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It can be read [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13983192/1/Incomplete-World-Of-Elmore here]] or [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/32344261/chapters/80182003 here]][[note]]The [=AO3=] version is outdated and [[DeadFic hasn't been updated since July 2021.]][[/note]]

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It can be read [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13983192/1/Incomplete-World-Of-Elmore here]] or [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/32344261/chapters/80182003 here]][[note]]The [=AO3=] Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn version is outdated and [[DeadFic hasn't been updated since July 2021.]][[/note]]

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** Because Richard died the day Gumball was born, Anais does not exist in this fic.
** Because Nicole didn't allow Gumball to own a pet when he was a kid, Darwin never met or grew up with either, though

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** Because Richard died the day Gumball was born, Anais does not exist in this fic.
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** Because Nicole didn't allow Gumball to own a pet when he was a kid, Darwin Darwin/Loki never met or grew up with either, thoughcausing him and Gumball to be far less connected to each other.



* ManEatingPlant: Aphrodite, a Venus flytrap with arms that came from the [[NatureIsNotNice Forest of Doom.]] She also happens to be Gumball and Nicole's "pet."



* WhamShot: The fanfic hits us with this right in the first chapter.

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* WhamShot: The fanfic hits us with this right in at the end of the first chapter.
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''The Incomplete World of Elmore'' is a fanfic written by [=DevilMegaUltraMan=] based on ''WesternAnimation/TheAmazingWorldOfGumball'' with elements of ''Manga/JoJosBizarreAdventure'', primarily ''Manga/JoJosBizarreAdventureVentoAureo'', mixed into the story.

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''The Incomplete World of Elmore'' is a fanfic written by [=DevilMegaUltraMan=] based on ''WesternAnimation/TheAmazingWorldOfGumball'' with elements of ''Manga/JoJosBizarreAdventure'', primarily ''Manga/JoJosBizarreAdventureVentoAureo'', ''Manga/JoJosBizarreAdventureGoldenWind'', mixed into the story.



* {{Expy}}: As the story implies most of the characters are similar to the charaters of ''Manga/JoJosBizarreAdventureVentoAureo''.

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* {{Expy}}: As the story implies most of the characters are similar to the charaters of ''Manga/JoJosBizarreAdventureVentoAureo''.''Manga/JoJosBizarreAdventureGoldenWind''.



** For a non-''Manga/JoJosBizarreAdventureVentoAureo'' example, the Franklin Jr High Council are one to the Robot Masters from ''VideoGame/MegaMan2'', being antagonistic androids with unique elemental powers that the heroes must defeat to survive.

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** For a non-''Manga/JoJosBizarreAdventureVentoAureo'' non-''Manga/JoJosBizarreAdventureGoldenWind'' example, the Franklin Jr High Council are one to the Robot Masters from ''VideoGame/MegaMan2'', being antagonistic androids with unique elemental powers that the heroes must defeat to survive.

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** While Nicole is [[{{Downplayed|Trope}} still just as badass as her canon counterpart,]] she's seen in a more feared light due to her role as Deputy Sheriff.

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** While Nicole is [[{{Downplayed|Trope}} [[DownplayedTrope still just as badass as her canon counterpart,]] she's seen in a more feared light due to her role as Deputy Sheriff.



** Gumball's first name in the fic is Nicolas, in contrast to his canonical name Zack

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** Gumball's first name in the fic is Nicolas, in contrast to his canonical name ZackZack.



** Loki is one to Doppio--both are eccentric and use items as phones to call their split personalities, with said split personalities being the masterminds behind the crimes in their homelands and.

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** Loki is one to Doppio--both are eccentric and use items as phones to call their split personalities, with said split personalities being the masterminds mastermind behind the crimes in local crimes, men who don't want their homelands and. identities to be known, and the most powerful Stand user.
** Julius and his gang are one to La Squadra Esecuzioni, acting as assassins for the BigBad until he threatens them for trying to uncover his identity by sending them the chopped-up and formaldehyde-preserved pieces of one of their members (Reaper), causing them to defect.
** For a non-''Manga/JoJosBizarreAdventureVentoAureo'' example, the Franklin Jr High Council are one to the Robot Masters from ''VideoGame/MegaMan2'', being antagonistic androids with unique elemental powers that the heroes must defeat to survive.



** Gumball also ends up barging into Clare's room without her permission. Twice.

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** Gumball also ends up barging into Clare's room without her permission. Twice.permission on multiple occasions, not realizing that it was a felony until Bobert told him.



--> R.I.P//
--> RICHARD BUCKLEY WATTERSON//

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--> R.I.P//
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''The Incomplete World of Elmore'' is a fanfic written by [=DevilMegaUltraMan=] based on ''WesternAnimation/TheAmazingWorldOfGumball'' with elements of ''Manga/JoJosBizarreAdventure''.

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''The Incomplete World of Elmore'' is a fanfic written by [=DevilMegaUltraMan=] based on ''WesternAnimation/TheAmazingWorldOfGumball'' with elements of ''Manga/JoJosBizarreAdventure''.
''Manga/JoJosBizarreAdventure'', primarily ''Manga/JoJosBizarreAdventureVentoAureo'', mixed into the story.



* ActorAllusion: When William speaks aloud for the first time in Chapter 8, he complains about how [[Creator/JackMcBrayer his voice]] sounds like [[WesternAnimation/WreckItRalph a construction worker]] or [[WesternAnimation/WanderOverYonder a hillbilly who goes around the galaxy and plays the banjo.]]

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* ActorAllusion: When William speaks aloud for the first time in Chapter Part 8, he complains about how [[Creator/JackMcBrayer his voice]] sounds like [[WesternAnimation/WreckItRalph a construction worker]] or [[WesternAnimation/WanderOverYonder a hillbilly who goes around the galaxy and plays the banjo.]]



* AdaptationNameChange:
** Gumball's first name in the fic is Nicolas, in contrast to his canonical name Zack
** Darwin's name in the fic is Loki, which is {{Justified|Trope}} as Gumball was never there to name him.



* {{Expy}}: As the story implies most of the characters are similar to the ''Manga/JoJosBizarreAdventure'' charaters of Golden Wind. Loki is one to Doppio--both are eccentric and use items as phones to call their split personalites.

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* {{Expy}}: As the story implies most of the characters are similar to the ''Manga/JoJosBizarreAdventure'' charaters of Golden Wind. ''Manga/JoJosBizarreAdventureVentoAureo''.
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Loki is one to Doppio--both are eccentric and use items as phones to call their split personalites.personalities, with said split personalities being the masterminds behind the crimes in their homelands and.



** Because Nicole didn't allow Gumball to own a pet when he was a kid, Darwin never met or grew up with either, though



* LikeBrotherAndSister: How Gumball sees the relationship between him and Clare, much to the latter's

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* LikeBrotherAndSister: How Gumball sees the relationship between him and Clare, much to the latter's annoyance. However, she comes to feel the same way about Gumball overtime.



* NoSenseOfPersonalSpace: Gumball touches Masami's face after Tobias said that she's rough around the edges.

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* NoSenseOfPersonalSpace: NoSenseOfPersonalSpace:
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Gumball touches Masami's face after Tobias said that she's rough around the edges. edges and gets electrocuted for it.
** Gumball also ends up barging into Clare's room without her permission. Twice.
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RICHARD BUCKLEY WATTERSON//
"''Had a heart as big as his stomach, Joyful Burger will miss their best Customer along with friends and family.''"

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--> RICHARD BUCKLEY WATTERSON//
--> "''Had a heart as big as his stomach, Joyful Burger will miss their best Customer along with friends and family.''"

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* ActorAllusion: When William speaks aloud for the first time in Chapter 8, he complains about how [[Creator/JackMcBrayer his voice]] sounds like [[WesternAnimation/WreckItRalph a construction worker]] or [[WesternAnimation/WanderOverYonder a hillbilly who goes around the galaxy and plays the banjo.]]



* DoIReallySoundLikeThat: William thought he sounded like Creator/AlanRickman in his head, but in reality, he speaks with a Creator/JackMcBrayer-like voice.



%%** Carmen Verde is describe to be this.
%%* LikeBrotherAndSister: Gumball and Clare's relationship in a nutshell.

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%%** Carmen Verde is describe described to be this.
%%* * LikeBrotherAndSister: How Gumball and Clare's sees the relationship in a nutshell. between him and Clare, much to the latter's



* RelatedInTheAdaptation: William is Alan's brother in this story.

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* RelatedInTheAdaptation: William is Alan's brother in this story.story.
* WhamShot: The fanfic hits us with this right in the first chapter.
--> R.I.P//
RICHARD BUCKLEY WATTERSON//
"''Had a heart as big as his stomach, Joyful Burger will miss their best Customer along with friends and family.''"

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''The Incomplete World of Elmore'' is based on ''WesternAnimation/TheAmazingWorldOfGumball'' with elements of ''Manga/JoJosBizarreAdventure''.

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''The Incomplete World of Elmore'' is a fanfic written by [=DevilMegaUltraMan=] based on ''WesternAnimation/TheAmazingWorldOfGumball'' with elements of ''Manga/JoJosBizarreAdventure''.



It can be read [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13622419/1/The-Incomplete-World-Of-Elmore here]] or [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/32344261/chapters/80182003 here]]


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It can be read [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13622419/1/The-Incomplete-World-Of-Elmore net/s/13983192/1/Incomplete-World-Of-Elmore here]] or [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/32344261/chapters/80182003 here]]

here]][[note]]The [=AO3=] version is outdated and [[DeadFic hasn't been updated since July 2021.]][[/note]]




!!''The Incomplete World Of Elmore'' provides examples of:
* AlternateUniverseFic: The story takes place in a different universe.

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!!''The Incomplete World Of of Elmore'' provides examples of:
* AdaptationalBadass:
** The original Gumball? Brave, but fairly weak. Incomplete World of Elmore's Gumball? Fought five older teens alone and won without a scratch. And that was ''before'' he had gotten a Stand.
** Truthfully, any previously established character who was given a Stand is more badass than their canon counterpart.
** While Nicole is [[{{Downplayed|Trope}} still just as badass as her canon counterpart,]] she's seen in a more feared light due to her role as Deputy Sheriff.
* AlternateUniverseFic: The story takes place in a different universe.universe, borrowing elements from ''Manga/JoJosBizarreAdventure'' and changing existing elements of [=TAWOG's=] canon.


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* ForWantOfANail: Plenty of examples.
** Because Richard died the day Gumball was born, Anais does not exist in this fic.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13622419/1/The-Incomplete-World-Of-Elmore The Incomplete World of Elmore]]'' is based on ''WesternAnimation/TheAmazingWorldOfGumball'' with elements of ''Manga/JoJosBizarreAdventure''.

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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13622419/1/The-Incomplete-World-Of-Elmore The ''The Incomplete World of Elmore]]'' Elmore'' is based on ''WesternAnimation/TheAmazingWorldOfGumball'' with elements of ''Manga/JoJosBizarreAdventure''.





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\nIt can be read [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13622419/1/The-Incomplete-World-Of-Elmore here]] or [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/32344261/chapters/80182003 here]]

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* JerkassToOne: Penny Fitzgerald towards Gumball due to him murdering her pet Mr Cuddles.



** William's last name is Keane which one of it's meanings is Keen Eye.

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** William's last name is Keane which one of it's meanings is Keen Eye.means "Keen Eye".

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* MeaningfulName: Gumball's real name in this story is Nicolas, which means "Victory for the people".

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* MeaningfulName: Gumball's MeaningfulName:
**Gumball's
real name in this story is Nicolas, which means "Victory for the people". people".
** William's last name is Keane which one of it's meanings is Keen Eye.



** Hot Dog Guy is named Darrel Feltmen in this story.

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** Hot Dog Guy is named Darrel Feltmen in this story.and Hot Dog Guy is his nickname.
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The story is based on ''WesternAnimation/TheAmazingWorldOfGumball'' with elements of ''Manga/JoJosBizarreAdventure''

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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13622419/1/The-Incomplete-World-Of-Elmore The story Incomplete World of Elmore]]'' is based on ''WesternAnimation/TheAmazingWorldOfGumball'' with elements of ''Manga/JoJosBizarreAdventure''
''Manga/JoJosBizarreAdventure''.



The story can be found [[https://m.fanfiction.net/s/13622419/1/ here]]

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The story can be found [[https://m.fanfiction.net/s/13622419/1/ here]]
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Misused trope.


* CrushFilter: The next time Gumball sees Carmen, her appearance to him is that of a humanoid cactus.
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* {{Expy}}: As the story implies most of the characters are similar to the ''Manga/JoJosBizarreAdventure'' charaters of Golden Wind. Loki is one to Doppio, both are eccentric and uses items as phones to call their split personalites.

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* {{Expy}}: As the story implies most of the characters are similar to the ''Manga/JoJosBizarreAdventure'' charaters of Golden Wind. Loki is one to Doppio, both Doppio--both are eccentric and uses use items as phones to call their split personalites.
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* {{Expy}}: As the story implies most of the characters are similar to the ''Manga/JoJosBizarreAdventure'' charaters of Golden Wind. Loki is one to Doppio, but are eccentric and uses items as phones to call their split personalites.

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* {{Expy}}: As the story implies most of the characters are similar to the ''Manga/JoJosBizarreAdventure'' charaters of Golden Wind. Loki is one to Doppio, but both are eccentric and uses items as phones to call their split personalites.
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%%* CrashIntoHello: This is how Gumball meet Clare.

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%%* CrashIntoHello: This is how Gumball meet meets Clare.



* {{Expy}}: As the story implies most if the characters are similar to the ''Manga/JoJosBizarreAdventure'' charaters of Golden Wind. Loki is one to Doppio, but are eccentric and uses items as phones to call their split personalites.
* {{Foil}}: Gumball, AKA Nicolas, is this towards the original Gumball. The best example is Nicolas is the "Gum" that sticks to you and Gumball himself is the "Ball" that bounces off everything and never learns a thing.

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* {{Expy}}: As the story implies most if of the characters are similar to the ''Manga/JoJosBizarreAdventure'' charaters of Golden Wind. Loki is one to Doppio, but are eccentric and uses items as phones to call their split personalites.
* %%* {{Foil}}: Gumball, AKA Nicolas, is this towards the original Gumball. The best example is Nicolas is the "Gum" that sticks to you and Gumball himself is the "Ball" that bounces off everything and never learns a thing.
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[[caption-width-right:350: Main Characters Left to right Ocho, Carrie, Nicolas, William,Clare, Darrel]]Art belongs to [[https://www.deviantart.com/franticace/ FranticAce]]

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[[caption-width-right:350: Main Characters Left to right Ocho, Carrie, Nicolas, William,Clare, Darrel]]Art Darrel. (Art belongs to [[https://www.deviantart.com/franticace/ FranticAce]]
FranticAce.]])]]
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[[caption-width-right:350: Main Characters Left to right Ocho, Carrie, Nicolas, William,Clare, Darrel]]Art belongs to [[https://www.deviantart.com/franticace/ FranticAce]]
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After losing someone important to her that left a hole in her heart an in the world were he used to be . 12 Years later her son and his quirky companions help him as their bizarre adventures in Elmore will help them uncover the secrets in their town.

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After losing someone important to her that left a hole in her heart an in the world were he used to be . be. 12 Years years later her son and his quirky companions help him as their bizarre adventures in Elmore will help them uncover the secrets in their town.



* CrashIntoHello: This is how Gumball meet Clare.
* CrushFilter: The next time Gumball sees Carmen. Her apperance to him is that of a humaniod Cactus.

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* %%* CrashIntoHello: This is how Gumball meet Clare.
* CrushFilter: The next time Gumball sees Carmen. Her apperance Carmen, her appearance to him is that of a humaniod Cactus.humanoid cactus.



* HairTriggerTemper:
** Ocho as usual.
** Carmen Verde is describe to be this.
* LikeBrotherAndSister: Gumball and Clare's relationship in a nutshell.

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* %%* HairTriggerTemper:
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** %%** Carmen Verde is describe to be this.
* %%* LikeBrotherAndSister: Gumball and Clare's relationship in a nutshell.

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* {{Expy}}: As the story impiles most if the characters are similar to the ''Manga/JoJosBizarreAdventure'' charaters of Golden Wind.
** Loki is one to Doppio but are eccentric and uses items as phones to call there split personalites.

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* {{Expy}}: As the story impiles implies most if the characters are similar to the ''Manga/JoJosBizarreAdventure'' charaters of Golden Wind.
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Wind. Loki is one to Doppio Doppio, but are eccentric and uses items as phones to call there their split personalites.

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%%* {{Foil}}: Gumball, AKA Nicolas, is this towards the original Gumball. The best example is Nicolas is the "Gum" that sticks to you and Gumball himself is the "Ball" that bounces off everything and never learns a thing.

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%%* *{{Expy}}: As the story impiles most if the characters are similar to the ''Manga/JoJosBizarreAdventure'' charaters of Golden Wind.
** Loki is one to Doppio but are eccentric and uses items as phones to call there split personalites.
*
{{Foil}}: Gumball, AKA Nicolas, is this towards the original Gumball. The best example is Nicolas is the "Gum" that sticks to you and Gumball himself is the "Ball" that bounces off everything and never learns a thing.
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* CrashIntoHello: This is how Gumball meet Clare.
* CrushFilter: The next time Gumball sees Carmen. Her apperance to him is that of a humaniod Cactus.


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* HairTriggerTemper:
** Ocho as usual.
** Carmen Verde is describe to be this.

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That's not irrational hatred.


After losing someone important to her that left a hole in heart in her heart an in the world were he used to be . 12 Years later her son and his quriky companions help him as there Bizzare adventures in Elmore will help them uncover the secrets in there town.

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After losing someone important to her that left a hole in heart in her heart an in the world were he used to be . 12 Years later her son and his quriky quirky companions help him as there Bizzare their bizarre adventures in Elmore will help them uncover the secrets in there their town.







* {{Foil}}: Gumball aka Nicolas is this towards the original Gumball. The best example is Nicolas is the "Gum" that sticks to you and Gumball himself is the "Ball" that bounces off everything and never learns a thing.

* IrrationalHatred: Penny has this towards Gumball. Due to him killing her pet Mr.Cuddles last year.

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\n* %%* {{Foil}}: Gumball aka Nicolas Gumball, AKA Nicolas, is this towards the original Gumball. The best example is Nicolas is the "Gum" that sticks to you and Gumball himself is the "Ball" that bounces off everything and never learns a thing. \n\n* IrrationalHatred: Penny has this towards Gumball. Due to him killing her pet Mr.Cuddles last year. \n




* LoveAtFirstPunch: This is how Gumball fell for Carmen. She punched him in the face when his guard was down.

* MeaningfulName: Gumball real name in this story is Nicolas which means "Victory for the people".

* NamedByTheAdaptation: Hot Dog Guy is named Darrel Feltmen in this story, this includes the Dounut Shreiff who is named Clancy Rosenberg.

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\n* LoveAtFirstPunch: This is how Gumball fell for Carmen. She Carmen because she punched him in the face when his guard was down.

* MeaningfulName: Gumball real name in this story is Nicolas which means "Victory for the people".

* NamedByTheAdaptation: Hot Dog Guy is named Darrel Feltmen in this story, this includes the Dounut Shreiff who is named Clancy Rosenberg.
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* MeaningfulName: Gumball's real name in this story is Nicolas, which means "Victory for the people".
* NamedByTheAdaptation:
** Hot Dog Guy is named Darrel Feltmen in this story.
** The Donut Sheriff is named Clancy Rosenberg.




* OddFriendship: Gumball and Carrie.

* RelatedByTheAdaptation: William is Alan's brother in this story. They also are ''PolarOppositeTwins''.

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\n* %%* OddFriendship: Gumball and Carrie.

Carrie.
* RelatedByTheAdaptation: RelatedInTheAdaptation: William is Alan's brother in this story. They also are ''PolarOppositeTwins''.story.

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* AlternateUniverseFic: The story takes place in a different universe.

* {{Foil}}: Gumball aka Nicolas is this towards the original Gumball. The best example is Nicolas is the "Gum" that sticks to you and Gumball himself is the "Ball" that bounces off everything and never learns a thing.

* IrrationalHatred: Penny has this towards Gumball. Due to him killing her pet Mr.Cuddles last year.

* LikeBrotherAndSister: Gumball and Clare's relationship in a nutshell.



* OddFriendship: Gumball and William

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* OddFriendship: Gumball and William
Carrie.
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!!''The Incomplete World Of Elmore'' provides examples of:

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!!''The Incomplete World Of Elmore'' provides examples of:of:

* LoveAtFirstPunch: This is how Gumball fell for Carmen. She punched him in the face when his guard was down.

* MeaningfulName: Gumball real name in this story is Nicolas which means "Victory for the people".

* NamedByTheAdaptation: Hot Dog Guy is named Darrel Feltmen in this story, this includes the Dounut Shreiff who is named Clancy Rosenberg.

* NoSenseOfPersonalSpace: Gumball touches Masami's face after Tobias said that she's rough around the edges.

* OddFriendship: Gumball and William

* RelatedByTheAdaptation: William is Alan's brother in this story. They also are ''PolarOppositeTwins''.
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The story is based on ''WesternAnimation/TheAmazingWorldOfGumball'' with elements of ''Manga/JoJosBizarreAdventure''

After losing someone important to her that left a hole in heart in her heart an in the world were he used to be . 12 Years later her son and his quriky companions help him as there Bizzare adventures in Elmore will help them uncover the secrets in there town.

The story can be found [[https://m.fanfiction.net/s/13622419/1/ here]]

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