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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13656733/1/The-Sky-Pirate-s-Magical-Odyssey The Sky Pirate's Magical Odyssey]] is an AlternateUniverse ''WesternAnimation/TheOwlHouse'' story written by Creator/{{FoxOnPie}}, where Luz is a SkyPirate in a {{Steampunk}}-inspired world.
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** On top of that, the main targets of the sky pirates’ heist in chapter one are [[LightNovel/MyNextLifeAsAVillainessAllRoutesLeadToDoom Duchess Claes and her bisexual polyamorous harem.]]
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** On top of that, the main targets of the sky pirates’ heist in chapter one are [[LightNovel/MyNextLifeAsAVillainessAllRoutesLeadToDoom [[Literature/MyNextLifeAsAVillainessAllRoutesLeadToDoom Duchess Claes and her bisexual polyamorous harem.]]
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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13656733/1/The-Sky-Pirate-s-Magical-Odyssey The Sky Pirate's Magical Odyssey]] is an AlternateUniverse ''WesternAnimation/TheOwlHouse'' story, where Luz is a SkyPirate in a {{Steampunk}}-inspired world.
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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13656733/1/The-Sky-Pirate-s-Magical-Odyssey The Sky Pirate's Magical Odyssey]] is an AlternateUniverse ''WesternAnimation/TheOwlHouse'' story, story written by Creator/{{FoxOnPie}}, where Luz is a SkyPirate in a {{Steampunk}}-inspired world.
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Luz Noceda was a young inventor who always had her head in the clouds, even for a third-rate sky pirate. Nothing she did in her world could get people to appreciate her inventions, but maybe she'd be able to get some recognition in a world that, oddly enough, was the exact opposite of her own. Owl House with sort-of steampunk!Luz.
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!!''The Sky Pirate's Magical Odyssey'' provides examples of:
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* DeadFic: Only three chapters were posted before it stopped being updated.
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* AdaptationalVillainy: While not exactly evil, Luz being a member of [[SkyPirate the Laputas]] means that she's actively working against the government.
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* AdaptationalVillainy: While not exactly evil, Luz being a member of [[SkyPirate the Laputas]] means that she's actively working against the government.government, then again in the series Luz living with a wanted criminal and her ArchEnemy happens to be the Emporer of the Boiling Isles so perhaps not.
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* AdaptationPersonalityChange: Luz is more of an intellectual than in the show while still being a GenkiGirl, but she's also more prone to self-doubt, is more desperate for approval and camaraderie, and is shown to have something of a MoneyFetish.
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* AdaptationPersonalityChange: Luz is more of an intellectual than in the show while still being a GenkiGirl, but she's also more prone to self-doubt, is more desperate for approval and camaraderie, and is shown to have something of a MoneyFetish.MoneyFetish (not surprising, since she's a SkyPirate).
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* BizarreAlienBiology: According to Viney, witches are immune to radiation poisoning.
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* BizarreAlienBiology: According to Viney, witches are immune to radiation poisoning.poisoning, or at least are much less vulnerable to it than humans are.
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* AdaptationalAngstUpgrade: In canon, Luz was upset that people thought she was weird and her mother just wanted her to be normal. Here her crewmates including her own mother think she's a failure that just gets in the way.
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* AdaptationalIntelligence: In addition to being a GadgeteerGenius, Luz is overall more intelligent than in the show and shown to be more of a rational thinker and book learner.
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* AdaptationalIntelligence: In addition to being a GadgeteerGenius, Luz is overall more intelligent than in the show and shown to be more of a rational thinker and book learner. She’s also far more self-aware, acknowledging her major screw-ups while attempting jobs for her crew without excuses (at the cost of being highly neurotic about them) and catching herself out immediately over her projection of her resentment over being labeled a misfit onto the Conformatorium inmates she’s busting out before anyone else gets a chance to pipe up.
* CharacterTic: When Luz is stressing out, she unconsciously starts picking junk up off the ground and finagling it together into a random contraption. She doesn’t have to watch her hands or even know what she’s making to carry it through to completion.
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* {{Magitech}}: Luz wants to learn magic in the hopes that she can combine it with her technology.
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* IneffectualSympatheticVillain: Luz in chapter one, who is so notorious for always causing raids to fail that the victims of her latest heist actually express relief upon recognizing her, and condescendingly gush over her appearance and antics until some rescuers arrives.
* IResembleThatRemark: One of Duchess Claes’ paramours calls Luz “adorably clumsy.” While protesting this, she accidentally throws a smoke grenade in the face of her captain. [[DiggingYourselfDeeper Who was busy cutting himself free of the aftermath of her net launcher malfunctioning.]] She insists that was just a bad day.
* {{Magitech}}: Luz wants to learn magic in the hopes that she can combine it with hertechnology.technology and have it be the missing piece that finally makes her personal inventions stable.
* IResembleThatRemark: One of Duchess Claes’ paramours calls Luz “adorably clumsy.” While protesting this, she accidentally throws a smoke grenade in the face of her captain. [[DiggingYourselfDeeper Who was busy cutting himself free of the aftermath of her net launcher malfunctioning.]] She insists that was just a bad day.
* {{Magitech}}: Luz wants to learn magic in the hopes that she can combine it with her
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** On top of that, the main targets of the sky pirates’ heist in chapter one are [[LightNovel/MyNextLifeAsAVillainessAllRoutesLeadToDoom Duchess Claes and her bisexual polyamorous harem.]]
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* AdaptationPersonalityChange: Luz is more of an intellectual than in the show while still being a GenkiGirl, but she's also more prone to self-doubt and is more desperate for approval and camaraderie.
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* AdaptationPersonalityChange: Luz is more of an intellectual than in the show while still being a GenkiGirl, but she's also more prone to self-doubt and self-doubt, is more desperate for approval and camaraderie. camaraderie, and is shown to have something of a MoneyFetish.
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* AlternateUniverse: A {{Steampunk}}-ish one, with Luz as a SkyPirate.
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* AdaptationalEarlyAppearance: Amity, Viney, and Puddles both make appearances in the third chapter, which would be at least a day before Amity canonically appeared and weeks before Viney and Puddles would show up.
* AdaptationalIntelligence: In addition to being a GadgeteerGenius, Luz is overall more intelligent than in the show and shown to be more of a rational thinker and book learner.
* AdaptationalVillainy: While not exactly evil, Luz being a member of [[SkyPirate the Laputas]] means that she's actively working against the government.
* AdaptationDyeJob: Luz has one wash-away streak of blue hair dye in her hair. [[Series/{{Community}} Because life is dark]].
* AdaptationPersonalityChange: Luz is more of an intellectual than in the show while still being a GenkiGirl, but she's also more prone to self-doubt and is more desperate for approval and camaraderie.
* AdaptationRelationshipOverhaul: Luz and Amity are able to get along sooner than in the show because Luz doesn't do anything to annoy Amity as badly as in the show and Amity doesn't have a chance to be as big of a jerk around her.
* AlternateUniverse:A The Earth Luz hails from is a {{Steampunk}}-ish one, one with Luz as a SkyPirate.mixture of AfterTheEnd.
* AdaptationalIntelligence: In addition to being a GadgeteerGenius, Luz is overall more intelligent than in the show and shown to be more of a rational thinker and book learner.
* AdaptationalVillainy: While not exactly evil, Luz being a member of [[SkyPirate the Laputas]] means that she's actively working against the government.
* AdaptationDyeJob: Luz has one wash-away streak of blue hair dye in her hair. [[Series/{{Community}} Because life is dark]].
* AdaptationPersonalityChange: Luz is more of an intellectual than in the show while still being a GenkiGirl, but she's also more prone to self-doubt and is more desperate for approval and camaraderie.
* AdaptationRelationshipOverhaul: Luz and Amity are able to get along sooner than in the show because Luz doesn't do anything to annoy Amity as badly as in the show and Amity doesn't have a chance to be as big of a jerk around her.
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* BizarreAlienBiology: According to Viney, witches are immune to radiation poisoning.
** Chapter three implies that Hooty has genitalia. Luz, naturally, is grossed out by that.
** Chapter three implies that Hooty has genitalia. Luz, naturally, is grossed out by that.
* CovertPervert: The manga Luz reads at the library in chapter three features scantily clad girls, and Luz wonders how long she's allowed to check out books for; it's later shown that she's checked out a whole set of the manga.
** In addition, she's prone to having panic attacks when things don't go her way and exhibits OCD-like behavior through needing to tinker with random junk to calm herself down, none of which is how she acts in the show.
* DudeWheresMyRespect: Luz is aware that she causes trouble for the Laputas with her inventions, but at the same time, she wants them to at least acknowledge her efforts and not just yell at her when she does something wrong.
* EveryoneHasStandards: Eda chastises Owlbert for stealing Luz's arm because they're not supposed to take anything that people will miss.
** Amity, as annoyed as she was with Luz, didn't want to make fun of her arm.
* FlippingTheBird: Amity does this to Luz in chapter three, except that witches apparently do it by making [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sign_of_the_horns devil horns]].
* DudeWheresMyRespect: Luz is aware that she causes trouble for the Laputas with her inventions, but at the same time, she wants them to at least acknowledge her efforts and not just yell at her when she does something wrong.
* EveryoneHasStandards: Eda chastises Owlbert for stealing Luz's arm because they're not supposed to take anything that people will miss.
** Amity, as annoyed as she was with Luz, didn't want to make fun of her arm.
* FlippingTheBird: Amity does this to Luz in chapter three, except that witches apparently do it by making [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sign_of_the_horns devil horns]].
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* NotAMorningPerson: Eda, which contrasts the ''very'' early riser Luz.
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* NotAMorningPerson: Eda, which contrasts the ''very'' early riser Luz.Luz, who's been trained to get up at four AM without feeling tired in the slightest.
* ShoutOut: The story has a few of these to Creator/StudioGhibli: the crew Luz is part of is [[Anime/CastleInTheSky the Laputas]], the head ship is [[Anime/NausicaaOfTheValleyOfTheWind the Nausicaa]], and Luz tells a story of the Laputas trying to steal the [[Anime/PomPoko Pompoko diamond]].
** [[Series/{{Community}} Luz has a wash-away blue streak in her hair because "life is dark".]]
*** In chapter three, [[ItMakesSenseInContext Eda can't call up one of the organ harvesters she knows to get Luz a bile sac]] because he's recovering from a Pilates injury, Pilates being a demon who eats your genitals.
** In chapter three, Eda mentions that she once dated a human who told her that giving someone the finger meant [[WesternAnimation/RickAndMorty "peace among worlds"]].
* ShoutOut: The story has a few of these to Creator/StudioGhibli: the crew Luz is part of is [[Anime/CastleInTheSky the Laputas]], the head ship is [[Anime/NausicaaOfTheValleyOfTheWind the Nausicaa]], and Luz tells a story of the Laputas trying to steal the [[Anime/PomPoko Pompoko diamond]].
** [[Series/{{Community}} Luz has a wash-away blue streak in her hair because "life is dark".]]
*** In chapter three, [[ItMakesSenseInContext Eda can't call up one of the organ harvesters she knows to get Luz a bile sac]] because he's recovering from a Pilates injury, Pilates being a demon who eats your genitals.
** In chapter three, Eda mentions that she once dated a human who told her that giving someone the finger meant [[WesternAnimation/RickAndMorty "peace among worlds"]].
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* VillainWithGoodPublicity: Luz is this on Earth, as her being so accident-prone has caused so many operations to fail that the public sees her as a hero.
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* ArtificalLimbs: Luz in this universe has a prosthetic arm.
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* ArtificalLimbs: ArtificialLimbs: Luz in this universe has a prosthetic arm.
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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13656733/1/The-Sky-Pirate-s-Magical-Odyssey The Sky Pirate's Magical Odyssey]] is an AlternateUniverse ''WesternAnimation/TheOwlHouse'' story, where Luz is a SkyPirate in a {{Steampunk}}-inspired world.
Luz Noceda was a young inventor who always had her head in the clouds, even for a third-rate sky pirate. Nothing she did in her world could get people to appreciate her inventions, but maybe she'd be able to get some recognition in a world that, oddly enough, was the exact opposite of her own. Owl House with sort-of steampunk!Luz.
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* AlternateUniverse: A {{Steampunk}}-ish one, with Luz as a SkyPirate.
* ArtificalLimbs: Luz in this universe has a prosthetic arm.
* BunglingInventor: Luz's inventions have a habit of failing, usually explosively. Part of why she wants to learn magic in this universe is the hope that she can [[{{Magitech}} combine it with her inventions]] and move past this.
* DisabledInTheAdaptation: In this story, Luz is missing an arm, contrasting how she has all her limbs in canon.
* HandicappedBadass: Luz doesn't let her missing arm slow her down much.
* {{Magitech}}: Luz wants to learn magic in the hopes that she can combine it with her technology.
* NotAMorningPerson: Eda, which contrasts the ''very'' early riser Luz.
* SkyPirate: As the title suggests, Luz is one in this universe, if not a successful one.
* {{Steampunk}}: This version of the human world has heavy steampunk inspiration.
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Luz Noceda was a young inventor who always had her head in the clouds, even for a third-rate sky pirate. Nothing she did in her world could get people to appreciate her inventions, but maybe she'd be able to get some recognition in a world that, oddly enough, was the exact opposite of her own. Owl House with sort-of steampunk!Luz.
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* AlternateUniverse: A {{Steampunk}}-ish one, with Luz as a SkyPirate.
* ArtificalLimbs: Luz in this universe has a prosthetic arm.
* BunglingInventor: Luz's inventions have a habit of failing, usually explosively. Part of why she wants to learn magic in this universe is the hope that she can [[{{Magitech}} combine it with her inventions]] and move past this.
* DisabledInTheAdaptation: In this story, Luz is missing an arm, contrasting how she has all her limbs in canon.
* HandicappedBadass: Luz doesn't let her missing arm slow her down much.
* {{Magitech}}: Luz wants to learn magic in the hopes that she can combine it with her technology.
* NotAMorningPerson: Eda, which contrasts the ''very'' early riser Luz.
* SkyPirate: As the title suggests, Luz is one in this universe, if not a successful one.
* {{Steampunk}}: This version of the human world has heavy steampunk inspiration.
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