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* GagBoobs: It takes Gammon ''five minutes'' to find a locket in MA's cleavage.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10028532/1/The-Story-of-A-Lonely-Sorceress-and-A-Cursed-Gardener The Story of A Lonely Sorceress and A Cursed Gardener]]'' is an ''Music/EvilliousChronicles'' fanfic, concerning a budding romance between Ma and Gammon Octo. It is also famous for being 'the Fanfic/MyImmortal of Evillious'.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10028532/1/The-Story-of-A-Lonely-Sorceress-and-A-Cursed-Gardener The Story of A Lonely Sorceress and A Cursed Gardener]]'' is an ''Music/EvilliousChronicles'' fanfic, concerning a budding romance between Ma and Gammon Octo. It is also famous for being 'the Fanfic/MyImmortal ''Fanfic/MyImmortal'' of Evillious'.
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* GagBoobs: UpToEleven. It takes Gammon ''five minutes'' to find a locket in MA's cleavage.
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* GagBoobs: UpToEleven. It takes Gammon ''five minutes'' to find a locket in MA's cleavage.
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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10028532/1/The-Story-of-A-Lonely-Sorceress-and-A-Cursed-Gardener The Story of A Lonely Sorceress and A Cursed Gardener]] is a fanfiction of the Franchise/EvilliousChronicles, concerning a budding romance between Ma and Gammon Octo. It is also famous for being 'the Fanfic/MyImmortal of Evillious'.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10028532/1/The-Story-of-A-Lonely-Sorceress-and-A-Cursed-Gardener The Story of A Lonely Sorceress and A Cursed
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* SophisticatedAsHell: The trial scene, which has achieved MemeticMutation due to this. It has to be seen to be believed.
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* SophisticatedAsHell: The trial scene, which has achieved MemeticMutation due to this. It has to be seen to be believed.believed.
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* BigLippedAlligatorMoment: There's an interlude in Chapter 4 about the Servants which has absolutely no bearing on the plot.
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* {{Padding}}: ''So much.''
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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10028532/1/The-Story-of-A-Lonely-Sorceress-and-A-Cursed-Gardener The Story of A Lonely Sorceress and A Cursed Gardener]] is a fanfiction of the Franchise/EvilliousChronicles. It is also famous for being 'the Fanfic/MyImmortal of Evillious'.
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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10028532/1/The-Story-of-A-Lonely-Sorceress-and-A-Cursed-Gardener The Story of A Lonely Sorceress and A Cursed Gardener]] is a fanfiction of the Franchise/EvilliousChronicles. Franchise/EvilliousChronicles, concerning a budding romance between Ma and Gammon Octo. It is also famous for being 'the Fanfic/MyImmortal of Evillious'.Evillious'.
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->'''GEAR''': Oh my god, shut the fuck up! You guys are so irritating. No one gives a fuck about the Master of the Hellish Yard or her stupid key!
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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10028532/1/The-Story-of-A-Lonely-Sorceress-and-A-Cursed-Gardener The Story of A Lonely Sorceress and A Cursed Gardener]] is a fanfiction of [[Music/{{Mothy}} the Evillious Chronicles]]. It is also famous for being 'the Fanfic/MyImmortal of Evillious'.
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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10028532/1/The-Story-of-A-Lonely-Sorceress-and-A-Cursed-Gardener The Story of A Lonely Sorceress and A Cursed Gardener]] is a fanfiction of [[Music/{{Mothy}} the Evillious Chronicles]].Franchise/EvilliousChronicles. It is also famous for being 'the Fanfic/MyImmortal of Evillious'.
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* DemotedToExtra: Waiter, Court, and Irregular.
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* DemotedToExtra: Waiter, Court, and Irregular. The master of the Court. [[OutOfCharacter Then again, that's probably a good thing.]]
* IKEAErotica: The sex scene is hysterically bad.
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* ShipperOnDeck: Everyone in the theater for MA/Gammon, apparently.
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->''"This retarded sin is just so fucking hard to find."''
-'''MA'''
[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10028532/1/The-Story-of-A-Lonely-Sorceress-and-A-Cursed-Gardener The Story of A Lonely Sorceress and A Cursed Gardener]] is a fanfiction of [[Music/{{Mothy}} the Evillious Chronicles]]. It is also famous for being 'the Fanfic/MyImmortal of Evillious'.
*AllWomenAreLustful: ''MA.''
*AudienceSurrogate: Unintentionally. Most readers will sympathize with Irregular's 'What the fuck is going on?'
* BigLippedAlligatorMoment: There's an interlude in Chapter 4 about the Servants which has absolutely no bearing on the plot.
*{{Chickification}}: MA, despite being a powerful sorceress, can't do anything against Gammon.
*ClusterFBomb: Every trial.
->'''GEAR''': Oh my god, shut the fuck up! You guys are so irritating. No one gives a fuck about the Master of the Hellish Yard or her stupid key!
*DemotedToExtra: Waiter, Court, and Irregular.
*DoubleStandardRapeFemaleOnMale: MA almost rapes Gammon. It's PlayedForLaughs.
**DoubleStandardAbuseFemaleOnMale: She also sexually harasses him.
*GagBoobs: UpToEleven. It takes Gammon ''five minutes'' to find a locket in MA's cleavage.
*GroinAttack: The female Servant does this to GEAR. [[BigLippedAlligatorMoment This scene never comes up again.]]
*HairTriggerTemper: GEAR.
*ILoveTheDead: Kiril, apparently.
*OutOfCharacter: Almost everyone, but GEAR is a special case. He goes from an EmotionlessBoy who's past the DespairEventHorizon to a LargeHam with a HairTriggerTemper.
*{{Paddding}}: ''So much.''
*RougeAnglesOfSatin: MA and Gammon wear 'oriented style clothing'.
*SerialKiller: The [[{{Narm}} Serial Killer from Hell]].
*SophisticatedAsHell: The trial scene, which has achieved MemeticMutation due to this. It has to be seen to be believed.
-'''MA'''
[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10028532/1/The-Story-of-A-Lonely-Sorceress-and-A-Cursed-Gardener The Story of A Lonely Sorceress and A Cursed Gardener]] is a fanfiction of [[Music/{{Mothy}} the Evillious Chronicles]]. It is also famous for being 'the Fanfic/MyImmortal of Evillious'.
*AllWomenAreLustful: ''MA.''
*AudienceSurrogate: Unintentionally. Most readers will sympathize with Irregular's 'What the fuck is going on?'
* BigLippedAlligatorMoment: There's an interlude in Chapter 4 about the Servants which has absolutely no bearing on the plot.
*{{Chickification}}: MA, despite being a powerful sorceress, can't do anything against Gammon.
*ClusterFBomb: Every trial.
->'''GEAR''': Oh my god, shut the fuck up! You guys are so irritating. No one gives a fuck about the Master of the Hellish Yard or her stupid key!
*DemotedToExtra: Waiter, Court, and Irregular.
*DoubleStandardRapeFemaleOnMale: MA almost rapes Gammon. It's PlayedForLaughs.
**DoubleStandardAbuseFemaleOnMale: She also sexually harasses him.
*GagBoobs: UpToEleven. It takes Gammon ''five minutes'' to find a locket in MA's cleavage.
*GroinAttack: The female Servant does this to GEAR. [[BigLippedAlligatorMoment This scene never comes up again.]]
*HairTriggerTemper: GEAR.
*ILoveTheDead: Kiril, apparently.
*OutOfCharacter: Almost everyone, but GEAR is a special case. He goes from an EmotionlessBoy who's past the DespairEventHorizon to a LargeHam with a HairTriggerTemper.
*{{Paddding}}: ''So much.''
*RougeAnglesOfSatin: MA and Gammon wear 'oriented style clothing'.
*SerialKiller: The [[{{Narm}} Serial Killer from Hell]].
*SophisticatedAsHell: The trial scene, which has achieved MemeticMutation due to this. It has to be seen to be believed.
