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* DeathByAdaptation:
** Because the Straw Hats are much more ruthless when fighting their enemies, most tend to not survive fighting them. This list currently includes (in order of death) the entirety of the Black Cat, Kreig, and Arlong Pirates (save for [[TokenGoodTeammate Hachi]], whom Nami specifically asks be spared), the Unluckies, Wapol and his minions, Crocodile, Lassoo, Mr. 4, Miss Merry Christmas, Mr. 1, and Miss Doublefinger.
** Nezumi is hanged by the Marines after his corrupt dealings with Arlong are exposed.
** Mr. 5 is killed at Whiskey Peak by Nanashi, an agent of the Kuro Kari, a criminal organization that specializes in killing Devil Fruit users and collecting their powers for re-sale.
** Mr. 3 dies on Little Garden when Broggy and Dorry crush him for launching a sneak attack on the Straw Hats.
** Pell kills Mr. 7 and Miss Father's Day when they try to snipe Vivi and Koza to keep the fighting in the plaza going.
** Satori and Shura are killed in battle by the Straw Hats.
** Vivi kills Ohm during their clash.
** Robin kills Yama for disrespecting the Skypiean ruins.
** Hotori and Kotori are killed by the Straw Hats in battle.
** Luffy kills Enel at the end of their fight.
** Doflamingo kills Bellamy and the higher ranking member of his crew, just because Bellamy lost to Luffy.
** Because the Straw Hats are much more ruthless when fighting their enemies, most tend to not survive fighting them. This list currently includes (in order of death) the entirety of the Black Cat, Kreig, and Arlong Pirates (save for [[TokenGoodTeammate Hachi]], whom Nami specifically asks be spared), the Unluckies, Wapol and his minions, Crocodile, Lassoo, Mr. 4, Miss Merry Christmas, Mr. 1, and Miss Doublefinger.
** Nezumi is hanged by the Marines after his corrupt dealings with Arlong are exposed.
** Mr. 5 is killed at Whiskey Peak by Nanashi, an agent of the Kuro Kari, a criminal organization that specializes in killing Devil Fruit users and collecting their powers for re-sale.
** Mr. 3 dies on Little Garden when Broggy and Dorry crush him for launching a sneak attack on the Straw Hats.
** Pell kills Mr. 7 and Miss Father's Day when they try to snipe Vivi and Koza to keep the fighting in the plaza going.
** Satori and Shura are killed in battle by the Straw Hats.
** Vivi kills Ohm during their clash.
** Robin kills Yama for disrespecting the Skypiean ruins.
** Hotori and Kotori are killed by the Straw Hats in battle.
** Luffy kills Enel at the end of their fight.
** Doflamingo kills Bellamy and the higher ranking member of his crew, just because Bellamy lost to Luffy.
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* DeathByAdaptation:
** BecauseDeathByAdaptation: A lot more people die, partially because the Straw Hats and their allies are much more ruthless when fighting their enemies, most tend to not survive fighting them. This list currently includes (in order of death) the entirety of about dealing with enemies:
** East Blue Saga:
*** The Straw Hats kills off the Black Cat, Kreig, and Arlong Pirates (save for [[TokenGoodTeammate Hachi]], whom Nami specifically asks bespared), spared).
*** Nezumi is hanged by the Marines after his corrupt dealings with Arlong are exposed.
** Alabasta Saga:
*** The Straw Hats kill the Unluckies, Wapol and his minions, Crocodile, Lassoo, Mr. 4, Miss Merry Christmas, Mr. 1, and Miss Doublefinger.
** Nezumi is hanged by the Marines after his corrupt dealings with Arlong are exposed.
***** Mr. 5 is killed at Whiskey Peak by Nanashi, an agent of the Kuro Kari, a criminal organization that specializes in killing Devil Fruit users and collecting their powers for re-sale.
** *** Mr. 3 dies on Little Garden when Broggy and Dorry crush him for launching a sneak attack on the Straw Hats.
** *** Pell kills Mr. 7 and Miss Father's Day when they try to snipe Vivi and Koza to keep the fighting in the plaza going.
** Skypiea Saga:
*** Satori and Shura are killed in battle by the Straw Hats.
** *** Vivi kills Ohm during their clash.
** *** Robin kills Yama for disrespecting the Skypiean ruins.
** *** Hotori and Kotori are killed by the Straw Hats in battle.
** *** Luffy kills Enel at the end of their fight.
** *** Doflamingo kills Bellamy and the higher ranking member of his crew, just because Bellamy lost to Luffy.
** Because
** East Blue Saga:
*** The Straw Hats kills off the Black Cat, Kreig, and Arlong Pirates (save for [[TokenGoodTeammate Hachi]], whom Nami specifically asks be
*** Nezumi is hanged by the Marines after his corrupt dealings with Arlong are exposed.
** Alabasta Saga:
*** The Straw Hats kill the Unluckies, Wapol and his minions, Crocodile, Lassoo, Mr. 4, Miss Merry Christmas, Mr. 1, and Miss Doublefinger.
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** Skypiea Saga:
*** Satori and Shura are killed in battle by the Straw Hats.
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* ShoutOut: While on Skypeia, Luffy mocks Enel after the latter strikes him with a lightning bolt.
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* ShoutOut: ShoutOut:
** While on Skypeia, Luffy mocks Enel after the latter strikes him with a lightning bolt.
** While on Skypeia, Luffy mocks Enel after the latter strikes him with a lightning bolt.
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** Apparently the Pirate code is the same for all pirates no matter where they are from.
--> '''Luffy:''' "It might be old, but you all have forgotten the oldest tenet of pirates. [[Franchise/PiratesOfTheCaribbean Take what you can, give nothing back!"]]
--> '''Luffy:''' "It might be old, but you all have forgotten the oldest tenet of pirates. [[Franchise/PiratesOfTheCaribbean Take what you can, give nothing back!"]]
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* DefeatingTheUndefeatable: Luffy fought [[spoiler:Kuzan]] and, in spite of it being his toughest fight yet, managed to definitively win.
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* CurbStompCushion:
** Crocodile makes Luffy work harder than any other opponent he'd faced so far, but the battle is still pretty one-sided in Luffy's favor.
** Crocodile makes Luffy work harder than any other opponent he'd faced so far, but the battle is still pretty one-sided in Luffy's favor.
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* CurbStompCushion:
** Crocodile makes Luffy work harder than any other opponent he'd faced so far, but the battle is still pretty one-sided in Luffy's favor.CurbStompBattle:
** Crocodile makes Luffy work harder than any other opponent he'd faced so far, but the battle is still pretty one-sided in Luffy's favor.
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* CurbStompCushion: Crocodile makes Luffy work harder than any other opponent he'd faced so far, but the battle is still pretty one-sided in Luffy's favor.
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** The Foxy Pirates stand no chance against the Straw Hats when Luffy orders them to fight a normal battle.
* CuttingTheKnot: Instead of fighting the Foxy Pirates in a Davy Beck Fight, Luffy orders the Straw Hats to fight them in a normal fight, which turns out a lot better for the Straw Hats.
* CuttingTheKnot: Instead of fighting the Foxy Pirates in a Davy Beck Fight, Luffy orders the Straw Hats to fight them in a normal fight, which turns out a lot better for the Straw Hats.
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** Doflamingo kills Bellamy and the higher ranking member of his crew, just because Bellamy lost to Luffy.
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* DidntThinkThisThrough: Foxy is so sure that he can get rival captians to accept his Davy Back Fight challenge that he didn't think of a contingancy plan if another Pirate group didn't accept the challenge and decided to kick his ass instead.
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* DidntThinkThisThrough: Foxy is so sure that he can get rival captians captains to accept his Davy Back Fight challenge that he didn't think of a contingancy contingency plan if another Pirate group didn't accept the challenge and decided to kick his ass instead.
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* OhCrap: Foxy, Porche, and Hamburg have this reaction when Luffy doesn't fall for their trick and unleashes his conqueror's haki after the trio push his BerserkButtion.
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* OhCrap: Foxy, Porche, and Hamburg have this reaction when Luffy doesn't fall for their trick and unleashes his conqueror's haki after the trio push his BerserkButtion.BerserkButton.
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* OhCrap: Foxy, Porche, and Hamburg have this reaction when Luffy doesn't fall for their trick and unleashes his conqueror's haki after the trio push his BerzerkButtion.
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* OhCrap: Foxy, Porche, and Hamburg have this reaction when Luffy doesn't fall for their trick and unleashes his conqueror's haki after the trio push his BerzerkButtion.BerserkButtion.
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* OhCrap: Foxy, Porche, and Hamburg have this reaction when Luffy doesn't fall for their trick and unleashes his conqueror's haki after the trio push his BerzerkButtion.
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* DidntThinkThisThrough: Foxy is so sure that he can get rival captians to accept his Davy Back Fight challenge that he didn't think of a contingancy plan if another Pirate group didn't accept the challenge and decided to kick his ass instead.
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* PriceOnTheirHead:
** Following their victory over Arlong, Luffy's bounty is double his canon one at the same point in time at 60,000,000 berries. The rest of his crew also gets bounties. Zoro gets 25,000,000, Nami gets 16,000,000, Sanji gets 20,000,000, and Usopp gets 15,000,000.
** Following their victory over Baroque Works, Luffy's bounty is raised to 200,000,000, Zoro's is raised to 80,000,000, Nami's is raised to 32,000,000, Sanji's is raised to 45,000,000, and Usopp's is raised to 25,000,000. Of the new recruits, Chopper gets his first bounty of 18,000,000 while Mikita gets her previous bounty raised to 38,000,000.
** Following their victory over Arlong, Luffy's bounty is double his canon one at the same point in time at 60,000,000 berries. The rest of his crew also gets bounties. Zoro gets 25,000,000, Nami gets 16,000,000, Sanji gets 20,000,000, and Usopp gets 15,000,000.
** Following their victory over Baroque Works, Luffy's bounty is raised to 200,000,000, Zoro's is raised to 80,000,000, Nami's is raised to 32,000,000, Sanji's is raised to 45,000,000, and Usopp's is raised to 25,000,000. Of the new recruits, Chopper gets his first bounty of 18,000,000 while Mikita gets her previous bounty raised to 38,000,000.
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* CurbStompCushion: Crocodile makes Luffy work harder than any other opponent he'd faced so far, but the battle is still pretty one-sided in Luffy's favor.
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* CurbStompCushion: CurbStompCushion:
** Crocodile makes Luffy work harder than any other opponent he'd faced so far, but the battle is still pretty one-sided in Luffy'sfavor.favor.
** Luffy dominates Enel during their battle. Enel was unable to land any real attack on Luffy throughout their entire match and was on the backfoot the whole time.
** Crocodile makes Luffy work harder than any other opponent he'd faced so far, but the battle is still pretty one-sided in Luffy's
** Luffy dominates Enel during their battle. Enel was unable to land any real attack on Luffy throughout their entire match and was on the backfoot the whole time.
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** Luffy kills Enel at the end of their fight.
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* AdaptationalEarlyAppearance: Not a character, but an attack. Zoro debuts his Hyakuhachi Pound Ho in Skypeia, many arcs before its canon debut in Dressrosa.
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* UnderestimatingBadassery: Crocodile assumes Luffy is just another cocky rookie due to not realizing the boy has both a Logia fruit and Haki.
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* UnderestimatingBadassery: Crocodile assumes Luffy is just another cocky rookie due to not realizing the boy has both a Logia fruit and Haki.Haki.
* YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness: Enel kills his attendants and destroys his temple after Maxim is completed, declaring that Skypiea is no longer needed now that he has the means to reach the Endless Vearth.
* YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness: Enel kills his attendants and destroys his temple after Maxim is completed, declaring that Skypiea is no longer needed now that he has the means to reach the Endless Vearth.
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** Robin kills Yama for disrespecting the Skypiean ruins.
** Hotori and Kotori are killed by the Straw Hats in battle.
** Hotori and Kotori are killed by the Straw Hats in battle.
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* ForWantOfANail:
** Since Luffy had already eaten a devil fruit, the one Shanks stole is left uneaten.
** [[AbledInTheAdaptation Shanks never loses his arm]] since Luffy (along with Sabo and Ace) had already had devil fruits for over a year and knew how to fight with them, beating Higuma and his bandits by themselves.
** Crocodile has functionally zero intel on the Straw Hats due to Luffy killing the Unluckies before they even reach Whiskey Peak. As such, he doesn't realize how serious he needs to take Luffy.
** Thanks to Luffy's sheer power, the Straw Hats are able to force their way through Hina's blockade of Alabasta without Bon Clay having to act as a diversion. As such, he's able to avoid capture.
** Because they don't get into a fight with Masira, he happily leads the Straw Hats right to Jaya.
** Luffy decides to fight Bellamy in their first encounter rather than shrug it off, beating him then instead of later.
** Since Luffy had already eaten a devil fruit, the one Shanks stole is left uneaten.
** [[AbledInTheAdaptation Shanks never loses his arm]] since Luffy (along with Sabo and Ace) had already had devil fruits for over a year and knew how to fight with them, beating Higuma and his bandits by themselves.
** Crocodile has functionally zero intel on the Straw Hats due to Luffy killing the Unluckies before they even reach Whiskey Peak. As such, he doesn't realize how serious he needs to take Luffy.
** Thanks to Luffy's sheer power, the Straw Hats are able to force their way through Hina's blockade of Alabasta without Bon Clay having to act as a diversion. As such, he's able to avoid capture.
** Because they don't get into a fight with Masira, he happily leads the Straw Hats right to Jaya.
** Luffy decides to fight Bellamy in their first encounter rather than shrug it off, beating him then instead of later.
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* PointOfDivergence: Luffy, along with Ace and Sabo, getting their Devil Fruits through different means changes certain canon events:
** Since Luffy had already eaten a devil fruit, the one Shanks stole is left uneaten.
** [[AbledInTheAdaptation Shanks never loses his arm]] since Luffy (along with Sabo and Ace) had already had devil fruits for over a year and knew how to fight with them, beating Higuma and his bandits by themselves.
** Crocodile has functionally zero intel on the Straw Hats due to Luffy killing the Unluckies before they even reach Whiskey Peak. As such, he doesn't realize how serious he needs to take Luffy.
** Thanks to Luffy's sheer power, the Straw Hats are able to force their way through Hina's blockade of Alabasta without Bon Clay having to act as a diversion. As such, he's able to avoid capture.
** Because they don't get into a fight with Masira, he happily leads the Straw Hats right to Jaya.
** Luffy decides to fight Bellamy in their first encounter rather than shrug it off, beating him then instead of later.
** Since Luffy had already eaten a devil fruit, the one Shanks stole is left uneaten.
** [[AbledInTheAdaptation Shanks never loses his arm]] since Luffy (along with Sabo and Ace) had already had devil fruits for over a year and knew how to fight with them, beating Higuma and his bandits by themselves.
** Crocodile has functionally zero intel on the Straw Hats due to Luffy killing the Unluckies before they even reach Whiskey Peak. As such, he doesn't realize how serious he needs to take Luffy.
** Thanks to Luffy's sheer power, the Straw Hats are able to force their way through Hina's blockade of Alabasta without Bon Clay having to act as a diversion. As such, he's able to avoid capture.
** Because they don't get into a fight with Masira, he happily leads the Straw Hats right to Jaya.
** Luffy decides to fight Bellamy in their first encounter rather than shrug it off, beating him then instead of later.
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''The Logia Brothers'' is a ''Manga/OnePiece'' ForWantOfANail story where Luffy, Ace, and Sabo are given Logia Devil Fruits by a being known only as the Sea Devil. As a result, Garp calls in a favor from Admiral Kuzan to get the boys some basic training in their new powers so they aren't a danger to everyone around them and in hopes of making them Marines.
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''The Logia Brothers'' is a ''Manga/OnePiece'' ForWantOfANail WhatIf story where that asks the question of What if Luffy, Ace, and Sabo are were given Logia Devil Fruits by a being known only as the Sea Devil. As a result, Garp calls in a favor from Admiral Kuzan to get the boys some basic training in their new powers so they aren't a danger to everyone around them and in hopes of making them Marines.
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* GratuitousForeignLanguage: Vivi uses Arabic as Old Alabastan as a focus for [[spoiler: her Sand-Sand Fruit powers]]. It should be noted that Kairomaru did get in contact with a native speaker to keep it from being complete nonsense.
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* GratuitousForeignLanguage: Vivi uses Old Alabastan, which is displayed as Arabic as Old Alabastan here, as a focus for [[spoiler: her Sand-Sand Fruit powers]]. It should be noted that Kairomaru did get in contact with a native Arabic speaker in real life to keep it the words from being complete nonsense.
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* AffablyEvil: Nanashi of the Kuro Kari might be in the business of killing Devil Fruit users to get their fruits into circulation again, but he maintained a pleasant attitude. Once he determined Luffy's Devil Fruit wouldn't be worth the effort, he left without any hard feelings.
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* AffablyEvil: Nanashi of the Kuro Kari might be in the business of killing Devil Fruit users to get their fruits into circulation again, but he maintained maintains a genuinely pleasant attitude.attitude towards others on the job. Once he determined Luffy's Devil Fruit wouldn't be worth the effort, he left without any hard feelings.
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* AdaptationalEarlyAppearance: Not a character, but an attack. Zoro debuts his Hyakuhachi Pound Ho in Skypeia, many arcs before its canon debut in Dressrosa.
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It was written by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/431968/Kairomaru Kairomaru]] (who also wrote ''Fanfic/HarryPotterAndTheArtificerLegacy'', ''Fanfic/MagmaDragonKing'', ''Fanfic/FamiliaMythJourneyToHero'' and ''Fanfic/CollectorHeroSynthesis'') and can be found [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10369778/1/The-Logia-Brothers here]] on Website/FanFictionDotNet and [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/27372553/chapters/66890236 here]] on Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn.
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It was written by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/431968/Kairomaru Kairomaru]] (who also wrote ''Fanfic/HarryPotterAndTheArtificerLegacy'', ''Fanfic/MagmaDragonKing'', ''Fanfic/FamiliaMythJourneyToHero'' and ''Fanfic/CollectorHeroSynthesis'') Creator/{{Kairomaru}} and can be found [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10369778/1/The-Logia-Brothers here]] on Website/FanFictionDotNet and [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/27372553/chapters/66890236 here]] on Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn.
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* NoJustNoReaction: Similarly to ''Fanfic/SupernovaOnePiece'', Robin has this reaction towards Vivi when the latter says she thought that Robin joined Crocodile to be his [[DarkMistress queen]]. This time Robin even gives off some KillingIntent to it.
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[[ForgoneConclusion Unfortunately for Garp, Luffy, Ace and Sabo have plans of their own.]]
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''The Logia Brothers'' is a ''Manga/OnePiece'' ForWantOfANail story where Luffy, Ace, and Sabo are given Logia Devil Fruits by a being known only as the Sea Devil. As a result, Garp calls in a favor from Admiral Kuzan to get the boys some basic training in their new powers so they aren't a danger to everyone around them and in hopes of making them marines.
Marines.
[[ForgoneConclusion Unfortunately for Garp, Luffy, Ace and Sabo have plans of their own.]]
[[ForgoneConclusion Unfortunately for Garp, Luffy, Ace and Sabo have plans of their own.]]
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* TheDreaded: The Kuro Kari are feared by all Devil Fruit users who know of their existence, because they specialize in killing them and taking their fruits for re-sale.
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* TheDreaded: TheDreaded:
** The Akuma is this to the World Government due to his unpredictable nature of causing chaos across the seas. Any sighting of Akuma puts the Marines on high alert as Garp reported to an alarmed Sengoku about it.
** The Kuro Kari are feared by all Devil Fruit users who know of their existence, because they specialize in killing them and taking their fruits for re-sale.
** The Akuma is this to the World Government due to his unpredictable nature of causing chaos across the seas. Any sighting of Akuma puts the Marines on high alert as Garp reported to an alarmed Sengoku about it.
** The Kuro Kari are feared by all Devil Fruit users who know of their existence, because they specialize in killing them and taking their fruits for re-sale.
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* FreakinessShame: PlayedForLaughs. When Luffy, Ace and Sabo meets Aokiji as their new Logia trainer, they comment on how tall he is. Aokiji comically tells them that beautiful women won't date with him because of that if they don't knock it off.
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** Satori and Shura are killed in battle by the Straw Hats.
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-->'''Luffy:''' "[[WebVideo/DragonBallZAbridged Ha! Nice try, jackass! Next time give it your A-Game!]]"best shot!]]"
