at times [[TearJerker heartwrenching]]) tone.
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This ''OnePiece'' FanFiction contains examples of:
* AdultChild: Nami briefly muses on how well Luffy gets along with their newly-younger crewmembers.
* BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler:The trio gets cured, and they're able to lay the spirit to rest, but it takes time for everyone to adjust to suddenly 'losing' the children.]]
* BreadEggsMilkSquick: When shifting through Zoro's locker to find his sword care equipment, Sanji does a mental backspace after realizing he just looked over [[spoiler:a ball of green wool and knitting needles]].
* BrokenBird: Robin, ''already''.
* BrokenSmile: When Sanji offers the children a false smile to try and reassure them, Usopp actually shows him [[StepfordSmiler how to fix it]].
* ChillOfUndeath: According to Chopper, the [[spoiler:empty bodies]] feel colder than the ambient temperature.
* CigaretteOfAnxiety: Sanji restrains himself from smoking around the kids, stepping out for a couple of these after stressful moments.
* ConstantlyCurious: Usopp has plenty of questions for everyone when he's not terrified. Robin's much the same way when emerging from her shell.
* CreepyChild: [[spoiler:All three when possessed by 'this one'.]]
* DeathByFallingOver: Though Brook acknowledges that this may not have been the result if he hadn't reacted quickly to [[spoiler:Usopp slipping]], well, why take the chance? [[spoiler:Witnessing this brings back bad memories for Zoro, as well...]]
* {{Deconstruction}}: While it has several sweet, cutesy moments as is par for the course with de-aging fics, the 'older' Straw Hats are painfully aware of how dangerous it is to suddenly have three children traveling the Grand Line with them.
* DoesNotKnowHisOwnStrength: Zoro runs into this problem.
* FalseReassurance: When Zoro demands to know if he's the best yet, Sanji tells him "You haven't lost since the day I met you." He also silently notes that he isn't counting [[spoiler:losses to opponents who ''weren't'' swordsmen]].
* FearLeadsToAnger: Several times, with Zoro providing a standout example after [[spoiler:seeing Usopp nearly crack his head open by falling]].
* FountainOfYouth
* GhostAmnesia: 'This one' only has the vaguest understanding that they're lost and [[GhostlyGoals need to be found]].
* HeroicBSOD: Luffy has a brief one upon discovering [[spoiler:the bodies of their lost friends]].
* LateToThePunchline: Zoro has a varient of this when he finally realizes [[spoiler:why he has dim memories of somebody snapping 'cabbage']].
* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: Nami's disinterested response to Luffy mentioning they might have found treasure along with [[spoiler:their nakama's bodies]] is specifically pointed out as a sign of how serious the situation is.
* OurSoulsAreDifferent
* PapaWolf: Sanji swiftly grows into the most prominent example of this, leading Franky to tell him he'll probably make a great father someday.
* {{Protectorate}}: All of the younger nakama automatically become this to their older friends; in particular, Usopp becomes this for Sanji.
* StepfordSmiler: Little Usopp shows signs of being a budding Type A in the vein of SadClown.
* {{Stripperiffic}}: Referenced when Nami can't lend any of her clothes to the younger Robin because it's all tailored to emphasize her cleveage.
* TeamMom: Nami, who wonders if there's something ''wrong'' with her due to her inability to ''stop'' worrying for even a few moments after discovering their crewmates' plight.
* TearsOfJoy: Chopper gets these near the end, upon recognizing that [[spoiler:Zoro, Usopp and Robin's scents have been restored and they're breathing again]].
* TimeTravelTenseTrouble: Trying to explain things that have/'will' happen to the deaged crewmates falls under this, and Sanji stumbles badly at one point:
-->'''Sanji:''' Hell if I know. Maybe Robin does. Did. Would... Will? Damn.
* ToiletHumor: As Usopp discovers very quickly, even the ''very serious'' Zoro can't help but laugh at this.
* TroublingUnchildlikeBehavior: All three de-aged {{Nakama}}, due to the traumas they're ''already'' carrying at their young age.
* TrueCompanions
* WhatTheHellHero: Child or not, Sanji still calls Zoro out after he [[spoiler:shoved Usopp for seemingly no reason]].
* WistfulAmnesia: As children, Zoro, Usopp and Robin can't remember anything about their lives past that point, as they haven't lived those events. However, despite not recognizing their nakama, they feel safe around them for reasons they can't quite figure out. [[spoiler:Once they're back to normal, they gradually regain some memories from their 'second childhood'.]]
** Usopp, when lying about his adventures as 'Great Captain Usopp', repeatedly refers to actual adventures the Straw Hats have had.
