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* CassandraTruth: In ;;Four Times the Trouble'', Danny and Dayla try to warn Danielle and Dale about Selena being a ghost, but they don't believe them until they show them a photo of her in her true form stealing their energy.

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* CassandraTruth: In ;;Four ''Four Times the Trouble'', Danny and Dayla try to warn Danielle and Dale about Selena being a ghost, but they don't believe them until they show them a photo of her in her true form stealing their energy.

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* CassandraTruth: In ''Four Times the Trouble", Danny and Dayla try to warn Danielle and Dale about Selena being a ghost, but they don't believe them until they show them a photo of her in her true form stealing their energy.

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* CassandraTruth: In ''Four ;;Four Times the Trouble", Trouble'', Danny and Dayla try to warn Danielle and Dale about Selena being a ghost, but they don't believe them until they show them a photo of her in her true form stealing their energy.



* CoordinatedClothes: Danny and Dayla, being twins, more or less wear the same outfits throughout the first three seasons, with the only difference being their colors (red/blue for Danny, green/black for Dayla). Subverted in season four, when they get different outfits.



%%** Danny now wears a red shirt with a black jacket, darker blue jeans, and red converse shoes.
%%** Dayla has a short-sleeved purple shirt over a long-sleeved light blue shirt, with her usual black jeans, and now purple converse shoes.
%%** Sam Manson's hair has grown to shoulder-length, and she now wears a black short-sleeved shirt exposing her midriff, short purple laced fingerless gloves, black combat pants, and her favorite combat boots.
%%** Tucker still has his red beret, but now wears a yellow short-sleeved shirt with black trimmings on the sleeves, a white long-sleeved t-shirt underneath, his usual green cargo pants, and brown boots.
%%** Andrew now has white shirt with a long-sleeved red and black checkered shirt over it, light blue denim jeans, and black combat boots.
%%** Jazz cuts her hair to shoulder length, and she now wears a black short-sleeved shirt, a blue skirt with black leggings, and flat blue shoes.
%%** Valerie now has a black skirt with her usual yellow top but with an orange cardigan and white knee-high boots.
* CreepyTwins: While Danny and Dayla generally avert this, they become this in ''Control Freaks'' when they are mind-controlled by Freakshow.

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%%** Danny now wears a red shirt with a black jacket, darker blue jeans, and red converse shoes.
%%** Dayla has a short-sleeved purple shirt over a long-sleeved light blue shirt, with her usual black jeans, and now purple converse shoes.
%%** Sam Manson's hair has grown to shoulder-length, and she now wears a black short-sleeved shirt exposing her midriff, short purple laced fingerless gloves, black combat pants, and her favorite combat boots.
%%** Tucker still has his red beret, but now wears a yellow short-sleeved shirt with black trimmings on the sleeves, a white long-sleeved t-shirt underneath, his usual green cargo pants, and brown boots.
%%** Andrew now has white shirt with a long-sleeved red and black checkered shirt over it, light blue denim jeans, and black combat boots.
%%** Jazz cuts her hair to shoulder length, and she now wears a black short-sleeved shirt, a blue skirt with black leggings, and flat blue shoes.
%%** Valerie now has a black skirt with her usual yellow top but with an orange cardigan and white knee-high boots.
* CreepyTwins: While Danny and Dayla generally avert this, they become this in ''Control Freaks'' when they are mind-controlled brainwashed by Freakshow.

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* CassandraTruth: In ''Four Times the Trouble", Danny and Dayla try to warn Danielle and Dale about Selena being a ghost, but they don't believe them until they show them a photo of her in her true form stealing their energy.



* MissingMom: Valerie reveals in ''Time Trouble'' that when she was 10, mother died in a car crash.

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* MissingMom: Valerie reveals in ''Time Trouble'' that when she was 10, her mother died in a car crash.
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* AdaptedOut: ''The Fright Before Christmas'' is the only canon episode that that was never remade.
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* SensitiveArtist: As stated above, Dayla loves art and she's generally described as kind and empathetic.

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* ILied: In ''Saving Dayla'', Vlad promises to give Danny the cure for Dayla's mutation under the condition that he bring him the long-lost and dangerous Amulet of Kyba. Danny of course, manages to complete his task, but instead of honoring his end of the deal, Vlad destroys the last vial of the cure and escapes with the amulet, leaving Dayla to her doom. [[spoiler: Fortunately, Dani and Dale save the day.]]

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* ILied: In ''Saving Dayla'', Vlad promises to give Danny the cure for Dayla's mutation under the condition that he bring him the long-lost and dangerous Amulet of Kyba. Danny of course, manages to complete his task, but instead of honoring his end of the deal, Vlad destroys the last vial of the cure and escapes with the amulet, leaving dooming Dayla to her doom.fate. [[spoiler: Fortunately, Dani and Dale save the day.]]



* MeaningfulName: Andrew's last name is "Knight", and he's shown to be a noble and kind boyfriend to Dayla. She even calls him her "[[PunnyName knight in shining armor]]" at the end of ''Beauty Marked''.



* UnderstandingBoyfriend: Even before they became a couple, Andrew is shown to be nothing but patient with Dayla and accepting of her half-ghost status. He never gets mad at her, even when she wasn't very considerate towards him in ''Kindred Spirits''. When she temporarily gives up her powers in ''Phantom Planet'', he's ultimately more [[DisappointedInYou disappointed than angry]], but he doesn't invalidate her feelings of wanting to protect him and gently reminds her that her powers are a part of her.

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* UnderstandingBoyfriend: Even before they became a couple, Andrew is shown to be nothing but patient with Dayla and accepting of her half-ghost status. He never gets mad at her, even when she wasn't very considerate towards him in ''Kindred Spirits''. When she temporarily gives up her powers in ''Phantom Planet'', he's ultimately more [[DisappointedInYou disappointed than angry]], but he doesn't invalidate her feelings of wanting to protect him and gently reminds her that her powers are a part of her.
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* BigBrotherInstinct: Despite being only minutes older, Danny is nonetheless shown to be very protective of Dayla, often getting pissed if she's harmed in any way. Dayla at one point has to remind him in ''Maternal Instincts'' that she can protect herself.

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* BigBrotherInstinct: Despite being only 3 minutes older, older (as confirmed by the author), Danny is nonetheless shown to be very protective of Dayla, often getting pissed if she's harmed in any way. Dayla at one point has to remind him in ''Maternal Instincts'' that she can protect herself.
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* TomboyandGirlyGirl: Dayla is the girly girl to Sam's tomboy

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* TomboyandGirlyGirl: TomboyAndGirlyGirl: Dayla is the girly girl to Sam's tomboytomboy.

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* TomboyandGirlyGirl: Dayla is the girly girl to Sam's tomboy



* WalkingShirtlessScene: When Andrew gets brainwashed by Undergrowth in ''Urban Jungle, he is seen wearing nothing but a pair of ripped green shorts. His second outfit includes an open dark green vest.

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* WalkingShirtlessScene: When Andrew gets brainwashed by Undergrowth in ''Urban Jungle, Jungle'', he is seen wearing nothing but a pair of ripped green shorts. His second outfit includes an open dark green vest.

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* PassingTheTorch: In ''Fright Club'', after having been mayor for a year, Tucker decides to step down and give the job to deputy mayor, Johnathan Simmons. He does say he he'll run again after college, though.



* SomewhereAnEntomologistIsCrying: While trapped in the ''Hunger Games'' novel, Danny, Dayla and Mr. Lancer get chased by a swarm of hornets (tracker-jackers), but are able to lose them by jumping into a stream. Anybody who's familiar with bees and wasps (even fictional genetically engineered ones) knows that jumping into water is one of the worst things do when being attacked by a swarm as they will wait for the victim to come for air.

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* SomewhereAnEntomologistIsCrying: While trapped in the ''Hunger Games'' novel, Danny, Dayla and Mr. Lancer get chased by a swarm of hornets (tracker-jackers), but are able to lose them by jumping into a stream. Anybody who's familiar with bees and wasps (even fictional genetically engineered ones) knows that jumping into water is one of the worst things do when being attacked by a swarm as they will wait for the victim to come up for air.
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* BigBrotherInstinct: Despite being only minutes older, Danny is nonetheless shown to be rather protective of Dayla, often getting pissed if she's harmed in any way. Dayla at one point has to remind him in ''Maternal Instincts'' that she can protect herself.

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* BigBrotherInstinct: Despite being only minutes older, Danny is nonetheless shown to be rather very protective of Dayla, often getting pissed if she's harmed in any way. Dayla at one point has to remind him in ''Maternal Instincts'' that she can protect herself.



* FireIceDuo: The twins become this once they gain fire powers in ''Playing with Fire and Ice''. It's also stated that they are the very first ghosts and half-ghosts to possess two different elemental cores simultaneously. Also worth mentioning that they use both powers interchangeably instead of having one twin stick to a specific element.

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* FireIceDuo: The twins become this once they gain fire powers in ''Playing with Fire and Ice''. It's also stated that they are the very first ghosts and half-ghosts (and half-ghosts) to possess two different elemental cores simultaneously. Also worth mentioning that they use both powers interchangeably instead of rather than having one twin stick to a specific element.



* PlayingWithFire: In the season 4 chapter ''Plying with Fire and Ice'', the twins gain pyrokenetic powers, not unlike how they developed their ice powers in ''Urban Jungle''.

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* PlayingWithFire: In the season 4 chapter ''Plying ''Playing with Fire and Ice'', the twins gain pyrokenetic powers, not unlike how they developed their ice powers in ''Urban Jungle''.



* UnderstandingBoyfriend: Even before they became a couple, Andrew is shown to be nothing but patient with Dayla and accepting of her half-ghost status. He never gets mad at her, even when she wasn't very considerate towards him in ''Kindred Spirits'', and when she temporarily gives up her powers in ''Phantom Planet'', he's ultimately more [[DisappointedInYou disappointed than angry]], but he doesn't invalidate her feelings of not wanting endanger him and gently reminds her that her powers are a part of her.

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* UnderstandingBoyfriend: Even before they became a couple, Andrew is shown to be nothing but patient with Dayla and accepting of her half-ghost status. He never gets mad at her, even when she wasn't very considerate towards him in ''Kindred Spirits'', and when Spirits''. When she temporarily gives up her powers in ''Phantom Planet'', he's ultimately more [[DisappointedInYou disappointed than angry]], but he doesn't invalidate her feelings of not wanting endanger to protect him and gently reminds her that her powers are a part of her.



** The jocks at Casper High apparently have no issues with beating up girls, as Dayla has been subjected to as much physical abuse by Dash as much as Danny, and in ''Splitting Images'', she is nearly assaulted by another jock named Dylan.

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** The jocks at Casper High apparently have no issues with beating up girls, as Dayla has been subjected to as much physical abuse by Dash as much as Danny, and in ''Splitting Images'', she is nearly assaulted by another jock named Dylan.
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* RecycledPremise: The plot of ''Playing with Fire and Ice'' is more or less the same as ''Urban Jungle'', with the twins getting a new ghost power, going to the Far Frozen to master it, and using it to defeat the MonsterOfTheWeek. The only differences are that Blizzard only wanted to take over Amity Park rather than the whole world and nobody gets brainwashed.

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* RecycledPremise: RecycledScript: The plot of ''Playing with Fire and Ice'' is more or less the same as ''Urban Jungle'', with the twins getting a new ghost power, going to the Far Frozen to master it, and using it to defeat the MonsterOfTheWeek. The only differences are that Blizzard only wanted to take over Amity Park rather than the whole world and nobody gets brainwashed.

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* AdaptationalLateAppearance: Due to the author skipping over the Christmas episode, Ghostwriter does not appear in season 2, Instead, he appears in the 4th season in ''The Trouble With Books''.

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* AdaptationalLateAppearance: Due to the author skipping over the Christmas episode, Ghostwriter does not appear in season 2, 2. Instead, he appears in the 4th season in ''The Trouble With Books''.



* DeadpanSnarker: Dayla is just as quippy as her brother, and fond of exchanging witty banters during fights with ghosts.



* {{Hammerspace}}: In "Mystery Meat" when Tucker pulls out a fork and knife. Dayla actually lampshades where on Earth he got the utensils. Tucker merely shrugs.

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* {{Hammerspace}}: In "Mystery Meat" ''Mystery Meat'', when Tucker pulls out a fork and knife. Dayla actually lampshades this by asking where on Earth he got the utensils. Tucker merely shrugs.



* SleepCute: The twins have one at the end of ''Infinite Realms'' after Dayla finds out from Clockwork that she doesn't exist in another universe. Also [[DiscussedTrope Discussed]] in that chapter and in ''Mystery Meat'', when it's mentioned that Dayla would always go to Danny whenever she had nightmares when the twins were little.

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* SleepCute: The twins have one at the end of ''Infinite Realms'' after Dayla finds out from Clockwork that she doesn't exist in another universe. Also [[DiscussedTrope Discussed]] in that chapter and in ''Mystery Meat'', when it's mentioned that Dayla would always go to Danny whenever she had nightmares when the twins were little.

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* AdaptationExpansion: The fourth season really delves into Vlad's alliance with Fright Knight, as ''Saving Dayla'' reveals that after Pariah Dark's defeat, Vlad promised the former his freedom, and in return he would serve him loyally and lead his army against the Ghost Zone and Earth.

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* AdaptationExpansion: The fourth season really delves into Vlad's alliance with the Fright Knight, Knight that was only briefly hinted at in ''Reign Storm'', as ''Saving Dayla'' reveals that after Pariah Dark's defeat, Vlad promised the former Halloween spirit his freedom, and in return he would serve him loyally and lead his army against the Ghost Zone and Earth.



* AdaptationalLateAppearance: Due to the author skipping over the Christmas episode, Ghostwriter does not appear in season 2, Instead, he appears in the 4th season in ''The Trouble With Books''.



%%** Valerie now has a black skirt with her usual yellow singlet top but with an orange cardigan and white knee-high boots.

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%%** Valerie now has a black skirt with her usual yellow singlet top but with an orange cardigan and white knee-high boots.



* {{Retcon}}: Unlike in canon, Ghostwriter does not appear in season 2, due the author skipping over the Fright Before Christmas episode. Instead, he appears in the 4th season in ''The Trouble With Books''.



* SeriesContinuityError: In the flashback of ''Reflections'', the twins decide to become superheroes just hours after the portal accident, despite the fact that they don't figure out what their powers are for until ''Mystery Meat'', which takes places a month after the accident.

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* SecretSecretKeeper: Andrew ends up discovering that the twins are half-ghosts in ''The Million Dollar Ghosts'', much like Jazz in ''My Siblings' Keeper'', though he reveals his secret in the following chapter, whereas Jazz wouldn't reveal hers until ''Ultimate Enemies'' in season 2.
* SeriesContinuityError: In the flashback of ''Reflections'', the twins decide to become superheroes just hours after the portal accident, despite the fact that they don't figure out what their powers are for until ''Mystery Meat'', which takes places a month after the said accident.



* TransformationHorror: In ''Attack of the Mutant Ghosts'', Dayla becomes infected with mutant ghost animal DNA after sustaining a wound on her arm during a fight with a feline-scorpion ghost. The DNA remains dormant in her system for a few chapters until ''The Return of the Guys in White'', to which she ends up transforming into a monstrous half-human/half-ghost animal hybrid, complete with feline and scorpion claws, a tail, fangs, etc.

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* TransformationHorror: In ''Attack of the Mutant Ghosts'', Dayla becomes infected with mutant ghost animal DNA after sustaining a wound getting scratched on her arm during a fight with a by feline-scorpion ghost. The DNA remains dormant in her system for a few chapters until ''The Return of the Guys in White'', to which she ends up transforming into a monstrous half-human/half-ghost animal hybrid, complete with feline and scorpion claws, a tail, fangs, etc.


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* WalkingShirtlessScene: When Andrew gets brainwashed by Undergrowth in ''Urban Jungle, he is seen wearing nothing but a pair of ripped green shorts. His second outfit includes an open dark green vest.
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** Danny now wears a red shirt with a black jacket, darker blue jeans, and red converse shoes.
** Dayla has a short-sleeved purple shirt over a long-sleeved light blue shirt, with her usual black jeans, and now purple converse shoes.
** Sam Manson's hair has grown to shoulder-length, and she now wears a black short-sleeved shirt exposing her midriff, short purple laced fingerless gloves, black combat pants, and her favorite combat boots.
** Tucker still has his red beret, but now wears a yellow short-sleeved shirt with black trimmings on the sleeves, a white long-sleeved t-shirt underneath, his usual green cargo pants, and brown boots.
** Andrew now has white shirt with a long-sleeved red and black checkered shirt over it, light blue denim jeans, and black combat boots.
** Jazz cuts her hair to shoulder length, and she now wears a black short-sleeved shirt, a blue skirt with black leggings, and flat blue shoes.
** Valerie now has a black skirt with her usual yellow singlet top but with an orange cardigan and white knee-high boots.

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** %%** Danny now wears a red shirt with a black jacket, darker blue jeans, and red converse shoes.
** %%** Dayla has a short-sleeved purple shirt over a long-sleeved light blue shirt, with her usual black jeans, and now purple converse shoes.
** %%** Sam Manson's hair has grown to shoulder-length, and she now wears a black short-sleeved shirt exposing her midriff, short purple laced fingerless gloves, black combat pants, and her favorite combat boots.
** %%** Tucker still has his red beret, but now wears a yellow short-sleeved shirt with black trimmings on the sleeves, a white long-sleeved t-shirt underneath, his usual green cargo pants, and brown boots.
** %%** Andrew now has white shirt with a long-sleeved red and black checkered shirt over it, light blue denim jeans, and black combat boots.
** %%** Jazz cuts her hair to shoulder length, and she now wears a black short-sleeved shirt, a blue skirt with black leggings, and flat blue shoes.
** %%** Valerie now has a black skirt with her usual yellow singlet top but with an orange cardigan and white knee-high boots.
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* {{Hammerspace}}: In "Mystery Meat" when Tucker pulls out a fork and knife. Dayla actually lampshades where on Earth he got the utensils. Tucker merely shrugs.
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* BrokenPedestal: Danny initially has a huge crush on Paulina, but calls it off at the end of ''Parental Bonding'' after finding out that she had been bullying his twin sister.

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* BrokenPedestal: While it was established in canon that Danny initially has a huge begins to lose interest in Paulina in ''Memory Blank'', here he breaks off his crush on Paulina, but calls it off her at the end of ''Parental Bonding'' after finding out that she had been bullying his twin sister.

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* LaserGuidedKarma: After four seasons of causing trouble for the Phantom Twins and their family, Vlad finally gets defeated, is stripped of his ghost powers, and carted off to prison for the rest of his life.



* WholePlotReference: ''The Trouble with Books'' follows the plots of ''Literature/TreasureIsland'' and ''Literature/TheHungerGames''

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* WholePlotReference: ''The Trouble with Books'' follows the plots of ''Literature/TreasureIsland'' and ''Literature/TheHungerGames''''Literature/TheHungerGames''.

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** ''Four Times the Trouble'' has Selena Adams, AKA [[spoiler: Auriana, the Weeping Mother]], who planned to become Dani and Dale's adoptive mother so she could siphon away their energy. The fact that she ends up sparing them and giving back all of the energy she stole from her past victims despite knowing she will die without it proves that she had grown to love and care about them.

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** ''Four Times the Trouble'' has Selena Adams, AKA [[spoiler: Auriana, the Weeping Mother]], Auriana]], who planned to become Dani and Dale's adoptive mother so she could siphon away their energy. The fact that she ends up sparing them and giving back all of the energy she stole from her past victims despite knowing she will die without it proves that she had grown to love and care about them.



** Vlad is revelaed to have survived during his time in space and returns in ''A Bitter Return''.

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** Vlad is revelaed revealed to have survived during his time in space and returns in ''A Bitter Return''.



** The Guys in White, last seen in season three's ''Living Large'', return in the aptly named season four chapter, [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin ''The Return of the Guys in White'']].



* MundaneUtility: During the school's musical production of ''Theatre/{{Wicked}}'', Dayla, playing Elphaba, uses her flight ability to simulate the character floating up into the air without the use of a harness.

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* MundaneUtility: During the school's musical production of ''Theatre/{{Wicked}}'', Dayla, playing Elphaba, uses her flight ability to simulate the character floating up into in the air without the use of a harness.



* SomewhereAnEntomologistIsCrying: While trapped in the ''Hunger Games'' novel, Danny, Dayla and Mr. Lancer get chased by a swarm of hornets (tracker-jackers), but are able to lose them by jumping into a stream. Anybody who's familiar with bees and wasps (even fictional genetically engineered ones) knows that jumping into water is one of the worst things do when being attacked by a swarm as they will wait for the victim to come for air.



* WholePlotReference: ''The Trouble with Books'' follows the plots of ''Literature/TreasureIsland'' and ''Literature/TheHungerGames''



** The jocks at Casper High apparently have no issues with beating up girls, as Dayla has been punched and shoved into her locker by Dash as much as Danny, and in ''Splitting Images'', she is nearly assaulted by another jock named Dylan.

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** The jocks at Casper High apparently have no issues with beating up girls, as Dayla has been punched and shoved into her locker subjected to as much physical abuse by Dash as much as Danny, and in ''Splitting Images'', she is nearly assaulted by another jock named Dylan.
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* ClingyMacGuffin: In ''Beauty Marked'', when she is made Sam's lady-in-waiting, Dayla is forced to wear [[PowerNullifier a bracelet that cancels out her powers]], and she can't phase it off due to it being protected by ectoplasm. She does manage to cut it off, though.

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* ClingyMacGuffin: In ''Beauty Marked'', when she is made Sam's lady-in-waiting, Dayla is forced to wear [[PowerNullifier a bracelet that cancels out her powers]], and she can't phase it off due to it being protected by coated with ectoplasm. She does manage to cut it off, though.



** Danny Fenton now wore a full red short-sleeved shirt with a black jacket; his jeans were a little darker in blue and red converse shoes.
** Dayla Fenton wore a light blue long-sleeved shirt with a short-sleeved purple shirt over it, her usual black jeans, and now purple converse shoes.
** Sam Manson's hair had gotten a little longer and was now just at her shoulders, and she now wore a black short-sleeved shirt that left her midriff uncovered, short purple lace fingerless gloves, black combat pants, and her favorite combat boots.
** Tucker Foley still had his red beret, a yellow short-sleeved shirt with black trimmings on the sleeves, a white long-sleeved t-shirt underneath with also black trimmings, his usual green cargo pants, and brown boots
** Andrew Knight wore a white short-sleeved shirt with a long-sleeved red and black checkered shirt over it and left the buttons undone, light blue denim jeans, and black combat boots
** Jazz Fenton's hair was shorter and was just above her shoulders, and she now wore a black short-sleeved shirt, a blue skirt with black leggings, and flat blue shoes.
** Valerie Gray wore a black skirt with her yellow singlet top but now an orange cardigan with it and white boots that went to her knees.

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** Danny Fenton now wore wears a full red short-sleeved shirt with a black jacket; his jeans were a little jacket, darker in blue jeans, and red converse shoes.
** Dayla Fenton wore a light blue long-sleeved shirt with has a short-sleeved purple shirt over it, a long-sleeved light blue shirt, with her usual black jeans, and now purple converse shoes.
** Sam Manson's hair had gotten a little longer and was now just at her shoulders, has grown to shoulder-length, and she now wore wears a black short-sleeved shirt that left exposing her midriff uncovered, midriff, short purple lace laced fingerless gloves, black combat pants, and her favorite combat boots.
** Tucker Foley still had has his red beret, but now wears a yellow short-sleeved shirt with black trimmings on the sleeves, a white long-sleeved t-shirt underneath with also black trimmings, underneath, his usual green cargo pants, and brown boots
boots.
** Andrew Knight wore a now has white short-sleeved shirt with a long-sleeved red and black checkered shirt over it and left the buttons undone, it, light blue denim jeans, and black combat boots
boots.
** Jazz Fenton's cuts her hair was shorter and was just above her shoulders, to shoulder length, and she now wore wears a black short-sleeved shirt, a blue skirt with black leggings, and flat blue shoes.
** Valerie Gray wore now has a black skirt with her usual yellow singlet top but now with an orange cardigan with it and white boots that went to her knees.knee-high boots.
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** Danny Fenton now wore a full red short sleeved shirt with a black jacket, his jeans were a little darker in blue and red converse shoes.
** Dayla Fenton wore light blue long sleeved shirt with a short sleeved purple shirt over it, her usual black jeans and now purple converse shoes.
** Sam Manson's hair had gotten a little longer and was now just at her shoulders are and she now wore a black short sleeved shirt that left her midriff uncovered, short purple lace fingerless gloves, black combat pants and her favourite combat boots.
** Tucker Foley still had his red beret, a yellow short sleeved shirt with black trimmings on the sleeves with a white long sleeved t-shirt underneath with also black trimmings, his usual green cargo pants and brown boots
** Andrew Knight wore a white short sleeved shirt with a long sleeved red and black checkered shirt over it and left the buttons undone, light blue denim jeans and black combat boots
** Jazz Fenton's hair was shorter and was just above her shoulders and she now wore a black short sleeved shirt, a blue skirt with black leggings and flat blue shoes.

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** Danny Fenton now wore a full red short sleeved short-sleeved shirt with a black jacket, jacket; his jeans were a little darker in blue and red converse shoes.
** Dayla Fenton wore a light blue long sleeved long-sleeved shirt with a short sleeved short-sleeved purple shirt over it, her usual black jeans jeans, and now purple converse shoes.
** Sam Manson's hair had gotten a little longer and was now just at her shoulders are shoulders, and she now wore a black short sleeved short-sleeved shirt that left her midriff uncovered, short purple lace fingerless gloves, black combat pants pants, and her favourite favorite combat boots.
** Tucker Foley still had his red beret, a yellow short sleeved short-sleeved shirt with black trimmings on the sleeves with sleeves, a white long sleeved long-sleeved t-shirt underneath with also black trimmings, his usual green cargo pants pants, and brown boots
** Andrew Knight wore a white short sleeved short-sleeved shirt with a long sleeved long-sleeved red and black checkered shirt over it and left the buttons undone, light blue denim jeans jeans, and black combat boots
** Jazz Fenton's hair was shorter and was just above her shoulders shoulders, and she now wore a black short sleeved short-sleeved shirt, a blue skirt with black leggings leggings, and flat blue shoes.
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** Danny Fenton now wore a full red short sleeved shirt with a black jacket, his jeans were a little darker in blue and red converse shoes.
** Dayla Fenton wore light blue long sleeved shirt with a short sleeved purple shirt over it, her usual black jeans and now purple converse shoes.
** Sam Manson's hair had gotten a little longer and was now just at her shoulders are and she now wore a black short sleeved shirt that left her midriff uncovered, short purple lace fingerless gloves, black combat pants and her favourite combat boots.
** Tucker Foley still had his red beret, a yellow short sleeved shirt with black trimmings on the sleeves with a white long sleeved t-shirt underneath with also black trimmings, his usual green cargo pants and brown boots
** Andrew Knight wore a white short sleeved shirt with a long sleeved red and black checkered shirt over it and left the buttons undone, light blue denim jeans and black combat boots
** Jazz Fenton's hair was shorter and was just above her shoulders and she now wore a black short sleeved shirt, a blue skirt with black leggings and flat blue shoes.
** Valerie Gray wore a black skirt with her yellow singlet top but now an orange cardigan with it and white boots that went to her knees.

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* RecycledPremise: The plot of ''Playing with Fire and Ice'' is more or less the same as ''Urban Jungle'', with the twins getting a new ghost power, going to the Far Frozen to master it, and using it to defeat the MonsterOfTheWeek.
the only differences are that Blizzard only wanted to take over Amity Park rather than the whole world and nobody gets brainwashed.

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* RecycledPremise: The plot of ''Playing with Fire and Ice'' is more or less the same as ''Urban Jungle'', with the twins getting a new ghost power, going to the Far Frozen to master it, and using it to defeat the MonsterOfTheWeek. \nthe The only differences are that Blizzard only wanted to take over Amity Park rather than the whole world and nobody gets brainwashed.

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* MundaneUtility: During the school's musical production of ''Theatre/Wicked'', Dayla, playing Elphaba, uses her flight ability to simulate the character floating up into the air without the use of a harness.

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* MundaneUtility: During the school's musical production of ''Theatre/Wicked'', ''Theatre/{{Wicked}}'', Dayla, playing Elphaba, uses her flight ability to simulate the character floating up into the air without the use of a harness.



* RecycledScript: The plot of ''Playing with Fire and Ice'' is more or less the same as ''Urban Jungle'', with the twins getting a new ghost power, going to the Far Frozen to master it, and using it to defeat the MonsterOfTheWeek.

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* RecycledScript: RecycledPremise: The plot of ''Playing with Fire and Ice'' is more or less the same as ''Urban Jungle'', with the twins getting a new ghost power, going to the Far Frozen to master it, and using it to defeat the MonsterOfTheWeek.MonsterOfTheWeek.
the only differences are that Blizzard only wanted to take over Amity Park rather than the whole world and nobody gets brainwashed.
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* MundaneUtility: During the school's musical production of ''Theatre/Wicked'', Dayla (playing Elphaba) uses her flight ability to simulate the character

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* MundaneUtility: During the school's musical production of ''Theatre/Wicked'', Dayla (playing Elphaba) Dayla, playing Elphaba, uses her flight ability to simulate the character floating up into the air without the use of a harness.

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* AdaptationalNiceGuy: Mr. Lancer. While he's still a SternTeacher and favors the popular kids just like in canon, he has more notable PetTheDog moments in this fic, if some of his interactions with Dayla are anything to go by.



** In ''Musical Mayhem'', Paulina initially only pretended to be friends with Dayla to keep her and Danny distracted so that Ember could use the school's antenna to broadcast her music all over the world. However, she eventually comes to truly enjoy hanging out with her, and later proves instrumental in helping the twins take down Ember.

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** In ''Musical Mayhem'', Paulina initially only pretended to be friends with Dayla to keep her and Danny distracted so that Ember could use the school's antenna to broadcast her hypnotic music all over the world. However, she eventually comes to truly enjoy hanging out with her, and later proves instrumental in helping the twins take down Ember.



* FireIceDuo: The twins become this once they gain fire powers in ''Playing with Fire and Ice''. It's also stated that they are the very first ghosts and half-ghosts to possess both an ice and fire core at the same time. Also worth mentioning that they use both powers interchangeably instead of having one twin stick to a specific element each.

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* FireIceDuo: The twins become this once they gain fire powers in ''Playing with Fire and Ice''. It's also stated that they are the very first ghosts and half-ghosts to possess both an ice and fire core at the same time. two different elemental cores simultaneously. Also worth mentioning that they use both powers interchangeably instead of having one twin stick to a specific element each.element.



* MundaneUtility: During the school's musical production of ''Theatre/Wicked'', Dayla (playing Elphaba) uses her flight ability to simulate the character



** When the legend of the Amulet of Kyba is first told in ''A Bitter Return'', it describes Bergthora having sacrificed her life for her brother Nova who, in his despair defeated Kyba with a powerful blast. In part 1 of ''The Final Battle'', it is revealed that after she took the fatal hit, Bergthora used her last bit of strength to transfer all of her power to Nova, who then summoned every ounce of his energy to destroy Kyba for good, but at the cost of dying himself shortly afterwards due to overexpenditure of his life force.

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** When the legend of the Amulet of Kyba is first told in ''A Bitter Return'', it describes Bergthora having sacrificed her life for her brother Nova who, in his despair defeated Kyba with a powerful blast. In part 1 of ''The Final Battle'', it is revealed that after she took the fatal hit, Bergthora used her last bit of strength to transfer all of her power to Nova, who then summoned every ounce of his energy to destroy Kyba for good, but at the cost of dying himself shortly afterwards due to overexpenditure over-expenditure of his life force.



* RecycledPremise: The plot of ''Playing with Fire and Ice'' is more or less the same as ''Urban Jungle'', with the twins getting a new ghost power, going to the Far Frozen to master it, and using it to defeat the MonsterOfTheWeek.

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* RecycledPremise: RecycledScript: The plot of ''Playing with Fire and Ice'' is more or less the same as ''Urban Jungle'', with the twins getting a new ghost power, going to the Far Frozen to master it, and using it to defeat the MonsterOfTheWeek.

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* AwesomeButImpractical: In ''Driving Lessons'', a scientist from Axion Labs presents a prototype self-driving car. Lampshaded by Andrew when he asks what would be the point of learning to drive in the first place.



* TransformationHorror: In ''Attack of the Mutant Ghosts'', Dayla becomes infected with mutant ghost animal DNA after sustaining a wound on her arm protecting Andrew from a feline-scorpion ghost. The DNA remains dormant in her system for a few chapters until ''The Return of the Guys in White'', to which she ends up transforming into a monstrous half-human/half-ghost animal hybrid, complete with feline and scorpion claws, a tail, fangs, etc.

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* TransformationHorror: In ''Attack of the Mutant Ghosts'', Dayla becomes infected with mutant ghost animal DNA after sustaining a wound on her arm protecting Andrew from during a fight with a feline-scorpion ghost. The DNA remains dormant in her system for a few chapters until ''The Return of the Guys in White'', to which she ends up transforming into a monstrous half-human/half-ghost animal hybrid, complete with feline and scorpion claws, a tail, fangs, etc.
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* DisappearedDad: Andrew's father Arthur was a US naval officer who was killed in the line of duty when he was 9 years old.

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* DisappearedDad: Andrew's father Arthur was a US naval officer who was killed in the line of duty when he the former was 9 years old.



* MissingMom: Valerie reveals in ''Time Trouble'' that her mother died in a car crash when she was 10.

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* MissingMom: Valerie reveals in ''Time Trouble'' that her when she was 10, mother died in a car crash when she was 10.crash.
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** ''Four Times the Trouble'' has Selena Adams, AKA [[Auriana, the Weeping Mother]], who planned to become Dani and Dale's adoptive mother so she could siphon away their energy. The fact that she ends up sparing them and giving back all of the energy she stole from her past victims despite knowing she will die without it proves that she had grown to love and care about them.

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** ''Four Times the Trouble'' has Selena Adams, AKA [[Auriana, [[spoiler: Auriana, the Weeping Mother]], who planned to become Dani and Dale's adoptive mother so she could siphon away their energy. The fact that she ends up sparing them and giving back all of the energy she stole from her past victims despite knowing she will die without it proves that she had grown to love and care about them.

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