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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3384712/1/The_Lie_Ive_Lived The Lie I've Lived]]'', an Alternate Universe Fic by jbern that picks up right at the end of ''[[Literature/HarryPotterAndThePrisonerOfAzkaban Prisoner Of Azkaban]]''. By blasting a couple of hundred Dementors away, something inside Harry breaks loose -- all of James Potter's Memories. From here we get an expanded Triwizard Tournament, one of the best takes on The Sorting Hat, and Harry, or HJ to fans, kicking ass and taking names. A sequel is supposedly in the works, but his first FanFic [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3759007/1/Turn_Me_Loose_A_Harry_Potter_Adventure Turn Me Loose]] and his original novel are taking precedence.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3384712/1/The_Lie_Ive_Lived The Lie I've Lived]]'', an Alternate Universe Fic by jbern that picks up right at the end of ''[[Literature/HarryPotterAndThePrisonerOfAzkaban Prisoner Of Azkaban]]''. By blasting a couple of hundred Dementors away, something inside Harry breaks loose -- all of James Potter's Memories.memories. From here we get an expanded Triwizard Tournament, one of the best takes on The Sorting Hat, and Harry, or HJ to fans, kicking ass and taking names. A sequel is supposedly in the works, but his first FanFic FanFic, [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3759007/1/Turn_Me_Loose_A_Harry_Potter_Adventure Turn Me Loose]] Loose]], and his original novel are taking precedence.
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* BringMyBrownPants: This happens to [[spoiler: Draco]], after he receives the Mark of the Cur.
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* BringMyBrownPants: This happens to [[spoiler: Draco]], Draco]] after he receives the Mark of the Cur.
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* CerebusRetCon: Several things in the Harry Potter universe are given much darker backstories. For example, Rowena Ravenclaw was revealed to have placed the Sword of Gryffindor in the Sorting Hat in a desperate attempt to prevent Godric from using it against Salazar. Unfortunately Godric simply decided to hunt him down without the sword, a decision which gets him killed.
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* CerebusRetCon: Several things in the Harry Potter universe are given much darker backstories. For example, Rowena Ravenclaw was revealed to have placed the Sword of Gryffindor in the Sorting Hat in a desperate attempt to prevent Godric from using it against Salazar. Unfortunately Unfortunately, Godric simply decided to hunt him down without the sword, a decision which gets got him killed.
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* DrivenToSuicide: Some years in the past, the Sorting Hat informed a student that his father was the reigning Dark Lord of the time. This information proved too much for the poor boy, as he takes his life a few days later.
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* DrivenToSuicide: Some years in the past, the Sorting Hat informed a student that his father was the reigning Dark Lord of the time. This information proved too much for the poor boy, as he takes took his own life a few days later.
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* HoistByHisOwnPetard: Harry encourages Michael Conner to ask Ginny out, mentioning that it would 'take a problem off his hands.' Unfortunately, this little statement makes its way into the ears of the Twins, who become ''very'' angry as a result.
** The Censure that the older Gryffindors make against Harry after he gets entered into the Triwizard Tournament ends up leaving them with quite a lot of egg on their faces, especially after Dumbledore publicly announces that he was completely innocent in the whole affair.
* HumiliationConga: Harry is on the receiving end of a rather nasty one. First, he is pranked by the twins after accidentally standing Katie up. Then, pictures of that prank are posted all around the common room for the viewing pleasure of the rest of the year. After that, he's kicked off the Quidditch team. [[FromBadToWorse It only gets worse]] after he's entered in the Triwizard tournament, as his entire House views him as a dirty cheater and publicly petition to kick him out of Gryffindor for good. Finally, due to his rather snappy comments to Rita Skeeter, she publishes a scathing article about him in the Daily Prophet.
* HistoryRepeats: After [[spoiler:unlocking James's memories]] Harry sarcastically lampshades that fact that his current group of friends are a cheap rehash of the Marauders.
** The Censure that the older Gryffindors make against Harry after he gets entered into the Triwizard Tournament ends up leaving them with quite a lot of egg on their faces, especially after Dumbledore publicly announces that he was completely innocent in the whole affair.
* HumiliationConga: Harry is on the receiving end of a rather nasty one. First, he is pranked by the twins after accidentally standing Katie up. Then, pictures of that prank are posted all around the common room for the viewing pleasure of the rest of the year. After that, he's kicked off the Quidditch team. [[FromBadToWorse It only gets worse]] after he's entered in the Triwizard tournament, as his entire House views him as a dirty cheater and publicly petition to kick him out of Gryffindor for good. Finally, due to his rather snappy comments to Rita Skeeter, she publishes a scathing article about him in the Daily Prophet.
* HistoryRepeats: After [[spoiler:unlocking James's memories]] Harry sarcastically lampshades that fact that his current group of friends are a cheap rehash of the Marauders.
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* HoistByHisOwnPetard: Harry encourages Michael Conner to ask Ginny out, mentioning that it would 'take "take a problem off his hands.' " Unfortunately, this little statement makes its way into the ears of the Twins, twins, who become ''very'' angry as a result.
** TheCensure censure that the older Gryffindors make against Harry after he gets entered into the Triwizard Tournament ends up leaving them with quite a lot of egg on their faces, especially after Dumbledore publicly announces that he was completely innocent in the whole affair.
* HumiliationConga: Harry is on the receiving end of a rather nasty one. First, he is pranked by the twins after accidentally standing Katie up. Then, pictures of that prank are posted all around the common room for the viewing pleasure of the rest of the year. After that, he's kicked off the Quidditch team. [[FromBadToWorse It only gets worse]] after he's entered in the Triwizardtournament, Tournament, as his entire House views him as a dirty cheater and publicly petition to kick him out of Gryffindor for good. Finally, due to his rather snappy comments to Rita Skeeter, she publishes a scathing article about him in the Daily Prophet.
* HistoryRepeats: After [[spoiler:unlocking James'smemories]] memories]], Harry sarcastically lampshades that the fact that his current group of friends are a cheap rehash of the Marauders.
** The
* HumiliationConga: Harry is on the receiving end of a rather nasty one. First, he is pranked by the twins after accidentally standing Katie up. Then, pictures of that prank are posted all around the common room for the viewing pleasure of the rest of the year. After that, he's kicked off the Quidditch team. [[FromBadToWorse It only gets worse]] after he's entered in the Triwizard
* HistoryRepeats: After [[spoiler:unlocking James's
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* InLoveWithTheMark: Tracy Davis's parents first met after her death eater father was ordered to kill her muggleborn mother. Surprise surprise, they wound up falling in love.
* InTheBack: [[spoiler: Dumbledore]] meets his end thanks to a killing curse from behind.
* InTheBack: [[spoiler: Dumbledore]] meets his end thanks to a killing curse from behind.
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* InLoveWithTheMark: Tracy Davis's parents first met after her death eater Death Eater father was ordered to kill her muggleborn Muggle-born mother. Surprise surprise, they wound up falling in love.
* InTheBack: [[spoiler: Dumbledore]] meets his end thanks to akilling curse Killing Curse from behind.
* InTheBack: [[spoiler: Dumbledore]] meets his end thanks to a
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** Describing Harry's performance in the obstacle course, Rita Skeeter writes "He was the 'unstoppable force' and let me tell you, there was no 'immovable object' to be found". Given Harry was [[RhinoRampage riding a rock transfigured in a rhinoceros]] and the obstacles were designed for far less tough things, it's an accurate assessment.
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** Describing Harry's performance in the obstacle course, Rita Skeeter writes writes, "He was the 'unstoppable force' and let me tell you, there was no 'immovable object' to be found". found." Given Harry was [[RhinoRampage riding a rock transfigured in a rhinoceros]] rhinoceros]], and the obstacles were designed for far less fewer tough things, it's an accurate assessment.
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** Immediately after the above, we have Dumbledore having a practice duel against Fleur, Sirius and Remus, with Sirius' last attack being described as "Sirius Black's unleashed fury was like the waves of a storm crashing against the uncaring shoreline before he, too, is trussed up".
* {{Jerkass}}: Viktor Krum
* {{Jerkass}}: Viktor Krum
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** Immediately after the above, we have Dumbledore having a practice duel against Fleur, Sirius and Remus, with Sirius' last attack being described as as: "Sirius Black's unleashed fury was like the waves of a storm crashing against the uncaring shoreline before he, too, is trussed up".
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* {{Jerkass}}: Viktor
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* LampshadedDoubleEntendre: The Hat takes ''great'' relish in pointing out all the sexual imagery that comes with Katie Bell ordering a banana split which is dripping with fresh cream. Katie, for her part, [[BrainBleach probably won't be able to look at one in the same way ever again.]]
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* LampshadedDoubleEntendre: The Hat takes ''great'' relish in pointing out all the sexual imagery that comes with Katie Bell ordering a banana split split, which is dripping with fresh cream. Katie, for her part, [[BrainBleach probably won't be able to look at one in the same way ever again.]]
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* LiteralSurveillanceBug: The spyfly
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* LiteralSurveillanceBug: The spyflyspyfly.
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* MobileSuitHuman: The golem that the hat uses to get around.
* NakedFirstImpression: Penelope first meets Oliver after he stumbles through the floo wearing nothing but a ModestyTowel.
* NakedFirstImpression: Penelope first meets Oliver after he stumbles through the floo wearing nothing but a ModestyTowel.
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* MobileSuitHuman: The golem that the hat Hat uses to get around.
* NakedFirstImpression: Penelope first meets Oliver after he stumbles through thefloo Floo wearing nothing but a ModestyTowel.
* NakedFirstImpression: Penelope first meets Oliver after he stumbles through the
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* RageBreakingPoint: Initially, Harry was content with passive-aggressively putting up with the Dursely's behavior until he could find a loophole to the blood wards. This changes when he discovers that [[spoiler:they sold the land on which Godric's Hollow stood to land developers]], after which he drops the 'passive' part completely.
** While Harry does a good job of keeping his cool in the wake of his shock entry into the Triwizard tournament, he completely blows his top after overhearing Fleur's 'little boy' comment.
** While Harry does a good job of keeping his cool in the wake of his shock entry into the Triwizard tournament, he completely blows his top after overhearing Fleur's 'little boy' comment.
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* RageBreakingPoint: Initially, Harry was content with passive-aggressively putting up with the Dursely's Dursleys' behavior until he could find a loophole to the blood wards. Blood Wards. This changes when he discovers that [[spoiler:they sold the land on which Godric's Hollow stood to land developers]], after which he drops the 'passive' "passive" part completely.
** While Harry does a good job of keeping his cool in the wake of his shock entry into the Triwizardtournament, Tournament, he completely blows his top after overhearing Fleur's 'little boy' "little boy" comment.
** While Harry does a good job of keeping his cool in the wake of his shock entry into the Triwizard
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* ShoutOut: "Yeah, just call me 'Ambassador Potter', expert at foreign diplomacy and purveyor of international goodwill." A shoutout to his other work Bungle in the Jungle.
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* ShoutOut: "Yeah, just call me 'Ambassador Potter', expert at foreign diplomacy and purveyor of international goodwill." A shoutout to his other work work, Bungle in the Jungle.
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* ThatCameOutWrong: Harry walks into his dorm, only to find Neville polishing his wand. Now get your minds out of the gutter now, he meant that in the most literal terms possible.
** Later on, Madame Pomfrey calls Harry a 'limp wrist' while criticizing his potion brewing skills.
* TookALevelInJerkass: The Weasley Twins. Though most of their behavior can be justified by the fact that they were taking revenge for: (A) Harry screwing around with their girlfriends during the game of [[{{SpinTheBottle}} spin the bottle]], (B) Harry seemingly leading Ginny on and then dumping her and (C) Harry pushing their respective [[BerserkButton berserk buttons]] regarding them not being wealthy and not being in the same league as the Marauders.
** Later on, Madame Pomfrey calls Harry a 'limp wrist' while criticizing his potion brewing skills.
* TookALevelInJerkass: The Weasley Twins. Though most of their behavior can be justified by the fact that they were taking revenge for: (A) Harry screwing around with their girlfriends during the game of [[{{SpinTheBottle}} spin the bottle]], (B) Harry seemingly leading Ginny on and then dumping her and (C) Harry pushing their respective [[BerserkButton berserk buttons]] regarding them not being wealthy and not being in the same league as the Marauders.
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* ThatCameOutWrong: Harry walks into his dorm, only to find Neville polishing his wand. Now get your minds out of the gutter now, gutter, he meant that in the most literal terms possible.
** Later on, Madame Pomfrey calls Harry a'limp wrist' "limp wrist" while criticizing his potion brewing skills.
* TookALevelInJerkass: The WeasleyTwins. twins. Though most of their behavior can be justified by the fact that they were taking revenge for: (A) Harry screwing around with their girlfriends during the game of [[{{SpinTheBottle}} spin the bottle]], (B) Harry seemingly leading Ginny on and then dumping her her, and (C) Harry pushing their respective [[BerserkButton berserk buttons]] buttons]], regarding them not being wealthy and not being in the same league as the Marauders.
** Later on, Madame Pomfrey calls Harry a
* TookALevelInJerkass: The Weasley
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* TricksterMentor: The Sorting Hat
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* TricksterMentor: The Sorting HatHat.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3384712/1/The_Lie_Ive_Lived The Lie I've Lived]]'', an Alternate Universe Fic by jbern that picks up right at the end of ''[[Literature/HarryPotterAndThePrisonerOfAzkaban Prisoner Of Azkaban]]''. By blasting a couple hundred Dementors away, something inside Harry breaks loose [[spoiler:All of James Potter's Memories]]. From here we get an expanded Triwizard Tournament, one of the best takes on The Sorting Hat, and Harry [[spoiler:or HJ to fans]] kicking ass and taking names. A sequel is supposedly in the works, but his first FanFic [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3759007/1/Turn_Me_Loose_A_Harry_Potter_Adventure Turn Me Loose]] and his original novel are taking precedence.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3384712/1/The_Lie_Ive_Lived The Lie I've Lived]]'', an Alternate Universe Fic by jbern that picks up right at the end of ''[[Literature/HarryPotterAndThePrisonerOfAzkaban Prisoner Of Azkaban]]''. By blasting a couple of hundred Dementors away, something inside Harry breaks loose [[spoiler:All -- all of James Potter's Memories]]. Memories. From here we get an expanded Triwizard Tournament, one of the best takes on The Sorting Hat, and Harry [[spoiler:or Harry, or HJ to fans]] fans, kicking ass and taking names. A sequel is supposedly in the works, but his first FanFic [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3759007/1/Turn_Me_Loose_A_Harry_Potter_Adventure Turn Me Loose]] and his original novel are taking precedence.
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* SpinTheBottle: Harry is forced to play a game of this during Katie's party. With an enchanted bottle, of course. By the end of the game you'd be hard pressed to name a player that he ''didn't'' annoy in some way.
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* SpinTheBottle: Harry is forced to play a game of this during Katie's party. With an enchanted bottle, of course. By the end of the game game, you'd be hard pressed hard-pressed to name a player that he ''didn't'' annoy in some way.
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** Harry himself gets quite harsh and snappy while he's coming to terms with the fact that he has [[spoiler:James's memories.]]
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** Harry himself gets quite harsh and snappy while he's coming to terms with the fact that he has [[spoiler:James's James's memories.]]
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* BalefulPolymorph: During their second duel, Harry turns {{Jerkass}} [[spoiler: Victor Krum]] into a literal ass.
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* BreakTheHaughty: Harry manages to do this with both [[ScarsAreForever Draco]] and [[BalefulPolymorph Victor.]]
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* BreakTheHaughty: Harry manages to do this with both [[ScarsAreForever Draco]] and [[BalefulPolymorph [[ForcedTransformation Victor.]]
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* AllOfTheOtherReindeer: Harry gets this from most of the older Gryffindor's at the start of the story, mainly stemming from his sudden change in personality and his treatment of [[WomanScorned Katie and Ginny]]. Though they quickly change their tune once he starts doing well in the Triwizard Tournament.
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* AllOfTheOtherReindeer: Harry gets this from most of the older Gryffindor's Gryffindors at the start of the story, mainly stemming from his sudden change in personality and his treatment of [[WomanScorned Katie and Ginny]]. Though they quickly change their tune once he starts doing well in the Triwizard Tournament.
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* BestialityIsDepraved: Rita Skeeter is quick to accuse Fleur of this after finding out about her meetings with Mr. Pronghorn,
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* BestialityIsDepraved: Rita Skeeter is quick to accuse Fleur of this after finding out about her meetings with Mr. Pronghorn, Pronghorn.
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* CerebusRetCon: Several things in the Harry Potter universe are given much darker backstories. For example, Rowena Ravenclaw was revealed to have placed to Sword of Gryffindor in the Sorting Hat in a desperate attempt to prevent Godric from using it against Salazar. Unfortunately Godric simply decided to hunt him down without the sword, a decision which gets him killed.
** A person has to kill in order to have the right the receive the Dark Mark. This makes certain recipients a ''lot'' less sympathetic. (Yes, we're looking at you, Snape.)
** A person has to kill in order to have the right the receive the Dark Mark. This makes certain recipients a ''lot'' less sympathetic. (Yes, we're looking at you, Snape.)
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* CerebusRetCon: Several things in the Harry Potter universe are given much darker backstories. For example, Rowena Ravenclaw was revealed to have placed to the Sword of Gryffindor in the Sorting Hat in a desperate attempt to prevent Godric from using it against Salazar. Unfortunately Godric simply decided to hunt him down without the sword, a decision which gets him killed.
** A person has to kill in order to have the rightthe to receive the Dark Mark. This makes certain recipients a ''lot'' less sympathetic. (Yes, we're looking at you, Snape.)
** A person has to kill in order to have the right
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* ColdBloodedTorture: During the Quidditch World Cup, Harry gets subjected the to Cruciatus Curse after his tries to rain on the Death Eater parade. Luckily, the Hat manages to distract the caster long enough for him to retaliate.
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* ColdBloodedTorture: During the Quidditch World Cup, Harry gets subjected to the to Cruciatus Curse after his he tries to rain on the Death Eater parade. Luckily, the Hat manages to distract the caster long enough for him to retaliate.
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* DrowningMySorrows: James's falls into this in the weeks after his parents died. In the present, the [[spoiler:memories]] of this event provide [[spoiler:Harry]] with ample ways to get past an age line.
* DrivenToSuicide: Some years in past, the Sorting Hat informed a student that his father was the reigning Dark Lord of the time. This information proved too much for the poor boy, as he takes his life a few days later.
* DuelToTheDeath: Harry demands one with Draco after finding out that he was responsible to sabotaging his duel with Fleur. Luckily for Draco, he's talked out of it.
* DrivenToSuicide: Some years in past, the Sorting Hat informed a student that his father was the reigning Dark Lord of the time. This information proved too much for the poor boy, as he takes his life a few days later.
* DuelToTheDeath: Harry demands one with Draco after finding out that he was responsible to sabotaging his duel with Fleur. Luckily for Draco, he's talked out of it.
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* DrowningMySorrows: James's James falls into this in the weeks after his parents died. In the present, the [[spoiler:memories]] of this event provide [[spoiler:Harry]] with ample ways to get past an age line.
* DrivenToSuicide: Some years in the past, the Sorting Hat informed a student that his father was the reigning Dark Lord of the time. This information proved too much for the poor boy, as he takes his life a few days later.
* DuelToTheDeath: Harry demands one with Draco after finding out that he was responsibleto for sabotaging his duel with Fleur. Luckily for Draco, he's talked out of it.
* DrivenToSuicide: Some years in the past, the Sorting Hat informed a student that his father was the reigning Dark Lord of the time. This information proved too much for the poor boy, as he takes his life a few days later.
* DuelToTheDeath: Harry demands one with Draco after finding out that he was responsible
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* HoistByHisOwnPetard: Harry encourages Michael Conner to ask Ginny out, why mentioning that it would 'take a problem off his hands.' Unfortunately, this little statement makes its way into the ears of the Twins, who become ''very'' angry as a result.
** The Censure that the older Griffindor's make against Harry after he gets entered into the Triwizard Tournament ends up leaving them with quite a lot of egg on their faces, especially after Dumbledore publicly announces that he was completely innocent in the whole affair.
* HumiliationConga: Harry is on the receiving end of a rather nasty one. First, he is pranked by the twins after accidentally standing Katie up. Then, pictures of that prank are posted all around the common room for the viewing pleasure of the rest of the year. After that, he's kicked off the Quidditch team. [[FromBadToWorse It only gets worse]] after he's entered in the Triwizard tournament, as his entire House view him as a dirty cheater and publicly petition to kick him out of Griffindor for good. Finally, due to his rather snappy comments to Rita Skeeter, she publishes a scathing article about him in the Daily Prophet.
** The Censure that the older Griffindor's make against Harry after he gets entered into the Triwizard Tournament ends up leaving them with quite a lot of egg on their faces, especially after Dumbledore publicly announces that he was completely innocent in the whole affair.
* HumiliationConga: Harry is on the receiving end of a rather nasty one. First, he is pranked by the twins after accidentally standing Katie up. Then, pictures of that prank are posted all around the common room for the viewing pleasure of the rest of the year. After that, he's kicked off the Quidditch team. [[FromBadToWorse It only gets worse]] after he's entered in the Triwizard tournament, as his entire House view him as a dirty cheater and publicly petition to kick him out of Griffindor for good. Finally, due to his rather snappy comments to Rita Skeeter, she publishes a scathing article about him in the Daily Prophet.
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* HoistByHisOwnPetard: Harry encourages Michael Conner to ask Ginny out, why mentioning that it would 'take a problem off his hands.' Unfortunately, this little statement makes its way into the ears of the Twins, who become ''very'' angry as a result.
** The Censure that the olderGriffindor's Gryffindors make against Harry after he gets entered into the Triwizard Tournament ends up leaving them with quite a lot of egg on their faces, especially after Dumbledore publicly announces that he was completely innocent in the whole affair.
* HumiliationConga: Harry is on the receiving end of a rather nasty one. First, he is pranked by the twins after accidentally standing Katie up. Then, pictures of that prank are posted all around the common room for the viewing pleasure of the rest of the year. After that, he's kicked off the Quidditch team. [[FromBadToWorse It only gets worse]] after he's entered in the Triwizard tournament, as his entire Houseview views him as a dirty cheater and publicly petition to kick him out of Griffindor Gryffindor for good. Finally, due to his rather snappy comments to Rita Skeeter, she publishes a scathing article about him in the Daily Prophet.
** The Censure that the older
* HumiliationConga: Harry is on the receiving end of a rather nasty one. First, he is pranked by the twins after accidentally standing Katie up. Then, pictures of that prank are posted all around the common room for the viewing pleasure of the rest of the year. After that, he's kicked off the Quidditch team. [[FromBadToWorse It only gets worse]] after he's entered in the Triwizard tournament, as his entire House
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* InLoveWithTheMark: Tracy's Davis's parents first met after her death eater father was ordered to kill her muggleborn mother. Surprise surprise, they wound up falling in love.
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* InLoveWithTheMark: Tracy's Tracy Davis's parents first met after her death eater father was ordered to kill her muggleborn mother. Surprise surprise, they wound up falling in love.
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** Describing Harry's performance in the obstacle course, Rita Skeeter writes "He was the 'unstoppable force' and let me tell you, there was no 'immovable object' to be found". Given Harry was [[RhinoRampage riding a rock transfigured in a rhinoceros]] and the obstacles were designed for far less though things, it's an accurate assestment.
** Harry's narration of their practice duel describes Madame Maxime as the immovable object, as [[AntiMagic she's completely invulnerable to minor hexes and jinxes]], highly resistant to the big things and capable of defending from them, and strong enough that conjured chains barely slow her down and ''wrestle a gorilla to death''.
** Harry's narration of their practice duel describes Madame Maxime as the immovable object, as [[AntiMagic she's completely invulnerable to minor hexes and jinxes]], highly resistant to the big things and capable of defending from them, and strong enough that conjured chains barely slow her down and ''wrestle a gorilla to death''.
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** Describing Harry's performance in the obstacle course, Rita Skeeter writes "He was the 'unstoppable force' and let me tell you, there was no 'immovable object' to be found". Given Harry was [[RhinoRampage riding a rock transfigured in a rhinoceros]] and the obstacles were designed for far less though tough things, it's an accurate assestment.
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** Harry's narration of their practice duel describes Madame Maxime as the immovable object, as [[AntiMagic she's completely invulnerable to minor hexes and jinxes]], highly resistant to the big things and capable of defending herself from them, and strong enough that conjured chains barely slow her down and ''wrestle a gorilla to death''.
** Harry's narration of their practice duel describes Madame Maxime as the immovable object, as [[AntiMagic she's completely invulnerable to minor hexes and jinxes]], highly resistant to the big things and capable of defending herself from them, and strong enough that conjured chains barely slow her down and ''wrestle a gorilla to death''.
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* LongDistanceRelationship: Amiee has a (failing) long-distance relationship with a wizard called Stephane. It takes seeing her and Harry at the Yule ball together and her being nearly[[spoiler: burnt to a crisp by a dragon]] for him to visit her and patch things up.
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* LongDistanceRelationship: Amiee has a (failing) long-distance relationship with a wizard called Stephane. It takes seeing her and Harry at the Yule ball together and her being nearly[[spoiler: burnt nearly [[spoiler:burnt to a crisp by a dragon]] for him to visit her and patch things up.
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* MamasBabyPapasMaybe: During the Marauder era, a witch came forward claiming that Sirius has gotten her pregnant. [[spoiler: The actual father was Snape, who was using polyjuice to look like Sirius.]]
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* MamasBabyPapasMaybe: During the Marauder era, a witch came forward claiming that Sirius has had gotten her pregnant. [[spoiler: The actual father was Snape, who was using polyjuice to look like Sirius.]]
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* PassiveAggressiveKombat: Harry and Lucius Malfoy engage in a rather tense round of this during the formers trial.
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* PassiveAggressiveKombat: Harry and Lucius Malfoy engage in a rather tense round of this during the formers former's trial.
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* ScarsAreForever: [[spoiler: Draco]] get inflicted with The Mark of the Cur after he gets caught interfering with Harry's duel.
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* ScarsAreForever: [[spoiler: Draco]] get gets inflicted with The Mark of the Cur after he gets caught interfering with Harry's duel.
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* TeethClenchedTeamwork: Happens whenever HJ has to deal with Remus. He absolutely despises the man, but as the event that caused this hate (namely, [[spoiler:Remus having an affair with Lilly]]) is something that only James is supposed to know, he is forced to be civil to him in order to keep his secret about [[spoiler: James's memories]] under wraps.
* ThatCameOutWrong: Harry walks into his dorm, only to find Neville polishing his wand. Now get your minds out of the gutter now, he meant that in the most literal terms possibile.
* ThatCameOutWrong: Harry walks into his dorm, only to find Neville polishing his wand. Now get your minds out of the gutter now, he meant that in the most literal terms possibile.
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* TeethClenchedTeamwork: Happens whenever HJ has to deal with Remus. He absolutely despises the man, but as the event that caused this hate (namely, [[spoiler:Remus having an affair with Lilly]]) Lily]]) is something that only James is supposed to know, he is forced to be civil to him in order to keep his secret about [[spoiler: James's memories]] under wraps.
* ThatCameOutWrong: Harry walks into his dorm, only to find Neville polishing his wand. Now get your minds out of the gutter now, he meant that in the most literal termspossibile.possible.
* ThatCameOutWrong: Harry walks into his dorm, only to find Neville polishing his wand. Now get your minds out of the gutter now, he meant that in the most literal terms
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* YourCheatingHeart: In this universe [[spoiler:Lilly cheated on James with Remus.]] While HJ knows it's in the past and that he currently has no reason to get upset with Remus, some of James's old anger tends to bleed through.
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* LongDistanceRelationship: Amiee has a (failing) long distance relationship with a wizard called Stephane. It takes seeing her and Harry at the Yule ball together and her being nearly[[spoiler: burnt to a crisp by a dragon]] for him to visit her and patch things up.
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* LongDistanceRelationship: Amiee has a (failing) long distance long-distance relationship with a wizard called Stephane. It takes seeing her and Harry at the Yule ball together and her being nearly[[spoiler: burnt to a crisp by a dragon]] for him to visit her and patch things up.
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* NakedFirstImpression: Penelope first meets Oliver after he stumbles through the floo wearing nothing but a towel.
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* NakedFirstImpression: Penelope first meets Oliver after he stumbles through the floo wearing nothing but a towel.ModestyTowel.
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* TryingToCatchMeFightingDirty: A staple of Harry's more {{Jerkass}} opponents. Victor manages to foul him in the broom race, which causes him to break his leg and costs him first place, while Draco uses the Ichor of Humiliation to make his clothes dissolve during his duel with Fleur. [[BreakTheHaughty Both get their comeuppance.]]
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* CerebusRetCon: Several things in the Harry Potter universe are given much darker backstories. For example, Rowena Ravenclaw was revealed to have placed to Sword of Gryffindor in the Sorting Hat in a desperate attempt to prevent Godric from using it against Salazar with it. Unfortunately Godric just decided to hunt him down without the sword, a decision which gets him killed.
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* CerebusRetCon: Several things in the Harry Potter universe are given much darker backstories. For example, Rowena Ravenclaw was revealed to have placed to Sword of Gryffindor in the Sorting Hat in a desperate attempt to prevent Godric from using it against Salazar with it. Salazar. Unfortunately Godric just simply decided to hunt him down without the sword, a decision which gets him killed.
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* CerebusRetCon: Several things in the Harry Potter universe are revisited here, and are given much more darker backstories. For example, Rowena Ravenclaw was revealed to have placed to Sword of Gryffindor in the Sorting Hat in a desperate attempt to prevent Godric from hunting down Salazar with it. Unfortunately Godric just decided to hunt him down without the sword, a decision which gets him killed.
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* CerebusRetCon: Several things in the Harry Potter universe are revisited here, and are given much more darker backstories. For example, Rowena Ravenclaw was revealed to have placed to Sword of Gryffindor in the Sorting Hat in a desperate attempt to prevent Godric from hunting down using it against Salazar with it. Unfortunately Godric just decided to hunt him down without the sword, a decision which gets him killed.
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* CerebusRetCon: Several things in the Harry Potter universe are revisited here, and are given much more darker backstories. For example, Rowena Ravenclaw was revealed to have placed to Sword of Gryffindor in the Sorting Hat, in a desperate attempt to prevent Godric from hunting down Salazar with it. Unfortunately, Godric just decided to hunt him out without the sword, a decision which gets him killed.
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* CerebusRetCon: Several things in the Harry Potter universe are revisited here, and are given much more darker backstories. For example, Rowena Ravenclaw was revealed to have placed to Sword of Gryffindor in the Sorting Hat, Hat in a desperate attempt to prevent Godric from hunting down Salazar with it. Unfortunately, Unfortunately Godric just decided to hunt him out down without the sword, a decision which gets him killed.
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* BestialityIsDepraved: After finding out about her meetings with Mr. Pronghorn, Rita Skeeter is quick to accuse Fleur of this.
* BetaCouple: For Harry and Fleur, we have Penelope Clearwater and Oliver Wood, as well as Cedric and Cho. Back in the Marauder era, Frank and Alice Longbottom were this for James and Lily.
* BetaCouple: For Harry and Fleur, we have Penelope Clearwater and Oliver Wood, as well as Cedric and Cho. Back in the Marauder era, Frank and Alice Longbottom were this for James and Lily.
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* BestialityIsDepraved: After finding out about her meetings with Mr. Pronghorn, Rita Skeeter is quick to accuse Fleur of this.
this after finding out about her meetings with Mr. Pronghorn,
* BetaCouple: For Harry andFleur, Fleur we have Penelope Clearwater and Oliver Wood, as well as Cedric and Cho. Back in the Marauder era, Frank and Alice Longbottom were this for James and Lily.
* BetaCouple: For Harry and
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* UnstoppableForceMeetsImmovableObject: Twice the phrase is used:
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* UnstoppableForceMeetsImmovableObject: Twice Thrice the phrase or something similar is used:
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** Immediately after the above, we have Dumbledore having a practice duel against Fleur, Sirius and Remus, with Sirius' last attack being described as "Sirius Black's unleashed fury was like the waves of a storm crashing against the uncaring shoreline before he, too, is trussed up".
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* UnstoppableForceMeetsImmovableObject: Twice the phrase is used:
** Describing Harry's performance in the obstacle course, Rita Skeeter writes "He was the 'unstoppable force' and let me tell you, there was no 'immovable object' to be found". Given Harry was [[RhinoRampage riding a rock transfigured in a rhinoceros]] and the obstacles were designed for far less though things, it's an accurate assestment.
** Harry's narration of their practice duel describes Madame Maxime as the immovable object, as [[AntiMagic she's completely invulnerable to minor hexes and jinxes]], highly resistant to the big things and capable of defending from them, and strong enough that conjured chains barely slow her down and ''wrestle a gorilla to death''.
** Describing Harry's performance in the obstacle course, Rita Skeeter writes "He was the 'unstoppable force' and let me tell you, there was no 'immovable object' to be found". Given Harry was [[RhinoRampage riding a rock transfigured in a rhinoceros]] and the obstacles were designed for far less though things, it's an accurate assestment.
** Harry's narration of their practice duel describes Madame Maxime as the immovable object, as [[AntiMagic she's completely invulnerable to minor hexes and jinxes]], highly resistant to the big things and capable of defending from them, and strong enough that conjured chains barely slow her down and ''wrestle a gorilla to death''.
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* CerebusRetCon: Several things in the Harry Potter universe are revisited here, and are given much more darker backstories. For example, Rowena Ravenclaw was revealed to have placed to Sword of Gryffindor in the Sorting Hat, in a desperate attempt to prevent Godric from hunting down Salazar with it. Unfortunately, Godric just decided to hunt him out without the sword, a decision which gets him killed.
** A person has to kill in order to have the right the receive the Dark Mark. This makes certain recipients a ''lot'' less sympathetic. (Yes, we're looking at you, Snape.)
** A person has to kill in order to have the right the receive the Dark Mark. This makes certain recipients a ''lot'' less sympathetic. (Yes, we're looking at you, Snape.)
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* HumiliationConga: Harry is on the receiving end of a rather nasty one. First, he is pranked by the twins after accidentally standing Katie up. Then, pictures of that prank are posted all around the common room for the viewing pleasure of the rest of the year. After that, he's kicked off the Quidditch team. [[FromBadToWorse It only gets worse]] after he's entered in the Triwizard tournament, as his entire House view him as a dirty cheater and publicly petition to kick him out of Griffindor for good. For bonus points, he alienates both Ron and Hermonie after they confront him about this. Finally, due to his rather snappy comments to Rita Skeeter, she publishes a scathing article about him in the Daily Prophet, which Draco and his little posse are all over.
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* HumiliationConga: Harry is on the receiving end of a rather nasty one. First, he is pranked by the twins after accidentally standing Katie up. Then, pictures of that prank are posted all around the common room for the viewing pleasure of the rest of the year. After that, he's kicked off the Quidditch team. [[FromBadToWorse It only gets worse]] after he's entered in the Triwizard tournament, as his entire House view him as a dirty cheater and publicly petition to kick him out of Griffindor for good. For bonus points, he alienates both Ron and Hermonie after they confront him about this. Finally, due to his rather snappy comments to Rita Skeeter, she publishes a scathing article about him in the Daily Prophet, which Draco and his little posse are all over. Prophet.
* RageAgainstTheMentor: Harry tears Dumbledore a new one after he realizes that the lack of surveillance on the Goblet of Fire is what allowed someone to enter him in the Tournament.
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** While Harry was doing a good job of keeping his cool in the wake of his shock entry into the Triwizard tournament, he completely blows his top after overhearing Fleur's 'little boy' comment.
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** While Harry was doing does a good job of keeping his cool in the wake of his shock entry into the Triwizard tournament, he completely blows his top after overhearing Fleur's 'little boy' comment.
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* RageBreakingPoint: Initially, Harry was content with passive-aggressively putting up with the Dursely's. This changes when he discovers that [[spoiler:they sold the land on which Godric's Hollow stood to land developers]], after which he drops the 'passive' part completely.
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* RageBreakingPoint: Initially, Harry was content with passive-aggressively putting up with the Dursely's. Dursely's behavior until he could find a loophole to the blood wards. This changes when he discovers that [[spoiler:they sold the land on which Godric's Hollow stood to land developers]], after which he drops the 'passive' part completely.completely.
** While Harry was doing a good job of keeping his cool in the wake of his shock entry into the Triwizard tournament, he completely blows his top after overhearing Fleur's 'little boy' comment.
** While Harry was doing a good job of keeping his cool in the wake of his shock entry into the Triwizard tournament, he completely blows his top after overhearing Fleur's 'little boy' comment.
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* ForbiddenFruit: Harry labels Fleur as this the moment he sets eyes on her.
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* HoistByHisOwnPetard: Harry encourages Michael Conner to ask Ginny out, why mentioning that it would 'take a problem off his hands.' Unfortunately, this little statement makes its way into the ears of the Twins, who become ''very'' angry as a result.
** The Censure that the older Griffindor's make against Harry after he gets entered into the Triwizard Tournament ends up leaving them with quite a lot of egg on their faces, especially after Dumbledore publicly announces that he was completely innocent in the whole affair.
** The Censure that the older Griffindor's make against Harry after he gets entered into the Triwizard Tournament ends up leaving them with quite a lot of egg on their faces, especially after Dumbledore publicly announces that he was completely innocent in the whole affair.
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* OlderThanTheyLook: Harry. Though he's 14 in body, thanks to [[spoiler: inheriting James's memories]] he has the mind of a twenty-something.
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* OlderThanTheyLook: Harry. Though he's 14 fourteen in body, thanks to [[spoiler: inheriting James's memories]] he has the mind of a twenty-something.
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* PassiveAggressiveKombat: Harry and Lucius Malfoy engage in a rather tense round of this during the formers trial.
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* ChivalrousPervert: Harry
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* ChivalrousPervert: HarryHarry.
* ColdBloodedTorture: During the Quidditch World Cup, Harry gets subjected the to Cruciatus Curse after his tries to rain on the Death Eater parade. Luckily, the Hat manages to distract the caster long enough for him to retaliate.
* ColdBloodedTorture: During the Quidditch World Cup, Harry gets subjected the to Cruciatus Curse after his tries to rain on the Death Eater parade. Luckily, the Hat manages to distract the caster long enough for him to retaliate.
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* LookBehindYou: During the fight at the Quidditch World Cup, Hat manages to distract the Death Eater who's torturing Harry this way, which gives Harry and opening to take him out for good.
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* FromBadToWorse: Harry's HumiliationConga gets much, much worse in the aftermath of him being entered in the Triwizard Tournament.
* FunWithAcronyms: The key to being successful when dueling with Transfiguration is using C.A.T.S - no, not the animal, but rather the principles of Conjure, Animate, Transfigure and Succeed.
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* GreatBigBookOfEverything: The Potter Anybook
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* GreatBigBookOfEverything: The Potter AnybookAnybook.
* HumiliationConga: Harry is on the receiving end of a rather nasty one. First, he is pranked by the twins after accidentally standing Katie up. Then, pictures of that prank are posted all around the common room for the viewing pleasure of the rest of the year. After that, he's kicked off the Quidditch team. [[FromBadToWorse It only gets worse]] after he's entered in the Triwizard tournament, as his entire House view him as a dirty cheater and publicly petition to kick him out of Griffindor for good. For bonus points, he alienates both Ron and Hermonie after they confront him about this. Finally, due to his rather snappy comments to Rita Skeeter, she publishes a scathing article about him in the Daily Prophet, which Draco and his little posse are all over.
* HumiliationConga: Harry is on the receiving end of a rather nasty one. First, he is pranked by the twins after accidentally standing Katie up. Then, pictures of that prank are posted all around the common room for the viewing pleasure of the rest of the year. After that, he's kicked off the Quidditch team. [[FromBadToWorse It only gets worse]] after he's entered in the Triwizard tournament, as his entire House view him as a dirty cheater and publicly petition to kick him out of Griffindor for good. For bonus points, he alienates both Ron and Hermonie after they confront him about this. Finally, due to his rather snappy comments to Rita Skeeter, she publishes a scathing article about him in the Daily Prophet, which Draco and his little posse are all over.
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* InLoveWithTheMark: Tracy's Davis's parents first met after her death eater father was ordered to kill her muggleborn mother. They wound up falling in love, and then married after Harry killed Voldermort.
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* InLoveWithTheMark: Tracy's Davis's parents first met after her death eater father was ordered to kill her muggleborn mother. They Surprise surprise, they wound up falling in love, and then married after Harry killed Voldermort.love.
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* ILoveYouBecauseICantControlYou: Part of Fleur's initial attraction to Harry.
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* ILoveYouBecauseICantControlYou: Part of Fleur's initial attraction InLoveWithTheMark: Tracy's Davis's parents first met after her death eater father was ordered to Harry.kill her muggleborn mother. They wound up falling in love, and then married after Harry killed Voldermort.
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* ThatCameOutWrong: Harry walks into his dorm, only to find Neville polishing his wand. Now get your minds out of the gutter now, he meant that in the most literal terms possibile.
** Later on, Madame Pomfrey calls Harry a 'limp wrist' while criticizing his potion brewing skills.
** Later on, Madame Pomfrey calls Harry a 'limp wrist' while criticizing his potion brewing skills.
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* OneDegreeOfSeparation: Harry has absolutely no idea that the Bloody Baron's real name is actually Lord Baron William ''Potter''...until the Hat [[BlatantLies graciously]] decides to enlighten him.
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* DrowningMySorrows: James's falls into this in the weeks after his parents died. In the present, the [[spoiler:memories]] of this event provide [[spoiler:Harry]] with ample ways to get past an age line.
* DrivenToSuicide: Some years in past, the Sorting Hat informed a student that his father was the reigning Dark Lord of the time. This information proved too much for the poor boy, as he takes his life a few days later.
* DrivenToSuicide: Some years in past, the Sorting Hat informed a student that his father was the reigning Dark Lord of the time. This information proved too much for the poor boy, as he takes his life a few days later.
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* JerkJock: Andrew Carlson and Victor Krum. Both get their comeuppance thanks to Harry.
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* [[LikesOlderWomen Likes Older Men]]: Most of Fleur's previous partners have been 5 to 10 years older than her. Harry is mentioned to be the first person she's dated who's younger than her.
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* LampshadedDoubleEntendre: The Hat takes ''great'' relish in pointing out all the sexual imagery that comes with Katie Bell ordering a banana split which is dripping with fresh cream. Katie, for her part, [[BrainBleach probably won't be able to look at one in the same way ever again.]]
* [[LikesOlderWomen Likes Older Men]]: Most of Fleur's previous partners have been5 to 10 years at least half a decade older than her. Harry is mentioned to be the first person she's dated who's younger than her.younger.
* [[LikesOlderWomen Likes Older Men]]: Most of Fleur's previous partners have been