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* KickTheSonOfABitch:
** The favorite sport of the demons. They enjoy torturing the damned.
** Kylo makes many characters suffer, but everyone overlooks [[spoiler: his former abuser, Snoke, and the even viler Ian, because both deserve it.]]
** [[spoiler: Ganondorf's superweapon is tested on the Hutts.]]
** The favorite sport of the demons. They enjoy torturing the damned.
** Kylo makes many characters suffer, but everyone overlooks [[spoiler: his former abuser, Snoke, and the even viler Ian, because both deserve it.]]
** [[spoiler: Ganondorf's superweapon is tested on the Hutts.]]
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* PayEvilUntoEvil: Kylo makes many characters suffer, but everyone overlooks [[spoiler: his former abuser, Snoke, and the even viler Ian, because both deserve it.]]
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* DarkerAndEdgier: Finn's Inferno has a lot of ColdBloodedTorture, [[HornyDevils succubi and incubi]] and more violence than Dimensional Chaos.
* DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything: When Pan fights [[HornyDevils Lilith]], the entire duel is suggestive.
* DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything: When Pan fights [[HornyDevils Lilith]], the entire duel is suggestive.
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* DarkerAndEdgier: Finn's Inferno has a lot of ColdBloodedTorture, [[HornyDevils succubi and incubi]] SuccubiAndIncubi and more violence than Dimensional Chaos.
* DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything: When Pan fights[[HornyDevils [[SuccubiAndIncubi Lilith]], the entire duel is suggestive.
* DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything: When Pan fights
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%%* ChewBubblegum: [[spoiler: Finn uses a variant when he crashes the [[ShotgunWedding wedding between Rey and Kylo]].]]
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* YouHaveFailedMe: Two cases. First, the runaway soldiers of the First Order are put in a lottery forced to kill each other. In the sequel, Maul and the Bruiser Brothers get struck by [[spoiler: the Cyberdemon, but are struck only once. A mild punishment.]]
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* YouHaveFailedMe: Two cases. First, the runaway soldiers of the First Order are put in a lottery forced to kill each other. In the sequel, Maul and the Bruiser Brothers get struck by [[spoiler: the Cyberdemon, but are struck only once. A mild punishment.]]]]
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* DracoInLeatherPants: Kylo uses this InUniverse to be a VillainWithGoodPublicity. He even mocks it.
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* AdaptationalVillainy: [[spoiler: Kylo never gets redeemed, he instead becomes more of a monster over the course of the fics. Plus, he exploits now his victim facade. He was an asshole in canon, but never [[MoralEventHorizon blew up his own troops for being there]] in the name of the Dark Side.]]
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* AdaptationalVillainy: AdaptationalVillainy:
** [[spoiler: Kylo never gets redeemed, he instead becomes more of a monster over the course of the fics. Plus, he exploits now his victim facade. He was an asshole in canon, but never [[MoralEventHorizon blew up his own troops for being there]] in the name of the Dark Side.]]
** [[spoiler: Kylo never gets redeemed, he instead becomes more of a monster over the course of the fics. Plus, he exploits now his victim facade. He was an asshole in canon, but never [[MoralEventHorizon blew up his own troops for being there]] in the name of the Dark Side.]]
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* [[spoiler:[[AndThenJohnWasAZombie And Then Kylo Was A Demon]]]]
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* BigBadWannabe: Supreme Leader Snoke. It's revealed he knew the real BigBad and had a rivalry. Too bad Kylo Ren killed him.
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* BigBadWannabe: BigBadWannabe:
** Supreme Leader Snoke. It's revealed he knew the real BigBad and had a rivalry. Too bad Kylo Ren killed him.
** Supreme Leader Snoke. It's revealed he knew the real BigBad and had a rivalry. Too bad Kylo Ren killed him.
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* BrokeYourArmPunchingOutCthulhu: [[spoiler: [[BadassNormal Poe Dameron]] loses his mech, but still manages to kill [[TheBrute Bruton]], the strongest Knight of Ren.]]
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* BrokeYourArmPunchingOutCthulhu: BrokeYourArmPunchingOutCthulhu:
** [[spoiler: [[BadassNormal Poe Dameron]] loses his mech, but still manages to kill [[TheBrute Bruton]], the strongest Knight of Ren.]]
** [[spoiler: [[BadassNormal Poe Dameron]] loses his mech, but still manages to kill [[TheBrute Bruton]], the strongest Knight of Ren.]]
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* EvenEvilHasStandards: [[spoiler: Snoke]] hates the Jedi, but despises [[spoiler: Ganondorf]] much more for this reason.
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* EvenEvilHasStandards: EvenEvilHasStandards:
** [[spoiler: Snoke]] hates the Jedi, but despises [[spoiler: Ganondorf]] much more for this reason.
** [[spoiler: Snoke]] hates the Jedi, but despises [[spoiler: Ganondorf]] much more for this reason.
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** The sequel has a lot.
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* KickTheSonOfABitch: The favorite sport of the demons. They enjoy torturing the damned.
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* KickTheSonOfABitch: KickTheSonOfABitch:
** The favorite sport of the demons. They enjoy torturing the damned.
** The favorite sport of the demons. They enjoy torturing the damned.
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* LaserGuidedKarma: Finn is more than willing to take any hit for Rey, allowing her to win her battles and take the credit. [[spoiler: She repays the favor in the final battle, allowing Finn to beat the BigBad.]]
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* LaserGuidedKarma: LaserGuidedKarma:
** Finn is more than willing to take any hit for Rey, allowing her to win her battles and take the credit. [[spoiler: She repays the favor in the final battle, allowing Finn to beat the BigBad.]]
** Finn is more than willing to take any hit for Rey, allowing her to win her battles and take the credit. [[spoiler: She repays the favor in the final battle, allowing Finn to beat the BigBad.]]
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* OhCrap: In Chapter 13 of Dimensional Chaos, the Resistance has freed Rose and nearly beat the First Order. Then they hear [[spoiler: Ganondorf's roar]] which means he enters the battle. What they do? '''RUN.'''
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* OhCrap: OhCrap:
** In Chapter 13 of Dimensional Chaos, the Resistance has freed Rose and nearly beat the First Order. Then they hear [[spoiler: Ganondorf's roar]] which means he enters the battle. What they do? '''RUN.'''
** In Chapter 13 of Dimensional Chaos, the Resistance has freed Rose and nearly beat the First Order. Then they hear [[spoiler: Ganondorf's roar]] which means he enters the battle. What they do? '''RUN.'''
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* RevengeFic: Inverted. The author believes that the abuse Finn gets in canon and the little payoff in return is condoning abuse on good and selfless people. His response was to write Finn as a protagonist with much power who gets love from the people who helps and [[spoiler: even sidelines Rey, who becomes a Deuteragonist. That said, Finn [[HeroicSacrifice doesn't have]] [[EarnYourHappyEnding everything handed]] to him.]]
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* RevengeFic: RevengeFic:
** Inverted. The author believes that the abuse Finn gets in canon and the little payoff in return is condoning abuse on good and selfless people. His response was to write Finn as a protagonist with much power who gets love from the people who helps and [[spoiler: even sidelines Rey, who becomes a Deuteragonist. That said, Finn [[HeroicSacrifice doesn't have]] [[EarnYourHappyEnding everything handed]] to him.]]
** Inverted. The author believes that the abuse Finn gets in canon and the little payoff in return is condoning abuse on good and selfless people. His response was to write Finn as a protagonist with much power who gets love from the people who helps and [[spoiler: even sidelines Rey, who becomes a Deuteragonist. That said, Finn [[HeroicSacrifice doesn't have]] [[EarnYourHappyEnding everything handed]] to him.]]
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* TakeThat!: DarkSydeRasen is represented by PB-0000, who is a guy who constantly dies and nothing is ever his fault. [[spoiler: His stupidity leads to [[MadScientist Neo Cortex]] escaping Hell and being a threat.]]
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* TakeThat!: DarkSydeRasen TakeThat!:
** [=DarkSydeRasen=] is represented by PB-0000, who is a guy who constantly dies and nothing is ever his fault. [[spoiler: His stupidity leads to [[MadScientist Neo Cortex]] escaping Hell and being a threat.]]
** [=DarkSydeRasen=] is represented by PB-0000, who is a guy who constantly dies and nothing is ever his fault. [[spoiler: His stupidity leads to [[MadScientist Neo Cortex]] escaping Hell and being a threat.]]
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* UnskilledButStrong: [[spoiler: [[SuperpoweredEvilSide Fierce Finn]] is this, and both traits are very important.]]
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* UnskilledButStrong: UnskilledButStrong:
** [[spoiler: [[SuperpoweredEvilSide Fierce Finn]] is this, and both traits are very important.]]
** [[spoiler: [[SuperpoweredEvilSide Fierce Finn]] is this, and both traits are very important.]]
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* UnstoppableRage: Rey in Chapter 22, when Finn gets severely wounded. She obliterates whole squads by herself.
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* UnstoppableRage: UnstoppableRage:
** Rey in Chapter 22, when Finn gets severely wounded. She obliterates whole squads by herself.
** Rey in Chapter 22, when Finn gets severely wounded. She obliterates whole squads by herself.
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* RevengeFic: Inverted. The author believes that the abuse Finn gets in canon and the little payoff in return is [[UnfortunateImplications condoning abuse on good and selfless people.]] His response was to write Finn as a protagonist with much power who gets love from the people who helps and [[spoiler: even sidelines Rey, who becomes a Deuteragonist. That said, Finn [[HeroicSacrifice doesn't have]] [[EarnYourHappyEnding everything handed]] to him.]]
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* RevengeFic: Inverted. The author believes that the abuse Finn gets in canon and the little payoff in return is [[UnfortunateImplications condoning abuse on good and selfless people.]] people. His response was to write Finn as a protagonist with much power who gets love from the people who helps and [[spoiler: even sidelines Rey, who becomes a Deuteragonist. That said, Finn [[HeroicSacrifice doesn't have]] [[EarnYourHappyEnding everything handed]] to him.]]
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* TakeThat!: ''LetsPlay/TheKingOfHate'' is represented by PB-0000, who is a guy who constantly dies and nothing is ever his fault. [[spoiler: His stupidity leads to [[MadScientist Neo Cortex]] escaping Hell and being a threat.]]
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* TakeThat!: ''LetsPlay/TheKingOfHate'' DarkSydeRasen is represented by PB-0000, who is a guy who constantly dies and nothing is ever his fault. [[spoiler: His stupidity leads to [[MadScientist Neo Cortex]] escaping Hell and being a threat.]]
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* ActionGirl: Rey, Zelda, Anna, Jessika and plenty more.
* ActionGirl: Rey, Zelda, Anna, Jessika and plenty more.
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* ChewBubblegum: [[spoiler: Finn uses a variant when he crashes the [[ShotgunWedding wedding between Rey and Kylo]].]]
* CrossoverVillainInChief: [[spoiler: Ganondorf Dragmire.]]
* CrossoverVillainInChief: [[spoiler: Ganondorf Dragmire.]]
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* OnlyThePureOfHeart: [[spoiler:Inverted. The Chosen Ones maintain balance. As such, they '''can't''' be pure of heart.]]
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* OneHitKill:
** Rey vs Rosechu. [[spoiler:The latter never stood a chance.]]
** [[spoiler:Ganondorf vs Graudon. Graduon was simply impaled by a tentacle.]]
** [[spoiler:The Black Hole. Not even Fierce Finn could live through this without a Golden Apple that gave him another life.]]
** Rey vs Rosechu. [[spoiler:The latter never stood a chance.]]
** [[spoiler:Ganondorf vs Graudon. Graduon was simply impaled by a tentacle.]]
** [[spoiler:The Black Hole. Not even Fierce Finn could live through this without a Golden Apple that gave him another life.]]
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* AdaptationalBadass: Granted, Finn does [[spoiler:blow up a planet-busting mothership, crippling a fleet of planet-busters, in canon, but he was still in the shadow of [[ActionGirl Rey]] and [[TheHeavy Kylo.]] Here, he kills a demigod who is far more powerful than these two.]]
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* AscendedExtra: Zig-zagged, as Finn had a big role, but here he is outright the protagonist.
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* AscendedExtra: Zig-zagged, AscendedExtra:
**Zig-zagged, as Finn had a bigrole, role in canon, but here he is outright the protagonist.
**Zig-zagged, as Finn had a big
** Suralinda Javos is not even mentioned in the movies, she is known from the expanded universe. Here, she has a lot of fights and even is the one to uncover the demonic return in Finn's Inferno.
* CurbStompBattle: [[spoiler:Ganondorf]] dishes a lot of them out. On the heroic side, Luke fights the Knights of Ren and [[spoiler:easily beats all of them.]]
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* GutPunch: The Siege of Coruscant. Rey [[spoiler: has trusted Kylo to fight the BigBad together because of a prophecy... only to learn that said BigBad wrote the prophecy to corrupt her and Kylo is loyal to him. When Rey attacks the Demon King, [[CurbStompBattle he humiliates her.]]]] Finn [[spoiler: has exposed part of the First Order, but nearly died to Onox and is now on the run.]] Thrawn leads an attack against the New Republic and the heroes lose many, including [[spoiler: Rose Tico and Mon Mothma]], while Poe fails to destroy the Chimera. In the end, [[spoiler: Coruscant falls to the First Order.]]
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* GutPunch: The Siege of Coruscant. Rey [[spoiler: has trusted Kylo to fight the BigBad together because of a prophecy... only to learn that said BigBad wrote the prophecy to corrupt her and Kylo is loyal to him. When Rey attacks the Demon King, [[CurbStompBattle he humiliates her.]]]] Finn [[spoiler: has exposed part of the First Order, but lost and nearly died to Onox and is now on the run.]] Thrawn leads an attack against the New Republic and the heroes lose many, including [[spoiler: Rose Tico and Mon Mothma]], while Poe fails to destroy the Chimera. In the end, [[spoiler: Coruscant falls to the First Order.]]
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* PregnantBadass: Rey in Finn's Inferno. Her pregnancy does inhibit her, but she still [[spoiler:saves the entire Resistance from the Prison Ship, unarmed and ''during torture'', and she also manages to kill [[TheDragon Malacoda]], who was a stronger and viler Kylo.]]
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* TakeThat!: [[''LetsPlay/TheKingOfHate'' PB-0000]] is a guy who constantly dies and nothing is ever his fault.
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* TakeThat!: [[''LetsPlay/TheKingOfHate'' PB-0000]] ''LetsPlay/TheKingOfHate'' is represented by PB-0000, who is a guy who constantly dies and nothing is ever his fault.fault. [[spoiler: His stupidity leads to [[MadScientist Neo Cortex]] escaping Hell and being a threat.]]
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* TakeThat!: [[''LetsPlay/TheKingOfHate [[''LetsPlay/TheKingOfHate'' PB-0000]] is a guy who constantly dies and nothing is ever his fault.
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* TakeThat!: [[''Creator/TheKingOfHate [[''LetsPlay/TheKingOfHate PB-0000]] is a guy who constantly dies and nothing is ever his fault.
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** ''Webcomic/Sonichu'' is a torture device, and Ian Brandon Anderson is also a villain even Kylo despises.
** [[''Fanfic/MyInnerLife'' Jenna Silverblade]] is working for [[spoiler: [[BigBad Ganondorf]] and Link cuts her down to size]].
** [[''Fanfic/MyInnerLife'' Jenna Silverblade]] is working for [[spoiler: [[BigBad Ganondorf]] and Link cuts her down to size]].
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** ''Webcomic/Sonichu'' ''Webcomic/{{Sonichu}}'' is a torture device, and Ian Brandon Anderson is also a villain even Kylo despises.
**[[''Fanfic/MyInnerLife'' Jenna Silverblade]] Silverblade of ''Fanfic/MyInnerLife'' is working for [[spoiler: [[BigBad Ganondorf]] and Link cuts her down to size]].
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* TakeThat!: PB-0000 is a guy who constantly dies and nothing is ever his fault. Also there is a prophecy which says that the bond between [[ActionGirl Rey]] and [[TheHeavy Kylo]] will bring the Balance and save the Galaxy. It's written by [[spoiler:[[BigBad Ganondorf]]]].
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* TakeThat!: PB-0000 [[''Creator/TheKingOfHate PB-0000]] is a guy who constantly dies and nothing is ever his fault. fault.
** Also there is a prophecy which says that the bond between [[ActionGirl Rey]] and [[TheHeavy Kylo]] will bring the Balance and save the Galaxy. It's written by [[spoiler:[[BigBadGanondorf]]]].Ganondorf]]]].
** ''Webcomic/Sonichu'' is a torture device, and Ian Brandon Anderson is also a villain even Kylo despises.
** [[''Fanfic/MyInnerLife'' Jenna Silverblade]] is working for [[spoiler: [[BigBad Ganondorf]] and Link cuts her down to size]].
** Also there is a prophecy which says that the bond between [[ActionGirl Rey]] and [[TheHeavy Kylo]] will bring the Balance and save the Galaxy. It's written by [[spoiler:[[BigBad
** ''Webcomic/Sonichu'' is a torture device, and Ian Brandon Anderson is also a villain even Kylo despises.
** [[''Fanfic/MyInnerLife'' Jenna Silverblade]] is working for [[spoiler: [[BigBad Ganondorf]] and Link cuts her down to size]].
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* PummelDuel: The final battle has three.
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* CrossoverVillainInChief: [[spoiler: Ganondorf Dragmire.]]
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* ThemeMusicPowerUp: The final chapter of the final battle plays the theme [[ https://youtu.be/Zis2TtxdFjQ "Border Of Life"]] to contrast with the ominous theme of [[NearVillainVictory the previous chapter.]]
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* ThemeMusicPowerUp: The final chapter of the final battle plays the theme [[ https://youtu.be/Zis2TtxdFjQ "Border Of Life"]] Life" to contrast with the ominous theme of [[NearVillainVictory the previous chapter.]]
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* ALighterShadeOfBlack:Snoke's followers, as well as Revan and Traya, are no saints, but certainly aren't the demons either.
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* ALighterShadeOfBlack:Snoke's ALighterShadeOfBlack: Snoke's followers, as well as Revan and Traya, are no saints, but certainly aren't the demons either.
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* VillainousBreakdown: The moment the Resistance [[spoiler: reaches Cocytus, Ganondorf starts losing it completely. His breakdown started beforehand, but here it shows how cornered he is. The taunts are replaced with death threats. When he starts losing the final fight, he loses all his sanity and becomes as angry as Fierce Finn, if not more.]]
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* VillainousBreakdown: The moment the Resistance [[spoiler: reaches Cocytus, Ganondorf starts losing it completely. His breakdown started beforehand, but here it shows how cornered he is. The taunts are replaced with death threats. When he starts losing the final fight, he loses all his sanity and becomes as angry as Fierce Finn, if not more.]]
* YouHaveFailedMe: Two cases. First, the runaway soldiers of the First Order are put in a lottery forced to kill each other. In the sequel, Maul and the Bruiser Brothers get struck by [[spoiler: the Cyberdemon, but are struck only once. A mild punishment.]]
* YouHaveFailedMe: Two cases. First, the runaway soldiers of the First Order are put in a lottery forced to kill each other. In the sequel, Maul and the Bruiser Brothers get struck by [[spoiler: the Cyberdemon, but are struck only once. A mild punishment.]]
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* BrokeYourArmPunchingOutCthulhu: [[spoiler: [[BadassNormal Poe Dameron]] loses him mech, but still manages to kill [[TheBrute Bruton]], the strongest Knight of Ren.]]
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* BrokeYourArmPunchingOutCthulhu: [[spoiler: [[BadassNormal Poe Dameron]] loses him his mech, but still manages to kill [[TheBrute Bruton]], the strongest Knight of Ren.]]
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* TakingYouWithMe: [[spoiler: Kylo]] does this to [[spoiler: Rey]] in their final duel of Dimensional Chaos.
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* TakingYouWithMe: [[spoiler: Kylo]] does this to [[spoiler: Rey]] in their final duel of Dimensional Chaos. [[spoiler: It almost works.]]
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: The first Archdemon Kylo meets is [[TheDragon Zant]]. He says that he is only a King and his master is a god. Zelda fans WILL guess [[HijackedByGanon who the main villain is.]]
* HateSink: The author got the most positive comments when he [[spoiler: offed [[AssholeVictim Kylo Ren]]]].
** But later they cheered FOR the aforementioned villain when he [[spoiler: got revived and choked Ian to death [[TheReasonYouSuckSpeech while calling him out.]]]]
* HateSink: The author got the most positive comments when he [[spoiler: offed [[AssholeVictim Kylo Ren]]]].
** But later they cheered FOR the aforementioned villain when he [[spoiler: got revived and choked Ian to death [[TheReasonYouSuckSpeech while calling him out.]]]]
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: The first Archdemon Kylo meets is [[TheDragon Zant]]. He says that he is only a King and his master is a god. Zelda fans WILL guess [[HijackedByGanon who the main villain is.]]
* HateSink: The author got the most positive comments when he [[spoiler: offed [[AssholeVictim Kylo Ren]]]].
** But later they cheered FOR the aforementioned villain when he [[spoiler: got revived and choked Ian to death [[TheReasonYouSuckSpeech while calling him out.]]]]is]].
* HateSink: The author got the most positive comments when he [[spoiler: offed [[AssholeVictim Kylo Ren]]]].
** But later they cheered FOR the aforementioned villain when he [[spoiler: got revived and choked Ian to death [[TheReasonYouSuckSpeech while calling him out.]]]]
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* EnsembleDarkhorse: From the OC Knights of Ren, Kreia is popular with the story's small audience. The author's best friend loves Bruton, another Knight of Ren.
** When the author used Kreia in a more popular story, the reception was really positive.
** When the author used Kreia in a more popular story, the reception was really positive.
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* AndChewBubblegum: [[spoiler: Finn uses a variant when he crashes the [[ShotgunWedding wedding between Rey and Kylo]].]]
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* BadassInDistress: [[spoiler: Almost the entire team is captured when they step foot on Dis.]]
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* Foreshadowing: EvilerThanThou: The demons to Kylo and the First Order. They gain control quickly.
* {{Foreshadowing}}: The first Archdemon Kylo meets is [[TheDragon Zant]]. He says that he is only a King and his master is a god. Zelda fans WILL guess [[HijackedByGanon who the main villain is.]]
* {{Foreshadowing}}: The first Archdemon Kylo meets is [[TheDragon Zant]]. He says that he is only a King and his master is a god. Zelda fans WILL guess [[HijackedByGanon who the main villain is.]]
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** The sequel has a lot.
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** [[spoiler: [[SuperMode Fierce Finn]] has a subtle one, even at this point, when [[FinalBoss Red Demon Ganondorf]] stops holding back and loses what sanity he had left.]]
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* RevengeFic: Inverted. The author believes that the abuse Finn gets in canon and the little payoff in return is [[UnfortunateImplications condoning abuse on good and selfless people.]] His response was to write Finn as a protagonist with much power who gets love from the people who helps and [[spoiler: even sidelines Rey, who becomes a Deuteragonist. That said, Finn doesn't have everything handed to him.]]
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* RevengeFic: Inverted. The author believes that the abuse Finn gets in canon and the little payoff in return is [[UnfortunateImplications condoning abuse on good and selfless people.]] His response was to write Finn as a protagonist with much power who gets love from the people who helps and [[spoiler: even sidelines Rey, who becomes a Deuteragonist. That said, Finn [[HeroicSacrifice doesn't have have]] [[EarnYourHappyEnding everything handed handed]] to him.]]
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* HopeSpot: In the "Dark Victory" spinoff, [[spoiler: Fierce Deity Link performs very well and almost saves the Resistance. '''Almost.''']]
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** But later they cheered FOR the aforementioned villain when he [[spoilers: choked Ian to death while calling him out.]]
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** But later they cheered FOR the aforementioned villain when he [[spoilers: [[spoiler: got revived and choked Ian to death while calling him out.]]
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** But later they cheered FOR the aforementioned villain when he [[spoilers: choked Ian to death while calling him out.]]
** To a lesser extent, the Spider Mastermind is also hated.
** To a lesser extent, the Spider Mastermind is also hated.
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* KickTheSonOfABitch: The favorite sport of the demons. They enjoy torturing the damned.
** Kylo makes many characters suffer, but everyone overlooks [[spoiler: his former abuser, Snoke, and the even viler Ian, because both deserve it.]]
** [[spoiler: Ganondorf's superweapon is tested on the Hutts.]]
** Kylo makes many characters suffer, but everyone overlooks [[spoiler: his former abuser, Snoke, and the even viler Ian, because both deserve it.]]
** [[spoiler: Ganondorf's superweapon is tested on the Hutts.]]
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* HateSink: The author got the most positive comments when he [[spoiler: offed [[AssholeVictim Kylo Ren]]]].