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It can\'t really be a case of Did Not Do the Research if said information came out AFTER the fic was written, can it?
** And in Chapter 4, Trixie becomes K-Colt's latest sponsor, with a hilariously long, self-promoting spiel. Octavia notes that she's somehow even more egotistical than Vinyl.
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** DidNotDoTheResearch: WordOfGod (or rather, Word of Faust) has since stated that most of Vinyl's objections refer to things Celestia had zero control over and couldn't have done anything about, making Vinyl look like (more of a) bitch in hindsight.
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** DidNotDoTheResearch: {{Jossed}}: WordOfGod (or rather, Word of Faust) has since stated that most of Vinyl's objections refer to things Celestia had zero control over and couldn't have done anything about, making Vinyl look like (more of a) bitch in hindsight.hindsight.
* WhatTheHellIsThatAccent: Vinyl asks Photo Finish, "What accent are we SUPPOSED to think that is?" during an off screen interview and gets a [[ComicallyMissingThePoint (free!)]] camera thrown at her head for it.
* WhatTheHellIsThatAccent: Vinyl asks Photo Finish, "What accent are we SUPPOSED to think that is?" during an off screen interview and gets a [[ComicallyMissingThePoint (free!)]] camera thrown at her head for it.
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* ToiletHumor: Vinyl's collection of StockSoundEffects includes at least two different fart noises.
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Well, there\'s ANOTHER fanfic I can never read again...
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** DidNotDoTheResearch: WordOfGod (or rather, Word of Faust) has since stated that most of Vinyl's objections refer to things Celestia had zero control over and couldn't have done anything about, making Vinyl look like (more of a) bitch in hindsight.
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* RousingSpeech: Vinyl gives a few of them, usually about ThePowerOfRock.
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** Also in Chapter 3, K-Colt is now sponsored by [[EnsembleDarkhorse Derpy Express]], Equestria's most endearing delivery service. They even include free Muffins!
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->''"After the invention of radio, [[EnsembleDarkhorse DJ-P0n3]] (aka Vinyl Scratch) holds the first Equestrian talk show with her co-host Octavia. [[OnlySaneMan Octavia]] quickly finds out her superior is slightly [[CloudCuckooLander eccentric]], leading their broadcast to be constantly derailed, yet somehow remain popular. These episodes were recorded for historical significance and transcribed. These are the Vinyl Scratch Tapes."''
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* VitrolicBestBuds: Vinyl and Octavia, with hints that it may blossom into BelligerentSexualTension
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* VitrolicBestBuds: VitriolicBestBuds: Vinyl and Octavia, with hints that it may blossom into BelligerentSexualTension
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* TomboyAndGirlyGirl: Vinyl and Octavia
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* VitrolicBestBuds: Vinyl and Octavia, with hints that it may blossom into BelligerentSexualTension
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* CrazyAwesome: Vinyl at times.
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* LargeHam: Vinyl
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--> '''Vinyl''': Can’t really argue with that one.
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--> '''Vinyl''': [[SelfDeprecation Can’t really argue with that one.one]].
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* ShoutOut: Vinyl is so CrazyAwesome that she's somehow aware of Earth pop culture. She opens her show with quotes from ''TheTwilightZone'''s OpeningNarration (in Chatper 2) and Music/{{Queen}}'s "Bohemian Rhapsody" (in Chapter 3).
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* ShoutOut: Vinyl is so CrazyAwesome that she's somehow aware of Earth pop culture. She opens her show with quotes from ''TheTwilightZone'''s OpeningNarration (in Chatper Chapter 2) and Music/{{Queen}}'s "Bohemian Rhapsody" (in Chapter 3).
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* ShoutOut: Vinyl is so CrazyAwesome that she's somehow aware of Earth pop culture. She opens her show with quotes from ''TheTwilightZone'''s OpeningNarration (in Chatper 2) and Music/{{Queen}}'s "Bohemian Rhapsody" (in Chapter 3).
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* DefrostingIceQueen: Octavia's CharacterDevelopment throughout the story. She evolves from barely tolerating Vinyl's loud mouth and outrageous antics to realizing that she's really a good pony and becoming friends with her. [[spoiler:The epilog states that they eventually move in together.]]
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* DefrostingIceQueen: Octavia's CharacterDevelopment throughout the story. She evolves from barely tolerating Vinyl's loud mouth and outrageous antics to realizing that she's really a good pony and becoming friends with her. [[spoiler:The [[spoiler:And maybe something more--The epilog states that they eventually move in together.]]
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* ScriptFic: A variation; the story puports to be transcripts of Vinyl and Octavia's radio show.
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* ScriptFic: A variation; the story puports purports to be transcripts of Vinyl and Octavia's radio show.
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* TookALevelInJerkass: [[spoiler:Prince Blueblood]] is already a {{Jerkass}} in {{Canon}}, but in this story the character is worse than ever. [[spoiler:First, he cancels Octavia and her ensemble's performances out of spite after Vinyl mocked him on air. Then, when Vinyl talks Octavia into holding an outdoor concert anyway, he locks Beauty Brass in "the fillies' restroom," then claims to be holding her hostage, with the deed to K-COLT as her ransom. He's made out to be worse than the Diamond Dogs, who in canon, are ''slavers'' (albeit stupid ones).]]
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* TookALevelInJerkass: [[spoiler:Prince Blueblood]] is already a {{Jerkass}} in {{Canon}}, but in this story the character is worse than ever. [[spoiler:First, he cancels Octavia and her ensemble's performances out of spite after Vinyl mocked mocks him on air. Then, when Vinyl talks Octavia into holding an outdoor concert anyway, he locks Beauty Brass in "the fillies' restroom," then claims to be holding her hostage, with the deed to K-COLT as her ransom. He's made out to be worse than the Diamond Dogs, who in canon, are ''slavers'' (albeit stupid ones).]]
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* YoureInsane: Octavia says this to Vinyl at the end of the first chapter, but it's more of a resigned lament than an angry accusation.
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* TookALevelInJerkass: [[spoiler:Prince Blueblood]] is a {{Jerkass}} in {{Canon}}, but in this story the character is worse than ever. [[spoiler:First, he cancels Octavia and her ensemble's performances out of spite after Vinyl mocked him on air. Then, when Vinyl talks Octavia into holding an outdoor concert anyway, he locks Beauty Brass in "the fillies' restroom," then claims to be holding her hostage, with the deed to K-COLT as her ransom. He's made out to be worse than the Diamond Dogs, who in canon, are ''slavers'' (albeit stupid ones).]]
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* TookALevelInJerkass: [[spoiler:Prince Blueblood]] is already a {{Jerkass}} in {{Canon}}, but in this story the character is worse than ever. [[spoiler:First, he cancels Octavia and her ensemble's performances out of spite after Vinyl mocked him on air. Then, when Vinyl talks Octavia into holding an outdoor concert anyway, he locks Beauty Brass in "the fillies' restroom," then claims to be holding her hostage, with the deed to K-COLT as her ransom. He's made out to be worse than the Diamond Dogs, who in canon, are ''slavers'' (albeit stupid ones).]]
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In this story, Vinyl is a CloudCuckoolander and Octavia is the [[OnlySaneMan Only Sane Pony]]. [[HilarityEnsues Hilarity]] (and some shipping) ensues.
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In this story, Vinyl is a CloudCuckoolander JerkWithAHeartOfGold and Octavia is the [[OnlySaneMan Only Sane Pony]]. [[HilarityEnsues Hilarity]] (and some shipping) ensues.
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The story is complete, but a ToBeContinued at the end of the last chapter promises a sequel which will be known as "Seaspn 2".
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The story is complete, but a ToBeContinued at the end of the last chapter promises a sequel which will be known as "Seaspn "Season 2".
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(Page needs more love)
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* TookALevelInJerkass: [[spoiler:Prince Blueblood]] is a {{Jerkass}} in {{Canon}}, but in this story the character is worse than ever. [[spoiler:First, he cancels Octavia and her ensemble's performances out of spite after Vinyl mocked him on air. Then, when Vinyl talks Octavia into holding an outdoor concert anyway, he locks Beauty Brass in "the fillies' restroom," then claims to be holding her hostage, with the deed to K-COLT as her ransom. He's made out to be worse than the Diamond Dogs, who in canon, are ''slavers'' (albeit stupid ones).]]
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* TookALevelInJerkass: [[spoiler:Prince Blueblood]] is a {{Jerkass}} in {{Canon}}, but in this story the character is worse than ever. [[spoiler:He [[spoiler:First, he cancels Octavia and her ensemble's performances out of spite after Vinyl mocked him on air. Then, when Vinyl talks Octavia into holding an outdoor concert anyway, he locks Beauty Brass in "the fillies' restroom", restroom," then claims to be holding her hostage, with the deed to K-COLT as her ransom.]]
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* HeyItsThatVoice: In the AudioAdaptation, Celestia is voiced by... [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TkpRUhdVNmU Luna]].
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** The Cutie Mark Crusaders [[spoiler: and Prince Blueblood]] in Chapter 3
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** The Cutie Mark Crusaders Crusaders, the Diamond Dogs, and [[spoiler: and Prince Blueblood]] in Chapter 3
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* DidNotThinkThisThrough: Little Vinyl had a habit of [[KleptomaniacHero swiping]] any musical instrument that caught her eye during her quest to obtain her cutie mark. When she found one that she absolutely loved, she decided to invite everyone to her concert performance, including that instrument's rightful owner, ''the local sheriff''.
** [[spoiler: Prince Blueblood, who doesn't see any problems with outlining his [[SarcasmMode brilliant]] plot to get K-COLT off the air in front of a huge, increasingly angry audience.]]
** [[spoiler: Prince Blueblood, who doesn't see any problems with outlining his [[SarcasmMode brilliant]] plot to get K-COLT off the air in front of a huge, increasingly angry audience.]]
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* QuintessentialBritishGentleman: This is how Frédéric, the pianist in Octavia's ensembles, comes across.
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* QuintessentialBritishGentleman: This is how Frédéric, the pianist in Octavia's ensembles, ensemble, comes across.
