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* AndShowItToYou: [[spoiler:Eidolon suffers this courtesy of Endbringer!Gilgamesh.]]
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Upon rereading, I realized the author was just comparing Allfather to Gilgamesh. My bad.
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* {{Retcon}}: The original version of Chapter 1.7, the bank job, had the battle between the Undersiders and the Wards interrupted by the surprise appearance of [[LightNovel/FateZero Hassan of the Hundred Faces]], who quickly incapacitates the Wards except for Abigail. The chapter ended on a cliffhanger as Abigail prepared to face him. Unfortunately, the chapter received negative reviews with many complaining that adding more Servants was completely unnecessary and the fic was in danger of JumpingTheShark. The author quickly altered the chapter to remove the Assassin and instead had Abigail confront Skitter and Tattletale.
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* {{Retcon}}: The original version of Chapter Remnants 1.7, the bank job, had the battle between the Undersiders and the Wards interrupted by the surprise appearance of [[LightNovel/FateZero Hassan of the Hundred Faces]], who quickly incapacitates the Wards except for Abigail. The chapter ended on a cliffhanger as Abigail prepared to face him. Unfortunately, the chapter received negative reviews with many complaining that adding more Servants was completely unnecessary and the fic was in danger of JumpingTheShark. The author quickly altered the chapter to remove the Assassin and instead had Abigail confront Skitter and Tattletale.
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* WhamEpisode: Chapter 2.b(lades). [[spoiler:After Simurgh was turned into the human woman Sera, she summons Archer EMIYA and explains that her new master assigned her to watch over Abigail. She asks him to help her with this and offers to free him from his contract with Alaya, from being a Counter Guardian. The two pretend to be a married couple and offer to adopt Abigail, plus they take out a few villains like Bakuda behind the scenes.]]
* WhamLine: At the end of Chapter 2.5, [[spoiler: hinting at the identity of Abby's new foster father.]]
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** Chapter Atonement 2.c(alamity). [[spoiler:Leviathan and Behemoth surface at the same time. Then Scion resurrects Allfather and turns him into the King of the Endbringers, where his powers have been massively upgraded until they are pretty much identical to Gilgamesh's Gate of Babylon.]]
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** Chapter Atonement 2.b(lades). [[spoiler:After Simurgh was turned into the human woman Sera, she summons Archer EMIYA and explains that her new master assigned her to watch over Abigail. She asks him to help her with this and offers to free him from his contract with Alaya, from being a Counter Guardian. The two pretend to be a married couple and offer to adopt Abigail, plus they take out a few villains like Bakuda behind the scenes.]]
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* AccidentalMurder: [[spoiler:Abigail kills Oni Lee when she uses a portal to send him to a cell just as he was about to throw a grenade, causing him to get caught in the explosion. She was horrified and said she didn't know that would happen.]]
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* AlternateSelf: [[spoiler:Earth Bet has a native Shirou Emiya who can create objects, but used his abilities to become a doctor.]]
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* TraumaticSuperpowerAwakening: [[spoiler:The PRT and the Wards are under the impression that Abby underwent a second trigger when Tattletale pushed her buttons during the bank job. She didn't. She just channeled more of her powers to lash out at Tattletale, who she thought was Raum, causing the latter to undergo the actual second trigger when Abby nearly hit her on the head with her giant key.]]
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* TraumaticSuperpowerAwakening: [[spoiler:The PRT and the Wards are under the impression that Abby underwent a second trigger when Tattletale pushed her buttons during the bank job. She didn't. She just channeled more of her powers to lash out at Tattletale, who she thought was Raum, causing the latter to undergo the actual second trigger when Abby nearly hit her on the head with her giant key. Tattletale gained the new ability to create split personalities at will to help ease her mental burdens and can merge her personalities at will too.]]
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[[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/the-little-foreigner-worm-x-fate-grand-order.75127/ Sufficient Velocity link]]
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-->“I’ll take Abby back now, and we can discuss future meetings over the phone. Are you okay with driving home by yourself, [[spoiler:Mrs. Emiya?]]”
-->“I’ll take Abby back now, and we can discuss future meetings over the phone. Are you okay with driving home by yourself, [[spoiler:Mrs. Emiya?]]”
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* CivvieSpandex: Abigail's costume as a Ward is her normal dress with the pants and shoes replaced with a leotard and combat boots. She figures that the latter would also go well with her [[{{Stripperiffic}} Witch of Salem]] [[AgeInappropriateDress "outfit"]] if she ever transforms.
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* TraumaticSuperpowerAwakening: [[spoiler:The PRT and the Wards are under the impression that Abby underwent a second trigger when Tattletale pushed her buttons during the bank job. She didn't. She just channeled more of her powers to lash out at Tattletale, who she thought was Raum, causing the latter to undergo the actual second trigger when Abby hit her on the head with a giant key.]]
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* ComboPlatterPowers: Abby has a number of abilities that belie the fact that she isn't like Earth Bet's capes. The PRT are under the impression that she's an unusually powerful Trump and the upper limits of her powers have yet to be determined (the Cosmic Traveling Gentlemen from the Salem Singularity says that she could, with practice, eventually use her powers to fight the Outer Gods).
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** Shadow Stalker is dismissive of Silver Key, which lasts until a whack from Hugo throws her across the training room.
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* OffTheRails: As soon as Abby arrives on Earth Bet, Yog-Sothoth convinces Scion to do ''something'' and the Simurgh disappears.
** Shadow Stalker is dismissive of Silver Key, which lasts until a whack from Hugo throws her across the training room.
** [[spoiler:Tattletale does her cold-reading shtick on Silver Key. This completely backfires on her with the emergence of the Witch of Salem.
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* UnskilledButStrong: Abigail. Being a Servant-like vessel meant to host an Outer God, she has a stat line usually enjoyed by old and powerful heroes (like Gilgamesh and Herakles) and has the aforementioned god's powers to wield. That said, she's both new to fighting and reluctant to do it, not to mention she's still early in her journey to learn how her abilities work.
* UnskilledButStrong: Abigail. Being a Servant-like vessel meant to host an Outer God, she has a stat line usually enjoyed by old and powerful heroes (like Gilgamesh and Herakles) and has the aforementioned god's powers to wield. That said, she's both new to fighting and reluctant to do it, not to mention she's still early in her journey to learn how her abilities work.
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* ReluctantWarrior: Abigail doesn't like to fight, but she can defend herself and others if necessary.
* WhyDidItHaveToBeSnakes: Abby does not like dogs, which naturally becomes a problem when facing Hellhound.
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[[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/the-little-foreigner-worm-x-fate-grand-order.887590/ The Little Foreigner]] is a fanfic by [=Aeonalpha6=] that is a crossover between Literature/{{Worm}} and VideoGame/FateGrandOrder.
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[[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/the-little-foreigner-worm-x-fate-grand-order.887590/ The Little Foreigner]] is a fanfic by [=Aeonalpha6=] that is a crossover between Literature/{{Worm}} ''Literature/{{Worm}}'' and VideoGame/FateGrandOrder.
''VideoGame/FateGrandOrder''.
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[[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/the-little-foreigner-worm-x-fate-grand-order.887590/ The Little Foreigner]] is a fanfic by Aeonalpha6 [=Aeonalpha6=] that is a crossover between Literature/{{Worm}} and VideoGame/FateGrandOrder.
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Or, a little girl finds herself in an unfamiliar city, makes new friends, and battles villains — while her “passenger” decides to shake up the local corner of the multiverse.
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!!The Little Foreigner contains examples of:
* BadassAdorable: Abby is incredibly earnest and sweet while still being a powerhouse.
** Vista/Missy as well, though the adorable part grates on her.
Or, a little girl finds herself in an unfamiliar city, makes new friends, and battles villains — while her “passenger” decides to shake up the local corner of the multiverse.
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!!The Little Foreigner contains examples of:
* BadassAdorable: Abby is incredibly earnest and sweet while still being a powerhouse.
** Vista/Missy as well, though the adorable part grates on her.
