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** Hoster Tully dies by unknown means, since the Blackfish has to light his funeral boat along with Edmure’s.
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** Hoster Tully dies by unknown means, since the Blackfish has to light his funeral boat along with Edmure’s.Edmure's.
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* FromBadToWorse: This story is this comparative to canon, as named characters drop left and right much earlier than in canon, CivilWar breaks out in the Vale, and Lord Plumm’s negotiations with Dorne fail.
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* FromBadToWorse: This story is this comparative to canon, as named characters drop left and right much earlier than in canon, CivilWar breaks out in the Vale, and Lord Plumm’s Plumm's negotiations with Dorne fail.
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* SecretKeeper: The Blackfish is the only one who knows of Robb’s connection to Grey Wind and how Grey Wind’s death takes a physical toll on Robb.
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* SecretKeeper: The Blackfish is the only one who knows of Robb’s Robb's connection to Grey Wind and how Grey Wind’s Wind's death takes a physical toll on Robb.
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** Since Tyrion Lannister is killed before Catelyn’s party reaches the Eyrie, Ser Vardis Egen survives into the early stages of the War of the Five Kings.
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** Since Tyrion Lannister is killed before Catelyn’s Catelyn's party reaches the Eyrie, Ser Vardis Egen survives into the early stages of the War of the Five Kings.
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* NotSoDifferent: Catelyn recalls that her father would have had the same strategy that Lysa uses: just hunker down in a castle and wait for a problem to blow over.
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"[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13101679/1/The-flight-of-the-Imp The flight of the Imp]]" is a ''Literature/ASongOfIceAndFire'' fanfic where Tyrion Lannister is killed while in the Vale and the resulting chaos that ensues.
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* AndThisIsFor: Jaime says “For Tyrion” after executing Edmure
* AscendedExtra: Brynden “Blackfish” Tully, Smalljon Umber, Steelshanks Walton, Yohn Royce, Varys, Littlefinger, Stannis Baratheon, The Hound, Loras Tyrell, and Olenna Tyrell are POV characters.
* BaitAndSwitch: It initially looks as if Jamie was killed after Grey Wind mauled him and ripped his arm off with the narration even saying that his last thoughts were of Cersei. A later chapter however reveals that he still lived and much like in canon he was captured by the Starks.
* AscendedExtra: Brynden “Blackfish” Tully, Smalljon Umber, Steelshanks Walton, Yohn Royce, Varys, Littlefinger, Stannis Baratheon, The Hound, Loras Tyrell, and Olenna Tyrell are POV characters.
* BaitAndSwitch: It initially looks as if Jamie was killed after Grey Wind mauled him and ripped his arm off with the narration even saying that his last thoughts were of Cersei. A later chapter however reveals that he still lived and much like in canon he was captured by the Starks.
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* AndThisIsFor: Jaime says “For Tyrion” "For Tyrion" after executing Edmure
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* AscendedExtra: Brynden“Blackfish” "Blackfish" Tully, Smalljon Umber, Steelshanks Walton, Yohn Royce, Varys, Littlefinger, Stannis Baratheon, The Hound, Loras Tyrell, and Olenna Tyrell are POV characters.
* BaitAndSwitch: It initially looks as if Jamie was killed after Grey Wind mauled him and ripped his arm off with the narration even saying that his last thoughts were of Cersei. A later chapter however reveals that he stilllived and lives and, much like in canon he was canon, has been captured by the Starks.
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* DeadGuyOnDisplay: Ned Stark’s head isn’t just displayed on a spike, his body is split into seven pieces and each put at an entrance to King’s Landing.
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* DeadGuyOnDisplay: Ned Stark’s Stark's head isn’t isn't just displayed on a spike, his body is split into seven pieces and each put at an entrance to King’s King's Landing.
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** Nestor Royce was killed in the Vale’s CivilWar.
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** Nestor Royce was killed in the Vale’s Vale's CivilWar.
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** Kevan is sent to King’s Landing as acting Hand of the King.
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* InSeriesNickname: Instead of “The Young Wolf”, Robb receives the nickname “One-eyed Wolf”.
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* YouAreInCommandNow: Smalljon Umber and Eddard Karstark become heads of their respective houses when their fathers are killed in battle.
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* YouAreInCommandNow: Smalljon Umber and Eddard Karstark become heads of their respective houses when their fathers are killed in battle.battle.
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** Gregor Clegane is killed by the Knights of the Vale.
* FromBadToWorse: This story is this comparative to canon, as named characters drop left and right much earlier than in canon, CivilWar breaks out in the Vale, and Lord Plumm’s negotiations with Dorne fail.
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* TeaserOnlyCharacter: Tyrion himself, as the prologue opens as he falls to his death off a mountain in the Vale.
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* TeaserOnlyCharacter: Tyrion himself, as the prologue opens as he falls to his death off a mountain in the Vale.Vale.
* YouAreInCommandNow: Smalljon Umber and Eddard Karstark become heads of their respective houses when their fathers are killed in battle.
* YouAreInCommandNow: Smalljon Umber and Eddard Karstark become heads of their respective houses when their fathers are killed in battle.
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* CivilWar: The Vale has a short one when the Lords Declarant led by Yohn Royce rebel to join the War of the Five Kings as a preemptive measure when Tyrion is killed.
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* CivilWar: The Vale has a short one when the Lords Declarant led by Yohn Royce rebel to join the War of the Five Kings as a preemptive measure when Tyrion is killed.against Tywin Lannister.
** Nestor Royce was killed in the Vale’s CivilWar.
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* DisneyVillainDeath: Tyrion is killed when he misjudges a bush to find cover and realizes that it was hiding a precipice and falls to his death.
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* DisneyVillainDeath: Tyrion is killed when he misjudges a bush to find cover and cover, realizes that it was hiding a precipice and falls to his death.
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* ForWantOfANail: The nail in this case is Catelyn Stark refusing to give Tyrion a weapon, forcing him to find cover. The tree he tries to hide behind turns out to be hiding a precipice, and Tyrion falls to his death.
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* ForWantOfANail: The nail in this case is Catelyn Stark refusing to give Tyrion a weapon, forcing him to find cover. The tree he tries to hide behind turns out to be hiding a precipice, and Tyrion falls to his death. From there, things go FromBadToWorse.
* HopeSpot: When Tyrion falls off the precipice, he hits a branch and his momentum is stopped for a couple seconds. Then the branch snaps and he falls the rest of the way off the mountain.
* HopeSpot: When Tyrion falls off the precipice, he hits a branch and his momentum is stopped for a couple seconds. Then the branch snaps and he falls the rest of the way off the mountain.
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* ForWantOfANail: The nail in this case is Catelyn Stark refusing to give Tyrion a weapon, forcing him to find cover. The tree he tries to hide behind turns out to be hiding a precipice, and Tyrion falls to his death.
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** Stevron Frey survives the Battle of Oxcross.
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** Stevron Frey survives the Battle of Oxcross.Oxcross.
* TeaserOnlyCharacter: Tyrion himself, as the prologue opens as he falls to his death off a mountain in the Vale.
* TeaserOnlyCharacter: Tyrion himself, as the prologue opens as he falls to his death off a mountain in the Vale.
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* AndThisIsFor: Jaime says “For Tyrion” after executing Edmure
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* DisabledInTheAdaptation: Robb loses his left eye and the use of his right arm in the Battle of the Whispering Wood.
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** Lord Lefford goes to Dorne to negotiate with Doran Martell.
** Lord Plumm meets with Olenna Tyrell to discuss a match between Margaery and Joffrey.
*DisabledInTheAdaptation: DisabledInTheAdaptation:
** Robb loses his left eye and the use of his right arm in the Battle of the WhisperingWood.Wood.
** Roose Bolton gets his leg broken in the Battle of the Green Fork.
** Lord Plumm meets with Olenna Tyrell to discuss a match between Margaery and Joffrey.
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** Robb loses his left eye and the use of his right arm in the Battle of the Whispering
** Roose Bolton gets his leg broken in the Battle of the Green Fork.
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* LaserGuidedKarma: Jamie gets his even faster then in canon. Not a few moments after he permanently disables Robb's sword arm and destroys his eye he is tackled away by Grey Worm before he can finish the deed and has his arm ripped off by the angry Direwolf.
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* LaserGuidedKarma: Jamie gets his even faster then in canon. Not a few moments after he permanently disables Robb's sword arm and destroys his eye he is tackled away by Grey Worm Wind before he can finish the deed and has his arm ripped off by the angry Direwolf.Direwolf.
* NotSoDifferent: Catelyn recalls that her father would have had the same strategy that Lysa uses: just hunker down in a castle and wait for a problem to blow over.
* NotSoDifferent: Catelyn recalls that her father would have had the same strategy that Lysa uses: just hunker down in a castle and wait for a problem to blow over.
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* BaitAndSwitch: It initially looks as if Jamie was killed after Grey Wind mauled him and ripped his arm off with the narration even saying that his last thoughts were of Cersei. A later chapter however reveals that he still lived and much like in canon he was captured by the Starks.
* LaserGuidedKarma: Jamie gets his even faster then in canon. Not a few moments after he permanently disables Robb's sword arm and destroys his eye he is tackled away by Grey Worm before he can finish the deed and has his arm ripped off by the angry Direwolf.
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** Tywin Lannister outlives both of his sons.
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** Tywin Lannister outlives both of his sons.son Tyrion. It initially seems as if he also outlived Jamie as well but a later chapter revealed that he was still alive.
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** Rickard Karstark dies killing Stafford Lannister at the Battle of Oxcross.
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** Rickard Karstark dies killing Stafford Lannister is killed at the Battle of Oxcross.
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* SecretKeeper: The Blackfish is the only one who knows of Robb’s connection to Grey Wind and how Grey Wind’s death takes a physical toll on Robb.
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* AdaptationalAngstUpgrade: Robb, thanks to losing his fighting skill bit by bit as he loses an eye, the use of his sword arm, and then Grey Wind.
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* CivilWar: The Vale has a short one when the Lords Declarant led by Yohn Royce rebel to join the War of the Five Kings as a preemptive measure when Tyrion is killed.
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“[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13101679/1/The-flight-of-the-Imp The flight of the Imp]]” is a ‘’Literature/ASongOfIceAndFire’’ fanfic where Tyrion Lannister is killed while in the Vale and the resulting chaos that ensues.
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* AscendedExtra: Brynden “Blackfish” Tully, Smalljon Umber, Steelshanks Walton, Yohn Royce, Varys, Littlefinger, Stannis Baratheon, The Hound and Loras Tyrell are POV characters.
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* AscendedExtra: Brynden “Blackfish” Tully, Smalljon Umber, Steelshanks Walton, Yohn Royce, Varys, Littlefinger, Stannis Baratheon, The Hound and Hound, Loras Tyrell, and Olenna Tyrell are POV characters.
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** Bran and the Reeds sneak out of Winterfell and head north even though Theon doesn't seize Winterfell.
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* AscendedExtra: Brynden “Blackfish” Tully, Smalljon Umber, Steelshanks Walton, Yohn Royce, Varys, Littlefinger, Stannis Baratheon, The Hound and Loras Tyrell are POV characters.
** Hoster Tully dies by unknown means, since the Blackfish has to light his funeral boat along with Edmure’s.
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** Rickard Karstark dies killing Stafford Lannister at the Battle of the Oxcross.
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** Grey Wind is killed by arrows shortly before the Battle of Oxcross.
** Rickard Karstark dies killing Stafford Lannister at the Battle ofthe Oxcross.
** Rickard Karstark dies killing Stafford Lannister at the Battle of
* IHaveNoSon: Balon Greyjoy denounces Theon as his son.
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* OutlivingOnesOffspring: Tywin Lannister outlives both of his sons.
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* OutlivingOnesOffspring: OutlivingOnesOffspring:
** Tywin Lannister outlives both of hissons.sons.
** Lord Selwyn Tarth loses his daughter Brienne.
** Tywin Lannister outlives both of his
** Lord Selwyn Tarth loses his daughter Brienne.
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** Since Tyrion Lannister is killed before Catelyn’s party reaches the Eyrie, Ser Vardis Egen survives into the early stages of the War of the Five Kings.
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** Since Tyrion Lannister is killed before Catelyn’s party reaches the Eyrie, Ser Vardis Egen survives into the early stages of the War of the Five Kings.Kings.
** Stevron Frey survives the Battle of Oxcross.
** Stevron Frey survives the Battle of Oxcross.
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* BattleInTheRain: Victarion Greyjoy recalls that it was raining in the Battle off Fair Isle.
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** Jaime Lannister kills Greatjon Umber and is subsequently mauled to death by Grey Wind.
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** Jaime Lannister kills Greatjon Umber and is subsequently mauled to death by Grey Wind.Umber.
** Brienne of Tarth is stabbed by Loras Tyrell immediately after Renly’s death.
* DecompositeCharacter: Since Tyrion is killed in the Vale, his character is split as follows.
** Kevan is sent to King’s Landing as acting Hand of the King.
** Lancel is betrothed to Sansa after her betrothal to Joffrey is annulled.
* DecompositeCharacter: Since Tyrion is killed in the Vale, his character is split as follows.
** Kevan is sent to King’s Landing as acting Hand of the King.
** Lancel is betrothed to Sansa after her betrothal to Joffrey is annulled.
* InSpiteOfANail:
** Jaime loses his arm.
** Renly crowns himself king and is killed by a shadow.
** Jaime loses his arm.
** Renly crowns himself king and is killed by a shadow.
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* SparedByTheAdaptation: Eddard Karstark survives the Battle of the Whispering Wood.
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* SparedByTheAdaptation: ScrewThisImOuttaHere: Littlefinger flees the capital to the Vale.
* SparedByTheAdaptation:
** Torrhen and Eddard Karstarksurvives survive the Battle of the Whispering Wood.Wood.
** Since Tyrion Lannister is killed before Catelyn’s party reaches the Eyrie, Ser Vardis Egen survives into the early stages of the War of the Five Kings.
* SparedByTheAdaptation:
** Torrhen and Eddard Karstark
** Since Tyrion Lannister is killed before Catelyn’s party reaches the Eyrie, Ser Vardis Egen survives into the early stages of the War of the Five Kings.
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* DeadGuyOnDisplay: Ned Stark’s head isn’t just displayed on a spike, his body is split into seven pieces and each put at an entrance to King’s Landing.
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* DisabledInTheAdaptation: Robb loses the use of his right arm in the Battle of the Whispering Wood.
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* InSeriesNickname: Instead of “The Young Wolf”, Robb receives the nickname “One-eyed Wolf”.
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“[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13101679/1/The-flight-of-the-Imp The flight of the Imp]]” is a ‘’Literature/ASongOfIceAndFire’’ fanfic where Tyrion Lannister is killed while in the Vale and the resulting chaos that ensues.
!!Tropes that appear in this fanfic:
* DeathByAdaptation:
** Tyrion is merely the first of several characters to bite the dust much earlier than in canon.
** Edmure Tully is captured and killed by Jaime Lannister.
** Jaime Lannister kills Greatjon Umber and is subsequently mauled to death by Grey Wind.
** Rickard Karstark dies killing Stafford Lannister at the Battle of the Oxcross.
* DisabledByTheAdaptation: Robb loses the use of his right arm in the Battle of the Whispering Wood.
* DisneyVillainDeath: Tyrion is killed when he misjudges a bush to find cover and realizes that it was hiding a precipice and falls to his death.
* OffWithHisHead: Edmure Tully is executed by Jaime as retribution for Tyrion’s death.
* OutlivingOnesOffspring: Tywin Lannister outlives both of his sons.
* SparedByTheAdaptation: Eddard Karstark survives the Battle of the Whispering Wood.
!!Tropes that appear in this fanfic:
* DeathByAdaptation:
** Tyrion is merely the first of several characters to bite the dust much earlier than in canon.
** Edmure Tully is captured and killed by Jaime Lannister.
** Jaime Lannister kills Greatjon Umber and is subsequently mauled to death by Grey Wind.
** Rickard Karstark dies killing Stafford Lannister at the Battle of the Oxcross.
* DisabledByTheAdaptation: Robb loses the use of his right arm in the Battle of the Whispering Wood.
* DisneyVillainDeath: Tyrion is killed when he misjudges a bush to find cover and realizes that it was hiding a precipice and falls to his death.
* OffWithHisHead: Edmure Tully is executed by Jaime as retribution for Tyrion’s death.
* OutlivingOnesOffspring: Tywin Lannister outlives both of his sons.
* SparedByTheAdaptation: Eddard Karstark survives the Battle of the Whispering Wood.