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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9427112/1/The-Tale-of-Nagato-Uzumaki The Tale of Nagato Uzumaki]]'' by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/1389929/YAXON YAXON]] is a ''Manga/{{Naruto}}'' story of [[ForWantOfANail what would have happened if]], after training with Jiraiya for two years, Nagato, Yahiko and Konan decided to follow their sensei back to Konoha instead of staying in Ame and trying to overthrown Hanzo on their own. Naturally, their presence in Konoha causes many events to take different turns from canon, ending in a completely different story.

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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9427112/1/The-Tale-of-Nagato-Uzumaki The Tale of Nagato Uzumaki]]'' by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/1389929/YAXON YAXON]] is a ''Manga/{{Naruto}}'' story of [[ForWantOfANail what would have happened if]], WhatIf, after training with Jiraiya for two years, Nagato, Yahiko and Konan decided to follow their sensei back to Konoha instead of staying in Ame and trying to overthrown overthrow Hanzo on their own. Naturally, their presence in Konoha causes many events to take different turns from canon, ending resulting in a completely different story.
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** In canon, Tobi/Obito and Konan had a particularly hostile relationship even when they were colleagues in the Akatsuki, before becoming outright enemies once the latter defected. Here, Konan ends up befriending the young Obito, becoming an older sister figure to him.
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** Despite not spending too much time in Konoha, [[spoiler: Karin]] considers it to be her home because she has actual family there in the form of Nagato, his kids, and Naruto. It also helps that she is treated as a person instead of an asset by them. In canon, she and Naruto hardly interact and she and Nagato don't likely even know each other.

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** Despite not spending too much time in Konoha, [[spoiler: Karin]] [[spoiler:Karin]] considers it to be her home because she has actual family there in the form of Nagato, his kids, and Naruto. It also helps that she is treated as a person instead of an asset by them. In canon, she and Naruto hardly interact and she and Nagato don't likely even know each other.



** Obito serves as Naruto's mentor instead being an enemy. In addition, he isn't Madara's apprentice in this fic, [[spoiler: Shisui]] is.

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** Obito serves as Naruto's mentor instead of being an enemy. In addition, he isn't Madara's apprentice in this fic, [[spoiler: Shisui]] [[spoiler:Shisui]] is.



* TheChainsOfCommand: It takes no time for [[spoiler: Nagato]] to see that being Hokage is an incredibly demanding and taxing job.

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* TheChainsOfCommand: It takes no time for [[spoiler: Nagato]] [[spoiler:Nagato]] to see that being Hokage is an incredibly demanding and taxing job.



** Later, Rin also becomes this to Naruto, especially after [[spoiler: she becomes the jinchuuriki of the Three-Tails.]]

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** Later, Rin also becomes this to Naruto, especially after [[spoiler: she [[spoiler:she becomes the jinchuuriki of the Three-Tails.]]



* DiesDifferentlyInAdaptation: [[spoiler: Instead of committing suicide, Danzo is killed by Nagato when the latter finds all the extreme, and perhaps illegal, acts he did in the name of Konoha]].

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* DiesDifferentlyInAdaptation: [[spoiler: Instead [[spoiler:Instead of committing suicide, Danzo is killed by Nagato when the latter finds all the extreme, and perhaps illegal, acts he did in the name of Konoha]].



** The Uchiha Clan is spared from their genocidal fate because [[spoiler: Nagato kills Danzō before the latter can give Itachi the order]].

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** The Uchiha Clan is spared from their genocidal fate because [[spoiler: Nagato [[spoiler:Nagato kills Danzō before the latter can give Itachi the order]].



* YouAreInCommandNow: After Minato's death, [[spoiler: Nagato]] reluctantly decides to honor Minato's last wishes and becomes the Fifth Hokage.

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* YouAreInCommandNow: After Minato's death, [[spoiler: Nagato]] [[spoiler:Nagato]] reluctantly decides to honor Minato's last wishes and becomes the Fifth Hokage.

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** Sakura is handled to deal with the shinobi world due to being placed in Kurenai’s team and the jonin taking a more hands on approach with her training.

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** Sakura is handled to deal with the shinobi world due to being placed in Kurenai’s Kurenai's team and the jonin taking a more hands on approach with her training.



* AdaptationalNameChange: Due to the nail, the organization tasked in carrying out Madara’s plans is simply called Moon’s Eye.

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* AdaptationalNameChange: Due to the nail, the organization tasked in carrying out Madara’s Madara's plans is simply called Moon’s Moon's Eye.



** Haku and Zabuza are not only villainous here, but are also members of the Moon’s Eye (the organization tasked in carrying Madara’s plans in this fic).

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** Haku and Zabuza are not only villainous here, but are also members of the Moon’s Moon's Eye (the organization tasked in carrying Madara’s Madara's plans in this fic).



-->'''Shikamaru''': I'm starting to like this guy.
-->'''Kakashi''': I think this is the start of a beautiful friendship.

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-->'''Shikamaru''': -->'''Shikamaru:''' I'm starting to like this guy.
-->'''Kakashi''':
guy.\\
'''Kakashi:'''
I think this is the start of a beautiful friendship.



* OriginalCharacter: Mostly subverted. Some characters may appear to be [=OCs=], but they are actually very minor canon characters (though some of them are anime-only characters), such as [[http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Ajisai Ajisai]], [[http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Kyūsuke Kyūsuke]] or [[http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Izumi Izumi Uchiha]]. The author has claimed to greatly dislike [=OCs=], and none will be featured in the story if it can be avoided. The only notable exceptions are Nagato and Konan’s children.

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* OriginalCharacter: Mostly subverted. Some characters may appear to be [=OCs=], but they are actually very minor canon characters (though some of them are anime-only characters), such as [[http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Ajisai Ajisai]], [[http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Kyūsuke Kyūsuke]] or [[http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Izumi Izumi Uchiha]]. The author has claimed to greatly dislike [=OCs=], and none will be featured in the story if it can be avoided. The only notable exceptions are Nagato and Konan’s Konan's children.



** Because of the fic’s premise, Yahiko doesn’t die.
** Rin isn’t forced to end her life after becoming the Sanbi Jinchuriki.
** Sakumo isn’t DrivenToSuicide in story.
** Hizashi doesn’t sacrifice his life to save Hiashi’s since Yahiko is the one who killed Kumo’s Head Ninja.

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** Because of the fic’s fic's premise, Yahiko doesn’t doesn't die.
** Rin isn’t isn't forced to end her life after becoming the Sanbi Jinchuriki.
** Sakumo isn’t DrivenToSuicide in story.
isn't DrivenToSuicide.
** Hizashi doesn’t doesn't sacrifice his life to save Hiashi’s Hiashi's since Yahiko is the one who killed Kumo’s Kumo's Head Ninja.



* TheStationsOfTheCanon: Averted. Mizuki is deal with in a smilar but still diferent way than in canon, the Wave Arc is entirely ignored (thanks to Gatou being murdered by Zabuza and Kakuzu long before Tazuna hires Konoha for help) , and thus Team 7's first C-rank mission is something different (albeit it's also an escort job) and it's done alongside Team Gai.

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* TheStationsOfTheCanon: Averted. Mizuki is deal with in a smilar but still diferent way than in canon, the Wave Arc is entirely ignored (thanks to Gatou being murdered by Zabuza and Kakuzu long before Tazuna hires Konoha for help) , help), and thus Team 7's first C-rank mission is something different (albeit it's also an escort job) and it's done alongside Team Gai.Gai.
* TeamMemberInTheAdaptation: In this fic, Team 7 is made up of Naruto, Shikamaru, and Hinata; Team 8 is made up of Sakura, Choji, and Shino; and Team 10 is made up of Sasuke, Ino, and Kiba.



* YouAreInCommandNow: After Minato's death, [[spoiler: Nagato]] reluctantly decides to honor Minato's last wishes and becomes the Fifth Hokage.

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* YouAreInCommandNow: After Minato's death, [[spoiler: Nagato]] reluctantly decides to honor Minato's last wishes and becomes the Fifth Hokage.Hokage.
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* AbledInTheAdaptation: The circumstances in which Nagato loses the ability to use his legs never happens and is not bound to a wheelchair and less dependent on using the Six Paths of Pain as representatives.
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** Due to not dying after having Isobu sealed inside her and having the seal properly managed, Rin is a lot more stronger, especially taking into account that Isobu is willing to help her.

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** Due to not dying after having Isobu sealed inside her and having the seal properly managed, Rin is a lot more stronger, especially taking into account that Isobu is willing to help her.
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* AdaptationalDeviation: It's mentioned that Kakashi's Sharingan in this story comes from Kagami, not Obito.
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* AdaptationalJobChange: After the Kyūbi attack and due to Yahiko not being killed off, [[spoiler:Nagato becomes the Fifth Hokage after Minato died]].
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* OriginalCharacter: Subverted. Some characters may appear to be [=OCs=], but they are actually very minor canon characters (though some of them are anime-only characters), such as [[http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Ajisai Ajisai]], [[http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Kyūsuke Kyūsuke]] or [[http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Izumi Izumi Uchiha]]. The author has claimed to greatly dislike [=OCs=], and none will be featured in the story if it can be avoided.

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* OriginalCharacter: Subverted.Mostly subverted. Some characters may appear to be [=OCs=], but they are actually very minor canon characters (though some of them are anime-only characters), such as [[http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Ajisai Ajisai]], [[http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Kyūsuke Kyūsuke]] or [[http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Izumi Izumi Uchiha]]. The author has claimed to greatly dislike [=OCs=], and none will be featured in the story if it can be avoided. The only notable exceptions are Nagato and Konan’s children.

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* AdaptationalBadass:
** Due to not dying after having Isobu sealed inside her and having the seal properly managed, Rin is a lot more stronger, especially taking into account that Isobu is willing to help her.
** Naruto has been properly trained before graduation due to having family and role models who are willing to help him.
** Sakura is handled to deal with the shinobi world due to being placed in Kurenai’s team and the jonin taking a more hands on approach with her training.



* AdaptationalNiceGuy: [[spoiler: Because of the changes Nagato brought as the Godaime]], both Kabuto and Sasuke are genuinely good people.

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* AdaptationalNiceGuy: [[spoiler: Because [[spoiler:Because of the changes Nagato brought as the Godaime]], both Kabuto and Sasuke are genuinely good people.
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** Haku and Zabuza are not only villainous here, but are also members of the Moon’s Eye (the organization tasked in carrying Madara’s plans in this fic.

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** Haku and Zabuza are not only villainous here, but are also members of the Moon’s Eye (the organization tasked in carrying Madara’s plans in this fic.fic).

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* AdaptationalVillainy: [[spoiler:Shusui]] takes Obito’s place as Madara’s apprentice and heir to the Moon’s Eye plan.
* AdaptationalWimp:

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* AdaptationalVillainy: [[spoiler:Shusui]] takes Obito’s place as Madara’s apprentice AdaptationalVillainy:
** Haku
and heir to Zabuza are not only villainous here, but are also members of the Moon’s Eye (the organization tasked in carrying Madara’s plans in this fic.
** Due to the nail, [[spoiler:Shisui]] is the Uchiha Madara chose to carry his name and
plan.
* AdaptationalWimp: *AdaptationalWimp:



* AdaptationalVillainy:
** Haku and Zabuza are not only villainous here, but are also members of the Moon’s Eye (the organization tasked in carrying Madara’s plans in this fic.
** Due to the nail, [[spoiler:Shisui]] is the Uchiha Madara chose to carry his name and plan.
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* AdaptationalVillainy:
** Haku and Zabuza are not only villainous here, but are also members of the Moon’s Eye (the organization tasked in carrying Madara’s plans in this fic.
** Due to the nail, [[spoiler:Shisui]] is the Uchiha Madara chose to carry his name and plan.
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** Sakumo isn’t DrivenToSuicide in story.
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* AdaptationalNameChange: Due to the nail, the organization tasked in carrying out Madara’s plans is simply called Moon’s Eye.


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* AdaptationalVillainy: [[spoiler:Shusui]] takes Obito’s place as Madara’s apprentice and heir to the Moon’s Eye plan.
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** The Akatsuki as an organization remains true to its goal of peace and is uncorrupted by outsiders.
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* AgeLift: Kakashi roughly shares his age with Obito her.

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* AgeLift: Kakashi roughly shares his age with Obito her.here.
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* AgeLift: Kakashi roughly shares his age with Obito her.
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** The Uchiha Clan is spared from their genocidal fate because [[spoiler: Nagato killed Danzō before the latter can give Itachi the order]].

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** The Uchiha Clan is spared from their genocidal fate because [[spoiler: Nagato killed kills Danzō before the latter can give Itachi the order]].
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* DiesDifferentlyByAdaptation: [[spoiler: Instead of committing suicide, Danzo is killed by Nagato when the latter finds all the extreme, and perhaps illegal, acts he did in the name of Konoha]].

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* DiesDifferentlyByAdaptation: DiesDifferentlyInAdaptation: [[spoiler: Instead of committing suicide, Danzo is killed by Nagato when the latter finds all the extreme, and perhaps illegal, acts he did in the name of Konoha]].
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* DiesDifferentlyByAdaptation: [[spoiler: Instead of committing suicide, Danzo is killed by Nagato when the latter finds all the extreme, and perhaps illegal, acts he did in the name of Konoha]].
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** The Uchiha Clan Massacre doesn’t happen because [[spoiler: Nagato killed Danzō before the latter can give Itachi the order]].

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** The Uchiha Clan Massacre doesn’t happen is spared from their genocidal fate because [[spoiler: Nagato killed Danzō before the latter can give Itachi the order]].
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* AdaptationalNiceGuy: [[spoiler: Because of the changes Nagato brought as the Godaime]], both Kabuto and Sasuke never started their descent into villainy and are genuinely good people.

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* AdaptationalNiceGuy: [[spoiler: Because of the changes Nagato brought as the Godaime]], both Kabuto and Sasuke never started their descent into villainy and are genuinely good people.



** Despite not spending too much time in Konoha, [[spoiler: Karin]] considers it to be her home because she has actual family there in the form of Nagato, his kids, and Naruto. It also helps that she is treated as a person instead of an asset by them. In canon, she and Naruto hardly interact and she and Nagato don't likely even know each other.

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** Despite not spending too much time in Konoha, [[spoiler: Karin]] considers it to be her home because she has actual family there in the form of Nagato, his kids, and Naruto. It also helps that she is treated as a person instead of an asset by them. them. In canon, she and Naruto hardly interact and she and Nagato don't likely even know each other.
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* AdaptationalNiceGuy: [[spoiler: because of the changes Nagato brought as the Godaime]], both Kabuto and Sasuke never have any the darkness their canon counterparts have and are genuinely good people.

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* AdaptationalNiceGuy: [[spoiler: because Because of the changes Nagato brought as the Godaime]], both Kabuto and Sasuke never have any the darkness started their canon counterparts have descent into villainy and are genuinely good people.



** Despite not spending too much time in Konoha, [[spoiler: Karin]] considers it to be her home because she has actual family there in the form of Nagato, his kids, and Naruto. It also helps that she is treated as a person instead of an asset by them. In canon, she and Naruto hardly interact and she and Nagato don't likely even know each other.

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** Despite not spending too much time in Konoha, [[spoiler: Karin]] considers it to be her home because she has actual family there in the form of Nagato, his kids, and Naruto. It also helps that she is treated as a person instead of an asset by them. them. In canon, she and Naruto hardly interact and she and Nagato don't likely even know each other.
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** Despite not spending too much time in Konoha, [[spoiler: Karin]] considers it to be her home because she has actual family there in the form of Nagato, his kids, and Naruto.

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** Despite not spending too much time in Konoha, [[spoiler: Karin]] considers it to be her home because she has actual family there in the form of Nagato, his kids, and Naruto. It also helps that she is treated as a person instead of an asset by them. In canon, she and Naruto hardly interact and she and Nagato don't likely even know each other.
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** Obito serves as Naruto's mentor instead being an enemy.

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** Obito serves as Naruto's mentor instead being an enemy. In addition, he isn't Madara's apprentice in this fic, [[spoiler: Shisui]] is.
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** Nagato and Konan become a couple after the latter's relationship didn't work out.

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** Nagato and Konan become a couple after the latter's relationship with Yahiko didn't work out.
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** Minato and Kushina bond with Nagato, the latter in particular as both are Uzumakis.

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** Minato and Kushina bond with Nagato, the latter Kushina in particular as both are Uzumakis.
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** The Orphans serve as Naruto's [[ParentalSubstitutes guardians]] after Minato and Kushina die during the Kyūbi attack.

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** The Orphans serve as Naruto's [[ParentalSubstitutes [[ParentalSubstitute guardians]] after Minato and Kushina die during the Kyūbi attack.

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** Because of the above, Naruto is considered to be Nagato's nephew.

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** Because of the above, Naruto is considered to be Nagato's nephew.and Nagato form an uncle-nephew relationship.
** The Orphans serve as Naruto's [[ParentalSubstitutes guardians]] after Minato and Kushina die during the Kyūbi attack.


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** Nagato and Konan become a couple after the latter's relationship didn't work out.

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