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* ThrowTheDogABone: [[Spoiler:Julieta sends with Mika a package containing a photograph of his family: Kudelia, Atra, and Akatsuki.]]
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* ThrowTheDogABone: [[Spoiler:Julieta [[spoiler:Julieta sends with Mika a package containing a photograph of his family: Kudelia, Atra, and Akatsuki.]]
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* AscendedDemon: Agnika's motif, combined with NobleBirdOfPrey after receiving upgrades from Dr. Polendina during his repairs
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* AscendedDemon: Agnika's motif, combined with NobleBirdOfPrey after receiving upgrades from Dr. Polendina during his repairsrepairs.
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* DeathByAdaptation: Cinder is killed by Amber after being defeated and captured by Agnika in order for Amber to regain the stolen half of the Fall Maiden's power from her. [[spoiler: Salem also dies at the hands of the Andras after [[TheStarscream it decides to rebel against her and take over leadership of the Grimm.]]]]
* DemotedToExtra: Cinder, Mercury, and Emerald are swiftly taken out of the story after being subject to a CurbStompBattle by Agnika. Roman Torchwick and Neopolitan are also much less prominent in the story and aren't even mentioned
* DemotedToExtra: Cinder, Mercury, and Emerald are swiftly taken out of the story after being subject to a CurbStompBattle by Agnika. Roman Torchwick and Neopolitan are also much less prominent in the story and aren't even mentioned
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* DeathByAdaptation: DeathByAdaptation:
** Cinder is killed by Amber after being defeated and captured by Agnika in order for Amber to regain the stolen half of the Fall Maiden's power from her. ** [[spoiler: Salem also dies at the hands of the Andras after [[TheStarscream it decides to rebel against her and take over leadership of the Grimm.]]]]
* DemotedToExtra: Cinder, Mercury, and Emerald are swiftly taken out of the story after being subject to a CurbStompBattle by Agnika. Roman Torchwick and Neopolitan are also much less prominent in the story and aren't evenmentioned mentioned .
** Cinder is killed by Amber after being defeated and captured by Agnika in order for Amber to regain the stolen half of the Fall Maiden's power from her. ** [[spoiler: Salem also dies at the hands of the Andras after [[TheStarscream it decides to rebel against her and take over leadership of the Grimm.]]]]
* DemotedToExtra: Cinder, Mercury, and Emerald are swiftly taken out of the story after being subject to a CurbStompBattle by Agnika. Roman Torchwick and Neopolitan are also much less prominent in the story and aren't even
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* IChooseToStay: Weiss Schnee pulls this on her father [[CorruptCorporateExecutive Jacques]] after he tries to force her to return home to Atlas thanks to the PositiveFriendInfluence of Agnika and Team RWBY. She even slaps the bastard in the face after he slaps her!
* ImpaledWithExtremePrejudice: Mikazuki kills Adam with his mech body's PileBunker after breaking his legs with his mace and foiling his coup within the White Fang
* InSpiteOfANail: Yang still loses her arm to Adam even after the Fall of Beacon is averted by Agnika's actions
* ItCanThink: [[spoiler: Since Salem gave the Andras a limited measure of sentience to enable it to adapt to and counter Agnika's skillset, it inadvertently leads to the Andras becoming fully sentient over time, much to Salem's detriment]]
* JerkassRealization: Getting beaten by Mikazuki and being called out for her callousness by Taiyang, Qrow, Weiss, and Yang does wonders for Raven's attitude and helps her be [[TookALevelInKindness a somewhat nicer person than canon]]
* ImpaledWithExtremePrejudice: Mikazuki kills Adam with his mech body's PileBunker after breaking his legs with his mace and foiling his coup within the White Fang
* InSpiteOfANail: Yang still loses her arm to Adam even after the Fall of Beacon is averted by Agnika's actions
* ItCanThink: [[spoiler: Since Salem gave the Andras a limited measure of sentience to enable it to adapt to and counter Agnika's skillset, it inadvertently leads to the Andras becoming fully sentient over time, much to Salem's detriment]]
* JerkassRealization: Getting beaten by Mikazuki and being called out for her callousness by Taiyang, Qrow, Weiss, and Yang does wonders for Raven's attitude and helps her be [[TookALevelInKindness a somewhat nicer person than canon]]
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* IChooseToStay: Weiss Schnee pulls this on her father [[CorruptCorporateExecutive Jacques]] after he tries to force her to return home to Atlas thanks to the PositiveFriendInfluence of Agnika and Team RWBY. She even slaps the bastard in the face after he slaps her!
for good measure!
* ImpaledWithExtremePrejudice: Mikazuki kills Adam with hismech body's mech's PileBunker after breaking his legs with his mace and foiling his coup within the White Fang
Fang.
* InSpiteOfANail: Yang still loses her arm to Adam even after the Fall of Beacon is averted by Agnika'sactions
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* ItCanThink: [[spoiler: Since Salem gave the Andras a limited measure of sentience to enable it to adapt to and counter Agnika's skillset, it inadvertently leads to the Andras becoming fully sentient over time, much to Salem'sdetriment]]
detriment]].
* JerkassRealization: Getting beaten by Mikazuki and being called out for her callousness by Taiyang, Qrow, Weiss, and Yang does wonders for Raven's attitude and helps her be [[TookALevelInKindness a somewhat nicer person thancanon]]canon]].
* ImpaledWithExtremePrejudice: Mikazuki kills Adam with his
* InSpiteOfANail: Yang still loses her arm to Adam even after the Fall of Beacon is averted by Agnika's
* ItCanThink: [[spoiler: Since Salem gave the Andras a limited measure of sentience to enable it to adapt to and counter Agnika's skillset, it inadvertently leads to the Andras becoming fully sentient over time, much to Salem's
* JerkassRealization: Getting beaten by Mikazuki and being called out for her callousness by Taiyang, Qrow, Weiss, and Yang does wonders for Raven's attitude and helps her be [[TookALevelInKindness a somewhat nicer person than
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* MeaningfulName: Grimm Andras, named after one of the 72 [[Literature/ArsGoetia Ars Goetia Demons]]; a Grand Marquis of Hell whose said to sow discord among men and commands thirty legions of Demons. And that when he is summoned, [[EvilIsNotAToy there's a chance that Andras will kill the Magician and their assistants.]] [[spoiler:True-to-form, the Andras [[TheStarscream eventually betrays Salem]] and [[YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness destroys her followers]] before assuming command of the creatures of Grimm.]]
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* MeaningfulName: Grimm Andras, Andras is named after one of the 72 [[Literature/ArsGoetia Ars Goetia Demons]]; a eponymous Grand Marquis of Hell whose from the Literature/ArsGoetia who's said to sow discord among men and commands thirty legions of Demons. And that when he is summoned, sometimes [[EvilIsNotAToy there's a chance that Andras will kill the Magician and their assistants.whomever summons him.]] [[spoiler:True-to-form, the Andras [[TheStarscream eventually betrays Salem]] and [[YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness destroys her followers]] before assuming command of the creatures of Grimm.]]
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* NominalHero: Raven may be nicer than canon, but that doesn't mean she really cares about what others think of her actions nor how the world might be faring
* NominalHero: Raven may be nicer than canon, but that doesn't mean she really cares about what others think of her actions nor how the world might be faring
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* NobleWolf: Mikazuki's primary motif, with shades of SavageWolf.
SavageWolf thanks to his relentless fighting style.
* NominalHero: Raven may be nicer than canon, but that doesn't mean she really cares about what others think of her actions nor how the world might befaringfaring.
* NominalHero: Raven may be nicer than canon, but that doesn't mean she really cares about what others think of her actions nor how the world might be
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* NotSoDifferentRemark: When Agnika tells Team RWBY about his past and the history of Earth, he mentions that just because his world did not have Faunus didn't mean that it didn't have discrimination, as the condition of Mars and its people pre-independence could attest to.
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* NotSoDifferentRemark: When Agnika tells Team RWBY about his past and the history of Earth, he mentions that just because his world did not have Faunus didn't mean that it didn't have discrimination, as the condition of Mars and its people pre-independence before it gained independence could attest to.
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** Team RWBY is also this for Mikazuki by helping him open up and be more emotional
* ShoutOut: The Andras and its Grimm lieutenants are all references to Gundam suits from ''Anime/MobileSuitGundam''
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** Team RWBY is also this for helps Mikazuki by helping him open up and be more emotional
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* ShoutOut: The Andras and its Grimm lieutenants are all references to Gundam suits from''Anime/MobileSuitGundam''''Anime/MobileSuitGundam'':
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* ReasonableAuthorityFigure: Compared to Ironwood, who's quite leery regarding Agnika, Ozpin is definitely this given that he's willing to work with him and also make sure that Ironwood doesn't fly off the handle
* RewardedAsATraitorDeserves: Raven kills Lionheart for being a self-serving coward and a traitor after breaking to him the news of Salem's death. She then proceeds to make it look like he hung himself in shame and left an apology note.
* TheNicknamer: Still a trait of Mikazuki's even after he died and bonded his soul with his Gundam
* SparedByTheAdaptation: Since Cinder is dead, Amber and Pyrrha both survive and outlive their canon counterparts
* ReasonableAuthorityFigure: Compared to Ironwood, who's quite leery regarding Agnika, Ozpin is definitely this given that he's willing to work with him and also make sure that Ironwood doesn't fly off the handle
* RewardedAsATraitorDeserves: Raven kills Lionheart for being a self-serving coward and a traitor after breaking to him the news of Salem's death. She then proceeds to make it look like he hung himself in shame and left an apology note.
* TheNicknamer: Still a trait of Mikazuki's even after he died and bonded his soul with his Gundam
* SparedByTheAdaptation: Since Cinder is dead, Amber and Pyrrha both survive and outlive their canon counterparts
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* ReasonableAuthorityFigure: Compared to Ironwood, who's quite leery regarding Agnika, Ozpin is
* RewardedAsATraitorDeserves: Raven kills Lionheart for being a traitorous, self-serving coward
* TheNicknamer: Still a trait of Mikazuki's even after he died and bonded his soul with his
* SparedByTheAdaptation: Since Cinder is dead, Amber and Pyrrha both survive and outlive their canon
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* TookALevelInBadass: Guaranteed when you have a legendary Gundam pilot who fought in [[RobotWar the Calamity War]] and [[FounderOfTheKingdom established Gjallarhorn]] as your mentor in the case of Teams RWBY and JNPR
* UndyingLoyalty: Postmortem example. Mikazuki still follows Orga Itsuka's final order to the letter even centuries after Orgas' death.
* YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness: The first thing the Andras does with its newfound power over the Grimm is to order them to kill Watts, Tyrian, and Hazel after [[spoiler: killing Salem]] since they're effectively deadweight in its eyes.
* UndyingLoyalty: Postmortem example. Mikazuki still follows Orga Itsuka's final order to the letter even centuries after Orgas' death.
* YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness: The first thing the Andras does with its newfound power over the Grimm is to order them to kill Watts, Tyrian, and Hazel after [[spoiler: killing Salem]] since they're effectively deadweight in its eyes.
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* TookALevelInBadass: Guaranteed when you have a legendary Gundam pilot who fought in [[RobotWar the Calamity War]] and [[FounderOfTheKingdom established Gjallarhorn]] as your mentor in the case of Teams RWBY and JNPR
JNPR.
* UndyingLoyalty: Postmortem example. Mikazuki still follows Orga Itsuka's final order to the letter even centuries afterOrgas' Orga's death.
* YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness: The first thing the Andras does with its newfound power over the Grimm is to order them to kill Watts, Tyrian, and Hazel after [[spoiler: killing Salem]] since they're effectively deadweightin its eyes.now that Salem's out of the picture.
* UndyingLoyalty: Postmortem example. Mikazuki still follows Orga Itsuka's final order to the letter even centuries after
* YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness: The first thing the Andras does with its newfound power over the Grimm is to order them to kill Watts, Tyrian, and Hazel after [[spoiler: killing Salem]] since they're effectively deadweight
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At 57 chapters and 200,187 words, it is now complete. Needs Wiki Magic Love as well
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* DeathByAdaptation: Cinder is killed by Amber after being defeated and captured by Agnika in order for Amber to regain the stolen half of the Fall Maiden's power from her. [[spoiler: Salem also dies at the hands of the Andras after [[TheStarscream it decides to rebel against her and take over leadership of the Grimm.]]]]
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* KilledByTheAdaptation: Cinder is killed by Amber after being defeated and captured by Agnika in order for Amber to regain the stolen half of the Fall Maiden's power from her. [[spoiler: Salem also dies at the hands of the Andras after [[TheStarscream it decides to rebel against her and take over leadership of the Grimm.]]]]
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* TheBerserker: Mikazuki's fighting style qualifies as this with its unrelenting brutality compared to Agnika's more refined techniques
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* FlingALightIntoTheFuture: Ultimately, Gjallarhorn agreeing to Agnikas' request to send him into deep space to try finding other life to save since he knew Gjallarhorn was in good hands again had positive consequences for the people of Remnant a century later. [[spoiler:Elevated further when several years after Agnikas' departure; they sent Mikazuki after him in a ship loaded with plenty of spare parts to repair both of their Gundam bodies.]]
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* ThrowTheDogABone: [[Spoiler:Julieta sends with Mika a package containing a photograph of his family: Kudelia, Atra, and Akatsuki.]]
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* BrainUploading: The end-result of an Alaya-Vijnana Pilot having bonded with their Gundam to such a heavy extent results in their soul transcending into the Gundam upon death should they die still hooked up to their Mobile Suit, as was shown with Agnika Kaieru. [[spoiler:And shown several chapters later with Mikazuki Augus.]]
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* OutlivingOnesOffspring: While its' indeed been a whole century since leaving the Solar System and arriving at Remnant, [[spoiler:[[HeartbrokenBadass Mikazuki is still downtrodden]] that both Atra and their son Akatsuki are long dead.]]
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* TookALevelInBadass: Guaranteed when you have a legendary Gundam pilot as your mentor in the case of Teams RWBY and JNPR
* UndyingLoyalty: Postmortem example. Mikazuki still follows Orga Itsuka's final order to the letter even after Orga died.
* UndyingLoyalty: Postmortem example. Mikazuki still follows Orga Itsuka's final order to the letter even after Orga died.
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* TookALevelInBadass: Guaranteed when you have a legendary Gundam pilot who fought in [[RobotWar the Calamity War]] and [[FounderOfTheKingdom established Gjallarhorn]] as your mentor in the case of Teams RWBY and JNPR
* UndyingLoyalty: Postmortem example. Mikazuki still follows Orga Itsuka's final order to the letter even centuries afterOrga died.Orgas' death.
* UndyingLoyalty: Postmortem example. Mikazuki still follows Orga Itsuka's final order to the letter even centuries after
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* MeaningfulName: Andras, a Grand Marquis of Hell within the Ars Goetia whose said to sow discord among men and commands thirty legions of Demons. And that when he is summoned, there's a chance that Andras will kill the Magician and their assistants to maintain authority. [[spoiler:True-to-form, the Andras [[TheStarscream eventually betrays Salem]] and [[YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness destroys her followers]] before assuming command of the creatures of Grimm.]]
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* MeaningfulName: Grimm Andras, named after one of the 72 [[Literature/ArsGoetia Ars Goetia Demons]]; a Grand Marquis of Hell within the Ars Goetia whose said to sow discord among men and commands thirty legions of Demons. And that when he is summoned, [[EvilIsNotAToy there's a chance that Andras will kill the Magician and their assistants to maintain authority. assistants.]] [[spoiler:True-to-form, the Andras [[TheStarscream eventually betrays Salem]] and [[YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness destroys her followers]] before assuming command of the creatures of Grimm.]]
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* MeaningfulName: Andras, a Grand Marquis of Hell within the Ars Goetia whose said to sow discord among men and commands thirty legions of Demons. And that when he is summoned, there's a chance that Andras will kill the Magician and their assistants to maintain authority. [[spoiler:True-to-form [[spoiler:True-to-form, the Andras [[TheStarscream eventually betrays Salem]] and [[YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness destroys her followers]] before assuming command of the creatures of Grimm.]]
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* MeaningfulName: Andras, a Grand Marquis of Hell who sows within the Ars Goetia whose said to sow discord among men and commands thirty legions of Demons. And that when he is summoned, there's a chance that he Andras will kill the Magician and their assistants. [[spoiler:true-to-form assistants to maintain authority. [[spoiler:True-to-form the Andras [[TheStarscream eventually betrays Salem Salem]] and [[YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness destroys her followers followers]] before assuming command of the creatures of Grimm.]]
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* KeystoneArmy: [[spoiler: The Grimm are left disorganized after the death of the Andras, becoming easy pickings for huntsmen.]]
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* NominalHero: Raven may be nicer than canon, but that doesn't mean she really cares about what others think of her actions nor how the world might be faring
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* JerkassRealization: Getting beaten by Mikazuki and being called out for her callousness by Taiyang, Qrow, Weiss, and Yang does wonders for Raven's attitude and helps her be [[TookALevelInKindness a somewhat nicer person than canon]]
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* AscendedDemon: Agnika's motif, made even more prominent with his purifiying light Semblance
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* AscendedDemon: Agnika's motif, made even more prominent combined with NobleBirdOfPrey after receiving upgrades from Dr. Polendina during his purifiying light Semblancerepairs
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* ImpaledWithExtremePrejudice: Mikazuki kills Adam with his mech body's tail-spikes when Adam attempts his coup within the White Fang
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* ImpaledWithExtremePrejudice: Mikazuki kills Adam with his mech body's tail-spikes when Adam attempts PileBunker after breaking his legs with his mace and foiling his coup within the White Fang
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* InSpiteOfANail: Yang still loses her arm to Adam, just under different circumstances
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* InSpiteOfANail: Yang still loses her arm to Adam, just under different circumstancesAdam even after the Fall of Beacon is averted by Agnika's actions
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* TheBerserker: Mikazuki's fighting style qualifies as this with its unrelenting brutality compared to Agnika's more refined techniques
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* SparedByTheAdaptation: Since Cinder is dead, Amber and Pyrrha both survive and outlive their canon counterparts
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* The Hashmal, Gusion, Flauros, and Kimaris are all Grimm versions of their namesake Gundams
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* ImpaledWithExtremePrejudice: Mikazuki kills Adam with his mech body's tail-spikes when Adam attempts his coup within the White Fang
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* NobleWolf: Mikazuki's primary motif, with shades of SavageWolf.
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* IChooseToStay: Weiss Schnee pulls this on her father [[CorruptCorporateExecutive Jacques]] after he tries to force her to return home to Atlas thanks to the PositiveFriendInfluence of Agnika and Team RWBY. She even slaps the bastard in the face after he slaps her!
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* AbledInTheAdaptation: Thanks to Amber killing Cinder and regaining her full power, she is [[AscendedExtra much more prominent in the story]] and also [[AdaptationalBadass much more proficient with her Maiden powers than in canon]].
* AdaptationalNiceGuy: Thank to Agnika saving the lives of Weiss and her mother Willow when they were held hostage by the White Fang and [[PositiveFriendInfluence imparting sage advice to Weiss]], Weiss is much less pompous than canon.
* AdaptationalNiceGuy: Thank to Agnika saving the lives of Weiss and her mother Willow when they were held hostage by the White Fang and [[PositiveFriendInfluence imparting sage advice to Weiss]], Weiss is much less pompous than canon.
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* AbledInTheAdaptation: Thanks to Amber killing Cinder and regaining her full power, she is [[AscendedExtra much more prominent in the story]] and also [[AdaptationalBadass much more proficient with her Maiden powers than in canon]].
* AdaptationalNiceGuy: Thank to Agnika saving the lives of Weiss and her mother Willow when they were held hostage by the White Fang and [[PositiveFriendInfluence imparting sage advice to Weiss]], Weiss is much less pompous than canon.
* AdaptationalNiceGuy: Thank to Agnika saving the lives of Weiss and her mother Willow when they were held hostage by the White Fang and [[PositiveFriendInfluence imparting sage advice to Weiss]], Weiss is much less pompous than canon.
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* AbledInTheAdaptation: Thanks AwesomenessByAnalysis: Agnika is instantly able to Amber killing figure out that Emerald's illusion Semblance only works on organic minds and not on machines during the CurbStompBattle he dishes out to Cinder and regaining her full power, she is [[AscendedExtra much more prominent in the story]] and also [[AdaptationalBadass much more proficient with her Maiden powers than in canon]].
* AdaptationalNiceGuy: Thank to Agnika saving the lives of Weiss and her mother Willow when they were held hostage by the White Fang and [[PositiveFriendInfluence imparting sage advice to Weiss]], Weiss is much less pompous than canon.company.
* AdaptationalNiceGuy: Thank to Agnika saving the lives of Weiss and her mother Willow when they were held hostage by the White Fang and [[PositiveFriendInfluence imparting sage advice to Weiss]], Weiss is much less pompous than canon.
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* BigDamnHeroes: [[spoiler: Mikazuki arrives on Remnant just in time to save Agnika from being killed by the Andras the second time it appears and give the Andras a solid beating.]]
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* BigDamnHeroes: [[spoiler: Mikazuki arrives on Remnant just in time to save Agnika from being killed by the Andras the second time it appears and give the Andras a solid beating.drive it off.]]
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* BullyingADragon: Cinder, being Cinder, believes she can take on Agnika with her minions and win despite the fact that Agnika has dismantled her plans with ridiculous ease. [[CurbStompBattle Their fight against Agnika proves otherwise.]]
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* BullyingADragon: Cinder, being Cinder, [[SmugSnake Cinder]], believes she can take on Agnika with her minions and win despite the fact that Agnika has dismantled her plans with ridiculous ease. [[CurbStompBattle Their fight against Agnika proves otherwise.]]
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* RewardedAsATraitorDeserves: Raven kills Lionheart for being a self-serving coward and a traitor after breaking to him the news of Salem's death. She then proceeds to make it look like he committed suicide.
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* RewardedAsATraitorDeserves: Raven kills Lionheart for being a self-serving coward and a traitor after breaking to him the news of Salem's death. She then proceeds to make it look like he committed suicide.hung himself in shame and left an apology note.
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* AbledInTheAdaptation: Thanks to Amber killing Cinder and regaining her full power, she is [[AscendedExtra much more prominent in the story]] and also [[AdaptationalBadass much more skilled and powerful than in canon]].
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* AbledInTheAdaptation: Thanks to Amber killing Cinder and regaining her full power, she is [[AscendedExtra much more prominent in the story]] and also [[AdaptationalBadass much more skilled and powerful proficient with her Maiden powers than in canon]].
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* AscendedExtra: In canon, Amber was mostly a LivingMacguffin and was never very prominent in the story. Here, she is one of the allies of the heroes and plays a part in the battles to come against the Grimm.
** Agnika Kaieru himself can count as one as he is transformed from a mere PosthumousCharacter in ''Anime/MobileSuitGundamIronBloodedOrphans'' into the main character and hero of the story.
** Agnika Kaieru himself can count as one as he is transformed from a mere PosthumousCharacter in ''Anime/MobileSuitGundamIronBloodedOrphans'' into the main character and hero of the story.
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* KilledByTheAdaptation: Cinder is killed by Amber after being defeated and captured by Agnika in order for Amber to regain the stolen half of the Fall Maiden's power from her. [[spoiler: Salem also dies at the hands of the Andras after [[TheStarscreamit decides to rebel against her and take over leadership of the Grimm.]]]]
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* KilledByTheAdaptation: Cinder is killed by Amber after being defeated and captured by Agnika in order for Amber to regain the stolen half of the Fall Maiden's power from her. [[spoiler: Salem also dies at the hands of the Andras after [[TheStarscreamit [[TheStarscream it decides to rebel against her and take over leadership of the Grimm.]]]]
