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* AloofDarkHairedGirl: Onyx.
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* AxCrazy: Riann.
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* CharacterDevelopment: For both Jack and Pitch.
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* CoolOldLady: Ravus.
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* PapaWolf: Alden. [[spoiler:Pitch too, once that Seraphina returns]]
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* TheMole: [[spoiler:Rikka worked for Benard's plans all along. She regrets it later however.]]
%%* PapaWolf: Alden. [[spoiler:Pitch too, once that Seraphina returns]]
%%* PapaWolf: Alden. [[spoiler:Pitch too, once that Seraphina returns]]
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* SugarAndIcePersonality: Onyx.
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* TheMole: [[spoiler:Rikka worked for Benard's plans all along. She regrets it later however.]]
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The Heavy Weight of Duty is a ''WesternAnimation/RiseOfTheGuardians'' story written by [[http://archiveofourown.org/users/adelaide_rain Adelaide_rain]]. The story takes place in a fantasy world, where Jack is the royal prince of Lunanoff, the moon kingdom. The kingdom is ruled by the Moon King, Jack's father, along with Jack's older siblings. While Jack has a quite good life in, his life changes the day where his father tells him that he has to do his duty of prince. A peace treaty has been drawn up with the land of shadows, ruled by the Nightmare King. In order to save the kingdom, Jack is given to the Nightmare King as a courtesan.
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* [[spoiler:BigBad: Ben. His children, Kader and Riann, serve as CoDragons (although Riann is more of a DragonInChief, which made her more threatening than Kader.]]
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* [[spoiler:BigBad: Ben.BigBad: [[spoiler:Ben. His children, Kader and Riann, serve as CoDragons (although Riann is more of a DragonInChief, which made her more threatening than Kader.]]
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* [[spoiler:IChooseToStay]]: After spending more time in Umbra and coming to know Pitch more, Jack decides this.
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* [[spoiler:IChooseToStay]]: After IChooseToStay: [[spoiler:After spending more time in Umbra and coming to know Pitch more, Jack decides this. this.]]
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* [[spoiler:KilledOffForReal: Kal.KilledOffForReal: [[spoiler:Kal.]]
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* [[spoiler:YourDaysAreNumbered:]] For Jack. However, [[spoiler:thanks to Ombric]] it goes better.
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* EvenEvilHasLovedOnes: The Moon King isn't really evil, more of a jerk actually. In any case, he really loved his wife, who was Jack's mother. [[spoiler:Ben is also revealed having a family, but if he cares for them is debatable]]
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* EvenEvilHasLovedOnes: The Moon King isn't really evil, more of a jerk actually. In any case, he really loved his wife, who was Jack's mother. [[spoiler:Ben is also revealed having to have a family, but if he cares for them is debatable]]
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The Heavy Weight of Duty is a RiseOfTheGuardians story written by [[http://archiveofourown.org/users/adelaide_rain Adelaide_rain]]. The story takes place in a fantasy world, where Jack is the royal prince of Lunanoff, the moon kingdom. The kingdom is ruled by the Moon King, Jack's father, along with Jack's older siblings. While Jack has a quite good life in, his life changes the day where his father tells him that he has to do his duty of prince. A peace treaty has been drawn up with the land of shadows, ruled by the Nightmare King. In order to save the kingdom, Jack is given to the Nightmare King as a courtesan.
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The Heavy Weight of Duty is a RiseOfTheGuardians ''WesternAnimation/RiseOfTheGuardians'' story written by [[http://archiveofourown.org/users/adelaide_rain Adelaide_rain]]. The story takes place in a fantasy world, where Jack is the royal prince of Lunanoff, the moon kingdom. The kingdom is ruled by the Moon King, Jack's father, along with Jack's older siblings. While Jack has a quite good life in, his life changes the day where his father tells him that he has to do his duty of prince. A peace treaty has been drawn up with the land of shadows, ruled by the Nightmare King. In order to save the kingdom, Jack is given to the Nightmare King as a courtesan.
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* BetaCouple: Onyx and Amber. Kal and Rikka could count too [[spoiler:until Rikka is revealed to be TheMole, and Kal is killed by Lunanovians.]]
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* BetaCouple: Onyx and Amber. Kal and Rikka could count too [[spoiler:until too, at least until [[spoiler: Rikka is revealed to be TheMole, and Kal is killed by Lunanovians.]]
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* WellDoneSonGuy: [[spoiler:One of main conflicts between Kader and Riann. They both are trying to catch their father's attention on them.]] Jack could count too, although his relationship with his father is shattered.
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* WellDoneSonGuy: [[spoiler:One of main conflicts between Kader and Riann. They both are trying to catch their father's attention on them.]] Jack could count too, although his relationship with his father is shattered.
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* [[spoiler:YourDaysAreNumbered:]] For Jack. However, [[spoiler:thanks to Ombric]] it goes better. \n\n
