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* BritsLoveTea: During weekly meetings with Severus, Dumbledore has a habit of bringing out his more exotic tea selections, like rose-infused oolong -- although Severus has simple tastes and would rather have simple black tea, or even coffee.

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* LoveMartyr: Several of Lily's friends worry that she's becoming this, and she isn't able to talk them out of it for quite some time. It doesn't help that Severus really is a gruff and prickly person, sometimes even with her; she just also gets glimpses of his softer side, his strength of character, and his capacity for selflessness.

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* LoveMartyr: Several of Lily's friends worry that she's becoming this, blind to Severus' faults and throwing her own life away in a misguided attempt to save him from himself, and she isn't able to talk them out of it for quite some time. It doesn't help that Severus really is a gruff and prickly person, sometimes even with her; she just also gets glimpses of his softer side, his strength of character, and his capacity for selflessness.selflessness.
-->'''Marlene:''' Lily! You will not martyr yourself out of pity! Dating someone because you don't want him to feel discouraged is by far one of the dumbest things I've ever heard! What about you huh Lily? Don't you want someone that's actually worth you? And what about him? You going to be his girlfriend or his Parole Auror? That would be worthy of neither of you!
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* StarvingStudent: Zigzagged with Severus. Hogwarts provides abundant food for its students, but he was half-starved ''during the holidays'' and used the school year to recover. Even then, however, he has little taste -- or endocrine tolerance -- for anything rich, and is quite content to live on unsweetened porridge, brown bread, and black tea. His second time around, he makes a conscious effort to eat more protein, in part so that [[spoiler: he'll be less self-conscious on their wedding night]], but doesn't easily take to it.

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* StarvingStudent: Zigzagged with Severus. Hogwarts provides abundant food for its students, but he was half-starved ''during the holidays'' and used the school year to recover. Even then, however, he has little taste -- or endocrine tolerance -- for anything rich, and is quite content to live on a diet that might suit a regular Starving Student; unsweetened porridge, brown bread, and black tea. His second time around, he makes a conscious effort to eat more protein, in part so that [[spoiler: he'll be less self-conscious on their wedding night]], but doesn't easily take to it.
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** When Lily suggests a decoration on Severus' new robes rather than plain black, telling him he looks like a vampire, he replies that "I assure you they have [[{{Literature/Twilight}} ridiculous sparkling twits]] among their numbers as well."

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** When Lily suggests a decoration on Severus' new robes rather than plain black, telling him he looks like a vampire, he replies that "I assure you they have [[{{Literature/Twilight}} [[Literature/TheTwilightSaga ridiculous sparkling twits]] among their numbers as well."
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It is published on Website/FanFictionDotNet ([[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12369512 here]]) and Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn ([[https://archiveofourown.org/works/34943608 here]]), and was completed in December 2021.

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It is published on Website/FanFictionDotNet ([[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12369512 here]]) and Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn ([[https://archiveofourown.org/works/34943608 here]]), and was completed [[CompletedFic completed]] in December 2021.

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* ShootYourMate: The only way for Severus to convince Voldemort to take him on as a spy is to kill Lily. [[spoiler: He ultimately cuts off his own hand rather than let himself be magically compelled to do it.]]

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* ShootYourMate: The only way for Severus to convince Voldemort to take him on as a spy is to kill Lily. [[spoiler: He [[spoiler:He ultimately cuts off his own hand rather than let himself be magically compelled to do it.]]


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* TotallyTrustingLoveInterest: Lily knows that Severus is steadfastly loyal to her, so she instantly sees through [[spoiler:his pretense that she was just a fling and his offer to become a spy for Voldemort]], and realises what's really happening (ie [[spoiler:he's just stalling in hopes of creating an opening to Portkey her to safety]]). Unfortunately, since she ''isn't'' protected from mind-reading, she inadvertently gives everything away and ruins his plan, as explained by the narrator giving an ExplainExplainOhCrap.
-->She did not believe for one moment that her husband would betray her. Such a firm conviction that everything Snape had said was a lie, that he might be planning what he was planning... in that unprotected mind.
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* NonActionGuy: Dumbledore arranges for Peter Pettigrew to be moved into a noncombatant role in the Order, ostensibly due to his poor duelling performance (which is likely true), but actually because of Severus' knowledge that Peter could eventually turn traitor out of fear for his life. [[spoiler:It works; without having to regularly put his life on the line, Peter remains loyal to his friends, even through the defence of Hogwarts.]]
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* ArtificialLimbs: Dumbledore is intrigued to hear about the silver hand that Voldemort created for Peter Pettigrew in the original timeline, and would like to recreate the spell, but he suspects that part of the process involved Voldemort carving a piece from Pettigrew's soul, which Dumbledore is unwilling to do. [[spoiler:He eventually succeeds instead in creating a silver prosthetic by making a detailed study of anatomy and exactly mimicking a hand, restoring most of Severus' spellcasting ability. Lily promptly takes on the task of learning enough to be able to renew the prosthetic as needed.]]
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''The Peace Not Promised'' is a ''Literature/HarryPotter'' fanfiction by Tempest Kiro. Upon his canonical death, Severus Snape meets Albus Dumbledore in the afterlife, and is offered a chance to [[PeggySue go back to an earlier point in his life]] (shortly after the breaking of his friendship with Lily Evans), to remedy his many regrets. He accepts in hopes of keeping Lily alive; everything else, he feels, is secondary to that. However, the changes in himself and the changes he brings about once he arrives in the past have the effect of softening her anger toward him and persuading her to give him another chance.

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''The Peace Not Promised'' is a ''Literature/HarryPotter'' PeggySue fanfiction by Tempest Kiro. Upon his canonical death, Severus Snape meets Albus Dumbledore in the afterlife, and is offered a chance to [[PeggySue go back to an earlier point in his life]] (shortly after the breaking of his friendship with Lily Evans), to remedy his many regrets. He accepts in hopes of keeping Lily alive; everything else, he feels, is secondary to that. However, the changes in himself and the changes he brings about once he arrives in the past have the effect of softening her anger toward him and persuading her to give him another chance.

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* WokenUpAtAnUngodlyHour: As the Slytherin head of house, Severus is on-call all through the night, with a signal device that loudly honks to wake him up if he's needed at the castle. Lily doesn't enjoy it much, but she's proud of him and the work he's doing.



--> '''Voldemort''': You are right. She, '''was''', very beautiful.

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It is published on Website/FanfictionDotNet ([[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12369512 here]]) and Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn ([[https://archiveofourown.org/works/34943608 here]]), and was completed in December 2021.

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* PlainPalate: Severus is pleased to have plenty of food available at Hogwarts, unlike his childhood home, but he has no interest in the elves' fancy cooking, and can't tolerate much grease. He eats strictly for nutrition.
--> Dry toast and porridge was more than adequate for a morning meal. Perhaps a little egg as well, he was in desperate need of protein.
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* AffablyEvil: Upon encountering Evan Rosier on his first day in the past, Severus is reminded of how he liked Rosier for being cordial to everyone -- even those he was about to murder.

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''His life had been a mockery, so too his death it seemed. For what kind of twisted humour would force Severus Snape to relive his greatest regret? To return him to the point in his life where the only person that ever mattered in his life had already turned away.''

''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12369512 The Peace Not Promised]]'' is a ''Literature/HarryPotter'' PeggySue fanfiction by Tempest Kiro, and is completed on Website/FanfictionDotNet. Also published on Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/34943608/chapters/87019792 here]].

Upon his canonical death, Severus Snape meets Albus Dumbledore in the afterlife, and is offered a chance to go back to an earlier point in his life (shortly after the breaking of his friendship with Lily Evans), to remedy his many regrets. He accepts in hopes of keeping Lily alive; everything else, he feels, is secondary to that. However, the changes in himself and the changes he brings about once he arrives in the past have the effect of softening her anger toward him and persuading her to give him another chance.

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''His life had been a mockery, so too his death it seemed. For what kind of twisted humour would force Severus Snape to relive his greatest regret? To return him to the point in his life where the only person that ever mattered in his life had already turned away.''

''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12369512 The
''The Peace Not Promised]]'' Promised'' is a ''Literature/HarryPotter'' PeggySue fanfiction by Tempest Kiro, and is completed on Website/FanfictionDotNet. Also published on Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/34943608/chapters/87019792 here]].

Kiro. Upon his canonical death, Severus Snape meets Albus Dumbledore in the afterlife, and is offered a chance to [[PeggySue go back to an earlier point in his life life]] (shortly after the breaking of his friendship with Lily Evans), to remedy his many regrets. He accepts in hopes of keeping Lily alive; everything else, he feels, is secondary to that. However, the changes in himself and the changes he brings about once he arrives in the past have the effect of softening her anger toward him and persuading her to give him another chance.chance.

It is published on Website/FanfictionDotNet ([[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12369512 here]]) and Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn ([[https://archiveofourown.org/works/34943608 here]]), and was completed in December 2021.
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* ReformationAcknowledgment: Lily's father Martin is initially opposed to her and Severus dating, knowing that Severus comes from an abusive household, and that he has called Lily by a racial slur once when he lost his temper (but not knowing that Severus is now [[PeggySue several decades older]] and has spent that time regretting his choices), and Severus acknowledges that he has cause. However, after observing Severus over the summer holidays, seeing his dedication to keeping his word, his sincere devotion to Lily, and his respect, Martin decides that he has indeed changed.

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* ReformationAcknowledgment: ReformationAcknowledgement: Lily's father Martin is initially opposed to her and Severus dating, knowing that Severus comes from an abusive household, and that he has called Lily by a racial slur once when he lost his temper (but not knowing that Severus is now [[PeggySue several decades older]] and has spent that time regretting his choices), and Severus acknowledges that he has cause. However, after observing Severus over the summer holidays, seeing his dedication to keeping his word, his sincere devotion to Lily, and his respect, Martin decides that he has indeed changed.
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* ReformationAcknowledgment: Lily's father Martin is initially opposed to her and Severus dating, knowing that Severus comes from an abusive household, and that he has called Lily by a racial slur once when he lost his temper (but not knowing that Severus is now [[PeggySue several decades older]] and has spent that time regretting his choices), and Severus acknowledges that he has cause. However, after observing Severus over the summer holidays, seeing his dedication to keeping his word, his sincere devotion to Lily, and his respect, Martin decides that he has indeed changed.
--> ''Lily had told me you are a changed man. Something I am inclined to agree with, but I suppose that is what growing up is about. I had been so worried for my daughter when she first told me about her plans with you. But you laid them to rest with your behaviour and demeanour over the holidays. You are not the boy you once were, and you are certainly not your father.''
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* HomeworkSlave: Upon [[PeggySue arriving in his younger body]], Severus is surprised and somewhat disgusted to learn that he's been involved in completing other students' homework for them. Putting an end to it precipitates an early confrontation with Owen Mulciber, who isn't pleased about Severus stepping out of line -- but Severus still has all his adult dueling skill and is more than prepared for him.

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* HomeworkSlave: Upon [[PeggySue arriving in his younger body]], body, Severus is surprised and somewhat disgusted to learn that he's been involved in completing other students' homework for them. Putting an end to it precipitates an early confrontation with Owen Mulciber, who isn't pleased about Severus stepping out of line -- but Severus still has all his adult dueling skill and is more than prepared for him.
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* HomeworkSlave: Upon [[PeggySue arriving in his younger body]], Severus is surprised and somewhat disgusted to learn that he's been involved in completing other students' homework for them. Putting an end to it precipitates an early confrontation with Owen Mulciber, who isn't pleased about Severus stepping out of line -- but Severus still has all his adult dueling skill and is more than prepared for him.
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* ZipMeUp: Defied by Lily's father, when she asks Severus to help her into a dress for Petunia's wedding; he asks Severus to leave the room and does it himself, to Lily's grumbling.
--> '''Martin:''' You do not ask an unwed gentleman to 'do up your dress'.\\
'''Lily:''' Fine. If I tear it, I'm going in my knickers.
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* LiteralDisarming: [[spoiler:Severus cuts his own hand off to stop Voldemort from forcing him to kill Lily.]]
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* TheApprentice: Damocles Belby, inventor of the Wolfsbane Potion, offers Severus an apprenticeship upon learning of the refinements he's made to the recipe. [[spoiler:Severus is initially keen, but ultimately accepts a position teaching Defence Against the Dark Arts instead, so that he can keep leading Slytherin House.]]
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** Rita Skeeter derisively states that she's trying to talk to Severus Snape, not "the leader of the Quidditch cheer squad." Mere seconds later, [[spoiler:she finds out that the girl she just dismissed is his wife, who is quite happy to throw her rudeness back in her face.]]
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* LuredIntoATrap: Dumbledore and Severus plan carefully to draw out and defeat [[spoiler:the basilisk]], pretending that Dumbledore has left and that they suspect nothing.
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* DistractedByTheSexy: Severus has strict rules about physical contact in the lab, but Lily is a bit careless about them at times, leading to an AlmostKiss -- with ExplosiveResults, as Severus lost track of his brewing.
--> '''Lily''': What happened?\\
'''Severus''': … I wasn't watching the time.
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* ExplosiveResults: Lily visits Severus' lab and they share an AlmostKiss -- until he realises that he's lost track of the time, and pushes her to the ground just before the cauldron explodes.

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* ExplosiveResults: Lily visits Severus' lab and they share an AlmostKiss -- until he realises that he's [[DistractedByTheSexy lost track of the time, his brewing]], and pushes her to the ground just before the cauldron explodes.

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** Turned UpToEleven with Sirius Black, who has slept with most of the school and has a steady casual relationship with a girl for hookups between relationships.

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* WouldYouLikeToHearHowTheyDied: Voldemort used legilimency to implant his own memories of killing Lily in Snape's mind. The really messed up part is that Voldemort intended it to be a "gift" for being a loyal servant.

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* WouldYouLikeToHearHowTheyDied: In the first timeline, Voldemort used legilimency to implant his own memories of killing Lily in Snape's mind. The really messed up part is that Voldemort intended it to be a "gift" for being a loyal servant.



** Dumbledore tries to be encouraging to his retiring Divination teacher, whose Sight has apparently been mixing up the old and new timelines ever since Severus returned, and who consequently believes he's losing it.

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* ActionGirl: Lily doesn't have Severus' lifetime of experience, nor does she have serious combat instincts, but she can take care of herself. The first time she's seen clashing with Slytherin bullies, she humiliates Mulciber badly enough to cement his loss of status in the house. She tries to keep herself safe, but can't resist going out to make a difference [[spoiler:during the Battle of Hogwarts, such as distracting Bellatrix Lestrange from attacking the wounded in the Great Hall, thus saving many lives. She's eventually the one to kill Tom Riddle, stabbing him with the Sword of Gryffindor after his Horcruxes are destroyed.]]

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* ActionGirl: Lily doesn't have Severus' lifetime of experience, nor does she have serious combat instincts, but she can take care of herself. herself.
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eventually the one to kill [[spoiler:kills Tom Riddle, stabbing him with the Sword of Gryffindor after his Horcruxes are destroyed.]]

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