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* HeavenlyConcentricCircles: Suffusing [[TheHeroine Erasa]] with divine ki from the Kaioushing's Super God Water (aka the Choshinsui) prompts her eyes to gain a concentric-ring pattern. To be more precise, she gets endowed with the soul of Earth's original god, Shangdi.
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* EverythingsBetterWithSpinning: The orbs Erasa can create [[spoiler:in her Super Mode]] function like this, as a ShoutOut to the Rasengan.
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* AdaptedOut: [[spoiler: Vegetto, Uub, and the forms of Majin Buu that relied on absorbing the heroes do not make an appearance due to circumstances within the new story.]] The author has also gone on record as stating nothing from ''DragonBallSuperSuperHero'' will appear in the fanfic.
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* AdaptedOut: [[spoiler: Vegetto, Uub, and the forms of Majin Buu that relied on absorbing the heroes do not make an appearance due to circumstances within the new story.]] The author has also gone on record as stating nothing from ''DragonBallSuperSuperHero'' ''Anime/DragonBallSuperSuperHero'' will appear in the fanfic.
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* AdaptedOut: [[spoiler: Vegetto, Uub, and the forms of Majin Buu that relied on absorbing the heroes do not make an appearance due to circumstances within the new story.]]
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* AdaptedOut: [[spoiler: Vegetto, Uub, and the forms of Majin Buu that relied on absorbing the heroes do not make an appearance due to circumstances within the new story.]]]] The author has also gone on record as stating nothing from ''DragonBallSuperSuperHero'' will appear in the fanfic.
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The Status Quo Main/ page redirects to the page for the music band Status Quo. Dewicking it since the usage here doesn't refer to the band.
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* DarkerAndEdgier: While not the darkest of ''Dragon Ball'' fics, it certainly is this compared to the more common parts of the original series. Perhaps due to a nascent love for the macabre, the author is surprisingly effective at making some moments genuinely horrific, and even without this, in ''Erased'', the StatusQuo does not remain the same. There are costs, people die and ''stay'' dead, and nothing is the same at the end of the day.
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* DarkerAndEdgier: While not the darkest of ''Dragon Ball'' fics, it certainly is this compared to the more common parts of the original series. Perhaps due to a nascent love for the macabre, the author is surprisingly effective at making some moments genuinely horrific, and even without this, in ''Erased'', the StatusQuo status quo does not remain the same. There are costs, people die and ''stay'' dead, and nothing is the same at the end of the day.
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* "Bio-Android Resurgence" Arc - Chapters 84 onward
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* "Bio-Android Resurgence" Arc - Chapters 84 onward
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* "Chapter Black" Arc - Chapters 103 onward.
* "Chapter Black" Arc - Chapters 103 onward.
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* NotSoDifferentRemark: [[spoiler: Piccolo makes this statement about himself and Videl — they were both chosen as pawns by Babidi because of the pettiness that still lies within their hearts. It's part of what makes him so interested in training the girl.]]
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* DefiniteArticleTitle: ''The Erased Chronicles''.
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* OCStandIn: Erasa herself is a SateliteCharacter in canon so in this fic, she is technically an OriginalCharacter by proxy. This sort of thing happens when adapting a minor character.
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* OCStandIn: Erasa herself is a SateliteCharacter SatelliteCharacter in canon so in this fic, she is technically an OriginalCharacter by proxy. This sort of thing happens when adapting a minor character.
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** Scattered but present, some chapter titles come from ''Naruto'', ''BLEACH'', or even musical groups like ''Skillet'' and ''Disturbed'', as they're all to the author's taste in various ways.
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** Scattered but present, some chapter titles come from ''Naruto'', ''BLEACH'', ''Franchise/{{Naruto}}'', ''Franchise/{{Bleach}}'', or even musical groups like ''Skillet'' ''Music/{{Skillet}}'' and ''Disturbed'', as they're all to the author's taste in various ways.
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** [[spoiler: Carmina, and later her father, Majin Bū, pull off some moves right out of OnePiece]].
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** [[spoiler: Carmina, and later her father, Majin Bū, pull off some moves right out of OnePiece]].Franchise/OnePiece]].
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* SecondYearProtagonist: Based on their age, the teenage cast should be sophomores, but as with the original series, Gohan, at ''16'', is only just starting his secondary schooling.
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* DefiniteArticleTitle: ''The Erased Chronicles''.
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* TheTheTitle: ''The Erased Chronicles''.
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* OCStandIn: Erasa herself is a SateliteCharacter in canon so in this fic, she is technically an OriginalCharacter by proxy. This sort of thing happens when adapting a minor character.
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** By the first few chapters of the story, it's quite clear that ''Erasa'' is an Original Character, as far as this story is concerned. She resembles Erasa in name and appearance, and slightly in personality, but has been vastly adjusted and shifted to fit the new narrative, barely resembling the original Erasa by the eighth chapter, becoming someone all her own. This sort of thing happens when adapting a minor character.
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** Personality-wise, Babidi. While the character's design has remained the same, the author reworked his personality to be based off of [[Disney/TheEmperorsNewGroove Yzma]] of all people.
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** Personality-wise, Babidi. While the character's design has remained the same, the author reworked his personality to be based off of [[Disney/TheEmperorsNewGroove [[WesternAnimation/TheEmperorsNewGroove Yzma]] of all people.
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[[https://twitter.com/HeartofErased Now has a Twitter account.]]
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** Personality-wise, Babidi. While the character's design has remained the same, the author reworked his personality to be based off of [[TheEmperorsNewGroove Yzma]] of all people.
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** Personality-wise, Babidi. While the character's design has remained the same, the author reworked his personality to be based off of [[TheEmperorsNewGroove [[Disney/TheEmperorsNewGroove Yzma]] of all people.
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* KillTheGod: [[spoiler: Part of Cell's plan for revenge is to kill Dende, the God of Earth, and the life-link to the Dragon Balls. Notable because, in ''Dragon Ball'', villains don't typically target the ''God'' themselves, though Shénlóng has been killed before.]]
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* AstralProjection: [[spoiler: In ''Chapter 91'', when Gohan mentally reaches out to Cell — connected to the Bio-Android via Dende and the North Kaiō, the intensity of his emotions ''project his physical appearance'' towards Cell in a manner reminiscent of Astral Projection, though it isn't. The apparition doesn't last long before Cell cuts it down.]]
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* AstralProjection: [[spoiler: In ''Chapter 91'', when Gohan mentally reaches out to Cell — connected to the Bio-Android via Dende and the North Kaiō, Kaiō— the intensity of his emotions ''project his physical appearance'' towards Cell in a manner reminiscent of Astral Projection, though it isn't. The apparition doesn't last long before Cell cuts it down.]]
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* ThankingTheViewer: Done in the Author's Note of the 91st chapter. As the story has been going on for five years at that point (half a decade), and 2020 had just rolled around, the author extended his heartfelt thanks to the readers who made his story possible.
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* AstralProjection: [[spoiler: In ''Chapter 91'', when Gohan mentally reaches out to Cell — connected to the Bio-Android via Dende and the North Kaiō, the intensity of his emotions ''project his physical appearance'' towards Cell in a manner reminiscent of Astral Projection, though it isn't. The apparition doesn't last long before Cell cuts it down.]]
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** [[spoiler: Carmina, and later her father, Majin Bū, pull off some moves right out of OnePiece]].
** [[spoiler: In the ''Bio-Android Resurgence'' Arc, there is a scene where Gohan's physical form is projected from Beerus' planet to Earth, and the Bio-Android cuts this projection down. This scene was partially inspired by TheLastJedi.]]
** [[spoiler: In the ''Bio-Android Resurgence'' Arc, there is a scene where Gohan's physical form is projected from Beerus' planet to Earth, and the Bio-Android cuts this projection down. This scene was partially inspired by TheLastJedi.]]
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* {{Doorstopper}}: The story is three years old, and well over 310,000 words long.
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* {{Doorstopper}}: The story is three five years old, and well over 310,000 nearly 500,000 words long.
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* MurderersAreRapists: One of the criminals Videl tried to apprehend in the earlier chapters of the fanfic was ''not subtle'' about what he intended to do with her once he'd knocked her unconscious. Thank God for Gohan's timely arrival.
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* TheTheTitle: ''The Erased Chronicles''.
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As of now, the story has been going on for just over three years, and is divided into seven story arcs:
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As of now, the story has been going on for just over three five years, and is divided into seven story arcs:
