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* WhatTheHellHero: Rameses gets slapped and royally chewed out by Rei after his use of a DangerousForbiddenTechnique to fight off Mistress 9, as he knew full well what it would do to him when he used it, knows better than to draw on and use that much magical power, and had others present who were powerful enough to deal with her. He explains why he used it and is unrepentant about it, but he accepts the order from Asuna to never use that technique again as well as her [[DraggedIntoDrag punishment]].
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** Dowmplayed with current Earth firearms. Guns do work, but require either applications of MoreDakka or are overpowered, which limits how useful they can be due to the fighting happening in Tokyo. Silver Millennium-Era firearms are more effective, able to kill weaker Youma in one shot and cause damage to stronger ones, but [[TooAwesomeToUse there is only one]].

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** Dowmplayed Downplayed with current Earth firearms. Guns do work, but require either applications of MoreDakka [[MoreDakka a lot of bullets]] or are overpowered, which limits and thus dangerous to use in a crowded urban environment, limiting how useful they can be due to the fighting happening in Tokyo. Silver Millennium-Era firearms are more effective, able to kill weaker Youma in one shot and cause damage to stronger ones, but [[TooAwesomeToUse there is only one]].

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* [[FantasyCounterpartCulture Fantasy Counterpart Language]]: The Silver Millennium had numerous languages, each with counterparts, often extinct languages, in the real world.
** Mercury: Ienni - Neshi (Hittite)
** Venus: Emerin - Akkadian (Assyrian)
** Earth: Sumerian
** Mars: Graelic - Greek
** Jupiter: Alvarin - Icelandic
** Uranus: Rakhma - Ancient Egyptian
** Neptune: Furenni - Ainu
* FasterThanLightTravel: Played straight with the Senshi teleportation, so long as they have been to a location before or already have a strong connection to it. Averted with magitech teleportaiton, though the teleport may ''seem'' instantaneous to those being teleported.

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* [[FantasyCounterpartCulture Fantasy Counterpart Language]]: The Silver Millennium had numerous languages, each with counterparts, often extinct languages, in the real world.
** Mercury: Ienni - Neshi (Hittite)
** Venus: Emerin - Akkadian (Assyrian)
** Earth: Sumerian
** Mars: Graelic - Greek
** Jupiter: Alvarin - Icelandic
** Uranus: Rakhma - Ancient Egyptian
** Neptune: Furenni - Ainu
* FasterThanLightTravel: Played straight with the Senshi teleportation, so long as they have been to a location before or already have a strong connection to it. it and it isn't too far away. Averted with magitech teleportaiton, teleportation, though the teleport may ''seem'' instantaneous to those being teleported.
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** Played with. Most firearms on Earth really ''are'' worthless against Youma, and the ones that might work have too much a risk of causing collateral damage in the process. Silver Millennium-Era firearms, on the other hand, are effective against weaker Youma, but aren't used due to the fact that there is only one available, and its owner is not going to give it up to anyone who is not specifically trained in its use for their [[UsefulNotes/GunSafety their own safety and the safety of others]].
** Rameses, the owner, also only used it once and doesn't do so again due to the fact that there is too much risk of bystanders getting caught in the crossfire.

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** Played with. Most firearms on Dowmplayed with current Earth really ''are'' worthless against Youma, and firearms. Guns do work, but require either applications of MoreDakka or are overpowered, which limits how useful they can be due to the ones that might work have too much a risk of causing collateral damage fighting happening in the process. Tokyo. Silver Millennium-Era firearms, on the other hand, firearms are effective against more effective, able to kill weaker Youma, Youma in one shot and cause damage to stronger ones, but aren't used due to the fact that [[TooAwesomeToUse there is only one available, and its owner is not going to give it up to anyone who is not specifically trained in its use for their [[UsefulNotes/GunSafety their own safety and the safety of others]].
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** Rameses, the owner, also only used it once and doesn't do so again due to the fact that there is too much risk of bystanders getting caught in the crossfire.crossfire as well as how using one would draw unwanted attention from the authorities. He also won't let anyone use it until they have been specifically trained in its use for their [[UsefulNotes/GunSafety own safety and the safety of others]], which he is not qualified to give.
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** The Guardians (Senshi) of Jupiter have traditionally been Half-Human, Half-Faerie during the Silver Millennium after the Faeries of Alfheim were made genetically compatible with humans. There have been exceptions, with one Human, and three Faeries, having held that position due to the office not being traditionally held by a single family.
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** Ironically, the very thing that made them genetically compatible with humans resulted in an increase in fertility that lasted for generations and resulted in a population rebound ''without'' necessitating them interbreeding with humans.

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* LanguageBarrier: Subverted with Rameses and Kebechet due to several characters, knowing one of the languages they are fluent in and thus able to communicate with and translate for them until they can learn Japanese.

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* LanguageBarrier: Subverted with Rameses and Kebechet due to as several characters, knowing know one of the languages (mainly Lunarian) they are fluent in and are thus able to communicate with and translate for them until they can learn Japanese.
** Downplayed with Elerin, as by the time she enters the main story, several months have passed and she is learning
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*** The [[Website/SpaceBattlesDotCom SpaceBattles]] thread has two canon sidestory arcs that occur between the events of ''Waltz of the Unseelie Court'' and ''Black Sniper''.

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*** ** The [[Website/SpaceBattlesDotCom SpaceBattles]] thread has two canon sidestory arcs that occur between the events of ''Waltz of the Unseelie Court'' and ''Black Sniper''.
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*** The Mars Sidestory, Fallout: Mars Edition, was compiled and posted on Archive of Our Own and can be found [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/24129787/chapters/58094773 here]].
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* NoodleIncident: Rameses muses on one, likening things going well until the world decides to mess with people by remembering an incident where a [[BeyondTheImpImpossible stampede of Ragout Rabbits knocked out a dragon]], scattered its hoard, and caused it to wake up in a bad mood. As he remembers, it was a [[SarcasmMode ''fun'']] month that required half the Tamers, three full militias ''and'' an entire regiment of the Royal Guard to get things back under control.

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* NoodleIncident: Rameses muses on one, likening things going well until the world decides to mess with people by remembering an incident where a [[BeyondTheImpImpossible [[BeyondTheImpossible stampede of Ragout Rabbits knocked out a dragon]], scattered its hoard, and caused it to wake up in a bad mood. As he remembers, it was a [[SarcasmMode ''fun'']] month that required half the Tamers, three full militias ''and'' an entire regiment of the Royal Guard to get things back under control.

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** During the Silver Army's exploration of the Moon to find still working spaceships, they encounter one that is almost identical to the [[Franchise/StarWars Millenium Falcon]] - which is in fact introduced with WhatAPieceOfJunk.

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** Numerous ones to Franchise/StarWars.
*** During the raid to rescue any surviving prisoners, Kirito is shown running away, saying it was a boring conversation anyway and that they have company, referencing Han's lines from when he was stalling the Imperials over the comms in the cell block.
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During the Silver Army's exploration of the Moon to find still working spaceships, they encounter one that is almost identical (if bigger in size) to the [[Franchise/StarWars Millenium Falcon]] - which is in fact introduced with WhatAPieceOfJunk.WhatAPieceOfJunk.
**** Even better, that's actually it's name. When they all [[LampshadeHanging lampshade]] it afterwards and use quotes from A New Hope, the recently recovered Oberon Nyx admits that those words are very much like how the ship's pilot talked about it.
*** During the rescue mission to save those who were captured during previous Black Moon Clan operations, the Black Moon Clan coins on to their presence. Demand responds with "Send the Droids" referencing The Phantom Menace.
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* DeliberateValuesDissonance:
** Among the Aincrad survivors, the ones who went out of the City of Beginnings and tried to beat the game, or at least adapt to the new world, have been changed by the experience and started acquiring a different and more aggressive set of values, including finding personal strength more important. They also find weird the idea of no-contact Karate.
** Having spent much of her childhood in Europe, Minako is more in line with European values than Japanese ones.
** [[spoiler:Lila Rossi]] is Italian and proud of it, and acts accordingly.
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* NoodleIncident: Rameses muses on one, likening things going well until the world decides to mess with people by remembering an incident where a [[BeyondTheImpImpossible stampede of Ragout Rabbits knocked out a dragon]], scattered its hoard, and caused it to wake up in a bad mood. As he remembers, it was a [[SarcasmMode ''fun'']] month that required half the Tamers, three full militias ''and'' an entire regiment of the Royal Guard to get things back under control.
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** Persephone, as Sailor Saturn, tends to bring this reaction out by those who know what she's capable of.

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** Persephone, as Sailor Saturn, tends to bring this reaction out by those who know what she's capable of. Rameses is frozen in fear when she heals him as he ''knows'' [[ApocalypseMaiden what her powers are capable of]].
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*** The SpaceBattles thread has two canon sidestory arcs that occur between the events of ''Waltz of the Unseelie Court'' and ''Black Sniper''.

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*** The SpaceBattles [[Website/SpaceBattlesDotCom SpaceBattles]] thread has two canon sidestory arcs that occur between the events of ''Waltz of the Unseelie Court'' and ''Black Sniper''.
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*** The SpacBattles thread has two canon sidestory arcs that occur between the events of ''Waltz of the Unseelie Court'' and ''Black Sniper''.

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*** The SpacBattles SpaceBattles thread has two canon sidestory arcs that occur between the events of ''Waltz of the Unseelie Court'' and ''Black Sniper''.

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The story itself in a similar way to the ''Progressive'' canon light novel: Kirito, going into the First Floor Labyrinth, encounters Asuna as she fights the local monsters and her own despair over being trapped in a deadly world. As the two forge deep bonds within the deadly virtual world, it becomes obvious that there is more to both of them, their friends and Aincrad that what is immediately apparent.

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The story itself begins in a similar way to the ''Progressive'' canon light novel: Kirito, going into the First Floor Labyrinth, encounters Asuna as she fights the local monsters and her own despair over being trapped in a deadly world. As the two forge deep bonds within the deadly virtual world, it becomes obvious that there is more to both of them, their friends and Aincrad that what is immediately apparent.



*** The SpacBattles thread has two canon sidestory arcs that occur between the events of ''Waltz of the Unseelie Court'' and ''Black Sniper''.



** Jadeite is also one for him [[spoiler:as he was the one that killed his parents]], to the point where he will focus his efforts on killing the Shitennou any time he appears in Kirito's sight.

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** *** Jadeite is also one for him [[spoiler:as he was the one that killed his parents]], to the point where he will focus his efforts on killing the Shitennou any time he appears in Kirito's sight.sight.
** Go ahead, threated to harm one of Rameses' family. [[SarcasmMode That worked out ''real'' well for you, didn't it]], [[ImpaledWithExtremePrejudice Zoi]][[KillItWithFire cite]]?
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** A sidestory after ''Waltz of the Unsellie Court'' has this done in Thessonia on Mars for [[spoiler:the thousands, and implied to be ''tens of thousands'' of dead initial survivors of The Fall who died when their stasis pods failed]].
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** The Droid that Kirito fights at the beginning of ''Black Sniper'' has a roar similar to the [[Franchise/{{Pokemon}} Rigi Line]].
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* AdaptationalHeroism: Kayaba is a good guy in the story and created SAO and ALO to train people up to assist the Senshi, and [[spoiler:Lila Rossi is confirmed to be a superheroine]].

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* AdaptationalHeroism: Kayaba is a good guy in the story and created SAO and ALO to train people up to assist the Senshi, and [[spoiler:Lila Rossi [[spoiler:[[WesternAnimation/MiraculousLadybug Lila Rossi]] is confirmed to be a superheroine]].
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%%* ''Book 4: Unnamed'' (In-development): Will likely cover elements of the Death Busters Arc/Sailor Moon S from Sailor Moon and Mother's Rosario from Sword Art Online.
%%* ''Book 5: Unnamed'' (In-development): The Grand Finale. Will likely cover elements of the Shadow Galactica Arc/Sailor Moon Sailor Stars from Sailor Moon and (possibly) Ordinal Scale from Sword Art Online.
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* AllThereInTheManual: The forums have a great deal of expansion on elements of the story, with explanations of magic, characters, and other bits of world building.

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* AllThereInTheManual: The forums have a great deal of expansion on elements of the story, with explanations of magic, characters, and other bits of general world building.
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* ''Book 3: Black Sniper'' (In-progress): With the Dark Kingdom having been destroyed, Kirito and Asuna think they can settle back into something that resembles a normal life. Yet when Kirito goes to investigate some suspicious deaths involving the American Game Gun Gale Online, it becomes the beginning of bigger problems for there is a reason why time travel causes headaches… [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/the-moons-flash-princess-book-three-black-sniper.807304 SpaceBattles Link]].

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* ''Book 3: Black Sniper'' (In-progress): With the Dark Kingdom having been destroyed, Kirito and Asuna think they can settle back into something that resembles a normal life. Yet when Kirito goes to investigate some suspicious deaths involving the American Game Gun Gale Online, it becomes the beginning of bigger problems for there is a reason why time travel causes headaches… [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/the-moons-flash-princess-book-three-black-sniper.807304 SpaceBattles Link]], [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/21664060 Archive of Our Own Link]].
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%%* ''Book 3: Black Sniper'' (In-development): Will be covering Phantom Bullet and Black Moon Arcs.

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%%* * ''Book 3: Black Sniper'' (In-development): Will be covering Phantom Bullet (In-progress): With the Dark Kingdom having been destroyed, Kirito and Black Moon Arcs. Asuna think they can settle back into something that resembles a normal life. Yet when Kirito goes to investigate some suspicious deaths involving the American Game Gun Gale Online, it becomes the beginning of bigger problems for there is a reason why time travel causes headaches… [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/the-moons-flash-princess-book-three-black-sniper.807304 SpaceBattles Link]].

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* HumanSubspecies: The Silver Empire had four extant subspecies of humans spread throughout it: modern humans, Neanderthals, Denisovans and [[OurElvesAreDifferent Elves]].

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* HumanSubspecies: The Silver Empire had four extant subspecies of humans spread throughout it: modern humans, Neanderthals, Denisovans it, with all of them represented on Aincrad: Humeri (''Homo sapiens''), Andallin (Neanderthals), Syveri (Denisovans) and [[OurElvesAreDifferent Elves]].
** Another subspecies, the Erenni (''Homo heidelbergensis'') that existed in the Empire's past, has died out. [[spoiler:Though due to the Elves being so very closely related to them, it is possible that the Erenni ''became'' the
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* EveryoneCanSeeIt: Just about everyone who ran into Kirito and Asuna could tell that they were sweet on each other long before they made their relationship official, to the point that they were placing bets as to when the two would get married in SAO.
** Rameses and Silica get a bit of this as well, though it is less blatantly obvious as it was with Kirito and Asuna that there is something there.
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* ''Book 2: Waltz of the Unseelie Court'' (Complete): Aincrad's Final Boss has been defeated, and the Sword Art Online veterans have earned their freedom - save for three hundred players who mysteriously remain connected. Now, the veterans, their allies and their leaders, Princess Asuna and Commander Kirito, look for the reasons why their three hundred companions remain asleep while they prepare themselves for the war against humanity's greatest enemy. [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/the-moons-flash-princess-book-2-waltz-of-the-unseelie-court.715480 SpaceBattles Link]].

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* ''Book 2: Waltz of the Unseelie Court'' (Complete): Aincrad's Final Boss has been defeated, and the Sword Art Online veterans have earned their freedom - save for three hundred players who mysteriously remain connected. Now, the veterans, their allies and their leaders, Princess Asuna and Commander Kirito, look for the reasons why their three hundred companions remain asleep while they prepare themselves for the war against humanity's greatest enemy. [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/the-moons-flash-princess-book-2-waltz-of-the-unseelie-court.715480 SpaceBattles Link]], [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/21527863/ Archive of Our Own Link]].
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-->Asuna used to be a normal girl. But that was before she was trapped in the Death Game Sword Art Online. She, along with the mysterious Beta Tester Kirito must stick together to not just clear the game but pick up the pieces of their broken lives after the game is finally beaten. And then, when they find a talking cat and are attacked, their complicated love life just gets even worse.\\
Summary of ''The Moon's Flash Princess Book 1: Surviving Aincrad''
-->Asuna used to be a normal girl. But that was before she was trapped in the Death Game Sword Art Online. Now awake, she and her husband Kirito, must figure out the mystery behind the three hundred still sleeping Players. Can they do it while also being thrust into the Shadow War that has been going on behind the scenes for the last nine years in the Real World?\\
Summary of ''The Moon's Flash Princess Book 2: Waltz of the Unseelie Court''
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* WeWillWearArmorInTheFuture: Asuna, as many of her soldiers as possible, and the Silver Millennium survivors wear armor [[spoiler:that was brought from Aincrad by Persephone]] when in combat.

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* WeWillWearArmorInTheFuture: Asuna, as many of her soldiers as possible, and the Silver Millennium survivors wear armor [[spoiler:that was brought from Aincrad by Persephone]] when in combat. They begin with reinforced kevlar armor, which is something they could potentially acquire via the black market or through contacts that their members have due to even the comparatively poor protection it offers being better than nothing.

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